1.作文题目: 2010.05.08
Schools should concentrate on teaching students the academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Subjects such as music and sports are not useful. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2.考生原文
I agree that children should study other subjects. Because,nowadays, every schools only teach children subjectswhich are beneficial to their future such as Maths, Chinese, and sicience. There are all important for children to improve their abilities, but they are not the whole. Sports and Music are also necessary very much.
In our country, students have a heavy bag-Chinese texts. If they want to achieve a high grade, they should try their best to study English, Chinese and so on. At the same time, other subjects are not important what they think. So they will be weak easierand losta lot of great time. Studying in Sports class is a good process, During play basketball or football, you can be stronger and also meet many friends.They will make you feel not alone and be willing to face each trouble. And the music can make you relaxed and fellhappy. It’s also a beneficial method to change their minds.
In my opinion, Chinese children need study other subjects. Whateversports and music is easy or difficult, theyall should study a lot because they can let them feel full and broadtheir eyes. As is known to us, education need use different useful meanschildren can use their extra time to study other subjects, it just spend a little time and will give them a huge advantage.
In conclusion, studying other subjects is important for children’s future too. Children study more useful skills, they will be succeed.
3.老师批改
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I agree that children should study other subjects(表达不准确，可改为‘subjects other than academic ones’,文中多次出现。). Because, (because引导原因状语从句，这里缺少主句，前一句的句号改为逗号。) nowadays, every schools only teach children subjects (不符合现实状况，并不是所有的学校都只教学术学科)which are beneficial to their future such as Maths, Chinese, and sicience （science注意拼写错误）. There are all important for children to improve their abilities, but they are not the whole. Sports and Music are also necessary very much. (表达不当，此处不需要very much，形容程度可改为：significantly necessary.)
In our country, students have a heavy bag-Chinese texts (词不达意，无法弄清‘bag-Chinese’想表达的意思). If they want to achieve a high grade, they should try their best to study English, Chinese and so on(逻辑错误，学习语言就一定能拿好成绩吗？). At the same time, other subjects are
not important what they think. So they will be weak easier(无法理解你想表达的意思)and lost(lost 是形容词或者过去时，这里应该使用原型lose) a lot of great time. Studying in Sports class is a good process, During play basketball or football, you can be stronger and also meet many friends. (两句完整的句子不可以使用逗号链接，应将During前的逗号改成句号。) They will make you feel not alone (‘alone’是指‘独处’，这里应改成‘lonely’表示孤独，可改为‘less likely to suffer from loneliness’) and be willing to face each trouble (可改进影刺, 例：be more prepared to future challenges.). And the music can make you relaxed and fell (feel) happy. It’s also a beneficial method to change their minds.(论述不完整，此处需要进一步证明，音乐如何改变人们的思想，例：Music influences human mind as it is able to affect the function of our brain through various melodies and rhythms.)
In my opinion, Chinese children need study other subjects. Whatever (whatever表示无论是哪个，这里可改为‘no matter’) sports and music is easy or difficult, they (指代不清) all should study a lot because they can let them feel full and broad(broad为形容词，这里应当使用动词‘broaden’) their eyes. As is known to us, education need use different useful means (需要指出究竟是哪些‘useful means’,例：useful means that focus on both physical and mental aspects besides academic ones.), children can use their extra time to study other subjects, it just spend a little time and will give them a huge advantage. (同上，逗号不能连接完整句子)
In conclusion, studying other subjects is important for children’s future too. Children study more useful skills, they will be succeed(此处应使用形容词‘successful’)easier(修饰successful 应当使用副词‘more easily’).
4.作文总评
批改 by Angela令狐
本次批改严格按照IELTS小作文评分标准进行。IELTS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。
总评及建议4.0 (TR 4.5 CC4.5 LR4.0 GRA3.5 Under-length -0.5)
1．字数少许不足，倒扣分。
2．语法问题极其严重，尤其是在句子成分以及词性上掌握很差，建议补习相关内容。
3．词汇偶尔准确，词不达意现象严重。此外，经常出现使人无法理解的词组表述。建议通过阅读掌握相关词汇，尤其是词组表述。
4．内容上过于浅显，建议不要从例子的角度出发，而抽出总结性的概念以及理论作为你的观点，而不是只写‘某些国家如何如何’。
5．论述的展开混乱，逻辑顺序基本无。
6．文章论述的双边混在一起，结构不清晰。
7．自己的观点发展及证据不够，无说服力。
8．逻辑连接词及链接手法的使用偏少。建议积累相关手法。
9．最后，写完一定要记得检查是否有拼写错误。（通常都能找到2，3个。）
雅思小作文题型多样，其中就包括地图题，本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。评分标准 ?TA – Task Achievement 任务完成情况 ?CC – Coherence and Cohesion 意合与形合 ?LR – Lexical Resource 词汇资源 ?GRA – Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法广度与精确度 审题 The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 文章结构 第一段 交待写作目的 第二段 描述1995年的地图 第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比 第四段 总结全文 第一段 This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995. 题目：The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. 第二段 As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market… 第三段 In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, … 第四段 Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
附录二十大话题 教育类（education） https://www.doczj.com/doc/1411920576.html,pulsory education 义务教育 2. vocational education 职业教育 3. academic performance 学业表现 4. non-academic affairs 与学习无关的事情 5. puppy/ calf love 早恋 6. corporal punishment 体罚 7. tuition fee 学费 8. parents’ supervision 父母的监督 9. individual tutorship 个人辅导 10. turning point 转折点 11. the pursuit of knowledge 对知识的追求 12. maintain / disrupt classroom order 维护、扰乱课堂秩序 13. coeducational /single sex establishment 男女共校、单一性别学校 14. generation gap 代沟 15. indulge in 沉迷（表示“溺爱” 后面直接加宾语） 16. play truant 逃学 17. school shootings 校园枪击 18. broaden one’s horizons 开阔视野 19. the hardship and bitterness of life 生活的艰辛和苦难 20. appropriate advice and guidance 恰当的建议和指导 21. cultivate independence 培养独立性 22. a good habit of frugality 节约的好习惯 23. distinguish right from wrong 明辨是非 24. shoulder the responsibility of 肩负…… 的责任 25. be prone to do 容易做某事 26. go astray 误入歧途 27. violate social conventions and laws 违反社会习俗和法律 28. cast a shadow on one’s heart 在心中留下阴影 29. resist the temptation of 抵制……的诱惑 30. interpersonal skills 人际交往的技巧 31. peer pressure 同辈的压力 32. formative years 性格形成期 33. physically and emotionally immature 身心不成熟 34. a sense of superiority 优越感 35.socially adaptable 能适应社会的 36. adjust teaching methods 调整教学方法 37. exert a negative impact on 产生消极影响 38. juvenile crime=juvenile delinquency 青少年犯罪juvenile delinquent 青少年犯罪者 39. a sense of belonging 归属感 40. qualified and experienced teachers 称职、有经验的老师 41. first class teaching facilities 一流的教学设施 42. education reform 教育改革 科技类（science and technology） 1.artificial intelligence 人工智能（artificial 人工的、人造的、非天然的） 2.side effects 副作用 3.technological revolution 科技革命
【06】全文翻译练习题目 Some people think schools should only teach students academic subjects.Others think schools should also teach students how to discriminate between right and wrong.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 介绍段 背景句 1.学校一直被认为是一个帮助年轻人提高知识和增加就业能力的地方。 阐述立场 2.在我看来,学术课程很重要，但是学生如果不懂得对错的区别，也很难事业成功。 主体部分第一段 中心句 3.很多老师认为学生应该关注主科，因这些课程决定了他们以后是否可以进大学。解释 4.这些课程学到的知识可以给大学打下好基础（a firm grounding for university），以后找到好的工作。 举例 5.如果中学好数，那么他们以后可在大里建立模型去分析数据，成为金融分析师和工程师。 对比 6.如果学生需要花时间习道德准则和行为规范，他们可能就不关注主科。 主体部分第二段 中心句7.学校可以灌输一些重要的美德（virtue），让他们可以利用好自己的知识，成为对社会有用的人。 正确句子： Schools can instill some important virtues into student and enco urage them to make good use of their knowledge to contribute p ositively to society.（句7以这个答案为准） 举例8.如果一个人懂得忠诚，那么就不会将公司的机密材料卖给竞争者。 举例29.如果一个工程师有社会责任，就会设计出能够让消费者安全使用的产品。 对比10.一个学生即便在校的表现很好，如果不能够遵循道德规则，他也很难成功。 主体部分第三段 中心句11.我个人觉得，学生能够分辨对错才可能成功。 举例112.学生在学校里要懂得尊重老师，和同学很好相处。 举例213.一些小孩可能喜欢吃快餐，这样会引起肥胖。 对比14.如果他们不意识这些问题，这些问题不仅影响学习，也影响以后的工作。
最高级和比较级 主语谓语最高级和比较级(宾语) than 英国在某方面花费的最多 Britain spent the most heavily on… 英国的花费高于其他国家 Britain spent more than other countries. 德国花的只比法国多 Germany only spent more than France. 主系表结构 意大利的花销只比法国多一点 Italy’s spending is only marginally greater than that of France. 英国的花费高于其他国家 British spending is considerably higher than that of other countries. 西班牙是最受欢迎的度假胜地。 Spain is the most popular holiday destination. 被动语态 女性失业率高于男性的。 More women are unemployed than men. 红色车的销量较高。 Far more red cars are sold. 英国在玩具上的花费高于其他国家 More money was spent on toys in Britain than in other countries. 女性的失业率最高 The highest percentage of women are unemployed. The unemployment rate for females is the highest. 位居中间maintain middle position 表示比较的连接词 By comparison = in contrast = by contrast: 对比来说, Compared with A = in contrast to A :和A对比来说, On the contrary = conversely: 相反 数字连接词修饰词 at \with\ reaching the figure of some\approximately\more or less\ just over\just under\ number or so The number of visitors to France and Germany reached 3million and 5million respectively 相等be equal to 主谓宾结构中常用动词 Spend Consume Consider mention cite prefer\favor\appeal to enjoy\have \own Suffer hoose 最the most 最不the least
在雅思写作的四大评分标准当中，连贯性与衔接性是其中的一项评分标准，连贯性与衔接性其中一方面就是用连接手段（即连接词）来实现的。连接词本身是非常繁琐的知识，在教授连接词时也会遇到很多困难，那么学连接词首先把连接词词性掌握并掌握各词性的用法，学连接词就简便得多。朗阁海外考试研究中心分析认为，连接词大体可分为四种词性：连词，副词，介词和短语，它们各自的用法又不一样。 连词 如but, and,后接句子，连接并列句时前面逗号可有可无。当然连词也可放句首，这一点在考官范文里有很多体现。 例：In the past, populations were partly regulated by frequent war and widespread disease, but in recent years the effects of those factors have been diminished. (并列句中的连词) 段落开始：But how should it be achieved ( 连词放句首) 介词 如before, despite：后接名词或动名词 例：Before talking about the essential role of death penalty, you have to think about the meaning, and the purpose, of any kind of punishment. 副词 副词连接并列句，前面用句号或分号，后面用逗号（当然，如果副词前用句号，那就是另起一句了，不称之为并列句） 例：In many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven. However, because it is more likely now that both parents work, there is little opportunities for children to stay in their own home up to that age.( 副词另起一句) The crime rate is increasingly high; therefore, the government needs to enforce more laws to curb this situation. ( 副词在并列句中) 短语 如on the contrary, in addition：用法和副词用法完全一样 例：They feel this is one area of life where they have the right to make decisions for themselves. For that reason, it would seem that the best approach would be work by persuasion rather than compulsion. The government plays a crucial role in scientific research; on the other hand, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research. ( 短语在并列句中) 掌握连接词的四大词性及用法以后，连接词的教学和运用就容易展开。我们可以参看考官范文，看看各类关系的时候考官如何使用连接词，使文章凸显出来。 因果关系 根据词性及用法可归结于: because / since/ as / for, so (连词), because of/ due to / owing to/ as a result of (介词) for that reason/as a result/ therefore/ accordingly (短语和副词) 例：I think the amount of waste produced is also as a result of our tendency to use sth once and throw it away. （可代替词汇because of/ due to / owing to）
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4.0概述 雅思作文包括两部分内容：Task1和Task2。A类和G类主要区分在Task1。A类Task1是描述一张图表。G类Task1是写一封信。Task1要求字数150。在Task2，您必须写一篇至少250字的评论或报告。因此，您必须合理分配写作时间。 4.0.1注意答题的展示 12点应注意的事情： 1） IELTS写作测验答题不用写题目，也不用重写问题在答案上方； 2）左右必须留下约一寸的间格； 3）您可用传统方法（即每段的下一行向右移一寸）或用现代方法（在段落之间留一行空行）来分段，但千万不要同时使用这种方法； 4）千万不要邻行书写； 5）应用尽每一行，由左到右的空间都应用尽，除非最后一个字太长会超过右面留空的间隔； 6）切记不要分字； 7）写大概10至12个字一行，这样可限制自己字体不会太大，字与字之间的空位也不会太大，而且数字时也比较方便； 8）用草写。草写令您的文章显得较成熟，但必须易看。正写字体显得幼稚。由于草写是一般受高深教育的西方人的写法，为留下良好的第一印象，您应采用这种写法； 9）尽量选择粗线条的原子笔和蓝色墨水。心理学来说，较粗的笔迹令人有较深的印象，而蓝色令人看得舒服和轻松； 10）如您写错字的话，划掉它重写一次便可； 11）虽然没有明文规定是否整齐会影响分数，但心理学来讲，您的文章是用来影响评分者的，因此整齐漂亮的文章会留下一个好印象； 12）标点符号绝不能用错，避免用感叹号（！）和问号（？）。 4.0.2了解问题的意思 如您不能做到以下几点，您的写作成绩不会理想： 1）用少的字数写出题目要求您写的答案。考试虽没有限定最多字数，但试卷的空间却有限； 2）直接针对问题，当您准确地认定题目后写作的时候不要偏离题目； 3）清楚您的文章是对谁写的。当您要考的是Academic Module,您的文章应用正式的格式来写。例如当 题目要求您写信给学校老师，您应用正式的格式。尽量不要用不正统的字眼，例如“etc”“and soon”等等； 4）写评分者想看到的答案，如题目要您写“your own experience”，意思是指您过去所有的知识，并非真指您的个人经验（personal experience）。如题目是叫您提出意见或建议，千万不要写得太概括、太简单和写一些人所共知的事。记着应详细和针对要点。 4.0.3用三节式写作方法 正统的文章段落句子和每一个字都可分3部分 一个字： (prefix) + stem + (suffix) 例： (un) + forget + (able) 一句基本句： subject + verb + complement 例： I + love + you
雅思作文常见开头结尾形式 注：如下方式，雅思写作针对性强，且略带模板印迹，同学应在充分理解结构的基础上，用上面的方法去灵活写作 雅思大作文第一段一定要包括这样三个基本要素：“背景句”，“话题”和“观点”。这三个部分是完整统一的，一定不能忽略。 第一，背景句：背景句主要起到引题的作用，但要紧密联系题目中的话题。其方法是围绕题干中的关键词或核心词展开。 背景句的写作方法： 1 联系社会背景：任何一个话题肯定都于一定的社会发展息息相关，所以联系关键词的社会背景是一种最简单、最常用的方法。具体可以有以下5种句式： 1) The 21st century witnesses --- 2) With the development of science and technology,--- 3) In modern society, --- 4) It is quite common these days that --- 5) Recently,--- 例如：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 参考背景句： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone. 或with the development of science and technology, the mobile phone is more and more available to and popular with common people. 2 重述话题：有的时候题干里是有一个背景介绍的，这时候我们只需将题目所给话题重新复述一遍即可。但切忌原样照搬照抄，不过可以将原文中的词汇和句式进行同义转换。转换句型可以有以下三种． 1) it is generally believed that --- 2) it is said that--- 3) it is reported that--- 例如：Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it. 参考背景句： It is generally believed that individuals are confronted with psychological and physical stress coming from work. 3解释中心词: 即将中心词进行解释或展开说明。此种方法一般适合容易下定义的词比如图书馆。可以有以下三个句型： 1)It is known to all that --- 2)As is known to all, --- 3)--- is known as--- 例如：The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their
雅思写作基础段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作基础段 课程周期：16小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共8次 教学目标： 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1整体介绍；task 1常用词汇及运用 第二次：雅思写作task 1常见图表介绍及相应的表达 第三次：雅思写作task 2整体介绍和常用词汇及运用 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类介绍与背景构建 第五次：雅思写作task 2常用表达运用及强化进阶 第六次：雅思写作task 1 和task 2 混合基础分场景共建 第七次：雅思写作task 1和task 2混合表达及词汇共建 第八次：雅思写作基础段总结及强化段铺垫与衔接 雅思写作强化段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作强化段 课程周期：12小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共6次 教学目标： 在进行了起步段和基础段之后，通过强化段的课程来帮助学生更深入地理解雅思写作考试。帮助学生解决备考中的关键性问题——思维发散。通过强化段的课程来提高学生在雅思写 作方面的应试能力。 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第二次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第三次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第五次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第六次：雅思写作task 2分类强化篇二：定制雅思教学计划 雅思阅读【总学时】 24学时 教材选用 《剑桥雅思考试全真试题4-9》外语教研社 第一阶段：第一个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：基础词汇积累&定位信息，关键词的基本能力 授课内容： 1，扩充雅思基础阅读词汇。 2，学会寻找关键词，在原文中快速定位，教授雅思阅读中常见的3种题型：1heading sentence(找标题)summary(摘要填空) ture/false/not given(是非题) 再陈述与推理及true, false, not given 题的技巧。 培养学生雅思判断题需要的逻辑思维 4，教会学生读文章的步骤，利用文章中的图片图表信息做题。 模考安排：每4次课一次单科模考和分析反馈 第二阶段：第二个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：猜词与复杂句，基本题型的操练 授课内容：1，词根，词缀，词性，利用上下文猜词的能力；十大句子关系。 学会如何判断词性，句子成分，如何判断区分有用与无用的生词。 3，快速找到复杂句的重点，根据复杂句完成简单的问题；
雅思小作文必备词汇 图表chart = graph = diagram 直线line 曲线curve 柱bar /column 饼pie 表table = figures = statistics the thin（细线） / thick（粗线） / broken（虚线） / dotted（点线） line 表明，表示，阐明show , give information about，reveal，indicate，demonstrate 直线图类词汇 (上升类动词)Increase------------ decrease (下降类动词) go up-------------- go down rise up-------------- fall down climb-----------------slide ascend --------------decline keep an upward tendency ----keep a downward tendency 波动动词类：fluctuate fluctuate upward / downward（波动向上/向下） 保持平稳类动词： keep / remain / maintain / stay unchanged / constant / stable（形容词，不变的） 修饰动词的副词： slightly 轻微地，slowly 缓慢地，gradually 逐渐地，steadily 稳定地，rapidly 迅速地，significantly 明显地，sharply 明显地，dramatically急剧地， 修饰名词的形容词： slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic 大约，大概，左右类词汇：almost / approximately / around / roughly / more or less / nearly 时间from … to …/during the period/ between … and … / starting from ….
1.介词 From..to.. - The number of divorces increased from 1m in 1970 to almost 1.5m. by, of（表示数值变化差，搭配from/to） 趋势动词+by -The proportion of married people decreased by 11% to about 59%. 趋势名词+of -The proportion of married people underwent a decrease of 11%. at（表示在某一点） -The number of marriages leveled off at 2.5 million during the first decade. -The minutes of local fixed line calls reached the peak at around 90 billion. With（带一个或几个静止的数值） - In 1979, beef was the most popular of these food, with about 225 grams per person per week. - Three of these countries shared similar figures with6.63% in Turkey, 6.51% Spain and 6.43% in Ireland. 2.括号 带静止数据 - Specifically, deforestation was the number one murder (9.8%), followed by over－cultivation and over－grazing (7.7% and 5.5% respectively). 带动态数据 - There was an overall slight increase in both nuclear and solar/wind (up by 3q and 2q respectively). - Both nuclear power and oil went up during the period, although the rise of oil was not as dramatic as that of nuclear power (from 15, 20 to 126, 25 respectively). 3.从句
最新雅思写作常用万能句型整理大全 1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________. 2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________. 3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above. 4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________. 5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________. 6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________. 7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future. 8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________. 9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________. 10. In my opinion, ______________ is just as common as ______________. If ______________, it may be very useful. Whatever ______________, the key point lies in ______________. 11. Are their opinions correct? To my mind, the first idea seems ______________. As for the second idea, ______________. 12. As a popular saying goes, ______________. In my opinion what really counts is not ______________, but ______________. I believer that as long as ______________, we will ______________. So I am for the opinion that ______________. 13. In my opinion, both sides are partly right. When we ______________, we should take into consideration all aspects of the problems, and then make the right decision. 14. Personally, I believer that ______________. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________.
雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法 雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法 直接表述观点 Well, do you think people can tell you their real thoughts just through phone? Without person-to-person contact, it is unlikely for you to dig deep into their minds and unlikely to get truth. 大部分情况下，英文是首句中心句，段落其他部分是支持中心句的内容，所以听到首句就是主要意思，因此这种模式相对简单，表示观点的词，比如赞成(support, be for ,go for be on the side of, quite agree with)，中立( mutual, just so so, you can try it, not the best)，反对( not good, be against, not recommend, better avoid )，喜欢(be favor of, like, prefer)，一般态度(its ok, but)，不喜欢(dislike)，必须( must, it is necessary)，依情况而定( it depends)，没必要( not necessary)，等等。 以下举几个直接表达观点的例子，大家可以看一下。 直接观点表达：
Another hazard for your back are the shock waves which travel up your spine when you walk, known as heel strike. A real find for our patients has been the shock-absorbing shoe . A cheap but very effective solution.支持 Finally, a word about the state-of-the-art relief- the TENS machine-a small battery-powered gadget which delivers subliminal electrical pulses to the skin. Our experience indicates that your money is better spent on the more old-fashioned remedies.反对 【雅思大作文的写作方法:直接表达法】 1.雅思写作方法 2.雅思大作文写作方法 3.雅思小作文写作方法 4.常见的作文五大写作方法 5.2015雅思小作文流程图的写作方法 6.雅思大作文主体段写作方法 7.雅思大作文的写作方法:客观利弊法 8.雅思小作文流程图的写作方法「精编」
雅思写作最失败的文章开头 废话连篇不知所云（喷血指数：☆☆☆） 典型失败案例：Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married? This topic is very interesting. I'm very interested in talking about this topic. Because I'm also a college student and I'm not married…… 修改方案：开门见山直奔主题 In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married. Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? （雅思真题） Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life. Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn't it? Of
常用万能句型： 1、Nothing has received more praise and abuse than something 译文：没有什么能像…这样毁誉参半。 2、There is no doubt that 译文：毫无疑问 3、The reason why + 句子~~~ is that + 句子 译文：之所以…主要在于 4 、So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 句子（如此…以至于…） 译文：如此…因此 5、It is conceivable that + 句子 译文：可想而知 6 、Leave much to be desired 译文：…远不能令人满意 7、The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that 译文：造成该现象的最主要原因在于 8 、A is to B what C is to D 译文：A 对于B 就恰如C对于D 9 、There are probably many reasons contributing to this phenomenon 译文：造成该现象的原因有许多。 10、When it comes to ……， 译文：一谈到… 11、No one can deny the fact that…
译文：没有人能否认 12、To be sure, the topic concerning ……can always attract our eyes 译文：无疑，有关…话题总是能够引起人们的关注 13、Never has …failed to fascinate us in modern society 译文：在当代社会…总是能够引起人们的关注 14、Simply put,… 译文：简而言之， 15、It is no overstatement to say that 译文：可以毫不夸张地说 16、…is a good case in point 译文：…就是一个绝佳的例子 17、People assume different attitudes towards this issue 译文：人们对该问题的观点不一而同。 18、As is widely-accepted,… 译文：众所周知， 19、To conclude,… 译文：总之， 20、Nothing is further from the truth than this opinion 译文：没有任罕菊净种说法比这种观点更加荒唐了。 21、There is an element of truth in both opinions 译文：这两种观点都有其可取之处。 22、Another consideration in this case is that…