江西莲花县2016高考英语书面表达（二轮）基础品析（6）【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑假你参加了英国游学活动，住在房东Tricia家中，回国后给房东写一封信表示感谢，要点如下：
1、安全抵家
2、回顾英国游学体会
3、感谢房东的帮助
4、附寄两张合影
5、表达愿望
注意：1、词数100左右。
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3、结束语已为你写好。
Dear Tricia,
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___________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达：
Dear Tricia,
I’ve come back home safely. Looking back to my stay in Britain, I felt so happy and satisfied. The beautiful scenery and friendly people impressed me a lot. I also benefited a lot from learning together with local students. More importantly, your help and kindness made it easier for me to have a better understanding of British cultural and adapt to the life there. So I’m so grateful to you.
By the way, attached to the letter are two photos taken with you, which I believe will remind you of the happy time we spent together. You are expected to come to China
soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours
Li Hua
书面表达
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Alice在学校的演讲比赛中得了第一名，给她写封信，词数120左右，包括如下内容：
1．祝贺她取得优异成绩；
2．告诉她你在高三学习中的苦与乐；
3．邀请她方便的时候来中国玩。
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【参考范文】
Dear Alice，
How are you doing these days?
From your letter，I know that you won the first place in the speech contest of your school.Congratulations！I strongly believe that you have the ability and undoubtedly，your hard work and determination contribute to your success.
It is several months since I entered Senior Three.During these days，anxiety and happiness accompany me.Sometimes when I meet with some difficulties，I feel depressed.But I feel content more often because study occupies most of my time，for I know success lies in hard work.Only by making every effort will I realize my dream of entering Peking University.
Welcome to China if it is convenient for you！I promise that I will take you to many places of interest and you can taste delicious dishes.I know you must like it.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours，
Li Hua
【2013界广东省惠州市三模】
基础写作（共1小题，满分15分)
上周一你们班围绕“追星族”现象进行了一次讨论会，同学们就“追星”的现象、原因等展开了讨论
1.年轻人作为追星族的主体花太量的时间、精力，甚至金钱收集明星的资料参加他们的演唱会。
2. 许多年轻人深感压力.、缺乏信任感，“追星"可给他们带来厂定的安全感。
3. 明星常引领当舍被尚潮流。
【写作内容】
1. 根据以上内容，描述这次讨论会；
2. 谈谈你对“追星族”现象的看法。
【写作要求】
只能使用五个句子表达全部内容。
【评分标准】
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
参考词汇：追星族 fans of celebrities
【参考范文】基础写作
Last week we had a heated discussion in our class on the issue of pursuing celebrities,in which we talked about the phenomenon and the reasons.Young
people,making up the major about celebrities ,not only spend plenty of time and energy in collecting information abourt celebrites but also pay a large amount of money for their concerts .Their crazy behavior shows that they are under great pressure and lack sense of trust.Being fans can bring them sense of security to some degree and the fact that celebrities often lead the fashion trend of modern times also contributes to their admiration,As for me,I think we students should try to achieve the balance between chasing celebritise and studying hard because after all,accumulating knowledge and learning skills are our main task at present.
【2016高考训练题】书面表达 (25分)
为配合我县开展“创建卫生文明城市(build a civilized and clean city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛。现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文。
提示：1. 衣着整洁；
2. 保持环境卫生，不随地吐痰和乱扔垃圾；
3. 待人有礼，乐于助人；
4. 遵守交通规则；
5. ……
要求：1. 文章必须包括所给提示中1—4 项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息；
3. 词数：80-100词左右。
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized and clean city, we students
should____________________________
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【参考范文】书面表达
How to Behave Well?
In order to build a civilized city, we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy. Our city should be kept clean every day. Don't throw litter or spit about. It's good manners to say "Thank you" and "Please" and so on. We should never say dirty words. Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need. For example, when we are on a bus, we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies. We should also obey traffic
rules. When the traffic lights are red, we should stop. And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public.
If everyone behaves well, our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.
【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是李华，最近收到一封英国笔友Tom的来信。他希望了解你校如何保证学生在校期间的安全。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一封回信，介绍你校的做法并发表你的看法或建议。
学校已采取的措施你的看法或建议
1. 各方面安全教育，增强安全意识: 如食品、交通…
2. 安全监督：如与家长及时沟通，…
3. 保安人员管理：如增加保安人员数量, 明确职责…
4. 对外来人员：来访出示证件、登记等注意：(1) 信的开头、结尾已给出、不计入总词数。
(2) 词数：100左右，信的内容可适当发挥以使行文连贯。参考词汇：安全意识 awareness of safety 登记register(vi.) 保安 security guard
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
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We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment. Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】书面表达
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to receive your letter and thank you for your concern about our students’ security.
So far many measures have b een taken to ensure the students’ security in and out of our school. The security issue has been emphasized on. We have organized several school meetings to strengthen the students’ awareness of safety about food, traffic
and so on. By communicating with parents often and in time, our school can supervise and ensure our safety. Besides, a proper number of security guards have been employed to guard the school under a clear duty. Stricter security measures have been taken by our school, including a requirement that all visitors provide identification and register. The students have been taught the ways to protect themselves from danger. For example, once we smell something unusual, we should report it to the school guard immediately. In my view, our school has been doing pretty well and we are looking forward to more effective measures.
We believe a safer school will provide us students a better learning environment. Yours,
Li Hua
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job, but also I have the personality for a ______________ (工作名称). On one hand, _____________________(第一个原因On the other hand, ______________________(另一个原因). Should you grant me a personal interview, I would be most grateful. If you need to know more about me，please feel free to contact me at any time at________________________( Thank you for considering my application, and I am looking forward to meeting you. Yours Sincerely, 模板② Dear Sir or Madam, I’m _________(简单自我介绍). When I was reading the advertisement, _________(表达看到相关广告后的感受). I think it’s a good opportunity for me to _____________(应聘的原因Therefore I recommend myself to without hesitation.
应用文-----建议信 1．master＝have a good command of v．掌握 2. improve v．提高 3. pronounce v．发音 4. grateful adj.感激的 5. spelling n．拼写；拼法 6. usage n．使用；用法 7. standard n．标准 8. take notes 记笔记 9. take part in the English Corner 参加英语角 10. improve writing skills 提高写作能力 11. have a good knowledge of English 通晓英语 12. work hard at English 努力学习英语 13. step by step 逐步地；一步步地 14. be afraid of making mistakes 害怕出错 (2015·四川卷)【参考范文】 Hi Sharon, This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin. Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress. In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking. Hope for you early reply! Yours Sincerely Li Xia (2015·淄博模拟)【参考范文】 Good morning, everyone! It's my honor to be here to make a short speech. Recently I have found that some of our classmates can't study effectively. Some can't help falling asleep in class, because they often study too late into the night. Others seldom have sports, which surely does harm to their health. As we know, enough sleep is of great importance for us senior 3 students. We can concentrate our mind in class with sufficient sleep, so we should try to make wise use of our time，striking a balance between work and leisure. Besides, doing proper exercise every day can benefit us a lot, keeping fit, reducing stress and so on. Let's spare some time to do all kinds of sports. And only in this way can we keep a good mood and study well. That's all. Thank you for listening! 应用文-----邀请信 1．ancestor n．祖先 2．discovery n．发现 3．imagination n．想象力 4．technology n．技术 5．benefit n．益处；利益 6．ancient adj.古代的 7．vivid adj.生动的；形象的 8．civilized adj.文明的 9．fascinating adj.魅力无穷的 10．invent v．发明 11．present v．呈现 12．be located in... 坐落在…… 13．attract one's attention 吸引某人的注意力14．beyond imagination 超出想像 15．It is universally acknowledged that... 众所周知…… (2015·全国新课标Ⅰ卷) 【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?
2009年高考书面表达分析指导（三） 第三篇写初稿 要点列出后，就可以着手写初稿了。写作时，应考虑以下问题： 一、句子的正确性 正确性是句子最基本的要求，比如及物动词要接宾语，应接动名词的动词后不能接不定式，如admit 等。常见的句子错误有： 1. 结构不完整我们学过简单句的六种基本类型： 1. S+V（主语+谓动）； 2. S+V+P（主语+系动词+表语）; 3.S+V+0（主语+谓动+宾语）; 4. S+V+0i+0d（主语+谓动+间接宾语+直接宾语）; 5. S+V+O+Oc（主语+谓动+宾语+宾补）； 6. There be 句型。 结构不完整是指句子的成分残缺，不符合上述六种基本句型的要求。例如： I ' d like to friends with you缺少动词，friends 前应力卩be 或make） En glish is so i nteresti ng that I like very much. （like 为及物动词，后缺少宾语，应补上it） He kn ocked the door quietly, so I did n （kno'ckt 为e不及物动词，不能直接 接宾语，需使用介词at） The teacher expla ined us the senten ce. （explai 不能接双宾语，向某人解释某事”为explain to sb. sth. 或explain sth to sb.） They supplied us some new computers. （suppl 不能接双宾语，为某人提供某 物”为supply sb. with sth. 或supply sth. to sb.） 2. 不合乎语法规则 正确的句子必须是合乎语法规范、无语法错误的句子，既要合乎词法，又要合乎句法。中学生常犯的词法错误有：名词数、格的错误;形容词、副词级别、词序错误;动词的时态、语态、语气、非谓语动词错误等。例如： You can find a lot of informations on the Internet. （information 为不可数名词，没有复数形式） Which is the second longer river in China? （第二长的”应使用最高级，即the second longest） He is eno ugh tall to pick the apples on the tree. （enoug 修饰形容词或畐寸词时应后置） How many satellites did China send up so far?与so far连用应使用完成时） My hometown grows cotton. （该句应使用被动语态，改为：Cotton is grown in my hometown.） To have no money with me, I didn a c ny t hbinugy. （不定式作状语只能表示目 的，或与only连用表示意外的结果。此处表示原因，应使用现在分词，改为：Havi ng no money with me, …）
专题16 书面表达 一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter 参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
常用文章开头的句型： 1．It is well-known that....众所周知，……。 2．There is no doubt that....毫无疑问，……。 3．Some people claim that....有人认为……。 4．It is generally believed that....普遍认为……。 5．It is widely accepted that....普遍认为……。 6. Currently there is a widespread concern over...现在，人们普遍关注的问题是……。7．With the rapid growing popularity of..., the quality of our lives has been considerably changed. 随着……的快速普及，我们的生活质量已经发生了极大变化。 8．With the development of..., an increasing number of people come to realize that.. 随着……的发展，越来越多的人意识到……。 9．Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that...正在越来越多的人逐渐意识到……。 10．Some people think that.... To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 有人认为……，坦率地说，我不同意他们的观点，理由如下。 11．For years, ... has been seen as ..., but things are quite different now. 多年以来，……一直被看着是……，但现在情况大不一样了。 12．Last week, we made/conducted/carried out a survey about...上周，我们做了一项关于……的调查。 13．Recently we have had a discussion over...最近我们讨论了……这个问题。14．According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一项调查，每年有4 000 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。 15．The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。 常用于文章正文的句型： 1．People’s views on...vary from person to person. 人们对……的观点因人而异。2．As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”常言道，“事物都是一分为二的。” 3．As a proverb says, “No pains, no gains”．俗话说，“不劳则无获。” 4．Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer....与普遍的想法正相反，我更喜欢……。5．I cannot entirely agree with the idea that .... I believe….我不完全赞同这样的一个观点……，我认为……。 6．There is no denying the fact that...不可否认，……。 7．Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides. 在提出我自己的观点之前，我们有必要了解正反双方争论的焦点。 8．It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of…到了改进……的时候了。 9．It is high time that we put an end to... 到了结束……的时候了。 10．There is no easy solution to the problem of..., but...might be useful.
书面表达高级词汇 1. 意识至U realize f be aware As a member of society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society. 2. 即将来临be coming soon f around the corner/ at hand An exciting event “Innovations（创新；革新） on Campus”is around the corner. 3. 认真地carefully f attentively We stood around him and watched attentively. 4. 此外besides/what 'smore f in addition/ additionally In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. 5. 得至get f acquire/obtain The moral （寓意）of the story is that we should spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be. 6. 对... 有好处be good/ be helpful f be of
great benefit/be very beneficial/be rewarding Sports are beneficial to building our bodies. 7. 改善improve f better Immediate actions should be taken, like stopping cutting down trees to better the environment. 8. 结果as a result f as a consequence As a consequence, children become so reliant （依赖的；可信的）on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 9. 令人担忧worrying f of great concern Such a situation is of great concern. 10. 擅长；精通be good at f have a good command of/have a good knowledge of Having been exposed to English for many years, I have a good command of English. 11. 表达express f convey I'm writing to convey my gratitude to you. 12. 重要be important f count/matter What matters most in learning English is enough practice.
高考英语书面表达题型分析 书面表达是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在高考英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼，有些学生对书面表达题束手无策，无从下手。在日常的书面表达作业处理上，很多老师不注重及时给予批改或提供反馈信息；而在平常的考试测验中书面表达题很多时候被老师们看成是“调节剂”，即根据试卷的难易程度来判分，间接导致学生不能客观对待自己的写作能力。在对书面表达的订正往往老师仅局限与把范文读给学生听或张贴。久而久之学生对写作持敷衍态度，良好的写作习惯没有养成，导致书面表达题又成为高考失分的主要方面。 因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。 一、高考书面表达题型分析 高考书面表达旨在考查学生的书面运用语言的能力，看其是否能运用所学的知识和所掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年的书面表达题来看，要求所写的题目形式多样，有记叙文(Narration)、说明文(Exposition)、描写文(Description)、日记(Diary)、书信(Letter) 、通知(Notice)和便条(Note)等等，所涉及的内容繁多。根据《高考英语科考试说明》，书面表达的题目要求考生根据所给情景（包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等）和提供的形式（图画、图表、提纲等）写一篇100字的短文，文章要切中题意，语言要准确得当，条理清楚。在体裁与题材上要多加注意。 本文就怎样做好书面表达题提出本人的几点看法。 【样题】假设你是李华，你上个星期去市图书馆看书发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr.Li 反映： 1、新书太少； 2、书架上的书比较混乱； 3、阅览室的一盏灯坏了； 4、管理员工作时彼此闲聊。 注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
词组 make beds意思是“整理床铺”, make use of意思是“利用”, make money挣钱, make a fortune: “发财”, make faces“做鬼脸”等等。 首先,尤其重要的,最重要的above all 偶然,无意中by accident 对(于)…很积极 be active in 合计为add up to 承让错误admit one’s mistake 接受某人的建议take / follow one’s advice 就…提出建议 give advice on 建议某人做某事 advice sb. to do sth. 后天 the day after tomorrow 毕竟;终究 after all 违心against one’s will
在…岁时 at the age of 实现目标achieve one’s aim 在空中;悬而未决 in the air 在户外,在露天里 in the open air 在机场 at the airport 火警the fire alarm 满腔怒火be filled with anger 因某人之言行而生气 be angry at sth. 生某人的气be angry with sb. 通知make an announcement 相继地,按顺序地 one after another 相互,彼此(三者或三者以上之间)one another 相互(指两者之间) each other 没有回答give no answer 为…而担心be anxious about 急于做某事be anxious to do sth. 分开住live apart
组合练3 语法填空＋短文改错＋书面表达 Ⅰ.语法填空 阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。 I'm sure you know from your own experiences that laughter brings people together.Humor helps to solve difficult situations.It makes you more 1.________ (charm) and others more entertained.It 2.________ (reduce) stress.I've even read research up to now 3.________ says laughter makes our internal organs work better! I'm not humorous，so over time，I had to learn how to be a 4.________ (humor) speaker.When I was funny on stage，it was an accident.I still very clearly remember I 5.________ (give) a demonstration (展示) of body language at then.I was falling my shoulders in 6.________ (disappoint) and then I said，“I'm very happy to be here today.” Everyone was amused and laughed loudly and I was thinking，“Huh，what 7.________ (do) I just do that was so funny？” I thought I was just demonstrating a funny thing.I happened to be delivering 8.________ same presentation that very same afternoon，and sure enough，again，at that same point in the talk，the audience laughed.You don't know 9.________ excited I was that I had accidentally figured out a way to bring 10.________ (enjoy) to the audience and make them laugh. 【语篇解读】作者以自己通过搞笑的体态语让观众笑出来的亲身经历，讲述了一个道理：幽默其实很简单。 1．解析：此处指幽默的行为让他人着迷，用形容词charming。 答案：charming 2．解析：陈述现在的情况，用一般现在时，主语是it，谓语用单数形式。 答案：reduces 3．解析：此处是定语从句，从句中缺主语，用关系代词that或which。 答案：that/which 4．解析：此处是形容词修饰名词。
高考英语书面表达典例精选 1.假如你是李华，你的美国笔友John 对刚进入的高中生活不太适应，请你写信告诉他你的想法，内容要点 如下： 1. 鼓励其广交朋友； 2. 积极参加体育活动，强身健体； 3. 努力奋斗进入理想大学。 注意：1. 可加入一些细节，使文章更加通顺合理；3. 词数100左右（信的格式已给出，不计入总词数） 【答案】Dear John, I'm so pleased to hear that you've been in Senior High School. And maybe you need a couple of months to adjust yourself. Here are some good tips for you. Firstly, a life without a friend is a life without a sun, so why not make a lot of good friends and enjoy helping each other? Secondly, we can take an active part in sports in our spare time so that we can get into shape, which will surely be good for our further study. Besides, it's our duty to study hard to make sure that one day our dream of entering a key university will come true. I believe you'll get used to it soon and wait for your good news. Yours, Li Hua 【解析】这是一道应用文写作，要求学生以李华的名义写一封信给美国笔友John，就他不适应刚进入高中生活不太适应的问题发表自己的看法。内容包括：1）鼓励其广交朋友；2）积极参加体育活动，强身健体；3）努力奋斗进入理想大学。写作时，考生要选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。根据对题目的分析可知，审本文主要使用一般现在时来写作，描述时，学生要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。 2.假定你是李华，暑假在伦敦学习，得知当地音乐厅要举办中国音乐会。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容 包括：(1)写信目的；(2)个人优势；(3)能做的事情。 注意：(1)词数100左右；(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 【答案】Dr. Sir， Hearing that there's a concert concerning Chinese music will take place at the local music hall, I intend to apply for the position of a volunteer. For starters,
专题二书面表达 一、一句多译(每空一词) 1.他提的问题值得讨论。 (1)The problem he raised was worth. (2)He raised a question, was worth discussing. (3)The problem he raised was worthy of . (4)The problem he raised was worthy to . 2.爸爸和妈妈都不在家。 (1)Mother and Father were not . (2)Mother and Father were . (3)My parents were not . (4)Both my mother and father were . (5)Neither Mother nor Father was. 3.昨晚那幢楼房突然起火了。 (1)The building suddenly last night. (2)Suddenly the building was last night. (3)A fire suddenly in the building last night. (4)All of a sudden a fire in the building last night. 4.我花了两个小时做作业。 (1)I spent two hours my homework. (2)I spent two hours my homework. (3)It to do my homework. (4)My homework two hours. 5.我宁愿待在家里也不愿去看电影。 (1)I prefer to stay at home go to the movies. (2)I prefer at home to to the movies. (3)I stay at home than to the movies. 二、翻译下列句子 6.我们班的一个明显的问题是缺乏团队精神。 7.目前,中国的私家车越来越多,因此交通变得越来越糟糕。 8.正是这些充满魔力的语言让我看到了自己的优点,建立了自信。 9.上周一令人难忘,关于传统文化我们有了一次有趣又有意义的体验。 10.这位教授给我们提出了一些如何学好英语的建议。 三、变换表达方式完成短文 11.请结合材料,按要求用英文写作。
高考英语书面表达建议信必备开头结尾 建议信必备开头结尾 开头： 【例句一】你在上封信中问我如何快速高效的提高英语，我给你一些有用的并且有帮助的建议。 You have asked me for my advice on how to improve English effectively and efficiently in your last letter, I will give some useful and helpful suggestions. 【例句二】你在上封信中说你不知道如何与你的同学相处，我推荐三个实用的建议。 I have received your letter saying that you had troubles on how to get along well with your classmates, I recommend three practical proposals. 【例句三】我写信来回答你上封信中关于如何流利准确的说英语的问题。 I am writing in reply to your last letter on how to speak English fluently and accurately. 结尾： 【例句一】我希望我的建议对你最后的决定有帮助。 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making. 【例句二】我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. 【例句三】请认真考虑我的建议。 Please take good consideration of my advice. 【例句四】非常希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。如果有其他的我可以为你做的，请让我尽快知道。我确定你在不久之后能解决这些问题。 Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long. Directions: In this section, you are required to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write about 100 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 建议报考的专业及理由；2．报考该专业的基本条件； 3．应当如何备考。 Dear Tom, When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English. To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on. What’s more, it goes
Sample 1 Recently we have launched a survey among the students in our school and their parents to find out whether parents are proud of their children. It turns out that 80% of the parents take pride in their children, while only 60% of the students think their parents are proud of them. The difference indicates that from the students’ perspective, they are not that good to live up to their parents’ expectations. One reason may be that parents are often strict with their children. They expect their kids to be outstanding, to be better and better. Even if their children fulfill a goal, they will not give their children any chance to be carried away by the temporary success. Therefore, what children hear is mostly criticism and requirements from parents. As for another reason, we Chinese people typically tend to contain our feelings. This is the nature of our nation, to some extent. We are not used to expressing our feelings, especially compliments, directly. So most parents do not praise their kids or sa y al oud " I’m proud of you" even when they do love their children deeply and think they have done a great job. As we can see, many factors contribute to the result. We appeal to parents to express their feeling frankly and we hope a better understanding between parents and children can be formed. After all, family is a place for love and expressing love! Sample 2