奥小作文专项训练
一、写事(一般过去时)
1 Yesterday
I went to a park with my classmates. In the morning, we went there bybus.The park looked beautiful.
First, we flew a kite, then we rowed a boat on the lake. At noon, we had a picnic. I liked the food very much, because it was very tasty. In the afternoon, I played football with some boys. In the evening, I had a party with my classmates. We sang and danced at the party. Yesterday I was very happy.
2. A happy week
Jack had a happy week. Last Sunday he played the piano. On Monday, he took a piano lesson. On
Tuesday, he went swimming in the river. On Thursday, he flew a kite in the park. On Friday, he drew a picture at home. On Saturday, he rode a bike with his good friends. What a happy week !
3. A Visit To The Star Lake
Last summer, I went to the Star Lake with my parents. We visited there by boat. The water was very clean and we could see a lot offish in the lake. We rode a bike for three people. We also climbed
mountains. There were many flowers and trees. The trees were very green. We had a good time. I love the Star Lake very much.
4. Last weekend
I had a busy weekend. Last Saturday morning, I did my homework and learned English at home. I
watched TV and played ping-pong on Saturday afternoon. In the evening, I went to the cinema. On Sunday morning, I cleaned my room and went to the park. On Sunday afternoon, I visited my friends and went shopping. What a busy weekend!
二、写事（现在进行时）
It is Sunday morning. My mother and I are in the park. There are a lot of people in the park. Some children are running. A dog is running after them. Four women are sitting there. They are talking. Two girls are playing with a big ball. Three old men are standing under a big tree. They are watching the children. Everyone is having a good time in the park. We are having a good time, too.
三、写事（一般将来时）
1. A Busy Sunday
I’m going to have a busy Sunday. In the morning, I’m going to the zoo by bike. I want to see the monkeys. Then, I’m going to the bookstore. I’m going to buy a new Eng lish book. In the afternoon, I am going to visit my
grandparents with my mom. It is far, so we are going by bus. In the evening, we are going to watch TV together.
2. A Busy Weekend
I am going to have a busy weekend. I am going to visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. Then we are going to cook dinner together. In the evening, we are going to watch TV. On Sunday morning, I am going to play sports with my friends. I am going to buy some gifts for my mother, too. In the afternoon, I am going to wash my clothes and read some books. What a busy weekend!
四、写事（一般现在时）
My Weekend
I often visit my grandparents on Saturday morning. We often cook meals together. In the evening, we watch TV. On Sunday morning, I often play sports with my friends. Sometimes I go to the park with my parents. In the afternoon, I often wash my clothes and read some books. I always busy on the weekend.
五、写人的文章
1. Amy is from America. She is 13 years old. She is very tall and thin. She has long black hair. She likes wearing a red T-shirt and blue pants. She likes singing and dancing. She often rides a bike with her friend on the weekend. She stays a healthy life. She can wash the clothes and play the piano. She is very helpful.
2. My good friend is Mary. She is a girl. She is my classmates, too. Mei is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and long hair. She likes listening to music and reading books. Sometimes we listen to music together. She likes summer. Because she can swim in summer. She usually goes to school on foot. Sometimes she goes to school by bike. We often go shopping together on the weekend. We are good friends.
3. My name is Lily. I am 13 years old. My hobbies are playing the violin, playing computer games and reading books. I like playing basketball. I like swimming, too. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and me. My father is a businessman. He likes reading newspapers. My mother is a teacher. She likes cooking. I am a student. I like them very much, and they love me, too.
4. My Family
I love my family, because I have a happy family. My father is an English teacher. His name is Jacky. He is thirty -eight. He likes playing basketball. My mother is very kind and nice. She is thirty-seven. I love my parents! On the weekend, I often go to the library and play the piano. My father plays basketball in the gym. Sometimes we watch TV and listen to music at home. I love my family.
5. My Teacher
My favorite teacher is Miss Huang. She is beautiful. She has two big eyes, a big nose and a small mouth. Miss Huang likes singing. She is good at playing the piano. In the evening, she always plays the piano. She is
good at dancing, too. Sometimes she teaches us to dance. Miss Huang likes dogs very much because dogs are very cute. Her favorite color is blue. This is my favorite teacher. We like her very much.
六、写某人的兴趣和爱好
1. My Favorite Season（我最喜爱的季节）
I live in Zhaoqing, there are four seasons here. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. I like spring best. Because it is warm and windy. The sky is clearer, the sun is brighter, and the grass is greener. Children go out to the park in their beautiful clothes. Everything is beautiful. I like spring.
2. My Favorite Sport
Many people like swimming in the summer. My favorite sport is swimming. It’s cool to jump into the water in summer! I often go to swim in the swimming pool with my family. Swimming can make us strong and healthy. But not so many people like to swim in winter, because it is too cold. I hope one day I can swim in winter.
七、其他（写景多用There be句型）
1. My Bedroom
My name is Peter. Look, I have a beautiful bedroom. It’s small but nice. There is a big bed, a small desk, a shelf and a closet. The bed is near the desk. There is a shelf near the closet, too. Many good books are on the shelf. I like the books very much. There is a big board on the wall. I often write and draw pictures on the board. My bedroom is so beautiful. I like it very much.
2. My Hometown（家乡）
Zhaoqing is my hometown. It is beautiful. There are many big supermarkets and beautiful gardens here. It is very easy to go shopping. You can see green hills, big trees and nice flowers there. You can eat a lot of tasty food in Zhaoqing. You can climb mountains in Dinghu Mountains. You canride a bike near Seven Star Lake. They are very beautiful. I hope you can come and visit soon.
奥小看图作文专项训练
根据给出的图片，用一般过去时的形式写一篇小作文，不少于50个单词。
Last Weekend
I was busy last weekend. On Saturday morning, I got up early. After breakfast I played the piano with my sister. In the afternoon, I went to play ping-pong with my friends. I rode a bike in the evening. On Sunday morning, I went to a park with my parents, then we visited my grandparents. We cooked lunch together. In the
1、根据给出的材料，写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Saturday Sunday read a magazine go to the zoo buy a book do Kungfu watch TV Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to do Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。 你叫Amy,是个中国女孩，六年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Amy. I come from China. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too. 6、。要求：1、写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay 65个单词左右 Hello, Jay, I am very happy to be your friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents , my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you? Bye- bye， Benson 7、Jack 昨天跟他妈妈买东西，请根据下表的信息，写一篇不少于60个单词的小作文。 Yesterday was Jack’s shopping day. He went shopping with his mother. They went to the Happy Shop . They bought some pieces of candy. They are 4 yuan. They bought a roll of toilet paper. They bought a carton of ice cream at Mr. Chen’s Store .They bought a bottle of shampoo and a pair of socks at Uncle Eddy’s Store . They went to the Big Blue Department Store. They bought a toy car. It’s 105 yuan. They were very happy.
6年级英语作文 6年级英语作文1 The Winter Holiday,I like the winter holiday very much. Though it’s very short,I can enjoy the Spring Festival. I can watch cartoon every day.I needn’t go to school frepuently. Sometimes I can go to play with my friend outside.With the festival coming,I can play all the time. I can play video game with my brother.I am good at playing PC game. So I often beats my brother.Then more and more relative came to my home. We had dinner together.It’s so lively that I’am very hap py.But I still have to do my homework. 6年级英语作文 2 Modesty is one of the many qualities that cross - century young people should possess. It makes you foresee your imperfections. It gives you the impetus to go forward. Most important of all, it makes you accessible and creates favorable
六年级上册英语作文范文【三篇】 hello,my name is tian jiaxin ,i'm twel*e year age .I had a happy family,they are four people in my family，there are my father,my mother,my brother and I . i like me. do you like me? 修改后： Hello, my name is Tian Jiaxin. I'm twel*e years age. I ha*e a happy family. There are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. They all like me. How about you? My plan for the summer holiday The summer holiday is coming . I am going to my hometown to see my grandparents first . Then I ha*e to re*iew my lessons because some of my lessons are bad . At last I plan to *isit Beijing. Beijing is the capital of my country and there are many places of interests, such as the Great Wall , the Summer Palace. I think I will ha*e a good and interesting time this summer . A busy weekend
六年级下册英语作文 一、介绍自己的家人 My family There are four people in my family. My father is a work. He is a worker. My mother is an English teacher. She is younger than my father. I am a student. I love my family very much. 二、用there be 句型介绍一下自己的bedroom My bedroom This is my bedroom. There is a big bed in my bedroom. There is a desk next to the window. There are two chairs in my bedroom. And there are many books on the bookshelf(书架). I love my bedroom. 三、暑假马上到了。写一下你的暑期计划。 My summer vacation Summer vacation is coming. I will go to Hainan with my parents this summer vacation. We will get there by air. We will play volleyball on the beach. I will buy many gifts for my grandparents. We will have fun. 四、写一下你的理想中学 My ideal high school My ideal high school is a big school. There are many flowers and trees. It’s very beautiful. The school is famous for science club. The school is not far from my home. I will go to School on foot. 五、写一篇关于保护环境的作文 I am a student. I think we should protect the environment. We should stop using plastic bags. We shouldn’t litter everywhere. We should plant trees every year.
六年级英语作文范文
六年级英语作文范文 1、根据给出的材料，写一写Mike这个周末的活动计划。 Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kung fu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 2、Mary是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too. 3、短文写作。根据给出的提示和要求写一封介绍你一家的电子邮件给Jay Hello, Jay, I am very happy to be your net friend. There are four people in my family. They are my parents, my sister and I. My father is the oldest and the tallest. He can drive a car. He is a doctor. My mother is a factory worker. She works hard. My sister is a student. She is the best in her class. My hobby is playing basketball. My sister and I go to school on foot. I have a happy family. What about you? Bye- bye， Benson 4、描写你的周末生活，注意用一般现在时。 My Weekend I have happy weekend.
英语作文素材一自我介绍 Hello everyone, My name is Wang Tao. My English name is Jack.I am 13 years old this year.I'm in Class One,Grade Six.,My favourite number is six. My favourite day is Sunday. My favourite pet is a dog. I like reading.I can s peak English.It’s very interesting and I'm good at it. I like drawing and playing football too.I go to school from Monday to Friday. I usually get up at 6:30 and go to bed at 9:00.on weekends,I usually play with my friends.we have a good time together. This is me,can you tell me something about yourself?
B I have a lovely friend at school. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. I’m 11. He’s older than me. We have round faces and short hair. Our favourite colors are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we play football. On Sundays, we play the piano. He’s good at it. But I can do better at football. We laugh and play together. How happy we are! C Here is a photo of my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital . He goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He’s now in Dongying. He goes there by plane. I love my family. D Today is Monday. I get up at 6:00. I have my breakfast at about 6:30.Then I clean my room, wash my face and brush my teeth. I have noodles for breakfast. I go to school at 7:00. We have four classes in morning. At 11:30, I’m very hungry. I have lunch at school. I go to bed at 12:00 in the noon. We have three classes in the afternoon. I have chinese classes and English classes. I like them very much. I go home at 5:30. I do homework after school. My brother and I watch TV at 8:00 in the evening. Then I wash my face and brush my teeth. I go to bed at 10:00.I have a busy and happy day.
六年级英语作文范文集 班别：姓名：学号： Mike is a student. He is my good friend. He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn Kungfu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening. 2、看图写作文。（园地29页） 题目：A Happy Day in Spring 提示：下图是Mr. Black 一家人在春天的某一天在野外游玩的场景。请用一般现在时描写图中所呈现出的内容。可作适当的想象和发挥。 要求：1、条理清晰，意思明确、连贯，句子通顺，标点正确，书写工整、规范。 2、不少于70个单词。 A Happy Day in Spring It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family have a picnic in a park. They bring many food there. They bring fruit, drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk very happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies very well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are very happy. 3、根据下面提供的内容，写一篇英语短文。要求语句通顺，条理清楚，字数不少于50个单词。Mary 是个英国女孩，五年级学生，十二岁。她向别人自我介绍，并介绍她的家庭。她有个双胞胎姐姐，爸爸是医生，妈妈是老师，她非常爱他们，他们也很爱她。 My name is Mary. I come from England. I am an English girl. I am a student. I am in Grade Five. I like my teacher. Her English is good. There are four people in my family. I have a twin sister. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. I love them very much. They love me, too. 4、题目：My net friend（我的网友） 要求：1。条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范； 2．要将提示词全部体现在作文中；不得少于50个单词。 提示词：（1）computer （2）net friend (3) talk with each other(互相交谈) (4) in the chat room (在聊天室) （5）talk in English (用英语交谈) （6）good now My net friend I am Tony. I a have a computer. I have a net friend. His name is Jack. He is 12 years old. He is a student. He likes surfing the net. We often talk with each other in the chat room. We talk in English. My English is good now. He is a good boy. I like him very much. Do you want to have a net friend? 5、提示：根据下面所给出的这张Ann的小名片，以“我的好朋友”为题，写一篇小短文，介绍Ann 的基本情况。 要求：1、条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，书写清晰、规范。 2、要将名片中的内容全部体现在作文中。 3、不少于60个单词。
六年级英语作文范文精选10篇 六年级英语作文范文精选篇一 My fa*orite animal is raadfdsit. Its name is Sweet. Sweet has long ears. It’s *ery small. It’s white. It has a short tail. It has red eyes. It likes eating carrots. It likes jumping. It goes jumping three times a day. I like it *ery much. It’s lo*ely. It’s my best friend. I like the raadfdsit. It’s spring. It’s sunny and cloudy today. There are many big trees in the park. Mr. Black’s family has a picnic in a park. They bring much food there. They bring fruit drink and bread. Mr. Black and Mrs. Black talk with each other. They talk *ery happily. Ann reads a magazine. Tom likes flying a kite. The kite flies *ery well. They are hungry now. They want to eat their food. They are *ery happy. Who is your fa*orite people? My fa*orite people is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. She is tall and thin. She has big eyes andlong hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us e*ery day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I lo*e
WORD 格式 专业资料整理 六年级下册英语作文 一、介绍自己的家人 Myfamily Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisawork.Heisaworker.Mymother isanEnglishteacher.Sheisyoungerthanmyfather.Iamastudent.Ilovemyfamilyvery much. 二、用therebe 句型介绍一下自己的bedroom Mybedroom Thisismybedroom.Thereisabigbedinmybedroom.Thereisadesknexttothe window.Therearetwochairsinmybedroom.Andtherearemanybooksonthe bookshelf(书架).Ilovemybedroom. 三、暑假马上到了。写一下你的暑期计划。 Mysummervacation Summervacationiscoming.IwillgotoHainanwithmyparentsthissummer vacation.Wewillgettherebyair.Wewillplayvolleyballonthebeach.Iwillbuymany giftsformygrandparents.Wewillhavefun. 四、写一下你的理想中学 Myidealhighschool Myidealhighschoolisabigschool.Therearemanyflowersandtrees.It ’s very beautiful.Theschoolisfamousforscienceclub.Theschoolisnotfarfrommyhome.I willgotoSchoolonfoot. 五、写一篇关于保护环境的作文 Iamastudent.Ithinkweshouldprotecttheenvironment.Weshouldstopusing plasticbags.Weshouldn ’t littereverywhere.Weshouldplanttreeseveryyear.
专项训练四：写作 Ⅰ. 范文展示： 一、上个周末你干了什么？请描述一下上个周末你干的事情。如：做作业、看望 了奶奶、跟朋友去了公园玩等。 范文 My weekend Last Saturday, I did my homework. I flew kites with my friends. I visited my grandparents with my mother by car. I cooked for them. On Sunday I got up at six o'clock. I went to the supermarket with my mother. We bought some meat and some fruit. On Sunday evening I watched TV. I went to bed at nine o'clock. I had a good time on the weekend. I was happy. 译文 我的周末 上周六我做了我的家庭作业。我跟我的朋友们一起放风筝。我跟妈妈开车去看望了爷爷和奶奶。我为他们煮饭了。在周日，我六点钟起床。我和妈妈去了超市。我们买了一些肉和一些水果。在周日晚上，我看了电视。我九点钟睡觉了。我周末玩得很开心。我很快乐。 二、家人和朋友一起给你庆祝生日是一件快乐的事情，请你以My Happy Day为 题，写一写你是怎样过生日的。 范文 My Happy Day Today is my twelfth birthday. I invited many of my friends to come to my birthday party in the evening. At about six o'clock ，my friends came to my home. They bought me lots of beautiful presents. They all said，“Happy birthday to you！”We sang birthday songs happily. At the end of the party we ate the birthday cake and some other delicious food. How happy we were! 译文 我的幸福的一天 今天是我十二周岁的生日，我邀请了我的许多朋友来参加晚上的生日聚会。 大约六点钟，我的朋友们来到我家。他们给我买了许多漂亮的礼物。他们都
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规等。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 My Favourite Food Do you know what this is? Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much. How about you? What’s your favourite food? 【要领点评】 My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。
精锐教育学科教师辅导教案 1.回顾上次课内容 一.（总）知识梳理 【知识梳理】 1.中考写作常见考查方式： 2.中考学生作文水平分析 根据历年中考阅卷老师总结，总体上来说，中考学生作文分为五类： （1）优秀学生作文：结构清晰、开头语与结尾语短小精悍、能使用精彩句或词语,这是平时训练有素之结果，即为A类作文。 （2）中等偏上学生作文：结构蛮清晰，但是句子中出现少许语法错误，即为B类作文。 （3）中等学生作文：结构上稍有欠缺，句中有少许语法错误，即为C类作文。 （4）中等偏下学生作文：从结构上来说，阅卷者能看到学生所要表述的内容，但是语法错误铺天盖地，此类
5.作文常见错误——标题书写错误 文章标题（title）应写在纸的第一行的中间，和正文之间应隔一至四行。文章标题的第一个单词的第一个字母必须大写。标题中每一个实词的第一个字母也要大写。 错误标题：a good Friend of mine 正确标题：A Good Friend of Mine 文章标题一般由名词、名词词组、介词短语、动名词、动名词短语或句子来充当。当陈述句作为文章标题，末尾不用句号。但如果是问句，末尾应用问号；如果标题是感叹句或祈使句，句尾用感叹号。 错误标题：Make Our Country Green 正确标题：Make Our Country Green！ 6.作文常见错误——审题失误 有些考生在审题时不够仔细，往往还没有看清题意就急于下笔，偏离了主题。例如，某省中考作文要求考生写一项自己最喜欢的课外活动。有些考生却将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“自己最喜欢的课外活动”的主题。根据中考作文的评分原则，若作文不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。请看下面的失误文章： I’m a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. At school, my classmates and I ofte n take part in different school activities. I’m interested in computer science and I often take part in the computer activities in my school. At schoo l, many of my school friends enjoys ball games, racing, music, dancing, art and so on. I learn to get useful things from the Internet. I think it is important to learn to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. There is no doubt that computers will be more and more useful. 这篇文章通篇没有涉及课外活动这个主题，犯了审题不清的错误。 需要指出的是，有些学生虽然审题成功了，但又犯了扣题不紧的错误。文章中的一些句子与主题思想无关，违反了单一性的原则。中考英语书面表达题的篇幅非常有限，因此，考生在写作时务必要精心组织教材，紧扣主题。下面这篇文章就有扣题不紧的问题。 请你写篇报道，说明太白山旅游环境的变化。 要点如下： 太白山是陕西注明的森林旅游胜地。一年四季都有其独特的景色（scene）。不过，游览太白山的最佳时机是春天。每当春天来临，美丽的景色吸引了许多游客前来踏青观光。可几年前，游人不注意保护环境，乱扔垃圾，猎杀野鸟，点火野餐，致使环境一度恶化。请你写篇报道，说明太白山旅游环境的变化。 原文：
小学英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评 My English Teacher Miss Tang is my English teacher. She’s very pretty. She is tall and thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。 小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的词[组]，以免写出一些错句子。写作时要注意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等。 My Days of the week I’m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six o’clock every day. I have breakfast at half past six, and go to school at seven o’clock. I have classes from Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don’t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day. 【要领点评】 这篇作文的题目是“我的一周”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的亲身经历写起，叙述了自己一周七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。 小朋友们写作文时要注意人称及谓语动词的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的实际，写自己身边熟悉的事情。 I can help do housework I am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m very helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash and sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too? 【要领点评】 本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮助做家务”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情，介绍自己的名字，所在年级及在家能做的家务，很详细，到位。 小朋友们在写作时，应尽量写一些亲自经历的事情，这样会避免在作文时显得太空，因为只有自己经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作时还要注意大小写和时态。 My Village My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village! 【要领点评】