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雅思作文范文翻译3篇
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本文简要目录如下：【下载该文档后使用Word打开，按住键盘Ctrl键且鼠标单击目录内容即可跳转到对应篇章】
1、篇章1：雅思英语作文范文
2、篇章2：雅思英语作文范文
3、篇章3：雅思英语作文范文
雅思写作主要包含两部分:一篇图表作文（即小作文）,
一篇议论文（即大作文）。其中,大作文从交流功能出发,要求考生就某一问题提出观点并进行阐述和论证,旨在说服他人认
同自己的观点。以下是小泰为大家整理的关于雅思作文范文翻译，给大家作为参考，欢迎阅读!
篇章1:雅思英语作文范文
Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some feel that the children of low income
families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the “real world” when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these
difficulties.The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident,but in fact require closer examination.
The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck ,and are thus naturally better suited to stretching money when times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families,thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths,are believed to be completely ignorant of the tentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood.They are believed to be prone to
overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief,though logical,overlooks one key point which is,of course,education.
The basis of this argument is,of course,knowing the value of money ,and the idea that children of the poor know this,and those of the wealthy do not.Who though,is in a better position to teach their children the value of money,someone skilled in earning and keeping it,the wealthy parent,or someone who can not seem to acquire it,the poor parent? Both wealthy and poor children are equally likely to acquire an education in money,whether it is formal,or in the school of hard knocks. Conversely, both children are as likely to ignore this education.
A poor child may believe that one can get
along,if not as easily,without wealthy.A wealthy child may be well trained by a parent steeped in the knowledge of money management,the key to developing this skill is education.
篇章2:雅思英语作文范文【按住Ctrl键点此返回目录】
The 21st century has begun.
What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Model Answer:
Man, through the ages, has undergone many changes from the time when he depicted a herd of mammoths on the walls of his cave to these days when he can create beautiful pictures and even make coffee by use of computer technologies without leaving his favorite chair. The 20th century made huge steps in developing computer technologies and reached many goals that made our life much easier. What should we expect in the
21st century?
First of all, I think that the pace of our life will speed up: we will move faster from one place to another, from one continent to another using high speed jet airplanes. Second of all, I believe that we will be able to do many things that take much time now without leaving our house. Computers will be
everywhere including out clothes. Many people will have chips and mini computers inserted in their heads to hold huge amount of information and have a quick access to it.
But what will be the most amazing thing in the
21st century is the flights to the outer space and Mars that will be available to all people. Scientists say that Mars has many things similar to the Earth's. Moreover, they say that with the help of modern technology people can artificially create conditions that will allow people to live there on the constant basis.
To sum up, I am sure that many amazing changes
will be brought by the 21st century. Furthermore, I think that with the help of the contemporary technologies people can do many things that were even difficult to imagine a century ago. So, nowadays it is rather difficult and even impossible to imagine all changes that will happen in the next decades.
人，古往今来，发生了许多变化的时候，他被一群猛犸象在他的洞穴墙壁的这些日子他能创造美丽的图片甚至让咖啡利用计算机技术没有留下自己最喜欢的椅子上。第二十世纪在发展计算机技术方面取得了巨大的进步，达到了许多目标，使我们的生活变得更加容易雅思英语作文范文及翻译雅思英语作文范文及翻译。第二十一世纪我们应该期待什么?
首先，我认为，我们的生活节奏将加快：我们将从一个地方移动到另一个地方，从一个大陆到另一个高速喷气飞机。第二，我相信我们可以做很多事情，花很多时间现在不离开我们的房子。电脑将无处不在，包括衣服。许多人将芯片和微型计算机插入在他们的头上持有大量的信息，并有一个快速访问它
但在第二十一世纪最令人惊奇的事情是对所有人都可以使用的外层空间和Mars的飞行。科学家说，Mars有许多类似于地球的东西，而且，他们说，在现代技术的帮助下，人们可以人为地创造条件，让人们在那里生活在不断的基础上雅思英语作文范文及翻译雅思（IELTS）。
总之，我相信第二十一世纪会带来许多惊人的变化。此外，我认为，在当代科技的帮助下，人们可以做许多甚至一个
世纪前难以想象的事情。因此，现在是相当困难的，甚至是不可能想象所有的变化，将发生在未来几十年。
篇章3:雅思英语作文范文【按住Ctrl键点此返回目录】
I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. I believe
that building a large factory near my community has advantages as well as disadvantages. In the following paragraphs I will list basic benefits and losses that will be brought by a new factory.
For several reasons, I think that a new factory will not be a good addition to my neighborhood. First of all, factories often bring pollution. They are prone to contaminating the local air and water. Second of all, factories make noise. Another important aspect of building a new factory near by is that it will make the local traffic heavy. As a result of this, the amount of traffic congestions will increase, as well as contamination of the air. So, all these obviously will not make one's life happier and healthier in my community.
From the other side, I believe that a new factory will bring some advantages to my community. First of all, it will bring new job opportunities. Many specialists will be required to work there. Second of all, I think many local community facilities will have to be renovated to obtain reliable supply of water and electricity. So, some old pipes may be changed. Another important benefit of this is that the local roads in order to manage the increasing traffic will be rebuilt and widened.
However, I do not think that listed above
benefits are worth all these troubles including water contamination and the constant pollution of air. From my point of view all factories must be built far from the people communities because they can be really harmful for people's health.
我从圣彼得堡，俄罗斯。我相信在我的社区附近建一个
大工厂既有利也有弊。在下面的段落中，我将列出一个新工厂带来的基本利益和损失。
由于种种原因，我认为新工厂不会成为我邻居的好邻居。首先，工厂经常带来污染雅思大作文范文及翻译雅思大作文范文及翻译。他们容易污染当地的空气和水。其次，工厂制造噪音。附近新建一个工厂的另一个重要方面是它会使当地的交通拥挤。因此，交通拥堵的数量会增加，以及空气污染。所以，在我的社区里，这些显然不会让一个人的生活更幸福更健康。
从另一方面来说，我相信新工厂会给我的社区带来一些
好处。首先，它会带来新的就业机会。许多专家将被要求在那里工作
第二，我认为很多地方的社区设施必须翻新，以获得可
靠的水电供应雅思大作文范文及翻译雅思（IELTS）。因此，
一些旧的管道可能会改变。另一个重要的好处是，当地的道路，以管理日益增加的交通将重建和扩大。
不过，我不认为上面列出的好处是值得所有这些麻烦，
包括水污染和空气的不断污染。在我看来，所有的工厂必须建在远离人民的社区，因为它们可能对人们的健康有害。
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Topic 1: When international media (including movies, fashion shows, advertisements and other TV programs) convey the same messages to the global audience, people argue that the expansion of international media has negative impacts on cultural diversity. What is your opinion? 媒体信息一致的缺点： ?国际媒体（global media)—般掌握在少数几个有实力的机构手中（in the hands of a few, large, powerful organizations)；有了媒体的宣传(propaganda)后,西方文化成了主流(domineering force),大规模的、有吸引力的广告(mass seductive advertising )唤起了落后地区人们对物质新的向往（create fresh desires),经济联系增强（strong economic ties),西方产品取代了本地产品，使人们更加向往西方的文化； ?文化开始融合在一起(mingle),人们被新的价值观所围绕(bombarded with new values)，对自己的文化失去信心和自豪感（confidence and pride),拒绝接受自己的文化传统（rejection of their cultural heritage)转而接受西方的文化习惯（adoption of Western cultural practices);西方媒体削弱了民族的特征(ethnic identity)和社会的凝聚力（social cohesion);因为担心失去观众(a loss of viewers),当地的电视台也开始播放西方的电视节目（television shows), ?国际媒体的普遍会降低世界文化的品质和多样性（degrade the quality and diversity of world culture);文化被商业化（commercialized), —些文化产品（cultural goods),如音乐、服装，都变成了商品（commodities in the marketplace)。因此，即便一些文化在世界其他地方传播，它原来的性质（authenticity)已经丧失。 媒体信息一致的优点： ?国家之间的频繁交往会促进文化之间的交流。因此，相互了解和相互认同的可能性(likelihood of mutual understanding and mutual acceptance )就会增加，这是顺应全球化的趋势； ?未必一定放弃传统观念（not necessarily lead to the abolition of traditional values),事实上媒体可以起到宣传和稳固传统文化的作用； ?主流媒体一般都会反应文化多元性（The dominant media reflect cultural diversity.); —些外国节目其实促进了文化多元性(Most foreign programming is promoting cultural diversity.),适应了当地的条件（adapt to local conditions)，注意到了当地文化的敏感性（aware of cultural sensitivity).自我调节来适应市场(exercise self-censorship to suit the market :)。 As international media companies expand across the world, the growing popularity and uniformity of some media programs (such as TV shows, movies, fashion shows) is causing worldwide concern. Many people have strong views toward this trend. In my opinion, international media is closely linked to cultural globalization and cultural homogeneity. The dominance of international media is a sign of Western cultural imperialism and has the potential to thwart cultural diversity. It is not a secret that international media is owned and operated by a handful of giant corporations, such as Time Warner. They control large sectors of the media market and place national media companies at risk. The contraction in the number of media owners will cause a proportional reduction, in the variety of programs broadcasted. For example, painting, music and movies accessible in the media have a small number of genres, imposing restraints on one's knowledge of artworks of different cultural backgrounds. In addition to seizing control over those creative industries, global entertainment companies affect cultural diversity by reshaping the perceptions, beliefs and norms of ordinary citizens in different countries. Most of the cultural values and ideals promoted by the leading mainstream media are of American origin. American culture values individuality, maximization of one's benefits and material wealth, rather than communal life and family solidarity, the values and norms previously treasured in" many Asian countries. Unfortunately, many Asian people now imitate American people, causing the alteration of their perceptions of family. This radical change can be attributed to those movies and TV programs that portray the success of American individuals or corporations.
1.所以，正像我所理解的，尽管计算机在教育领域被广泛应用，但教师仍在课 堂上起着重要的作用。Therefore, as I see it, although computers are widely used in education, teachers still play important role in the classroom. 2.从上面所讨论的，我们会得出最后结论：公司应当鼓励55岁以上的人退休， 从而给年轻一代更多的机会。 From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that company should encourage people above 55 years old to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. 3.就像俗话所说，“有多少人，就有多少种观点”。来自不同背景的人对同样的 问题有不同的看法是可以理解的。 As the proverb goes, “So many people, so many minds.” It is quite understandable that people from different background have different interpretations of the same issue. 4.随着社会的发展，越来越多的问题引起我们的注意，其中一个问题是：人们 过多的使用电脑使人们的社会能力已经下降。 Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that people use computers so often that their social skills have been diminished. 5.首先，科学家和艺术专家，如商人、语言学家、作家、历史学家和哲学家， 为社会做出了同等的贡献。 First and foremost, both scientists and art specialists, such as businessmen, linguists, writers, historians and philosophers, contribute equally to society. 6.第二，对现代技术的过度使用使娱乐活动变得筋疲力尽而不是轻松。 Secondly, the overuse of modern technology in recreational activities makes such activities exhausting rather than relaxing. 7.显而易见，我们可以的下出这样的结论，中学生应该在17岁以前学习普通课 程而不是特殊课程。 It is obvious for us to conclude that high school students should study general subjects instead of special subjects before they are 17 years old. 8.所以，如果我们认真的考虑一下，不难得出结论：大学应该在每个学科种招 收同等数量的男生和女生。 So, if we take careful consideration, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students for studying in every subject 9.基于上述讨论和分析，我们可以看到商科专业的人才可以为国家的发展做出 巨大贡献，因此也应得到政府的支持。 Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the talented students who have majored in business can make great contributions to the development of the country, so they should get support from the government too. 10.此现象最坏的方面，在我看来，是巨大的工作压力对人们精神健康的逐渐影 响。 The worst aspect of this phenomenon, in my opinion, is that the huge pressure of work will gradually affect people’s mental health. 11.它是如此的重要，以至于我们不能出一点差错。然而，作出一个谨慎而又令
雅思大作文范文-全球化
雅思大作文范文-全球化
Some people believe that charities should give aid to those who need the aid most, wherever they live. Some people believe that charity organizations would better concentrate on people in their own countries instead. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Concern about humanitarian assistance has been heightened in recent years. Although it illustrates a moral ideal of mankind, many people who hold opposing views think that the welfare of fellow citizens is the priority. International aid has its weaknesses but its importance should not be denied. The main reason why international donation agencies should view international aid from a global perspective is that their funds can help the citizens of those recipient countries to combat poverty, disease and inequality. We should first recognize that citizens of developing countries are in desperate need of aid, because they are susceptible to natural or man-made disasters such as wars. In those war-torn or poverty-stricken countries, where resources are scanty, there is a high demand for food, medicine tents and shelters. In addition, humanitarian action can restore some of their basic rights, such as the right to receive education. This is also consistent with the universal principle of supporting vulnerable populations. Those who cannot provide financial support can work as international volunteers and deliver services, such as training and medical service, to those needy people. Despite the heightened importance of international aid, people have discovered
Going global It’s almost impossible for people nowadays to image what our life would be if we are not in a process that is called globalization. The great economists have already figured out the benefits brought by international trade which is part of going global, and we have to admit this even from real life experience if you know the coffee in your cap is from Vietnam. Thanks to global community, you can get the Australian oatmeal and black tea of Sri Lanka just from the supermarket’s shelves of your neighborhood. And don’t forget why Julian Assange, an ordinary individual, enraged Washington? Obviously it’s because thousands of people just like you can get the secrets of authorities conveniently from the global internet. Though it brings us such a lot of advantages, there still have some people who accuse of and oppose globalization. Their reasons concentrate on the diversity of culture which seems to diminish during the progress. So if we can’t ignore either of the cultural impacts and economy utility, w e’d better combined them when re-evaluate going global. Toward a definition of globalization In order to better understand each point of view and to access Kofi Annan’s statement, “It has been said that arguing against globalization is like arguing against the laws of gravity.”We need to explain what is globalization and compare different definitions to have a neutral and general definition on which everybody agrees. The term globalization should be used to refer to a set of social processes that are thought to transform our present social condition into one of globality. At its core, then, globalization is about shifting forms of human contact. Global culture: sameness or difference? Does globalization make people around the world more alike or more different? This is the question most frequently raised in discussion on the subject of cultural globalization. Apparently, global culture homogeneity has immensely enriched the lives of the denizens in developing countries. For instance, now Hollywood blockbusters typically get their first screening in China within a couple of days after their American premiere and youths in China can download singles topping billboard charts from the internet without having to scout around in a CD store. Enhance TV connectivity affords Chinese viewers chances to see primetime American TV shows. This ease of access to a multitude of foreign amusements has really brightened up the lives of many. Conversely, the global cultural sameness severely undermines the cultural diversity in the world. Nowhere is the decline of cultural diversity more manifest than with the youngsters. Today，In Chinese metropolises, it is a common sight that twenty-some things stroll down the billboard-lined sidewalks，sporting Nike sweatshirts and Adidas sneakers，with Motorola cell phones in their hands and Apple’s ipod clipped on their belts. And it is equally commonplace that adolescents. whose hair is dyed yellow or purple, don their baggy outfits and bust moves to hip-hop music. All these seem just so pretentious for a culture that valued modesty, humility and moderation for over three thousand years. In the second place, indiscriminate embracing of the American popular culture diminished the sense of pride and dignity of developing-country peoples. Traditions, rituals, mores and the languages of a culture are all unifying forces of a nation and the decline of them erodes the national identity and national pride of a country. Lastly, cultural westernization breeds massive unemployment in entertainment, publishing and design industries of developing countries. The inundation by foreign products drives local business out of the market and renders vast numbers of professionals jobless.
xx年雅思大作文范文 7,8月份，掐指一算，社会、生活和工作类题目闪现概率较大，今天范文依旧是工作类题目，推荐学习：雅思大作文每日范文(xx.4.11) Topic：With the wide use of puters and the Inter, people can study and work from home without going to school or pany. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages? 利用网络在家工作和学习 思路解析 如果你在家工作，你就不用每天去挤公交和地铁，浪费时间不说，还把人折磨得身心俱疲save a great deal of time and energy. 另外，时间安排会更灵活have a flexible schedule.只 要你能完成任务meet the deadline, 不管你几点开工，很多人早 上9点脑子还没醒过来，而到了晚上他们反而工作起来倍精神。对于学生，如果在网上上课当然也很方便，除了免去上学放学的辛苦，还可以把课程录下来反复听review the course content many times, 无论学霸学渣都可以按照自己的节奏来复习。
关于这种模式的弊端，主要有以下一些：让员工和学生都缺乏面对面的交流face-to-face munication，变得比较疏远bee alienated. 对于员工来说，少了老板的监督和约束supervision and discipline,很多人可能发现工作效率会降低。也许你上下班路上省了俩小时，结果还不够你淘宝、聊天和打游戏的。家里的环境让人放松，估计很多人都觉得在家里缺乏工作的氛围. 最关键的一点是对于学生的影响。本篇范文用到了“剑8-1”的一些素材：学习的目的不只是学知识和获取信息education is not about learning information and acquiring knowledge only,还需要学习与人相处interact with their peers,学习尊敬老师respect their teachers,学习遵守纪律obey school rules,而这些都是远程教学distance learning所无法学到的。 所以文章的结论是：在家工作和上课也许会变得越来越流行popular,但是这种模式只适合某些工作，而且它永远不会取代传统的学校replace conventional schools. ★ 推荐学习
5.1.2 范例5-1 投诉信 Dear Sir/Madam，亲爱的先生/女士， I am writing to you to complain about the CD Player which I bought in your store in January．After only two days，things started to go wrong．我正写信给你投诉一月份在你们店里买的CD播放机。仅仅两天后，东西就出问题了。 The first problem was the CD drawer，which opened and closed too quickly．I nearly trapped my fingers in it．The next day，I recorded a CD onto a cassette．Everything worked，but the sound quality was very poor．On the following day，the CD Pause button stopped working．第一个问题是光盘屉，它弹出合上太快了。我差点把手指卡进去。第二天，我将一张CD刻录到磁带上。一切都正常，但声音质量很差劲。第二天，CD暂停键停止工作。 Naturally，I returned the player to you for repair．Your assistant said I would have to wait only a week．After two weeks，the necessary spare parts had still not arrived．Eventually，nine weeks later，I collected the stereo．The CD player worked properly，but there was no improvement in the recording quality．自然而然地，我将播放器还给你们返修。你们的助理说我只需要等一个礼拜。两周后，必要的配件部分仍然未到。最后，九周后，我将音响组装起来。CD播放器工作正常，但刻录质量没有得到改善。 I am not satisfied with the equipment nor with the service I have received．I am therefore writing to ask for a full refund．I will return the player to your shop on Monday and I expect to receive a cheque for $250．我对你们的服务和产品都不满意，所以我要求全额退款。我周一会把播放器带到商店，希望能退给我$250。 Yours faithfully，你忠诚的， Johns 琼斯 (181 words) 范例5-2 道歉信 Dear Mr./Ms.,亲爱的xxx女士/先生， I received your letter yesterday complaining that the central heating system in your new house had not been completed by the date promised．I feel awfully sorry that the problem has been caused by my mistake about the date for completion on referring to our earlier correspondence．我昨天收到关于您新房中央供暖系统到期未完工的投诉。对此我感到非常抱歉，这个问题是由于我参照原来的合同弄错了完工时间。 I mistook your date of completion for next week due to my inattention，so the working team installed the system according to the wrong date．I realize the inconvenience that our oversight must be causing you and will do everything possible to avoid any further delay．I have already given instructions for the work to have priority and the engineers working on the job to be placed on overtime．由于我的粗心，将日期记错成下周，所以工程队根据错误的时间安装系统。我意识到我们的疏忽给您带来的不变，我们会尽可能地加快进程。我已经下令将您的事宜优先处理，工程师们会加班完成工作。 I assure you that these arrangements should see the installation completed by next weekend．I hope the settlement of this matter can meet your wishes．我保证这些安排会在下周末完成。希望这种安排您能满意。 The fault is entirely mine and I deeply regret that it happened．(159 words)这个错误完全在我，我对该事深感抱歉。 Yours faithfully, 您忠诚的， Johns 琼斯
雅思大作文范文：城市交通问题 这是雅思大作文范文《城市交通问题》，供大家阅读参考。认真研读一定的雅思范文及作文模板可以帮助我们检验自己的写作水平，并能很好地吸收和应用优秀范文里的优秀内容。 In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss about the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions. The progress of transport industry is inevitable and undeniable. What is under controversy is whether the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. To be frank, I am in high favor that we are well aware of the traffic problem. In my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that we lack the infrastructure construction. Also the overpopulation is the cause of this problem, especially in China. Although the growth of the transport is rapid, it still can not meet the increasing needs of people. Furthermore, people abuse the private cars to take public transport instead, which caused more cars put into use. Lastly, individuals are also responsible for this problem. People are lacking in consciousness and awareness for
Gao Phis Academic Personalized, professional tuloring. 雅思句型翻译练习(2) Day 6 1. 许多人相信科技的最大弊端就是它可能会带来一些难以想象的消极影响。 (disadva ntage) 2. 计算机会使人们丧失想象和创造力这一事实使我相信其是祸而非福。(rather tha n) 3. 毫无疑问互联网的快速发展使得许多人相信它是万能良药，然而情况并非总是如此。 (goes without say ing that …; soluti on) 4. 无可否认，博物馆可以扮演一个教育的作用，因为它给公众提供一个好的机会去研究他们国 家的历史和传统。(play a role in) 5. 许多人没能够意识到这样一个重要的事实：语言的多样性将会极大的推动文化的发展。也许 这就是为什么许多语言现在正处于濒临灭绝的境地。(diversity; enhance; on the verge of) 6. 毫无疑问，家庭成员之间的关系已经不像以前那么亲密。(not as... as...) 7. 广告之所以盛行主要在于它们的信息容量很大。(prevaili ng; in formative) 8. 互连网是如此盛行因此没有人可以避免不受到它的影响。(so…that…)
9. 可想而知，从事兼职工作可以培养学生的独立性和团队合作精神。 (develop) 10. 当前的教育效果远不能让人满意。(results; far from) 11. 造成该现象的最主要原因在于过度工业化似乎已经成了一种无法避免的趋势。(over- industrialization) 12. 文化多元化对人类文明而言就如空气之对于地球。(A is to B what C is to D ) Day 7 13. 造成该现象的原因有许多。 14. 一谈到计算机，人们持有不同的看法。(when it comes to …) 15. 考虑到该问题的严重性，我们必须得想出一些切合实际的措施来解决它。(severe; realistic) 16. 没有人能否认，我们已经进入了一个全球信息化的时代。(age of information) 17. 无疑，有关教育的话题总是能够引起我们的关注。 18. 在当代社会，环保总是能够引起我们的关注。 19. 众所周知，大学的主要作用是培养一个人的全面发展。 20. 可以毫不夸张地说学会如何合作在一个人的职业中是至关重要的因素。
1.作文题目 School age children and teenagers usually like to do the same things as their friends but parents often have a different idea about what their children should be doing. Should parents always decide how children spend their free time? 2.学生作文 Many school children and teenagers always do the similar stuff together, while their parents usually have different opinions about what their children should do. From my perspective, I think parents should not always decide the free time of children. To begin with, generation gap is a significant problem which happens between parents and children. It is inevitable that children will have different thoughts with their parents. Secondly, as children, they are living in a modern and developing world, which makes them change their minds frequently. However, many parents are quite reluctant to accept new ideas and technologies. Therefore, their views will be dissimilar with their children, which are really impossible to reach an agreement. At last, children prefer trying out new adventurous challenges, whereas their parents are rigid and only want stable life. So parents cannot really control and decide for their children. Furthermore, the ideas of parents are not quite always correct and sometime might mislead their children. Of course, there is no doubt that old people have more life experiences and can handle any difficult situations in most of time. However, the modern world is not as they think as it used to be, so they might under-estimate some circumstances which might have negative effects on their children. For example, most parents believe that as long as their children can obtain higher degrees from universities will definitely have better future. Contrasty, in reality, the abilities and moral standards of children are much more important than just only university degrees. In conclusion, parents should let children to create their own world and give them freedom to assign their leisure time, which might lead them to success eventually. Words: 279 3.老师批改： 文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 Many school children and teenagers always do the similar stuff together, while their parents usually have different opinions about what their children should do. From my perspective, I think parents should not always decide the free time of children. To begin with, generation gap is a significant problem, which happens between parents and children. It is inevitable that children will have different thoughts with from their parents. For instance, they have their own preference to choosing majors, careers or even the ways of living. (cc：这里需要给出一点他们怎么个不同，比如选未来的职业或者生活等。) Secondly, as