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以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道

基本信息:

⑴书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother

⑵作者:Amy Chua,美籍华人,耶鲁大学教授

⑶出版时间:2010年

⑷内容:作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事

⑸效应:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论

相关报道:

⑴中文版:2011年初开始在中国销售

⑵意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法

⑶最新消息:17岁的大女儿已被哈佛大学和耶鲁大学录取

*耶鲁:Yale 哈佛:Harvard

[写作内容]

根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍,内容包括:

1.图书的基本信息

2.图书的相关报道

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章连贯

【篇章结构】

体裁:图书的基本信息及相关报道

时态:一般过去时一般现在时

人称:第三人称

文章结构:

第一句:介绍书名、作者及出版时间

第二句:图书的基本内容第三句:引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论

第四句:此书2011年初开始在中国销售

第五句:意外反应及最新消息

【词汇联想】

1. 美籍华人 a Chinese American

2. 出版publish

3. 传统的traditional

4. 引发一场辩论start a debate

5. 出乎意料地unexpectedly

6. 大多数the majority

7. 不赞同disagree

8. 被录取get offer

【句式仿写】

1. 她用中国传统方式教育两个女儿。(in the …way.)

___________________________________________ 2. 中美教育方式孰优孰劣?(…or…)

___________________________________________ 3. 意外反应:多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法(disagree with)

___________________________________________ Suggested answers:

1. She educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way.

2. Which way of parenting is superior, the traditional way or the American way?

3. Unexpectedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author.

【佳作赏析】

以下是一则关于中国政府决定禁烟的报道的主要内容。

[写作内容]

请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯,内容包括:

1.禁烟决定的内容及实施的时间和范围;

2.目标和措施;

3.相关数据。

[写作要求]

只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。

【篇章结构】

体裁:通讯报道

时态一般将来时一般现在时

人称:第三人称

文章结构:

第一句:禁烟实施的内容,时间和范围。

第二句:目标。

第三句:措施。

第四句:吸烟的人数和分布。

第五句:二手烟影响人数和二手烟死亡人数。【词汇联想】1. 公共场所public buildings

2. 禁烟prevent smoking

3. 张贴post

4. 标志sign

5. 3.5亿350 million

6. 男性the male

7. 女性the female

8. 影响influence

9. 超过more than

【句式仿写】

1. 主要目的是通过张贴禁烟标识使每一个公共休息室没有烟。(the aim is to …, by…)

___________________________________________ 2. 吸烟人数有3.5亿。(There be…)

___________________________________________ 3. 男性占75%,女性占25%(hold)

___________________________________________ 4.把以上2, 3两句合为一句。

___________________________________________ 5. 受二手烟影响人数大约5.4亿(influence…) ___________________________________________ Suggested answers:

1. The main aim is to make every public rooms have no smoke by posting the sign of preventing smoking.

2. There are 350 million people smoking.

3. The male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent.

4. There are 350 million people smoking recently, in which the male hold 75 percent and the female hold 25 percent.

5. 540 million non-smokers are influenced.

Ⅳ写作(共两节,满分40分)

第一节基础写作(共1小题,满分15分)

你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情况:

时间: 上周末

对象: 眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授

主题: 我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题基本信息: (1)发生率: 略高于50%

(2)人数: 世界第一

专家解读: (1)原因: 很复杂

(2)治疗: 没有哪一种药物能治愈近视

(3)建议: 不要过度用眼;多参加户外活动(4)特别提示: 如何握笔也和近视有关

[写作内容]

根据以上情况写一篇采访报道,并包括如下内容:

1. 采访的时间、对象和主题;

2. 中小学生近视的发生率及人数;

3. 专家解读。

[写作要求]

只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

[评分标准]

句子结构准确,信息内容完整,篇章结构连贯。【篇章结构】

体裁:采访记录

时态:一般过去时一般现在时

人称:第三人称

文章结构:

第一句:采访的时间、对象和主题;

第二句:我国中小学生近视现状

第三句:治疗情况

第四句:建议

第五句:特别提示

【词汇联想】

1. 采访interview

2. 略slightly

3. 第一ranking the first

4. 复杂complicated

5. 治愈cure

6. 过度使用overuse

7. 特别particularly

8. 户外的outdoor

9. 有关related

【句式仿写】

1. 我采访了王教授有关中国学童的近视问题。(have an interview, concerning …)

___________________________________________ 2. 在我国一半以上的儿童是近视的。居世界第一。(more than,用三种不同的句式翻译)

(1) ________________________________________

(2) _________________________________________

(3) _________________________________________ 3. 近视的原因非常复杂,没有药物可以治疗近视。(so… that…)

___________________________________________ 4. 如何握笔也与近视有关。(how to …)

___________________________________________ Suggested answers:

1. I had an interview with Professor Wang, concerning the issue of short-sightedness of school children in China.

2. (1) More than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted. This number ranks the first in the world..

(2) More than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, which ranks the first in the world..

(3) More than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted, ranking the first in the world..

3. The causes for short-sightedness are so complicated that no medicine can cure short-sightedness.

4. How to hold a pen is also related to short-sightedness.

【巩固提升】一、将下列短文改写为5句话的文章。

In January 2008, a heavy snow hit the southern parts of China. It lasted for nearly 20 days. It was the most serious snow for the past 50 years in China. It destroyed about 437 million mu of forest and farmland. It caused more than 100 deaths and left thousands of people homeless. What's worse, the traffic was held up by the snow- storm. A large number of passengers were detained. A massive cleanup and reconstruction work is being launched for the snow-stricken parts of China. If you are willing to help, please call 021-********

(二)

Our school has practiced the new school schedule. The purpose of this activity is to return enough time and happiness to the students. But it caused a heated discussion. The majority of the students are pleased with this policy. That is because they can enjoy more free time to explore their talents and have more practical experience. On the other hand, most parents doubt whether their children can pass the exams successfully. According to the teachers, they are in favor of it. However, they are also worried. They aren’t sure whether all the students are able to make good use of the spare time after school.

(三)

This evening I had a great time at my friend’s birthday party. There we sang and danced together happily. Unluckily no sooner had I left my friend’s home than it began to rain heavily. I had to wait downstairs until the rain stopped. While I was waiting, a motorbike ran by me very fast. Then it hit a boy at the crossing. It was hardly believed that the motorbike ran away without stop. So angry did I feel that I telephoned the police at once because I had written down its number: GH-2375. After that, I sent the boy to the hospital.

(四)

This afternoon, I was often absent-minded in class. I was thinking of the film “Gone with the wind”. It would be shown at 7 p.m. As soon as class was over,

I hurried out of the classroom. On the way home I saw

a little child. He was standing by the roadside crying. He had lost his way. I forgot all about the film. I went up to him. I asked him to tell me whatever he knew about his family. It took me nearly an hour to send him home. I missed the film, but I felt happy.

(五)

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. This is known to all. Rubbish pollutes the air, the water and the places we live in. It also does harm to people’s health. Therefore, a series of laws and rules have been taken by the city government. This is to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment. In our city, rubbish is sorted, recycled or buried. The waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river to make sure that it is safe. As for me, I think it is the responsibility of all citizens to prevent rubbish pollution so as to save our city and our living place.

(六)

Qian Xuesen was born into a wealthy family on December 11, 1911, Zhejiang Province. Qian Xuesen was very clever. He was regarded as a “super talented” boy in his childhood. He graduated from Shanghai Jiaotong University in 1934. After that, he went to America for his further study and gained his doctor’s degree in the Science of Astronomy. Since he returned to China, he has devoted all his life to China’s A nA industry. He takes part in the design and research of rockets and missiles as well as opens a new era of China’s Astronomy industry.

Qian Xuesen has outstanding achievements. He is honoured as the “ Father of China’s Astronomy” and the “King of Rockets”. Qian Xuesen, a pioneer of China’s Astronomy industry, passed away in November, 2009 in Beijing.

(七)

Huaxing School wants to improve hygiene in the dining hall. It has decided to carry out the activity —

“Love the Dining Hall”. Students are called on to buy food that they can eat up. The waste of the food should be poured into the dustbin. What’s more, school will keep students on duty. Students should do the cleaning on time. In addition, the lectures on hygiene will be held and students are welcome there to develop a good habit.

(八)

The student Union held a party at 7:30 on Saturday evening to welcome the leaders. They were from brother schools in the auditorium of our school. More than fifty students took part in this activity. There were various performances. The performances included dancing and singing. Some students performed English dramas. They showed the guests their special ability on English. The leaders were very satisfied with our performances. They all had great fun.

(九)

Dear Sir or Madam,

Thanks for your attention. I’m here writing to complain about your product.

Last month, I bought an MP3. It was made by your company. It brought me enjoyment for some time. But last week, something went wrong with the screen.

I can’t see anything o n it. I have talked about this with the shop, It was the shop that sold me this MP3. But they/it couldn’t do anything about it. I have no choice.

I turn to you for help. I hope you can get me a new one or return my money to me.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Li Hua

(十)

Kaiyue Hotel is a 4-star international hotel. It is located on the beautiful bank of the Pearl River. The transportation is very convenient. It only takes you about 5 minutes’ walk to the Metro Station.Kaiyue Hotel is invested with up to 90 million RMB. It covers an area of 2800 square metres and has the building area of 10000 square metres. Besides, it possesses 200 various kinds of bright and comfortable guest rooms. As for food, the Chinese Restaurant holds at the same time over 400 people. It serves all kinds of foods of Chinese and Western styles.

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