大学英语四级作文范文讲评
作文题目：“WomenintheModernWorld”
提纲：
1.Womenareplayinganincreasinglyimportantpartinsocietytoday._________ ___
2.Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenim provedaswell.___________________
3.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyreali zed.
___________________________
例1．（2分段）
tinsocietytoday.Longag e,womenonlydidsomethinginthekitchenorathome.Nowmanyofthemhavese riousjobstoserveforpeople.Whatmencandosocanwomen. Withthechangesintheirsocialrole,women’spositioninthefamilyhasbeenimpr ovedaswell.Todayinthefamily,thewifeoftenlotsherhusbandtodosomethinga thomebatago,onlywomendidsomething.Menarefonedofdoingsomethingat home.
ealized.Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened.In thefactorythewonmentoasmuchasthemen,buttheyarepaidlessthanthemen
.Somepeoplehavenotcompletelyrealizedtheliberationofwomen.
东方教育点评：条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有错误，有的甚至影响理解。
具体问题剖析：(1)缺乏逻辑，东一句西一句，没有围绕中心论述，如第一段就没有展开论述妇女社会角色的转变，说得太笼统而缺乏说服力。
（2）用汉语思维，句子有明显的汉语痕迹，如“Whatmencandosocanwomen.”，应改为“Womencandowhatmencando”。（3）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如“Sometimes,thematter,thehusbandhittinghaswelf,oftenhappened”，应改为“Thecasethathusbandhitshiswifeoftenhappens.”
（4）拼写错误很多，大部分句子均有错误。
例2．（5分段）
manywomenhaveawork.Theyworkedaswellasmenplayinganimportantparti nfactories.Therearemanywomeningovernmentalso.Theyleadotherpeopleco untry,andmakeoutplans.Therearemanyscientistslso.Theyeventnewthingstoi mproveourlife.
n improvedaswell.Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity.Theyhadtolooksaf tertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.Butnowitischanged.
Theyareequaltoherhusband.Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussiont hingwithherhusband,dowhatshewantstodo. Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencompletelyrealiz ed.Wealsoshouldrealize,women’likertyarelimited.Forexample,manyfactorie swantmenbecomeitsworkersbutthechanceofwomenislessthanmen.Everyo neshoulddotheirbesttochangethiscondition.I’msure,theliberationo fwomen wouldbeincreased.
东方教育点评：基本切题。但表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。
具体问题剖析：（1）各段围绕中心句论述不深入，没有说服力。（2）衔接不自然，没有用适当的关联词，如第一段几个句子之间可以用一些“besides”、“ontheotherhand”、“furthermore”、“inaddition”等。（3）语言错误较多，很多句子不通顺，如“Intoday,manywomenhaveawork.”应改为“Today,manywomengetajob.”(滥用介词)；“Inancient,women’spositioninfamilyispity”中pity应改为pitiful （词形误用）；“Theyhadtolooksaftertheirchildren,dideveryhowhusbandorderedhertodo.”中every改为everything，how改为what（代词错误）；“Theyhavetherightofspeakingofidea,discussionthingwithherhusband,dowh atshewantstod o.”应改为“Theyhavetherighttoexpressideas,discussthingswiththeirrespectivehusban
d,anddowhattheywantto.”(人称代词前后不一致)。
例3．（8分段）
omentodayareplayinganimportantpartatworksthatwasthoughtonlycouldbe donebythemenbefore.Foranexample.Somewomenarenotsecrtaryintheoffic e,instead,theybecomemanagerofacompany.
improvedaswell.Intheworldtoday,moreandmorewomenhavetheirownjob.T heygettheirownsalary,andbecomemoreindependentfromtheirhusband.Wit htheeconomicsituationimproved,theirfamilypositionisimproving.
ealized.Manyhusbandsonlywanthiswifetostayathome,anddohouseworksor dosomeshopping.Theyonlywanttheirwifetobeahousewife,butnotamanager ofacompany.
东方教育点评：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
具体问题剖析：（1）论证不够深入，缺少事例，缺少说服力。
（2）文字缺连贯、且显累赘，如第二段可以把各句再改得简练一点并且有适当的转承词。（3）语言错误相当多，如“Foranexample”，“Somewomenarenotsecrtaryintheoffice,instead,theybecomema nagerofac ompany.”应改为
“Somewomenareonlongersecretariesintheoffice,instead,theybecomemana gersofthecompanies.”（单复数）
例4．（11分段）
dmorewomengotoworktoearnmoneyinsteadofkeepingthehouseorlookinga fterthechildren.Womenhaveenteredmanyfieldsofsocietyincludingscientificf ield.Asweknow,manywomensportsteamshavewontheworld’schampionssuc hasChinesewomen’sVolleyballTeam.
improvedaswell.Husbandsarenotthemastersofwivesinmanyplaces.Husban dsandwivesareequalnow.Theyjointogethertoovercomedifficultiesandshare happiness.
ealized.Alsoinsomeplaces.Womenareconsideredbeing“thing”belongtomen. Theyhave littlechancetofindjobs.Theydon’tgetequalpayforequaljob.Thisisap roblemmustbesolvednotonlybysocietybutalsobywomenthemselves.
东方教育点评：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，用词比较准确，但有少量语言错误，如“Alsoinsomeplaces.Womenareconsideredbeing“thing”belongtomen”，应改为“Alsoinsomeplaces，womenarecons ideredbeingthe“things”thatbelongtomen”
例5．（14分段）
countries,moreandmorewomenareactingasworkers,farmers,scientistsande venleaders.Wecansaythatalmostalljobswhichmencandoaredoneperfectlyby women.Womenarenolongerlookeddownuponbysociety.
improvedaswell.Husbandandwifearenowequalinthefamily.Theycopewithpr oblemsofdailylifetogether,andsharehappinesswitheachther.Also,youcanhar dlyfindoutthat intoday’sfamilies,womenarebeingbusywithdinners,whereas mencomfortablysittinginarmchairs,readingnewspapers.
ealized.Inspiteofthesechanges,theliberationofwomenhasnotbeencomplete lyrealized.Anumberofmenstilljealouslyguardtheirrights,andregardwomena sincapablecreature.Fewwomenareallowedtoattendimportantinternational meetingsdominatedbymen.That’sreallytheproblemsweshouldsolveimmedi ately.
东方教育点评：切题。论证充分，有说服力，论证手段丰富（举例、正反）表达思想清楚，语言流畅，词汇丰富，连贯性好。用词准确，仅有个别小错误。
p.s.由于一些例文错误较多，点评中只是列举了部分的典型错误，而且为了保持原文面貌，编辑没有做过多的改动，所以欢迎大家一起来挑
错，有问题和小水一起讨论。
2003年9月考试四级作文题：TheDayMyClassmateFellIll(orGotInjured) 提纲：
1.简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况
2.同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的
3.人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……
例1．（2分段）
Oneday,weareallinclassroom.Wangfangsaid,Oh!Weallseeherandfoundthats hewascrying!Teacherturnedtoaskherwhatwaswrong.Shesaid,Idogotafever, myheadisveryhot!FengGangsentshetohospital,weallfollowedthey.Inthehos pital,doctorWanggiveainjecttoher,shegraduallycalmandnothotasbefore.We allthankedthedoctor.
东方教育点评：未能按照题目要求写，没有着重写同学、老师和我是如何帮助他/她的人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是……。条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有错误，有的甚至影响理解。
原文修改后：
Oneday,whenwewereallinclassroom.,WangfangSuddenlycried,,Oh!Wealllo okedatherandfoundthatshewasgroaning.Teacherturnedtoaskherwhatwasw rong.Shesaid,Ihavegotafever,myheadisveryhot!
Immediately,ourteachersenthertohospital,andweallfollowedthem.Inthehos pital,weaskeddoctorWangtogiveaninjectiontoher,andshegraduallybecamec
almandnotashotasbefore.Weallthankedthedoctor. Thedayhaspassed,butitisclearlyinmymind.Ithinkifwecandothingslikethatint heincident,thesocietywillbebetter,andtherelationshipbetweenpeoplewillbe betteraswell!
例2．（5分段）
Lastweek,liningandIstudiedinclassroom.Suddenly,liningsaidtomethathehad aheadache.Iaskedhetoseedoctor.hesaiditwasnotbad.After5miniuts,liningsa itomehisheadacheveryserious.SoIhelpedhimgotohosptial
AlthoughttherewasSARSaroundus,butIfeltveryrmfromthisthing.Ittoldmetha tthelovefromtrueheartcanhelpcomeacrossanydifficult.Wearesoluckythatw eliveinabigwarmthfamily.Andnotverylong,myclassmatewasgettinghealthya ndcouldcometoschoolagain.Howhappywewere!
东方教育点评：本文切题，表达思想清楚，文字比较连贯,但有一些语法错误。
具体问题剖析：全文有一些语法、语言错误，如In1April2003,oneofmyclassmateswasgetseriouscold.应改为In1April2003,oneofmyclassmatesgotseriouscold.（时态）；Firstdaywhenhecametoschool,应改为Thefirstdaywhenhecametoschool,
（介词遗漏）；hissoundwasrough.应改为hisvoicewasrough.（用词）；AlthoughttherewasSARSaroundus,Ifeltverywarmfromthisthing.应把but去掉（连词）；Ittoldmethatthelovefromtrueheartcanhelpcomeacrossanydifficult.应改为Ittoldmethatthelovefromtrueheartcouldhelpcomeacrossanydifficulties.（时态、词性错误）；Wearesoluckythatweliveinabigwarmthfamily.应改为Wearesoluckythatweliveinabigwarmfamily.（词性）。
例5．（14分段）
DuringtheSARSperiodinthisspring,theyearof2003,oneofmyclassmates,Limin g,wasstruckdownbythevirusandwasimmediatelysenttohospital. Thenewsspreadquicklyoncampus.Atfirst,wewereterrifiedandwonderedifwe wereinfectedtoo.However,throughourgovernmentspublicityonmassmedia, wegraduallyconqueredthefearandsetouttotryoutbesttohelpher.Someteach ersprovideddarlynecessitieswhilesomestudentsrecordedtheEnglishclassco ntentsforhimsothatLimingcouldnotbeleftbehind.Withourcareandconcern,Li mingrecoveredquickly. Suchanincidentteachesusagoodmoral.Oursocietyisfulloflove,warmandpeac eful,inwhichpeople-frommantowoman,fromindividualtoindividual-lendoth ersahand.Justlikeafamoussonggoes,theworldwillturnittoheavenonlyifevery onecontributesalittle.andIdobelievethatitsmygreathonortoliveinthislove-fil ledparadise!
东方教育点评：本文切题，论证丰富生动，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无大的语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
p.s.由于一些例文错误较多，点评中只是列举了部分的典型错误，而且为了保持原文面貌，编辑没有做过多的改动，所以欢迎大家一起来挑错，有问题和小水一起讨论。
2003年9月六级考试作文题：
图表作文，关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量（popfiction,generalnonfiction,science,art等），给出他们的流动比例对比，说明原因，并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。
例1．（2分段）
此分段标准为条理不清，思路紊乱，大部分句子均有严重错误。
（为了不影响市容，给大家造成负面影响，故此处略去100字……）例2．（5分段）
Fromthenovel,wecanseethatthestudentslikeread(reading)novel,atthesame time,only(a)smallpartofstudentslikeread(reading)scienceandart. Thereasonto(for)thisisnovelisintereting(interesting),studentslikereadingit. Mostofthestudentsreadtoomuch(many)majorbookswhentheyhaveclasses,s otheywanttoreadsome(something)interesting(when)theyhavetime.Novelc anletthemrelax(relaxed).Sotheychoosenovel.
Ilikeread(reading)novel,byreadingitIknowalotofthings,Ialsorelaxmybrains.S oIchoosethenovel.
东方教育点评：(1)基本切题。
(2)表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。
(3)有较多的严重语言错误。
（4）字数不够，要酌情扣分。
例3．（8分段）Wecanknowfromthepicturethatmostofstudentslikereadingpopularnovelins teadofreadingscience,poetry.Fromthiswecanknowdifferentpeoplehavediffe rentaddictionto(preferencesfor)books. Differentpeoplehavedifferentaddictionto(preferencesfor)books.Theyreaddi fferentbooksjusttomeettheirdifferentneeds.Becausedifferentpeoplehavedif ferentmeetstoreadthedifferentkindsofbooks.Fromthiswecanalsoseethatdiff erentpeoplehavedifferentintentionsandnotions.Sotheychoosethedifferentt hingstomeettheirneedsineveryfacetinlife. IlikereadingpoetrybecauseIthinkpoetrycanmakemecalm,pleased,comfort(c omforted),(and)Icanseemanybeautifulthing(things)inthepoetry.
东方教育点评：(1)基本切题。
(2)第二段表达有点乱。
（3）语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
例4．（11分段）
Bookisthesourceoflife.Whenwereadabook,weshouldnotonlylingeronthesur faceofabook,butalsoweshould(删
掉)masteritsintrinsic.Asischartedintheblank,wecanseeclearlythatamajority oftheuniversitystudentsinAmericaareaddictet(addicted)tothepopularfictio n,andaminorityofstudentlikereadingthescience,poetry. Whydotheylikereadingpopularnovels?Inmyopinion,popularnovelbooksareu suallyinteresting,earthly,closetoourlives.Incontrast,science,poetrybooksare usuallyserious,dullanddifficult.Therefore,mostofthestudentspreferthepopu larnovels.
Ilikereadingthesincebook
（sciencebooks）.Foronething,itcanmakemeenhancemyspecialityknowele dy(specializedknowledge);Inaddition,itcanhelpmeknowthefrontieraboutm yspecialityandmasterthenewestthingsinsince(science);thirdly,itcangiveago odchancetoknowalotandcanhelpmetostudytheusefulsubjectwhenIgraduat efromtheuniversity.
东方教育点评：（1）本文基本切题，表达思想清楚。
（2）文字连贯，语言通顺。
（3）有一些语言错误。
例5．（14分段）ItcanbediscernedthattheAmericanstudentsprefertoreadthepopularnovelra therthanotherkindofbooks,suchasthenonpopular(unpopular)novel,theboo ksoftechnology,poemandsoon.Thepercentageofthepopularnovelcurrent(cu rrently)isabout68.2In1995itwas40percent;In2000,itwas80percent.
Thereweresomereasonsforthisfact.Oneofthemwastheimprovementofpeopl eslivingconditions（condition）,allpeoplewantedtoownpiratehouses.
Ontheotherhand,peoplesincomewasona（an）increase,theycouldaffordtobuypiratehouses!
Obviously,thereweresomegoodthingsresultedfromthisfact.Suchasitcouldim proveChineseeconomy.Buttherewerealsosomebadthings,suchasittookmuc htimetogotowork!
东方教育点评：（1）本文基本切题。
（2）字数不够，要酌情扣分。
（2）第一段描述图表不应该单列举出数字，而是应该重点描写变化趋势；第二段说明理由不够充分；第三段说明影响有点牵强。
（4）全文语言错误较多。
例3．（8分段）Fromthegraphitisclearthatthepercentageofthestateownedhouseinchinaina cityhasdecreasedgreatlyfrom75%in1990to20%in2000,whiletheprivatehous ehasincreasedsharply.whathascausedthesechanges?
Thereare,Ithink,atleasttwomainreasonsforthesechanges.tobeginwith,witht
hedevelopmentofthetechnologyandscience,peopleslivingstandardhasimpr ovedgreatlyandtheycanaffordtobuyhigh-gradedthingssuchasTV,computera ndevenhouse.Secondlyitisduetothemindpeopleholdandtheecomonicpolicy .Asisknowntoall,thepriceofhouseisoftenveryhigh,andpeoplemust(usedto)s avetheirmoney(for)manyyears,（however,）astheirmindschanged,theywenttothebanktoborrowmoneyandtheecomoni cpolicyalsoencouragedthemtodoso.Theremaybesomeotherreasons,butthe abovementiondarecommonlyacceptable.
Toconclude,theownershipofhousesreflectthedevelopmentofourcountryand peopleareenjoyingabetterlife,Iamfirmlysurethattheproductivityofthesociet ywillkeepimprovingandpeoplewillenjoyamoreaffluentlifeinthenearfuture.
2015年英语四级考试作文万能 《漫画》 题目:过度使用电脑对我们现代生活的影响:The Impact影响 Of Computer Overuse On Modern Life 手机不能代替学校学习Mobile Phone Can't Replace Formal Schooling 一.开头:描述图画内容(上图说…): What a thought-provoking发人深省it is！ As is clearly depicted描述 in the above picture,…上图说 As for me,A complus校园 activity that has benefited me most is… 揭示图片寓意(上图的意思是): Simple as the picture is,It reveals 展示 a prevalent流行的 yet但upsetting沮丧的 phenomenon现象 in our contemporary同时代 society：… Apparently明显的,漫画家想跟我们说:the cartoonist漫画家 intends to draw our attention引起注意 to+做某事的负面影响:the negative负面 impact影响 of doing sth. on our everyday life. Actually实际上,某人高估了某物的作用,并错误的理解了做某事的意义:某人overrates高估 the role of the 某物,and fails to appreciate理解 the significance意义 of doing sth. 二．提出观点前先铺垫(现实怎样): As far as I am concerned,…就我所能关心的而言 /This sight情景 reminds me of sth. in my daily life. There is no doubt无疑的 that+提出观点前的铺垫:某物极大地改变了我们,能干任何事:n.have changed our life enormously巨大的 and people nowadays depend on them for various purposes. 提出我的观点(然而我觉得怎样): 支持，我真觉得.As a student,from my point of view,I am strongly in favour of the decision,it is… 反对：坏物能代替好物么？我不这么觉得.Can 坏物 replace formal 好物?I don't think so. 然而,某事不利于健康.However,某事may adversely不利的 affect our social interaction and health. 三．具体分析解释自己的观点: 理由如下.The points/reasons for 某事 impresses me most +may be listed as follows. 某事 impresses me most with the following points. Most importantly,… 论证1:首先Firstly,…. By contrast对比,坏物只提供零碎知识.坏物 can only provide bits and pieces零碎的 of information. 论证2:Secondly/此外Furthermore,… 论证3:最后Finally,… 模板二：一方面For one thing,… 另一方面For another,… 我们需要如何解决问题：Many ways can help to solve this serious problem,but the following may be most effective. 解决方法123.First of all… Another way to solve the problem is … Finally… 四．结尾:总结全文: 一般来说Generally speaking，… 如前所述As has been stated陈述,… In conclusion总,I believe that+我们歌颂某物是伟大工具的同时,得小心做某事的危害.we should be alert警戒 to the dangers of doing sth. excessively 过度的 while celebrating歌颂 them as a kind of great tool. In brief简,上学最重要,去上学时必要的.the importance of formal schooling cannot be stated评价 enough 再怎么说也不为过,so it is necessary for kids to go to school. 《议论文》 【类型1.正反观点式】 一．导入话题: ①讨论是否应该做某事.Recently we've had a discussion about whether we should… 观点有分歧.Our opinions are divided on this topic. 二．正文: ②大家都支持某观点.Most of the students are in favour of it.+正方观 点，理由123.Here are the reasons. First… Second… Finally… ③但某些人反对.However,the others are strongly against it.+反方观点,理 由123.Their reasons are as follows. In the first place… What's more… In addition… 三．结论: ④利大于弊,我支持.Personally speaking,the advantages overweigh超过 the disadvantages,for it will do us more harm弊 than good,so I support it. 【类型2.“A或者B”类】 导入: ① Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others,however,argue that B is much better. Personally,I would prefer A because I think A has more advantages. 正文: ②There are many reasons why I prefer A. The main reason is that … Another reason is that…(赞同A的原因 ③ Of course,B also has advantages to some extent…+列出1、2个B的优势 结论: ④ But if all these factors are considered,A is much better than B. From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that … (得出结论オ 【类型4."How to"类】 导入: ①提出1种现象或某种困难作为议论 的话题 正文: ②结论: ③These are not the best but the only two/ three measures we can take. But it should be noted that we should take action to…(强调解决此类问题的根 本方法 《图表格》 The chart图表 gives us an overall 全面的 picture of the+图表主题. The first thing we notice is that+ 图表最大特点. This means that as+进1 步说明. We can see from the statistics统 计数字 given that+图表细节1.After v.ing 细节1中的第1个变化, The v.ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化). The figures also tell us that图表 细节2.In the column竖行,we can see that accounts for+进1步描述. Judging推断 from these figures图 形/数字,we can draw the conclusion that+结论. The reason for this,as far as I am concerned is that+给出原因. It is high time that we+发出倡议. 《信》 开头: ①How nice to hear from you again. I'm glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. ②Let me tell you sth. about the activity. ③I'm pleased to hear that you're coming to China for a visit. I'm writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾: ①With best wishes. ②I'm looking forward to your reply. I'd appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 《口头通知》 呼语+开场白: Ladies and gentlemen,May I have your attention,please? I have an announcement to make. 正文: All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we'll have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and don't be late. 结束语: Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you'll have a nice time here. That's all. Thank you.
最牛英语口语培训模式：躺在家里练口语，全程外教一对一，三个月畅谈无阻！ 洛基英语，免费体验全部在线一对一课程：https://www.doczj.com/doc/57540565.html,/ielts/xd.html（报名网址） [范文9] importance of education the prosperity of a nation depends on the development of education. throughout the world whatever advance has been made in science and technology is due to education, which brings forth by scientists and inventors. it is never overdone no matter how one emphasizes the importance of education. there is no doubt that countries with undeveloped education will remain poor. education is as vital to the development of an individual as it is to that of a nation. of all the elements of success in our careers none is more vital than education. it is not the genius that makes the difference between success and failure. education is the driving power. in fact, most of the famous people in our times spent many years in studies. can you name any great men you admire who are not educated persons? yet some people are still ignorant of its importance. some parents, especially in the countryside, think that it is unnecessary to send their children to school. some other parents are so selfish that they have their children work for money. in consideration of the situation, compulsory education must be enforced to ensure that there will be enough educated young people for the future of our country. [范文10] the importance of self education self education brings success. though we students have teachers to help us, still we should pay more attention to self study. here are some suggestions. first, read outside our class. every new book one reads will benefit him in one way or another. the more we read, the more we are benefited. as life is short and knowledge is infinite, we should try to read as many books as we can. second, improve our memory and reasoning powers. if we read more and more, we can make our memory and reasoning powers improve to some degree. moreover, we shall be able to write more clearly and correctly. third, develop our character. when we have formed the habit of reading, we can put into practice what they have taught and build up a good character. in a word, if we want to educate ourselves, the most important thing for us to do is to read not only our textbooks, but also any other books that are within our reach. 五、图表、信函及其他 [范文1] should women have equal job opportunities with men? this table shows the different opinions about whether women should have equal job opportunities in the following three countries, china, the u.s.a. and japan. as can be seen in the table, the people who agree with this point exceed those who disagree, especially in china. however, there are still some people in the three countries, especially in japan who are against women’s equal job opportunities with men.
英语四级优秀作文范文（3篇） 【篇一】It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy 1. 盗版软件比比皆是 2. 盗版软件猖獗的原因 3. 如何打击盗版软件 ●审题概述● 这是一篇主要论述盗版软件猖獗原因和打击盗版软件的措施的文章。第一段，概述中国盗版软件泛滥的情况。第二段，重点分析盗版软件猖獗的主要原因。第三段，侧重阐述打击盗版软件的措施。 【范文】 It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere. The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version? Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly. ◇第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。 ◇语言点提示： the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件 ◇第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。 ◇语言点提示： （1）downloads online 在线下载 （2）authentic copy正版 ◇第三段思路点评：阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。 ◇语言点提示： tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
英语作文范文 英语四级写作范文 Directions：In this section you are required to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below： 1.建议报考的专业及理由； 2.报考该专业的基本条件； 3.应当如何备考。 A Letter of Reply to a Friend December 27, 2003 Dear When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English. To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on. What’s more, it goes without saying that English majors are more likely to find a good job in the
Argumentation 型 1） some, others, I 型 （1）模版一 There is no consensus among the people as to the view of _________ (主题). Some people hold the idea that _______________________ (观点A). A case in point is that _____________________________ (支持观点A 的例子). On the other hand, others may have a quite different view. Accordin g to them, ______________ (观点B). The most typical example is that __________ (支持观点B 的例子). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agr ee with the latter. Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extent, but the latter is more convincing. （2）模版二 ___________ (主题) is a common occurrence in our lives. The attitude s toward this issue vary from person to person. Some people tend to ___ ___________ when they are asked _________________ (观点A) because _______________________ (支持观点A 的原因). The most typical example is that ____________________________ (支持观点A 的例子). However, others argue that ________________________ (观点B). They point out that _______________________ (重申观点B) for the reason that 、管路敷设技术通过管线敷设技术，不仅可以解决吊顶层配置不规范问题，而且可保障各类管路习题到位。在管路敷设过程中，要加强看护关于管路高中资料试卷连接管口处理高中资料试卷弯扁度固定盒位置保护层防腐跨接地线弯曲半径标高等，要求技术交底。管线敷设技术中包含线槽、管架等多项方式，为解决高中语文电气课件中管壁薄、接口不严等问题，合理利用管线敷设技术。线缆敷设原则：在分线盒处，当不同电压回路交叉时，应采用金属隔板进行隔开处理；同一线槽内，强电回路须同时切断习题电源，线缆敷设完毕，要进行检查和检测处理。、电气课件中调试对全部高中资料试卷电气设备，在安装过程中以及安装结束后进行高中资料试卷调整试验；通电检查所有设备高中资料试卷相互作用与相互关系，根据生产工艺高中资料试卷要求，对电气设备进行空载与带负荷下高中资料试卷调控试验；对设备进行调整使其在正常工况下与过度工作下都可以正常工作；对于继电保护进行整核对定值，审核与校对图纸，编写复杂设备与装置高中资料试卷调试方案，编写重要设备高中资料试卷试验方案以及系统启动方案；对整套启动过程中高中资料试卷电气设备进行调试工作并且进行过关运行高中资料试卷技术指导。对于调试过程中高中资料试卷技术问题，作为调试人员，需要在事前掌握图纸资料、设备制造厂家出具高中资料试卷试验报告与相关技术资料，并且了解现场设备高中资料试卷布置情况与有关高中资料试卷电气系统接线等情况，然后根据规范与规程规定，制定设备调试高中资料试卷方案。、电气设备调试高中资料试卷技术电力保护装置调试技术，电力保护高中资料试卷配置技术是指机组在进行继电保护高中资料试卷总体配置时，需要在最大限度内来确保机组高中资料试卷安全，并且尽可能地缩小故障高中资料试卷破坏范围，或者对某些异常高中资料试卷工况进行自动处理，尤其要避免错误高中资料试卷保护装置动作，并且拒绝动作，来避免不必要高中资料试卷突然停机。因此，电力高中资料试卷保护装置调试技术，要求电力保护装置做到准确灵活。对于差动保护装置高中资料试卷调试技术是指发电机一变压器组在发生内部故障时，需要进行外部电源高中资料试卷切除从而采用高中资料试卷主要保护装置。
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of
大学英语四级考试万能作文模板 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。 3．我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述。 １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义。 ２．分析并举例使其更充实。 The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll necessarily benefit a lot from it. From Joozone.. 解决法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．问题现状 ２．怎样解决(解决案的优缺点) In recent days, we have to face I problem-----A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ------------(说明Ａ的现状)．Second, ---------------(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ---------------(解决法一). For another -------------(解决法二). Finally, --------------(解决法三).
作文1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Games. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在有一些大学生沉迷于网络游戏，家长和学校对此忧心忡忡 2)但有人认为网络游戏并不是一无是处 3)你对此的看法是…… 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出对于某问题的一种反面看法，提纲第2点指出对于该问题的正面看法，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该问题的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生沉迷于网络游戏的问题，阐述家长和老师对该问题的否定态度和他们的担忧；指出一些人对待网络游戏的肯定态度，并阐述网络游戏的好处；表明“我”对网络游戏的看法。 【参考范文】 Online Games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self-discipline are too much indulged in these games so that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents。 However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train the ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly。 From my point of view, online games are a wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once. But if you have enough self-control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them。 作文2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Machine Translation and Human Translation. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在诸多的电子辞典及相关翻译软件被开发出来，人们不再需要翻阅厚重的字典 2)有人认为以后机器翻译会完全取代人工翻译 3)你是否同意这种观点，为什么？ 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一种有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”是否同意这种观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述电子辞典和翻译软件的使用现状，引出机器翻译会代替人工翻译的观点；表明“我”对这一观点的态度并说明理由；总结“我”的观点，提出建议。