短文改错高考真题练习
高考短文改错1 2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(浙江卷)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking.
I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
高考短文改错2 2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per
week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remained above the previous level.
高考短文改错3 2011年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(陕西卷)
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came
across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera
with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get．Unfortunately，by the time I got
back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!
高考短文改错4 2011高考英语试题（新课标卷）
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend，he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
高考短文改错5 2012年浙江高考英语试题
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.
高考短文改错6 2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile.
In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
高考短文改错7 2012全国英语高考真题陕西卷
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport .We lived in a comfortably double-room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high-speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
高考短文改错8 2012年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标)
I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little aggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. Iwas happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fifth birthday toy train, my father said, "That's it. No more toys to you." My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last.
My attitude changed from then on.
高考短文改错9 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（四川卷）
Today we had a chemistry test. I found the test difficulty, but I tried hardly to do it. Suddenly Mary, my best friend, asking me to let her to copy my answers. After think for some time, I let her copy my answers. But af ter the test, all of us were called to the teacher’s office. The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests. We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents. I was very upset. I didn’t cheat. I was just helping a frie nd. Why does she punish me?
高考短文改错10 2013年浙江省高考英语试卷真题
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” His new job meant I ha d to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister, Maggie. Tomorrow is first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.
Yours,
Rosemary 高考短文改错11 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(辽宁卷)
Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spends too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room I
stopped. I had to calm myself down. Quietly I step into the room. I saw him lying in bed, looking at some of the picture we had taken together. I understood that he missed us just as many as we missed him.
高考短文改错12 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（陕西）
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
高考短文改错13 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅱ卷)
The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. It is said to have started in the early 1800’s. Have tea in the late af ternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 o’clock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
高考短文改错14 2013年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(新课标Ⅰ卷)
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
高考短文改错15 2014年高考辽宁卷
Dear Jeremy and Alice,
Although we’ve been delighted to have you as neighbors, we’re hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We’ve called several time about Cleo’s early morning barking. It is diffic ult to understanding why she barks every minute she’s outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as wc arc often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even befor e 5 o’clock. That is too much for us. considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
高考短文改错16 2014年陕西卷
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky — they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
高考短文改错17 2014新课标二卷
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
高考短文改错18 2014年新课标一卷
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
高考短文改错19 2014年四川高考试题
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don’t panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it’s a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
高考短文改错20 2014年全国新课标卷第II卷
All of us need friendship. The understanding between two friends mean both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is impossible for him to help each other and to make their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes，“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is wise to have as many good friends that we can.The more friends we have，the more we can learn forone another, but the more pleasure we can share together.
高考短文改错21 2014年高考浙江卷
I was taking a train to London’s Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldn’t find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.
高考短文改错22 2015年全国一卷
When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The
airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways t o protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .
高考短文改错23 2015年高考陕西英语试卷---短文改错
My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked,“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
高考短文改错24 2015年全国二卷
One day , little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him drying and telling him to wait outside a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,“How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
高考短文改错25 2015年四川高考短文改错
Hi, Janice,
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing. As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time—wasting activity! In fact ,I don’t like to go anymore, so I’m afraid I’ll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me ,would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice.
高考短文改错26 2015年浙江卷
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
高考短文改错27 2016年全国卷三
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
高考短文改错28 2016年全国卷二
The summer holiday is coming. My Classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.
高考短文改错29 2016年全国卷一
My uncle 13 the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.
高考短文改错30
In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank, I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road.
高考短文改错31 2017年全国英语卷3
When I look at this picture of myself. I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically. and also mentally in the past few years. About one month after this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time, car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes, playing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.
高考短文改错32 2017年全国卷2
Mr. and Mrs.Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the vegetables！
答案
一
1.cousin –cousin’s
2. rich – richer
3.on --- in
4.put ---put it/that
5. enjoy to --- enjoy
6.faced --- face
7. Late --- Later
8.slow --- slowly
9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
二
第1个考查主谓一致，were—was;
第2个考查名词单复数weeks--week
第3个考查介词从外面来，介词应该用from.
第4个考查冠词the--a
第5个考查非限制性定语从句注意be responsible for 表示对什么负责。who后加was或is 第6个考查非谓语decide to do sth. making—make
第7个考查代词指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。
第8个考查动词explain是及物动词，不需要介词。去掉for
第9个考查非谓语做状语用follow---following.
第10个考查连词because 表示原因，根据上文应该是表示转折关系的连词。
because---although/though/but/yet
三答案：
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came
across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera making actors
with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get∧．Unfortunately，by the time I got
so／and it
back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really had anywhere disappointing and about to leave when he walked out∧a building．He was right there in disappointed of
the fron t of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，
have
but he signed his name on my shirt!
四答案：
My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a
buyin g
Ticket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to
there
Xiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag
a and
from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my
money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very
in were
strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my fiend he lent
luggage friend’s
to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
Felt
五。第一节短文改错
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
ago 去掉Unfortunately
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I did
weeks but not tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I
would me
was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them far
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew∧ truth. I still think that
interesting the
it was the right thing to do.
六答案：
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring
had of
Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had
Unfortunately
been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of
as
traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there
miles
unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as ∧car
until/till there a
drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’
We
and made our own way to home.
去掉
七
答案：1.visit----visited 2.but----so/and 3.go to---to去掉 https://www.doczj.com/doc/6f18773148.html,fortably----comfortable 5.were---was 6.for---with 7.taking---taken 8.dish---dishes 9.such后加a 10.me---mine.
八答案：
第一行：因为与more patient对应，little要改为less
第二行：each of 后面要用可数名词复数toy要改为toys
第三行：do sb. Wrong意思为冤枉某人，不符合句意。改为go wrong或过去时went wrong 意思是“出问题”，“出毛病”符合句意。
第四行：与toys对应，故it要改为复数them。Parents指代不明，所以要加上my。
第五行：由句意“发生了什么事”，可知which哪个不对，应该为what。由后文said可知tear 要用过去式tore。
第六行：为某人买玩具应该用for而不是to。
第七行：由found out that with patience可知must语气太强，应该为could或might。
九答案：1.difficult----difficulty.2.hardly---hard 3.asking---asked 4.to copy 去掉to 5.think---thinking 6.all---both
7.same前加the 8.tests---test 9.so---or 10.does---did
十答案：
Dear Diary,
Here I am in the middle of a city, 350 miles far away from our farmhouse. Do you want to know why we move last week? Dad lost his job and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other moved another one.” His new job meant I had to say goodbye to my classmate, my school, or just everything else
classmates and
I love in the world. To make matters bad, now I have to share a room with my younger sister,
worse
Maggie. Tomorrow is∧ first day of school. I am awfully tiring, but I know I will never fall sleep.
the/my tired asleep Good night and remember, you, dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend. are
十一答案：1.with—on 2.so去掉3.have—has 4.healthy—health 5.which---what
6.visit前加a
7.her---his
8.step—stepped
9.picture---pictures 10.many—much
十二
答案：
My grandfather and I enjoy fishing.
One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and
went our
headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.
Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted
After impatient
to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a
but was
sudden pull at the pole and ∧fish was caught. Within the next few minute, my
a minutes
grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and
feeling
barbecued the fish. It was delicious.
十三答案：1.of去掉 2.Have—Having 3.that---which 4.becomes---become 5.day前加the 6.Interesting---Interestingly 7.by---with/to 8.drank—drunk 9.cup—cups 10.grow—growth
十四答案：
I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs.
I was only
hold
four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.
passed
I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black
well / clearly shoulders
toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town,∧he was
to / into him
and
\
strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do
when
homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.
Ever
十五Dear Jeremy and Alice，
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors, we're hoping to settle
something that bothers to(去掉) us. In a word, your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking. It is difficult to
times
understanding why she barks every minute she's outside. The early morning barking
understand
have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends
has Besides
to bark a average of six hours a day. This morning she starts barking even before
an started
5 o'clock. That is too much for us, considering how closely the houses are.
close
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure ∧ a
your out good way of settling the matter.
十六短文改错
【答案与解析】want ∧teach-to。want后跟非谓语动词做宾语时用动词不定式，to不能省略。【答案与解析】come-came。本文主体时态是一般过去式，故come改为came。
【答案与解析】have-having。前一句已有谓语动词，have做伴随状语，逻辑主语是句子的主语，与逻辑主语是主动关系，且与谓语动词动作同事进行，故用v-ing形式。
【答案与解析】immediate-immediately。修饰动词jumped，应用副词immediately。
【答案与解析】on-at。介词与shot构成搭配，意思是“向……瞄准”，故介词用at。
【答案与解析】Neither-None。前文中未提到箭的数量，但根据意思可以推断出射出的不止两支，故此处不定代词应表示“（三者以上）都不……”，用none。
【答案与解析】was-were。主语是复数arrows，动词也要用复数。
【答案与解析】were或looked去掉。主语与谓语之间不是被动关系，故去掉助动词were。【答案与解析】but-and。根据句意可知前后两句是顺延关系，无转折之一，故用and。
【答案与解析】a-an。冠词后的形容词impressive第一个音素是元音，故不定冠词用an。
十七
My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m. and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lesson
There
in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework.
don’t much
Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading
for
for one and a half hour and play sport for one hour every day.
hours
My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers
looks
and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, sat by the
sit
lake listening∧ music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our
to helpful
teachers but also our friends.
十八
Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes
ago of
（圣女果）in our back garden, since then---for all these year---we had been allowing tomatoes to self
years have
seed where they please . As∧result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but
a everywhere
juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Although we allow
tasty many
tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect
或yet
attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at on cost!
Wonderful
十九
短文改错
Hello, boys and girls! Today, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm
about
go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait∧ your teacher to lead you outside. goes for
Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Don't panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet
classmates try
and calmly. Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire. If it's a false alarm and there is no calm the
fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing
you
and hurt, tell your teacher immediately.
二十【答案】
76.正确。7.mean---means 78.trusting---trust 79.him---them 80.去掉to
81.really---real 82.should后加be 83.that---as 84.for---from 85.but---and
二十一
1.去掉had 本文叙述的是过去发生的一件事情，不需要使用过去完成时，因为过去完成时表示的是过去的过去的事情。句意：我注意到车厢里很吵闹都是人。
2.noise改为noisy 本句中应该使用形容词noisy和系动词was构成系表结构，修饰车里当时的情况。同时noisy与后面的形容词短语filled with…构成并列关系。
https://www.doczj.com/doc/6f18773148.html,es改为came 因为本文讲述的是过去发生的事情，所以使用一般过去时的时态。列车
员过来检票。
4.but改为and 句意：一位乘客找不到自己的票，很难受。上下文之间是顺接关系，所以使用and。But表示上下文之间的转折关系。
5.searching后面加for 根据句意可知每个人都帮助他找票。固定搭配search for sth寻找sth；
6.his改为its/the 句意：这张票最终是在它的主人几排后面的座位下面被找到的。Its指代the ticket。
7.a改为the 使用定冠词the特指上文提及的同一事物，本文中特指前面提及的那张票。
8.previoes改为previously 本句中应该使用副词previously作状语，修饰谓语动词。形容词previous通常作为定语或者表语，不能做状语。
9.strangers改为stranger 句意：他们如此迅速地给与陌生人他们的帮助。本句中的陌生人就是指那张票的主人，是一个单数形式。
10.on改为in 固定搭配in need需要。句意：如果我们向那些需要帮助的人表示关心，这个世界就会变得更美好。
二十二
二十三My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for
删掉in something
him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world,
best
so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I
decided steps insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only
mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was
good when/while
packing them up.
At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who
the
m ade them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just∧get
to
some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits
enjoying
with happy laughter!
二十六
【答案】
side-sides
from-to
sit-sitting
easy-easily
is-was
them-it
not 删除
in hurry- in a hurry
felt-feel
If-Although/Though
二十七 The teenage year years from 13to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse worst years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make
decisions by yourself
myself . zxxk However, my parents didn’t seem to thin k such
so . They always tell told
me what to do and how to do it. At one time,I ever felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely
free from them. I showed them I was independent by
wear wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to
for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to
have my parents to turn to whenever
I
need help.
28
29
30答案：
第一行eighteen改为eighteenth
第二行first 前加上the 或my
第三行so 改为but 或yet; goes 改为went
第四行word改为words
第五行Turning 改为Turn; 去掉nervous前的much; 第六行late 改为later;
第七行suddenly改为sudden, on改为of
第二部分题型专项短文改错 一、考点聚焦 1、题型特点 （1）词法内容。包括名词、代词的数与格，反身代词，动词时态语态，非谓语动词、短语动词的用法，不规则动词的变化形式，形容词的比较级，形容词副词的区别，介词的误用等。 （2）句法内容。包括主谓一致、指代一致，并列连词，从属连词等引导各种从句的关联词语，感叹句，疑问句，祈使句的结构等。 （3）行文逻辑。包括句子的肯定、否定、推理、判断等。 二、应试技巧点拨 （1）通读全文，了解文章主旨大意，确定文章的题材、体裁，把握文章的背景知识。 （2）逐句分析，把握结构。粗略分析词法、句法、逻辑上是否有问题。 （3）逐行修改，先易后难。 （4）复读全文，验证答案。一要注意错误点的分散与比例，二要注意答题是否合乎规范。 2、改错歌诀 现将本书编写者总结的短文改错歌诀提供给大家，希望有所帮助。 短文改错要做好，常见类型应记牢。 名词爱考“数”与“格”，冠词在前“错”“多”“少”。 动词时态和语态，非谓语搭配莫错了。 连代形副错一样，多是故意来混淆。 介词多半搭配，多漏误用想周到。 句法涉及到“一致”①，从句多考关系词。 词法句法均未错，逻辑推理去寻找。 “1126”惯常比②，回读复查敲定稿。 注：①“一致”：包括主谓一致，代词及相应的限定词在数、性、称方面的一致，主语与主语补语，宾语和宾语补语的一致等。②“1126”：指的是通常10个题项有一处是正确的，一处（或两处）属多余，两处（或
1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ 6. __________ 7. __________ 8. __________ 9. __________ 10. _________ 1. __________ 2. __________ 3. __________ 4. __________ 5. __________ 6. __________ 7. __________ 一处）需补加成分，6处需更改。当然，此非“定势”，仅作参考。 三、精典范例 例1 （NMET 2000） The day before the speech contest （比赛）English teacher talked to me. She saide that she and my schoolmate all wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at me. I remembered her words and calm down, I did a good jobm and won the first prize. Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 解析 1. my English 。该题考查代词，绝大部分考生知道English teacher 前少一个词语，但很多人都误加上了our, an 或the,而后面两次出现my English teacher ，因而本题实际考查学生对文章内容的理解。 2. schoolmate → schoolmates 。schoolmate 应为复数形式。 3. that → whether 。whether 与后面的or not 相呼应。 4. 正确。 5. as → that 。把as 改成that ，组成so … that 结构。 6. a 去掉。catch sight of 是固定短语。 7．but → and 。意义的转折用but,意思并列用and 。 8. calm → calmed 。remembered 和calmed 是对应的。 9. is → are 。主语用and 连接，谓语动词用are 。 10. often 去掉。often 多余。 【例2】（2004年全国卷I ） Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day.
（全文由Peter编制） 2016年高考试题分项解析之专题----短文改错 1.【2016·全国新课标I】短文改错（10 分） My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that 1 live .Though not very big ,but the restaurant is popular in our area .It is always crowded with customers at meal times .Some people even had to wait outside My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady. 2.【2016·全国新课标II】短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分） The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden you view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot. 3.【2016·全国新课标III】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分） The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me . They were also the best and worse years in my life . At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time , I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.
2012——2016年短文改错 C o r r e c t i o n1［2016·乙卷(全国Ⅰ)］ M y u n c l e i s t h e o w n e r o f ar e s t a u r a n t c l o s e t ot h a t I l i v e.T h o u g hn o t v e r y b i g,b u t t h e r e s t a u r a n t i s p o p u l a r i n o u r a r e a.I t i s a l w a y s c r o w d e d w i t h c u s t o me r s a t m e a l t i me s.S o m e p e o p l ee v e nh a dt ow a i t o u t s i d e.M y u n c l et e l l smet h a t t h ek e y t oh i ss u c c e s si sh o n e s t. E v e r y d a y h e ma k e s s u r e t h a t f r e s h v e g e t a b l e s o r h i g h q u a l i t y o i l a r e u s i n gf o r c o o k i n g.M y u n c l e s a y s t h a t h e n e v e r d r e a ms b e c o mi n g r i c h i n t h e s h o r t p e r i o d o f t i m e.I n s t e a d,h e h o p e s t h a t o u r b u s i n e s s w i l l g r o ws t e a d y. 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C o r r e c t i o n4［2016·四川］ I t i s M o t h e r's D a y t o d a y.T h o u g h i t's a w e s t e r n f e s t i v a l,i t's p o p u l a r i n C h i n a n o w. M o m h a saf u l l-t i mej o b,s os h eh a st od omo s t o f t h eh o u s e w o r k s.S h ei sag r e a t m o t h e r.B o t hD a do r I p l a n n e dt od os o me t h i n go nM o t h e r'sD a y.Weg e t u pe a r l yi nt h e m o r n i n g.D a d c l e a n e d t h e h o u s e,a n d t h e n w e n t o n s h o p p i n g.Wh e n h e c a m e b a c k,I f o u n d a b u n c h o f f l o w e r s i n h e r h a n d.I a s k e d M o m t o s t a y i n t h e s i t t i n g r o o m a n d I c o o k e d i n k i t c h e n. T h e d i s h e s w h a t I c o o k e d w e r e M o m's f a v o r i t e s t.A t d i n n e r,w e s a i d t o h e r,"H a p p y M o t h e r's D a y!"M o m w a s g r a t e f u l a n d mo v i n g. 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高考复习必看短文改错专项训练15篇（附答案） 1 Dear Jack， Next Saturday will my birthday.I’m going to hold a birthday party at home on the evening.It will start at 7：30.Some classmates as good as some foreign friends have been invited.The activities include singing，dancing and sharing interesting experiences.Surely，we’ll have a good time.I would feel honoring if you could come.I live at 656 Minzu Street.You can take Bus No.11 or No.15 and got off at the stop of Guang Ming High School.Justly on the opposite side is my house，what is red with a white door.I’m sure of you can’t miss it.I do hope they will come. Best wish. Yours， Li Hua 2 (2017·昆明市高三复习教学质量检测) I’m one of the students in our class who has ever been to https://www.doczj.com/doc/6f18773148.html,st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on England by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，which I would live with for the next two weeks.We felt like a fish out of water when I got there.The Smiths did what they could make me feel at home.I study at an international school，where I met friend from all over the world.I seized the opportunity to practise my speak English.Soon I made such a rapid progress that I received highly praise from all the people around. 答案 I’m one of the students in our class who has have ever been to https://www.doczj.com/doc/6f18773148.html,st summer I was lucky enough to be sent there to study.As soon as I arrived on in England by plane.I was picked up by the Smiths，which whom I would live with for the next two
高考英语短文改错 常见错误类型 高考英语改错题是考生感到棘手的题型之一。笔者对近几年的高考英语改错题作了细致的分析并加以归类后，发现错误类型主要集中在以下方面。（例题保留原题号） 1. 动词时态 每年都有时态错误的小题，而且改动基本集中在一般过去时与一般现在时之间。时态的更改要以上下文的主体时态为依据。 （1）（2003全国卷）She liked it very much and reads it to the class. All said the story was... 84. read （and连接并列谓语） （2）（2004江苏卷）At once I apologize and controlled myself... 83. apologized （and连接并列谓语） （3）（2004全国卷）Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class,... 82. talk （根据sometimes可判断此句为一般现在时） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅱ）I will write again and send you the photos we take together. 85. took （把照片寄给你，应该是已经拍好的，用过去时） （5）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）There are advantage for students to work while studying at school. One of them was that they can earn money. 77. is （从上下文判断，应该是现在时，谓语用is） （6）（2005江苏卷）We named him Jack and keep him for about three years. 76. kept （and连接并列谓语） 2. 名词单复数 单复数互改是高考英语改错题的基本题型之一，改动的依据有：一是根据名词前的修饰限定成份；二是根据上下文的逻辑关系。 （1）（2003全国卷）Their word were a great encouragement to me. 85. words （是把word改为words 还是把were改为was，根据名词前的修饰限定词their来决定。） （2）（2004江苏）that was a dinner we had waited for several month. 85. months （several修饰复数名词） （3）（2004全国卷Ⅰ）a few minute on the Internet. 77. minutes （a few修饰复数名词） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅱ）But one and a half year later. 79. years （one and a half意思为一年半，故判断此处year应为复数形式） （5）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）There are advantage for students to work... 76. advantages （从there are 判断应该用名词复数） 3. 句子结构 句子结构方面的错误范围庞大，解答高考英语改错题主要可以从以下几方面来思考：1）句子结构是否完整，成份是否冗缺；2）单词的词性与其在句中的功能是否相符；3）主谓一致；4）复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词或引导词的运用是否得当等。 （1）（2004 全国卷）I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. 78. because/as （复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词运用不当） （2）（2004 全国卷Ⅱ）I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. 81. why （复合句中连接主句和从句的关系词运用不当） （3）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）For the most part, students working to earn money for their own use. 78. work （缺谓语动词） （4）（2005全国卷Ⅰ）Earning their own money allow them to spend on anything if they like. 79. allows （主语是动名词短语Earning their own money，谓语应该用单数） （5）（2005江苏卷）But the most wonderful thing about Jack were his musical ability. 84. was
Nearly five years before,and with the help by our father,my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.As result,the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size,but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! （2014课标2） My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m.and ends at 3:30 p.m.They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn’t need to do so many homework.Therefore,we have more time with afte r-school activities.For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day. My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest,or sat by the lake listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.
历年高考短文改错真题汇总 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove. I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way, ”my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.(2020全国1) Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.(2020全国2) My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.(2020全国3) I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football feel just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now. (2019全国1) Since I was a kid, I`ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered mg goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.(2019全国2) I've had many dreams since I was a child. Now my dream is to opens a cafe. Though it may appear simple, it required
专题五短文改错 训练1 短文改错(Ⅰ) A (2019·东北三省四市一模) One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays.After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities.Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before. 【答案】 One of my happiest childhood memories were was/is having dinner with my parents and two sisters.As a result, ∧ having found that we seldom had a chance to get together, then we decided we would set aside three evenings the a week for a sit－down dinner.First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or and Fridays.After a couple of week weeks of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy.For a while, the kids began to resist the idea.They said they would rather ﹨to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual Gradually， though, they began to see these evenings together for in a very different way.We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other's problems.Since After a few months, we all felt that we had been able to build much strong stronger relationships with the family than we had before. B (2019·河北唐山一模) A new police officer was out for his first ride in a police car with a experienced partner.A call came in told them to break up a crowd of people.The officers drove to the street and observe a