高考英语写作中句式处理的策略和方法
在英语考试中，词汇量是取胜的基础，但是要想提高卷面成绩仅有词汇量是不行的，尤其在作文中。事实上，聪明的应试者会洞悉到：既然我有了丰富的词汇量，只要再懂些如何组织这些词汇的句法知识，那样就可以做到词法和句法的灵活多变，让作文的内容和句式变得更加充实、多样化、更具有可读性，这样作文就可以拿到较高的分数。
这里所讲的句法，其实就是我们平时所学的各种句型结构，通常指的是：1. 简单句；
2. 并列句（and, but, so, thus, therefore, etc.）；
3. 名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句）；
4. 定语从句（限制性和非限制性定语从句）；
5. 状语从句；
6. 倒装句；
7. 强调句；8. 虚拟语气等。
下面我们通过典型例句来说明如何写好作文中的句子，尤其是用一句话来表述较为复杂的信息：
例1：女儿能说四种语言，他为此而骄傲。
我们可以利用所学到的句法知识，将上面的句子用尽可能多的句型结构演绎出来。
译法一：（）（在括号内写明句式的类型，下同）
1.He is proud of his daughter’s abi lity to speak four languages.
2.He has a great pride in his daughter’s ability to speak four languages.
3.His pride is his daughter’s ability to speak four languages.
4.His daughter’s ability to speak four languages makes him feel proud.
译法二：（）
His daughter can speak four languages and he feels proud of her.
译法三：（）
1.It makes him feel proud that his daughter can speak four languages.
2.What makes him feel proud is his daughter’s ability to speak four languages.
3.What makes him feel proud is that his daughter can speak four languages.
译法四：（）
1.He is proud that his daughter can speak four languages.
2.Her father is proud of nothing but that his daughter is fluent in four languages. 译法五：（）
1.What makes him feel proud is that his daughter can speak four languages.
2.His pride is that his daughter can speak four languages.
译法六：（）
He has a great pride that his daughter can speak four languages.
译法七：（）He feels proud because his daughter can speak four languages. 译法八：（）
1.His daughter can speak four languages, which makes him feel proud.
2.He is proud of his daughter who has the ability to speak four languages.
3.The father whose daughter can speak four languages feels proud.
4.The girl whom her father is proud of can speak four languages.
译法九：（）(下列划线部分分别充当什么成分？)
1.He is proud of his daughter speaking four languages fluently.
2.His daughter speaking four languages, he feels proud of her.
3.Four languages spoken fluently by his daughter, he feels proud of her.
4.Speaking four languages fluently, she makes her father feel proud.
（）So fluently does she speak four languages that his father feels proud.译法十：
译法十一：（）
1.It’s because his daughter can speak four languages that he feels proud.
2.It’s his daughter’s ability to speak four languages that makes him feel proud.
译法十二：（虚拟语气）
1.Without his daughter’s fluency in four languages, he would feel proud of nothing.
2.If his daughter were not fluent in four languages, he wouldn’t feel proud of her.
由此可见，当我们在英语作文时，一个句子的写法不是唯一的，要看具体语境的需要采用最合适的表达方式。同时我们可以得到这样的提示：我们要习惯于把自己学到的词法和句法知识充分地运用到自己的文章中去，使得文章句式和表达更具有可读性，善于在写作中显示自己扎实的英语语言基本功，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象，从而取得较高的得分。
例二：（用一句话来表述下面的信息点）今天是我高中毕业后的第二天，我被说服和几个同学一起游览了桐柏山。桐柏山是千里淮河源头
Possible version: Today is the second day when I graduated from senior middle school and I was persuaded by several classmates to pay a visit to Tongbaishan Mountain, which is the source of Huaihe River with thousands of li long.
现在你和组内的同学讨论下这样写的好处和原因。如果让你来处理，你会怎么写呢？
一、巩固练习（用一句话来表述下面的信息点）
1. ① The earthquake affected eight provinces in Central China.
② It covered an area of 8,000 square kilometers.
③ About 83,000 people were killed by the earthquake.
2. 1989年，8.2级地震袭击了美国。此次地震几乎将美国夷为平地。约有3万人在此次地震中丧生。
3. 在日常生活中，与我们相处融洽的朋友和邻居使我们更加愉快。他们关心和帮助我们。我们面对面地与他们交谈。
二、写作策略训练。（用5句话来完成写作任务或把写好的10句话整合成5句话作文）
【原文写作内容】我有一个好朋友名叫李平，是我的同桌。他是农村来的，个子不高但很健壮。他学习非常刻苦，又常常帮助同学。他英语学得很好，因为他经常做阅读和练口语。他常鼓励我讲英语。他爱好运动，每天放学后打篮球。他喜欢音乐，歌唱得很好。不仅老师，全班的同学都喜欢他。
【英文改写】I have a good friend named Li Ping. He is my seatmate. He is from the country. He is not tall but very strong. He works very hard and often helps other students. He’s very good at English because he often does reading and oral practice. He often encourages me to speak English. He loves sports and plays basketball after school every afternoon. He loves music and sings well, too. Not only the teachers but also all his classmates like him. (共10句81个词)
根据作文评分细则，小组讨论下该文章的优缺点。如果有更好的修改方案，请把上面的文章改写成5句话作文，要求基本内容要全面，行文连贯，语法准确。
▲①本节课对你有哪些启发？②你在英语写作方面的优势是什么？有何劣势？③本节课中你还有哪些疑问？④你的写作技巧和策略是什么？⑤你在写作的哪些方面还需要老师的帮助？⑥你对英语写作课有没有什么建议？（请每个小组按上面的问题写一份书面报告。）
▲ 1. 写作与听说、阅读、翻译和语法（包括词法和句法）紧密相关，相互促进，只有增强英语的综合运用能力才能做到英语表达的语言自觉性，才能写出精彩的文章来，自然高分就不是问题；
▲ 2. As for our study, there is no shortcut but method and strategy.（学习没有捷径，但是有方法和策略。）
2. 高考读后续写高分技巧 (2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,
高考英语作文写作技巧 从每年的考试情况来看，很多同学能完整地按照要求把文章写出来，但得分却较低。实际上，高考英语书面表达是一个分值颇高且易得分的题型，只是很多同学没有掌握得分技巧。下面我们一起看看怎样才能让高考作文“拽”起来。 2.书面表达整篇背诵绝无必要，可以以看读为主，关键是从中汲取一些常用的词汇和表达，并能得体熟练地运用。考场上应变能力很重要! 3.英文写作模仿很重要。有时也很有效。但不能过于牵强，尤其是对一些长难句的刻意模仿使用。 5.“见微知著，一叶知秋”，几个亮点足矣：有道是：浓妆淡抹总相宜，作文写得简洁到位要比长篇大论更显功力。 6.心不为形役。不要身陷逐字逐句“英汉对号”式的字面翻译，要把表达的主动权始终握在自己手里。 历届高考，书面表达考得最多是提示作文，即提供一定的情景内容，要求考生完成100词左右的短文。 从命题方式看，有短文提示、要点提示、图画提示、情景提示以及图表提示等；体裁以应用文为主，记叙文为辅：题材为广大中学生所熟悉的日常生活。从提供要点的情景方面看，历届高考书面表达题均属供料小作文，采用文字供料或文字说明加图画(图表)的方式供料。 备考时，同学们要利用有限的时间把以前背的范文整理一下，从中选出不同体裁、不同题材的范文各一篇(范文以高考真题的高分作文为佳)，把它们重新记忆，一定记牢。这样，高考时不管什么样的文章都可套用背诵好的格式。避免考场上因紧张而无章可循。 最后阶段，还要总结一下写作时常用且能出彩的固定句型、句式，比如强调句型、定语从句、名诃性从句等，牢记英语的五个基本句式，背诵平时老师总结的万能句。以不变应万变。 考场答题前，应仔细审题，研究所提供的文字和图画(图表)材料和作文要求。分析、提炼要点，理顺要点，确立基本的写作思路，不要忽略任何一个词。关键的词更不能遗漏，构思好写几个方面，缺一不可。
高中英语作文满分范例——10篇优秀范文 01 假定你是李华，你班的交换生Alice上周结业回国前嘱咐你帮她处理后续事务。请你根据下列要点提示给她写一封信。 1. 向Alice问候，并转达大家对她的思念； 2. 她之前借阅的图书已经帮她还上； 3. 已随信附上她的成绩单及与大家的合影。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Alice, How are you? It has been a week since you left China and we miss you very much. Now I am writing to tell you that I have finished what you asked me to do. Firstly, the books you borrowed have been returned to the library. So don’t worry about them. Besides, in this letter I have included your report card and the photos we took together last week. You can check them as soon as you get this letter. If there is any question, please write to me. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours, Li Hua
2016年浙江新高考英语题型解读—概要写作 一、2016年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题 第二节：概要写作（满分25分） 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 Getting rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thing. However, there is no thing fixed about attitudes to dirt. In the early 16th century, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block o ut disease, as medical opinion had it that washing off dirt with hot water could open up t he skin and let ills in. A particular danger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French king had closed the bath houses in his kingdom. So did the king of England in 15 46. Thus began a long time when the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frie ndly way. Henry IV, King of France, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a nobleman h ad taken a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the nobleman sho uld not go out. Though the belief in the merit (好处) of dirt was long-lived, dirt has no longer been re garded as a nice neighbor ever since the 18 century. Scientifically speaking, cleaning awa y dirt is good to health. Clean water supply and hand washing are practical means of pre venting disease. Yet, it seems that standards of cleanliness have moved beyond science since World War II. Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea: clothes need to be whiter th an white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too f ar? Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely nowadays. Many first-time parents nervously try to warn their children off touching dirt, which might be responsible for the spread of diseas e. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist (免疫学家), encourages ch ildren to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter (后者) positi on is gaining some ground. （原创范文，仅供参考） One possible version： People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. (要点 1 ) For a long time in histo ry, people of some European countries, such as France, believed that dirt protected peop le from getting ill. (要点 2 ) However, people began to change their attitudes to dirt abou t 200 years ago. People have been told that washing dirt off our body can keep us health y. (要点 3) However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our im mune system. (要点 4) 【范文点拨】 (一)要点分析 1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is nothing fix ed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have different attitudes towards di rt. 再结合下文谈到的主题可知Different people have different attitudes towards dirt on th
高考英语写作中句式处理的策略和方法 在英语考试中，词汇量是取胜的基础，但是要想提高卷面成绩仅有词汇量是不行的，尤其在作文中。事实上，聪明的应试者会洞悉到：既然我有了丰富的词汇量，只要再懂些如何组织这些词汇的句法知识，那样就可以做到词法和句法的灵活多变，让作文的内容和句式变得更加充实、多样化、更具有可读性，这样作文就可以拿到较高的分数。 这里所讲的句法，其实就是我们平时所学的各种句型结构，通常指的是：1. 简单句； 2. 并列句（and, but, so, thus, therefore, etc.）； 3. 名词性从句（主语从句、宾语从句、表语从句和同位语从句）； 4. 定语从句（限制性和非限制性定语从句）； 5. 状语从句； 6. 倒装句； 7. 强调句；8. 虚拟语气等。 下面我们通过典型例句来说明如何写好作文中的句子，尤其是用一句话来表述较为复杂的信息： 例1：女儿能说四种语言，他为此而骄傲。 我们可以利用所学到的句法知识，将上面的句子用尽可能多的句型结构演绎出来。 译法一：（）（在括号内写明句式的类型，下同） 1.He is proud of his daughter’s abi lity to speak four languages. 2.He has a great pride in his daughter’s ability to speak four languages. 3.His pride is his daughter’s ability to speak four languages. 4.His daughter’s ability to speak four languages makes him feel proud. 译法二：（） His daughter can speak four languages and he feels proud of her. 译法三：（） 1.It makes him feel proud that his daughter can speak four languages. 2.What makes him feel proud is his daughter’s ability to speak four languages. 3.What makes him feel proud is that his daughter can speak four languages. 译法四：（） 1.He is proud that his daughter can speak four languages. 2.Her father is proud of nothing but that his daughter is fluent in four languages. 译法五：（） 1.What makes him feel proud is that his daughter can speak four languages. 2.His pride is that his daughter can speak four languages. 译法六：（） He has a great pride that his daughter can speak four languages. 译法七：（）He feels proud because his daughter can speak four languages. 译法八：（） 1.His daughter can speak four languages, which makes him feel proud. 2.He is proud of his daughter who has the ability to speak four languages. 3.The father whose daughter can speak four languages feels proud. 4.The girl whom her father is proud of can speak four languages. 译法九：（）(下列划线部分分别充当什么成分？) 1.He is proud of his daughter speaking four languages fluently. 2.His daughter speaking four languages, he feels proud of her. 3.Four languages spoken fluently by his daughter, he feels proud of her. 4.Speaking four languages fluently, she makes her father feel proud. （）So fluently does she speak four languages that his father feels proud.译法十： 译法十一：（） 1.It’s because his daughter can speak four languages that he feels proud. 2.It’s his daughter’s ability to speak four languages that makes him feel proud.
高考优秀的英语作文范文 1.20XX年全国大纲卷Ⅰ 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华。你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛(speechcontest),希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士来做 评委。请参照以下比赛通知给她写一封信。 高分范文DearMs.Smith, ThisisLiHua,presidentoftheStudents’UnionofYucaiMiddleSchool,locatedjustneartheuniversitywherey ouareteaching.Iamwritingtoseeifwecouldhavethehonortoaskyout obethejudgeinourcomingcompetition. Yousee,topromotestudents’interestinlearningEnglish,we’veplannedtoholdanEnglishspeechcompetiton,thethemeofwhichisM anandNature.ItwillbeginattwoontheafternoonofJune15th,lastin gthreehours.Therewillbetenparticipantscompetingwitheachothe rinClassroom501,andallthestudentsofourschoolwillbeattending it.
Wewouldfeelmuchhonoredifyoucouldjoinusandgiveussomeinstruct ions.Youcanreachmethroughmyphonenumber44876655atyourconveni ence. I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Withbestwishes, Li Hua 2.2010年全国大纲卷Ⅱ 假设你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现需招聘外教，请你给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括： 1.教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等 2.授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础) 3.工作量：一周12个学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)
高考满分作文 （一）四川省20XX年高考英语满分作文范文 某中学生英文报近期开辟专栏，讨论学习习惯问题，请你结合自身学习实际，按一下提示，用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件。 1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系; 2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议; 3. 描述自己在学习习惯方面存在的某个问题并给出改进措施 注意： 1. 词数120左右，开头语已为你写好 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称 【参考范文】 It’s useful and necessary to discuss learning habits. As we all know, good learning habits can make your study go to succeed. As a student, we should pay more attentions to our habits which we develop in our study. I’m sure“repeat” is a best habit. Do you develop the habit? If we want to improve our study, we should repeat what the teachers taught us again and again, and then we can understand or remember the knowledge which the teachers demand us to master. How to develop the habit? the first step, set a timetable, and stick to carry out the plan, don’t stop. When I do my homework, I often make mistakes with carelessness, how to overcome the shortage? I think I should think about it over and over as long as I do my homework. And then I do it little by little. Maybe in this way I can correct my mistakes. （二）全国新课标(卷I)20XX年高考英语满分作文范文 假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，带去他想要的那幅中国画，同时询问他是否可以接机。信中还需说明： 李明：高个子，戴眼镜 航班号：CA985 到达：8月6日上午11:30 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。 Dear Peter, How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to your city for a conference, and I’ve asked him to bring you the Chinese painting you’ve asked for before. Also, I’d li ke you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my uncle at the airport and take him to his hotel since this is his first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance! His flight number is CA985, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, August 6. My uncle is tall and he is wearing glasses. And he will be in a blue jacket. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua （三）全国新课标(卷II)20XX年高考英语满分作文范文
高考英语作文高分素材训练 8. 高考读后续写高分技巧 (2018·浙江高考) 阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos. His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guest room of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm, ” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool. In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take
高考英语作文技巧 1.开头万能公式一:名人名言 有人问了,“我没有记住名言,怎么办?尤其是英语名言?”,很好办:编! 原理:我们看到的东西很多都是创造出来的,包括我们欣赏的文章也是,所以尽管编,但是一定要听起来很有道理呦!而且没准将来我们就是名人呢!对吧? 经典句型: A proberb says, “ You are only young once.” (适用于已记住的名言 It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever. (适用于自编名言 更多经典句型: As everyone knows, No one can deny that… 2.开头万能公式二:数字统计 原理:要想更有说服力,就应该用实际的数字来说明。 原则上在议论文当中十不应该出现虚假数字的,可是在考试的时候哪管那三七二十一,但编无妨,只要我有东西写就万事大吉了。所以不妨试用下面的句型: According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 看起来这个数字文邹邹的,其实都是编造出来的,下面随便几个题目我们都可以这样编造: Honesty 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,大学生向老师请假的理由当中78%都是假的。Travel by Bike 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,85%的人在近距离旅行的时候首选的交通工具是自行车。 Youth 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,在某个大学,学生的课余时间的70%都是在休闲娱乐。 Five-day Work Week Better than Six-day Work? 根据最近的一项统计调查显示,98%的人同意每周五天工作日。 更多句型: A recent statistics shows that … 写作绝招 结尾万能公式: 1.结尾万能公式一:如此结论 说完了,毕竟要归纳一番,相信各位都有这样的经历,领导长篇大论,到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话,我们马上停止开小差,等待领导说结束语。也就是说,开头很好,也必然要有一个精彩的结尾,让读者眼前一亮,这样,你就可以拿高分了!比如下面的例子: Obviously(此为过渡短语, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others. 如果读者很难“显而见之”,但说无妨,就当读者的眼光太浅罢了! 更多过渡短语:
高考英语作文高分技巧 2012-10-04 高考英语怎么拿高分的技巧 高考英语作文如何才能得高分，这个问题是不少高考学生普遍关心的问题。高考英语写作应该要紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，以有指导的英语写作为主，要求考生在短时间内构思成文。由于它是对高考学生语言综合运用能力的考查，因此在高考英语作文写作中令很多考生感到十分苦恼，也是一个失分率很高的题型. 高考英语作文高分技巧一、紧扣主题突出重点 动笔之前，针对提示的文字或图片必须先认真审题，组织内容，构思提纲，理顺思路，切忌偏题，离题，东拉西扯，不得要领，一定要避免累赘繁琐，条理不清，重点不突出的.失误。 高考英语作文高分技巧二、表达正确文字流畅 强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组、佳句确保文章简洁通顺，切忌使用随便从文曲星或词典上找来的冷僻单词，特别强调的是必须避免使用不规范的中文式表达，受欢迎的作文是用词用句实实在在，朴实无华，清晰流畅的文章。 高考英语作文高分技巧三、谋篇布局 (1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。 (2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些词汇和句型等。 (3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性 高考英语作文高分技巧四、句式美? 高考英语作文中句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使本来结构单一、语句乏味的文章极具可读性。合并简单句使文章的语言由松散变得凝练。简单句虽然短小精悍，但在语言表达上，不能单一地只注重简单句的正确运用，还应多运用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵活多变。考生在写作时，可以巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力;省略与替代交替使用，避免写作时不必要的重复与累赘，使句子更简练、精确;主动句与被动句交替使用，使句子更具多样性;分词及with复合结构结合使用，使得文章句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动，为文章增色。
高考英语作文优秀范文 英语是高考中的重要考试科目，其中英语作文的分值占据了高考英语总分值的百分之二十五。因此，高考英语作文的训练非常重要。要想在高考英语作文中取胜，就必须从最基本的字、词、句出发，正确掌握英语作文的用词规则，了解基本的句型特点，这样才能使得句子简洁、连贯且多样化。为了提高大家写作水平的技巧和方法，下面为大家带来高考英语作文优秀范文，欢迎大家学习! 高考英语作文优秀范文一：【例文】 Tourism in China Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future. Facing this tendency, we can’t help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people’s living standard has been greatly improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around.
2020高考英语满分作文范文 2020高考英语满分作文范文篇一 某报社拟成立“微笑俱乐部”，现向全球征募会员，要求申请者提交一篇题为“I want to smile “的英语短文。请你以申请者的身份，根据以下思路写一篇。 Advantages of smile Smile at parents and friends ---- 范文：I want to smile There are many advantages of smiling. It can not only make us happy, but also please others. If we smile at life , life will smile on us in return . So I want to smile at all whenever and wherever possible. First, I would like to smile at parents because they have given me life and taken all the trouble to bring me up. They arrange almost everything for me . With their help , I have made great progress. I would like to say “thank you” to them with a smile. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away
高考英语作文写作实用技巧 导读：本文高考英语作文写作实用技巧，仅供参考，如果觉得很不错，欢迎点评和分享。 (一)掌握技巧： (1)注意篇章结构，合理布局 开始部分(opening paragraph)——说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分(Body paragraphs)——围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分(concluding paragraphs)——对全文的总结和概括。 要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系，内容完整、连贯。前后呼应，祛除与主题无关的内容. (2)确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括，是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常主题句出现在一篇文章的开头，而后，全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释，扩展。 写主题句应注意以下几点： ①归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ②提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③主题句应具有可读性，抓住、吸引读者。 (二)巧用连接词 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性，就要学会正确使用连接词 表示罗列增加
First, second, third, First, then / next, after that / next, finally For one thing … for another…, On (the) one hand…on the other hand, Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore / moreover / another / also, Especially / In particular, 表示时间顺序 now, at present, recently, after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days, at first, in the beginning, to begin with, later, next, finally, immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that moment, as soon as, the moment form now on, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile, till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during, 表示解释说明 now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover furthermore, in fact, actually 表示转折关系
高考英语作文优秀范文欣赏 小编整理了几篇高考英语左右优秀范文，供同学们参考写作。 2014年高考英语作文预测:网上交友 DearDavid, I’velearneditfromtheInternetthatyouwanttomakeaChinesefriendsoastolearntheChine selanguageandculture.I’mgladthatyoushowsuchgreatinterestinChinaandIwouldliket obeyourfriend. IwilltrymybesttowritetoyouasoftenaspossibletointroduceyoutheChineseculture.Whe nyouhaveanopportunitytocometoChina,I’llteachyouhowtospeakChineseandshowyo uaroundsomefamoushistoricalplacesofinterest.Anyway,Iamgoingtohelpyouasmucha sIcan.Howdoyouthink? I’mlo okingforwardtoyourreply. 高考英语作文预测：俗语写作 Theearlybirdwillcatchworms Anoldsaying”Theearlybirdwillcatchworms”remindsusthatifpeoplewanttobesuccessf ulandoutstanding,theymustplanaheadoftimeandmaketheireffortstoovercomeallthepo ssibledifficulties. Forexample,theChineseathletes’excellentperformancein2010OlympicWinterGames
21篇高考英语优秀作文范文，建议收藏！ 这两天英语君在后台收到了小可爱们的留言，于是赶快为大家整理出了高考英语作文范文21篇，大家可以参考一下。 首先，大家思考一下： 高考英语作文很难吗？实际上并不如大家想像的那么难。现阶段，不少同学的问题在于，无法用正确的语句将事情描述清楚，而并非是要将文章写得多精美漂亮。 01 2009全国卷I 假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs Wilson 不在家，你准备外出，请给Mrs Wilson 写一留言，内容如下：1. 外出购
物 2.替房东还书 3.Tracy 来电话留言：1).咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消2).此事已告知Susan .3)尽快回电 Mrs Wilson , I’m going out shopping , and won’t be back until about 5:00 pm. I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the city library . At about 1 o’clock this afternoon , Tracy called ,saying that she couldn’t meet you at Bolton Coffee tomorrow morning as she has something important to attend to . She felt very sorry about that , but said that you could set some other time for the meeting . She wanted you to call her back as soon as you are home . She has already told Susan about this change. LI Hua
爽爽文档汇编之 高考英语作文写作技巧攻略 一、如何写出“亮点” 以前,英语作文评分的依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定。但是从2001年起实行的高考评分标准强调了内容要点,语言的多样性、连贯性和得体性, 鼓励学生尝试语言表达的多样化和复杂化。因此要写成一篇较有水准的英语作文,除了要点和语言准确度以外,还必须在语用、语法结构以及表达的多样性和灵活性上有所表现。句子单一、缺乏生气的文章,哪怕没有任何错误也不可能得高分,相反,“有些许错误,但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”,给分 档次仍在最高档。 那么,英语作文如何才能得高分呢?以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”： （一）改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。 试比较: １.(原文) My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day. (修正) The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. ２.(原文) The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news. (修正) Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying. （二）在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。 1. 强调句 (原文) The dog has saved my little sister bravely. (修正) It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. 2. 主从复合句 (原文) We had to stand there to catch the offender. (修正) What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender. 3. 分词短语、由with或without引导的短语 (原文) The driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road. (修正) The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road. 4. 倒装句 (原文) I went to bed at 11:30. (修正) Not until 11:30 did I go to bed. 5. 省略句 (原文) While you are crossing the street, you should be careful. (修正) While crossing the street, you should be careful. （三）通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。 (原文) He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.