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初中英语作文病句和错句修改范例 下面的英语句子不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧. 1. We have computer class one week a time. 2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers. 3. There have 100 books. 4. I study there very happy. 5. I usually swimming there. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 7. Several hours after, he was surprised. 8. He had to asked the other one. 9. He thought he speak well. 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. 12. This film is very good-looking . 13. It is very good to family look. 14. I think we can’t live Internet. 15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people. 16. I have a future dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. 18. I think everything must be change a lot. 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. 20. But I singing not very https://www.doczj.com/doc/7f12097865.html, 21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him. 22. Almost students use the computer not study. 23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net. 24. When I was very small. 下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧. 1. I have computer class once a week. 英语中表达频率次数时:一次once, 两次twice 从三次开始用three times ... 2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers. 这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出. 3. There are 100 books. 表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型. 4. I study there very happily. Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy. 5. I usually swim there. -ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题. 如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为: By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. 7. Several hours later, he was surprised.
初二英语作文带翻译：读书的方法 "Pany we keep for our habit and character will be as much influenced by the former as by the latter.We may obtain knowledge by reading. The more books we read the more we accumulate the knowledge. Is it right? I dont think so. Its not wide reading but useful reading that leads to success. And only good books can benifit us." 我们经营的公司，我们的习惯，和性格的影响是一样的。我们可 以通过读书获得知识。我们书读得越多，我们积累的越知识多。没有 错吧?我不这么认为。不是广泛的阅读而是阅读有用的书让我们成功的。只有好书才对我们有益。 " So choosing books is very important for reading. Many students spend a lot of time reading legends and swordsman novels.Its a waste of time. Some students even read some bad books and it is harmful for them. So be as careful of the books we read as of the company we keep for our habit and character will be as much influenced by the former as by the latter." 因此选择书对阅读是很重要的。许多学生花大量的时间读传奇和 武侠小说，这是浪费时间。甚至有些学生读一些不好的书，这对他们 是有害的。所以要谨慎读书，就像经营公司，对我们的习惯和性格的 影响是一样的。
感谢父母的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say “Thank You” to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1. 很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢 2. 请说明原因 3. 你的建 议 Aording to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergraduates, 35% of university students have never said “Thank you” to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitude。 The subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter of the interviewed students regard it as parents’ duty to support them spiritually and financially. And it is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents. However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parents’tender love but are not austomed to saying “Thank you”. Some even find a generation gap between themselves and their parents,
中考英语作文写作技巧总结 中考写作注意事项： 知识点1： ①记叙文之人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名，外貌，性格，爱好等多个方面，但是不能出 现真实的姓名，校名及家庭住址。 ②考试时最好以学生身边普通的人物进行描写，从平凡的人中找到不平凡的精神。考试的时 候需要严格按照题目要求进行写作，包括所给的全部信息，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 ③议论文体裁特点：要求学生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己的看 法。一般来说，议论文由论点、论据、论证三部分组成。 1）论点要正确无误。 2）论据要可靠充分。论据可以是人们公认的真理，也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作。 3）论证要合理严密。人们常用的论证方法有归纳法、推理法、对比法。 4）议论文一般按提出问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次。 知识点2：写作思路 1.认真审题，理清思路: 确定题目中的关键词，文章体裁和主旨。 2.搜集材料，制定提纲: 展开一次“Brain Storming”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。根据自己已有的经 验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。
3.选择词句，动笔行文: 确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时 典型案例分析： 1. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60 词的信) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。） 。） （注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分 ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．． 第一步：分析题目 1. 审题 1) 这篇文章根据题目要求，我们可以确定文章的是一篇应用文即：书信。 2）根据写作要求知道是给他人提出建议或意见的文章，需要针对Betty遇到的问题实际出发来进行写作。 2. 确定写作重点和写作目的。 1）重点是安慰处于考试焦虑的Betty。 2）给出解决问题的建议。 3. 书信的格式： 英文信一般可以分为下列几个部分。 1）信端（Heading）即写信人的地址和发信日期。 2）收信人姓名地址
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初中英语作文写作方法和范文，模板英语作文经典开头方式 Type1引述他人观点(为提出自己观点铺垫) [1] It is widely(commonly) accepted(hold)+THAT [2] A widely accepted(commonly) hold idea(point of view,viewpoint, opinion,assumption)is +THAT/NP [3] A/The dominant(prevalent, prevailing)idea(see [2])is NP/to DO [4] It is taken for granted+THAT(or:We often/frequently take it for granted THAT) [5] People(The majority) seem to get accustomed to the idea(see [2]),without questioning,THAT ) [6] People are willing to regard NP1 as NP2/ADJ [7] People are willing to DO,while reluctant to DO Type2提出异议 [1] However (But),… [2] Such idea(see[1-2]),if not entirely ADJ1,is somewhat ADJ2 and needs careful consideration. ADJI=unreasonable,unacceptable, inappropriate,improper,undesirable, etc; ADJ2=misleading,doubtrul, etc [3] In fact(As a matter of fac t),…(follow[2]) [4] However, it is not (quite, necessarily)the case. ( [5] This (It) is not (quite, necessarily) the case and needs to bo fruther considered/discussed.(or:further consideration/discussion) Type3论述的展开:说明原因和理由,层进,举例,转折 [1] The reason lies in several aspects, ( [2] The reason why+clause+[1, underlined] (
初中英语写作教学案例 平潭流水中学陈健康 课题：八年级下册英语Unit5写作教学设计案例 Ⅰ、写作教学内容： 八年级英语Unit5主要学习描述感觉和情绪的词汇及其用法，能够表述自己及他人的感觉和情绪。本人觉得Unit5的话题跟学生的生活实际和实践联系比较紧，是学生比较敢兴趣的话题。通过本单元的学习，学生能够明白许多事理，学会微笑，学会做人，学会控制及适当发泄自己的情绪。Topic1暗含着情感目标：学会微笑、笑对人生。学习Ｔopic2＆３让学生知道怎样面对困境和悲伤。因此本人在教授完课文内容分阶段给学生布置书面表达作业。 根据上表所列的内容要点，以“learn to smile”为题写一篇短文。90个单词左右。 参考词汇：自信—confidence(n.) confident(adj.)
打败—beat(beat,beaten)(v.) ２、Jenny随父母搬到一个陌生的城市，在生活和学习上都遇到了困难，心情很不好。请你以她好朋友Mingming名义写信安慰她，并提出有益的建议，让她重拾快乐。80个单词左右。 ３、在我们生活中，许多事情都能影响我们的心情，如颜色、天气、环境等等。当你有烦恼时，你是怎样处理它的？听音乐？做运动？和家人、朋友沟通？还是其他别的方式？ 请结合你的日常生活实践展开丰富的联想，写一篇短文，词数在60-80之间，题目是How to Deal with Sadness。 Ⅱ、教学目标 培养学生通过各种途径收集信息和处理信息的能力，高学生的英语写作水平，提高写作教学效益。 Ⅲ、教学步骤 总的来说，本人采取了课内外写作训练相结合的方法。具体如下： １.划分阶段要求，落实写作训练。根据各topic的阶段要求安排和确定课内外学生写作训练的内容和要求。平时要求学生写出课文中相关的句子，然后从以句子为核心的表达逐渐向以语段为单位和以语篇为单位的表达过渡。 ２.简化作文评阅，正面鼓励学生。批改学生作文时留意挑出学生在意思和结构表达上都正确的句子，使学生每次写作都有成功体验，不必对学生表达错误和不恰当地方作详细批改，以免学生产生自卑、畏难情绪，从而化解心理负担。 ３.采取作文欣赏，展示学生习作。评讲作文时不专门挑出学生作文中的错句，进行典型错误评析，也不将这些错误一一改正，而是挑选几篇学
Only in the baby from crying wah-wah, that we invoke the first words whispered parents learn to walk the first time to walk small foot staggering along. The first time carrying a bag to school, the first test scores back, the first from their parents ... ... maybe you've never noted this many times in the first, in the growth of this long road to the parents how much to pay into the How much love. Every time you smile, every success, and even failed every time, every mistake in the minds of parents will never forget, to accompany you around, give you the support of silence ... ... We come from? To hear this issue, I am sure you will say that parents bring us up in the world. Yes ah, the day thirteen years ago, our parents with tears, smiles and happiness to greet our arrival. We came to the world from the moment that many parents have a heavy work - to take care of us. Although this is a heavy burden, but the baby's "Wah-Wah" bring to the nursery, we grow up, parents spend much of the effort and sweat, how many days and nights weaving, parents have no complaints.
中考英语作文八大技巧 第一招：审题细心 审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面： 1审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。 2审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。 3审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。 4审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思。 5审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，根据材料确定短文的基本时态。 第二招：衔接流畅 恰当使用逻辑词语，使各要点间连贯，行文通顺。 表并列或递进:and, both…and...,neither…nor, not only…but also...; 表选择: or, either…or; 表转折或让步: but,although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary; 表对比: like, unlike, while; 表举例: for example, such as, that's to say; 表强调: in fact, of course, besides; 表时间顺序: when, after, before,as soon as, soon，after; 表因果关系: because, since, as, for, for this reason，as a result; 表结论: in a word, to sum up,in summary, in conclusion, on the whole. 第三招：短语地道
初中英语作文批改范文批改初中英语作文 1．课堂上限时完成作文 每周的作文课，本人先创设能够激发学生兴趣的场景，如孩子们感兴趣的一首歌或者喜欢的某个时尚明星，要求学生在规定的时间内完成作文，并且鼓励学生到黑板上写下他们的劳动成果。 2．委婉的评改学生们的劳动成果 完成黑板上的例文后，在老师的指导下，请同学们对黑板上的例文进行评改，可以从单词评写，语法规则，短语运用，内容涵盖，过度是否自然等等方面着手。当堂批改例文，不仅仅让例文的作者有了直接深刻的认识，也让在座的其他学生对作文的要求有了更深层次的认识。教师在总结归纳的时候也不忘发掘该文章中的闪光点，要尽量做到语气委婉，适当的时候要给予鼓励的言语和评价。 3．自我修改作文 通过对例子文的批改，同学们大体知道了怎么样批改一篇作文，可以先让同学们说一说一篇优秀的作文该从哪几个方面着手：作者的观点是否明确;各个段落是否符合该观点的论述; 段与段之间的过渡是否自然;语言的表达是否流畅; 结尾是否做到了首尾呼应或深化
主题, 或提出了解决问题的建议等。再让学生对照标准, 评价自己的作文。这样做的目的在于让学生明白作文评分要从内容( 思想和材料) 、语言和结构。从而，让自己有一个深刻的认识以及获得最直接最快速的反馈。 英语写作有多方面需要注意，当然可以从简单的几个大方面入手。1.标点符号及大小写。2.单词的选择与搭配。3. 文章的逻辑和结构安排。4. 语法方面的关注，时态语态等等的运用。 In English class, we need to treat it seriously. First of all, it is very important to follow our teachers' instructions. If you miss a class, you will find it difficult to keep up with the next lesson . When you have some questions related to the missed lesson, you need to work them out with the help of your teacher or classmates. Otherwise, it will keep appearing until you figure them out. Second of all, we should take part in activities about English after class. We can still speak English in the public. We do not need to be afraid of making mistakes. It
感恩父母英语作文【三篇】 篇二 Be Grateful to Our Parents Since we were born, many people help us a lot. We should be grateful to their kindness. But the ones we should show our greatest appreciation are our parents. From the first day we appear in their lives, they give us all their love and care, but never expect anything in return. As long as they are there, we do not feel any difficulties, because they are always in front of our shelter, preventing us from difficulties and danger. In order to make our lives better, learn better, they do everything they can to create the best conditions for us, but ignore their own needs. Therefore, we need to cherish parents’love and repay their upbringing. We should treat them as they treat us.
初中英语作文写作方法指导 一：充分准备。打好基础。 为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落甚至短文。只要读 得多、背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文。其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能 及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法。 二：仔细审题，明确要求。 对题目所提供的信息要认真分析，明确要求，做到心中有数。要对所提供的信息加以 分析、整理，使之更加具体化、条理化，为开始动笔做好准备工作，还要搞清题目的要求，以便根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式，风格各异的文章，此外，还要注意人称、时态、地点等信息，避免出错。 三：抓住重点。寻求思路。 根据题目所提供的信息，草拟提纲，寻求逻辑次序，确定如何下手，否则，语无伦次 的文章将不会被人接受，也不可能得到高分。 四：遣词造句，表达规范。 用词要适当，不可逐句把提示汉译英，亦不可生拼硬凑，不要硬拿英语单词到中文句 子里去对号，否则写出中文式英语，闹出笑话。一般来讲，写作时，应尽量选出你有把握 的词，尽量使用短句简单句。如果有的单词不会写，有的思想不会用英语表达，你可以设 法绕开，最好找一个同义词、同义句，或近义词、词组短语来代替。要正确使用关联词， 如and，or，but，so，because，since等，以便行文自然流畅。 五：修改润色，锦上添花。 作文写完之后，应注意检查修改，修改时先从全局修改。首先要检查主题是否明确， 表达方式是否恰当，接下来检查所写内容是否切题，该交待的内容是否交待了，最后检查 所用时态、人称是否符合要求，最后是否一致。 写完后，还应仔细校阅1—2遍。校阅要逐词逐句进行，注意检查语法、拼写、标点、大小写等方面的错误。校阅是自检的最后一关，应严肃认真的进行，尽可能地消灭一切差错，增强文章的效果。 因此，要写好一篇作文，不仅需要具有丰富的思想内容，掌握扎实的词汇、语法及修 辞等方面的语言基本功，而且还需要掌握因不同思维方式和文化背景而形成的英语特有的 篇章机构模式惟有这样才能进行最有效的书面交际活动。
《感谢父母的英语作文》 感谢父母的英语作文（一）： I consider my parents as the most important people in my life。This is not because theyre wealthy or famous。 Rather， what I value about most is the care and love they show to me。 我认为我的父母是我生命中最重要的人。这并不是因为他们有钱或有名的。相反，我最珍惜的是他们给我的关心和爱。。 My parents might work hard， but theyre always there for me。Whenever I get into trouble and desperately need a hand， they e over first to support me and encourage me。 I grew up with their constant care and love。 While theyre getting older with grey hair and wrinkles，they never lose dignity in both life and jobs。 我父母虽然努力工作，但他们总是陪在我身边。每当我陷入困境，迫切需要帮忙时。他们是第一个支持我、鼓励我的人。我在他们不断的爱和照顾中长大。当他们变老而且出现白发和皱纹时，他们也永远不会失去生活和工作的尊严。 From my parents， I have learned that one person can really make a difference。 Ill never forget their care and love。 Gratefulness brings a great fullness to life。 I wish they could always be happy and healthy。 It is high time we expressed our gratitude to people we cherish! 你从我的父母身上，我明白一个人真的能够有所作为。我永远也不会忘记他们的关怀和爱。感恩使生活带来了的充实。我期望他们能永远幸福和健康。是时候我们要向我们珍惜的人表达我们的谢意了！ 感谢父母的英语作文（二）： We are supposed to express our gratitude to others on Thanksgiving Day。 However， we should feel gratitude every day。
初中英语作文写作技巧 一、掌握常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词 at first; at last; in the end…then / next/ after that… when / while/as soon as/not…until… at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…in a word/in all 议论文常用连接词 表示并列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also; 表示递进的：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…); 表示结果的：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore; 表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…; 表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb. benefit from sth. affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor at; be weak in; 表达个人想法的： I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他： in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way; 二、记住作文万能句式I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +时间+to do… Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v… It’s nice/kind of sb. to v.. It’s time for sb. to do sth. It’s a waste of time to… It’s …years/days since sb. +ved It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing It’s a pity that…It’s an honor to…
英语作文批改评语 篇一：基础写作方法及作文批改评语范例(精心整理版) 基础写作方法及作文批改评语范例（精心整理版） ?写人写景写事状物作文的写作方法 ?一、写人作文 在记叙文中，写人作文占有重要地位。写人的目的，就是通过具体事例，主要表现人物的性格、精神、品质。写人作文的类型一般有一事写人、几事写人两种。一事写人就是通过一件事来反映人物的精神品质；几事写人就是通过几件事（一般是二或三件事）来反映人物的一个精神品质或多个品质。因此，写人的作文，应通过对事件的具体描述和对人物的外表（外貌、神情、动作、语言）、内心的描写来表现人物的精神品质，着重刻画人物在事件中是怎样体现自己的精神品质的。 写人作文的基本写法： 1、①介绍人物及人物外貌。 ②直接描写人物外貌，带出要写的人物及其品质。 2、按事情发展的顺序有详有略地写清人物在事情中的表现。（若是几事写人的，重点事例要放在前头写，具体写；次要的事例后面写，略写。） 3、①总结全文，点明人物品质。
②照应开头，自我勉励。 （说明：开头、结尾的①与①相对应，②与②相对应。下同。） ?二、记事作文 记事作文与写人作文一样，在记叙文中占有重要地位。记事的目的，一般是通过具体描述的事情，表现事情的教育意义或蕴涵的思想感情。记事的作文，应交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果，着重描述事情的具体过程，注意事情发展中人物的外表和心理描写，从中揭示事情的教育意义。 记事作文的基本写法： 1、①交代事情发生的时间、地点及人物。 ②抓住作文要求，开门见山点明要写的事情。 2、重点具体叙述事情的经过，注意对人物的描写。 3、①交代事情的结局。 ②照应开头或揭示中心。 ?三、写景作文 写景，就是对自然景象、建筑工艺等景物的描写。描写景物，要有条理，就要按一定的顺序进行观察，或从远到近，或从近到远，或从整体到部分，或从部分到整体，或按游览景物的线路，或按景物的类别，或按观察点的变换顺序等依次观察，有条理地描写。因此，我们进行写景作文时，要交代观景的时间、地点，尤其要抓住景物的特点进行具体地、细致地、有条理地描写，同时注意景物的动态和静态，恰当地进行合理想象，表达出自己对景物的思想感情。
一、作文做题步骤： 1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称等细节； 2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分几段，以及每段大体内容； 3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点； 4 复查：2遍——1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等； 5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。 二、作文一般框架：文章分3段： （1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题； （2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。 Beginning 开头：topic sentence 主题句----说出文中的要点、核心问题 Middle 正文：supporting sentences支持句----用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论Ending 结尾：concluding sentence 结论句----对全文的总结和概括。 1. Learning English As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important. Many people say it’s difficult to learn English.But I don’t think so. 2. To be a volunteer for the 26th Universiade As we all know, the 26th Universiade is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it. A volunteer plays an important part in the 26th Universiade. 3. A School Trip I will never forget the school trip last week. 三、正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气 按事情发展的先后或时间顺序 1）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally 3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not...until, before, after, when , while, during 表示并列 not only... but also, both... and, either ...or, neither...nor，on the one hand…on the other hand 表示举例或补充 1）for example 2）besides / what’s more/ what’s worse 表示转折however, but，although, instead (of) 表示原因thanks to, because of，because 表示结果as a result, so ,so...that, such...that, 表目的in order to, so that 表比较the same as, as...as..., than, of all 五、结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应 1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避免重复句式。 2. 结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally ... 最后In a word, ... 总而言之In short, ... 简言之 We hope that···我们希望Let’s try our best t o ....I believe if we can..., ... will be .... What a ...! / How...! Keeping healthy Let’s try our best to keep healthy. In short, it’s important to have good habits and keep healthy. Helping others I believe if we can help others, the world will be more and more beautiful. To be a green consumer [k?n'sju?m?]消费者 Let’s try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, it’s necessary for us to protect the environment. Beijing How beautiful Beijing is!Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself? 中考作文高分秘诀 ? 1. 谋篇布局—篇章结构(三段式) ? 2. 化繁为简—降低难度、减少错误 3.化简为繁—赋予语言灵气（连接词的使用、感叹句、反意疑问句、被动语态、名言…
与父母相处的话题类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。 (陕西省卷)假如你是Han Mei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。 提示词语：listen to，mother's love，care about，communicate with，get along with，smile 写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;3.词数在60-80左右 Dear Han Mei， I'm afraid I've got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me，“Be careful while crossing the street.”“Put on more clothes.”“Did you do a good job at school?”And so on. I'm annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do? Alice 例文 Dear Alice， As a teenager，I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas for you. Your mother talks much，because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way，but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother's，you can communicate with her，and tell her what you are thinking about. If your mother doesn't take your advice，just keep silent and give her a smile. I hope what I say here can help you a lot. 中考英语作文范文：关于中学生使用手机 Dear Editor， Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. Some students think that it is easy to use them to keep in touch with parents and classmates.Also，they can be used to listen to music or take photos. But others think that we don't