剑10 1-2 It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children? One important stage in a child 'gsr owth is certainly the development of a conscience, which is linked to the ability to tell right from wrong. This skill comes with time and good parenting, and my firm conviction is that punishment does not have much of a role to play in this. Therefore I have to disagree almost entirely with the given statement. To some extent the question depends on the age of the child. To punish a very young child is both wrong and foolish, as an infant will not understand what is happening or why he or she is being punished. Once the age of reason is reached however, a child can be rewarded for good behavior and discouraged from bad. This kind but firm approach will achieve more than harsh punishments, which might entail many negative consequences unintended by the parents. To help a child learn the difference between right and wrong, teachers and parents should firstly provide good role modelling in their own behavior. After that, if sanctions are needed, the punishment should not be of a physical nature, as that merely sends the message that it is acceptable for larger people to hit smaller ones-an outcome which may well result in the child starting to bully others. Nor should the punishment be in any way cruel. Rather, teachers and parents can use a variety of methods to discipline their young
真题示范： 1．Tourism is becoming good source of revenue for many countries. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of exploiting this resource. 2．What is your opinion about the advantages and disadvantages of fast food?(2002,10;2003,1;2004,4) 3．In 1995,an Englishman killed a burglar who broke into his house. He was sentenced. Do you think he should be sentenced ? How can we protect our property? 4．With the development of a market economy. Advertisements have become a dominant feature in television industry, despite the rich information brought by television. There still exists strong criticism against television advertisement. Write an article analyzing the positive and negative effects of television advertisement. 5．作业：version:000121(2005年G类新题) Some people think that visitors to other countries imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree. They think the host country should welcome culture different. Discuss the two views and give your own opinion. 主体和方向 例文讲解：真题重现： 1．Some people think that people at the age of 55 and over should be encouraged to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. Do you agree or disagree? 2．A report indicates that nowadays children are becoming more and more lazy, fat and unsociable. Give the reasons for this and a proposal for a solution.(2003) 主体相似方向不同： 3．Computers are widely used for education and some people think that teachers will not play important role in the classroom. Disagree or agree? 4．People use computers when they work, go banking and so on, but some argue that it will make people isolated and decrease their social skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 5．Some people think that traditional techniques and modern technology are incompatible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 6．Oriental session 7．Some people think that strong tradition can civilize a country and the government should subsidize musicians, artists, actors and drama companies. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what should government do? 8．Is it possible for a woman to be a good mother and a successful career woman at the same time? some people agree that government should pay some money to women so that they can stay at home to look after their children. Do you agree or disagree? 9．Modern technology, such as fertilizer and machinery has changed our world so much. What are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss 10．There have been many technological developments in the 20th century. For example, computer and electric power. Choose either of them, describe the change it has brought about and discuss whether all the changes are positive. 11．作业：What are the purposes of places, such as museums and how should they be funded? 审题和构思后如何展开段落 题目重现：首段展开 1．电视对儿童的影响？正面还是负面？你的观点 A．Television is the most popular form of entertainment in the modern household.(引入话题)people of all ages use this medium to entertain themselves for an average of four hours a day.(发展话题)thus, television has had a tremendous influence on its viewers, especially children.(缩小话题范围指电视 对孩子的影响)scientists now say that children can be negatively effected by constantly watching
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析 距离雅思写作7分你大概还有3个步骤要走，是的，不是谁都可以轻轻松松活动雅思高分的。今天给大家带来了雅思7分大作范文批改和解析,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。 雅思7分大作范文批改和解析 雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5) 问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad) 同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners. 解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出
雅思作文笔记 不要超时，超时会被记违纪。作文设置半分让小作文的重要性变强了。 图表题：table, line graph, bar chart, pie chart, process diagram/flow chart, map （比较不同图表，找出联系和区别。） 一．高分图表题的三个关键特征: 1.客观性（objectivity）：与大作文最显著的区别，不要有你主观想像的成分，即使是结尾的总结， 也是让你就图形的特征做总结，而不需要你是猜想，推断。 2.准确性（accuracy）：数据不能抄错，不能准确判断的数字，要用about/around/just over/just under/roughly/ approximately，千万注意数据的单位，特别是有millions ，thousands 这些单位的时候。 3.详尽性（thoroughness）：一是要突出重点，抓住四类特征数据，最大值(maximum),最小值 （minimum），intersection（交叉点）和变化趋势（trend）；二是在时间允许的情况下，尽可能多的介绍数据，但不必全部都介绍，还是要把握数据特点。 二．图表作文的写作步骤： 1.理解题目 2.浏览图表的文字信息 3.浏览图表的数字信息 4.确定文章结构（主要是主体段的结构分类和描述数据的顺序） 5.开始写作 图表的文字信息要先看，因为比数据重要，没有文字数据没有意义。文字信息包括图表的标题(heading),标注（label），度量单位（dimensions，measurement units），和注解（annotation），要弄清楚坐标轴数据代表的信息） 三．如何确定文章的结构 1．开头和结尾必不可少 2．基本原则是有几个图写几段 3．但碰到图形一致的时候要注意分类 4．表格题可以按纵轴段也可以按横轴分段
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雅思小作文真题 【篇一：雅思作文题目汇总】 一、教育 1、教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：it is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. what should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2、学校的科目谁来选择？(060916) 母题：some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. discuss the two views and give your opinion. 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。
2019年雅思小作文范文：剑桥雅思5册29页作文-范文模板 本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！ == 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ == 雅思小作文范文：剑桥雅思5册29页作文 This line chart shows the changes in the proportion of the elderly people in three countries from 1940 till today . Moreover , it offers predictions for a period to 2040. 注意趋势描述的语言，对照对比的点和表达方式 During the three score years , the USA generally outweighed Sweden in terms of the proportion of those aged 65 and over . But the gaps between have never been remarkable . In stark contrast , Sweden strikingly eclipsed Japan in this aspect evidenced by the fact that in 1940 the proportion for the USA was about 9%, clearly higher than 5% for Japan . Whereas Japan experienced declines from 5% to 3% , both Sweden and the USA climbed . Put it in detail , by the year 1983, the figures have peaked at 15% and 13% in the USA and Sweden respectively . Noticeably , in 1997 the proportion in the USA was equal to that in Sweden . According to the forecast , from now on , all of the three countries will skyrocket although exceptions might happen . However , by 2040 the proportion will have peaked at 27%, 25%, and 23% in Japan , Sweden , and the USA respectively . In sum , the three countries are different in the field under study .
雅思写作中对词汇的要求 很多考生把词汇当成是雅思写作的一道难以逾越的鸿沟，那么雅思写作对词汇到底是什么要求？我们要掌握多少词汇量才能够达到雅思写作的标准呢？雅思考试要求考生的词汇量在8000以上，而这其中有三分之一指的是阅读中的一些高难词汇或专业词汇，对于我们写作而言，能够灵活高效地运用5000词汇就已足够。英文核心词（约2000左右） 首先，我们要来看一下雅思写作对于词汇的要求。 Lexical Resource 1. Accurateness 2. Authentic vocabulary 3. Variety 我们来一一分析者三点，第一点是准确性；第二点式地道词汇的使用；第三点是词汇多样性。 很多学生都是可以追求了第三点而忽视了第一和第二点。这直接导致的结果就是虽然作文中出现了一些水平比较高的词汇但是由于自己并不能用的得心应手结果出现适得其反的效果，把好的词汇用在了不恰当的地方.由于一心想要在词汇上标新立异，但是能标新立异的单词又不能准确运用，因此在写作过程中会浪费很多时间去思考. 有时候记不清楚但是不写出来似乎又不甘心，于是花更多时间去思考，或者写了一个认为是正确的实际上却写错的单词。而这些都是对分数有直接影响的。 大家要知道，大作文除了词汇要求，还有语法要求，和小作文相比，大作文更重要的是你有没有切题的观点和清晰的文章结构。在保证这两点的基础上再去思考词汇的出色应用才是正确的选择。就好比是你画一幅建筑设计图，没有框架，没有设计核心，你用的材料再好，也不会达到预期的目标。 所以我认为并不是词汇量少就一定写不出高分文章. 大家再复习考试时不要刻意的去追求词汇多样化. 熟练准确的运用单词比生拼硬凑好单词更重要。 雅思写作训练方法 1 精读仔细阅读范文，欣赏并标出精彩的用词和句型，体会上下文中 表达的精妙，提高对精彩语言的敏感度，要多写，多记。 2 背诵背精彩词汇，背精彩句型，背精彩句子，背精彩框架，背精彩 段落，通过背诵完成从欣赏到掌握的过程，别人的变成自己的。 3 默写将背过的句子，段落默写下来，检查核对，看看是否精确掌握 了每一个词汇。Reading makes a full man writing makes an exact man 4 互译英文----中文; 中文------英文，---与原文核查核对，发现自己 不足，纠正提高。使自己逐步写出规范的语言达到和原文作者相似的水平。 5 效仿在范文中学到的单词，词组，句型，框架放在新的语境下模仿 创作，造句写作。在新的作文中保留一定闪光点。 雅思写作必背200句！
Some people think that robots are very important to human’s future development. Others thought that they are dangerous and have negative effects on the society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the robots. The pros and cons of technology development have long attracted considerable public attention for they are closely connected with human life. Some people argue that robotic technology can be very harmful and has the potential to destroy social stability. However, sound and attractive as their arguments may seem, I am still convince that there are more advantages than disadvantages of robots. With the assistance of robots, one can enjoy a more convenient life thus will have more time to accompany his family. For example, if robots can help mothers with gardening and laundry, they will have more time to spend with their kids, which is essential for the mental and physical development of children as well as the harmoness of the family. Healthy family relationship will undoubtly result in a better society eventually, then all of us should thank for the robot. Moreover, the significance of robots is also because they are important supplement or substitution of human labor. For some dangerous job, such as deep well mining and electric work, using robots instead of human will improve the safety rate and efficiency substancially without causing any injury. People who relase from the high pressure of dangerous work can enjoy a better life. However, it is also true to some extent that robots can influent the society in a negative way. For example, crime may become easier and more frequently with the help of high technology; and the substitution of human labor may result in the increasing of unemployment and extend to the decline of economy. However, these problems can be solved by education. A proper education means that people will obtain more useful skills and knowledge. It also means that they will become more reliable people who can take responsibility for the society, and these purpose, excitingly, can be achieved in an earlier day with the help of robots. To sum up, robots can help human enjoy a more convenient and safer life. They may have negative effects but we can always fix the problems by education. 总点评：
In sum, the first chart implies that the worldwide land declination majorly resulted from over-grazing while the second one depicts that Europe suffered most from this effect. Spending/ expenditure/ budget It is noted that …. It is also worth mentioning that … Interestingly,…有特征的其他数据 Turning to glass and paper, both experience a rising tendency during the 10-year period. To be more precise, glass recycled 13%, which was equal to that of paper in 1992. Then there was a sudden increasing trend in the former to approximately 50%, which overtook/ outnumbered the latter, with roughly 40%. There are some reasons for the phenomenon. To begin with, lacking sense of protecting our setting serves as the major factor. For most ordinary people, they are convinced that it is government’s responsibility to take action to preserve the earth and the environment. Moreover, government in most countries focuses too much on economic development instead of paying enough attention to the environment. That is to say, people are busy making money with the scarify of destroying the setting.
●批改By Will 本次批改严格按照ILETS小作文评分标准进行。ILETS小作文评分项：TA (内容的完整性), CC (连贯性及一致性), GRA (语法范围及精准度), LR (词汇资源)。文末会进行总评及打分。 ●文中标识： 用词不当逻辑错误语法错误修改添加 The graph provides the information concerning the average temperatures on a month basis in three major cities.(介于有两张图，都要提一下。此后可加一句：In addition, clearly demonstrated in the table are the time of sunshine on an annual base.) (补充：在下一段看到了你对于后一张图的总结，这样的话建议你在开头强调一下“the first graph”) As can be seen from the graph, there is a similar trend in terms of average monthly temperature between London and New York during the period from January to December. (可加入连接词：To be specific) The average temperature in London (介于你后面写的是两个城市的数据，这里改为：for both of the cities) gradually rises from January to July both in London and new york, reaching a peak at 25 degrees and 20 degrees respectively. After that, the following 4 months witness a dramatic decrease both in London and new york. In comparison (这里不妨分段), an opposite trend is found in Sydney. It (这是悉尼的第一句，建议写出来具体的量词至少：The temperature) keeps stable at 25 degrees from January to march, after which the average temperature undergoes a considerable descent, reaching the bottom point at approximately 15 degrees, before there is (there is 没必要了，可以去除) a steady ascent by 10 degrees. It is obvious that the table depicts the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. As we can see from the statistics, when it comes to the total annual hours of sunshine, new york ranks first, followed by Sydney ,London lies last. Specifically, people who live in new york enjoy 2,353 hours of sunshine every year, which is similar to people living in London with 2,473 hours (不是人和人像，是时间长短像，改为：which is similar to the amount of sunshine for those in London). However, only 1,180 hours of sunshine are found in London annually. 总评6.5（TA6.5 CC6.5 LR6.5 GRA7.0） 1.语法变化上从句数量可以了，分词的使用还可以多一些。偶尔试试一到两句倒装，如我在开头给你的那个。 2.趋势等词汇变化可以，试着多换换题目话题词汇，如people=residents=citizens
剑一--Test 3—Task1 (bar chart combined with line graph) The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast-foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. （Model answer 165 words） The chart shows that high income earners consumed considerably more fast foods than the other income groups, spending more than twice as much on hamburgers (43 pence per person per week) than on fish and chips or pizza(both under 20 pence). Average income earners also favoured hamburgers,spending 33 pence per person per week, followed by fish and chips at 24 pence,then pizza at 11 pence. Low income earners appear to spend less than otherincome groups on fast foods, though fish and chips remains their most popularfast food, followed by hamburgers and then pizza. From the graph we can see that in 1970, fish and chips were twice as popular
Some people think government should pay for public libraries in every town, while others think itis a waste of money because people can access information from the internet. Discuss both viewsand give your own opinion. It is argued that government should invest more money in public libraries; the other people believe that we can search the information from the internet, so government should not cost money in public libraries. I agree with this idea. Surfing on the internet is the fashion way to search information in modern life, there are a lot of people use computer or mobile phone to find some information on the internet. It is because people believe that internet is the most convenient platform to find the key. People can get all the information they want effectively, rather than go to the library cost a large amount of time to read book. On the other handthe books in libraries are though many times of check and reserve, that can ensure the authority of every book. So some people would like to go to library to read the book and find the truth. Especially in medical book, if doctor find some information is wrong, it will affect the patient who was saved by the doctor. Considering the
一、雅思写作炼段法则：分类思维写TS话题句及SI拓展句 注意：先写核心句，再写修饰句。先说重点，再说辅助 1 人群 Car is very convenient ●for businessmen: ●for the old ●for students ●for white collar 2 组成 Car is very convenient. ●The speed is very fast ●The space is huge to load the goods ●There are a lot of functions such as GPS…. 3 微观宏观 The discount of the air ticket is should be encouraged ●For individual: student/businessmen/travelers/ ●For the company: ladder up the fame ●For the nation: promote the economy 4 why/how/what Parent should teach kids to become good members of the society Why: first teacher/long time together How: set up example/taking out to experience more What: respecting the old/ diligence/good manners 二、争议类几种串联TS法则 几种问法 To what extent do you agree or disagree? Ambition is positive. ? Discuss both sides and give your own idea？ 万能对应模板： On the one hand, 正面观点(TS+SI自己的话拓展) Among the numerous advantages of 话题stands out 好处1名词---TS ………Besides 好处1 follows 好处2---TS ……. Accompanied what has been mentioned comes along 好处3---TS …… First, …. Second.. third On the other hand, 反面观点(TS+SI自己的话拓展) To begin with, 话题(sometimes) offers us/the public …坏处1 In addition, the society also witnesses a great deal of/number of 坏处2 by 话题Besides,