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浅谈批改网在英语写作中的利弊
作者：李婷
来源：《学习与科普》2019年第04期
摘要：随着信息技术的发展，信息产品和信息服务成为各个国家、地区、企业、单位、
家庭和个人不可缺少的一部分。其中，批改网对英语写作方面的促进就是一个很好的典例。英语写作能力的提高是英语学习的重点，同时也是难点，切实提高英语写作水平是一个艰苦而漫长的过程。批改网在英语写作提高方面发挥着不可忽视的作用，经过长时间的实践，深刻体会到批改网的益处。不仅能切实帮助学生提高英语写作水平，还能增加学生对学习英语的兴趣，此外，教师的负担也大大减轻，可谓一举多得。但由于批改网毕竟是个机械化软件，使用过程中必然存在一些缺陷。必须采取辩证的思维方式看待这一问题，坚持两点论和重点论的统一，抓住矛盾的主要方面，即：既要看到批改网对英语写作的促进作用，也要认识到它的局限性，同时应坚信，尽管存在缺陷，仍需改进，但优势是主流。随着信息技术的完善，信息技术与英语写作教育的交融是必然趋势。
关键词：信息技术；批改网；英语写作；利弊；必然趋势
1.批改网在英语写作中的促进作用
首先，批改网在英语写作中的应用，使英语写作不再那么枯燥乏味，提高了学生学习英语的兴趣，兴趣是学习最好的老师，这就为今后的学习做了很好的铺垫。第二，批改网能对学生的作文即时反馈，给出确切的分数，指出学生作文中出现的语句和词汇等错误，学生在多次修改提交后，作文会更加完美，档次提高，而且，系统会根据学生的写作情况，给出总的评语，既指出学生的优点，也会针对作文中的问题给出相应的建议，这样不仅能让学生看到自己的闪光点，增强学习英语的自信心，获得学习的成就感，还能根据提示，及时弥补自己的不足，从而提高自己的写作水平。最后，批改网的各项功能体验相当快捷方便高效。例如：互评功能可以让学生看到同学的写作情况，学习别人的闪光点，同时也能发现自己的不足和与同学之间的差距，迎头赶上，互相促进，共同进步；共评功能可以在教师的引导下，利用具有代表性的学生作文，共同学习，取长补短，提高写作能力；诊断功能可以清晰地看到学生的提交和使用批改网情况，根据错误分布，精确把握学生写作中的瓶颈，帮助教师有针对性的进行教学，突破学生写作中的难点，写作能力获得质的提升，根据数据对比，维度分析以及词汇搭配等统计，可以找到学生写作中的薄弱地方，以及应该加强哪方面的训练，对学生的写作和教师的教学都有良好的导向作用。
2.批改网在英语写作中存在的弊端
批改网在服务英语写作的同时，也存在一些明显缺陷。首先，批改网对学生的作文批改存在局限性，批改重点多在单词拼写、搭配、标点符号使用、主谓一致等方面，而对于文章的谋篇布局、写作思路、句与句以及段与段之间的衔接、句子的语法使用等方面未能给出建议，甚
大学英语作文关于网络的利弊 几篇范文: Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet Ten years ago, the Internet was practically unheard of by most people. Today, the Internet is one of the most powerful tools throughout the worl d. The Internet is a collection of various services and resources. Accordi ng to Russ Brock, a director and consultant at the Center for Innovation and Inquiry, the Internet’s main components are E-mail and the World Wide Web. “There’s a lot more to the Internet than E-mail, search engin es, celerity web sites, up-to-the-second sports scores, and chat rooms ful l of risqué discussions. The Net also ranks as one of today’s best busin ess tools - if it’s used adroitly”. Almost all households contain the Intern et; however, before people connect to the Internet, they need to be awa re of its disadvantages and advantages. Many fear the Internet because of its disadvantages. They claim to not use the Internet because they are afraid of the possible consequences o r are simply not interested. People who have yet connected to the Intern et claim they are not missing anything. Today’s technological society mu st realize, it is up to them to protect themselves on the Internet “Half of U.S. adults, or 94 million Americans, aren’t online”. Children using the Internet has become a big concern. Most parents do not realize the dangers involved when their children log onto the Internet. When children are online, they can easily be lured into something dang erous. When children talk to others online, they do not realize they coul d actually be talking to a harmful person. As a result, there have been many cases where children have been convinced to meet people they h ave talked with online. In fact, “stories seem to come out every week: a child or teenager lured into something foolish, dangerous, or even deadl y on line” . Cathy Cleaver of the Family Research Council claims that it is against the law for a molester to even attempt to find children online . In addition, children may also receive pornography online by mistake; therefore, causing concern among parents everywhere. Whether surfing t he Web, reading newsgroups, or using email, children can be exposed t o extremely inappropriate material. Pornographic sites tend to make sure they are the first sites to be listed in any search area; thus, children co me across such sites easily. A man from Pearl, Mississippi was arrested in 1996 for downloading pornographic images of children from the Inter
英语作文错误批改符号 作为英语教师，批改学生的作文是一项令人很头疼的工作，如果掌握一些批改符号，对于这项工作可以事半功倍。下面是一些笔者根据一些资料和实际工作经验，整理、编辑，创造的一些批改符号，希望能对同行们有所帮助。 abbr --- error in abbreviation 缩写错误 C --- error in conjunction 连词错误 cap --- should use capital letter 应该大写 CE --- Chinese English 中式英语 col --- error in collocation 搭配错误 comp --- error in comparison 比较错误 D --- error in diction 措辞错误 div --- error in word division 断词错误 frag --- sentence fragment 不完整句 G --- error in grammar 语法错误 ll --- faulty parallel structure 平行错误 log --- error in logic 逻辑错误 mm --- misplaced modifier 限定词错 no cap --- should not use capital letter 不应大写 nsw --- no such word 没有此词 num --- error in mumbers 数词错误 P --- error in punctuation 标点错误 plu --- should use plural form 应用复数 pron --- error in pronoun 代词错误 red --- error in redundancy 累赘错误 rep --- error in repetition 重复错误 run-on --- run-on sentence 断句错误（该用连词或分号、句号等）sin --- shoul use singular form 应用单数 sp --- error in spelling 拼写错误 sv --- subject-verb agreement 主谓一致 vt --- error in verbal tense 时态错误 vf--- error in verbal form 动词形式 vo --- error in voice 语态错误 wc --- error in word choice 选词错误 wo --- error in word order 词序错误 ╳ --- some error here 某处有错 (用于某处不易用符号解释的错误） ∧ --- should add a word 应加某词 ( ) --- optional 可以不要 ┓ --- another paragraph 另起一段 / --- should be deleted 应删某词 ～ --- error in sentence order 语序调换 ？ --- meaning unclear 意义不明 ︱--- should be seperated 应当分开 — --- should be connected 应当连接
dear coach snyder , i am writing this letter to express my appreciation for your care and guidance during the four years in which i was a part of your team . before joining the football team ,i had little direction in life .i was a gifted athlete ,but i was lost morally .you were of great help to me in learning house to be a good person ,and i feel greatly enlightened by having learned from you .apart from this ,i enjoyed discussing with you .i am much obliged to you ,so if there is anything with which i can help you in the future ,please let me know . yous sincerely , rudolph deng 亲爱的教练施耐德, 我写这封信来表达我的感激之情,你给我的关怀和指导的四年中,我是一个你们中的一员。 在加入足球队,我没有方向的生活。我是一个很有天赋的运动员,但我又迷路了道德。你对我很有帮助学习的房子要做一个好人,我感到非常开明的有从你们
The internet--a double-edged sword Internet is an international computer network connecting other networks and computers from companies, universities, etc. At present, Internet become a useful assistant for us. However, every coin has two sides , the Internet also has its own advantages and disadvantages. On one hand, we benefit a lot from computers. We live in a message explosion times, we only need to sit in front of a computer or any other network terminal, to konw the latest things or to check any thing you don't know. The internet also help us save a lot of time. The message was transfered so fast and so vivid that we don't have to walk out or have a face to face meet to resolve some business. We can also make friends by internet. On the other hand, the explosion messages were pushed to us whether you need it or not. So we have to spend a lot of time to figure out which one is a useful. We don't have to have a face to face talk most time, so we feel lonely and sometimes. More and more teenagers are addicted to virtual world and they all play computer games everyday they want, leading to a terrible result. The worst respect is that it grudually eat our health. We sit more and walk less, that caused backbone disease. The computer radiation affect our body, and so many disease are caused by it. Even though the usage of Internet has both positive and negative effect to me, I still consider Internet is a symbol of technology development. I believe I can use the Internet very well as long as I know how to control myself.
英语作文错误批改符号及含义 符号含义 abbr --- error in abbreviation 缩写错误 C --- error in conjunction 连词错误 cap --- should use capital letter 应该大写 CE --- Chinese English 中式英语 col --- error in collocation 搭配错误 comp --- error in comparison 比较错误 D --- error in diction 措辞错误 div --- error in word division 断词错误 frag --- sentence fragment 不完整句 G --- error in grammar 语法错误 ll --- faulty parallel structure 并列结构/平行错误 log --- error in logic 逻辑错误 mm --- misplaced modifier 限定词错 no cap --- should not use capital letter 不应大写 nsw --- no such word 没有此词 num --- error in numbers 数词错误 P --- error in punctuation 标点错误 plu --- should use plural form 应用复数 pron --- error in pronoun 代词错误 red --- error in redundancy 累赘错误 rep --- error in repetition 重复错误 run-on --- run-on sentence 断句错误（该用连词或分号、句号等） sin --- shoul use singular form 应用单数 sp --- error in spelling 拼写错误 sv --- subject-verb agreement 主谓一致 vt --- error in verbal tense 时态错误 vf--- error in verbal form 动词形式 vo --- error in voice 语态错误 wc --- error in word choice 选词错误 wo --- error in word order 词序错误 awk ---awkward expression 语句不通顺 prep---error in preposition介词错误 ital---italicized 单词斜体 ╳ --- some error here 某处有错(用于某处不易用符号解释的错误）∧ --- should add a word 应加某词 ( ) --- optional 可以不要 ┓ --- another paragraph 另起一段 / --- should be deleted 应删某词 ～--- error in sentence order 语序调换 ？--- meaning unclear 意义不明 ︱--- should be seperated 应当分开 — --- should be connected 应当连接
随着科技的发展，电脑在二十一世纪成了人们必要的用品。随之而来，网络与我们的生活息息相关，给现代人的生活、工作带来了无与伦比的方便。 通过网络，我们能查寻有用的资料,了解时事动态等等.当你工作了很长时间后去玩电脑游戏，可以减缓你的精神压力，放松你的心情.并且，上网玩游戏也不完全是坏事，因为学生玩游戏可以锻炼手、脑的反应能力，满足学生娱乐需要。 但是网络也有弊。长时间的看电脑,电脑发出的辐射对人体有很大的害处。眼睛长期处于紧张状态容易造成近视。现在的电脑游戏众多,某些电脑游戏粗制滥造,甚至含有暴力等不健康内容。有的孩子由于对社会认识不足和自我保护意识缺乏，沉迷网络游戏，网络交友。 其实网络并不可怕，只要我们面对网络时多一些认识，网络就会成为我们学习上的有利助手。让我们一起创个干净的网络世界吧！ With the development of the science and technology, the computer has been becmoing the necessity for people in the 21st Century. Following, network is of close link with our life,bringing us incomparable convenience on our life and work. Through the network,we can search for useful datas and get to know the current events.When you play computer games after a long-time work,it can relieve your pressure and make you feel relaxed.Besides,playing online games is not all bad,for it can fulfil students' entertaining requests as well as practise their response ability. However,there still exists some disadvantages in the network.The radiation from the computer will do harm to people's health if you keep on watching the computer for a long time.And short sight may caused by it for your eyes stay tense.At present,there are too many games on the Internet,but some of them are not of good quality even contain some unhealthy content like violence and so on.Duo to the lack of recognizing society and self-protection awareness,some students get addicted in the games and online dating. In fact,network is not that horrible,as long as we know more about it,it will become our right hand on our studies.Let's build a clean network world together. 1)网络课堂教学的兴起，使传统的课堂教学受到了前所未有的挑战 2)网络课堂教学模式会完全取代传统课堂教学模式吗？ 3)你的看法，理由是…… 【思路点拨】 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种新兴事物，提纲第2点针对该事物提出一个有争议的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
The Advantages and Disadvantages of the Internet 翻译：随着科技的发展，电脑在二十一世纪成了人们必要的用品。随之而来，网络与我们的生活息息相关，给现代人的生活、工作带来了无与伦比的方便。 With the development of the science and technology,the computer has become the necessity for people in the 21st Century. Following,network is of close link with our life,bringing us incomparable convenience on our life and work. necessity[n??ses?ti] n.必需品; 必要（性） incomparable[?n?k?mpr?bl] adj. 无与伦比; 无可比拟; 无双的; 无敌的，无比的 convenience[k?n?vi:ni?ns] n. 方便，便利; 便利设施; 补充：The Internet is becoming more and more important in our daily life.
The Internet is playing a more and more important part in modern society. Nowadays, Internet is becoming very popular in all walks of life. 通过网络，我们能查寻有用的资料,了解最新的新闻等等.当你工作了很长时间后去玩电脑游戏，可以减缓你的精神压力，放松你的心情... Through the network,we can search for useful datas and get to know the latest news.When you play computer games after a long-time work,it can relieve your pressure and make you feel relaxed.Besides... relieve[r??li:v] vt. 缓解; 解除; 补充： Internet brings us both advantages and disadvantages. The advantages are as the following. Firstly, we can communicate with our friends more rapidly and quickly. Secondly, Internet brings us fun. For example, many websites open chatrooms where we can talk
英语作文—网络好处和 坏处 Document number：NOCG-YUNOO-BUYTT-UU986-1986UT
电脑利与弊 The computer plays the vital role in ours life, the computer may help us to handle very many matters: The data computation, the study entertainment, the office automation, the control production, draws money automatically, long-distance correspondence ...... The computer news fast development promoted its popularization. Now besides the personal computing which finds at everywhere, each kind of portable portable computer also arises at the historic moment. The computer is playing the very major role in ours life. Cannot have in us when question, we may access the net the consult material, some quite big data may use the computer to calculate ......We may learn very many knowledge in the computer The computer also has many is bad, if to the elementary student, I wants to say plays the computer the question. Now the family economical level enhanced, the elementary student vision dropped actually, this is plays the computer the fault. The advantage very are also many, for example chats, said the topic and so on some beneficial games can cause elementary student's after school life to be more interesting. But cannot sink confuses in the computer games. Some real matter meant, a child,For computer games in hypothesized duty battle, own jumped from an upper story. Therefore, plays the computer not to be able to fall, after on the one hand which falls to does not have the advantage. The high tech product increases day by day,Computer these high tech product,Has brought many conveniently to the people,Might also bring the misfortune to the I want to schoolmates said,That is regarding yours children just were giving birth to,Eye all well,May perhaps be because watches the television,Plays the computer,Each one has all taken to bring with the our class,Some 70% schoolmate are almost the nearsightedness,My eye also very is originally good,May march into the higher grades,Also starts to police has shown us,Plays the computer,May,Watches the television,No reason why ,If you want to have a pair of beautiful health eye,Anything must have a your eye for a long time in television and under computer accompanying,I believed,That cannot have the good result. 电脑在我们的生活中起着重要的作用，电脑可以帮我们做很多事情：数据计算，学习娱乐，办公自动化，控制生产，自动取款，远程通信…… 电脑的讯速发展促进了它的普及。现在除了随处可见的个人电脑外，各种便携式的手提电脑也应运而生。 电脑在我们的生活中起着很大的作用。在我们有不懂的问题时，我们可以上网查阅资料，一些比较大的数据可以用电脑计算……在电脑中我们可以学到很多知识。 电脑也有许多坏出，如果对小学生呢，我想说玩电脑的问题。现在家庭的经济水平提高了，小学生们的视力却下降了，这就是玩电脑的坏处。好处也很多，例如聊聊
首先，我先谈谈在我所教授的班上，对于英语写作所存在的问题。 1.学生对写作有畏惧感 很大部分学生对英语写作不感兴趣，一提到写作就害怕，也无从下手，不知道该写什么，怎么写，尽管绞尽脑汁，写出来的作文得分率也很低，有的甚至就不写，经常出现写作空白卷。 2.写作中常见的错误 （1）单词拼写错误多 拼写错误是学生作文中普遍存在的一个问题，主要错误集中在一些形相似，音相近的单词等等。 （2）选词不当的错误 学生在写英语作文时只注意“要点提示”中的汉语字面意思，而忽视了所选单词的词性，用法及其搭配。以至于错用，乱用。（3）时态，句子结构，主谓一致等语法错误 很多学生在英语写作中会有一些基本的语法错误。主要原因在于学生不习惯英语语言中的变化形式。 （4）句式表达错误 此类错误具体表现为学生所选用的句式不符合英语语言习惯，学生经常按汉语顺序译成英语，使得逻辑混乱。 （5）综合性错误 如名词的单，复数变化，形容词和副词的混淆，冠词的错用，介词的错用，代词的误用，非谓语动词误用等。 其次，我谈一下，听了专家的讲座后，我该如何解决这些问题，帮助
学生们提高写作水平。 1.抓好英语写作的基础性训练。 英语写作的基础性训练是训练基本句型。因此，在写作教学中，应把这五个基本句型作为写作训练的出发点。课堂练习以及作业布置上，多在造句上下工夫，打好写作的第一步。 2.多条途径培养学生的英语写作思维能力。 一是扩大阅读量。要让学生言之有物，就必须重视扩大其阅读量。大量阅读对学生熟悉词汇和句子结构有积极的作用。通过一段时间的语言输入，丰富了学生的语言材料，对写作能起到极好地促进作用。 二是背诵范文。在英语写作教学过程中，教师要选择适当的阅读材料作范文，这将对启发学生的思维起到立竿见影的作用。课文是提供给学生的最好范文，背诵课文是一个积累语篇的过程，也是思维发展的过程，它有记忆、理解、感悟、鉴赏四个阶段。背诵课文有助于学生对词汇的记忆，诵读过程中学生感悟内容，内化语言，提高能力。 三是仿写作文。首先，由浅入深、由易到难、循序渐进、一环紧扣一环地进行训练。然后，通过对知识点的复习加深学生对句型的印象。最后，让学生仿写成文。 3.优化作文的批改，增强纠错的时效性。对于学生的写作错误采用符号的方式加以提醒，再由学生根据提示改正。每次改完作文后，总结学生的一般性错误，并再课堂上指出并强调。有时还可以选几篇比较有针对性的作文，让全班同学一起批改，加深印象。
求一篇英语作文关于网络的利弊提示词语：可以帮助我们更好地了解外面的世界开阔我们的视野 （一） Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time.I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantages. For example，if I have some trouble studying， I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. And I can make more friends on it. Some of my classmates say they feel happy when they talk with more friends with many similar hobbies. However, Internet can make some problems at the same time. If you spend too much time on it ,you will becaome lazy and can't put your heart on study. It will be even worse if you feel you can't live without Internet. So we must be careful when we use the Internet. 翻译：现在，我的很多同学都喜欢在闲暇的时间里上网，我认为网络既给我们带来了好处，又有不好的地方。 例如，如果我在学习上又困难，我就能上网搜索一些有帮助的信息。并且我还能够在网上交到更多的朋友。我有一些同学说，当他们找到了一些拥有相当兴趣的朋友来聊天时，会觉得开心 然而，网络同时也会造成一些问题。如果你花太多时间在上面，你就会变懒而且不能够专心学习。如果你觉得你的生活已经离不开它了那就更糟了所以，当我们在使用网络的时候一定要小心。
英语教学心得体会之英语作文的批 改与点评 英语教学心得体会之英语作文的批改与点评 一篇作文交给老师后要一个多星期后才能拿到，等拿到手，学生早已忘掉当初是怎样写的了。再看看从头到尾的红圈圈和各种标记，学生对自己的写作能力总是表示怀疑，积极性大受挫伤，
进而也对英语作文失去了信心和兴趣。，怎样批改和点评学生作文才能激发学生的写作热情，增强他们的自信心，并使他们及时了解自己作品的缺陷，通过修改和纠错来使自己掌握写作的基本技巧，复习语言运用知识，最终达到提高写作能力的目的，这些就是我在教学过程中一直思考的问题。 一、确立以肯定为主的评价风格，着力挖掘优点，激发学生的写作热情。 1、兴趣与自信对英语学习的作用是众所周知的。而二者的产生和保持在一定程度上依赖于付出努力后所获得的成就感。因此，学生每完成一篇作文，我
们都应尽量发现其可取之处，给予恰当的表扬并提出中肯的意见，让学生期待下一次完成得更好。每一次肯定、欣赏的评价，都是帮助学生挖掘其内动力的最好的催化剂。所以，在评价学生作文时，我主要采取朋友式的交流方式，探讨学生文章立意的的新颖之处、思想的深度、结构是否清晰、段落是否分明、语言表达是否准确生动。 2、每一次习作后我都选择几篇文体规范、结构完整、段落分明、语言流畅的作文作为范文在全班朗读并展示。选择时，我不受分数的局限，只要有特色就行。讲评时我大力表扬并宣读他们的
作品，从构思、谋篇布局到语言运用诸方面充分肯定作文的优点，指出他们在分析审题、谋篇成段、语言运用等方面的过人之处，并以此归纳总结这一类主题作文中常用的结构、句型和习惯表达。这样不但可以使学生多接触优秀的范文，还可以激发被选中学生的积极性，并促进未入选者。事实证明，许多学生你追我赶，甚至暗中叫劲，都想让自己的作品成为下一次的范文。 3、除了优秀学生的作文展示，我还特别注意基础较差学生的每一次进步。他们只要在结构、段落、思想或用词用句上有较好的表现，我都给他们以“笑
通过网络，我们能查寻有用的资料,了解时事动态等等.当你工作了很长时间后去玩电脑游戏，可以减缓你的精神压力，放松你的心情.并且，上网玩游戏也不完全是坏事，因为学生玩游戏可以锻炼手、脑的反应能力，满足学生娱乐需要。 但是网络也有弊。长时间的看电脑,电脑发出的辐射对人体有很大的害处。眼睛长期处于紧张状态容易造成近视。现在的电脑游戏众多,某些电脑游戏粗制滥造,甚至含有暴力等不健康内容。有的孩子由于对社会认识不足和自我保护意识缺乏，沉迷网络游戏，网络交友。 其实网络并不可怕，只要我们面对网络时多一些认识，网络就会成为我们学习上的有利助手。让我们一起创个干净的网络世界吧！ With the development of the science and technology, the computer has been becmoing the necessity for people in the 21st Century. Following, network is of close link with our life,bringing us incomparable convenience on our life and work. Through the network,we can search for useful datas and get to know the current you play computer games after a long-time work,it can relieve your pressure and make you feel ,playing online games is not all bad,for it can fulfil students' entertaining requests as well as practise their response ability. However,there still exists some disadvantages in the radiation from the computer will do harm to people's health if you keep on watching the computer for a long short sight may caused by it for your eyes stay present,there are too many games on the Internet,but some of them are not of good quality even contain some unhealthy content like violence and so
The advantages and disadvantange of the Internet因特网的利弊Now many of my classmates like to surf the Internet in their free time. I think Internet can bring us both advantages and disadvantange. For example, if I have some trouble in studying , I can surf the internet to find more helpful information. And I can chat with my friend online and make more friends on it. We can listen to music and watch many films on the Internet. However, every coin has two sides. Internet can make some problems at the same time. Internet can make some problems at the same time. If you spend too much time on it , you will becaome lazy and can't put your heart on study. So we must be careful when we use the Internet. 翻译：现在，我的很多同学都喜欢在闲暇的时间里上网，我认为网络既给我们带来了好处，又有不好的地方。例如，如果我在学习上又困难，我就能上网搜索一些有帮助的信息。并且我还能够在网上和朋友聊天并交到更多的朋友。我们可以在网上听音乐和看许多电影。然而，如果你花太多时间在上面，你就会变懒而且不能够专心学习。因此当我们在使用网络的时候一定要小心。 How to protect the environment? 如何保护环境(范文一) Today the environment is becoming worse and worse. It's our duty to protect our environment .Here is something about protecting environment in my view. First, we can go to school by bike instead of by car. Not only can it protect environment, but also it is good for our health. Second, we should save the paper, the water, the food and so on. Finally, we should protect the trees and we should plant more trees. I think if everyone want to protect the environment, our world will be much better. How to protect the environment? 如何保护环境(范文二) How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world .It’s our duty to protect our environment . No matter where we live , we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and tidy . We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places . We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment , the world will become much more beautiful and our life will be better and better . My Dream 我的梦想/ My Future我的将来 Hello,everyone! I'm ZhangYi.Today I'm very glad to stand here to share my dream/future with you. Different people have different dreams. Some people dream of making a lot of money. Some people dream of living a happy life. Some people dream of being a scientist. But my dream is different. I want to be a teacher when I grow up.I can help many students learn things well. I can play with my students, too. So we are good friends.I think if I study hard, my dreams will come true one day.