高考英语最后一讲--书面表达篇
第一部分：基本要求
在书面表达上拿到高档次的分数。书面表达在评阅时遵循语言第一位（语言高级），内容第二位（要点齐全），结构第三位（文章分段）的原则，也就是说阅卷老师最注重的是语言，换句话说是亮点，根据语言使用情况，亮点的多少而定出档次，所以考生在书面表达中语言上的亮点是得高分的关键。亮点一共有四种：一、高级词汇和语法；二、修辞手法；三、有效的连词；四、名人名言或谚语。首先简单介绍亮点当中至关重要的高级语法，以及修辞手法当中的一些技巧的使用。在书面表达中老师喜欢看到的高级语法共有五种：倒装，强调，从句，独立主格和分词结构，以及虚拟语气。
方法一:注重文章的开始句/ 主题句、承转句和结尾句,它会吸引阅卷老师的眼球。
1. With the rapid development / advance of science and technology
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, a lot of social problems have come into being.
2. Many of us take it for granted tha
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．t we can take anything from nature as we like.
3. As we all know / As is well known / As far as I
．．．．．．．．．．, the following ways a re of great help
．．．．．．．．．．．．．to ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．’．m concerned
us.
4. As an old saying goes / runs
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, “Honesty is the best policy.”
5. It is said / thought / known / reported / expected / be
．．．． reading increases our knowledge ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．lieved /
．．．．．．．…．that
and broadens our mind.
以上句子可用于文章的开始或主题句,使表达简练生动,主题突出。
6. We need to live a regular life. That is to say / That is / Namely
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, we can keep good hours and refrain from smoking and drinking too much.
7. As．． a matter of fact / In fact
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, it is health that counts.
8. Besides / In addition
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, we should not forget that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
9. The government should enforce（执行）laws strictly. On the other hand
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, the public also should develop a good habit of reducing pollution.
10. In view of the practical need of society
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, there are more and more people interested in learning English.
以上句子可用于文章承转句。注重语段衔接也是取得高分的杀手锏。
11. Last but not least
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．, there is the question of adequate funding.
12. For these reason
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．s, I think that receiving college education is wise.
13. There is no doubt/denying that
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．． education plays a big role in our life.
用于文章结论句。这种句式更能鲜明地表达出说话者的态度和观点,给人留下一个圆满的结局。
方法二:在整篇文章中,要特别注重使用一些较为复杂的结构,如非谓语动词、独立主格结构、倒装句、强调句、虚拟句、定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句等。
13. Qianmen Street is a pedestrian street, but there are trolley cars to take you not only to the shops, but also to theatres and teahouses where you can experience a truly Chinese way of life.
14. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.
15. We could do nothing but / other than wait.
16. Given a chance, I can surprise the world.
17. Television has so many advantages. It keeps us informed about the latest news, but also provides entertainment in the home.
以上非谓语动词的使用使句子显得更简洁,更高级,必定会获得阅卷老师较好的印象。
18. Then my smile should go to myself, for only in this way can I gain more confidence in smiling my troubles away and live a better life.
19. Only when we realize the importance of environmental protection can we care more about nature and build a harmonious relationship with our earth.
20. Gone are the days when farmers live in the poor houses.
21. Not only should we students study hard, we also should know how to enjoy ourselves in our spare time.
倒装句有意“打破常规”,使句子带有强烈的情感色彩,使行文错落有致。
22. It was because the traffic was very heavy during the rush hour that I was late again.
强调句式的使用使得写作重点突出,给读者留下了深刻的印象,同时使文章结构更加紧凑、行文节奏婉转流畅。
23. Our headteacher treats us as if we were her own children, so all the students in our class think highly of her.
24. It’s high time (that) we did something to improve our environment.
运用强调句式和虚拟语气的效果能化腐朽为神奇,改平淡为传神。
25. What’s exciting and interesting is that we can exchange language lessons, with you teaching me English, and me teaching you Chinese!
26. The suggestion that students should learn something practical is worth considering.
27. One advantage of playing the guitar is that it can give you a great deal of pleasure.
28. To own a colour TV set in each family, which we thought was impossible twenty years ago, now has
become true.
这样的句子让人感到“头重脚轻”或“头轻脚重’,它会显得与众不同。
提示：特别注意用分词结构
在所有的高级语法中，阅卷老师最喜欢看到的是独立主格和分词结构，其次是剩下的几项。但很多学生不知道如何在文章中使用这个最大的亮点。其实几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格或分词结构，时间状语从句，原因状语，条件状语等。例如条件状语从句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何变成独立主格或分词结构呢？学会下面的口诀，如果你的作文中有状语从句，马上可改成独立主格或分词结构这个最大的亮点。
口诀：一去，二看，三改。一去：去连词；二看：看主语；三改：改分词。
If such is the case, you should apologize to her.按照这个口诀来改，第一步，去掉连词if；第二步，看前后两句话的主语，前后主语不一致，所以要改成独立主格；第三步，改分词，is 变成分词是being，所以最后变成Such being the case, you should apologize to her.就变成了独立主格。如果前后两句话主语一致，就变成分词结构，例如2005年高考书面表达中的一句话Because I am a student, I’d like to know the price for students. 改成Being a student, I’d like to know the price for students.其他想表达状语从句的时候几乎都一样。所以想表达由于，因为，如果等都写成独立主格或分词结构会让阅卷老师多给几分。
二、在用词准确、得体的基础上,选择较为高级的词汇,或一些熟悉词汇的较高级用法,正如一叶知秋,体现了作者驾驭语言的能力,想不得高分也难。
方法一:避免重复使用词汇。有时一篇作文里会多次出现某一词时,这时表达方式的变化(用不同的单词或词组表达相同的意义),使词汇运用丰富多彩,章法灵活。
29. The new railway is still under construction. ( is being built )
30. The project is now well under way.
31. After 20 years the town had changed beyond recognition.
32. I’m awfully grateful to you for taking so much trouble to help me. (Thank you for…)
方法二:注重使用短语、习语来代替某些词,使得文章具有多彩性。
33. Every coin has two sides.
34. 25% of my classmates hold the view that doing part-time jobs will help one gain work experience and learn more of the society. (think)
35. All work and no play make(s) Jack a dull boy.只工作,不玩耍,聪明孩子会变傻。
第二部分：亮点作文
1.关于学习效率：
No one can deny the importance of efficiency in study. It not only saves us much time which can be spent in doing other activities, but also improves our memory and enthusiasm for study. Just imagine how happy you are when you make full use of every minute.
Unfortunately, despite the fact, little attention is paid to it. As a result, we feel so tired and pressured since we have spent much time on it but nothing works at last. Worse still, some of us are discouraged and quite at a loss.
So here are some suggestions that may help. First, we should develop a habit of making a study plan and carrying it out no matter what difficulty comes in the way. Second, doing exercise regularly will without doubt have positive effects on studying efficiency. Just as the proverb says, all work and no plan makes Jack a dull boy. On in this way can we study efficiently.2.关于课外阅读（南通一模）
Dear editor,
Students of today are reading more than ever before. Indeed, the importance of reading can never be too much stressed.
First of all, reading, especially out-of-class reading, enriches our mind and broadens our horizon. People say that books are the crystal of human wisdom. Through reading, we learn what cannot be learnt in our classrooms. Besides, reading is also a way of relaxation. It is so refreshing to read a story before going to bed, or after a day of study.
There’re many famous sayings about reading, like “Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body”. Then, how can we develop the habit of reading? In the first place, I believe we need to begin from an early age, then stick to it and never give up. Secondly, ……
Yours sincerely,
Jiang Ping
3.根据漫画写短文.(关于尊敬老人)
Just as it vividly shows in the picture, an old man is sitting alone on the
bench in a park, looking at a young mother holding the bike for her little daughter
while she is riding it. By the side of the old man lies a sleeping little pet dog. This
is a picture of great contrast. By the look on the man’s face, we can tell the old man feels a bit lonely. However, the little girl, enjoying her mother’s company, is playing happily.
The reason for the phenomenon is not hard to find. Nowadays, all families have only one child. So parents do whatever they can to take good care of their children. On the other hand, the children take it for granted that they should be focus of the family, who turn a blind eye to what their grandparents or parents need and feel.
As far as I’m concerned, the phenomenon should call for the attention of the whole society. Needless to say, not only the young but also the old in our society deserve good care and enough attention. The needs of the old shouldn’t be ignored. In conclusion, we shouldn’t lose the good tradition of caring for the old.