BEC商务英语中级写作指导
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BEC商务英语写作指导
教材不断更新，教法不断改革，中国的英语学习者从最初的资源匮乏，一书难求到今天的信息爆炸，却好书难求。客观的学习环境似乎在飞速往前发展，但学习者在学习的过程中碰到的问题和困惑却像是拔不掉的蛀牙，还是那么疼，还是那几颗。
英语学习从过程上来讲大致也就是：输入、输出这两个过程。若按正常的逻辑，输入的信息经过理解、整理、分类、排列组合所产生的输出量实际上应该是大于输入量的(当然不可忽视的是我们现在谈到的是外语这种特殊的输入源，因此还不得不考虑文化差异所导致的思维方式上的差异给输出造成的巨大困难)。而现实的则是大多数我所接触过的英语学习者都有一个相同的问题，那就是输入的能力(阅读能力)远远高于输出的能力(写作能力)。
造成这个结果的因素颇多：有些朋友大量阅读，却没有积累;有些朋友有所积累，却不加思考;而这个结果的表现形式也各式各样：*内容贫乏、连贯性差、语言干瘪、中式英语表达。*仅仅就一个方面的因素和一种形式的结果展开讨论，并给出一种建设性的解决方案，广大学习者参考。
有学生经常感叹写作时文思枯竭，就算是生挤出来聊聊数语也是句式单一，而且总是以简单句为主。无奈之中难掩对于写作长句的渴望。其实我经常跟学生讲，抱怨、嗟叹都不解决问题，好的素材其实就在手边，关键是看你能不能真正做到“如切如磋，如琢如磨”。比如新概念英语第三册全册六十篇*，*内容涉及广泛，句式丰富多变，各种长句形式层出不穷。仔细研习新概念英语三册实在是解决这一问题的一个不错的方法。
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比方说写人的时候，我们常常为了立体全面的介绍一个人而大费周章连续使用两个，三个甚至是四个句子来介绍。这样一来不仅笔墨费尽，而且还往往吃力不讨好。试比较一下两组不同的写法：
1. William Shakespeare is British. He was considered to be one of the greatest writers in England. He was famous for his plays.
2. William Shakespeare, a British, who was considered to be one of the greatest writers in England, was famous for his plays.
通过对比大家会发现两点：
一、第二种写法的质量明显更高，它满足了我们在写作中对长句的需求。
二、这两组句子在内容上没有任何区别，区别的仅仅是形式。
但是同时大家也会思考：这只是一个例子，是否具有普遍性或者普遍意义?答案是肯定的。首先，这个句子的普遍性在于这个句子的本身的作用。它本身的形式可以放在任何一篇写人记事的*开头，也可以放在任何一篇议论文中引入例子的时候用于介绍例子当中的主要人物的背景。在新概念英语三册中就可以找到不少的这样的句子的范本，比如：
【Lesson17, NCEIII】Verrazano, an Italian about whom little is known, sailed into New York Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.
【Lesson24, NCEIII】… the heroine, a dear old lady, who had always been so kind to everybody, had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.
试比较：
1.Verrazano was an Italian. Little is known about him. He sailed into New York Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.
2.The heroine was a dear old lady. She had always been so kind to everybody. She had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.
经过以上的分析之后，相信剩下的问题就只剩下一个：面对这样的句子我们应该如何去操作呢?操作的部分分两步：长句都是由短句合并而来，所以我们首先需要对简单的短句进行分析，然后再选择合适的语法手段将之合并。通过分析不难发现，这三个短句所讨论的都是同一主体。这时候就可以使用各种可以做后置修饰或补充说明的语法手段将三个短句有机的结合起来。这些语法手段中包括了：分词作后置定语，不定式做后置定语，同位语等等。所以根据以上例句进行简单总结，并将之抽象化，我们得出一种介绍人物时可以使用的一种不错的长句句型模板：主语+ 【同位语+ 定语从句】+ 谓语+ (其他：宾语/表语/状语等)
① ② ③ ④
其中：
① 主语：人物名字
② 同位语：名词或名词性的短语，表示人物的国籍、性别、职业、特长等信息
③ 定语从句：详细阐述一个人每一方面的特征
④ 剩余主句部分：该人物跟*主题最相关的一个特征。
该用法最终甚至还可以从介绍人物这样一个范围推广到介
绍任何一个具体的事物，比如09年6月份的大学英语四级考试题目：该考题要求考生讨论的是大学校园的recreational activities (课外活动)，必须包含以下内容：
1、多种多样
2、有益也可能有危害性
3、作为大学生的看法
不管具体内容如何最开始我们都需要介绍主题：recreational activities，这时也可以使用和介绍人物同样的模板：
1.Recreational activities are things that we do to occupy our spare time. Recreational activities include various different forms. Recreational activities are considered to be both beneficial and vain.
2.Recreational activities, things that we do to occupy our spare time, which include various different forms, are considered to be both beneficial and vain.
跟之前几组例子一样，短句的堆砌显得冗长，而运用了模板以后的例句会更加的紧凑，丰满，句子内部成分长短结合，错落有致。
以上所举的例子仅仅是长句写作的一个非常细节的方面。希望广大的学习者也可以动起手来，我们从简单的句子开始着手，给我们的*里加上一个漂亮长句，让我们的写作变得有“特长”。
BEC商务英语中级写作常用句型
第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型
一、对立观点命题形式的首句
1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A .
2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.
3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.
4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B .
5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .
6. In general , I prefer to _____ .
7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .
8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .
9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .
10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .
11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .
12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that
_____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .
13. When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .
14. When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .
15. While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____.
二、单一观点式
A . Agree
1. One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .
2. I would follow the reasoning that _____ .
3. Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .
4. I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .
5. After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .
1 BEC中级写作看似是BEC中级考试中较为简单的一项，但实际上也要多下工夫才能拿高分，尤其对于不以英语为母语的中国考生来说，平时不多加练习很有可能在考试时“挤牙膏”般写生硬的句子。 题目： You work for a company which is going to buy a set of equipment from China. You are asked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which is impossible. therefor you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon as possible. . Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington ,the Public Relation's manager. Ask for an advertisement for two translators. . Explain the reason. . Mention your urgency. . Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet. 讲解： 便条可以有题目，也可以省略题目。 便条开篇须有称呼语，但称呼可以比较随便。 日期部分可写在便条的右上角。 日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午，也可只写上午或下午和具体时间。只写日期也可以。 便条结尾须署上留条人的，位置在正文的右下角。 便条的形式和容简洁，故可以用几句话概括。 文语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。 便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。 便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。 基本写作格式 便条容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素; 1) Date：便条日期 2) Salutation：称呼 3) Body：正文 4) Signature：署名
BEC商务英语中级写作 为了让大家更好的准备商务英语BEC考试，给大家整理写作指导,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 拒绝信 Dear Mr. Johnson, We are terribly sorry that the repair of your cassette player is really beyond our reach. There are several reasons why we left your equipment unrepaired. Firstly, our technician in charge of the cassette player had been several days off for serious flu, the delayed the handling of the equipment Secondly, there is no parts found in the present market to replace the volume control which really needs repairing.
We have the ability to replace the on/off switch, however, the cost is too high to worth it, because you can use the amount of money to buy a new one. Accoring to our survey, this type of equipment is manufactured in 1985 and the manufacturer has gone out of business, so it is impossible for you to talk with them. We are really sorry for our helplessness Sincerely, Mason Manager BEC商务英语中级写作范文2 可行性报告 Report on installation of a new word processing On several occations, we have discussed the desiability of installing a new word processing system to replace the six-year-old stand-alone word processing system we currently use.
剑桥商务英语考试BEC中级写作技巧 沪江小编:BEC中级开考在即,在不到两周的时间内,可以迅速提高成绩的只有写作部分了。掌握BEC中级写作技巧,就可以在BEC中级作文考试中拔得头筹。沪 江英语为你准备了一些该背该记的模板、技巧,千万别错过了。 BEC中级写作考试时间是45分钟,从多方面测试考生的各项能力,包括完成题 目要求的能力,组织衔接观点的能力,语言表达的得体性,丰富性,以及语法和拼写的准确性等。主要考以下两种题型。 第一题是写一篇40-50字的电子邮件、备忘录、便条等。主要考查考生按照题目要求完成任务的能力,组织衔接观点的能力,语言表达的得体性,词语的丰富性,语法、拼写的准确性等。 应试技巧 1、仔细阅读要求,确定所要写的是电子邮件、备忘录、还是便条。注意格式。 2、一定要完成所指定的3项任务,并进行合理发挥。 3、不要完全照抄题目要求的任务提示,尽量变化一下,如果实在不知道如何变化,或没有把握,至少要把要求补充为完整的句子。 4、字数一定要控制在40-50以内,多字或少字都会扣分。 5、根据写信人和收信人的关系和要求写的内容判断使用语气的正式程度。 6、第一部分主要是公司内部交流,上级给下级写,语气不必特别正式,下级给上级写,最好采用正式语气。给平级同事写信,语气也不必太正式。上级给下级安排日常工作或下级向上级请示工作,最好用正式语气。平级之间的一般交流,可以不太正式。切记不要把不正式和不礼貌混淆,不正式不代表不礼貌。无论给谁写信都要礼貌。
7、写时别忘遵守我课堂上讲的7C原则(completeness, conciseness, correctness, consideration,clarity, courtesy, concreteness 8、注意谨慎使用缩略式(如I’m ,建议不使用缩略式,以防犯错。 9、注意单词和语法的准确性,宁可用正确的简单句,也不用错误的复杂句。 10、最好写前打个草稿,写后仔细检查。检查内容包括是否完成3个任务,单词、语法、文体是否正确、恰当,字数是否符合要求,格式是否正确等。 11、注意卷面整洁,这会给阅卷老师至少要留下一个比较好的第一印象。 第二题是写一篇120-140字的商务信函、报告或建议书。 商务信函写作应试技巧 构思正式的商务信函时,须考虑以下几个方面: 1、写信目的 要明确写信目的,是为了提供信息,咨询,还是投诉等?希望得到什么结果? 2、读者对象 明确读者对象,使用正确的文体,得体的语言。 3、条分缕析 分段有助于增加行文的明晰程度,增加信函的可读性。写信要清楚分段,有条理的表达自己的观点,每段只表达一个主题。也可以适当用弹点、数字等技巧以帮助读者理解自己的信。 4、常用表达 要使用商务信函常用的表达,那样会显得很专业,给读者留下很好的印象。
BEC模拟试题集写作例文 PAPER 1 PART ONE Dear Ms Feng: Can we meet as soon as possible to discuss complaints about the delivery of our carpets? I wonder if we can enlarge our warehouse facilities or send our goods by express rail.(35words) PART TWO Dear Mr ho; Thank you for you letter of 23 November. We are delighted to know that your customers find our machines useful. The inclusion of business terms is an excellent idea, and we shall develop this idea. We shall also produce special cards which can be fitted the translators to provide more languages in the next model. However , the inclusion of a leather case would add considerably to the price of our machines and might not be necessary as the casing is very robust. Finally, we are taking steps to supply you immediately with 200 electronic and 300 language translators. Yours sincerely Wang Luen fung General Manager (110words) PAPER 2 PART ONE Because of shortage of space, employees have put heavy boxes near fire doors. There should be access to fire doors as workers must leave the building quickly if there is a fire. Fire doors should be unblocked and obstructions removed.(40words) PART TWO This year the company has made a profit of RMB67 million compared with RMB33million last year. This profit has result largely from a reduction of RMB27 million in expenditure, achieved because of two factors; first, the lower cost of raw materials and secondly more efficient methods of production. Moreover, although sales in the home market have fallen, international sales have more than compensated for this fall. It is thought that sales in the home market have been poor because of the difficult economic situation in our country. In view of this, it is recommended that the company tries to identify more markets abroad and increase its exports.(108worsds) PAPER 3 PART ONE I have just heard that an important client is visiting Shanghai next week. He cannot re-arrange his visit, and it is important we meet for discussions. Could we postpone my visit to your office until the week commencing 5 September?(40 words) Part two Although Nikko tractors are average in price, the people in the survey considered our tractors cheaper. They also commented highly on the standard of servicing we provide. However, the quality and reliability of Nikon tractors were rated much higher than ours, and I recommend working on methods of making our tractors more robust and less prone to mechanical failure. Moreover, since Nikon tractors were considered more attractive in appearance, I suggest
名师指导BEC中高级写作 名师指导BEC中高级写作 商务英语证书(BUSINESS ENGLISH CERTIFICATE)是教育部考试中心和英国剑桥大学考试委员会合作，于1993年起举办的考试。它在很大程度上借用了雅思的一些出题思路。在接下来的文章中，我们从官方介绍中寻找该考试的目的，并讲解中高级写作的一般方式，以及通过官方提供的样文来分析BEC考试的作文评分方式。 首先，我们先解析中华人民共和国教育部考试中心对BEC考试的介绍。“该系列考试是一项语言水平考试，根据公务或商务工作的实际需要，对考生在一般工作环境下和商务活动中使用英语的能力从听、说、读、写四个方面进行全面考查，对成绩及格者提供由英国剑桥大学考试委员会颁发的标准统一的成绩证书。该证书由于其颁发机构的权威性，在英国、英联邦各国及欧洲大多数国家的商业企业部门获得认可，成为确认证书持有者英语能力证明的首选证书，同时也是在所有举办该项考试的国家和地区求职的”通行证“。 商务英语证书考试(BEC)由中英双方合办。英国剑桥大学考试委员会负责命题，阅卷，颁发证书。中国教育部考试中心负责报名、印制试卷和组织考试。 BEC 中级写作45分钟、;BEC 高级写作70分钟……考试答题卡由教育部考试中心海外考试处汇集后寄英国剑桥大学考试委员会评卷。评出成绩后BEC 中级分A、B、C、 D、E五等;BEC 高级分A、B、C 、 D、E五等，)，打印成绩通知单(包括不及格的D、E、Fail)和成绩证书，寄至教育部考试中心后寄发各考点向考生颁发。” 从这段文字中，我们可以看出，BEC考试不是考专业的商务知识，而是“一般中做环境下和商务活动中”的语言应用。所以，语言的本身功夫才是考核的重点。夯实语言基础在写作考试中起着决定性的作用。
Begin at the same level~~~~ 下降到最低点: 波折变化: fluctuate around fluctuation of 幅度：slightly sharply significantly dramatically a is in direct proportion to b merely roughly 一、BEC高级（Higher）Part Ⅰ——图表作文 图表作文的文章结构 1）引言部分 2）主体段落 3）结论部分 4）例文分析： The bar chart below shows the number of complaints made by consumers about different products and services in the years 1994 and 1997.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph. You should write at least 140 words. The bar chart displays the changes in the number of complaints made by consumers about five kinds of products and services between 1994 and 1997. According to the diagram, there was an increase in the complaints about most of the products and services. The number of complaints about package holidays abroad and financial services increased over the period. The complaints made about the package holidays abroad rose by 12.7% from 15,000 in 1994 to about 18,000 in 1997. And there were about 52,000 complaints about the financial services in 1997, 5.2% up on 1994. There were also more complaints about electric goods and second-hand cars in 1997 than in 1994. The complaints about the two products rose by 9.2% and 6.7% respectively. The former increased from 66,000 in 1994 to about 70,000 in 1997 and the latter went up from 80,000 to 86,000. And clothing is the only sector where the number of complaints dropped over the period. In 1994, there were around 45,000 complaints while the figure decreased by 4% to around 43,000 in 1997. In conclusion we can see there were more complaints about the products and services in 1997 than in 1994 with the only exception of clothing. ●图表作文常用的语言手段 1）作文的开头——表示“出处”的句子结构。 2）描述“数据变化”的常用表达方式 3）表示变化的副词和形容词 4）描述“数据”的表达方式 5）“大约”的表达方式 ●真题写作范例： 例一（课堂15分钟快速练习）： The graph below shows development in the ownership of mobile telephones as a percentage of telephones owned. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the changes in telephone ownership. You should write at least 150 words.
例一（课堂带写，三段式）： You are the Head of Research for an international car manufacturer. You have to make an urgent trip tomorrow to visit Pierre Blanco, a colleague who works for a subsidiary. Write a memo of 40-50 words to your secretary: ?Telling her who you are going to see and when ?Asking her to book flight tickets and accommodation ?Telling her what work you would like her to do in your absence. Write on your answer sheet. 例二（课堂5分钟快速练习，一段式）： You are a manager in a company which manufactures office furniture. Next month, you are going to London to discuss an important contract. Write a note of 40-50 words to your assistant: ?Saying when you want to leave and return ?Asking him to book flights ?Telling him which hotel to book. Write on your answer sheet. 例三（课堂10分钟常规练习，三段/一段式）： Your company has just opened a new office in the United States. You have agreed to go and work there for six months. Write a memo of 40-50 words to all your colleagues: ?Explaining why you will be absent ?Saying when you are leaving the office ?Expressing your wish to keep in touch Write on your answer sheet ——请假、缺席 ●典型的开头部分写作 ●典型的正文部分写作 ●典型的结尾部分写作 例一（课堂带写）： You would like to go to a seminar on presentation skills. Write an email of 40-50 words to your line manager: ?Requesting time off work to go to the seminar ?Saying when the seminar is ?Explaining why you want to go Write on your answer sheet 例二（课堂10分钟常规练习）： You are a regional sales manager for an international company. You have been asked to go to a meeting at your company’s head office. You cannot go, so somebody else will go in your place. Write an email of 40-50 words to Erica Young, who is organizing the meeting: ?Apologizing for not being able to go to the meeting ?Explaining why you cannot go ?Saying who will go Write on your answer sheet
良师益友网BEC 专家 BEC 写作指南 务便函与便条写作 (一)商务便函 例一 SCHOOL OF ENGNISH FOR BUSINESS MEMORANDUM To: Mr. Kingswick, Course Coordinate From: Barnsby Campbel Date: 19 November 1995 Subj ect: Lesson Plan for 28 November Lecture I intend to teach memo writing in my next lecture. I plan to cover the following parts: 1. Inside Address This is omitted in a memo. As internal communication the reason is obvious. 2. Greeting It is more polite to put Mr., Mrs., or Ms before and the office after the name of the recipient. You may sometimes address the readers as a group. 3. Subj ect This is a phrase to tell reader what the memo is about. Sometimes only he phrase is given without the word Subj ect before it. 4. Body These should be short, less than 10 lines, and concentrate on only one paragraph one idea each. Sometimes for memos with three or more paragraphs, it is advisable to begin each with a heading in capital letters to tell what the paragraph is about. Another practice is number the paragraphs for easy reference later on. 5. Carbon copy This is written as c.c. for short. As in a letter, it lists the persons who are also receiving the memo. 6. Signature Only the initial is need. The office and name in print of the write are omitted. In more casual memos there is no signature at all. Any thoughts on my notes? Anything to add? Let me know at tea break. c.c. Mr. P.L. Duke, Training Office. 例二 Internal Memorandum To:Anne Bell From: Graham Davis Date: 23 March 1992 Subj ect: Office Furniture __________________________________________________________________________ We need some comfortable chains for visitors to go in the manager s office Can you arrange it? We need 10 chains in either beige or dark brown. The maximum you can spend is $ 500. 良师益友网BEC 专家 例三
题型：1．商务书信类；2．商务便条便函类；3．商务信函类；4. 商务报告类 这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文，如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等，起草一封书信，字数要求达到120—140词左右。 题目结构： Input: 1 situation description 2 task 3 target reader Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter) Write: business letter (120-140 words) 【例题】 ●You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005. The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre. ●Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference. ●Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference Centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements. ●Do not include postal addresses. ●Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.
BEC中级“写作”应试技巧 第一题是写一篇40-50字的电子邮件、备忘录、便条等。 主要考查考生按照题目要求完成任务的能力，组织衔接观点的能力，语言表达的得体性，词语的丰富性，语法、拼写的准确性等。 应试技巧 仔细阅读要求，确定所要写的是电子邮件、备忘录、还是便条。注意格式。 一定要完成所指定的3项任务，并进行合理发挥。 不要完全照抄题目要求的任务提示，尽量变化一下，如果实在不知道如何变化，或没有把握，至少要把要求补充为完整的句子。 字数一定要控制在40-50以内，多字或少字都会扣分。 根据写信人和收信人的关系和要求写的内容判断使用语气的正式程度。 第一部分主要是公司内部交流，上级给下级写，语气不必特别正式，下级给上级写，最好采用正式语气。给平级同事写信，语气也不必太正式。上级给下级安排日常工作或下级向上级请示工作，最好用正式语气。平级之间的一般交流，可以不太正式。切记不要把不正式和不礼貌混淆，不正式不代表不礼貌。无论给谁写信都要礼貌。 写时别忘遵守我课堂上讲的7C原则 (completeness, conciseness, correctness, consideration,clarity, courtesy, con creteness) 注意谨慎使用缩略式(如I’m )，建议不使用缩略式，以防犯错。 注意单词和语法的准确性，宁可用正确的简单句，也不用错误的复杂句。 最好写前打个草稿，写后仔细检查。检查内容包括是否完成3个任务，单词、语法、文体是否正确、恰当，字数是否符合要求，格式是否正确等。 注意卷面整洁，这会给阅卷老师至少要留下一个比较好的第一印象。 第二题是写一篇120-140字的商务信函、报告或建议书。 商务信函写作应试技巧 构思正式的商务信函时，须考虑以下几个方面： 1.写信目的 要明确写信目的，是为了提供信息，咨询，还是投诉等?希望得到什么结果? 2.读者对象 明确读者对象，使用正确的文体，得体的语言。 3.条分缕析 分段有助于增加行文的明晰程度，增加信函的可读性。写信要清楚分段，有条理的表达自己的观点，每段只表达一个主题。也可以适当用弹点、数字等技巧以帮助读者理解自己的信。
商务英语中级写作真题及参考答案一 WRITING PART ONE You work for a company which is going to buy a set of equipment from China. You are asked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which is impossible. Therefor you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon as possible. . Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington ,the Public Relation‘s manager. Ask for an advertisement for two translators. . Explain the reason. . Mention your urgency. . Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet. PART TWO You work in the Market Survey institute. After careful research ,you receive four charts. Read the following charts which show , the trend of consumer confidence, real hourly wages, employment and credit development. The years are given ,while the other numbers are not presented. But the lines in the charts clearly show , the directions of development. . Use the information in the charts to write a report (about 100- 120 words) analyzing the reason why the consumer confidence increases. . Write on your Answer Sheet. 写作部分参考答案(Sample for reference)
WRITING All content points are covered, using natural sounding language and a consistently appropriate tone. All the content points are covered, though at times the register is not always entirely successful. There is evidence of an adequate range of structures and vocabulary for this level, but with some non-impeding errors.
Band 4 There is a satisfactory range of structures, with some errors, but these do not impede understanding. The content points are adequately covered, and the register is appropriate. The information is generally well organized, using headings and other discourse markers. Band 2 The organization of the report is reasonable, as is the register and format. However, not all content points are adequately addressed, a limited range of language is used, and there are some distracting error. WRITING
商务英语中级写作应试技巧 如今就业形势严峻,为了在求职中更具有竞争力,高等院校的商务英语专业学生争相报考BEC证书。剑桥商务英语考试(简称BEC)对 于中国学生而言,是一种与传统英语考试完全不同的考试模式。本文 就BEC中级的考试模式及应试技巧进行分析,希望能对考生有所启发。 商务英语中级写作应试技巧 分大作文和小作文，小作文一般为电子邮件，备忘录，通知，大作文则是根据已经给出的图文信息来进行写作，其中商务报告最常见。 1.小作文(商务书信) Dear..., 顶格或空4个字符写正文 正文3部分 写作目的 具体事宜(根据固定材料编写) 表示感谢，要求，期待 写作目的的常用句型 I'mwritingthisletterinorderto/inpurposeof Iwritethislettertoinform/notifyyouthat 空格处填动词或动名词 常见的： 投诉： placeacomplaintagainst...
complainabout... expressmydissatisficationwith... 咨询：inquireabout 邀请：extendaninvitation 建议：makeasuggestiontoyouto.. 感谢：expressmysincreregratitudetoyou 道歉：expressmyheatfeltapologytoyou 2.商务报告 格式: Reporton: To: From: Date:D/M/Y Subject: introdution findings(发现的问题) conclusion recommendation(不许提出findings中没有的问题的建议) INTRODUTING中的常用句型 Thepurposeofthisreportis Theobjectiveofthisreportis Theaimofthisreportis
BEC商务英语中级写作必背句型 英语当中有各式各样的句型，使得英语的表达方式多彩多样。如若在大脑中熟记一些闪光句型，用到BEC考试写作当中去，那定会给你的作文增色不少，成绩也自然就会高。 1.It作先行主语和先行宾语的一些句型 She had said what it was necessary to say. 2.强调句型 It is not who rules us that is important,but how her ulesus. 3.“All+抽象名词”或“抽象名词+itself”（very+形容词） He was all gentl enesstoher. 4.利用词汇重复表示强调 A crime is a crimea crime. 5.“something（much）of”和“nothing（little）of”“something of”相当于“to some extent”，表示程度。在疑问句或条件从句中，则为“anything of”，可译为“有点”，“略微等。”“译为毫无”，“全无”。“muchof”译为“大有”，“not much of”可译为“算不上”，“称不上”，“little of”可译为“几乎无”。 something like译为“有点像，略似。” They say that he had no university education,but he seems to be something of a scholar. 6.同格名词修饰是指of前后的两个名词都指同一个人或物，“of”以及它前面的名词构一个形容词短语，以修饰“of”后面的那个名词。如“her old sharper of a father”，可译为：“她那骗子般的父亲”。 Those pig sofgirl seat so much. 7.as…as…can（may）be It is a plainasplaincanbe. 8.“Itisin（with）…asin（with）” It is in life a sina journey. 9.“asgoodas…”相等于，就像，几乎如；实际上，其实，实在。 The merchant as good as promised the or phanboy,that he would adopt
TEST 1 WRITING You are a manager in a large company.you have been informed that a member of you staff often arrives late for work. Write him a memo about the problem: 1.saying how often the member of staff arrives late 2.Describing the effect on other staff 3.Suggesting what the member of staff should do about the situation Band 5 PART TWO Sample C
Band 4 TEST 2 You are the managing director of a company whose profit have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this. Write a memo to all staff: 1.Thanking them for their contribution 2.Explaining why profits increased. 3.Telling them what their reward will be. Band 4
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TEST 3 You are the managing director of a manufacturing company.your factory will soon have a visit from health and safety inspectors. Write an email to your department heads: 1.saying how long the inspection will take. 2.Explaining why the inspection is necessary 3.Telling them how they should prepare for the inspection. Band 5