Overview
Revision
2020年写作评分标准
2020年作文共20分，评分标准包括内容8分，语言8分，组织结构分4分。如果学生的作文内容充实，不写废话；上下文连贯；用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误；词汇和句型句式运用恰当，多见好句型和习惯表达用语者，才可给4分结构分。一般情况下，学生要得到4分组织结构分，内容和语言积累得分在15分以上者（含）。作文内容和语言累积不足15分者，如文中有值得肯定的好的句型和表达，可酌情考虑给1-3分组织结构分。但是如果作文的通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏，即使在习作中无语法错误，一般亦不予给组织结构分。
自从2012年中考写作有了结构分后，改变了以往评价作文只从内容和语言两方面评分的单一性，近年来中考组织结构分的不断调整和上升，也充分体现了对于学生英语语言能力更高要求。
在平时的写作阅卷及历年的中考英语阅卷中，我们常常将评分细则综合成五个档次。在评分时，阅卷老师先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
A档：16-18分
B档：12-15.5分
C档：8-11.5分
D档：5-7.5分
E档：1-4.5分
以下表格是教育部五级写作评分标准各档次的给分范围和要求，相信对中考英语作文评
Introduction
说到写作，大多数学生都会头皮发麻，觉得很难把握，是一个非常棘手的问题。的确，由于初中生词汇量的有限，有时又受到汉语思维的干扰，所以就不能正确的遣词造句，切中题意，久而久之就惧怕写作了。但是，在英语学习中，写的能力是一种非常重要的语言能力。他是通过书面形式来表达作者的思想、观点，从而达到传递信息的目的。写作主要考查同学们实际运用英语的语言能力和初步的交际能力，而且写的水平在很大程度上能说明你语言能力的优劣。因此每年的中考都有写作这一考查的内容。随着英语学科教改的不断深入，初中阶段写作的要求比以往几年提高了，分值也提高了。所以同学们一定要重视写作的技巧，要消除畏惧心理，排除心理障碍。
初中阶段英语写作的常见题型：
1、是根据所给标题写作
2、是根据英语情景提示写作
3、是根据英汉提示写作
4、是看图写作。
写作的题材一般是写人、写事、写物、写景、议论、日记、书信、通知、便条等应用类文体。一般来说，不同的写作题材，它的人物，时间，写作的重点也是不尽相同的。这节课就着重讲解训练关于人物的写作训练。
写人重写外貌特征如果是写人的，一般我们用第一或第三人称写，时态一般用一般现在时。写人的文章，学生们一定要注意用词的恰当。
比如，我们能说He is very tall, 我们不能说He is very high.
我们能说He likes his job very much. 我们不能说He very like this job.
只有正确的遣词造句，才能写出通顺的话，表达你想要说的意思。
一．brainstorm(vocabularies and phrases)
T: When we mention people, what vocabularies and phrases can we use?
名词：favorite actor , comedy，pen pal, shop assistant, doctor, reporter, policeman, waiter, bank clerk, policewoman, nurse, police, man, hair, height, build, captain, person, beard, glasses, look, singer, sex, king, host, members of the family, university, engineer, pilot, dream, artist, instrument, talent, talent show, success, achievement, medal, championship, violinist, pianist, programmer, exhibition, resolution，high school, college, computer programmer, house, apartment, dream job
动词：go to movies, go to see Beijing opera，be like, be from, work as a teacher, be of medium build, be of medium height, look like, wear glasses, perform, become, skate, tour, travel, hold, be good at, like to do, take part in, have a yard sale, get good grades, get a part-time job, make more friends, make me laugh, major in, grow up, live alone, keep a pet, look smart, make a living, get married, dress casually, used to…, be terrified of…, give up, worry about, take pride in, pay attention to
形容词：successful, boring, hungry, smart, kind of, ugly, clever, friendly, beautiful, shy, other, lazy, young, surprised, relaxed, curly, straight, tall, medium, thin, heavy, popular, blonde,
good-looking, a little bit, brown, unfriendly, outgoing, calm, serious, tall, long hair, short
hair, curly hair, funny, heavy, quiet, talented, loving, creative, kind, well-known, rich,
cool, popular, wild, athletic, funny, outstanding, unusual, national, alive, professional,
polite, friendly, beautiful, interesting, short, tall, outgoing, funny, shy, serious, friendly, quiet, excellent, devoted（投入的）, easygoing, outgoing, passionate（有激情的）, energetic，strict, patient, kind, weak/poor, confident
(一)如何写提建议的短文 在书面表达中，经常会出现针对某人，某事提建议的写作要求。在写此类短文时，常常注意以下几点： ①掌握常用句型，根据提供的情景、提示等，明确需要提的建议，咱展开合理的写作 要求语气委婉、有礼貌。②在写作过程中，要先对表述的观点表达自己的看法，然后提出自己的建议和意见，③注意所提出的建议和意见要有条理性，逻辑性。④最后还要有总结的语言来归纳自己的观点。 假如你是李玲，是英国 中学生露西Lucy的笔 友，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信的内容写一封70词左右的回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈你的看法，同时提Array 出一些建议，告诉她应该做什么，不应该做什么。 范文模板： Hi，Lucy, Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and there's nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I don't think what you do is right since you are a student. You'd better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. I 'm sure they'll help you. Running away to Hollywood
中考英语作文写作技巧总结 中考写作注意事项： 知识点1： ①记叙文之人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名，外貌，性格，爱好等多个方面，但是不能出 现真实的姓名，校名及家庭住址。 ②考试时最好以学生身边普通的人物进行描写，从平凡的人中找到不平凡的精神。考试的时 候需要严格按照题目要求进行写作，包括所给的全部信息，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 ③议论文体裁特点：要求学生就某一方面的问题通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来发表自己的看 法。一般来说，议论文由论点、论据、论证三部分组成。 1）论点要正确无误。 2）论据要可靠充分。论据可以是人们公认的真理，也可以是经过实践考证的经典著作。 3）论证要合理严密。人们常用的论证方法有归纳法、推理法、对比法。 4）议论文一般按提出问题、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排层次。 知识点2：写作思路 1.认真审题，理清思路: 确定题目中的关键词，文章体裁和主旨。 2.搜集材料，制定提纲: 展开一次“Brain Storming”即头脑风暴，对该题引申出各种联想和论点。根据自己已有的经 验和词汇量选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的方面和论点来写作。
3.选择词句，动笔行文: 确定基本的写作时态，如记叙文通常用一般过去时 典型案例分析： 1. Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情景写一封不少于60 词的信) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. （假如你是Joe, 你的好朋友Betty 因为过于在意考试结果而感到焦虑。请给她写一封信，谈谈你的看法，并给她一些建议。） 。） （注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分 ．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．． 第一步：分析题目 1. 审题 1) 这篇文章根据题目要求，我们可以确定文章的是一篇应用文即：书信。 2）根据写作要求知道是给他人提出建议或意见的文章，需要针对Betty遇到的问题实际出发来进行写作。 2. 确定写作重点和写作目的。 1）重点是安慰处于考试焦虑的Betty。 2）给出解决问题的建议。 3. 书信的格式： 英文信一般可以分为下列几个部分。 1）信端（Heading）即写信人的地址和发信日期。 2）收信人姓名地址
1.沉迷网络游戏 题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。 提示词：give up, concentrate on, be (become)interested in ★范文Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it’s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon.
初三英语作文题目大全 【篇一：中考英语作文题目集锦】 中考英语作文题目集锦. 请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇日记。 1. 写作要点提示： 1）汶川发生地震，李华来襄樊和叔叔住在一起，成了我们的新同学。 2）我们对他十分友善。送他爱心卡，鼓励他坚强；与他一起做游戏；带他参观学校…… 3）我们竭尽所能给予帮助。捐出书包、作业本、字典……；他英语学习有困难，我帮他复习功课，教他学习方法…… 4）李华激动地说，我们不仅是他的同学，也是他的兄弟姐妹，这里就是他的家。 2. 写作要求： 日记内容应包括所提示的要点，语言要流畅，可适当增加情节，以使短文意思连贯；日记字数90词左右，日记开头已给出，但不记入总词数，也不得抄入答题卡。 monday, may 21st fine a terrible earthquake happened in wenchuan. ______________________________________ 短文写作。（本题12分） 同学们很快就初中毕业了。马上要迎来快乐的暑假和精彩的2008北京奥运会，你的心中是否充满期待？请用英语写一篇90词左右的短文，和大家分享你心中的暑期计划。 内容要求： 1. 主要选择通过电视或现场观看哪（几）种比赛项目？最喜欢哪（几）位体育明星？为什么？ 2. 主要安排哪（几）项体育锻炼活动？（包括时间、地点和目的意义等） 书面表达（满分20分） 假如你是李明，你的美国笔友jack给你发来email，想在暑假到北京看奥运会期间来芜湖参观旅游。请根据下表提示，为jack制定一份“芜湖一日游”计划，并发email给他，介绍相关内容。 上午游鸠兹广场、镜湖公园，去步行街购物
20 个话题的经典文 1. 沉迷网络游戏 华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢? 提示词：g ive up concentrate on be (become)interested in ★文 Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and he fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him. Firstly, I think it ’ s very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly, I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his health, especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then I'll ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can do it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, I'll ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, I'm sure he will make great progress soon. 2. 怎样学好英语 世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已经成为人们沟通的桥梁。怎样学好英语是我们一直在探索的问题。几年的学习经历你一定积累了许多成功的经验，请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。 ★文 How to learn English well English is important and useful to us. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions. First, we should often listen to the tapes, English songs and programs. Watching English movies is also helpful to us. Second, we should speak English in class as much as possible. Don ’t be afraid of making mistakes. The more you speak, the fewer mistakes you ’ll make. We'd better join the English club and practice with others. Third, we can read more English newspapers and magazines. It’s good for us. At last, we should recite some good passages and keep diaries. In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well. 3. 如何减压让生活更美好 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力,为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"Less Pressure, Better Life" 为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,容包括: (1) 同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么; (2) 我的压力是什么; (3) 我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。
中考英语作文——命题作文30例 1、书面表达(10分) 以“My Best School Trip ”为题写一篇60字左右的短文，介绍你的参观情况。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 答案 My Best School Trip Last school trip, I went to the beach with my classmates on the bus. We had great fun playing on the beach, swimming in the water, surfing, fishing and we took many photos there. Later we visited the Blue Water Aquarium. We saw many different kinds of fishes there. There were sharks, seals, octopuses and so on. Some were big, others were small. In the afternoon, we went to the shop and bought many gifts. Finally, we had a big sea food dinner. We were tired, but really happy. It was my best school trip. 2、书面表达。(15) 学校英语社团在举办英语征文比赛。请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用 英语以“Learn to smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。
中考英语作文八大技巧 第一招：审题细心 审题好比驾驶员打方向，方向对了，哪怕开得慢点，也会顺利到目的地。如果审题不清，书面表达的成绩不知道会有多惨。学生真正开始写作前，必须花相当一部分时间做写前阅读、思考等准备，包含以下四方面： 1审体裁。根据情景提示首先要弄清写何种体裁文章。 2审结构。明确开始部分、正文部分和结尾部分，定好段落。 3审格式。如日记、便条、书信、通知的格式等。 4审内容。弄清什么必需写，哪些略写，尤其是图画式书面表达，要学会连贯性，读懂图的意思。 5审人称和时态。弄清书面表达要求用何种人称，根据材料确定短文的基本时态。 第二招：衔接流畅 恰当使用逻辑词语，使各要点间连贯，行文通顺。 表并列或递进:and, both…and...,neither…nor, not only…but also...; 表选择: or, either…or; 表转折或让步: but,although, though, however, even though, in spite of, on the contrary; 表对比: like, unlike, while; 表举例: for example, such as, that's to say; 表强调: in fact, of course, besides; 表时间顺序: when, after, before,as soon as, soon，after; 表因果关系: because, since, as, for, for this reason，as a result; 表结论: in a word, to sum up,in summary, in conclusion, on the whole. 第三招：短语地道
中考英语作文一直是热点，该如何的去开展呢?下面看看小编带来的中考英语作文范文，供大家参考阅读! 最好的旅游方式 People travel by plane, by train, by ship, by bus. To me, the best way of traveling on a summer vacation is to go on foot. 人们会乘坐飞机、火车、轮船、公交车去旅游。对于我来说，最好的旅游方式是暑假期间徒步旅游。 On a summer vacation I travel to refresh myself and to see the countryside. When I use my feet and walk on a grass covered path or among the hills I feel detached from the noise of the city and closer to the nature. And when I travel on foot I get more freedom. I can plan my own schedule. I can choose my own route. I can stop where I like. And I can see things and people that I might miss if I travel on a train or on a bus. 暑假的时候，我通过旅游去释放自己和游览乡间。当我用双脚走在铺满小草的小径或山间时，我感觉(自己)远离城市的喧嚣，并且更亲近大自然。当我徒步旅行时我可以得到更多的自由。我可以自己选择行程。我可以自己选择路线。只要喜欢，我就可以停下来。而且我可以看到很多人和事，那些我可能乘坐火车或公车旅行而错失的。 When faster and more convenient ways for travel are becoming available, I still favor using my own feet. I get much pleasure from it. 当更快、更方便的旅游方式变成通用的，我仍然支持用自己的双脚(旅行)，我从中得到了许多乐趣。 白色的世界The White World As I live in the south, I never have the chance to see snow. I wish I could witness it once in my life. My wish came true this year, because my parents flied to the north city to spend the holiday. We bought a lot of clothes. When we took off the flight, it was so cold for me, because I never experienced such coldness. The world was white for me. The trees were covered with white snow, and it was amazing. I felt like I was in the story world. But in the house, it was so warm because of the central heating. It was even warmer than the south. The most exciting thing was to play snow. I built snow men with all kinds of shapes. It was so funny. My father and I played in the snow for a long time. It is so unforgettable for me. 由于我生活在南方，所以我从未有机会看到过雪。我希望我能见一次雪。今年我的愿望实现了，因为我的父母飞到北方度假.我们买了很多衣服，当我们航班落地时，对我来说是非常的冷，因为我从未经历过这样的寒意。整个世界对我来说都是白色的，白雪覆盖着树，真是很神奇，我觉得自己就好像在童话世界里一样。但在家里，却是非常的温暖，因为有中央供暖系统，甚至比南方还暖和。最令人兴奋的事情就是玩雪了。我做了各种形状
为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。 【优秀满分范文】How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and k e ep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us. 为题，谈一下 2亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study” 三年以来学习英语的心得体会。 要求：1.要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟； 2.词数80左右。 【优秀满分范文】 My English Study How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study. When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to ed understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I want to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English. In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well. 3父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适 当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出（不计入总词数）。 提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等： 2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情（do something that you can do）,如为父亲准备一杯茶 等他下班后饮用等。 【优秀满分范文】 Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different Fa ther’s people like different kinds of gifts. If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it. No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so? 为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。 4请根据提示以“The Spring Festival” 提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日； 2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚； 3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友（friends and relatives）; 4.孩子们喜欢春节。 【优秀满分范文】 The Spring Festival
初中英语写作题目集锦 导读：我根据大家的需要整理了一份关于《初中英语写作题目集锦》的内容，具体内容：你遇到过的初中英语写作中，有哪些题目让你至今印象深刻?下面是我给大家整理的初中英语写作题目，供大家参阅!初中英语写作题目1假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑。你... 你遇到过的初中英语写作中，有哪些题目让你至今印象深刻?下面是我给大家整理的初中英语写作题目，供大家参阅! 初中英语写作题目1 假如你是一所国际学校校办英文杂志的学生编辑。你下面这封信后，也想写一篇关于该信的读后感，内容要点包括：你对此事件的看法;解释你的理由并提出你的建议;向受害者表达尽快康复的祝愿。 Today， I received the readers letter. I was shocked at it. Personally speaking， I think we should pay more attention to the food safety. The government must make some necessary laws. Whats more， some businessmen shouldnt be only interested in making money. They must care about peoples health. Wed better not eat anything in dirty places though some food is delicious， because eating unhealthy food does harm to our health. Finally， I hope the family in the accident will get better soon。初中英语写作题目2 毕业感想
中考英语作文范文30篇文章 Model Writings （以下30篇文章仅供同学对不同题材的参考） 句型：下划线 词组短语:黑体 精美句子：方框 1. How to Make Friends It’s hard to make friends if you stay alone all the time. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests. Look at people in the eyes when you ta lk to them. Don’t be afraid to show people what you are really good at. Talk about the things you like and do best. Be a good listener. Let people talk about themselves before talking about yourself. Be friendly to a lot of people. Try to help your friends when they are in trouble because to choose from and have more chances to make friends. 2. My View on Television Television has been in our life for many years. We can’t live happily without television. It can give us the latest information and news. It can from the plays on television. We’ll be bored all day if there is no television. Television programs are attractive. After a whole day’s hard work, we can sit before the television and drink a cup of tea. How wonderful it is! Television is also bad for people’s health. It’s not good for you to watch TV for too long, especially bad for your eyes. It is true that watching TV can influence our behavior and achievement. However, it depends on what we do. 3. Talk about Internet Today，I’ll talk about going online. We know that there are too many net-bars (网吧) around us. The Internet can make our lives interesting and enjoyable. Many of us like going online very much because we can learn how to use the computer and get more information from the Internet. We can learn English. We can read some good newspapers and magazines. It can make us clever through playing computer games. I can send e-mails to our friends quickly. We can chat online with our friends. It can help us get in touch with (取得联系)
初中三年必考的15篇英语作文
初中三年必考的15篇英语作文，熟记，向着满分作文迈进！第一篇： 【写作要求】 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。 内容包括： 1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。 2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。 3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。 作文要求： 1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. 【优秀满分范文】 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water. I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. 第二篇： 【写作要求】
写作 学习目标 掌握六类写作步骤和技巧：学校情况类，节日假期类，周末活动类，个人情况类，家庭情况类和家人朋友类。 入门测 书面表达 练习1.' 元旦作为中国传统节日之一，历来为中华儿女所喜爱。每到这个节日，家家 户户都会有不同的活动来迎接新的一年，你在去年元旦做了什么呢？请回忆并且写下来吧。要求：1. 语句通顺； 2. 不少于六句话； 3. 不得出现真实姓名和班级。 ' 情景导入 你有自己的写作技巧吗？
知识集结 知识精讲 个人情况类 知识讲解
例题精讲 个人情况类
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小朋友，你们家有几口人？他们的年龄是多少？他们的工作都是什么？你能向班上的同学们做一个简单的介绍吗？ 要求：1. 语句通顺，语意连贯。 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校。 3. 不少于60字。 __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案： Hello, boys and girls. My name is Jane. Let me make a brief introduction about my family. There are four people in my family. My parents, my brother and me. My father is 35 years old. He is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He is very hard-working. My mother is one year younger than him. She is a teacher. She is kind and all her students like her very much. My brother is too young to go to school. He is very cute. I am a pupil. I am in Class Three, Grade Six. I like English best. I have a happy family. I like them very much. 例题精讲 家庭情况类
初中英语作文写作技巧 一、掌握常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词 at first; at last; in the end…then / next/ after that… when / while/as soon as/not…until… at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To one’s surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately…in a word/in all 议论文常用连接词 表示并列：either…or; neither…nor; both…and; not only…but also; 表示递进的：besides; what’s more; what’s worse; (moreover); 表示原因的：because; for…; because of…; thanks to…; (for the reason that…); 表示结果的：so; as a result; so…that…; therefore; 表示目的的：so that…; in order that…; (in order) to…; for…; 表示对比的：while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; prefer…to…; would rather do…than do…; 表示转折的：however; but; 表示举例的：for example; for instance; such as…; like…; that is to say… 表示总结的：in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; …have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb. benefit from sth. affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy…; be fond of…; be interested in…; show great interest in…; lose oneself in…; put one’s heart into…; be good at; be poor at; be weak in; 表达个人想法的： I think/believe…; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他： in general; generally speaking; to be short; to be honest; to tell the truth; as we know; make up one’s mind to do; in a way; 二、记住作文万能句式I will work hard to make my dream come true. I hope your dream will come true one day. It takes sb. +时间+to do… Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth. It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to v… It’s nice/kind of sb. to v.. It’s time for sb. to do sth. It’s a waste of time to… It’s …years/days since sb. +ved It’s great fun to do=sb. have great fun doing It’s a pity that…It’s an honor to…
2015年上海初三一模英语作文题目及范文精选 宝山区2014-2015学年度第一学期期末质量抽查试卷 初三英语 Recently there has been a discussion about the topic “Water Is Precious” in your class. Please write at Host 60 words about the topic "Water Is Precious" to express your point of view,(请以“水是珍贵的”写一篇至少60词的作文，标点符号不占格） (你的作文内容须包含以下几点) 1）Why is water very important in our life? 2）What are the causes of the water shortage? 3）How can we protect our precious water resources? 范文（1） Water is precious Undoubtedly , no man can live without water. When we begin the new day, we need water to drink, wash things, work. Farmers need water to make the crop grow healthily. The factory needs water to process the production. Animals need water to live their lives. However, polluting and wasting make precious water less and less. Some immediate actions must be taken to protect water resources. As students, we should have the sense of saving water. Saving a little day by day, it would make a big influence on protecting water. Given all of its importance and urgency, we must spare no effort to do what I have suggested you. 范文（2） Water is precious Water is the birthplace of life and it plays an indispensable part in our daily life，so water is very vital for us human. Although the ocean covers 71% of the surface of the earth ,there are many people who can’t get access to water in the world. But how can this be? Above all, the water shortage results from the huge number of people on the world who take it for granted using the water immoderately. Another reason for water scarcity is water pollution caused by farming and chemistry industry. Facing these two main reasons, we are supposed to save water in our daily life and reuse it. Only in this way can we protect our precious water resources. 崇明县2014-2015学年度第一学期教学质量调研测试卷 初三英语 Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Changes in my school".(以“学校发生的变化” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the fallowing points as a reference(以下提示仅供参考) -----What changes have taken place in your school? -----What do you think of these changes? (注意:文中不得出现任何姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)