2009-2012 一模二模作文汇编——观点类文章
作文题目好词好句2009一模
嘉定：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Exams--- A View from Junior High Students”. （以“考试---中学生之所见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其相关信息，否则不予评分。）
短文需包含下列要点：
1. Do you think exams are important to you? Why or why not?
2. What do students usually do / How do students usually feel before exams?
3. What do you think are the best ways to face exams easily? 好的单词及词组
1，It is important for sb. to do sth. 2，take part in 3，nervous 4，stay up late=stay up all night 5,review one’s lessons 6, relax oneself 7, make plans 8, in my opinion
静安：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “English homework and I!” (以“英语作业和我”
为题写话，词数不少于60个，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a guide（作文必须包含下列要点）
．．．．．．．．．．．：
?How does English homework help you improve your English?
Why? (Give at least two examples/reasons)
?Please give suggestions to your English teacher on English homework.
(At least two suggestions and give your reasons) 1，Generally speaking 2, help sb. do sth 3, make great progress 4, on one hand... on the other hand 5, suggest sb. do sth 6, would rather do sth than do 7, hate to do sth hate doing 8,not only ...but also 9,do our best to do sth
浦东&南汇：1,be busy doing sth 2, day and
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How can we relax ”. ( 以“如何放松自己”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points as a guide.（短文须包含下列要点
．．．．．．．．．）
●How do you feel as you are a Grade Nine student ?
●Write at least two ways we can use to relax.
●What is your favourite way to relax ? And tell your reason . night 3, one of the good ways for us to relax ourselves
4, at the same time 5, in addition 6,the reason for it is that 7,as we all know
8,be good for 9,be able to
2009二模
黄浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Life of Junior Three”. (以“我的初三生活”
为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
The following questions must be involved.(作文须包含以下问题的内容)
1.How is your life of Junior Three?
2.What do you do, and what do you do most often during the year?
3.Do you enjoy your life now? Why? 1,be busy doing 2, come true 3,complain about 4, deal with 5, do noe’s best to do sth 6, encourage sb to do sth 7,enjoy myself 8, find out 9, get ready for
黄浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My View on Friends”. ( 以“朋友之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，短文开头已给出，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）The following questions should be included(短文须包含下列问题的内容):
1）What’s your view on friends?
2）How are the friends around you?
3）What do you usually do with your friends?(give at least two examples)
4）How do you keep friendship with your friends? And why?
You can begin like this: 1, my view on ...is that 2, be necessary for sb 3, make friends with sb 4,get along well with sb 5, grow up 6, in return 7, look forward to doing sth 8, one another 9, share happiness and sorrow with my friends 10, prepare to do sth
In my opinion, friends…
徐汇区：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “The Importance of Family”. （以“家庭的重要性”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Suggested points.（下列问题仅供参考）
●Do your parents often help you?
●Do your parents give you any advice or suggestions? What?
●What do you think of their ideas?
●Do you feel happy? Why or Why not? 1，with the help of my parents 2, set up one’s mind to do sth 3, give advice to sb
4, worry about 5,would like to 6, on time 7, it is impottant for me to do sth
8, protect ...from
卢湾区：
Write at least 60 words on the top ic “Better Health,Better Life”. ( 以“健康让生活更美好”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
You can use the following points as a guide. （以下内容仅供参考
．．．．．．．．）
What’s the relationship(关系) between health and life?
How do you keep healthy in order to live a better life? 1，be good for 2, be bad for= be harmful to 3,run out of 4, save one’s life
5, make money 6, lose weight 9, keep healthy 10, diet on 11,it is better to do sth 12，pay attention to
Write a passage of at least 60 wo rds on the topic “My view on pet-keeping ”. ( 以“我对饲养宠物的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a guide. ( 以下句型仅供参考
．．．．．．．．）
◆What are the advantages or disadvantages of keeping a pet?
◆What’s your opinion on pet-keeping?
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）1，have advantage of 2, be easy to do sth 3, be likely to 4, at least 5, be full of6, communicate with 7, be keen on 8, help sb with sth
9, in favor of
宝山区：1，in my opinion 2, a kind of
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “How to find happiness ”. ( 以“How to find happiness”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a guide. (短文必须包含以下要点)
●What’s your view on happiness ?
●Do you agree with the saying, “ Money is happiness.” ? ( give two reasons )
●How do our students find happiness in our study and life？feeling 3, keep from 4, be against of 5, Money can’t instead of happiness 6, in fact 7,look for 8, in one’s heart
奉贤：
Write a short passage with at l east 60 words on the topic “Make our hometown green” 以“营造一个绿色家园” 为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
1.What do you think your hometown is like?
2.Why do you want to make your hometown green?
3.What do you do to make your hometown green? 1，better life ,better city 2, look like 3, used to 4, cut down 5, pay for
6, plant trees 7, prevent...from 8, rely on 9, call on 10, pay attention to
青浦区：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “How to Learn English Well”. （以“怎样学好英语”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
注意：1．不得抄袭试卷中阅读文章，否则不给分。
2．短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。Questions for reference
．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．．: （以下要点仅供参考）
1.Is there any good way to improve our English? (Give one or two examples.)
2.How can we prepare for the English Exam?
You may begin like this: （以下文字不计入短文词数）
Many students study hard to improve their English, but things don’t go better with their hard work. ┅1，once a day 2, one another 3, think about 4, share...with 5, ask for help
6, with great care 7, make a plan 8, insist on
松江区：1，prefer to do sth 2, be
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Reading helps me a lot”. （用所给题目写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
The following points are for your reference：(所给提示仅供参考)
◆What kind of books do you like to read?
◆In what ways does reading help you a lot?
interseted in 3, throw
oneself to 4, be fond of
5, change from ...to 6, be late for 7, communicate ..with
2010一模
长宁：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Dealing with pressure ".（以“应对压力”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
短文需包含下列要点
．．．．．．．．．
Write at least 60 words about the topic "Dealing with pressure (压力)"
1. Do you have any pressure in your life?
2. Where does your pressure come from?
3. How do/will you deal with it? Competitive society, the Senior
High School Entrance Examination,
achieve success, what’s more,
however, make every effort to do
sth.
In such a competitive society, everyone has his
pressure. So do I.
it’s difficult to achieve success because of the
large number of students who will take part in it.
Whenever I get bored with my study, I will……
I will make every effort to do everything as I
believe “God helps those who help themselves.”
黄浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "Shanghai". (以“上海”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。首句已给，不记入60个词。)
Use the following questions as a guide.
●What do you know about Shanghai?
●What are the people 'm Shanghai like?
●How do you feel as a citizen of Shanghai?
Modern city, financial center,
influence, be glad to do sth., accept
new things, do sth. without
hesitation, make every effort to do
sth. shanghainese
As we all know, shanghai is not only……but
also……. Shanghainese have been greatly
influenced by its Chinese and Western mixed
culture so that they are easy and glad to accept
new things. Besides, they are so kind-hearted
that whenever they find someone in trouble,
they will give him a hand without hesitation. As
a citizen of shanghai, I’m so proud of it that I’d
like to make every effort to make it better.
浦东：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “To be a green consumer”. (以“做一名Make full use of sth., had better do
sth., realize
There is no doubt that……
I suppose there are two main reasons for this
环保消费者”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Sentence patterns for reference:
●What do you think of the environment around us?
●What causes pollution?
●How can you be a green consumer? (You must introduce at least two ways.)
situation.
The first step to be a green consumer is to
do ……
崇明：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “The Internet has changed our life”(以“因特网改变了我们的生活”为题，写不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
●What was your life like before the Internet was widely used?
●What changes has the Internet brought to your way of life?
●What do you think of these changes?
Live a simple life
However
Can’t get in touch with friends
conveniently
Excellent
Play an important part in
Undoubtedly
Great changes have taken place in my life.
Undoubtedly, my life is becoming ……
The Internet is playing an more and more
important part in ……
松江：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Sports and my life”. （以“体育锻炼和我的生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
The following points are for your reference：(所给提示仅供参考)
1. What’s your favourite sport?
2. How do you play it in your free time?
3. How does the sport influence(影响) your life?
Influence
In favor of
Undoubtedly
Frequently
Among all the sports, I like ^^ best.
Make the best use of my spare time to do sports.
Undoubtedly, my life has been greatly
influenced by ……
宝山：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Who Should Do The Housework At Home?" (以“谁该在家做家务”为题，写不少于60个词的短文)
Use the following points as a guide:
Be responsible for
In charge of/ take charge of
In my pinion
Take an active part in
We always consider mom as the first person to
be in charge of the homework.
However, ……
1. Should mother always be responsible for the housework?
2. Do you think children should share the housework with their parents? Why or why not?
2010二模
长宁：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Traffic in our city”. （以“我们城市的交通”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a guide. （短文须包含下列要点）
●What do you think of the traffic in our city?
●Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons)
●What is /are your suggestion(s) to improve the traffic in the city?
Crowded
Definitely
On one hand……, on the other
hand……
In my pinion
Main reasons
Not only, but also
Improve
Situation
There is no doubt that……
The better life people live, the more cars there
will be on the road.
We should not only ……but also ……
虹口：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Homework in our study”. (以“我们学习中的家庭作业”为题写一篇至少60字的短文，标点符号不占格)。
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a guide（短文须包含下列要点）：
●What do you think of homework in your study?
●Why do you do your homework every day?(At least two reasons)
●Is there too much homework in your daily life?
●What do you want to say to your teacher or your parents?
Extremely
Especially
Complain about
Sincerely
Be strict with
suppose
There is no doubt that
The reasons are following.
To be sincere, I suppose
静安：
Write a short passage of at least 60 words about the topic “Where there is a will, there is a way.” (请以“有志者事竟成”为题写话。词数不少于60个。要求内容连贯，表达清楚。标点符号不占格。)
Principal
Never give up
Insist on sth.
Persistence
As an old Chinese saying goes: “……”
There is an impressive thing that I have
experienced.
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Suggestions: (以下建议仅供参考)
What do you think of this famous saying?
Give example(s) to support your idea(s).
Do you have any suggestions to others?
Persist persevere
闸北：
Write a lett er of at least 60 words on the topic …Please understand me, my dear parents?.（以“我亲爱的爸爸妈妈，请您理解我”为题，给父母写一封信，不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Suggested questions:
●What is the problem that you and your parents cannot agree on with each other?
●What’s your opinion about it?
●What’s your parents’ opinion?
●Why do you want to do so? Try to persuade (说服) your parents.
Confuse
Conflict
Blame sb. for sth.
As for myself
Pressure
Stress
Be full of
I think ……while my parents suppose……
What I’d like to tell my parents is that……
As an old saying goes: ”No pains, no gains”, I
will make every effort to improve myself.
黄浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Dream Life of Senior High School”. （以“我向往的高中生活”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。首句已给，不记入60个词。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following questions as a guide. （下列问题供参考
．．．．．．．）
●What senior high school life do you like?
●What do you hope to do in the senior high school?
●What kind of teachers and friends do you expect to have?
Colorful
Excellent
Well-behaved persons
Not only……but also……
Warmhearted
Hardworking
I’ve been dreaming about my Senior High
School life for a long time.
I can not only ……but also ……
I believe I can……only if……
浦东新区：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “The subject I dislike most”. (以“我最不喜欢的Chemistry
P.E.
Of all the subjects, I dislike ……most.
We have studied ……, among which I
学科科目”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) Use the following points as a reference. (下列要点仅供参考)
★Which subject do you dislike most?
★Why do you dislike this subject? (You’d better give two reasons.)
★How can you improve this subject in future?
Physics
With the help of sb.
Make every effort to do
Make the full use of my spare time
to do
dislike ……most.
Practice makes perfect.
青浦：
Write at least 60 words on the topic “The Important Things in My Life”. （以”我生命中重要的事”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文, 标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）Questions for reference （以下提示仅供参考）：
1)What are the important things in your life?
2)Which one do you think is the most important thing?
3)Why do you think so? （give at least two reasons至少给出两个理由）
Focus
Suppose
Consider as
On one hand, on the other hand
To sum up
Of all the things, I suppose……are the most
important things.
We focus on ……, among which I
suppose/consider ……as the important things
in my life.
2011一模
宝山：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Water Shortage"（以“水资源短缺”为题，写不少于60个词的短文）
Use the following points as a guide :
Water is very important in our life.
What is the cause of the water shortage?
What is the way to solve the problem? play an important part/role
in
be short of water
more and more serious
take actions
solve the severe problem
prevent···from
lead to
As we all know, water plays an important part/role in our daily
life.
The problem of water shortage is becoming more and more
serious.
Active and effective measures and actions should be taken in no
time so as not to make things worse.
Government should make laws to prevent factories from pouring
waste water into rivers or lakes.
We should save as much water as possible.
长宁：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic "Getting on well with make friends with
share our joy as well as our
One can't imagine a life without friends.
As for me, I like to make friends with others.
friends". (以“与朋友出好关系”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）短文需包含下列要点：
1. Do you have good friends?
2. Do you sometimes have problems with them?
3. How do you deal with the problems? sadness together
get on/along with
deal with
However, it is inevitable that we have some disagreements
between us because sometimes we only insist on our own ideas.
Through communication,we will make up and become friends
again..
嘉定：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "I'm ready for...". (以“我已准备好…”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
What are you ready for?
What have you done to get ready for it?
3. Do you think you can eventually do it perfectly? be keen on
stay up
waste a lot of time doing
something
make the decision
give up
make progress
develop good habits
I’m keen on···
It takes me much time to do sth.
I make up my mind to give up ···
It affects not only my health but also my study.
I believe that I can make progress.
Sometimes, I stay up until midnight so that I can’t get up early .I
金山：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic " I want to be an environment protector”
Use the following points as a guide:
What are the problems of our environment?
Why do you want to be an environment protector?
What will you do to protect the environment? Be responsible for
Take care of
Stop···from
instead of
more and more
Nowadays the problems of environment are becoming more and
more serious.
The earth is our only home and we have the duty to take good care
of it.
The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives we will have .
Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.
静安：
Write an article of at least 60 words about the topic "OQ or MSN or Fetion - a good way to communicate |with friends!'' (请以“QQ或MSN或Fetion——一种与朋友交流的好方式！”为题写话。字数不少于60个。要求内容连贯，表keep in touch with
with the help of
Chat with
In time
It's a great way to keep in touch with my friends.
I enjoy using QQ not only because it helps me get touch with my
friends but also provide a useful way of knowing new friends.
达清楚。标点符号不占格。)
(注意：中文不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分) Suggestions: (Choose one of the above ways to write your article.") (请选择一种方式进行写话)
﹡What do you know about “QQ” or “MSN” or “Feton”?
﹡Have you ever used it (QQ or MSN or Fetion) to communicate with your friends?
﹡Who are the people you often communicate with? What are your topics?
﹡How do you like it? What are your reasons?
卢湾：
Write at least 60 words to your friends on the topic "How to Use Computers Correctly?".
（以“怎样正确使用电脑”为题写一封不少于60个词的信给中学生，标点符号不占格。）
（注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。信的开头和结尾已给，所给部分不计入字数。）
You can use the following points as a guide. (以下句型仅供参考)
Tell your feelings.
Introduce computers' advantages and the students' problems.
Give your advice. Dear friends.
How time flies!
I wish you a colourful school life!
Yours. Prefer to do sth rather than
do sth
Spend ···in doing sth
Control our time
Be good for
Do harm to
Nowadays, computers play an important part in people’s daily life.
It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get
knowledge from it.
However, some students prefer to play with computers rather than
use computers as a study tool.
It is not good for their eyes and does harm to their studies as well.
It's very important for us students to learn to control our time to
play computer games.
We must not spend too much time using computers
闵行：
Write at least 60 wo rds about the topic “Is it good for more people to own cars?”（以“更多人拥有小汽车是好事吗？”
为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号
不占格。）
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名
及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Use the following points for reference.（以下问题供参考）
●Do you think it is good for more people to own cars?
●Give your reasons.
(If necessary, please give your suggestions.) afford to do
heavy/busy traffic
More and more people can afford to buy cars.
In my opinion, I don’t think it’s good for more people to own cars.
The more cars people have, the busier the traffic will be.
浦东：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “study brings me______”（以“学习带给我______” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名及其他相关的信息，否则不予评分。）Use the following points as a reference .(一下内容仅供参考)
What does study bring you?
Why do you think so?
How do you study?(give a example/examples.) enrich knowledge
broaden mind
take part in
learn from
bring sb. sth.
Study can not only enrich my knowledge and broaden my mind,
but also bring me lots of fun .
What's more, study always teaches me how to be honest, confident
and knowledgeable.
I think we can learn not only from our teachers in the class , but
also from the books we read, the activities we take part in, or the
movies we watch.
普陀：
Write a passage of 60-80 words on the topic “I can lea rn about ______ from our school activities”.（以“学校集体活动让我懂得了。。。”为题写一篇60-80词的短文，标点符号不占格。）（共18分）
Suggested questions”
What school activity (ies) do you like best?
What can you learn from it/them? take part in
be good for
cooperate with
work with
All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.
Taking part in various activities is good for our studies.
Through cooperation, I understand what team spirit is.
It's very important for us to learn how to work with others.
松江：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The best way to make me happy". ( 以“最能使我快乐的方法”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
The following points are for your reference: (所给提示仅供参考)
What are the ways to make you happy?
Which way do you think is the best one to make you happy? (give at least two reasons)
Why do you feel happy in this way? feel unhappy
make ``` happy/ralaxed
Sometimes things go wrong and I may feel rather
upset/blue/depressed.
The best way to make me happy is ···
···can make me relaxed and give me much pleasure.
2011年二模
宝山：
Write a passa ge of at least 60 words on the topic “Everyone Needs Help”（以“每人都需要帮助”为题，写不少于60个词的短文）
Use the following points as a guide:
1 Did you get any help from others before?
2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?
3 Tell your story. Deal with
Be willing to do
warm-hearted
Be thankful to
Try one's best to do
In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people
and things.
People who are willing to help others will also be helped.
As the saying goes that a friend in need is a friend indeed.
Nobody can live in the world without friends.
Helping others can bring us much happiness.
I am always thankful to those who help me before because they
try their best to let me know I am loved.
It.s no doubt that everyone needs help. I also have the
experience on helping others.
I hope more and more people will realize the importance of
helping others.
长宁：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “ To be a student with good manners”.
( 以“做一个有礼貌的学生”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号play an important role in our life
obey rules
Give others a hand
do him a favor
As a student, we need not only good marks but also good
manners.
To be a student with good manners, we should do everything in
a proper way.
不占格。)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）
短文需包含下列要点：
1. Are you a student with good manners or bad manners?
2. Why do you think so?
3. To be a student with good manners, what should/shouldn’t you do in public? Politeness costs nothing and gains everything.
Nothing is impossible to a willing heart.
As we can see, a student with good manners is always welcome. we must be polite to others and show respect for them. We mustn't laugh at people when they are in trouble.
If everyone tries his best to be a person with good manners,our society will become more peaceful.
2静安：
Write an article of at least 60 words about the topic “My Weekend”
（请以“我的周末”为题写话。词数不少于60个。）
Using the following points as a guide (短文必须包含下列要点)
What do you think of your weekend? Use at least two adjectives to describe your weekend.
Tell your reasons (show at least two main activities you often do) Be busy doing/with
spend spare time doing
get into the habit of
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
My whole afternoon is occupied by homework.
Although I'm busy at weekend, I enjoy it as I feel fulfilled.
I usually have to stay up to finish them.
There is too much homework to do and too many lessons to
have.
It helps me relax myself and release the stress. I expect a
different weekend!
浦东新区：
Write a passage of at least 60words on the topic “Helping others makes me ______”
(以帮助他人使我________为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名、及其他相关信息，否则不予以评分
Use the following points as a reference.
Do you often help others?
How do you help others? Give some examples. do sb. a favor
be proud of
try to help others
cheer sb. up
as often as possible
I always do other people a favour.
When I take the bus , I sometimes give the seat to the old .
When I see the smile on their face, I.m also proud of myself.
The reason why I offer my help is that helping others brings me
much happiness.
It's meaningful for us to help people in need, so we should try
our best to help others as often as possible.
Why do you offer your help?
青浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "Changes in my hometown". (以“家乡
变化”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。文中不得出现本
和学校姓名。不得抄袭试卷内容，否则不给分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考) 4. What changes have taken place in your hometown? 5. What do you think of these changes? You may begin like this:
Great changes have taken place in... Take place Make money Living condition more and more beautiful Great changes have taken place in the past 20 years. People have found a lot of ways to make money.
But with the development of the industry, we have fewer trees. Air and water pollution is becoming more and more serious. We must do something to stop pollution and make our town even more beautiful.
People's living conditions have improved a lot.
My hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.
2012一模
宝山：
Writing a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “What Do You Think of Owing a Private Car? ” (以“你对拥有私家车的看法”为题，写不少于60个词的短文)
（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名，校名以及其他相关信息，否则不予评分）
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考) 1. what is the advantage of owing a private car? 2. what is the disadvantage of owing a private car? 3. what’s your opinion?
take advantages of
play a vital role in bring about give off polluted air do great harm to lead to traffic jams
Private cars have been playing a vital role in people's daily activities.
The development of the private cars will bring about a series of problems.
The polluted air given off by cars will do great harm to our health,.
Too many private cars will lead to traffic jams and a great deal of energy will be wasted and so on.
So I think we should take advantage of private cars and make them serve us better. 长宁： Write at least 60 words about the topic "Everybody needs help". (以“每个人都需要帮助”为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。) (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
可参照2011宝山二模
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
?Do you agree that everybody needs help?
?Have you ever got help from others? (Tell your experiences.)
?What do you do when other people are in trouble? (Give examples.)
虹口：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “What?s a nice holiday like?”(以“怎样的假日才是好的假日？”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。)
use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
? Do you often have a nice holiday?
? What kind of holiday is nice? Give at least 2 reasons and 1 example.
? What can you do to make your holiday better?
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分) enjoy oneself
have a good time
make use of
A nice holiday should be pleasant and relaxing and we can not
only enjoy ourselves but also be meaningful.
Sometimes we just spend a lot of time watching TV or going
shopping.
How to make full use of the holiday is an important question.
金山：
Write at least 60 words about the topic “Face life with a smile.”(以“笑对人生”（微笑着面对生活）为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
The following points must be included. (下列要点必须包含。)
? How do you usually face life? / Do you usually face the life with a smile? ?Especially when should you smile to face life? (Give at least two examples.)
? Why? go through difficulties
an optimistic attitude
learn from failures
complain about
calm down
think over
overcome difficulties
realize our dreams
We should have an optimistic attitude towards life.
Maybe everybody go through different kinds of difficulties in
life, but we should learn from failures and become more
confident.
Nowadays, many people complain that life is full of unlucky
things.
On the contrary, we should calm down and think over what we
want and what we should to do step by step to overcome the
difficulties and realize our dreams in the future.
So what matters in our daily life is facing life with a smile.
静安：
Write a letter of at least 60 words about the topic “A suggestion to my teacher”.
(以“给(学科)老师的一条建议”为题写一篇不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格)
The following points as a reference。(以下问题仅供参考)
?Whom are you going to give the suggestion to?
?How do you like this subject or your teacher? And your reason(s)?
?What is your suggestion？And tell your teacher your reason(s)?(Would you show two reasons?)
?What result(s) will you expect to get from your suggestion？be strict with
pay attention to
get on with
You are so strict with us that we are afraid to ask you some
questions.
I think it will be better if you give us more smile.
Sometimes you pay too much attention to our study that we
feel very nervous.
If there are more communication between us, we believe we
will get on well.
I think we will respect you and love you as well.
2012闵行：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic “My view on using the Internet.” (以“我对使用因特网的看法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
（注意：短文不得出现学生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）
Suggested questions (以下问题仅供参考)
?What are your views on using the Internet?
? Why do you think so? (Give at least two reasons.)
? What are your suggestions to using the Internet properly? more and more
important/convenient
relax ourselves by playing
computer games
what to do
How to do it correctly
order books through an online
bookstore;
be addicted to the Internet
Learn to control ourselves
Nowadays the Internet has become more and more
important for us.
The Internet brings us many things and widens our mind.
Our life is becoming more and more colorful and convenient
because of using the internet.
Even though the Internet has brought many benefits, It still has
disadvantages.
The biggest problem is that some of us are addicted to the
Internet, which will make us down-hearted and have no
motivation to study.
I heartily hope that they should learn to self-control themselves
and get out of the problem as soon as possible.
It is necessary for us to limit the time that we spend on the
internet.
2012浦东：Be in trouble God helps those who helps themselves.
Write at least 60 words about the topic "I turn to ______ when I am in trouble."(以“我遇到困难时就求助于……”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。请在答题纸作文题目空格上填上内容，比如：I turn to my friend when I am in trouble.我遇到困难时就求助于我朋友)。
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
?What is/was your trouble?
?Who helps/helped you when you are/were in trouble?
?Why do/did you turn to ________ ? (Give two reasons) Work out
Be ready to do
deal with troubles
It is quite a hard process but when I succeed in working it out,
I feel extremely excited and get more experience.
Instead of asking my teachers immediately, I choose to try to
seek an effective way to solve it.
普陀：
Write at least 60 words about the topic "The ways I deal with my problem(s) in study".
(以“我应对学习中所遇问题的方法”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
(注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名、及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
? What problem(s) do you have in study?
? How do you deal with the problem(s)?
? What can you learn from your experience of dealing with the problem(s)? instead of
on my own
think over
try my best to do
It is inevitable that everybody will meet with problems in his
study.
Practice makes perfect.
I meet some difficult math problems which are beyond my
understanding.
Instead of asking my teachers immediately, I choose to try to
seek an effective way to solve it.
of course, if I can't solve the problems after a long time, I will
turn to my teachers for help.
In the course I keep thinking over and over again.
青浦：
Write at least 60 words about the topic " A special gift to ...". (以“一份给...的特殊礼物”为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。必须把题目补充完整。)
(注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分) Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
?What is your special gift? be responsible for
have no idea
feel proud of
It's time for me to give my love and thanks back to ···
But sometimes I don't know how to express my love to
my ···
It is the first time for me to give the gift to ···
I want ···to feel proud of me.
From now on, I should take more responsibility for myself.
?Who will you give it to?
?Why do you want to give him/her the present?
松江：
Write at least 60 words about the topic " brings me happiness".
(以“...带给我快乐”为题写一篇不少于60个字的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Use the following points as a reference. (以下问题仅供参考)
1. What brings you happiness?
2. Why do you think it brings you happiness? (Give at least two examples.)
3. What have you learnt from it?
参照2011浦东一模
闸北：
Write a passage of at least 60 words on the topic … _______is more important a way to l earn the world.?(以“_________是更好的了解世界的方式”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。写作前，先完成标题。标点符号不占格。)
Some people think that reading is more important than travelling in order to understand the people and the world. Others think that travelling is more important. What’s your op inion?
(注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。) Suggested questions (以下问题仅供参考)
●What is more important a way to learn the world, reading or travelling?
●Why do you think it’s more important? (Give at least two reasons.) apply···to
in this way
be interested in
Travelling/Reading is more important a way to learn the world.
As we all know, it's very necessary for us to apply what we
have learnt to practice.
In this way we will learn more than just reading books, instead
we can enrich knowledge and broaden mind to a large extent.
If you travel more during your holidays, I believe different
places and cultures will impress you greatly.
And in the future you will be interested in ···
●What can you learn through reading/travelling?
观点对比类 一 随着生活条件的不断改善，越来越多的中国人选择出境游度假，但遗憾的是一些中国游客不文明行为屡见不鲜，这使得中国形象大打折扣。请你给全校同学写一封文明出境游的倡议书。内容必须包括： 1.你对这种现象的看法。 2.提出倡议。 With the development of the society, travelling abroad has enjoyed an increasing popularity among Chinese citizens, which, also leads to a heated discussion among the whole world about their uncivilized behaviors. Such kind of phenomenon, undoubtedly, hav e aroused the public’s concern over our whole nation’s image, and from my perspective, what it harms is not only the image, but also our dignity. So here comes the question: What can we do to promote it? First of all, the government and schools should work at improving citizens’ awareness of behaving themselves when travelling abroad, and the situation would be much better if they are fully aware that their misbehavior is closely connected with the whole nation’s image. What’s more, we should put much emphasis on the spread of the common sense of travelling abroad, the lack of which, may account for their panic and thus leading to misbehavior. From what has been discussed, the promotion of civilized traveling abroad needs joint effort of every one, and when you are travelling abroad, you should bear in mind that smiling is the best solution.
2021高考作文20个常用的作文观点和论据 1 毅力/坚持 话题：“成功来自勤奋”“学习成就天才”素材：语言大师侯宝林只上过三年小学，由于勤奋好学，他的艺术水平达到炉火纯青的程度，成为著名的语言专家。有一次，他为了买到自己想买的一部明代笑话书《谑浪》，跑遍北京所有的旧书摊也未如愿。后来，他得知北京图书馆有这本书。时值冬日，他顶着狂风，冒着大雪，一连18天都跑到图书馆去抄书。一部10万字的书，终于被他抄录到手。侯宝林正是凭着“不达目的不罢休”的坚强毅力，才成为一代相声艺术宗师的。分析：语 言大师候宝林以他的行动告诉我们这样的道理：要想成就一番事业，一要勤奋好学，二要持之以恒。 无腿飞行将军素材：苏联卫国战争期间，阿列克谢·梅列西耶夫的飞 机被击落，他在双腿受伤、冻坏的情况下爬行了18个昼夜，最后回到自己的阵地。双腿截肢后，他经过锻炼，又驾驶歼击机作战。他很重视人的体育积极性，这种积极性对健康和精神状态都是不可缺少的。他从童年时代起就喜欢运动，喜欢划船，踢过足球，当过守门员。他停飞后每天早晨拼命锻炼，每天早晨洗冷水澡，以此预防感冒。分析：对于一个双腿截肢后又重回驾驶室的人来说，那绝对是一个奇迹。奇迹的发生需要一个支撑点，那就是毅力。话题：“真正的残废”“毅力”名言：只有经历地狱般的磨练，才能炼出创造天堂的力量；只有流过
血的手指，才能弹出世间的绝唱。——泰戈尔话题：“挫折与成功”“坚守与放弃” 2 积累的作用 话题：“读书与作文”“积累的重要”巴金背书素材：著名作家巴金十二三岁时，就背会几部书了，其中包括《古文观止》。后来他谈到自己的散文创作时说：“现在有200多篇文章储蓄在我的脑子里面了。虽然我对其中的任何一篇都没有好好地研究过，但是这么具体的东西至少可以使我明白所谓‘文章’究竟是怎么一回事，可以使我明白文章并非神秘不可思议，它也是有条有理、顺着我们思路连上来的。”分析：“熟读唐诗三百首，不会作诗也会吟。”不要奇怪为什么看书多的人文章就是高人一等，巴金老人已经告诉我们答案了。 3 教育的意义/素质教育 话题：“观察与思考”“素质教育”泰国普吉岛流传着一个女孩的故事。当海啸来临之际，10岁的英国女孩蒂利首先发现了海天交汇之处的白色巨浪，她一下联想到地理课本上关于巨浪的知识——就在圣诞节前，她还在思考老师布置的关于巨浪的讨论题目。意识到灾难即将降临的她，立即说服了父母，并和他们一起动员海滩上的游客撤离。当百余名游客刚刚抵达高地时，海啸便无情地吞没了这片海滩。分析：
观点类作文1.强调重要性的句型As society develops, people are attaching more and more importance to( ). ( ) has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to day life 2 提出问题的句型Along with the increasingly rapid economic globalization/ the development of education, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that( ). There is a growing number of people who show concern about the problem of ( ) 3 描述变化的句型Now we are entering a brand new era, and great changes have taken place in ( ). With the development of economy, great changes have taken place in ( ) . IV. 提出现象的句型Recently, ( ) has been brought into public focus. ( ) has become a common occurrence in our daily life. 主体段常用句式I. 观点类1）观点表述句型Some people are of the opinion that ( ). Many people hold that ( ) 2）表述对立观点的句型Some people prefer… , while others feel inclined to … There are different opinions among people as to ( ). Some believe… while others hold… Some people claim that … is superior to… Others, however, disagree with it. 2） 表述作者自己观点的句型In my opinion/ From my perspective/ As far as I’m concerned/ To my mind,… Personally, I side with Personally, I am in favor of… Taking into consideration both sides of the issue, I tend to think that… II. 用于举例的句型Take ( ) as an example, it is a very obvious case. ( ) is a case in point. Our life presented many examples of ( ). III. 表示原因的句型1) 表示原因的动词：Many factors lead to/result in ( ). Several causes might contribute to account for ( ). 2) 主要原因There are numerous reasons why ( ), and I would like to explore a few of the most important ones here. We may look into every possible reason; however, the foremost one for it consists in ( ) 3) 其它原因Another important factor is… A further reason why is that… 常见理由1. 方便：convenient/ convenience 2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency 效率：3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; 节省和浪费：economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish 4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, selfish, isolated 5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, 人的身体健康：strength, energetic I will feel revived and energetic after I… 6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax；tired, boring, lonely ；Proper recreations will relieve you of the tension and monotony in daily life. 7. 环境：Our surroundings is seriously 环境：polluted. Environment is polluted and dirty promote/improve the quality of air in Beijing. 8. 安全和危险：safe, secure, danger, dangerous 安全和危险：put people’s lives and properties at risk 9. 经验：enrich life experience（丰富人生（经验）经验）; Y ou’re prepared to adapt yourself to the society. (做好准备适应社会）做好准备适应社会）做好准备适应社会10. 学习：broaden our horizons（开阔眼学习：（）；cultivate our love for learning（培养界）；（学习兴趣）学习兴趣）; accord us a competitive edge in the intense job market after graduation （使我们在毕业后激烈的就业市场保有竞争优势）争优势）IV. 表示措施与建议的句型There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can… We should take a series of effective steps to solve this problem. 结尾的常见句型I. 表示结论的句型From what has been discussed/mentioned above, we may conclude that ( ). Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that ( ). II. 表示总结的句型It is high time that something was done about ( ). It is essential that effective measures be taken to ( ) 书信作文I’m writing to you complain abou t/ express my gratitude/recommend sth /express my apology/ inquire about sth./invite you. 图表作文As the table/ graph shows/indicates/reveals/suggests… X increase/decrease from…
比较/对比类作文模板 模板1： The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . 模板2： Some people like A; others like B. Which one do you prefer—A or B? (1) No doubt, I choose A, because there are too many benefits that outnumber its disadvantages. But B on the other hand, has advantages no more than its disadvantages. The most important benefit of A is that________________. To achieve the same effect, B will__________________. Another benefit of A, which B almost cannot achieve, is that___________________. Although B also has its seemingly profound advantages, it can only be achieved conditionally because_________________________. After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say: to choose A is a wise action. 模板3： Some people hold the opinion that A is superior to B in many ways. Others, however, contradict A. Personally, I would prefer__________ because I think A has more advantages. There are numerous reasons why________, and I would here explain a few of the most important ones. The main reason is that___________. It can be given a concrete example_____________. Another reason why I advocate the attitude of A is that___________. Take the case of a thing that_______________. One very strong argument for A is that__________________. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_____________________. Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent, __________. But if all these factors are complicated, the advantages of A carry more weight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_________________.
描写风景的小学生作文5篇范文集锦 又是一年除夕日，家家户户正团圆，我也回到了家乡。走进熟悉的城市，却看到 了别样的风景。下面就是小编给大家整理的描写风景的小学生作文5篇范文集锦，希 望大家喜欢! 家乡换“新颜” 又是一年除夕日，家家户户正团圆，我也回到了家乡。走进熟悉的城市，却看到 了别样的风景。 我走在繁华的南雷路上，节日的大街依然人来人往，车辆川流不息。奇怪的是没 有了汽车的引擎声，没有了摩托车的呼啸声，一切都是那么安静，那么井然有序。一 辆辆汽车开过后，或灰或黑的尾气被阵阵薄烟取代，独留下阵阵淡淡的清香，空气中 充盈着阳光的味道，让人神清气爽……莫不是表妹上次说的，现在的车都是新型太阳 能源循环使用，没有尾气污染了? 走着走着，我发现临街的店铺前都多了一块透明的“广告牌”。凑近一看，这些玻 璃非比寻常，中间有一定的空隙，空隙中的空气被抽薄，有较好的隔音、隔震和隔热 效果，还融广告、照明于一体。想起来了，它就是大名鼎鼎的“吃音玻璃”的升级版吧。怪不得大街上有那么多车，居然还这么安静，都是“吃音玻璃”的功劳啊!蓦然发现，现 在余姚所有桥梁旁、临街的房子都安装了这样的玻璃，既美观又环保。看来噪音这个 隐身人也彻底地被控制住了，人们的生活环境更好了。 夜幕降临，家家户户灯火辉煌，蔬菜摆上了，鱼、肉摆上了，要迎新年了，耳边 传来“噼里啪啦”的鞭炮声，这声音是那么悦耳。因为我知道，现在每户人家放的都是 电子鞭炮和烟花。我也赶快回到家里，插上电子鞭炮，彩色的火花漫天飞舞。“快来看啊，妈妈……” “喊什么啊，还睡着呢，今天要去外婆家拜年了。”妈妈催促着。“啊，好美的一个 梦啊，妈妈，今天给我带好电子烟花……” 立秋_秋天来了 今年的立秋，与往年的立秋与众不同。往年的立秋都是酷暑难耐，而今年却异常 凉爽。你们知道这是为什么吗?因为今年有“梅超风”来袭。
高考英语对比类作文写作（正反观点类） Teaching Procedures Step1. The importance of writing about contrast（写作教学定位背景） Step2 How to arrange a good composition 1) article structure 2) words and sentence structure 3) conjunction and transitional words 4) handwriting Step3. Introduction to the structure of the argumentative writing 1) Dissusion: How to organize a good structure of the contrast composition ( 通过让学生把一篇打乱顺序的高考作文按比较好的结构排序活动实现) 三班的同学进行了一场有关英语学习的讨论。讨论的题目是：学习英语要不要从儿童时期开始？请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。 一些同学认为另一些同学认为 1．应从儿童时期开始学习英语2．儿童时期记忆力好，可以记住很多单词 3．能为以后的英语学习打下坚实的基础1.不应从儿童时期开始学习英语 2.儿童时期既要学汉语拼音又要学英语，易混淆 3.会影响汉语学习和今后的英语学习 1．Opinions are divided on this issue. 2．The students of class 3 had a discussion about whether it is necessary to start learning English from childhood. 3. In short, the students have not arrived at any agreement yet. 4. But others do not agree. Young children have to learn Chinese pinyin at school. If they study Chinese pinyin and English at the same time, it will be very likely for them to mix them up. This will do a lot of harm not only to their Chinese learning but also to their future English learning. 5．Some of them think that English learning should start from childhood. As little boys and girls have a very good memory, they can learn a lot of English words by heart. This will help them lay a solid foundation for their future English learning. ___________→____________ → __________→ __________→ _____________. 2）Summary: What should be included in the argumentative writing? Topic sentence For the opinion Ending sentence Against the opinion
(1)香蕉 我喜欢香蕉，它长长地身子，像一条小船，又像一个弯弯的月牙儿。香蕉皮金灿灿的。果肉白白的，有许多比芝麻还小的种子。 香蕉甜甜的。没有熟透的香蕉很难剥皮，就算剥开了也不好吃，有一点儿苦味。熟透了的香蕉一剥就开了，吃起来又香又甜，可好吃了。 我从小就爱吃香蕉，看见别人吃香蕉就直流口水。我有一次吃了五六根香蕉，最后连饭也吃不下了。我才知道香蕉可以当饭吃，但一会就消化了。 你知道吗？吃香蕉对身体有好处。 香蕉生长在热带地区，香蕉长在树上时是一大串一大串的。人们总是在香蕉没有熟透时摘下来，以免香蕉熟透了从树上掉下来。摘下来之后，人们把香蕉闷熟。 介绍一种水果200字作文(2)苹果 在众多的水果中，你知道我最爱吃的是什么吗？也许你会说：“是苹果吧！”对，我是最喜欢吃苹果了。 苹果圆圆的，像一个小皮球。苹果的皮有的是青青的，有的是又红又青，有女是又红又黄的，还有的是红红的。苹果的果肉又酸又甜，准让你吃一口就想吃完这整个苹果。 各种苹果都各有其用处，比如：肥胖者吃甜苹果，糖尿病吃酸苹果，解便秘吃熟苹果。苹果含有维生素、矿物质、糖类、脂质等，构成大脑所必须的营养成份。 小朋友，你们说苹果是不是最好的水果呢？ 介绍一种水果200字作文(3)梨 在许多水果之中，你知道我最喜欢吃什么吗？对了，我最喜欢香甜可口的梨。 梨是椭圆形的，像橄榄球一样，遍身又有点粗糙，又有点光滑。梨的皮有黄色的，又有金色的。只要你咬一口，就能看见那晶莹剔透的果肉，又能尝到那甜甜的好滋味，从嘴里甜到心里，真是沁人心脾。梨还可以镇咳，先把梨给挖空，然后再放冰糖到梨里，再放到锅里炖，最后把它当药喝下去，就可以治咳了。 介绍一种水果200字作文(4)火龙果 我喜欢的水果是火龙果。 它的形状是椭圆形的，颜色是“粉红色”和“黄色”色的，非常好看，我还摸了摸火龙果，我感觉它非常滑，我又问了问它的气味，啊！我问着很香了完了以后我还想切开火龙果，看看他里面到底是什么样，我就马上拿起刀把火龙果切开了，我马上看见有灰白色的小黑点儿，小黑点都不满了整个火龙果，我就咬了一口火龙果，味道可真甜啊！。 我今天的别高兴，因为我看到了世界上最有意思的火龙果。
课题: 管中窥豹——中考复习小作文之观点类微写作 教学目标 1. 知识与技能通过课前练习和质疑、上课讨论和练笔，学会中考的观点类微写作。 2. 过程与方法写作、质疑、讨论 3. 情感态度与价值观对人、对事有自己正确的看法，树立积极的人生观、价值观。 备注 一、导入 2017年的中考语文小作文做了新的调整，不再单一的考查描写类微作文，而是向 议论类、说明类微作文倾斜。这既是改革，又是创新。作为初三的考生应从容面对，有 的放矢地进行复习。所以，我们今天将通过这节课让大家掌握中考小作文之观点类微写 作。 二、什么是观点类微写作？ 1、先让学生谈谈。 2、定义：观点类微写作，一般是针对现实生活中的某一现象，要求你发表自己的 看法。（有别于议论文） 三、学习观点类微写作 1、展示课前的微写作题及学生代表作品。（打印） 2、全班一起讨论这几篇微作文，指出优点和不足。 3、分组讨论观点类微写作的步骤，老师加以指导。 解析：（1）提出观点：我认为家长送考不好 （2）解释原因：A家长在外等候，会增加学生在考场内的压力； B家长去送考，没有时间休息； C私家车增多，造成交通拥堵； D家长众多，不利于维护考场秩序 （3）提出做法：学生与家长沟通不让送考；老师与家长沟通建议不送考； 有关部门禁止送考。 （4）回扣观点：家长们，请停止送考吧！ 参考文段： 我认为家长送考不好。首先，家长送考会增加学生的压力，试想，学生在 考场内想着家长在外等候，怎能专心考试？其次，送考影响家长自身休息。家长周末来 送考，不仅身体没得到休息，心理也处于紧张状态；最后，很多家长开着私家车来送考， 不仅会造成交通拥堵，而且大批家长候在校门外，也不利于校方维护秩序。针对送考的 家长，我们可以采取以下做法：一是学生自己劝说家长不送考；二是学校老师建议家长 不送考；三是可以让有关部门出台政策禁止家长送考。综上所述，我认为家长不应来送 考。 四、随堂练笔： 学校准备为高一新生设计制作校服。原定一款参照国外校服设计的样式，男式帅气， 女式俏丽，大家很喜欢。但有家长提出，这样的校服穿上后容易使学生分心，甚至会助
观点对比类作文的模板 Some people believe (argue, recognize, think) that 观点1. But other people take an opposite side. They firmly believe that 观点2. As for me, I agree to the former/latter idea. There are a dozen of reasons behind my belief. First of all, 论据1. More importantly, 论据2. Most important of all, 论据3. In summary, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测. People hold different views about X. Some people are favor of the opinion that 观点1, while others point out that 观点2. As far as I am concerned, the former/latter opinion holds more weight. For one thing, 论据1. For another, 论据2. Last but not the least, 论据3. To conclude, 总结观点. As a college student, I am supposed to 表决心. 或From above, we can predict that 预测.
描写可爱的妹妹小学生作文10篇 她生得细眉小眼，一笑起来，眼睛会眯成一弯弯的细缝，像月牙儿似的，我的小妹妹真可爱。下面是橙子为大家整理的描写可爱的妹妹小学生作文10篇，以供大家参考借鉴! 描写可爱的妹妹范文一 我有一个刚满3岁的堂妹,她非常可爱：圆圆的脸蛋，一双水灵灵的眼睛，一个粉红色的小嘴。 外公生日的那天才有趣呢，堂妹要吹生日蜡烛却怎么也吹不灭，于是她爬上桌子“呼”地一声，蜡烛倒是全部吹灭了，可堂妹太使劲地把身子扑向蛋糕，结果嘴巴也就长满了奶油“胡须”，逗得大家哄堂大笑。 开始分蛋糕了，外公可大方了，切了一块很大的蛋糕给我说：“媛媛，你吃了我的生日蛋糕，要争取每次考试都取得好成绩，好不好?”我愉快地答应：“好，外公，我一定会努力的。”这时，我看了看堂妹那没擦干净的嘴巴，不禁又大笑起来，可是她只是睁着大大的眼睛好奇地看着我，不知道我为什么这么开心。 堂妹也有个坏习惯，就是爱哭。有一次，她非要跟我们玩“跑跑抓”不可，我们嫌她碍手碍脚，不想跟她玩，她就小嘴一咧“哇哇”地哭起来了，我用手堵住耳朵说：“天哪，太吵了”，她似懂非懂地眨巴着眼睛，脸蛋挂着几颗亮亮的泪珠说：“带我玩吗?”“好吧，带你玩行了吧，”我适可而止地说，她听到我答应跟她玩后，开心地“咯咯”地笑了起来。
你们看，这就是我的堂妹，她很逗人喜爱吧? 描写可爱的妹妹范文二 我的妹妹今年5周岁了，从我二年级起，她就来到柳州和我一起学习、生活，我们成了形影不离的好姐妹。 她个儿不高，头发黑乎乎的，头发的下面是两根柳叶眉，眼珠子亮晶晶的，就像两颗明亮的黑宝石。胖胖的小手，肥肥的脚丫，谁见了她都是喜欢的。 她非常调皮，有一天，我在写作业时，她悄悄地走进我的房间，把我的作业本扔到一边，再伸手进我的抽屉，把她能摸到的东西全部扔出来，这下我的房间都快变成"菜市场"了，妈妈走进来还说我呢!真是个调皮的妹妹呀! 这就是我的妹妹，一个又调皮又可爱的妹妹。 描写可爱的妹妹范文三 我家有个可爱的小妹妹，圆圆的脸粉嘟嘟的，炯炯有神的眼睛清澈明亮得像玻璃一样，鼻子高高挺挺。嘴巴却不够大，吃东西时，咬上一小口，嘴巴就鼓得像个小球，嘟着，说不出话来。我最喜欢在这时跟她讲话，急得她不知所措，“嗯嗯啊啊吱吱……”逗得我笑得肚子痛。妹妹还留着一头长发，乌黑乌黑的，每天缠着妈妈梳辫子。她非常地爱美，喜欢每天换着花样梳。 妹妹喜欢跟在我身后：“哥，我们一起玩划船吧!”“哥，我们搭积木吧!”“哥，晚上我们去溜冰吧!”只要我在的地方总少不了她。而且无论我做啥事她都支持、拥护我，使得我有点得意洋洋。一次吃
外貌描写小学生作文6篇 外貌描写小学生作文6篇 外貌描写小学生作文1 我有一个要好的同学，她叫李梦，圆圆的脸上长着一双水灵灵的大眼睛，和一张樱桃小嘴，黑黑的短发披在肩膀上，看上去非常文静。李梦很大度，只要别人做错的不是什么大事，她一般都不会斤斤计较。 一次，我到李梦家去玩，当她去拿玩具时，我看到了书架上有一本有趣的漫画书，我走了过去，从书架上取下了那本书，但一不小心，胳膊肘碰到了放在上面的一个精美的小相框，只听“啪”的一声，相框碰倒在地，玻璃碎成了好几块，我的心凉了一下，于是我就想：李梦会不会说我很讨厌，不和我玩了呀?我正想着，李梦从房间里出来了，我原以为李梦会吵我，要我赔一个新的相框，但是令我出乎意料的是她并没有让我赔，却关心地问道:“你没事吧?受伤了吗?”我听了，脸“唰”地一下红了，不好意思地对她说：“李梦，对不起，不如我明天再赔你一个更好的相框吧!“好了，好了!没事，我们明天再买一个就好了嘛!”她说完，便拿起扫把，把地上的玻
璃渣扫干净。 这就是李梦，一个即大度，又善良的好女孩! 外貌描写小学生作文2 小朋友，你认识她吗?她长着高高瘦瘦的个子，留着一头长长的头发，总是扎着一条马尾辫，走起路来，带着蝴蝶结的马尾辫就在脑后一摇一晃，看上去很美丽。一双灵活，敏锐的眼睛，忽闪忽闪的。瓜子形的脸蛋，白里泛红，一张樱桃小嘴配上那高高的鼻子，显得更漂亮了。她就是我的同学文文了。 文文的性格和她的名字一样，文文静静的。那你别小看她啊!唱歌、画画、看书都是她的爱好，特别是画画，可厉害了，那一张张活灵活现的彩画，都是出自她的小手，真是画什么似什么，可漂亮了。就上一期，她画的画，得奖也不小呢!看书也是她另一爱好，我们全班同学都知道，文文很爱惜时间，就连生病打吊针，也忘不了带本书到医院去看。我真要向她学习。 文文除了看书和画画认真外，还是个乐于助人的好同学呢! 我们班有一个女同学，成绩很差，平时很少同学和她玩。下课时，文文主动到她的座位，叫她读课文，计数学题，背英语单词。连老师都夸奖她是个好孩子呢!文文静静的文文同
2020年大学英语四级写作技巧：观点选择类作文备考建议 1、注重时政热点 2、总结积累相关词汇、短语及经典句型 四级作文命题类型 (1)观点类作文 a.观点选择类作文 b.观点论证类作文 (2)现象类作文 a.现象阐释类 b.问题解决类 (3)图表类作文 a.影响分析类 b.问题解决类 (4)应用类作文 a.书信 b.演讲 a.观点选择型作文 此类作文直接要求考生比较两种对立的观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，做出选择。 观点选择型关键句式
There is a general discussion nowadays on the problem of… .Some argue/ hold that…, but others set forth a totally different argument about the issue. 如今，XX问题引起了广泛的 讨论，有些人认为…，但其他人则对此持有完全相反的观点。 In reaction to the phenomenon/ in answer to the problem / in response to the on-going social change , some people believe… In their minds,…However, others maintain… .In their eyes,…对于这种现象/解决该问题/社会变化，一些人认为…不过，其他人则认为…在他们看来… Personally, I side with the former/ latter opinions. 就我 个人来说，我支持前(后)一种观点。 I am of the opinion that priority should be given to…我 首先赞成… In conclusion, it is clear that… 所以，很显然… What conclusion can be drawn from all the above said, it is… 综上所述，我们能够得出这样的结论… 观点选择类作文模板 There is no consensus among people as to the view of (_____).The opinions vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that (____).A case in point is that (_____). However, other may have a quite different view. According to them, (_____). The most typical example is that (______). Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with (_____). Admittedly, the former point of view seems reasonable in saying to some extend, but (_____) is more convincing.
正反观点对比类英语作文预测及范文 高考英语作文是高三冲刺阶段复习突击的重点，高三英语复习时要 覆盖各类作文题材，以便在考场上看到任何类型的预测都能轻松搞定。以下 小编为大家整理了正反观点对比类作文预测及范文，仅供参考。 1高考英语正反观点对比类作文分析（1）要求论述两个对立的观点并 给出自己的看法。1.有一些人认为...2.另一些人认为...3.我的看法. ..Thetopicof①-（主题） isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.Some peoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③-----理由二).Moreover,④-------(理由三). WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-(支持B 的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥--（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦--(理由三). Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧（我的观点）.Thereasonisthat⑨----(原因). Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissu relyawisechoice.（2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点Somepeoplebelievethat①（观点一）.Forexample,theythink②-（举例说明）．Anditwillbringthem③-(为他们带来的好处). Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-----(我不同意该 看法的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤-(反对的理由之二) ．FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥--(我对文章所讨论主题的看法) ．
描写小动物的作文 小兔子又温顺又可爱。 兔子浑身长满了毛茸茸的白毛，远远看去像一团棉花。它的一双红眼睛被白毛包住了，嵌在眼窝里，像镶着两颗红宝石。白兔两只长长的耳朵，足有二寸半，里面一层是粉红色的皮，外面毛茸茸的，我想它的听觉一定很灵敏。小白兔的鼻子扁扁的，嘴唇分成三瓣，总是不停地耸动着，不知是因为害怕，还是随时在根据气味寻觅食物。兔子的身子圆滚滚的，看上去挺肥。前腿又短又小，后腿又长又有力，在动物王国里它还算是个长跑健将呢。兔子尾部有一条又短又小的尾巴，正如俗话所说的：兔子尾巴长不了。 松鼠 松鼠是一种美丽的小动物,很讨人喜欢.它四肢灵活,行动敏捷.玲珑的小面孔上,嵌着一对闪闪发光的小眼睛.身上灰褐色的毛,光滑得好象搽过油.一条毛茸茸的大尾巴总是向上翘着,显得格外漂亮. 松鼠喜欢在树枝上跳来跳去,十分机灵.只要有人触动一下树干,它们就躲在数枝底下,或连蹦带跳地逃到别的树上去.晴朗的夏夜,松鼠在树上高兴的跳着叫着,互相追逐嬉戏.它们好像怕强烈的日光,白天常常躲在窝里歇凉;只在树枝被风刮得乱摇晃的时候,它们才到地面上来.但是从来不接近人的住宅. 松鼠喜欢住在高大的老树上,常常把窝搭在树叉中间.它们搭窝的
时候,先搬来一些小数枝,交错着放在一起,再找一些干苔藓铺在上面,然后把苔藓压紧,踏平.窝搭好了,还在上面加一个盖,把整个窝遮蔽起来,这样就不怕风吹雨打了.她们带着儿女住在里边,又暖和又安全. 松鼠常吃的食物是松子,榛子和橡栗,有时候也吃鸟蛋.它们吃东西的时候,常常直着身子做在树枝上,用前爪捧着往嘴里送.秋天,松鼠就储藏过冬的食物,把它塞到老树的缝隙里,塞得满满的.冬天,它们有时候也用爪子扒开厚厚的积雪寻找雪底下的食物. 松鼠的肉可以吃,尾巴上的毛可以制画笔,皮可以做衣服. 青蛙捕食 我非常喜欢青蛙。夏天，我常常去池塘边看青蛙。 青蛙很喜欢躲在草丛里，偶尔也叫几声。它们叫得最欢的时候是在大雨过后。每当这时如果有一只叫，旁边的也就随着叫了起来。几十只甚至上百只青蛙“呱呱”叫个不停，那声音能够传到几里地以外，多像一曲气势磅礴的交响乐呀！ 青蛙的身体胖胖的，有的身体足有七八厘米长。它们披着黄绿色或深绿色的衣裳，露着雪白的肚皮。它们的头又宽又扁，像一个三角形。它的头上鼓着一双圆溜溜的大眼睛，长着大嘴巴、小鼻子。 青蛙爱吃小昆虫，观察它捕食的动作才有趣呢。有一天，我静静地蹲在池塘边上的大树后面，细心地观察着。一只青蛙蹲在地上，张着嘴巴仰着脸在等待着什么。突然，一只小虫飞过来，只见青蛙猛地向上一窜，舌头一钩，又落在地上。小虫不见了，青蛙又恢复了原来