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英语四六级作文写作要点

老师建议:这么多范文不可能都背下来。推荐重点背诵(一)1、2、7;(二)1和(三)1,正好考前每天一篇。其他范文可以重点看看内容和思路,也可以作为背诵范文的仿写对象。背诵范文也可以重点背诵划线部分和其他部分的关键词。但要保证,但凡背的东西,一个字母都不准差!

以下模拟题四六级通用,四级按120到180词写就行。如果你们还想再押的话,那我只能说六级重点看谚语警句型/ 引语评论型;四级重点看图画图表型。(一)谚语警句型/引语评论型

1. Misfortunes Bring Out One’s Best Qualities

(该题属于典型的“谚语警句型”)

(解释含义)An inspiring saying goes that “misfortunes bring out one’s best qualities”.Simple as the sa ying is, its meaning is profound and thought-provoking. Evidently, it ismeant to tell us th at unfavorable conditions can stimulate one’s will to fight and give full play tohis talents, a nd that we should not be indulged in depression after we have met setbacks.

(举例说明之外国历史事例)Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying.Here I can think of no better il lustration of the proverb than the experience of ThomasCarlyle, a famous English historia n. His manuscript of “The History of French Revolution” wasaccidently burnt by the carele ss housekeeper of his close friend just after he finished writing it.Instead of blaming his frie nd, the historian comforted him by saying that the destroyed one wasnot his best version. Then he rewrote the book and indeed made it a much better one.

或(举例说明之中国历史事例)Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying.Here I can think of no better il lustration of the proverb than the experience of Confucius, theearliest and greatest educ ator in Chinese history. He completed his famous work Spring andAutumn only after he met a series of setbacks and experienced bitterness of life. Anothercase in point might be H ua Yanjun, or Abing, the well-known folk musician in recent China. As ablind man, he lived at the lowest level of the society before liberation. But it might just be hissufferings that h ad brought out his best qualities as a musician and enabled him to create themost reputab le melody, his masterpiece The Moon in Two Springs.

或(举例说明之个人经历)Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. Taking alook around, we can also find examples too many to enumerate. Here I can think of no better illustration of th e proverb than the experience of my own. Though performing well enough inthe college en trance exam, I was only provided with the opportunity to enroll in a second-classuniversit y. However, I did not lose my heart. Instead, I found the remoteness and quietness ofthe campus a favorable condition for my study. In terms of English, I have passed CET-4 with a high score. Now I believe I can do the same with my CET-6.

(我的做法)Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that a curse can also tur n into a blessing. Personally, I will not indulge myself in bitterness and complaintafter m eeting setbacks. What I will do is to seek opportunities and turn adversities into favorable conditions. In a word, I truly agree with the proverb given in the directions and willtake th

e right actions in my life and work in the future.

2. Control Weight and Keep Fit

(该题属于“引语评论型”与“解决问题型”相结合的出题方式)

(描述现象)The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people gaining weightwhile beco ming unhealthy.(举例论证) T aking a look around, one can find examples too manyto enumerate. Just as the sayi ng goes,

“while the weight of many people is increasing, theirlevel of their health is decreasing.”

(分析原因)A number of factors can account for the phenomenon, but the following mightbe the criti cal ones. In the first place, there exist faults with those people’s diet. In otherwords, they do not eat healthy food or they do not eat in the healthy way. In the second place,lack of e xercise is also responsible for the phenomenon. Due to the fast pace of modern life,many people’s exercise is far from adequate. Lastly, there exist reasons on the part of thosepeo ple’s psychology. As a result of the fierce competition in current society, many peoplehav e lost the balance in their state of mind, which in turn gives rise to physical and mental pro blems.

(我的做法)Personally, I will take measures in the three aspects mentioned above to control my weight and keep fit. For one thing, I shall foster the good habit of diet. Foranother, I shall work o ut regularly. Last but not least, I will try reading or traveling to achieve abalance in my sta te of mind. In a word, I truly agree with the proverb given in the directionsand will take th e right actions in my life in the future.

(如果题目要求提出建议则按如下写法)

(提出建议)This phenomenon is definitely unhealthy and requires remedying. Naturally,measures sh ould be taken in the three aspects mentioned above. For one thing, it is imperative that pe ople foster the good habit of diet. For another, they need work outregularly. Last but not le ast, they can try reading or traveling to achieve a balance in their stateof mind. Only with these measures taken can we expect a solution of the problem.

(提出建议)In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures should betaken before thi ngs get worse. First, it is essential that people foster the good habit of diet.Second, it is s uggested that they work out regularly. Then, it is advisable for them to tryreading or traveli ng to achieve a balance in their state of mind. With these measures taken, itis reasonabl

e for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.

3. Get Truly Educated

(该题属于“引语评论型”与“观点认同型”相结合的出题方式)

(我的观点)I fundamentally agree with the saying that students must take courses outsidetheir major fi eld of study to become "truly educated." Nevertheless, I would caution that goingtoo far in this direction might be risky.

(我的论据)The primary reason why I agree with the proposition is that "true" educationamounts to f ar more than gaining the knowledge and ability to excel in one's major course ofstudy and in one's professional career. True education also facilitates an understanding ofone-self, a nd tolerance and respect for the viewpoints of others. Secondly, even the mastery of a sp ecific area requires some knowledge about a variety of others. For example, a political-sci ence student can fully understand that field only by understanding the various psychologi cal, sociological, and historical forces that shape political ideology.

(让步/指出弊端)Nevertheless, in the pursuit of true education students must be careful notto overextend themselves. Otherwise, he would lack enough knowledge or experience in anysingle area t o have anything valuable to offer.

(我的做法)Personally, I will try to expose myself to more fields of knowledge than my ownmajor: com puter science. For instance, I will learn more about English and teaching, for I am determin ed to take a job of programming in English teaching. Besides, I will learn more aboutfine ar t and music. In a word, I truly agree with the saying given in the directions and will takethe right actions in my life in the future.

4.All Roads Lead to Rome

(同上)

(描述现象)The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people taking jobsoutside what t hey learn in college.(举例论证) Taking a look around, one can find examples toomany to enumerate. A case in point might be the Peking University graduates selling pork, orthe Xi’an Jiaotong University gradu ates who sell Chinese hamburgers.(引语观点)Some approve of this phenomenon and claim that one does not have to work in the field that hemajors in during college. (我的观点)Personally, I agree with them and my reasons are asfollow.

(我的论据)In the first place, one might only find what he is really interested in after studiesin college. Therefore, it is nothing worth blame if he engages himself in a career of a differentfield aft er finding that he is not keen on what he learns in college. In the second place, themost im portant thing that one learns in college should not be the professional knowledgeitself; ra ther, it should be the ability to acquire knowledge or to conduct work. Therefore, itdoes n ot matter if the job is closely related to what he learns as a major.

(我的做法)Personally, I am a computer major. But I did not choose to learn aboutcomputer by myself. It was my parents’decision. After years of study, I find that I am neither talented nor inte rested in the major. Meanwhile, I have fostered profound interest in Englishand have spen t a considerable amount of time on it. Therefore, I will choose a job related toEnglish in t he future, such as an interpreter or an English teacher.

5.Classroom Teaching Will Go on

(同上)

(描述现象)The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people receive e-education, or In ternet-based teaching.(举例论证) Taking a look around, one can find examplestoo many to enumerate. A case in point might be the soaring popularity of YY and MOOC(Massive Open Online Courses).(引语观点)Some approve of this phenomenon and claim that online teaching will take the place of cl assroom teaching.(我的观点)Personally, I disagree with them. Though online teaching has some advantages, it will not t otally substitutetraditional instruction.

(让步)\Admittedly, e-education has some merits as compared with traditional teaching.Firstly, it is more economical, in that once a course is prepared, it can be used by largenumbers of students. Secondly, it is more convenient. Instead of having to attend classes atfixed ti mes and places, students are free to study when they choose and progress at their ownpac e. Furthermore, by studying from home there is no need to travel to the college oruniversit y, saving both time and money.

(反驳+我的论据)Despite the considerations mentioned above, classroom learning showsno signs of being re placed by e-learning. It seems that face-to-face contact with a teacher isstill widely regarde d as the best way for students to make progress. Not only the personalcontact with a teach er, but also the support and encouragement gained from being part of aclass may be one reason for this. Membership of a group may also create a useful spirit of competition, whic h stimulates learning.

(总结)To sum up, there may be a role for Internet-based courses to supplement teacher-taught o nes, the former cannot replace the latter.

6. Luck: Wings for a Running Horse

(同上)

(提出话题)The way to success has long been atopic under heated discussion in human society. (引语观点)While some attribute success to good luck,others hold that hard work is the only way tosu ccess and luck has nothing to do with it. (我的观点)Personally, I deem that both sides go to the extreme. Actually both diligence and luck pla y arole in a person’s success, though the former weighsmuch heavier than the latter.

(让步)Admittedly, hard work is indispensable in most people’s success. How couldMadam Curie and her husband have succeeded in discovering the element radium without continuous l abor? Similarly, how could Mao Zedong have successfully figured out the way to defeat his enemies without the numerous nights spent on books and meetings?

(反驳+我的论据)However, luck does also have a role to play in a person’s success. IfMadam Curie and her h usband had not had happened to go to the laboratory late that night,they might well have missed the chance to discover the element. If Mao had been assassinatedby his rivalries, a

s was American president John F. Kennedy and Abraham Lincoln, he would nothave become what he was in Chinese history.

(总结)To sum up, we may safely say that both hard work and good luck contribute to aperson’s success. Without the foundation laid through hard work, one would only sigh beforegood l uck, and with good luck one can go faster and safer on his way to success. Good luck isto a hardworking man what wings are to a running horse. So just get running and seize yourgo od luck!

7.

(同上)

(描述现象)The past few years have witnessed a mounting number of people gettingwronged when hel ping others.(举例论证) Taking a look around, one can find examples toomany to enumerate. The most typic al case in point might be the man from Nanjing whohelped an old lady but was penalized b y law. (引语观点)Therefore, some people warn thosewarmhearted by citing the saying “everyone is for himse lf and God is for everyone.” (我的观点)Personally, I disagree with them. I hold that we should care about people around us andhe lp each other.

(我的论据)The reason is self-evident: everyone will one day meet trouble. When our own capacity is n ot strong enough to pull ourselves out of the trouble, we might only say die if noone came t o help us. As a matter of fact, numerous examples can be given as illustrations. Themost r ecent one might be what happed in Zhaoyuan, Shandong. It was just because of the indiffe rence of those onlookers that the young lady became the victim of the violence attack.H ad anyone present offered her a hand, the tragedy might well have been prevented.

(我的做法)Personally, I will care about people around me, whether I know them or not,because I belie ve that it is love that makes the world go around. I will offer my help to any innocent perso n in trouble. What’s more, I will also show my care to those so-called “badguys”, helping th em come back to the right road. Only in this way can we expect a harmonious society.

(二)图画型

1.

(描述图画)This is a satiric but true-to-life drawing. As we can see in it, a man is sweating,with his han d on his chest and a regretful and painful expression on his face. The words abovehim shou ld be his monologue, which goes,

“Shit. I’ve forgotten to take a photo of theStarbuck coffee that I’ve just had. Then what did I drink it for?”

(点明寓意)Ridiculous as it might seem, the phenomenon mirrored by the cartoon is not uncommon in modern society. Actually, both the picture and instances in real life point to thefact that many people nowadays make too much a point of showing off their life experiencesonline,

by such channel as weibo (micro blog) and weixin (WeChat).(举例论证)It is never too rare to see some people taking pictures of newly served dishes in a restaura nt and uploadthem to their friend circle. Nor is it to find people busy taking photos and up date their microblogs when touring. Some even dine or tour merely for the purpose of sho wing off, just as theperson in the picture does. Their only goal seems to be attracting as m uch attention online aspossible.

(提出建议)Such being the case, it is high time that we pondered over the problem andfigured out a so lution. Among all measures, I believe, the central one should be resisting the temptation of vanity brought along by such modern media as micro blog and WeChat, andcoming mor

e back to life itself.

2. My View on Plastic Surgery

(描述图画)This is a wittily designed photo. As we can see in it, a handsome husband andan attractive wife are taking a family picture with their three kids, whom look just opposite totheir pare nts in their looking. The caption reads,

“What you only need to worry about is how toexplain it to your kids”.

(点明寓意)Apparently, this picture is meant to reveal the surging trend of plasticsurgery. Taking a l ook around, one can find examples too many to enumerate.(指出有争议)To this practice, people’s attitudes differ considerably. Some embrace it readily whereasoth ers criticize and even condemn it harshly. (我的观点)Personally, I am inclined to agreewith the latter and I base my position on the following re asons.

(分析原因)In the first place, I deem that physical appearances are always of less greatimportance tha n inner beauty and practical ability. In the second place, I am definitely opposed to the con cept that there is an established norm of beauty. Instead, I hold that beauty, evenin the physical sense, manifests itself in varied ways. Last but not least, as is well known,plastic surgery can be very dangerous, resulting in some irreversible injuries.

(总结)Taking into consideration all the above-mentioned, we may safely come to the conclusion that plastic surgery is definitely unnecessary for normal people. (建议)Weshould focus more on our inner world and try to attract others with our personality and i ntelligence.

3. Perseverance: Key to Success

(描述图画)This is a wittily designed and inspiring picture. As it shows, is searching forwater. He has a lready dug many holes in the ground but none of them has reached the water.In fact, the w ater is just a few inches below the bottom of one of the holes. With a cigarettebetween his l ips and his spade in his hands, he walks away leisurely, saying to himself in mindthat there is no water here and I shall try another place.

(点明寓意)Simple as the picture is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching.Obviously, it

is meant to tell us about the importance of perseverance on our way to success.There is no denying the fact that nowadays an increasing number of youth lack the spirit ofpersistin g on. (举例论证)A case in point is that many of them change their jobs or careers toofrequently. Faced with a bit setback or difficulty, they choose to quit and change their goals. (分析影响)If the situation goes as it is, the consequence will be disastrous not only forindividuals b ut for the society as a whole.

(总结+ 建议)Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that thelack of persever ance is a major barrier on our way to success. In a word, we should truly understand the profound meaning of the picture and try various means to cultivate our perseverance.

(三)图表型

1.

(描述图表)The past years have witnessed a mounting number of Chinese scholarsreturning from overs eas. As is lively illustrated by the column chart, the number of returneesclimbed from a mere 69.3 thousand in 2008 to over 272.9 thousand in 2012, at an annualincrease rate of around 50%.

(分析原因)A multitude of factors may have led to the tendency revealed by the chart, butthe followin g are the critical ones from my perspective. First and foremost, along with thedevelopme nt of Chinese economy and society, the number of Chinese studying abroad hasbeen soarin g in the past years, which has provided an expanding base for the number ofreturnees. I n the second place, the government has enacted a series of preferential policies toattract overseas Chinese scholars back home. Last but not least, the booming economy,science an d technology in this country have generated more attractive job opportunities forscholars returning from overseas.

(分析影响)The waves of returnees will definitely contribute to this nation’s development,since they h ave brought back not only advanced science and technology but also pioneeringconcepts o f education and management. (展望未来)With more scholars coming back fromoverseas, and with the concerted efforts of the whol

e nation, we have reasons to expect afaster rejuvenation o

f this country.

2.

(描述图表)The past years have witnessed a mounting number of Chinese college studentstaking part-t ime jobs. Yet attitudes differ considerably among students as to the necessity ofdoing so. As is lively illustrated by the pie chart, around 50% of all students in a collegebelieve tha t it is necessary or of utmost necessity to take part-time jobs, while the other halfholds th at it is absolutely unnecessary or just dispensable.

(我的观点和原因)Personally, I maintain that taking part-time jobs does have benefits formany students, but i t is not necessary for everyone. On the one hand, for students intendingto work in society a fter graduation, taking part-time jobs is beneficial, for it can provide themwith opportuniti

es to learn about society and prepare themselves for their future jobs. Besides,for students under severe financial burden, taking part-time jobs is also an advisable choice.On the ot her hand, for students who plan to further their study, it is not a must for them tospend tim e on part-time jobs. As is well known, for this reason or that, it is rather hard forundergrad uates to land a part-time job closely related with what they learn in school. Suchbeing the case, it might well prove a waste of time for students to get involved in part-timejobs.

(总结建议)To sum up, students should make a sound choice about taking part-time jobsaccording t o their own conditions. In other words, they should not follow others blindly.

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