商务英语中级写作部分应试技巧
写作部分
分大和小作文，小作文一般为电子邮件， ___，通知，大作文则是根据已经给出的图文信息来进行写作，其中商务报告最常见。
1.商务报告
格式:
Report on:
To:
From:
Date:D/M/Y
Subject:
introdution
findings(发现的问题)
conclusion
remendation(不许提出findings中没有的问题的建议) INTRODUTING中的常用句型
The purpose of this report is
The objective of this report is
The aim of this report is
Mr. has asked me to report to you that
This report sets out to(目的在于)
空白处常见的词汇
investigate,evaluate,study,remend,analyse,give feedback,estimate...
CONCLUSION中的.常用句型
It was decided that
No conclusion were reached regarding In conclusion,
On balance,
FINDINGS
It is found that
It is discovered that
There are several problems
It is felt that
It is generrally the case that
RECONMENDATION
It is remended/proposed/suggested that
It is essential to
It would be advisable to
拿高分的注意事项
要注意写句子的手法一定要客观，如：A report came to the... ...接到报告说
要积累一些经典的词组，如：I find life an exciting business AND MOST EXCITING WHEN it is lived for others(尤其是)
图表描述常用句型
The number of ... has increased/decreased
sharply/graduatly by ...from...to...(百分比/年/年)
During the same period of time,
What's worse,
As a result,the present workforce can not meet the requirement of this new order...(然后摆出数据，具体化)
图表描述常见的类型：
TABLE，LINE CHART，BAR CHART，PIE CHART
2.小作文(商务书信)
Dear ...,
顶格或空4个字符写正文
正文3部分
写作目的
具体事宜(根据固定材料编写)
表示感谢，要求，期待
I'm writing this letter in order to/in purpose of I write this letter to inform/notify you that
空格处填动词或动名词
常见的：
投诉：
place a plaint against...
plain about...
express my dissatisfication with...
咨询： inquire about
邀请： extend an invitation
建议： make a suggestion to you to..
感谢： express my sincrere gratitude to you 道歉： express my heatfelt apology to you 模板,内容仅供参考
机密★启用前 大连理工大学网络教育学院 大工20春《商务英语写作-精品课程》课程考试 期末考试复习题 ☆注意事项：本复习题满分共：400分 一、单项选择题（本大题共30小题，每小题2分，共60分） 1.Please let us know which of our products _______. A. you are interested B. are you interested C. they are interested D. you are interested in 2.We ______ your name and address _______ the Chinese Embassy in Bonn. A. are learning….from B. have learned ….from C. have come to know….of D. have been given ….from 3.We are now enclosing a price list for all the items you _______ in your letter under reply. A. required B. inquired about C. said D. informed 4.If you are prepared to increase your ______ to 15%, we shall be pleased to purchase the complete stock. A. price B. discount C. sales volume D. cost 5. A recent market survey reveals that such articles are no longer __________. A. in demand B. demanded C. on demand D. for demand 6. We will do our best to _______ shipment to meet your requirements in time. A. comply B. make C. expediting D. arranged 7. Any loss or damage noticed when the goods are delivered must be reported to the ______ at the time, otherwise he will not be responsible for it. A. consignor B. consignee C. shipper D. carrier 8. For all the remaining items the stated dates of delivery are approximate, but _______ would these dates be exceeded by more that ten days. A. in no case B. in any case C. by all means D. under any circumstances 9. Your failure to open the L/C in time will ________impossible for us to deliver goods within the
1 BEC中级写作看似是BEC中级考试中较为简单的一项，但实际上也要多下工夫才能拿高分，尤其对于不以英语为母语的中国考生来说，平时不多加练习很有可能在考试时“挤牙膏”般写生硬的句子。 题目： You work for a company which is going to buy a set of equipment from China. You are asked to translate a lot of specifications and instructions within four months, which is impossible. therefor you decide to advertise for two experienced translators as soon as possible. . Write a short note to Mr. Max Remington ,the Public Relation's manager. Ask for an advertisement for two translators. . Explain the reason. . Mention your urgency. . Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet. 讲解： 便条可以有题目，也可以省略题目。 便条开篇须有称呼语，但称呼可以比较随便。 日期部分可写在便条的右上角。 日期的签署通常只需写星期几或星期几的上午、下午，也可只写上午或下午和具体时间。只写日期也可以。 便条结尾须署上留条人的，位置在正文的右下角。 便条的形式和容简洁，故可以用几句话概括。 文语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。 便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。 便条不需邮寄，不用信封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。 基本写作格式 便条容和类型不尽相同，可以灵活变通。但各类便条必须包括以下几个基本要素; 1) Date：便条日期 2) Salutation：称呼 3) Body：正文 4) Signature：署名
商务英语写作复习题 1．建立业务关系的信函 ●信息来源（告知对方你是从何渠道了解到对方的） ●对你的公司做简单介绍（公司的业务范围，稍稍“宣传”一下你公司的 产品和服务。 ●写信的目的（你想与对方做什么生意，比如，想购买对方的产品，推 销你自己的产品，想与对方建立合资公司等）。 ●表达与对方合作和早日收到回复的愿望。 Sample Letter May 10, 2003 Dear Sirs, We have obtai ned the name and address of your corporation from the Commercial Counselor’s Office of your Embassy in our country, through whom we learned that you are the manufacturers and exporters of bamboo products. We are very pleased to communicate you for the possibility of trading together. We have been in business as importers of general merchandise since 1965 and can particularly boast of having vast and wide experience in the business line of bamboo products. Our bankers are Guarantee Trust bank, Holland, from whom you will be able to get any information you may require concerning our business character and financial standing. We should appreciate it if you would let us know your trade terms and forward us copy of your catalogue or helpful literature and your latest price list. We look forward to the pleasure of hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully 2．订购函 你公司准备向某公司订购一批产品。请你写一封订购信，其内容应
BEC商务英语中级写作 为了让大家更好的准备商务英语BEC考试，给大家整理写作指导,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 拒绝信 Dear Mr. Johnson, We are terribly sorry that the repair of your cassette player is really beyond our reach. There are several reasons why we left your equipment unrepaired. Firstly, our technician in charge of the cassette player had been several days off for serious flu, the delayed the handling of the equipment Secondly, there is no parts found in the present market to replace the volume control which really needs repairing.
We have the ability to replace the on/off switch, however, the cost is too high to worth it, because you can use the amount of money to buy a new one. Accoring to our survey, this type of equipment is manufactured in 1985 and the manufacturer has gone out of business, so it is impossible for you to talk with them. We are really sorry for our helplessness Sincerely, Mason Manager BEC商务英语中级写作范文2 可行性报告 Report on installation of a new word processing On several occations, we have discussed the desiability of installing a new word processing system to replace the six-year-old stand-alone word processing system we currently use.
商务英语中级商务英语写作样题 样题 You aret he Managing Director of acompany whose prof its have recently increased and you would like to reward staff for this. Write amemo to all staff: Thanking them for their contribution Explaining why profits increased Telling them what their reward wil lbe. Write40~50words 题目解读PartOne的题目背景通常是一事、两人、三要点。本题中，最近公司利润增长，你作为公司的董事总经理(ManagingDirector)将对全体员工(allstaff)进行奖励，备忘录的内容需包括三个要点：感谢员工的贡献，解释利润增长原因，并告之奖励内容。正文词数要求为40～50个词，因为商务英语要求简洁，词数要求有上限，这和 四、六级以及考研写作只规定词数下限有所区别，但实际考试时允许少量超标，比如接近60词。 内容、结构、语言和形式 内容 首先可根据各要点的逻辑关系调整写作顺序，比如在本题中，先解释利润增长的原因，再感谢员工，最后宣布奖励。其次应针对要点简要展开论述，比如利润增长的原因可能是销售量增加(the increase of sales)、成本降低(the reduction of cost)或推出新产品(the launch of the new product);而奖励的内容经常是集体旅行(acompanytrip)、涨工资
商务英语写作试卷 （课程代码：5440） I. Multiple-choice: For each sentence there are four choices marked A, B, C, and D. Choose the one that best completes the sentence. (1 point each) 1.Please let us know which of our products _______. A. you are interested B. are you interested C. they are interested D. you are interested in 2.We ______ your name and address _______ the Chinese Embassy in Bonn. A. are learning….from B. have learned ….from C. have come to know….of D. have been given ….from 3.We are now enclosing a pricelist for all the items you _______ in your letter under reply. A. required B. inquired about C. said D. informed 4.If you are prepared to increase your ______ to 15%, we shall be pleased to purchase the complete stock. A. price B. discount C. sales volume D. cost 5. A recent market survey reveals that such articles are no longer __________. A. in demand B. demanded C. on demand D. for demand 6.This is a new product but it is gaining _______ popularity in the world market. A. many more B. better and better C. increasingly steady D. steadily increasing 7.Concerning the ________ L/C, we wish to inform you that there are several clauses that need amendment. A. subjective B. caption C. subjected D. captioned 8.We wish to make it clear to you that we shall not ______ the shipment if they arrive after December 19, 2005. A. arrange B. receive C. accept D. acknowledge 9.Following your order ______ 400 pieces of electronic toys last year, we are pleased to receive your order No. 456 _______ the same quantity. A. for, of B. of , of C. for, for D. with, for 10.As agreed upon in our negotiation, payment _______ L/C. A. by B. will C. are by D. is to be made by 11.We will do our best to _______ shipment to meet your requirements in time. A. comply B. make C. expediting D. arranged 12.Any loss or damage noticed when the goods are delivered must be reported to the ______ at the time, otherwise he will not be responsible for it. A. consignor B. consignee C. shipper D. carrier 13.For all the remaining items the stated dates of delivery are approximate, but _______ would these dates be exceeded by more that ten days. A. in no case B. in any case C. by all means D. under any circumstances 14.Your failure to open the L/C in time will ________impossible for us to deliver goods within the period stipulated in the contract. A. make them be B. make it be C. make it D. make that be 15.The stipulations in your L/C _________ not in accordance with the contract, we have to request you to make an amendment. A. is B. being C. is to be D. would be 16.In _______ of quality, our make is superior. A. terms B. term C. connection D. connections 17.__________, the buyers have urged us to expedite shipment of their order. A. The season approaching B. The season is approaching C. As season approaching D. The season was approaching 18.We accept as an exception your order _________ business with you.
BEC商务英语中级写作范文2020 为了让大家更好的准备商务英语BEC考试，给大家整理写作指导,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 BEC商务英语中级写作范文(1) Dear Customer, When someone in the family experiences hearing loss, he is not the only one to experience frustration Have you noticed a loved one: Missing parts of conversations? Asking people to repeat themselves? Having special trouble with certain letters or sounds? Turning up the volume on the TV? If so, you can help them and yourself—by encouraging them to find out about a hearing aid. More than six million Americans enjoy improved hearing and better lives-with hearing aids. And the power source they rely on most is Rayovac. “Rayovac batteries really do make a difference.” One of our customers said so.
商务英语考试写作试题 Describing graphs Ex 4: Sample answer: (132words) The share price of IBM and AOL showed a upward trend from June until the end of 1998.However, while AOL shares then continued to rise steadily over the next three months, the price of IBM shares fell slightly. By March 1999 both shares were worth about $100. AOL shares then shot up, almost doubling in value within four weeks. They reached a high of $180 in mid-April before collapsing to just over $100 per share at the beginning of May. There was a slight recovery during that month however, despite this by June 1999 the price of AOL shares was once again about $100. In contrast, despite minor fluctuations, IBM shares made a steady recovery over the three month period, finishing at just over $100, almost equal to AOL.
剑桥商务英语考试BEC中级写作技巧 沪江小编:BEC中级开考在即,在不到两周的时间内,可以迅速提高成绩的只有写作部分了。掌握BEC中级写作技巧,就可以在BEC中级作文考试中拔得头筹。沪 江英语为你准备了一些该背该记的模板、技巧,千万别错过了。 BEC中级写作考试时间是45分钟,从多方面测试考生的各项能力,包括完成题 目要求的能力,组织衔接观点的能力,语言表达的得体性,丰富性,以及语法和拼写的准确性等。主要考以下两种题型。 第一题是写一篇40-50字的电子邮件、备忘录、便条等。主要考查考生按照题目要求完成任务的能力,组织衔接观点的能力,语言表达的得体性,词语的丰富性,语法、拼写的准确性等。 应试技巧 1、仔细阅读要求,确定所要写的是电子邮件、备忘录、还是便条。注意格式。 2、一定要完成所指定的3项任务,并进行合理发挥。 3、不要完全照抄题目要求的任务提示,尽量变化一下,如果实在不知道如何变化,或没有把握,至少要把要求补充为完整的句子。 4、字数一定要控制在40-50以内,多字或少字都会扣分。 5、根据写信人和收信人的关系和要求写的内容判断使用语气的正式程度。 6、第一部分主要是公司内部交流,上级给下级写,语气不必特别正式,下级给上级写,最好采用正式语气。给平级同事写信,语气也不必太正式。上级给下级安排日常工作或下级向上级请示工作,最好用正式语气。平级之间的一般交流,可以不太正式。切记不要把不正式和不礼貌混淆,不正式不代表不礼貌。无论给谁写信都要礼貌。
7、写时别忘遵守我课堂上讲的7C原则(completeness, conciseness, correctness, consideration,clarity, courtesy, concreteness 8、注意谨慎使用缩略式(如I’m ,建议不使用缩略式,以防犯错。 9、注意单词和语法的准确性,宁可用正确的简单句,也不用错误的复杂句。 10、最好写前打个草稿,写后仔细检查。检查内容包括是否完成3个任务,单词、语法、文体是否正确、恰当,字数是否符合要求,格式是否正确等。 11、注意卷面整洁,这会给阅卷老师至少要留下一个比较好的第一印象。 第二题是写一篇120-140字的商务信函、报告或建议书。 商务信函写作应试技巧 构思正式的商务信函时,须考虑以下几个方面: 1、写信目的 要明确写信目的,是为了提供信息,咨询,还是投诉等?希望得到什么结果? 2、读者对象 明确读者对象,使用正确的文体,得体的语言。 3、条分缕析 分段有助于增加行文的明晰程度,增加信函的可读性。写信要清楚分段,有条理的表达自己的观点,每段只表达一个主题。也可以适当用弹点、数字等技巧以帮助读者理解自己的信。 4、常用表达 要使用商务信函常用的表达,那样会显得很专业,给读者留下很好的印象。
教学 点 （函 授站 ）： 专 业： 年级： 学 号 ： 姓 名： 密 封 线 内 严 禁 答 题 试卷号： *********学院2015学年度第1学期 期末考试试卷 考试年级 13.14.15 专业 商务英语 科目 商务英语习作 出卷老师 ***** 商务英语写作 I. Complete the letters with the words given. Change the word forms where necessary. (10points) popular , inquiry, hire, volume, assign, instead of, recommend, cooperation, responsible, branch (1) Dear Sir Owing to the large increase in the ___1___ of our trade with this country, we have decided to open a(n) ____2____here,with Mr. Jackie Black as manager. The new branch will open on 1st July and from that date all orders and ___3____ should be sent to Mr. Black at the above address, ___4___to our London office. We take this opportunity to express our thanks for your ____5____ in the past. We hope the new arrangements will lead to even better results. Y ours faithfully (2) Dear Sir This letter is to ___6___ Tim Steven as an outstanding salesperson. I have known and worked with Tim for more than three years. He is a highly __7____ and creative individual. Form the day he came to work for us, he was a welcome member of our sales team. He willingly undertook any task___8___ to him, whether it involved direct sales or not, and his enthusiastic manner made him____9___with all our customers. I am sorry to lose Tim, but his educational plans call for him to move outside our city . I believe anyone who____10___ him will be truly fortunate. Y ours sincerely II. Choose the best answer for each question. (10 points) 11. After checking the goods against your invoice, we discovered a considerable shortage ______ number. A. of B. in C. for 12. As soon as we receive the signed form, we will add your name to the list of people _______ snow shoveling. A. requiring B. require C. required 13. The report is to be _______ to the Directors as soon as possible. A. prepared B. promoted C. presented 14. I am glad that I feel quite _______ for the position you advertised.
欢迎各位员工及家人参与。 . , . 董事会将于月日星期五下午点在室召开会议。 . 我们的门诊政策有所变动，希望大家注意。 ’. 这个星期三的公司例会宣布成立公司研发部。 . 有关详情请联系张文，电话是。 . 借此机会感谢大家的配合。 . 我们非常希望你能参加我们的结婚典礼，希望能在月日那天见到你。 . . ’. 夫妇很荣幸能邀请您参加庆祝他们女儿大学毕业的花园聚会。 . 我们盛情邀请您和家人参加的周年舞会。 . 希望您能接受邀请，并在月日之前回复。 . . 晚宴开始前在室会有茶点，欢迎前往。 . 请于天内汇款以维持您的信用等级。 , , . 虽然公司已预订在星期六使用会所，但是我们仍能为您提供人的会议室。 . 您要求报销差旅费的请求已被批准，相信您一定很高兴得知这一消息。 . 凭借在饮食业的丰富经验，我们能为顾客提供最好的服务。 . 从您的来信得知，已发现五把椅子在装运过程中受到损坏。 . 我们希望本月底以前收到您应付的金额。 , . 我们希望你们能对货物满意，并期待收到你们更多的订单。 . 对于任何不便之处我们再次表示歉意。 . 如能尽早回复，不胜感激。 . 我们期待与你们的合作愉快而成功。 ’. 请注意公司周年舞会的日期变动。
下面我将罗列有关结果。 . 以下政策立即生效。 . 请于星期五告知你假期里的联系电话。 . 与的合作将对公司未来发展有帮助。 ’. 这份备忘录将展示与上海总公司会议的结果。 , . 我代表公司所有职员衷心祝贺你被委任为诺丁汉办公署的总经理。 . 祝你前程锦绣。 , , . 这是一个了不起的成就，我相信你的家人朋友还有你自己一定会引以为豪。 . 我们知道你为此付出了很多努力，你得奖是实至名归的。 . 祝你和你的事业继续走向辉煌。 . 这是董事会年五月份会议有关决策的报告。 . 目前调查的主要结果可总结为以下几点。 ’, . 这个建议是在我前三年研究的基础上提出的，我相信会行得通。 . 还有些其他方法可以降价。 , , ’. 目前我正在进行该项目的调查工作，已取得了下列成绩。 . 调查表明这类产品的市场正处于成长期。 “”. 我们希望能紧扣贵公司在广交会上展出的“象牙牌”照相机。 . 请告知您能给我们什么样的优惠。 , , . 我们公司希望能进口摩托车，如果贵公司能给我们寄上你们公司最新的产品目录、价格单和出后条款，我们将不胜感激。 . 我们有意采用贵公司现有的部分产品用于家具生产。 . 在此先感谢您对我们提供的帮助。 .
国贸1094班商务英语写作课后习题答案整理 考试题型： 1. 词汇（汉译英）15% 2. 介词填空 15% 3.选择题(课后) 15% 4. 句子翻译 25% 5. 写信 30% 第一单元：商务书信写作的基础知识 1．(1) Shaanxi Machinery & Equipment Imp. & Exp. Corporation (2) 29 ChangleZhong Road Xi’an, China (3) Tel: (86 29) 85332653 (4) Fax:（86 29）85335496 (5) Sept. 9, 20 (6) The Pakistan Trading Company (7) 15 Broad Street Karachi, Pakistan (8) Attebtion: Export Dept. (9) Dear Sirs, (10) Re: (Oil Tools) (11) We thank you for your letter dated……(message) (12) Yours Faithfully, (13) Shaanxi Machinery & Equipment Imp. & Exp. Corporation (Signature) Wang Wei Manager
第二单元：建立贸易关系及信用调查 1.(1)-(5) cdbbb (6)-(10) bdcbb 2.(1) regards, say (2)specialized,with(3)with,by (4) If,interesting,enquiry(5)available (6) popularity (7)finances, to (8) compliance 3. (1) We are one of the leading importers dealing in electronic products in the area, and take this opportunity to approach you in the hope of establishing business relations. (2) We have been engaged in handling importing and exporting of machinery and equipment for many years, and our products have enjoyed great popularity in many countries. (3) We owe your name and address to the Commercial Counselor’s office of our Embassy in Beijing. (4) We are given to understand that you are a manufacturer of daily chemicals. One of our clients intends to buy cosmetics from your country. We will appreciate it highly if you can airmail the catalogue and the price list of your products available at present. (5) For our credit standing, please refer to the Bank of China, Shanghai Branch
Unit 2 1．(1) c (2) d (3) b (4) b (5) b (6) b (7) d (8) c (9) b (10)b 2．(1) regards, say (2) specialized, with (3) with, by (4) If, interesting, enquiry (5) available (6)popularity (7) finances, to (8)compliance 3． (1) We are one of the leading importers dealing in electronic products in the area, and take this opportunity to approach you in the hope of establishing business relations. (2) We have been engaged in handling importing and exporting of machinery and equipment for many years, and our products have enjoyed great popularity in many countries. (3) We owe your name and address to the Commercial Counselor’s office of our Embassy in Beijing. (4) We are given to understand that you are a manufacturer of daily chemicals. One of our clients is in the market for cosmetics from your country. We will appreciate it highly if you airmail the catalogue and price list of the goods available at present. (5) For our credit standing please refer to the Bank of China, Shanghai Branch. Unit 3 1．(1) b (2) b (3) b (4) b (5) a (6) d (7) d (8) c (9) b (10)a 2． (1) Please quote us your best price CIF Shanghai, inclusive of our 3% commission. (2) Should your price be found competitive, we intend to place with an order you for 300,000 yards of Cotton Cloth. (3) One of our customers is now interested in the Qingdao Haier Refrigerator made in your country. Please offer CIF London for 400 sets to be delivered in April. (4) To enable you to have a better understanding of our products, we are sending you by air 2 sample books. (5) In reply to your enquiry dated April 28, we are now sending you our latest price list for your reference. 3． Dear Sirs, We learn from a friend in Shenzhen that you are exporting light industrial products, especially electric appliances. There is a steady demand here for the above-mention
商务英语BEC中级写作专题及例文(1) 按照题目的要求是写一个通告。因此在文章的开头或结尾就应该有一些必要的客套话。另外，题目要求“分析，比较”已提供的数据，所以重复题目中的数据没有意义，而应该通过计算，去寻找更有意义的间接的数据内容。总之，写这种文章，首先要研究透表格数据之间的关系，以及数据背后所反映出的本质东西，其次，要注意格式和内容的统一。 It is obvious that ITC’s results this year continue to reflect a healthy t rend. The company made steady progress in all its businesses in the Indian mark et, which we can see clearly from the table. The increasing rate of ITC’S net Profit has gone up to 32%, much higher than 20%, the average one. Comparatively speaking, the average cost this year (5.8)is lower than the one (6.4)last year, considering the Net Income and profit Before Tax. From the current development, we believe we will play an abiding role in India as one of India’s emerging m ultinational enterprises.