专题 54 开放类书面表达
关键词：开放类,汉语提示,书面表达
难度系数：????
推荐指数：?????
【基础回顾】
考点归纳：
开放式写作题：指给出很少的提示或近乎命题作文，这种题要求考生发挥想象把文章的内容合理的表达出来。也有的是给出漫画，让考生根据自己的理解写作文（以北京高考试题为代表），即给出漫画、给出主题或两三点提示，由考生去发挥、构思，考生的思路是不同的，写出来的文章当然会是不一样的，所以开放式写作通常没有参考范文。
基础必读：
开放作文形同于书面表达，但又不等同于书面表达，因为书面表达往往给出较为详细的提示（文字提纲式、文字+图画式、或图表式），考生在组织短文时，完全可以把这些提示当作短文提纲或线索；考生在表达时，只需沿着这条线索思维即可，考生发散思维的空间不多。而“开放作文”是一种限制相对较少、留给考生更多自由发挥空间的、考查学生书面表达能力的一种时新题型。这种题型只给出主题，也就是说只告诉你正在或将要发生什么事情，至于事情发生的过程、结果则完全由考生自己去发挥，考生的思维完全可以发散。所以，考生的思路不同，写出的作文就会是千人千面。
常见的开放式作文命题形式
标题式
标题式开放作文的命题形式往往是要求考生围绕一个特定的话题去写作。
（2011安徽卷）
某校英文报开辟了一个专栏：Experience。本期话题是如何解决学习中遇到的困难。请你以“My Approach to Difficulties in Learning”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的一些做法。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.短文中不能出现本人相关信息。
漫画式
漫画式开放作文以北京高考为代表。命题形式往往是要求考生围绕一幅漫画去写作。
（2012北京卷）
请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.
（2011湖南卷）
假设你参加所在年级的英语写作比赛，请按如下要求完成一篇作文
1.简要描述下图内容并点明主题；
2.联系实际表达该图带给你的启示。
【技能方法】
“标题式开放作文”实际上相当于汉语的命题式作文，考生只要围绕题目中所给的特定的话题说明、叙述、举例，加上谈谈自己的感想或发表自己的看法就可以了。然而，相对于“标题式”开放作文而言，“漫画式”开放作文的写作难度就更大。
“开放作文”常考文体有两种：记叙文和议论文。
“记叙式开放作文”一般给出一段材料，然后要求考生沿着材料的纵横发展方向，充分发挥想像力，拓展原材料内容；再次运用逻辑推理方法，进行谋篇布局；最后串词成句，联句成文。概言之，“记叙式开放作文”要求考生灵活处理所给材料，做到综合分析，辩证思考，提炼观点，力求论点合理，论据充分，论证严密。
“议论式开放作文”则要求考生根据所提供的信息材料(一般为漫画)，在描述漫画信息之余，发挥自己的想象，展开简单的议论，并略谈自己的观点和看法。概言之，“议论式开放作文”要求考生围绕所给漫画的信息，简要地进行描述，辩证思考，提炼观点，力求论点合理，发人深思。值得注意的是：近年来，北京卷“开放作文”倾向于“就图论事”、“就图明理”。可以说，“议论式开放作文”与现在流行的新课改、新课程、新课标非常吻合，也与流行的研究性学习、探究性学习非常一致，既迎合了当前教学潮流，又对潮流有一定的引领和推动作用。因此，考生要注意训练自己围绕图片，总结写作要点的能力。另外，看图类文章的审题难度要略大于文字类文章的审题难度，所以考生在平时的训练中应该加强对解图能力的训练。
第一步、描述漫画内容
描述漫画内容的基本条件是看懂漫画。要求是：审图要准，定位要清；描述时言简意赅，不可越位；要注意：不要花太多时间挖掘图画深意！因为开放作文不看重你的思想厚度，而看重你的语言质量。
第二步、阐述对漫画的理解
所谓对漫画的理解，是指围绕漫画反映的基本事实进行较为细致的解释和自己的看法、感想或人生感悟等。要求是：逻辑清晰，合情合理。
根据以上两个步骤，我们可以这样认为：“开放作文”只要求你做两件事情，一件是描述图画（describe the following picture），另一件是阐述你对图画解释和看法（explain how you understand it）。相应地，你只需要写两个段落，一段是“描述段”，另一段是“议论段”。
1.“描述段”的写法：第一句可以使用如下句式：In the picture, there is……等。“描述段”的功能就是传达图画中的信息，向读者交代图画内容，所以必能使用“there be”句型。另外，“描述段”的另一个功用即：为第二段的议论埋下伏笔。
2.“议论段”的写法：“议论”段的首句有个固定的句式，即：In my opinion, the picture is meaningful and wonderful as well.等。如何发议论呢？所谓议论，就是根据图画信息，表达你的看法、感想。考生不必过深地挖掘图画信息，只需用简单的英文，表达平易的道理。换句话说，只要你能用正确的英文表达你的感想，便赢得了胜利。
【基础达标】
【湖南省郴州市2017届高三上学期第一次教学质量监测】假定你是李华，高考(College Entrance Examination)后想去美国旅行20天，主要想更多地了解当地文化和习俗。给你的
美国朋友Jason写信，请他根据你的时间和旅行目的对你附件中的行程(itinerary)进行一些修改。
注意：1.词数100左右：
2．信的格式已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jason
Yours
Li Hua
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear tutor ,
My high school is over at last! I am planning to travel around America for 20 days after the College Entrance Examination, hoping to learn more about the local culture and custom.
Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor. Considering my travelling time and purposes, I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more colorful and practical. After all, you know what suites me best.
I am looking forward to your reply and seeing you soon in America.
Yours
Li Hua
【亮点说明】本文层次分明，结构紧凑，语言连贯。同时使用了多种句式和结构，如让步状语从句Since I have never been there before and only got some information from the Internet, I am writing to ask you to do me a favor.宾语从句 I wonder if you can make some changes to my itinerary in the attachment so that my trip can turn out more colorful and practical.等。
考点：考查提纲作文
【能力提升】
【安徽师范大学附属中学2017届高三上学期期中】
假定你是李华，你校即将举行国际中学生科学论坛活动，你想报名做一名志愿者。请用英文写一封邮件申请参加。主要内容包括：
1.写信目的
2.自我介绍
3.希望获准
注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ With all my best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm writing this letter to apply to work as a volunteer you have advertised for. In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help the visitors from all over the world to know better our school.
I am good at English. In addition, in the past three years I have taken part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. Furthermore, my interest and skill in communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.
I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. I'm looking forward to hearing from you in the future.
With all my best regards.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【解析】
试题分析：假定你是李华，你校即将举行国际中学生科学论坛活动，你想报名做一名志愿者。请用英文写一封邮件申请参加。主要内容包括：1.写信目的. 2.自我介绍 . 3.希望获准. 写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数：100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇申请函，内容正式，层次清楚，结构合理。复杂结构的使用
较好，not only …but also;定语从句的使用非常准确 a volunteer you have advertised for.连接词的使用非常合理，In addition，Furthermore。
考点：考查应用文写作。
【终极闯关】
【河北省保定市2017届高三11月摸底考试】书面表达（满分25分）
进入高三以来，同学们倍感学习压力，有的同学熬夜学习，甚至课间十分钟也不放过。假设你是李华，请针对这一现象，在penpal https://www.doczj.com/doc/d85681636.html,网站上用英语发表一下自己的看法与外国中学生进行交流。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Hi Fellows,
I’m Li Hua, a senior high student from China. I’d like to share something with you. Since the beginning of senior high, the learning burden makes us students feel more stressed. Many of us often sit up late at night fighting for the College Entrance Exam; even a ten-minute break won’t be let go.
As far as I know ,lack of sleep does great harm to our heaith. For one thing , we can’t concentrate in class if we don’t get enough sleep . For another , we may get angry and impatient easily. By the same token , a ten-minute break is definitely necessary, which can help us get rid of tiredness and focus on next class period.
A famous proverb goes well, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”. How about your situation and opinion?
Looking forward to your reply.
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，采用三段式，语言流畅，内容齐全，结构合理，运用高级句子。Since the beginning of senior high, the learning burden makes us students feel more stressed.不带to的动词不定式在句中作宾语补足语；As far as I know ,lack of sleep does great harm to our heaith. As far as I know ,据我所知，以我看来；we can’t concentrate in class if we don’t get enough sleep .if引导的条件状语从句用在句中；a ten-minute break is definitely necessary, which can help us get rid of tiredness and focus on next class period. Which引导的非限制性定语从句运用得当；
A famous proverb goes well, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”.著名谚语画龙点睛；For one thing ,--- For another ,
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目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
高考英语书面表达讲解与训练——开放性写作 一. 教学内容： 书面表达讲解与训练 开放性写作（北京卷） 开放性写作是北京卷近两年增加的第二篇作文，英文为open-ending composition。它所给提示比较简单，要求学生根据提供的情景，写一段接续文字。这篇作文要求学生充分发挥想象力和创造力，自己拓展主题，组织篇章结构，既能体现出学生活跃的思维，又能表现出他们的逻辑思维能力和灵活运用英语的能力。它要求学生必须在短时间内写出一篇内容充实新颖、思想健康、符合逻辑、交际得体的，字数不少于50个字的作文。 写作注意要点： 1. 审题要准，定位要清。 即：审语境、审人称、审时态。注意写作对象和语言风格，要有读者的意识，看文章是以第几人称出现；说话的对象是谁；看清题目要求。 2. 逻辑清晰，合情合理。 要做到思想健康，积极向上。要力求内容新颖，必须符合逻辑。 要把理由说充分，是在现实生活中可能会发生的事情。内容要新颖、健康、乐观向上，（所表述的内容、观点是主动、积极向上的），我们在写作时要注意的是求新并不等于求怪，并不是说越希奇古怪、越离谱越好。内容新颖并非是别人完全没提过的、全新的想法，而是别人在相同的情景之下讲得比较少的，又不违背逻辑的想法。新颖的思路能够充分表现学生的创造力。 3. 内容充实，详略得当。 要有主次之分，详略得当。要进行细致描写，有细节的支撑。 考查的目的---能否正确使用英语达到交际的目的。（语言要口语化）把事情说具体，缺少细致的描写，就像建房只搭架子不用砖一样，显得空洞无味。英语写作有一条座右铭，那就是“show more than tell”，意思是细节表达一定要多于抽象陈述，也就是写作要细节化或举例说明。我们尽量用看得见、摸得着的东西来具体表达思想。才能使文章充实、有趣，符合开放作文的要求。 4. 内容完整、首尾呼应。 要紧扣主题，符合要求，首尾呼应 有头有尾；展现给读者一个完整的画面。 【典型例题】 ［开放性写作分类与解析：］ 1. 逻辑性思维(logical thinking ) 给出结果猜测可能性（cause and effect） 根据下面提供的情景，写一段接续文字。 注意：词数不少于30。 You and your friend ar e in your room. He finds one of the windows is broken and says, “Your window is broken. What happened?” You tell him what happened. Possible version: I guess it was all my fault. My mother was doing some reading by the window yesterday, and
第二十组 (建议用时：20分钟) Ⅰ.阅读理解 Thomas had achieved fame as a poet in the 1930s and had spent World War Two in London writing propaganda(宣传) films.But by 1946, after the end of the war, he needed a regular income to support his wife Caitlin, and children Llewelyn and Aeronwy.Luckily he had a new admirer in the form of Margaret Taylor, wife of noted historian and broadcaster A．J.P. Taylor.Introduced as an “entertaining guest” by a mutual friend, he had succeeded in charming Mrs Taylor, who put the family up in a summerhouse in their garden in the grounds of Magdalen College(牛津大学莫德林学院)．① Thomas had a love-hate relationship with Oxford, according to his biographer Andrew Lycett.His poetry may have brought him respect and celebrity in literary circles, but in Oxford he felt at odds with his surroundings.“His father, who had been a schoolmaster in Swansea, would have liked him to go to Oxford University，” Mr Lycett explains. “When he did actually get to Oxford he wasn’t actually at the university.It was a curious period.He was in this academic environment though he wasn’t a born academic himself.But he generally enjoyed himself because he got to know some of the professors there.He wasn’t popular among them, because they thought he was a bit of a wastrel(不务正业者), so he hung out in pubs and met students.”②Thomas also took paid jobs at the BBC, regularly travelling to London and became something of a celebrity through appearing on panel show.③ “He didn’t really endear(使受垂青) himself to Professor Taylor，”Mr Lycett says.“He_overstayed_his_welcome.The professor liked to have a barrel of beer in the house and Dylan would finish it off.He just took a dislike to him, partly because, reading between the lines, his wife rather fancied this young man.”Mark Davies, an Oxford historian, says Professor Taylor disliked the poet “intensely”．“He ended up being banished(驱逐) a safe distance away from his wife，” he adds. This banishment was in the picturesque village of South Leigh, nine miles out from the city, in a house set up for Thomas by Margaret, who continued to be his proud sponsor.However, it was here that his granddaughter Hannah Ellis believes Thomas found much of the inspiration for one of his most famous works, the radio drama Under Milk Wood.“South Leigh is hugely important because that was one of those villages where he met all the different characters and it helped him arouse his passion，” she says.“The play had been a seed from when he was about 20 and I think it was that village lifestyle and all the characters that helped.He liked sitting in the corner of the pub, watching all the drama going on.Also he had somewhere quiet to work and a home.For such a long time he hadn’t settled and it was a good period in his life.”④
2020届新高考英语书面表达内容概要高三作文模拟写作指导与解读 一、概写原题 阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。 It is quite reasonable to blame traffic jams, the cost of gas and the great speed of modern life, but manners on the road are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men would become fierce tiger s behind the wheel. It is all right to have a tiger in a cage, but to have one in the driver's seat is another matter. Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense. It takes the most cool-headed drivers great patience to give up the desire to beat back when forced to face rude driving. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards reducing the possibility of quarrelling and fighting. A friendly nod or a wave of thanks in answer to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of good will and becomes so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such behaviors of politeness are by no means enough. Many drivers nowadays don't even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it. However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who waves a child crossing the street at a wrong place into the path of oncoming cars that may not be able to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to. An experienced driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if drivers learnt to correctly join in traffic stream without causing total blockages that give rise to
十年高考书面表达之中华传统文化汇编（附传统文化词汇） 2017全国I卷 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Leslie, I’m writing to tell you about the plan for your next Chinese lesson. We’ll still meet at my school at three on Saturday afternoon. The learning will last a little longer this time since I’d like to introduce to you poetry of Tang Dynasty. These poems are popular among Chinese people and also attract lots of foreigners. I believe you w ill like them too. Of course, you’d better make some preparation for it, so I suggest you learn about the brief history of Tang Dynasty, which will surely help with your learning of the poems. Yours， Li Hua 2017全国II卷 假定你是李华，想邀请邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括： 1.展览时间、地点； 2.展览内容。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Henry, I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student of yours. I’m writing to invite you to join me in visiting a paper-cutting exhibition, where you can have a close look at traditional Chinese culture as you always
江苏 2019 高考英语二轮练习功课：m4u1advertising（1） M4U1 巩固作业 1 词汇导练 1、Group A gave (有说服力的)opinions and won the debate. 2、The project should be (完成)within a year. 3、Jin Yong has a good (想像力)in writing swordsmen stories(武侠小说)、 4、I (推举)the book to all my friends. 5、If I am not (可获得的)when you phone，ask for my brother. 6、She is d to go to the country for her summer holiday. 7、Is it c for you to come out this evening? 8、Everyone’s fingerprints are u. 9、If you c a crime，you will never escape being punished. 10、The a are excited by the wonderful performance. 11、This dictionary is i for beginners of English. 12、We may find all kinds of a around us，on TV，in newspapers and so on. 短语汇集 1、 2、 3、 4、 5、 6、 7、 8、 9、 10、 11、 12、 语句试译 欺骗，捉弄 上气不接下气 诱使某人做某事 上当；受骗 反复地，一遍又一遍地独具的；特有的 想要 把……交给某人对……感到厌倦 迎合，对……有吸引力传达 组织，汇集；组装 1、(回归课本P2)We are used to them we often do not even realize how many we see and hear in a day. 我们对它们适应到甚至经常全然意识不到一天看到、听到多少广告。 2、(回归课本P3) ads play tricks on us though. 然而并非所有的广告都在欺骗我们。 3、(回归课本P7)If they want to become the market leader，the company must ensure that their product is . 假如他们想成为市场的主宰者，公司必须确保他们的产品高质量。
一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
2018届高考英语书面表达解析及写作技巧 2018-08-10英语：高考书面表达解析及写作技巧一、解读书面表达书面表达是一个综合性题目，要求考生根据所给图画、图表、提纲(或者开放性)等，运用所学知识将提示信息组成句子，句子连成段，段连成篇。 它不断要求考生有丰富的语言语法知识，而且有较强的语言表达能力和逻辑思维能力。 它也是一种融形式、文体、交际三位于一体的试题，所考查内容都体现在表达和传递信息的交流能力，因此，书面表达有交流性、实用性、合理性等特点。 近几年来高考书面表达正在一步步地向考试要考语言运用能力这一方向改进，并采用了新的评分标准，因此要求考生语言的准确性和得体性，注重上、下文连贯，注重表达方式多样化。 新的评分标准提倡考生使用高级词汇和复杂句式，运用过渡性词汇增强文章连贯性。 如果考生在表达中只是运用了简单句，虽然表达了要求的信息，那么得分也不会高。 因此，近几年高考要求考生掌握词汇要丰富，句式表达要复杂，适当地使用情感性语言。 二、各种题型的应试对策1图画作文要求考生首先仔细观察，读懂图意，抓住要点，按图片顺序编拟提纲，同时要注意图片所给的时
间、背景等相关信息，确定写作的人称、时态和语态。 在写作时还要适当地使用一些关联词、过渡句来加工润色，使文章层次清楚、通顺畅达。 这种作文的难点在于要求考生能自己编拟出合适的要点，并且表达上要连贯。 2图表作文要求考生能分析把握该图表要表达的内容，确定主题，然后从图表中归纳出相应要点来写作。 这种作文能有效考查考生的篇章结构组织能力，要求写作具有逻辑性。 3提纲作文要求考生首先将所给出的要点进行组织，按照一定的逻辑顺序用明白、恰当、得体的语言来表达；要尽量消除汉语式的英文表达。 这种作文切忌逐字逐句汉译英，使得文章支离破碎，不忍卒读。 相对来说，这种作文难度相对较小。 4（半）开放性作文要求考生能根据相当简短的提示来写作；或者要求续写一段文字，或者写出你的感想等等。 这种形式为考生张扬个性提供了空间，答案不唯一，淋漓尽致地考查了考生发散思维和创新思维能力。 它还可能包括改写、缩写等其他形式。 近年来不少自主命题省（市）的高考试题有向（半）开放性过渡的趋势。
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
2001年高考英语作文全国卷 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。 周末活动(减负前) 周末活动(减负后) 白天：上课、做作业白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画 晚上：做作业晚上：看新闻、读书、看报 就寝时间：11:30 就寝时间：10:00 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 开头已为你写好。生词：减轻学习负担--reduce learning load Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again. Best wishes, Li Hua One possible version: Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again. You want 0cm 0to know what is going on in schools in China? In short, things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load. I don't know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time. I can follow my own interests such as reading books, visiting museums, and taking computer lessons. In the evenings I can watch news on TV or read newspapers. What's more, I can go to bed earlier. As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. Best wishes, Li Hua 2002年高考英语作文全国卷 第二节书面表达(满分25分) 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票？请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 60%的同学认为40%的同学认为 1. 不应收门票1. 应收门票，但票价不宜高 2. 公园是公众休闲的地方2. 支付园林工人工资 3. 如收票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象3. 购新花木 注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。2. 词数：100左右3. 参考词汇：门票entrance fee Dear Editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks. ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua Dear Editor, I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.
江苏省2019高考英语一二轮复习 练习一 全方位练词汇·夯实备考根基 Ⅰ.单词拼写 1．She spoke English with a Dutch accent(口音).But it could be absolutely understood. 2．At the end of the year everyone should think what has been accomplished(完成)and what is left undone. 3．I didn't break the vase on purpose,Mum.It was just an accident (意外)． 4．Try to understand what's actually(实际上)happening instead of acting on the assumption you've made. 5．His good education makes him have an advantage(优势)over others in hunting for a well-paid job. 6．We can be concerned about affairs(大事)of state through CCTV News 30Minutes. 7．In any unsafe situation,simply press the button and a highly-trained agent(代理人)will get you the help you need. 8．This job would not be finished without the aid(辅助)of a computer. 9．What's worse,the host had forgotten to arrange temporary accommodation(s)(住宿)for us. 10．John slowed the bleeding by applying pressure to the wounds until the police and ambulance(救护车)arrived. 11．Our plans of banning the sale of the alcohol(酒)to teenagers are still up in the air,let alone the sale of cigarettes. 12．Among those present were ambassador(大使)and his wife. 13．(2018·浙江高考)No one will ever know what mix of talent,ambition(抱负),energy and luck made Dickens such a distinguished writer.
2019高考英语写作专题（6）（感谢信）含参考范文 06感谢信 模板① Dear ________(对象), I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for________________________________(感谢的原 因). If it had not been for your assistance in________________________________(对方给你的具体 帮助), I fear that I would have been________________________________(没有对方帮助会产生的后果). Everyone agrees that it was you who ________________________________(给出细节). Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you. Please accept my sincere thanks. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板② Dear ______, How about you r life/ study/ work? I’m writing to express my thanks for your _____(感谢 的原因). If it had not been your assistance in _____(对方给你的具体帮助), I fear that I would have been_____ (没有对方帮助时的后果). During the ______, you gave me generous help and continuous guidance by _____. First, you _____.What’s mo re, you ______. There is still one thing that I can’t forget. That is _______. (原因) Thanks a lot for your kindness again. (再次致谢) Give my best regards to ______. (祝愿) Yours sincerely _______ 感谢信是用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问信和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长，只 需写明感谢他人的理由，信文要感情真挚，措辞得体。 感谢信一般分为三个部分： 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因；