Population aging, which has made it difficult for many companies to recruit eligible young employees,pushes people to rethink whether compulsory retirement has been out-of-date. In my opinion, we should abolish this regulation and create more flexible legal articles instead, to protect the benefits of both workers and employers.
One of the reasons is that mandatory retirement results in a huge waste of human resources. People differ in innate talents, physical conditions and career types, so a unified requirement for their retiring age will probably prevent them from continually contributing to the society. For example, an elder prestigious professor will be required to stop working when he reaches the age for retirement, no matter how well his body function is and how enthusiastic of him to commit to his job. It is counterproductive for him to realize potential to the utmost and achieve a sense of accomplishment, thereby causing a waste of his knowledge and intelligence.
This regulation is likely to lead to skills gap in many corporations and end with the shortfall of capital. This is particularly the case for companies in high-technology area, in which the manager needs to spend
lots of money and effort on recruiting and training new workers after the old stuff retire, especially when young talents are more and more difficult to find under the aging trend. Consequently, the lower quality of work outputs at the meantime will exert a detrimental effect on their financial power and competitiveness.
Some people may argue that if the mandatory retirement is abolished, the benefits that employees are endowed with will be easily disregarded. It is possible for them to suffer from labor exploitation of greedy superiors, and be required to take large amount of workloads to maximize compan ies’ interests. As a result, they are deprived the chance of enjoying the happiness of family reunion and are at greater risks of sickness. In my mind, however,this concern can be addressed through specific legislation, like setting rules specialized in labor-incentive works, but intellectual works should be in the same case.
As suggested above, considering the potential damages which are brought by compulsory retirement, it should be abolished.
评语：
1.总结段有些单薄，最好能总结上文出现的观点。
2.第二段中提出公司会花钱培养新员工，这是一个普遍的现象，因
为现在的员工都有一个入职培训，所以可以将这一段的观点改为
用老员工，可以减少公司培养新人的花费同时也可以缓解新人难找的压力。
3. 句意表达比较流畅，词汇使用丰富，多样。 评分项 解释 评 分 Task Achievement 任务完成情况 Covers all requirements of the task 满足题目所有要求 6
Coherence and Cohesion 连贯性和衔接性
Sequencing of information and ideas logically, sufficient and appropriate paragraphing. 信息和内容组织符合逻辑，分段足够且恰当 7 Lexical Resource 词汇多样性 Correct word choice and a lot of uncommon words. 选词正确，能使用不常见词汇
7 Grammar 语法
Command of the elements of Standard Written
English, including grammar, and sentence structure.
能运用标准的书面英语，包括语法及句式结构 7 得分：6.5
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雅思写作考试Task 1根据以下四个方面来评定： 1.Task achievement对于任务的完成情况 指的是考生怎样描述所给数据，是否能够辨别及描述与图表有关的主要信息。要求考生回答问题准确，即考生的作文内容是否与所给数据信息密切相关。考生如果想在这部分取得高分，行文就必须尽可能包括主要的相关信息，不要加入无关信息。因此，第一步的审图工作非常关键，考生一定要辨别出图表数据所表达的主要趋势和主要信息。当考生辨认出主要的信息后，就需要进一步寻找相关的细节来佐证主要信息。 完成图表作文要做很多准备工作，其中最主要的是列提纲。众所周知，图表提供大量信息，但是考生不必把所有的信息都描述出来，只要找到主要的信息并在心里组织或写出简要的提纲就可以。考生可以在草纸上列出提纲，也可以随意涂写提纲，即使是汉语也没有关系。在雅思考试中，由于时间比较宝贵，所以提纲一定要简洁，考生可以适当使用自己能识别的缩写形式和其它符号来拟写。提纲拟定后，考生落笔时只要在每一段主要的信息之后补充相应的细节来佐证，便可完成整篇文章的行文。
一旦考生收集到足够的信息，就已经满足了雅思考官的第一条评分标准。 2.统一性和连贯性(Coherence and cohesion) 统一性和连贯性指的是考生怎样组织报告, 报告是否易于理解，同时考查句子之间关系连词的使用。一篇组织得当、易于阅读的作文将会给雅思考官一个良好的印象。考生需要注意： ●段落的组织：考生报告的结构一定要组织得当, 各段落要 连贯，以正确的顺序排列； ●句群的组织：句子之间最好用连词来组织句群； ●句子的变化：尽量避免使用只有一个主语和谓语动词的单 句，把单句扩展成更长的复合句。 （1）段落的组织 在雅思考试Task 1中，一般来说，每个段落只应讨论一个主要变化趋势。考生可根据这一主要趋势添加与其相关的佐证细节，完成该段的主要信息与相关信息的描述。 总的规则是，每一个不同的主要趋势都要各用单独的一段来描述，表中有几个主要趋势，正文就应分为几段。每一段要包含不止一个句子，除了表示主要趋势的主题句之外，还应辅之以与该主要趋势一致的相关细节描述，如具体的数字、数值、升降变化及倍数表达等。如果这个信息只能用一句话表达，那么或者把这个信息放在上一段最后一句，或者
雅思7分大作文范文批改和解析 距离雅思写作7分你大概还有3个步骤要走，是的，不是谁都可以轻轻松松活动雅思高分的。今天给大家带来了雅思7分大作范文批改和解析,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。 雅思7分大作范文批改和解析 雅思写作提高第一步：结构(5.0 - 5.5) 问题：出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad) 同学：One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners. 解析：出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读初中和高中都算出国);出国就是better education，在国内就不是better? 出
some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than t he advantages, do you agree or disagree? 范文1 the birth of cars have made an enormous change to our life.in th e past,we travel from one place to another only by foot,nowaday,car s can do it .its goes withour saying that the invention of cars br ing great benefit to all of us.but as proverb goes:no garden withou t weeds.car is not exception. owing a car has a lot of advantages.for one thing,car provide us th e most convient way of transportation.we can get around freely withou t spenting a lot of time.emotionally,i always found driving is so ex citing.for another,its the comfortable to drive a car.In winter.driver s always can stay warm and dry even in rainy whether,in addition,dri vers are usually safe in their cars when they are out at night. Cars bring the human merits,their side-effects gradually come to th e surface.firstly,to run a car need a lot o f oil,which is gettin g l ess and less.the increasing number of cars contribute the lacking o f energy.secondlly,as more and more cars are used,the traffic ecpeci ally in bi g cities is getting heaver and heavier,whic h lead to th e serious social problem--traffic jam.in addition,the inceasing number s of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantities of carbon monoxid e into atmosphere.it make the air o f cities unbreathabe,it strip peop le contact with frensh air. therefore, new energy should be explored to replace the oil so tha t our envionmental pollution can be avioded .and the strick law shou ld be issued to keep the numbers of cars under control.thus,our heav ier traffic can be solluted! 范文2 Private cars vs Public traffic As traffic problems become more and more serious in many cities o f developed and developin g countries, their governments have to try h ard and loads of money and energy have been spent to deal with the m. Firstly, it is not efficient for the commuters to use their privat e cars to and back from their workplaces. Occasionally we can see t
雅思评分标准：2010年雅思写作评分标准 2010最新详细的雅思写作评分标准。雅思写作评分小作文、大作文分别评分，总分相加，得到两项的平均分，便是雅思写作的总分。而雅思小作文及大作文的评分标准不同，但都是以文章完成度、结构联结、内容丰富程度，以及语法词汇的准确度四项分别评分，之后取均分得到每篇作文的成绩。下面是详细的从9分到0分的评分标准。 IELTS Writing Band Descriptors: Task 1 Band Task achievement Coherence and cohesion Lexical resource Grammatical range and accuracy 9 ?fully satisfies all the requirements of the task ?clearly presents a fully developed response ?uses cohesion in such a way that it attracts no attention ?skilfully manages paragraphing ?uses a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’ ?uses a wide range of structures with full flexibility and accuracy; rare minor errors occur only as ‘slips’ 8 ?covers all requirements of the task sufficiently ?presents, highlights and illustrates key features/ bullet points clearly and appropriately ?sequences information and ideas logically ?manages all aspects of cohesion well ?uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately ?uses a wide range of vocabulary fluently and flexibly to convey precise meanings ?skilfully uses uncommon lexical items but there may be occasional inaccuracies in word choice and collocation
雅思5分剑桥7 Test1 小作文范文 学生原文： The graph shows the total number of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2004. In this graph, we can see the consumption of chicken experienced a erratic rise of almost 100 Grans per person per week during 25 years. Then, the consumption of fish always rank the last. And the consumption of the Lamp underwent a erratic decline from 1976 to 2004. In the spite of the fact that from 1979 to 1984 withnessed a wild fluctuation rise in consumption of Beef, when it experienced a sharply decline over last 20 years. While the consumption of chicken underwent a erratic rise from 1979 to 2004. After that, the consumption of fish almost remain the same level at 50 grans per person per week in 25 years. And subsequently, the comsuption of lamb showed a moderate decline, dropping by almost 50 Grans per person per week in 25 years, and the consumption of chicken surpassed it in the early 5 years.
Task：Some people think getting old is entirely bad. However, others think that life of the elderly in modern world is much easier than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 思路解析： 2016年雅思收官之战的作文来了一道新题，问当今社会老年人的生活是不是很 糟糕?说是新题，因为本题以前从未原题出现过，但关于年龄的话题却不缺少。 比如2010年7月10日“年轻人是否适合担任政府要职”，2012年3月10日“老 龄化现象的原因及解决方法”，2012年3月31日“年轻人和老年人谁的价值更 高?”，2013年6月8日“政府是否应该对老年人养老提供财政支持?”，2015 年1月1日“年轻人当领导，行不行?”，2015年4月11日“老年人与年轻人 争夺工作职位，怎么办?”等等。 本题需要论证的对立观点是：年老很糟糕 vs. 当今社会年老没有那么糟糕。那 么，变老有哪些坏处呢?首先，当然是身体条件没有以前好了，甚至可能出现多 种疾病(物质层面);其次，不工作了，与人的联系少了，心里可能会感觉孤单， 甚至感觉没有价值了(精神层面);最后，变老后对社会的依赖程度更高，给社会 增加了压力(社会层面)。那么，这些问题在当今社会是不是得到了解决呢?首先， 医疗条件的改善有助于保持老年人的身体状况;互联网的出现有助于缓解老年人 的心理孤单问题;物质水平的提高也降低了老年人给社会造成的压力。如此观之， 现代社会老年人的生活的确容易多了，但我的观点是：外部条件只是改善老年人 生活的一个方面，最重要的还是老年人自己要积极调整心态，努力适应退休后的 生活，从而过一个更幸福更祥和的晚年。 Sample answer： Getting old is a natural process that nobody really likes. When you reach a certain age, your physical conditions will inevitably deteriorate, and you may suffer from various kinds of diseases. When you retire, you will feel isolated because your previous work contacts may be all gone, then you may feel useless to the world. Furthermore, when you get too old, you’ ll have to rely heavily on the support from others, either physically or emotionally, and your life will become a great pressure to your family and the whole society as well. For all these bad things about getting old, many people argue that the life of the elderly today is much easier than in the past. In the first place, medical advances nowadays have made it possible for the old people to stay sound and healthy for quite a long while even after they retire. Diseases such as diabetes, hypertension and heart attack which might have
雅思小作文写作
Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数 ●百分比改写
【最新整理，下载后即可编辑】 范文的思路好了。这样好的东西，可惜不是我整理的，是一个叫landfish姑娘收集的，厉害！ v105 Some people claim that the disadvantages of the car are more than the advantages,do you ag ree or disagree? 范文1 The birth of cars has made an enormous change to our life. In the past, we travelled fro m one place to another only by foot, nowadays, cars can do the same job . It goes withou r saying that the invention of cars bring great benefits to all of us. but as an ancient prove rb goes, no garden without weeds. Car is no exception. Owing a car has a lot of advantages. For one thing, car provides us the most convenient wa y of transportation. we can get around freely without spenting a lot of time. Emotionally, I always found driving is so exciting. For another , it is comfortable to drive a car.in winte r.Drivers always can stay warm and dry even in rainy weather .In addition, drivers are saf er in their cars when they are out at night. While cars bring the human a large number of merits ,their side-effects gradually come t o the surface .Firstly, running a car needs a lot of oil,which is getting less and less.The incre asing number of cars contributes the lack of energy.Secondlly,as more and more cars are util zed,the traffic ecpecially in big cities is getting heaver and heavier,which leads to the seriou s traffic jam.Moreover,the inceasing numbers of cars ,which excaust sent a huge quantitie s of carbon monoxide into atmosphere.It makes the air of cities unbreathable, it strips peop le’s contact with fresh air. Therefore, the new energy should be explored to replace the oil so that our envionmental p ollution can be avioded , and the strick law should be issued to keep the numbers of cars un der control. Thus, our heavier traffic can be solved!
[雅思写作评分标准2017]雅思写作评分标准【教育公文写作】 (1) [雅思写作评分标准]雅思写作的准备方法 对绝大多数学生来说，写作是雅思4门考试中最难的。很多同学从来就没有用英文写过文章，但写作反应一个人的综合英语水平，它又是4门中最重要的。对于基础班的同学来说，他们最大的问题是词汇和语法，而语言恰恰是写作的评分标准之一，没有好的语言，思路和结构再好也没有用。所以提高语言运用的准确性是第一个要解决的问题。我最近刚开始教一个基础班，第一次不限字数让学生写一个印象最深的人。交上来的文章出现最大的问题就是语言表达。他们的思路很好，内容也比较充实，但是语法错误通篇都是，词汇量也很小。 对于这种情况，首先要做的就是帮助他们梳理语法结构。因为这些学生有一定的英语基础但是很不扎实，语法虽然知道但是漏洞很多，我给他们讲解语法时尽量简单，比如讲到动词不定式的复合结构作主语的情况时，必须要用形式主语来表示。学生会觉得这些理论知识很难记，这时我就让
他们背这样一个一般结构：It is +adj+for sb. to do sth. 写作的最终目的是要写出准确的句子，所以在讲语法时给学生总结一些句型比单纯的讲语法会更容易让他们接受。又如，在讲到当动词不定式作定语时，一般与被修饰词有动宾关系，如果动词不定式为不及物动词，则在动词不定式后加上相应的介词。很多学生刚听这个会觉得很抽象，我就举了这个例子：Please give the child a pen to write with. 在判断到底要不要在动词后面加介词时，只要把to后面的动词和相应的宾语做一个动宾搭配，看意思是否正确即可，因为只能说write with a pen，而不能说write a pen。 (2) [雅思写作评分标准]雅思作文评分标准细则 雅思考试（IELTS），全称国际英语语言测试系统，外文名International English Language Testing System，由剑桥大学考试委员会外语考试部、英国文化协会及IDP教育集团共同管理，是一种针英语能力，下面就是小编整理的雅思作文评分标准细则，一起来看一下吧。 雅思作文评分标准细则解读 1. Task response & Task achievement
Some people think government should pay for public libraries in every town, while others think itis a waste of money because people can access information from the internet. Discuss both viewsand give your own opinion. It is argued that government should invest more money in public libraries; the other people believe that we can search the information from the internet, so government should not cost money in public libraries. I agree with this idea. Surfing on the internet is the fashion way to search information in modern life, there are a lot of people use computer or mobile phone to find some information on the internet. It is because people believe that internet is the most convenient platform to find the key. People can get all the information they want effectively, rather than go to the library cost a large amount of time to read book. On the other handthe books in libraries are though many times of check and reserve, that can ensure the authority of every book. So some people would like to go to library to read the book and find the truth. Especially in medical book, if doctor find some information is wrong, it will affect the patient who was saved by the doctor. Considering the
雅思大作文5分与7分范文各项指数对比分析 Let’s compare two answers to a question.The topic is as follows: International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the advantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages? A Poor Essay – The following is a band 5 essay. International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly. Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plant s. Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean. Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun. But on the other hand, people often for get that they aren’t the only beings on the planet. Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wan’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dea d or live animals or some sculpture. To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but alsow protect environment. Below is an analysis of this essay. Task Response The essay question has been copied and used as the introduction (paragraph 1). Once these 34 words are taken off the word count, the response is underlength at 194 words and so loses marks. Nevertheless, the topic is addressed and a relevant position is expressed, although there are patches – as in the third paragraph – where the development is unclear. Other ideas are more relevant but are sometimes insufficiently developed.
Writing Notes Date: July, 9th, 2017 Task I 1.Three Types i.Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart ◆图表类型：动态图、静态图 ◆动态图：有两个或以上时间 ◆重点 ●趋势 ●特殊值：起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点 ◆静态图：只有一个或者没有时间 ●比较描述对象：使用倍数、比较级 ii.Process: Flow Chart iii.Map ◆Describe the change ◆Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park 2.评分标准 i.Task Achievement/ Task Response ◆Cover the Requirements of the task ◆No off topics ◆不能添加主观想法，只能描述 ii.Coherence and Cohesive ◆使用路标性词汇：顺承和转折 iii.Lexical Resource ◆使用非高频词汇 ◆Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately ◆Vocabulary diversity ◆Accurate spelling words iv.Grammatical Range and Accuracy ◆Accurate grammar of sentences ◆Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical 3.写作方法 i.开头段 ◆图表词改写 ●The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram ◆动词shows改写 ●注意时态 ●Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates ◆关键词（一定要改写） ●数量改写 ?The number of + 可数 ?The amount of + 不可数 ?The quantity of + 可/不可数 ?The figure for +可/不可数
满分雅思大作文赏析 对于雅思写作的复习，一些雅思大作文范文，例文还是很有必要自己观摩的，为此小编特收集整理了这篇雅思大作文九分例文点评，分享给大家。希望考生能从中总结出对自己有用的知识点。 满分雅思大作文赏析 范文第一段： C h i l d r e n w h o g r o w u p i n f a m i l i e s w h i c h a r e s h o r t o f m o n e y a r e b e t t e r p r e p a r e d t o d e a l w i t h t h e p r o b l e m s o f a d u l t l i f e t h a n c h i l d r e n w h o a r e b r o u g h t u p b y w e a l t h y p a r e n t s.T o w h a t e x t e n t d o y o u a g r e e o r d i s a g r e e? S o m e f e e l t h a t t h e c h i l d r e n o f l o w i n c o m e f a m i l i e s a r e b e t t e r e q u i p p e d t o d e a l w i t h d i f f i c u l t i e s p o s e d b y t h e r e a l w o r l d w h e n t h e y g r o w u p a n d t h e y a l s o b e l i e v e t h e p r i v i l e g e d c h i l d r e n o f w e a l t h y f a m i l i e s a r e l e s s f i t t o d e a l w i t h t h e s e d i f f i c u l t i e s .T h e i m p l i c a t i o n s a n d v e r a c i t y o f t h i s a r g u m e n t s e e m s e l f-e v i d e n t,b u t i n f a c t r e q u i r e c l o s e r e x a m i n a t i o n.(58w o r d s) 名师点评：
General Knowledge 注意： 1. 作文要有实质内容。 2. 6分：260~270个词左右；6.5分：280个词以上。 3. 没有必要一定写长难句，但要提高句子的准确度和多样性。必须在对英语造句知识准确理解和把握的基础上流畅地写出复杂的长句子，而不是刻意、机械地拉长句子。（准确、严密、多样、清晰） 4. 对于零星出现的少量拼写错误，只要不引起歧义，是不会导致严重扣分的，但要努力减少作文里出现拼写错误的可能。 5. 考场里没有时间打草稿，但可以在印考题的试题纸上把看到题目后头脑里闪现出的ideas、考前准备的相关加分词汇和句型大致记录一下。 6. 当考官要求停笔时即使还没有写完也一定要停下来，否则会被判为违纪行为。 7. 考前练习一定要尽可能模拟实战：下载标准格式的答题纸；用铅笔写作，每行10~12个单词；严格控制时间，Task 1不应超过25 min，Task 2不应超过45 min。备考初期，可将Task 1和Task 2分开练习，但在考前一周内，必须演练完整的写作考试全程，严格控制时间，写完后再核对或请有经验的老师批改。 8.
如果Task 2准备得较为充分，有信心在40min写出一篇自己满意的议论文，那么就先完成Task 2。反之，就先写Task 1。 9. 齐头式：每段开头顶格写，每两段之间空一行 缩入式：每段开头后退3~4个字母的距离，每个段落之间不空行 10. 可使用I/we、被动语态，但不宜滥用；可将But/So放在句首 11. 7分或以上的作文对于用词的要求是准确，而不是冗长 ?Topics ?学术类写作的特殊要求 1. 不接受缩写形式 2. 不使用非正式口语表达 3. 英美拼写不能混淆 4. 用词要有特色 5. 句式不能过于短促 6. 句式不能过于干瘪 7. 感情色彩不能过于强烈
题目是Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?Should governments give more financial support to local film industries? 很多人喜欢外国电影胜过本土电影。原因？政府该资助本地电影么？ 考官级范文库：6大题型36篇9分雅思写作范文汇总分享 范文： It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry. There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’or the James Bond films are examples of such productions and the global appeal that they have. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison. In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies. In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market. (295 words, band 9) 题目是Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?重复犯罪的原因和解决方法 范文： A large number of criminals who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison only to reoffend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding regular employment once released. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with criminals who reoffend. Firstly, the reason for most first-time offenders committing crimes again, once they have been released from prison, is due to the lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour and instead mix with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions. Secondly, repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment after being released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences. There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job after they have served their sentence. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means of supporting themselves financially. Another method of dealing with criminals who reoffend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they are back in society. This solution would hopefully prevent them from taking any chances and deter them from reoffending because they are being so closely watched. In conclusion, having training in prison and also close observation when first time offenders are released are effective in dealing with the issue. If governments implemented these solutions, crime figures would soon drop.