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Essay 由 introduction， body, conclusion, reference四部分组成，下面以这篇文章为例，教你如何写作一篇符合格式的essay
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Essay 是理论性较强的论文，通常情况下，一定用第3人称，禁止出现“I”，“we” “our”， “you”, “your”这些第一,二人称字样，注意语言措辞，多用些副词。为了避免使用第一人称，某些地方可以用被动语态或其他句型代替。
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Introduction （essay的introduction只有一段，但由两部分内容组成。蓝色字体的地方是introduction的第一部分，它相当于一个开篇，引出这篇essay的主旨。然后从this essay
will开始是introduction的第二部分，介绍本文结构，不要再用the structure is like this这样的语句了，比较chinglish。介绍结构请统一用将来时态）
Since the setting up of the first factories in the late eighteenth century, management had become a problem seriously affecting the factories’ production. Then, management was gradually recognised as an important element of the success or failure of a company. Until the nineteenth century, the systematic and scientific management theory came out with its leading thinkers, two of whom were well known as Frederick W. Taylor and Elton Mayo. Both Taylor and Mayo stated the importance of the productivity and cooperation between managers and workers.This essay will firstly discuss these similarities in their different management theories and how they relate to each other. Following this, it will explain the differences of the two theories concerning the consideration of the human beings during management. Finally, it will look at how the two theories affect the feeling of workers and support increasing the productivity and maximising the efficiency.
（Introduction之后body，把文章分成几大部分讨论，每一个板块写一个小标题，加粗）
Similarities and relations in management theories of Taylor and Mayo
Although Taylor and Mayo have different management theories, they both aim to make workers more productive and efficient during the management. Taylor, the founder of the movement known as ‘scientific management’, states ‘The principal object of management should be to secure the maximum prosperity for the employer, coupled with the maximum prosperity for the employee’ (Taylor, 1947, p.36). According to this, workers should be trained as ‘first-class’ and follow the methods of the work which managers have carefully analysed and set up. Workers are not responsible to think about the way of doing the work, and they just do what managers 批注 [LX1]: 这个标志很重要，所有essay都必须按照这个格式来。从这里开始，就是对整个essay的主要内容分几个大的部分来进行一个概括。这个标志后的内容应为body里的内容A
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tell them to, and that makes them more productive, which is the aim of work. Taylor is much concerned about increasing the output of the production systematically and scientifically and at the meantime decreasing the cost per output. Taylor (1947) believed that by scientifically selecting them, workers would possess the physical and intellectual qualities to enable them to get work done systematically and efficiently and consequently achieve the output. Similarly, Elton Mayo also pays much attention to productivity and efficiency. Mayo (1933) introduced rest pauses as one technique and explained its importance for accomplishing work productively. The rest periods eliminate the monotony of the work, which can lead to ‘pessimistic reveries’ (p.59). Workers could re-participate into the task fast due to the relief of postural fatigue and impaired circulation during the rest pauses. Generally speaking, both Taylor and Mayo treated labor as the main source of productivity and efficiency which are the eventual destination of work, and created the different theories to achieve the increase of the two factors.
The other one similarity of the two thinkers’ theories is the aspect of cooperation between managers and workers. Both of them indicate the necessity and importance of finishing a task cooperatively. From Taylor’s point of view, there is an equal division of work and responsibility between management and workers. Managers are responsible to study the scientific way and set up the rational and productive methods to accomplish the task while the workers should strictly follow those determined methods and cooperatively finish the work, since the close personal cooperation can eliminate the opportunities of conflict. Work can be hardly completed by individual person, because if every member in the group works individually following their own ways, the task eventually fails, and this stresses the importance of the cooperation during the whole process of the work. Tillett, Kempner and Wills (1970) also stated ‘it is important to stress the nature of the cooperative system between management and men which Taylor advocated’ (p.80). According to Taylor’s theory, workers should be friendly and obey managers and do what they were told, which is obviously
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the reflect on cooperation. As well as Taylor, Mayo also treats cooperation as an important role in his ‘Human Relations’ theory. One of the three summarised main points of Mayo’s research, ‘the importance of the work group’, illustrates that ‘group collaborations with management’s objectives is important and must be planned for rather than expected’ (Tillett, Kempner & Wills, 1970, p.300). Mayo’s theory is concerned more about the feelings of the workers. By giving workers the rest pauses and providing them with good working conditions and circumstances, the morale of the workers can largely increase, which leads to the efficiency and well-cooperative achievement. Mayo’s best known research ‘Hawthorne Experiments’ also proves that the informal social patterns of work on which work satisfaction and performance depend more than on formal organisation makes the workers less stressed to work together and finish the work efficiently (Mayo, 1933).
Differences of the two theories
As Taylor and Mayo are two different leading thinkers, their theories do differ from each other in certain aspects. Taylor (1947) pointed that the methods of achieving work should be systematically and scientifically planned and set up by manager, and workers should be trained as ‘first-class men’ and strictly follow the determined methods and finish the work efficiently. He proved his theory by an experiment. In the experiment, Taylor selected a person, and persuaded him a higher wage rate by doing the work following his method. The experiment eventually showed that huge increases in productivity were probable when rational and systematic techniques of management were applied. According to the ‘Scientific Management’, workers are strictly controlled by managers, and do whatever they have been told, which makes them bore, and sometimes response against managers. Hoxie (1915) indicated ‘Scientific Management’ removed the control from workers who are closer to the work than anyone else to the managers, which only offers managers themselves for improvement. Although the theory gives more control to managers than workers and indeed efficiently and productively improves workers, it concerns the feelings of 批注 [LX6]: （仅针对这一篇essay来说），从这个地方开始就是body内容里的内容B部分
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workers and the friendly relationship between managers and workers much less than those are expected.
On the contrary, Mayo, the creator of ‘Human Relations’ theory, thought there was some kind of human element responsible for performance improvement during the management. In his ‘Hawthorne Experiments’ between 1927 and 1932, six female assemblers were isolated form the rest of the factory, and had their conditions of work such as physical conditions, rest pauses systematically changed during the years. The experiment showed productivity improved with those change (Mayo, 1933). Mayo (1939) focuses the productivity of the work on ‘morale’. He believed people had a strong need for social relationships and that often it is the informal network of relationships at work which determine how they will act (Inkson & Kolb, 2002). Workers, as human beings, want more physical and psychological care and consideration. The necessary rest pauses, working conditions and less-stressed circumstances make workers ignore the monotony of the task and improve their activities and the quality and efficiency of the achievement. By working in informal groups, the workers’ attitude toward their work and working environment could be significantly improved so that the productivity and efficiency of the work increase dramatically. Mayo’s research shows the importance of the human relations during the whole management. It treats workers more like human beings rather than only the labor, compare to Taylor’s ‘Scientific Management’, which restricts the workers’ freedom of doing other things out of work, treating them more like machine. Taylor’s theory could easily make the relationship between managers and works collapse, since no person wants to be forced to do anything, while Mayo creates a relaxed environment for workers, which makes workers more willing to do the work for managers. This illustrates the two theories differ as well on the workers’ attitude toward the work. According to Taylor’s theory, workers are more likely to work passively, and they always struggle from doing exactly what managers told. 批注 [LX7]: （仅针对这一篇essay来说），从这个地方开始就是body内容里的内容C部分，也就是此篇essay的body内容的最后一部分
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How the two theories affect the feeling of workers
B oth Taylor and Mayo created their own management theories, and proved they all effectively improved the aspect of management about the productivity and the efficiency. Taylor focuses on setting up the scientific, systematic and rational methods by managers and organising and controlling workers to finish the work by requiring them to strictly follow the methods, which increases the productivity scientifically. Mayo is more concerned about the workers’ feeling, as human beings. He believes that workers are the cores of a task, and their responsibilities to work are more likely to base on morale, for which the rest pauses, good working conditions and relaxed environment are essential. To form the informal groups, the work could be accomplished with high standards of cooperation and productivity.
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Conclusion
In conclusion, Taylor requires managers to manage and workers only to follow managers without doing any other things out of work, while Mayo considers more about workers. He improves more on circumstances during work and makes workers work enthusiastically to achieve the high productivity through social contact. Although both two theories give rise on productivity and efficiency, they differ from each other on treating workers. The two thinkers both agree that cooperation is necessary and important. Whichever way to approach, cooperation is always the essential point to achieve productivity. As a result, Taylor’s ‘Scientific Management’ theory leads to the high rate of labor turnover and seems spectacularly successful with simple jobs in short-term. However, Mayo’s theory illustrates workers contribute into the work enthusiastically, which could maintain the trained workers in the long-term. 批注 [L9]: 这个标志是conclusion的一个重要标志，一定要写这个词，同时可以用To sum up 或Conslusively 代替，conclusion和introduction一样，只能写一段，而且至少要写到半页
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References:
Hoxie, R.F. (1915). Scientific Management and Labor. New York: Appleton. Inkson, K. & Kolb, D. (2002) Management. New Zealand: Pearson Eduction.
Mayo, E. (1933) The human problems of n industrial civilisation. New York: Macmillan; Roethlisberger, F.J. and Dickson, W.J. (1939) Management and the worker. Cambridge, MA: Harvard University Press.
Taylor, F.W. (1947) The Principles of Scientific Management. New York: Harper and Row.
Tillett, A., Kempner, T., & Wills, G. (1970) Management Thinkers. Great Britain: Hazell Watson and Viney.
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英国留学论文宝是一家成立于英国本地的正规论文辅导机构，已成功经营十年。留学论文宝专注于解决学生的课业负担，也见证了莘莘学子的辛劳与成就。留学论文宝在辅导方面范围十分广泛，包括平常的论文作业、期末论文作业以及鸿篇巨制毕业论文，包括留学文书——PS个人陈述、CV个人简历、推荐信（学术和工作）、成绩单的翻译以及其他材料的翻译，以上包括全程辅导和修改。留学论文宝在辅导论文作业的领域上是十分专业和广泛的，文科、理科、工科、商科、艺术等皆可。 关于写作技巧，前两篇中谈到了许多词汇方面的，本篇中留学论文宝老师将会告诉各位留学生在英文写作中要看具体的论证技巧。 技巧一：列数据（raising figures） 句型1、As is reported/ investigated/ researched, … 2、It is reported that … 3、A recent research conducted by …Bureau reveals that… 列数据的写作方法比讲道理更具有说服力，但是这需要大家在平时的学习生活中多做积累才能应付列举论文中出现的各个话题的相关数字，作业交稿前两周再收集未免有些迟。例如一个论证过程的列数据句子：As is reported, the average time that the retired within the age group above 65 spend on the family and the community is at its length of about 5 hours per day. 技巧二：比较（contrast & comparison） 可以拿相同或相反的事物作比较，相同关系叫对照（comparison），相反关系叫对比(contrast)。此类论证我们重点掌握一些对比对照关系的连词：In contrast, by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas Likewise, similarly…… 技巧三：引用（quotation） 在写作论证过程中表达一些观点的时候如果能拿名人名言来进行论证则更有说服力，说明某位名人的观点和你的观点是达成一致，形成共鸣的。但引用要求留学生要有相当大的积累，所以再次说明积累的重要性。 技巧四：让步（making conception） 让步的论证一般是比较少见的，但是在学状语从句中就学过让步的关系，先退一步承认一个与自己观点相反的事实再转折给出自己的观点，否定前者，句型
耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay范文 导读：本文耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay 范文，仅供参考，如 果能帮助到您，欢迎点评和分享。 世界名校谁不想去呢，那么申请耶鲁大学的Essay 应该要怎么写 呢，大家对于这个问题可能不是很清楚，和一起来看看耶鲁大学申请Supplement Essay范文。 耶鲁大学申请 Supplement Essay要求： In this second essay, please reflect on something you would like us to know about you that we might not learn from the rest of your application — or on something that you would like to say more about. 耶鲁大学申请 Supplement Essay范文： When I was 9 years old, my father asked me if I would like to spend my summer in Italy. At the time, I thought it was joke (and so did my mother). But it wasn ’ t. Five months later I was boarding a plane for a 12 hour trip that would take me to a country whose language I didn ’ tspe ak to spend a month with relatives I hadn ’ t seen in years. It was this experience that definitely made me fall in love with travelling. After this initial experience, I was never able to stay put. I ended up going to Italy three more times, completely alone. At
英国论文（Essay）写作技巧—优越论文 没出过的学生向往国外的学习和生活，留学生烦恼很多，主要就是写Essay 了，一篇一篇的论文堆积如山，熬到半夜两三点还是没写完，勉强过关，第二天还是一整天的课程！无数的学生都在说论文作业很难，写不出来。以下是英国优越论文老师给出的一些Tips. 首先，以下是几点写作论文是必须注意的。 1、尽量少用“I think”“As is known to all”等比较主观评价的词，更不要用未注明来源的引语，比如“有人说过”“一位著名语言学家曾经探讨过”“功能语言学认为”等。 2、要旁征博引，但是不能生吞活剥，东拼西凑。 3、注意文章的简洁性，对发展文章主题没有作用的引文坚决不用。 4、区别直接引用和间接引用。一手资料的引文，比如引用的内容与原文一致的就用引号，并标注来源；一手资料间接引文，如果是归纳他人的观点的，最好是解释性地引用他人的成功，不用引号也不需要标注来源；二手资料间接引文，如果是在阅读某人A文献的时候发现被其引用的另一作者B也有值得引用的观点，引用的方式就是——B(1989)曾指出……f转引自A 19951。这里要求A和B 均必须出现在参考文献中。 5、避免无意的plagiarism，也尽量不要copy.有时候将以前从某书上学习到的观点和理论用于文章中而忽略了其来源，这就造成了无意剽窃。 6、不提出证据不足的观点，也不用“我认为”“大多数研究者会同意这样的观点”等虚张声势的表达方式。 7、任何一个观点都要有来源，或者得到作者的论证。如何证明一个观点其实是比较困难的问题。 其次，要追求Essay的原创性。 原创性是学术追求的目标，也是每一个要写论文的留学生所必须了解的。一般来说，综述性文章的原创性内容比较少，多为介绍他人的论述，少数内容是作者的分析和看法。综述文章又可分为大综述文章和小综述文章，前者覆盖一段历史的理论发展，后者仅限于某人某阶段的理论研究。写综述文章必须做到介绍他人尚未介绍的理论。 有一类文章是批判性的论述文章，这类文章原创的内容有多有少，它的原创部分是建立在对相关理论的批判之上，它所提出的新见解必须论据充分，条理清晰，逻辑性强。实证性的文章原创成分最大，一般是根据以往研究中心出现得不足提出的一个新见解并加以证明，其中实证性的文章一般分为： 1、分析性／推理性实证：将论点建立在语言事实及其分析上，重语言事实及分析工具。 2、实验性实证：根据以往研究的不足提出新的观点或假设，设计试验方法，控制相关变量，收集有效数据并加以分析，并用数据分析的结果来证明文章提出的假设。 3、调查性实证：它是根据以往研究引出的问题设计的调查问卷，探索调查对象在某方面表现出的规律性特征。
哈佛大学个人陈述PS三篇优秀范文示例 撰写留学文书最难的部分是personal statement（PS），我们可以通过以下三篇优秀的哈佛大学优秀essay来了解下，如何撰写高质量的文章。 第一篇申请美国哈佛大学的Essay范文，以音乐才能为主题，采用的是场景描述式来制造戏剧冲突，引起读者注意。Essay题材类型为talent。Essay短文讲述了作者的才能：Music。 "A special Performance" I stood behind the curtains listening to the applause to the previous act. I exhaled, realizing that this was a moment that fulfilled my childhood wish. Tonight was special because instead of an alto aria or a jazz lick, I had prepared a song unique to my identity. I curled my fingers around the microphone and waited impatiently as the curtains opened. My love for performance stemmed from my appreciation of music as a child. In the city in China where I spent the first ten years of my life, I never found a choir to join and never laid eyes on a grand piano. Nonetheless, I treasured my passion for song and sought ways to bring music into my life. I sang with our old record player when I was barely tall enough to reach it. On certain afternoons, my best friend and I would tape bed sheets to the ceiling as curtains and invite neighbors to come listen. There, we sang in duet, danced, and bowed while clasping each other's hands. Captured in our own musical sanctuary, we never noticed the hours that passed by. Music evokes in me the emotions that words and pictures cannot. I also revel in the intellectual challenges that music offers. I find it thrilling to tackle difficult, delicious repertoire, and I enjoy composing my own melodies. Through music, I can share and celebrate my past. When I was asked to share my cultural talents at my high school, I looked for a song that my mother sang when I was young, but I could not find the sheet music. A week before tonight, I sat down by the old piano in the practice room at school. With only the old tune ringing faintly in my mind, my hands soon took a life of their own and experimented with chords, arpeggios, and trills. I superimposed these on the original melody and composed variations. My voice, too, frolicked with the piano as I sang the tune repeatedly. I was lost in another musical paradise. I felt like a child again, tucked under the covers, listening to my mother's song as I drifted away to dreams. Now, dressed in an old Chinese dress that my mother had worn in her youth, I stepped onto the empty stage illuminated by pale blue light. I held the microphone up to my lips and smiled before starting. Then, I brought to life the beautiful ballad that had brightened my childhood in China. My mind overflowed with warm memories of that faraway city as I lulled the audience with my melody. When I caught my mother's face in the audience, I knew she nestled in the same air of nostalgia. Music allows me to present my native culture and contribute to the diversity in my community. It has stimulated my mind and provided an outlet for my creativity. To me, nothing is more pleasurable than being imaginative. Carrying my childhood love of music through my teenage years has been a gratifying experience, and I look forward to continuing in my undergraduate years.
Essay 由introduction，main body, conclusion, reference四部分组成，下面以这篇文章为例，教你如何写作一篇符合格式的essay 全文统一用times new roman字体，小四，1.5倍行距 文章中请不要用I，WE，OUR，YOU，YOUR之类的主观性强的1，2人称，可以用被动语态或其他句型代替 1.0 Introduction (分两部分) Allainz the biggest insurance wants to further expand its business, globally. Among all the countries India and China are two most attractive markets. Before deciding which market to involve in, a detailed market research is indispensable. This essay just gives a comprehensive study over the two markets. (第一个部分介绍essay的主要内容)Firstly, this essay will make a general overview of the insurance industry globally, and the second part is the information of the Allianz Group. Subsequently it will make some market analysis of Chinese insurance market. The analysis of Indian insurance market lies in the fourth part of the easy. Finally it will put forward some recommendation for the marketing selection and entering strategy for the Allianz group. （Introduction第二部分介绍这篇文章的结构，按照firstly, secondly,…finally的固定形式介绍文章结构，你只需列入body里面介绍的每一点） （Introduction之后是main body，把文章分成几个小点讨论，每一点写个小标题，加粗） 2.0 The general overview of the insurance industry globally The insurance industry is the industry dealing in risk and larger sum of money is indispensable for the business of this line. Insurers promise to compensate individuals and businesses for future losses, in exchange for a premium, thus taking on the risk of personal injury, death, and damage to property, unexpected financial disaster and just about any other misfortune. Insurance companies also purchase their own type of insurance, called reinsurance, which allows them to insure large risks and to spread the risk on smaller accounts. Insurance companies rely on investment income to make a profit, since premium alone is typically not adequate to pay claims.
1. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Recreational Activities. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.娱乐活动多种多样 2.娱乐活动可能使人们受益，也可能有危害性 3.作为大学生，我的看法 Recreational Activities The twenty-first century has brought with it an unprecedented variety of recreational activities. They range from traditional outdoor activities such as playing ball games to all kinds of online ones. Some people think those various recreational activities brought by modern technology are great and necessary because they can help people relax from hard work and study and broaden people ’horizon. However, some people think that too many recreational activities may have a bad effect on people ’s lives. Some people may not resist some temptations and indulge themselves i n those activities, such as the online games. At last they are lured away from their studies, work and interpersonal relationships. In my opinion , we should pay more attention to the advantages of various recreational activities and make the most of them to enrich our lives and broaden the scope of knowledge. When it comes to those time-consuming and less meaningful activities, I think to stay away from them is a wise decision. 2. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below. 1.如今不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写 2.出现这种现象的原因是…… 3.为改变这种状况，我认为…… Due Attention Should Be Given to Spelling Quite a few students now n eglect spelling in English study. Take the simple word “trouble ” for example. Only a few students can spell “trouble ”without trouble —others may spell it as truble, touble or something else. For various reasons, spelling is now becoming a neglected art.First of all , many students don ’t care about spelling. Some say they ’re going to have a secretary when they get a job, and he or she will correct their spelling. Second, most word processors 第一段引入现象并 举例：现在娱乐活 动多种多样。 第二段从正反两面说明娱乐生活的弊益。第三段表明自己的观点态度：择优律己。第一段：指出不少学生在英语学习中不重视拼写，举例说明。第二段：从学生、电脑的使用和老师三个方面分析原因。
英国留学申请essay 写作常见问题一览 导读：本文英国留学申请essay 写作常见问题一览，仅供参考， 如果能帮助到您，欢迎点评和分享。 英国拥有完善的交体系，一流世界名校，良好的学习环境，每年英国的留学竞争很激烈。想要申请英国大学，都需要提交essay ，好的essay 则能给招生官留下深刻的印象。下面带来了英国留学申请 essay 写作常见问题一览。 1、对申请学校认知不多。 有的学生在选择学校和专业的时候没有仔细考虑自身的情况，甚至有的抱着非名校不读的想法，但是也没有仔细去咨询了解对方学校的情况。因此对于大多学校都会提出的问题why choose this school ，学生不能说出学校的大致情况、特点和优势，回答时敷 衍了事，只说出最表层的一些东西。回答不到位就暴露出自己的态度，很难看出申请人对学校的兴趣和向往程度。点击查看 2、回答问题时没有正确审题。 一些在思想上很懒惰的学生总以为各个学校问的题目差不多就可以互相借用，没有认真审题就把申请学校A 的套用在学校B 上;还 有的学生审题不到位，在内容上出现了很多与主题或者申请不相干的部分。 3、找不到思路，不会转换。 有的学生想考察学生的思维灵活度，想知道学生的专业水平或是 人际交往的态度等，提出的问题都是很简单的。例如芝加哥大学：请 比较苹果和橘子，这个题目就不应该只写两种水果的区别什么的，
可以将两种水果拟人化，各种水果代表哪两种人等等。总之，思维不要太死板，学会转换。 4、词句使用不恰当。 大多英语水平有待提高的学生要么用词太过简单，要么总是喜欢用晦涩、深奥的来让录取官认为自己的具有多大的词汇量。前者会使文章显得没有一点深度，后者容易使文章看着不顺畅，读着拗口。所以，在写作时首先要有条理表明自己的看法，其次使文章读起来语句通顺，再使用一些有真正意义和内涵的语句。 5、文章呈现的语气让人难以接受。 有的文章语气平平毫无生气;有的过于激烈，为了显示自己是对 的，极力鼓吹自己的看法或价值观;有的一味夸对方学校是多么地有 名气，甚至用哀怜的语气博得录取官的同情。这都是不可取的，适当地赞扬即可，尽量使文章读起来有生机活力，做到态度理性冷静客观。 6、语法拼写等小错误。 有的学生单词拼错，语法用错，用翻译机器硬生生地翻译，出现频率过高。学生不仅需要提高英文水平，最好是学会英语思维。 1、英文论文的语言使用规范可以用来检测学生在各个学历阶段 英语学习的情况。单词拼写错误是否明显，用词的选择是否恰当，句式上是否仍带有Chinglish 的痕迹，从整个语篇来看是否具有英式思维。 2、英文论文的语言使用规范可以用来检测学生在撰写论文时的 思路逻辑。语言使用规范不仅包括字词句的使用，还有句段和逻辑，以及文体文风。不同的论文能看出不同的写作思路、论证方法，有的是先提出问题，最后下结论，有的是在文章开头就给出自己要论证的观点，然后铺开陈述和论证。 3、英文论文的语言使用规范可以用来检测学生上课是否有听导
Personal Statement Applied Program: LL.M. Degree at Harvard Law School Requirements: Please read parts (a) and (b) below carefully and write an essay addressing both questions, with (a) constituting at least half of the total length. Your entire statement should be no more than 1,500 words ---anything exceeding the word limit will be disallowed. Please type or word-process your statement, with your full name on the top of each page and your signature at the end, and attach it to your application. Briefly describe either an important issue in your field of interest or a current legal problem facing a particular country, region, or the world, and then propose a theoretical framework or a strategy you would use to address this issue. (b) Please tell us something about yourself – in particular, why you wish to pursue an LL.M. degree at Harvard and how doing so connects with what you have done in the past and what you plan to do in the future. Part A A current legal problem facing China is the judicial corruption and injustices. China’s existing judicial system, established under the conventional framework, is increasingly failing to facilitate the development of the market economy and the formation of a society ruled by law. Judicial injustices have constituted the most serious obstacle that are seriously endangering China’s social and economic programs, jeopardizing social stability and resulting in the general public’s skepticism, distrust and even contempt for the authority of law. China’s accession into the WTO, a drastic event which marks China’s determination to conform to international practices, has further rendered the existing judicial system obsolescent. The system of market economy, which China is assiduously trying to establish, will be inconceivable without a sound judicial system. With the reform in China’s judicial system becoming inevitable, several strategies can be adopted. First, as the core of judicial reform, judicial independence is the guarantee for overcoming the weak condition of the judicial realm and for creating a just judicial system and implementing constitutional government. The core of judicial independence is the exercise of complete autonomy in the execution of judicial power, with no interference of any external factors, especially the interference from other components of the political system. Judicial independence can be understood on three levels: the independence of the judicial power, the independence of the court and the independence of the judge. The independence of the judicial power necessarily requires the independence of the court. When the independence of the court reaches a certain point, the independence of the judge will correspondingly
Sample Expository Essay The purpose of an expository essay is to present important information about a specific subject. In the following example, RHS student writer Kellyann Bandusky carefully explains her career ambitions. Notice that the essay follows the proper MLA format. Bandusky 1 Kellyann Bandusky Mrs. Cavallo English I January 30, 2006 A Career to Make Life Worth Living Many teenagers spend a lot of time contemplating what they want to do when they graduate from high school. I am fortunate in that I already know; I decided to become a veterinarian when I was two or three years old. Just like humans, animals need people to treat them with the respect and dignity they deserve, and I want to be one of those people. Because of this, I am doing all I can at Reavis to lay the groundwork for my success in college. Then, once I am in college, I will study and learn about all species of animals. Finally, I will find happiness in my career as a veterinarian because when animals need my assistance, I know that I will be able to help them. First, as a freshman at Reavis High School, I keep in mind my lifelong dream of becoming a veterinarian. I have been taking my education here very seriously, because I know that a person needs to be not only knowledgeable, but also extremely disciplined in order to become a veterinarian. Because of this, I work hard to earn good grades, I take pride in my work, and I have learned to manage my time properly. These skills will be particularly valuable when I enter college.
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