英语写作常见错误分析
一．不一致（Disagreements）
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等．
例１．When one have money ,he can do what he want to .
(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wa nts.本句是典型的主谓不一致．
改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do)
二．修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１．I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末．
三．句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．
例１．There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspa per and so on .
剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．
改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspap er.
四．悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the a ge of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明”谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了．
改为：
When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例１．To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college”的逻辑主语不清楚．
改为：
To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五．词性误用(Misuse of Parts of Speech)
“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．例１．None can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：
None can deny the importance of money.
六．指代不清(Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns)
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试看下面这一句：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
(玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。)
读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例1. And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself指代不一致。改为：
We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七．不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。
例１．There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“There are many ways.”以及“We ge t to know the outside world.”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或：
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world
八．措词毛病(Troubles in Diction)
Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。
例１．The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)
剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use (不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use (滥用)”。
改为：
The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九．累赘(Redundancy)
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：
In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的“the fact that he is lazy”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句”可以改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
例１．For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used t o buy the thing they need.
剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。
改为： Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十．不连贯(Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例１．The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth. 剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为：
Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一．综合性语言错误(Comprehensive Misusage)
所谓“综合性语言错误”，是指除了上述十种错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。
例1．Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our’s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
作文开头部分
1-1对立法: 先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法, 适用于有争议性的主题.
例如(e.g)
[1]. When asked about....., the vast/overwhelming majority of people say that ....... But I think/view
a bit differently.
[2]. When it comes to .... , some people believe that ....... Others argue/claim that the
opposite/reverse is true . There is probably some truth in both arguments/statements , but (I tend to the profer/latter ...)
[3]. Now, it is commonly/generally/widely believed/held/acknowledged that .... They
claim/believe/argue that ... But I wonder/doubt whether.....
1-2 现象法引出要剖析的现象或者问题, 然后评论.
e.g [1]. Recently the rise in problem of/(phenomenon of) ... has caused/aroused
public/popular/wide/worldwide concern.
[2]. Recently the issue of the problem of/the phenomenon of ... has been brought into focus. ( has been braught to public attention)
[3].Inflation/Corruption/Social inequality ... is yet another of the new and bitter truth we have to learn to face now/constantly.
1-3 观点法----开门见山,直接了当地提出自己对要讨论的问题的看法.
e.g: [1]. Never history has the change of .. been as evident as ... Nowhere in the world/China has the issue/idea of .. been more visible/popular than...
[2]. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/accept/(be aware) that...
[3]. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to......
Now people become increasingly aware/conscious of the importance of ......
[4]. Perhaps it is time to have a fresh look at the attitude/idea that.......
1-4 引用法----- 先引出名人名言或者有代表性的看法, 来引出文章要展开论述的观点!
e.g: [1]. "Knowledge is power." such is the remark made by Bacon. This remark has been shared by more and more people .
"Education is not complete with graduation." Such is the opinion of a great American philosopher. Now more and more people share his opinion. [2]."........." How often we hear such statements/words like theses/this .
In our own days we are used to hearing such traditional complains as this "......".
1-5 比较法------ 通过对过去,现在两种不同的倾向,观点的比较, 引出文章要讨论的观点.
e.g: [1]. For years, ...had been viewed as ... But people are taking a fresh look now. With the growing ... , people ....... .
[2]. People used to think that ... (In the past, ....) But people now share this new .
1-6 故事法---- 先讲一个较短的故事来引发读者的兴趣, 引出文章的主题.
e.g: [1]. Once in (a newspaper) , I read of/learnt .... The phenomenon o
f... has aroused public concern.
[2]. I have a friend who ... Should he .... ? Such a dilemma we are often confront with in our daily life.
[3]. Once upon a time , there lived a man who ... This story may be (unbelievable) , but it still has
a realistic significance now.
1-7 问题法----- 先用讨论或解答的设问, 引出自己观点, 适用于有争议性的话题.
e.g: Should/What ...... ? Options of ... vary greatly , some ..., others ... But in my opinion , ...... .
作文主体部分
<一> 原因结果分析
3-1-1. 基本原因--- 分析某事物时, 用此句型说明其基本的或者多方面的原因.
e.g: [1]. Why ... ? For one thing.. For another ...
[2]. The answer to this problem involves many factors. For one thing...
For another...... Still another ...
[3]. A number of factors , both physical and psychological affect ....
/both individual and social contribute to ....
3-1-2 另一原因--------> 在分析了基本原因之后, 再补充一个次要的或者更重要时用!
e.g: [1]. Another important factor is ....
[2]. ... is also responsible for the change/problem.
[3]. Certainly , the ... is not the sole reason for .....
3-1-3 后果影响--------- 分析某事物可能造成的后果或者带来的影响.
e.g: [1]. It will produce a profound/far-reaching effect/impact on....
[2]. In involves some serious consequence for ........
< 二> 比较对照句型
3-2-1. 两者比较---> 比较两事物, 要说出其一超过另一个, 或肯定一事物的优点, 也肯定其缺点的时候用!
e.g: [1]. The advantages gained from A are much greater than the advantages we gain from B.
[2]. Indeed, A carries much weight when compared with B.
[3]. There is no doubt that it has its negative effects as well as positive effects.
3-2-2 . 两者相同/相似------> 比较两事物共同都有或者共同都没有的特点时用!
e.g: [1]. A and B have several things in common.
They are similar in that.....
[2]. A bears some striking resemblances to B.
作文结尾部分
2-1 结论性--------- 通过对文章前面的讨论,引出或重申文章的中心思想及观点.
e.g: [1]. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that .....
[2]. In summary/In a word , it is more valuable .......
2-2 后果性------ 揭示所讨论的问题若不解决, 将产生的严重后果.
e.g: [1]. We must call for an immediate method , because the current phenomenon of ... , if allowed to proceed, will surely lead to the heavy cost of .......
[2]. Obviously , if we ignore/are blind to the problem , there is every chance that .. will be put in danger .
2-3 号召性-------- 呼吁读者行动起来, 采取行动或提请注意.
e.g: [1]. It is time that we urged an immediate end to the undesirable tendency of ......
[2]. It is essential that effective measures should be taken to correct the tendency .
2-4 建议性-------- 对所讨论的问题提出建议性的意见, 包括建议和具体的解决问题的方法.
e.g: [1]. While it cannot be solved immediately, still there are ways. The most popular is .... Another method is ... Still another one is .....
[2]. Awareness/Recognition of the problem is the first step toward the situation.
2-5 方向性的结尾方式---- 其与建议性的唯一差别就是对问题解决提出总的, 大体的方向或者指明前景.
e.g: [1]. Many solutions are being offered here , all of them make some sense, but none is adequate enough. The problem should be recognized in a wide way .
[2]. There is no quick method to the issue of .., but .. might be helpful/beneficial.
[3]. The great challenge today is ...... There is much difficulty , but ........
2--6 意义性的结尾方式--------> 文章结尾的时候,从更高的更新的角度指出所讨论的问题的重要性以及其深远的意义!
e.g: [1]. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success, but the pay off might be worth the effort . It will not only benefit but also benefit .....
[2]. In any case, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain that it will undoubtedly ......
提纲式模块
（I）说明原因型
模块（一）
Nowadays ,there are more and more XX in some big cities . It is estimated that ( 1 ). Why have there been so many XX ? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first one is that ( 2 ) .Besides,( 3 ) . The third reason is ( 4 ).
To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( 5 ) . It is high time that something were done upon it. On the one hand, ( 6 ). On the other hand ,( 7 ). All these measures will certainly reduce the number of XX . 注释：
（1）用具体数据说明XX现象
（2）原因一
（3）原因二
（4）原因三
（5）指出主要原因
（6）解决建议一
（7）解决建议二
Generation gap between parents and children Nowadays , there are more and more misunderstanding between parents and children which is so- called generation gap . It is estimated that (75 percentages of parents often complain their children's unreasonable behavior while children usually think their parents too old fashioned). Why have there been
so much misunderstanding between parents and children? Maybe the reasons can be listed as f ollows .
The first one is that ( the two generations, having grown up at different times, have different likes and dislikes ,thus the disagreement often rises between them) . Besides,(due to having little in common to talk about , they are not willing to sit face to face ) . The third reason is (with the pace of modern life becoming faster and faster , both of them are so busy with their work or study that they don't spare enough time to exchange ideas ).
To sum up ,the main cause of XX is due to ( lake of communication and understanding each other) . It is high time that something were done upon it. On the one hand, (children should respect their parents ).On the other hand ,( parents also should show solicitue for their children). All these measures will certainly bridge the generation gap .
第二天：
（I）说明原因型
模块（2）
In recent years , xx has caused a heated debate on ( 1 ).The factors for ( 2 ) .First of all ,( 3 ).Then , there comes a case that ( 4 ). Moreover , ( 5 ) . Especially when ( 6 ) . Indeed, these unique points can
be collected to remind people that ( 7 ).In this way ,we should behave just like ( 8 ). The impact of Television In recent years , with the development of science and technology ,80 percent of all homes in China have satellite TV , offering as many as 50 channels .It has caused a heated debate on (the impact of television on children ). Many parents are worried about the impact of so much television on children.The factors for (parents' worry is that children are indulge in television and spend too much time on it .) .First of all ,(with so many programs to choose from , children are not getting as much exercise as they should ).Then , there comes a case that ( some studies have show that excessive watching of television by millions of children has lowered their ability to achieve in school ). Moreover , ( the effect on children's minds are more serious than the effect on children's bodies ) . Especially when ( the children are too small to judge what programs are suit to them ) . Indeed, these unique points can be connected to remind parents that ( they should pay close attention to and responsibilities for supervising their children's TV viewing ).In this way ,children will not be influenced too deeply .
（I）说明原因型
模块（3）
Currently, XX has been the order of the day .This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than XX .
It is clear that ( 1 ). If you ( 2 ), as a result , your dreams will come true . On the contrary, if you ( 3). Failure will be following with you .It turns out that all your plan falls through .No one can deny another fact that ( 4) .You don't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (5) . It will exert a profound influence upon ( 6).With reference to my standpoint ,I think
( 7).
注释：
1 ：XX的第一个优点
2：支持XX的做法
3：不支持XX的做法
4：XX的第二个优点
5：举例证明优点二
6：说明XX优点三的影响第三天我写的相应作文：
The importance of self-confidence Currently, self-confidence has been the order of the day . This does demonstrate the theory --- nothing is more valuable than self-confidence.
It is clear that (self-confidence means trust in one's abilities ). If you ( are full of self-confidence ,it will bring your creative power to play , arouse your enthusiasm for work, and help you overcome
difficulties ), as a result , your dreams will come true .On the contrary, if you ( have no confidence in yourself,there is little possibility that you would ever achieve anything ). Failure will be following with you It turns out that all your plan falls through .No one can deny another fact that
(self-confidence gives you light when you are in dark and encouragement when you are dismayed) .You don't have to look very far to find out the truth , in respect that we all know (the secret of Maria Curie lies in perseverance and self-confidence,the latter in particular) . It will exert a profound influence upon ( the achievement of one's ambitions ). With reference to my standpoint ,I think (he that can have self-confidence can have what he will).
（I）说明原因型
模块（4）
For most of us today ,( 1 ).
From above ,we can find that the reasons why ( 2 ) are as follows.
The primary reason ,I think, is ( 3 ). Second,( 4 ).The t hird reason, actually ,is ( 5 ). The significance for (
6 ).
Therefore ,( 7 ).
注释：
（1）人们针对XX的态度和举措
（2）归纳现状
（3）第一个原因
（4）第二个原因
（5）第三个原因
（6）重申造成现状的最重要原因
（7）我的建议我写的模块（４）的相应的作文，仅供参考
Pollution
Most of us today (recognize that environmental pollution has been a greatly serious prob lem . lots of plants trees corps are destroyed by bad air .many fish die of poisonous water . thousands of people die from eating poisoned fish or breathing in gas . therefore , environm ental pollution should be responsible for these diseases that are disabling ,or bringing death n ot only to human beings , but also to wild life .) from above ,we can find that the reasons w hy (environment are polluted more and more seriously) are as follows. the primary reason ,I think , is (the reason of harmful substances into environment . for example ,to prevent insec
ts ,farmers make use of great amounts of insecticides, so as to have bumper harvests . howev er ,they pollute air ,water and land ).
second,(the gas coming from the car engines and factories also make
environment polluted badly ).
the third reason actually is (the result of a growing population in
the world . everyday , so much litter and waste are poured out from
houses ,also pollute the environment ).
the significance for (controlling pollution ) noted that it's high
time that more effective measures should be taken .
therefore ,(new laws should be passed to limit the amount of pollutants
from factories . moreover ,in the households ,there is an obvious need
to reduce litter and waste . let's make our good efforts ,and the world
will be a safer place to live for us ).
（I）说明原因型
模块（5）
These days we often hear that ( 1 ).
It is common that ( 2 ).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social
protects? For one thing ,( 3 ).
For another,( 4 ). What is more,
since ( 5 ),it is natural that ( 6 ).
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worth
trying .We should do something such as ( 7 )
to improve he present situation ,and i do believe everything
will be better in the future .
(1)提出论题
（2）说明现状
（3）理由一
（4）理由二
（5）理由三
（6）理由三引起的后果
（7）解决方法
我写的模块（5）的相应的作文
pollution of environment
These days we often hear that (our living conditions are getting more and more serious because of the destruction of our environment ).It is common that (many trees and animals ar e near extinction, and the all-important food chain has been destroyed .).
Why does such circumstance occur in spite of social protects? For one thing ,(the popul ation of the world is increasing so rapidly that the world has been so crowded. ).For another, (the overuse of natural resources has influenced the balance of natural ecology ). What is mo re , since ( the industrial revolution ) ,it is natural
that (a great number of factories have been springing up like mushrooms .The smoke and har mful chemicals released from factories also pollute the environment ).
To solve the problem is not easy at all ,but is worthying .We should do something such as (planting more trees , equipping cars with pollution-control devices and learning to recycli ng natural resources )to improve the present situation ,and i do believe everything will be bet ter in the future .
英语写作常见错误分析 一．不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等． 例１．When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．) 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wa nts.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二．修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１．I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末． 三．句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例１．There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspa per and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句． 改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspap er. 四．悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the a ge of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明”谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了． 改为： When I was ten, my grandfather died.
1. 成功的四个步骤Four Steps to a Successful Four Steps to a Successful The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance o n the dating night, by learning the following principle in heart. Dress properly. While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be accepted. If you are st ill in school, a sportswear can fulfill your purpose. For businessman or grownups, c asual clothes are recommended. Never put up your working uniforms,no matter ho w well you like that Armani suit. It is no work. A few accessories such as a pair o f sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance sphere. Take a bath before dating. And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless y ou＇re sure that he or she likes the smell,don＇t use ones that are too strong. Watch your manner. You＇re no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the le gend. Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your sweetheart. And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green addicts. And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by St. Loy!" after the nun in Chaucer. Be a little sensitive than merely innocent. Do make sure you do not intrude hi s or her privacy on the first date. For there maybe something deeply concealed wit hin the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn＇t share often with an yone but his intimacy. Finally, wish you good luck. May you get your hearts combined and start a ne w journey in the miracle of life and love. Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, an d keep on through out the whole way. 简评看来第一次约会真是令人兴奋并紧张期待的。为第一次约会所提出的建议也是仁者见仁、智者见智。王永同学用词简单、结构精炼，读起来节奏快，例如：“Dress Properly．．．．I f you are still in school，a sportswear can fulfill your purpose．For businessman Or growmups，casual clothes are recommended．”这样的文章结构像是在提醒我们时不我待，要抓住机会，抓紧时间。 2. 我的宿舍生活My Dormitory Life My Dormitory Life Compared with the forty year old shabby dormitory I am living in now, the one I lived in for three years in high school was heaven: three students shared o ne brand new suite with air conditioners and a bathroom. In three years time we changed it thoroughly:the color of the floor turned from bright pink into muddy gray, and the closet a hive of insects proliferating among p
高考英语作文中常见的错误，必须避免！ 写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。 句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加a 可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books. 如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team, 中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato, 和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs. 用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说a plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有a 在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代in 使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。 speakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。 students（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。 表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large. 几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
大学英语四六级应试技巧写作篇（英语写作常见错误分析） 检查主要针对四个重点部位：1）是否切题它又分三个层面： 一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求； 二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致； 三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方；增添残缺的、语义表达不足的地方。由于时间所限，删的内容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌动“大手术”。 2）是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通顺，该用连接词的地方用了没有，以及所用的连接词是否合适。 3）是否有语法错误主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。为避免不必要的语法错误，对把握性不大的词组、句型绝不要用。而应使用那些自己熟悉的词组、句型来表达相同或相近的意思。 4）是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误在这些细枝末节上，谨慎细心地处理，无疑会进一步提高文章的整体质量。在检查、改错的过程中，切忌乱涂乱抹。保持卷面清洁，无疑会给阅卷者留下好印象。英语写作常见错误 一、不按提纲写/ 不切题 一、不切题英汉不同的语篇思维模式是造成不切题的直接原因。一些外国人认为东方人写作善用迂回法，也就是总绕着主题的外围转，而不从主题入手展开讨论。汉语语篇的思维模式是中国历史文化的产物，人们认为这种方式含蓄、委婉，容易使人接受，而英美人则喜欢开门见山的叙述主题；所以我国学生进行英语写作时，由于受汉语语篇思维模式的影响，阐述时不从主题入手，不能紧扣主题进行写作，致使文章主题不明确，观点不够鲜明。我们来看一篇以＂Trees＂为题目的作文：Trees are man's friends. 1. We can see trees everywhere. 2. We plant trees every year. 3. We can make tables with trees. 4. Trees also give us fruits to eat. 5. I like to eat fruits very much. 再来看改写后的段落：Trees are man’s friends.1.They provide man with timber, fruits and seeds. With timber, man can build houses and make furniture. 2. Fruits are the food, which is necessary to us every day. 3. As for seeds, they can be used to extract oil. 这样就克服了前面所犯错误，紧紧围绕了主题句来展开，算是一篇好的作文。 二、语言表达的错误 从题目或给出的关键词中照搬，不注意单词在句中所做的成分及大小写 忽视第三人称单数 忽视被动语态的用法 三、语言表达的错误重点分析。 1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余2．词性误用3．主谓不一致 4．根据中文逐字硬译5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9．综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误 1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余。句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例1．There are large number of people die from the disasters.
作文范文之大学英语作文及翻译
大学英语作文及翻译 【篇一：大学生活_英语作文】 我的大学生活英语作文 the bright and dark sides of my university life every coin has two sides. on the one hand, i am quite satisfied with my university life. on the other hand, life in my university is not as satisfactory as what we had expected. here is the bright side of my university life: firstly, equipment of my university is advanced and teacher team is powerful. there is an advanced library that owns all kinds of books. so we can acquire a lot of knowledge from my university. secondly, all sorts of lectures are given on campus. we can learn much knowledge that is interesting. thirdly, my campus activities are rich and colorful. such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings and dancing par ties provide opportunities to make friends. what’s more, my dormitory life is very harmonious. dormitory life is an important part of my university life. on the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. on the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. this is the dark side of my university life: firstly, there is only one dining room in my university. so we often need to wait in a long line, which waste much time. everyday is always fixed cuisine types, which make our appetites depressed. secondly, self-study room is not enough. now we will soon take final exam. so it is difficult to find a self-study room. what’s more, network of my university is very unstable. it is difficult to search
十句作文范文背诵 原因篇 作文要求考生对某社会现象或社会问题进行解释。 Sample 1: Why College Students Take a Part-Time Job 1.最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍 2. 为什么大学生要打工 3. 大学生打工 的意义 (1) According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of Chinese college students now hold a part-time or temporary job, compared with nearly none 10 years ago, and this figure increases to 72 percent during summer vacation. (2) College students are seen waiting on tables, clerking in stores, advertising in streets, teaching in families and doing whatever work they can find. (3) Why do they want odd jobs – jobs usually requiring little skill and knowledge? (4) The primary reason, I think, is money. (5) Feeling the pressure of soaring inflation as books, movies and bus fares have all gone up in price, there is scarcely a young boy or girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover the increasingly higher college costs, and at best save enough to go travelling or buy things they have long desired. (6) In this way they hope to be economically independent and avoid the indignity of having to ask for money again and again. (7) Besides they want to gain some experience in the ways of society. (8) Students growing up from nursery school to college only know about books and have trouble dealing with realities. (9) Working on a part-time basis can provide them with a rare opportunity to know the outside world and prepare them for a future career. (10) The significance for college students of doing a part-time job means more than money and experience: It will broaden their outlook and exert a profound influence on their personality and life. 理由篇 叙述理由和分析原因是属于同一类型的英语议论文。所不同的是后者是解释某一社会现象或社会问题，而前者则解释写作者——我，为什么要干某事或不干某事。 Sample 1: The Most Unforgettable Person I Ever Knew 1. 我生活中最难以忘怀的人是…… 2. 为什么他（或她）一直在我心中 3. 结论 (1) In my life I have met many people who are really worth recalling. (2) But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese language teacher. (3) What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. (4) First of all, I was attracted by his lively wit. (5) I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs. (6) Second, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer – an awakening of a passion for learning. (7) He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of Chinese and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. (8) Finally, I was deeply impressed by the respect he showed for us. (9) As he treated us like friends rather than students, we all liked to visit his home for social activities as well as for academic advice.
英语作文常见错误(病句) 一、不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等。 例1. When one have money ，he can do what he want to . （人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。） 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ；同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致。 改为：Once one has money ，he can do what he wants （to do） 二、修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。 例1. I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末。 三、句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令
意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生。 例1. There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ，radio ，newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分”for example by TV ，radio ，newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。 改为：There are many ways to know society ，for example ，by TV ，radio ，and newspaper. 四、悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清。例如：At the age of ten，my grandfather died. 这句中”at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather，如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了。 改为： When I was ten，my grandfather died. 例1. To do well in college，good grades are essential. 剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚。 改为： To do well in college，a student needs good grades.
英语写作常见错误与分析 英语写作常见错误与分析 下面我们对一些在英语写作中典型的病句实例逐一加以剖析． 一．不一致（Disagreements）所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等．例１． When one have money ,he can do what he want to .(人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致．改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二．修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers）英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１． I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the cus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末． 三．句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．例
１． There are many ways to know the society. For exle by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分＂for exle by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句．改为：There are many ways to know society ,for exle ,by TV ,radio ,and newspaper. 四．悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers）所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了．改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died.例１． To do well in college, good grades are essential.剖析：句中不定式短语“to do well in college” 的逻辑主语不清楚．改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades. 五．词性误用(Mi suse of Parts of Speech)“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等．例１． None can negative the importance of money.剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。改为：None can deny the importance of money.
The Advantages and Disadvantages of Living in the 21st century(生活在21世纪的优缺点) Living in the 21st century offers certain advantages,such as a higher standard of living, but it also has some disadvantages, such as a polluted environment. To begin with, most people now have more money for less hard work. They earn higher salaries than before and enjoy better social security, such as social welfare for laid-off workers and disability insurance. Secondly, because of the advance in medical technology which leads to better medical care and treatment, people’s life expectancy is longer. Moreover, most people now can afford to buy foods of high nutrition and enjoy their leisure time. Thirdly, modern conveniences such as radio, TV, internet, various vehicles and labour-saving machines in the home, all greatly facilitate human communication, transportation and housework as well. Nevertheless, living in the 21st century also has its disadvantages. The most serious one is the increasingly polluted environment; air is filled with smog and water is contaminated by iehemicals from factories.Another main disadvantage is the personalization of human relattonships which mostly result from people’s ever-increasing contact with machines and numbers. Still one more disadvantage
xx英语作文多见错误分析 一篇优异的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不结壮而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子统统性等方面的错误。学习方法网不希望看到你的英语作文中有如下的错误哟。 1.审题不清 如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何确凿，都会被判为零分。 2.拼写错误 拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。 3.名词单复数问题 误myfatherandmymotherisallteacher。 正myfatherandmymotherarebothteachers。 4.缺少动词 在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个统统的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：i“mtired。 误ihappyicancometobeijingzoo。 正iamhappyicancometobeijingzoo。
误theapplescheap.i“lltakesome。 正theapplesarecheap.i“lltakesome。5.缺少介词、冠词等 还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的例外，也会出现明明的错误，造成丢分现象。 误becauseheavyrainwecan“tholdthesportsmeeting。 正becauseoftheheavyrainwecan“tholdthesportsmeeting。 6.代词的误用 英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最简易发生的错误。 误imotherandiwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforifather。 正mymotherandiwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather。 7.句子不统统 有的考生因为对句子结构认识含混，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。 误 manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.forexample,myf riendinhighschool。 (这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常多见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。) 正 manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myf riendinhighschool。
英语四级写作常见错误汇总 大学英语写作是检验大学生英语实际运用能力的一种重要方法,是衡量大学生英语综合水平和应用能力的一个重要指标,也是大学英语四级考试的一个重要内容。但从全国大学英语四级考试的情况来看,学生写作部分的平均得分率一直最低。这反映出大学生英语写作能力相对薄弱。从某种程度上来看,这一现象归因于两个主要因素:1. 学生英语写作能力的开发滞后;2. 学生写作能力出现石化现象。这两种主要症状清晰地反映在学生的作文中。 1. 单词拼写错误 例1. (误) I am writting a letter in reply to you. (正) I am writing a letter in reply to you. 例2. (误) You said you wanted to come to my colege. (正) You said you wanted to come to my college. 例3. (误) You must have some probelems. (正) You must have some problems. 例句1 是字母添加错误,即把不该双写的字母双写了;而例句2 是字母减略错误,即把双写的字母拼写成单写;例句3 是典型的语音变异型错误,为加音错误。这些错误均发生在单词的非重读音节中,这说明音响的强度对单词的拼写有相当程度的影响。 2. 时态方面的错误 写议论文一般用现在时态。只有举例，提到过去的事才会用
到过去时。 3 主谓，人称等违反一致性方面的错误 写一个句子，乃至一篇文章里人称始终要保持一致，不能一会儿用第三人称，一会儿又用第一人称。 4 修饰语的位置错误 a) Without television, people cant get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately. Immediately既可以修饰comes：得到迅速从各方面传来的消息，也可以修饰get：迅速得到从各方面传来的消息，意思含糊不清，所以要把它放到cant的后面。 b) To participate in class discussion, a lot of books have to be read. 不定式短语的逻辑主语决不是o lot of books，为了把逻辑关系表达清楚，要么把不定式短语改成If one wants to participate in class discussion，要么把主句改成you have to read a lot of books。 5. 语法结构平行方面的错误 a) With the computer, one can do shopping, banking, and read at home. 用语法平行结构原则来衡量。前面用ing 形式，最后一个用动词原形read是不妥的，为了和do shopping, do banking保持结构上平行，接下来的一个内容要用reading。 b) Participating in class discussion is not only good for the
英语写作常见错误与分析 一．不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致,时态不一致及代词不一致等． 例1．When one have money, he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．) 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：Once one has money, he can do what he wants (to do) 另有WE和YOU 上下文混用的问题。 二．修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解． 例１．I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末． 三．句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例１．There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,rad io ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句． 改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV , radio ,and newspaper. 四．悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清． 例1：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明” 谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了． 改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died. 五．措词毛病(Troubles in Diction) Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，由于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。 例１．The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。)