英语作文如何写长句
一、如何写长难句
How to develop complex sentences.
1. 写出key words，确认中心骨架
2. 逻辑排列，logical arrangements
3. 加工润色，colorize
例句：大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力，这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
Most of (A majority of) students believe (hold the view) that part-time jobs can provide them with opportunities机会to/and develop (improve/better) communication ability能力(social abilities/interpersonal skills人际关系技巧),which is good for (is beneficial to有益于) their looking for jobs (job-hunting求职) in the future (after their graduation).
二、拓展长句的三大方法
The most important factor因素we have to take into consideration is sth./that…
The most important thing I want to talk about is that…sth./ that…
It is also of great importance to pay close attention to…that
Besides what is mentioned above上诉的,it is neces sary to think about…
In addition to除…之外what is talked about above, I want to tell you sth. about…
1.写引导词：包括起承转合例(让句子变得高端)
起: in the first place首先, first and foremost首要的, to begin/start with
承: second (ly),in the second place, furthermore而且,此外, moreover而且,此外, what’s more, in addition另外, besides
转:but, however, on the contrary与此相反, in contrast/comparison相比之下, nonetheless虽然如此,但是; nevertheless尽管如此,然而;
合: last but not least最后同样重要的，so, therefore,
in conclusion最后，综上所述, to conclude最后, in a/one word, in general,
例: for instance, for example, such as,
When it comes to.... 说起…
经典引导句型
There is no doubt that/in saying that…
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There is no exaggeration夸张in saying that…
It is known to us all that,
It is well-known that…
It is apparent/obvious显然的that…it is not hard to understand that…
It is not too much to say that…
It is commonly/widely/generally agreed that… (acknowledged公认的that…/ believed that)
2.写插入语(让句子变得客观)
that is to say
to a certain extent在某种程度上，to some degree在一定程度上，to a larger degree在很大程度上
for one reason or another因为某种原因, to put it in anothher way换言之
directly or indirectly 直接或间接
in other words 换句话说
as a matter of fact 事实上
例：English is, to a large degree, important. be后
Computer, directly or indirectly, influences our life. 行前
Computer can, as a matter of fact, influence our life. 助行间
例句：It is known to us all that, English is, to a large degree, very important due to that English is becoming a global/world language. /is becoming more and more (increasingly) popular There is no doubt in saying that computer, directly or indirectly, to a large degree, influences our life primarily owing to that (computer can make our work and study faster) computer can improve the efficiency of our work and study.
It is hard to understand that doing part-time job can, to a large extent, broaden our horizon in that we can understand more about the society by knowing a lot of people.
3.写从句(让句子变得漫长)
名词性定语从句:that, who
时间状语从句:before, when, after, during
地点状语从句:where)
原因状语从句:because, because of that..
primarily/mainly owing to that,
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partly/partially due to that,
in that 例：I like you in that you are very kind.
假设状语从句:if, on condition that… in case that…
高一英语作文经典句子与模板 常用句型： 1. Only in this way can we … 只有这样，我们才能…… 2. It goes without saying that... 不用说...(意思是：论述的内容是显而易见的） 3. It can be said with certainty that... ...是肯定的。 4. As the proverb goes 有句谚语是这样说的...;常言道... 5. It has to be noticed that...必须引起注意的是... 6. It`s generally recognized that...通常认为... 7. What calls for special attention is that... .需要引起特别注意的是... 8. There’s no denying that....不容否认... 9. Nothing is more important than the fact that...没有比这更重要的是... 10. what’s far more im portant is that..更重要的是... 11. As time goes by,.....随着时间的流逝 12. There is no doubt that...毫无疑问... 13. As far as I'm concerned, I think....就我而言，我认为... 14. It is said that...据说... 15. It is important for sb to do sth. 做某事对某人很重要 16. Compared with A, B is more ...与A相比，B更... 17. in my opinion 在我看来 18. It is high time that we did sth.是我们做..的时候了。 19. Only in this way, can we solve this problem properly.只有这样我们才能妥善解决这个问题。 20. sth is so...that...如此..以至于.. 21. not only ...,but also...不仅...而且... Not only is English important to us, but it is also a must in our daily life. 22. To be honest To tell the truth 老实说来 23. too..to 太..以至于不能.. 24. On one hand,. .on the other hand,..一方面.. 另一方面... 25. With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…… 段首句 1. 关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ .Some people suggest that ____.
如何写英文作文 “英语作文其实跟语文作文是一样的，惟一的区别就是它的要求比语文作文要低一个层次——它不要求文笔。满分的英语作文，只要思路清楚就行了。思路不太清楚，但是题目要求的点都说完全了，没有明显的语法错误，也能得到高分；没有说完，但是基本符合题目的要求，单词语法基本正确，也能得一半以上的分数。 所以，我们写作英语作文的时候，应该使用的原则是，怎么简单怎么写。不要用自己没把握的单词和语法结构，而应该用最最简单的单词和句子，把题目要求的点完整地写出来，就一定能得高分。我们来看这道题目。这是一道高考题。今天我要教你怎么用初中单词写出一篇高分的高考英语作文出来。” “用初中的单词就能写出来？”赵璐半信半疑地听着。 “方法还是一样：从题目从发，梳理思路，然后选择并确定结构，然后开写。 和语文作文的区别就是，我们完全不用考虑文笔好不好的问题——因为我们离这个层面还差得太远。所以，惟一的要求就是把题目要求说的都说到，尽量少出现单词拼写和语法错误，然后追求思路清楚就行。
由于英语作文只要求120 个字，也就相当于12 句话左右，所以思路图比较简单。我们先根据题目的要求来搭架子。” “架子搭好了，我们要展开联想，看看每一点有什么好说的。这个时候先不要担心英语怎么表达，先把意思想出来，写的时候只要变一下，就基本可以用简单的单词和语法表达。 先看…独立完成?，根据题目的提示，肯定要先解释一下它的含义：主要强调个人安排、个人解决。同样，…合作完成?也要把题目的意思先说了，就是一起讨论、相互学习。 最后，挑一个自己喜欢的方式。大部分人都会挑合作完成，因为这个好说，咱们也挑这个。反正英语作文完全不需要考虑写出什么新意，表达清楚就行了。所以挑最好说的写，不要去想什么单词重复啊、千篇一律啊、内容枯燥啊等等问题。 由于英语作文短，所以我们的图也很简单。你看我们很轻松就把这个框架画出来了。”
英语作文万能句子 开头常用万能句子 1.Depending on personal experience personal type and emotion concern we find that some people hold the idea of... while others prefer... 基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人持……的观点，而另外一些人则更喜欢…… 例句：Depending on personal experience personal type and emotion concern we find that some people hold the idea of living in the small town while others prefer the big city. 基于个人经历、个性类型和情感关注的不同，我们发现有人喜欢生活在小 城镇，而另外一些人则更喜欢大城市。 2.When asked about... the vast/ overwhelming majority of/ most/ many/ quite a few people say/ think/ believe/ answer that... But... 当被问及……时，多数（大多数、许多）人认为（回答）……但是…… 例句：When asked about choosing living place the vast people think that living in the big city is perfect. But I think living in the small town is the better choice. 当被问及在选择居住地方时，多数人认为居住在城市是很棒的。但是我觉 得住在小城镇更好。 3.When it comes to ... some think/ hold/ believe... 当提及……时，有人认为…… 例句：When it comes to sports some believe basketball is the most popular one. 当提到运动时，有人认为篮球是最受欢迎的。 4.It has become apparent to us that... 对我们来说，……已经变得很明显了
英语作文写信万能句子关于书信类的作文模板 英语作文常以书信类题材居多，写好书信类英语高考作文需要有一定的格式要求，因此考生可以多积累些万能的句型及模板。 开头常用句子： You letter came to me this morning. I have received your letter of July the 20th. I’m writing to you about the lecture to be given next Monday. I’m writing to ask if you can come next week. How time flies! It’s three months since I saw you last. Thank you for your letter. In reply to your letter about the exhibition this year…; Let me tell you that… 结尾常用句子： Please remember me to your whole family. Give my best regards wishes to your mother. Best wishes. With love. Wish you a pleasant journey. Wish you success. Wish you the best of health. luck Looking forward to your next visit to China. Looking forward to the pleasure of meeting you. Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible. 道歉信 具体写作步骤： 首段：重述自己做错的事，表示歉意。
英语作文万能句子 1. We ' re often told that ......But is this really the case ? 我们经常被告知......但事实真是这样吗？ 2. People used to ......however , things are quite different today . 过去，人们习惯......但,今天的情况有很大的不同。 3.some people think that ......Others believe that the opposite is true . There is probably some truth in both sides．But we must realize that ...... 一些人认为......另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理。但是我们必须认识到...... 4.Recognizing a problem is the first step in finding a solution . 认识到问题是找到解决办法的第一步。 5. It is another new and bitter truth we must learn to face . 这是一个我们必须学会面对的痛苦的新情况。 6. In short , we must work hard to make the world a better place. 简而言之，为了把世界变成更美好的地方，我们必须勤奋工作。 7.Lost time is never found again. 岁月既往，一去不回。 8.Everybody should have a dream. 每个人都该有个梦想. 9.Hope for the best, but prepare for the worst. 抱最好的愿望,做最坏的打算。 10.Failure is the mother of success. 失败乃成功之母。 11.Let's look on the bright side. 让我们往好处想吧。 1. 重点句型 1). It’s adj for sb to do 做…对某人来说… 2). … so … that … 如此… 以至于… … too … to do 太… 而不能… such … that … 如此… 以至于… 3). not…until… 直到…才… 例: I didn’t go to bed until my mother came back. 4).The reason why + 句子is that + 句子… 的原因是… The reason why he got angry was that she told him a lie. ( 他生气的原因是她对他说了谎。) 5). That is why + 句子那是…的原因
简单英语作文万能句子写作万能句型 一些学生在写英语作文的时候，总是觉得无话可说，这是因为平时素材 积累不够。下面小编整理了一些英语作文万能句子，供大家参考！ 1 英语作文开头句型1. As far as...is concerned 就……而言 2. It goes without saying that... 不言而喻，...... 3. It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说...... 4. As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的， 5. It has to be noticed that...必须注意到，...... 6. It’s generally recognized that... 普遍认为...... 7. What calls for special attention is that... 需要特别注意的是...... 8. There’s no denying the fact that... 不可否认...... 9. Nothing is more important than the fact that...没有什幺比......更重要 10.Today, ..., which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, ... Second, ... What makes things worse is that... 现在，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来 了许多危害。首先，……;其次，……。更为糟糕的是…… 1 英语作文结尾句型1. I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说…... 2. Therefore, we have the reason to believe that... 因此，我们有理由相信…... 3. All things considered,总而言之， 4. Therefore, in my opinion, it’s more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…... 5. From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论...…
高中英语写作技巧-英语作文如何写长句 一、如何写长难句 How to develop complex sentences. 1. 写出key words，确认中心骨架 2. 逻辑排列，logical arrangements 3. 加工润色，colorize 例句：绝大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往水平，这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 Most of (A majority of) students believe (hold the view) that part-time jobs can provide them with opportunities机会to/and develop (improve/better) communication ability水平(social abilities/interpersonal skills人际关系技巧),which is good for (is beneficial to有益于) their looking for jobs (job-hunting求职) in the future (after their graduation). 二、拓展长句的三大方法 The most important factor因素 we have to take into consideration is sth./that… The most important thing I want to talk about is that…sth./ that… It is also of great importance to pay close attention to…that Besides what is mentioned above上诉的,it is necessary to think about…
英语作文万能句子 一、开头句型 1.As far as …is concerned 就……而言 2.It goes without saying that…不言而喻，… 3.It can be said with certainty that…可以肯定地说…… 4.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的， 5.It has to be noticed that…它必须注意到，… 6.It's generally recognized that…它普遍认为… 7.It's likely that …这可能是因为… 8.It's hardly that…这是很难的…… 9.It's hardly too much to say that…它几乎没有太多的说… 10.What calls for special attention is that…需要特别注意的是 11.There's no denying the fact that…毫无疑问，无可否认 12.Nothing is more important than the fact that…没有什么比这更重要的是… 13.what's far more important is that…更重要的是… 二、衔接句型 1.A case in point is …一个典型的例子是… 2.As is often the case…由于通常情况下… 3.As stated in the previous paragraph 如前段所述 4.But the problem is not so simple.Therefore 然而问题并非如此简单，所以…… 5.But it's a pity that…但遗憾的是… 6.For all that…对于这一切…… In spite of the fact that…尽管事实…… 7.Further, we hold opinion that…此外，我们坚持认为，… 8.However , the difficulty lies in…然而，困难在于… 9.Similarly, we should pay attention to…同样，我们要注意… 10.not（that）…but（that）…不是，而是 11.In view of the present station.鉴于目前形势 12.As has been mentioned above…正如上面所提到的… 13.In this respect, we may as well （say）从这个角度上我们可以说 14.However, we have to look at the other side of the coin, that is…然而我们还得看到事物的另一方面，即… 三、结尾句型 1.I will conclude by saying…最后我要说… 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that…因此，我们有理由相信… 3.All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that…它可以有把握地说…… 4.Therefore, in my opinion, it's more advisable…因此，在我看来，更可取的是… 5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that…通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论… 6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…通过数据我们得到的结论是，… 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that…从中我们可以得出这样的结论 8.From my point of view, it would be better if…在我看来……也许更好 四、举例句型 1.Let's take…to illustrate this. 2.let's take the above chart as an example to illustrate this. 3.Here is one more example. 4.Take … for example. 5.The same is true of… 6.This offers a typical instance of… 7.We may quote a common example of…8.Just think of… 五、常用于引言段的句型 1.Some people think that …有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below.坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下。 2.For years, … has been seen as …， but things are quite different now.多年来，……一直被视为……，但今天的情况有很大的不同。
考英语作文万能句子：8种实用句型 一.开头句型 1.As far as ...is concerned 就……而言比如说：就我而言As far as I concerned 2 It can be said with certainty that... +从句可以肯定地说...... 3.As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的，可以用来引用名言名句 4 It has to be noticed that... 它必须注意到，... 5 It's generally recognized that... 它普遍认为... 6 It's likely that ... 这可能是因为... 7 It's hardly that... 这是很难的...... 8 There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认 9Nothing is more important than the fact that... 没有什么比这更重要的是… 10.What's far more important is that... 更重要的是… 二.衔接句型 1A case in point is ... 一个典型的例子是... 3 But the problem is not so simple. Therefore，+句子（然而问题并非如此简单，所以……） 4 .But it's a pity that... 但遗憾的是…it’s a pity that….遗憾的是。。。 5 In spite of the fact that...尽管事实...... In spite of 尽管 6Further, we hold opinion that... 此外，我们坚持认为，... 7However, the difficulty lies In + 名词或者动名词.然而，困难在于… 8Similarly, we should pay attention to... 同样，我们要注意... 9 As it has been mentioned above...正如上面所提到的…（可以用来对前面所说的话进行补充说明） 10.In this respect, 从这个角度上 11.However, 然而… 三.结尾句型 1.I will conclude by saying... 最后我要说… 2.Therefore, we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信… 3.All things considered,总而言之= In a word=In conclusion It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说...... 4.Therefore, in my opinion,因此，在我看来， 5.From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that….通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论… 6.The data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that….通过数据我们得到的结论是，.... 7.It can be concluded from the discussion that...从中我们可以得出这样的结论 8.From my point of view, it would be better if...在我看来，如果……也许更好 四.举例句型 1. Here is one more example这里有不止一个的例子 .2.Take …for example.就拿……为例子 五.常用于引言段的句型 1. Some people think that …. 有些人认为…To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 坦率地说，我不能同意他们的意见，理由如下 2. I believe the title statement is valid because…. 我认为这个论点是正确的，因 I believe that_____. Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because______.
音卓教育培训高考英语作文万能模板 一、英语书信的常见写作模板 开头部分： How nice to hear from you again. Let me tell you something about the activity. I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th. I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit. I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America. 结尾部分： With best wishes. I’m looking forward to your reply. I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier. 二、口头通知常见写作模板 呼语及开场白部分： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分： All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups. Please come on time and don’t be late. 结束语部分： Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope you’ll have a nice time here. That’s all. Thank you. 三、议论文模板 1.正反观点式议论文模板 导入： 第1段：Recently we’ve had a discussion about whether we should... （导入话题） Our opinions are divided on this topic.（观点有分歧）
话题英语作文怎么写 定句型，连词成句这个环节是成文的关键，一定要注意做到：（1）选用比较有把握的词汇，用恰当的句型写出确切反映内容要求的句子。在熟悉的基础上，鼓励多用高级词汇和结构复杂的复杂句。如表达“为了……”时，可用inordertodo或soastodo.也可用sothat引导目的状语从句。（2）写出的句子要达意，完整，语法正确，合乎习惯，特别是句式、谓语动词形式要有根有据。（3）表达限定的内容有困难时，就要想到“allroadsleadtorome.”这句话，用变通的方法，以达到“曲径通幽”。如要译“他表哥外强中干”这样一句话，表达起来似乎很难，但我们完全可以通过学过的东西将这句话明白贴切地表达出来：hiscousinlooksstrongbutinfact,heisratherweak.（4）尽量避免使用汉语式的英语。例如要表达“她睡得很迟”，不可写成：shesleptverylate.应该写成：shewenttobedverylate.因为“sleeplate”表示“睡懒觉”。又如要表达“他一点都不担心他的英语”，不可写成：heisnotalittleworriedabouthisenglish.实际上意思完全相反，表达成“他非常担心他的英语”了。应该是：
heisnotabitworriedabouthisenglish.或：heisnotworriedabouthisenglishatall.连词成句，添减相宜单句写出后，根据短文的内容要求，确定先写什么，后写什么，按照表述内容的情节发展和实际需要，重新排列组合已写成的句子，划分必要的段落，一般分成三段。即：文章的开头（introduction）、文章的主体(mainbody)和文章的结尾(conclusion).这样写成文章的初稿。在连词成句的过程中，还要注意以下几点：（1）句子或段落间的连接不仅仅是个语言问题，也是个逻辑思维方面的问题，这两者是不能分开的。能注意到这一点，你的文章就能达到条理清楚、层次分明的境界。（2）为了使句子或段落语义连贯，表达合理准确，可以适当加入一些连接词语。如表达转折可用but,however,otherwise等，表达递进可用and,also,besides,whatsmore等，表达因果so,therefore,asaresult等，表达对比可用atthesametime,meanwhile，while等，表达让步可用though,although,evenif等。有时还需要加入一些必要的过渡句子以达到承上启下的效果。（3）仔细推敲在文章的哪些地方可用复杂句。切忌生搬硬套，给人一种为了用复杂句而用复杂句的感觉。要用得自
英语作文万能句子 开头常用万能句子： With the rapid growth of..., ...have/has become increasingly important in our daily life. 随着……的快速增长，……日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。 例：With the rapid growth of hi-tech skills, cellphone has become increasingly important in our daily life. 随着高科技的快速增长，手机在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。 Recently the issue of studying abroad has been brought into focus. 近来，出过留学的问题已经成为人们关注的焦点。 One of the hottest topics many people talk about now is... 人们热烈讨论的话题之一就是…… 结尾常用万能句子： From above... 综上所述…… Therefore, it is not difficult to draw the conclusion that... 因此，不难得出以下结论…… In a word, the whole society should pay close to the problem of... Only in this way can...in the future. 总之，全社会都应该密切关注……，只有这样将来才能…… Taking into account all of these factors, we may reach the conclusion that... 考虑到所有因素，我们得出结论，…… 文章中常用句子： Some reasons can explain this trend. On the one hand,...,on the other hand,... 一些原因可以解释这一趋势。一方面……，另一方面…… There are many reasons explaining this case. As for me, I consider the following as the typical ones. To begin with,... Secondly,... Last but not least,... 有很多原因可以解释该问题。就我而已，我认为以下原因比较典型。一个是……；第二个是……；最后，…… 谚语： Knowledge is power. 知识就是力量。 Good health is over wealth. 健康是最大的财富 Nothing in the world is difficult for one who sets his mind to it. 世上无难事只怕有心人 A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑长一智
英语作文万能句子 英语作文万能句子英语作文万能句子（一）： 段首句 1。俗话说（常言道）……，它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在这天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying______。Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today。 2。关于……人们有不一样的观点。一些人认为…… There are different opinions among people as to ____ 。Some people suggest that ____。 3。……已成为人的关注的热门话题，个性是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。 ______ has bee a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way。 4。此刻，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外（而且）……。 Nowadays，it is mon to ______。Many people like ______
because ______。Besides，______。 5。此刻，……，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，……；其次，……。更为糟糕的是……。 Today，____，which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life。First，____ Second，____。What makes things worse is that______。 6。关于……人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说）……，在他们看来，…… People’s opinions about ______ vary from person to person。Some people say that ______。To them，_____。 7。人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem _____ore serious。 8。任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and ______ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages。 9。……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给
如何学习写英文作文（四）：怎样写出正确的句子 杜昶旭 写在前面：对于如何写出正确的句子的方法，我在最近几年的托福课以及今年的GRE课上都做过一些阐述，其中在托福阅读课中讲的更加具体和详细，在GRE填空课上只是稍微做了一点分析，没有给出具体的方法。所以，希望以此文，来告诉大家正确的句子写作训练的方法。 在过去若干年我所见到的英文写作课上，很多老师都乐此不疲地在教育学生如何写出“漂亮”的句子，其理由是：在文章中有一些“漂亮”的句子，会让文章出彩，成为文章的“亮点”，从而获得读者的青睐，在考试中也就更容易得到高分。这个理由看起来貌似没什么问题，的确，在文章中写出“漂亮”的句子不是一件坏事儿，但是关键在于：什么是“漂亮”的句子？他们的定义大体上可以概括成两点，一是句子一定要有长度，太短的句子是不会吸引人的。二是句子一定要有一定的“难词”，全是“低级”词汇是不会让句子出彩的。可是，事实真的如此么？我顺手拿起桌子上的一本书，随便翻开了一页，并且仔细地阅读了一下这一页，发现几乎每一个句子都没有超过两行，并且也没见到那种令人“毛骨悚然”的“高级词汇”。再随便摘抄一句，是这么写的“Of course, before you can attend to the relationship between evidence and claims, you first have to make sure to include both of them."按照很多老师的观点，估计这句话要被嘲笑得土的掉渣，因为像of course, you first...., make sure之类的用法都是简单得令人发指，是一定要被换掉的。可是我们不妨思考一个问题，这句话的意思是不是很清楚呢？显然，答案是不言而喻的。有的人可能开始怀疑这本书是不是写给中小学生的，我可以告诉你，它的名字叫”Writing Analytically (The 5th Edition)". 我遇到很多美国或者英国的教授，他们向我抱怨说中国学生写的文章非常冗长，表达意思不清楚，读者并不知道他们想传递什么样的意思。而这些教授在修改中国同学写的论文的时候，最常做的事情，就是找着这些学生，一个句子一个句子地指着问他们："What does it mean?"然后，很淡定地把所有的“长句”修改成“短句”，把所有的“牛逼词”改成“傻逼词”。很多同学直到被教授这样折磨了无数次以后才发现，原来简单才是美，准确才是美。所以，在句子表达的过程中，简
英语作文的基本要求 在莱曼英语所倡导的五种英语语言能力中，写作被认为是必修的重要课题之一。它既是英语学习短期目标——考试所要求的内容之一；又是英语学习的长期目标——交流所必需的能力之一。毋庸置疑，英语写作是集基础知识，基本能力和课外信息于一身的综合体现，同时，又要兼顾到写作者高超的写作技巧。因而，没有扎实的英语语法知识；没有长期不懈的训练；没有科学的方法指导；没有广博的课本以外的知识和信息，写好一篇优秀的英语作文是非常困难的。首先，一个段落必须有一个中心,即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必须紧扣这个主题 Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. b5E2RGbCAP 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea<中心思想）是 take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个 irrelevant sentences(不相干的句子>，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。再看一个例子： p1EanqFDPw My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two
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