英语写作中常见错误与分析及技巧
下面我们对一些在英语写作中典型的病句实例逐一加以剖析。
一、不一致( Disagreements)
所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等。
例：When one have money, he can do what he want to. (人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么。)
剖析：one 是单数第三人称，因而本句的have 应改为has；同理，want 应改为wants ，本句是典型的主谓不一致。
改为：Once one has money, he can do what he wants ( to do)
二、修饰语错位( Misplaced Modifiers )
英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。例：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.
剖析：better 位置不当，应置于句末.
三、句子不完整( Sentence Fragments)
在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书
面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔
者又想加些补充说明时发生。
例：There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.
剖析：本句后半部分“ for example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on. ”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句。
改为：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.
四、悬垂修饰语( Dangling Modifiers )
所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清.例如：At the age of ten,
my grandfather died. 这句中“ at the age of ten”只点出十岁时，但没有说明“谁”十岁时。按一般推理不可能是my grandfather ，如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全
句就不那么
费解了。
改为：When I was ten, my grandfather died.
例：To do well in college, good grades are essential.
剖析：句中不定式短语“ to do well in college ”的逻辑主语不清楚。
改为：To do well in college, a student needs good grades.
五、词性误用( Misuse of Parts of Speech )
“词性误用”常表现为：介词当动词用；形容词当副词用；名词当动词用等。
例：None can negative the importance of money.
剖析：negative 系形容词，误作动词。
改为：None can deny the importance of money.
六、指代不清( Ambiguous Reference of Pronouns )
指代不清主要讲的是代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或者先后所用的代词不一致。试
看下面这一句：
Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid. (玛丽和我姐姐很要好，因为她要她做她的伴娘。 )
读完上面这一句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘中谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词的所指对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。这个句子可改为：Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
例：And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
剖析：句中人称代词we 和反身代词yourself 指代不一致。
改为：We can also know society by serving it ourselves.
七、不间断句子( Run-on Sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence？请看下面的例句。
例：There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
剖析：这个句子包含了两层完整的意思：“ There are many ways.”以及“ We get to know the outside world. ”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
或：There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
八、措词毛病( Troubles in Diction )
Diction 是指在特定的句子中如何适当地选用词语的问题，囿于教学时间紧迫，教师平时在这方面花的时间往往极其有限，影响了学生在写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中用词不当的错误比比皆是。例：The increasing
use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution. (农业方面化学物质使用的不断增加也造成了污染。 )
剖析：显然，考生把obstacles“障碍”，“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“ the increasing use (不断增加的使用) ”应改为“ abusive use (滥用)”。
改为：The abusive use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes/leads to pollution.
九、累赘( Redundancy)
言以简洁为贵。写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的
不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或句子。如：
In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
本句的“ the fact that he is lazy ”系同谓语从句，我们按照上述“能用词组的不用从句” 可以改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
例：For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the thing they need.
剖析：整个句子可以大大简化。
改为：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy what they need.
十、不连贯( Incoherence)
不连贯是指一个句子前言不对后语，或是结构上不畅通。这也是考生常犯的毛病。
例：The fresh water, it is the most important things of the earth.
剖析：The fresh water 与逗号后的it 不连贯。It 与things 在数方面不一致。
改为：Fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
十一、综合性语言错误( Comprehensive Misusage )
所谓“综合性语言错误” ，是指除了上述十种错误以外，还有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误。
例：Today, Money to everybody is very importance, our ' s eat, cloth, live, go etc.
英语写作基础试卷考核知识点分析及解题思路(二) 』
近几年的英语写作基础试卷在考查内容和试题类型上改动不大，保持了命题的连贯性。考查内容包括三大部分：句子的组成、段落的写作、应用文写作。题型有重写句子、改写病句、识别主题句、重新组合段落、识别与段落内容无关的句子、写信六种。本文将按题型顺序对二ＯＯＯ年试题的考核知识点与解题思路进行分析和探讨，同时，也将对考生答题中的典型错误作一剖析，希望能有益于准备参加今年考试的同学。
上一讲，我们对第一种题型"重写句子"的考核知识点与解题思路进行了分析和探讨，并对考生答题中的典型错误作了剖析。本讲我们将研究第二种题型" 改写病句"，病句中的一些语病在中国学生的英文写作中十分常见，值得认真推敲。
第二大题改写病句(本大题共5 小题，每小题3 分，共15分)
Correct the errors in the following sentences
考核知识点：考查对连接词( joining word )使用错误的识别与修正。
?试题：
11.Your sales are up, therefore, your bonus is forthcoming.
?答案：
11.Your sales are up; therefore, your bonus is forthcoming.
?解题关键：
（1）连接词（joining word ）可分为连词（如：and, but, for, so, because, although, since 等）
和连接性副词（如：therefore, consequently, accordingly, moreover, likewise, however, nevertheless 等）。连词和连接性副词在用法上有很多相似之处，但也有不同点。
（2）连词和连接性副词在连接两个分句时，前后使用的标点符号不同：连词之前常用逗号（，），之后通常不用标点；而连接性副词之前要求用分号（；）或句号（.），之后常用逗号（，）。
（3）该句最简便的修正方法是将连接性副词therefore前的逗号（，）改为分号（；）。另外
也可改为：Your sales are up. Therefore, your bonus is forthcoming. " 评分标准" 中规定："与标准答案不一致，但句子结构正确，表意准确，也得满分。否则，酌情给分或不得分。"
?考生典型答题错误分析：
错误）If your sales are up, your bonus will be forthcoming
分析）原句中的两个分句之间是因果关系，而不是假设关系。
错误）Your bonus is forthcoming, therefore, your sales are up.
（分析）有些考生识别不出病句结构上的错误，就以为句义有误，对两个分句的因果关系作了调整。值得注意的是，写作基础试卷改写病句一题中的病句通常错在结构上，而不是语义上。
考核知识点：考查对破句（fragmentary sentence）的识别和修正。
?试题：
12.People worked together on the assembly line. Moving quickly and efficiently. They wanted to make as much money as possible.
?答案：
12.People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently. They wanted to make s much money as possible.
?解题关键：
（1）了解破句（fragmentary sentence）的特点：把句子的一部分当成了一个句子。英语中一个完整的句子必须包含" 主语+谓语"结构，否则就是破句（fragmentary sentence）。
（2）找出病句中结构不完整的句子（即不包含主谓结构的句子）：Moving quickly and
efficiently.
（3）由于用分词结构而引起的破句的修改方法为：将分词结构还原为谓语形式使其独立成句，或者将分词结构与其前面或后面的句子融合在一起。本句最简便的修正方法是将moving
前的句号（.）变成逗号（，），使moving quickly and efficiently 融入前面的句子，成为表示伴随状况的分词短语。
?考生典型答题错误分析：
（错误）People worked together on the assembly line, moving quickly and efficiently., they wanted to make s much money as possible.
（分析）这是一个串句（run-on sentence），误将两个独立分句合写在一个句子里面而没有适当地分离标识。
（错误）People worked together on the assembly line moving quickly and efficiently. They wanted to make s much money as possible.
（分析）moving 的逻辑主语是people，不是assembly line ，因此moving 前必须有逗号（，），否则分词短语moving quickly and efficiently 就变成了修饰名词assembly line 的定语，而不再是谓语动词worked 的伴随状况。
考核知识点：考查对垂悬修饰语（dangling modifier ）的识别和修正。
?试题：
13.Watching the parade, my wallet was stolen.
?答案：
13.While watching the parade, I had my wallet stolen. / While I was watching the parade, my wallet was stolen.
?解题关键：
（1）了解垂悬修饰语（dangling modifier ）的特点：修饰语在句中找不到逻辑上被修饰的对象。分词结构、不定式结构和介词短语做修饰语修饰句子时，易发生垂悬修饰现象。
（2）修正时，可调整句子的主语，使之与上述结构或短语的逻辑主语一致；也可将分词结构、不定式结构或介词短语带上自己的逻辑主语，将其扩展成从句。
（3）原句中做修饰语的分词结构watching the parade 的逻辑主语与句子主语my wallet 不一致，所以可将句子主语调整为I，或将句子主语保持不变，使watching the parade 带上自己
的逻辑主语I 。
?考生典型答题错误分析：
（错误）While watching the parade, my wallet was stolen.
（分析）分词结构watching the parade 前加上连词while 或when，不能改变其垂悬修饰语
（dangling modifier ）的性质，因为其逻辑主语I 未变，而与从句的主语my wallet 仍然不一致。
（错误）Watching the parade, I lost my wallet 。
（分析）修正病句不应该改变原句的意思。钱包丢失的原因可能是被盗，但也可能是别的原因，例如由于粗心遗忘在某地等。另外，从这一修改中，可看出相当一部分考生对have sth. done 结构不太熟悉。
四，考核知识点：考查对错误平行结构（faulty parallelism ）的识别和修正。
?试题：
14.If a publisher rejects a novel, it is either because the story is unsaleable or the author is unknown.
15.Our new car not only is more user-friendly, but also it is more comfortable than our old one.
?答案：
14.If a publisher rejects a novel, it is either because the story is unsaleable or because the author is unknown.
15.Our new car is not only more user-friendly but also more comfortable
than our old one.
?解题关键：
(1)了解错误平行结构( faulty parallelism )产生的原因：平行结构( parallelism )是把
两个或两个以上意思并列的成分用同等语法形式表达，如果意思上并列的成分用不同等的语法
形式来表达，就破坏了其平行结构。
(2)e ither?or, neither?nor, not only?but also, both?and 等关联并列连接词
( correlative conjunction )用于连接意思并列的成分，所以每个连词后所跟的成分必须有
相同的语法形式。
(3)14 题原句中连词either 后是because 引导的原因状语从句，or 后也应补上
because。
15 题病句最简便的修正方法，是将两个形容词比较级作为平行成分，用
not only?but also 连接。
?考生典型答题错误分析：
（错误）If a publisher rejects a novel, either the story is unsaleable or
the author is unknown.
（分析）从全句来看，这是一个逻辑关系模糊，句法不当的病句。不过应当肯定的是，平行的结构可以是单词、词组，也可以是从句甚至句子。
（错误）Not only our new car is more user-friendly but also it is more comfortable than our old one.
（分析）not only ?but also 可以连接两个平行结构的句子，但not only 后的句子必须倒装，
如：Not only is our new car more user-friendly, but also it is more comfortable than our old one.
另外，not only ?but also连接两个主语、谓语相同的句子时显得啰嗦和没有必要，故常用来连接两个主语、谓语不同的句子，如：Not only is he himself interested in the subject, but also all his students have begun to show an interest in it.
高考英语作文中常见的错误，必须避免！ 写作是对同学们英语综合能力的考查，是最能体现大家英语水平的一种检测方式。学生在写作的过程当中经常会暴露一些弱点、犯一些错误。今天，我们对大家英语作文中的常见错误进行简要归纳，并举以实例，大家在今后的英语写作中要尽量避免这些错误的发生。 句中的a要去掉，因为advice是不可数名词。一些汉语概念为可数的词在英语中却是不可数的，表示数量时在要其前加a 可数名词单数不能孤零零地放在句子里，或前面加冠词，或将其变为复数。此处最好变为books. 如果强调集合中每个个体的个人行为，则用复数的谓语动词。此处看电视是个体行为，应把is改为are。类似的词有：team, 中学阶段，以“o”结尾的名词中有四个词变复数时要加es，它们是tomato, 和belief直接加s变为复数。所以应把believes改为beliefs. 用a还是an，取决于后面单词音标中的第一个音，如为元音用an，为辅音用a。useful的第一个音是辅音所以应把an改为a。类似的，我们说a plane为可数名词单数，不能单独放在句中，应在其前加冠词或把它变为复数，而本句后有a 在in后加the，因为表示年代用in加the再加几十的复数，如在八十年代in 使用代词时请注意其单、复数，主、宾格以及形容词性物主代词和名词性物主代词的用法。 speakers，为复数，因此从句中的指示代词应为复数，应把his改为their。 students（成百上千个学生）。例句中应把hundreds改为hundred。 表倍数关系的as...as中间只能用形容词或副词的原级。因此应把larger改为large. 几个单词由连字符连接而组成的复合形容词中的名词只能用单数，所以把five-hundred-words改为five-hundred-word.
1. 成功的四个步骤Four Steps to a Successful Four Steps to a Successful The first time in life? Then grasp your chance with your perfect performance o n the dating night, by learning the following principle in heart. Dress properly. While everyone wants to give an impressive debut on the first date, you should avoid wearing something too bizarre to be accepted. If you are st ill in school, a sportswear can fulfill your purpose. For businessman or grownups, c asual clothes are recommended. Never put up your working uniforms,no matter ho w well you like that Armani suit. It is no work. A few accessories such as a pair o f sunglasses or silver loops on the wrist can add up to the romance sphere. Take a bath before dating. And if you like, spray a little perfume, but unless y ou＇re sure that he or she likes the smell,don＇t use ones that are too strong. Watch your manner. You＇re no prince of the Scotland nor Cinderella in the le gend. Proper manners will ensure a lasting relationship while bad ones scare away your sweetheart. And do make sure you do not boast about your fortune, for, not everyone are green addicts. And your way of smiling, or your greatestoath, should neither be "coy" nor "by St. Loy!" after the nun in Chaucer. Be a little sensitive than merely innocent. Do make sure you do not intrude hi s or her privacy on the first date. For there maybe something deeply concealed wit hin the inner core of every heart, of which the owner doesn＇t share often with an yone but his intimacy. Finally, wish you good luck. May you get your hearts combined and start a ne w journey in the miracle of life and love. Stay tuned till a borderline is reached, an d keep on through out the whole way. 简评看来第一次约会真是令人兴奋并紧张期待的。为第一次约会所提出的建议也是仁者见仁、智者见智。王永同学用词简单、结构精炼，读起来节奏快，例如：“Dress Properly．．．．I f you are still in school，a sportswear can fulfill your purpose．For businessman Or growmups，casual clothes are recommended．”这样的文章结构像是在提醒我们时不我待，要抓住机会，抓紧时间。 2. 我的宿舍生活My Dormitory Life My Dormitory Life Compared with the forty year old shabby dormitory I am living in now, the one I lived in for three years in high school was heaven: three students shared o ne brand new suite with air conditioners and a bathroom. In three years time we changed it thoroughly:the color of the floor turned from bright pink into muddy gray, and the closet a hive of insects proliferating among p
大学英语六级写作经典范文及点评 大学生自我创业已经不是一个新鲜的话题了。那么自我创业有何利，又有何弊呢？看过本文之后你就知道了。或许这对面临毕业的你还是个不小的帮助呢！ Self employment Self employment could bring many advantages. One of the advantages of being self-employed is that the profit the business makes belongs to the owner. If the self-employed person succeeds in business, he has the chance to earn a great deal of money. The profit earned is the reward for the owner’s effort, ability and creativity. Thus, a second advantage is that a person’s intelligence and abilities have a direct effect on the earnings. A third advantage of being self-employed is that a person can control his working hours. While not all self-employed people are completely free, most of them have more control over this area than the salaried people. However, being self-employed is not without problems. First, being one’s own boss places the responsibility directly on that individual shoulders. Everyone has some weaknesses in a certain aspects. These weaknesses will affect how successful a self-employed person is. Second, though the self-employed can earn considerable profits with a successful business, losses can force them out of business and sometimes, place them in debt. A third disadvantage concerns income security. Self-employed people have no guaranteed wage. Their earnings can vary greatly, depending on business conditions. Salaried people, however, can generally count on continued earnings. In addition, salaried people often enjoy fringe benefits that mean greater peace of mind. One of these b enefits may be insurance paid for by the employer that continues the employee’s salary in the event of sickness or accident while many self-employed people do not have such protection①. ［253 words］ 行文点评 文章结构简单明了。第一段阐述了自我创业的3个好处。第二段分析了自我创业所存在的问题。 两段中“first, second, third”的使用，不仅使文章在句式上显得条理分明，更在内容上体现了连贯性。 好文妙译 自我创业
英语写作常见错误分析 一．不一致（Disagreements） 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致时态不一致及代词不一致等． 例１．When one have money ,he can do what he want to . (人一旦有了钱，他就能想干什么就干什么．) 剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wa nts.本句是典型的主谓不一致． 改为：Once one has money ,he can do what he wants (to do) 二．修饰语错位（Misplaced Modifiers） 英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．例１．I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus. 剖析：better位置不当，应置于句末． 三．句子不完整（Sentence Fragments） 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例１．There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV ,radio ,newspa per and so on . 剖析：本句后半部分＂for example by TV ,radio ,newspaper and so on .”不是一个完整的句子，仅为一些不连贯的词语，不能独立成句． 改为：There are many ways to know society ,for example ,by TV ,radio ,and newspap er. 四．悬垂修饰语（Dangling Modifiers） 所谓悬垂修饰语是指句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the a ge of ten, my grandfather died. 这句中＂at the age of ten＂只点出十岁时，但没有说明”谁”十岁时．按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我们把这个悬垂修饰语改明确一点，全句就不那么费解了． 改为： When I was ten, my grandfather died.
高中英语作文中常见的100个错误，必须避免！（下） 十、非谓语动词 57. We are going to talk about the problem discussing at the last meeting.此处为分词作定语，问题应该被讨论，所以把discussing改为discussed。58. The girl dressed herself in red is my sister. dress为及物动词，意为“给...…穿衣服”，此处为分词作定语修饰girl, girl 与dress是被动关系，因此把herself去掉。 59. Being seriously ill, his classmates sent him to hospital. 分词作状语时，其逻辑主语为这句话的主语，此句应为“因为他病了，他的同学才把他送到医院去”，因此把前半句改为：He being seriously ill. 60. Having not seen her for many years, we could hardly recognize her. 现在分词的否定应把not放在现在分词前面，所以前半句应改为：Not having seen her for many years. 61. Seeing from the space, the earth looks like a ball. 分词作状语，其逻辑主语应是这句话的主语，此句中地球应该被看，所以把Seeing 改为Seen。 62. English is easy to learn it. 此句中是不定式作原因状语修饰easy, English应该是learn的逻辑宾语，所以把it去掉。 63. I will get somebody repair the recorder for you. “让某人做某事”可以有以下几种表达法：make sb do sth; have sb do sth; get sb to sth. 因此在repair 前加to。
作文范文之大学英语作文及翻译
大学英语作文及翻译 【篇一：大学生活_英语作文】 我的大学生活英语作文 the bright and dark sides of my university life every coin has two sides. on the one hand, i am quite satisfied with my university life. on the other hand, life in my university is not as satisfactory as what we had expected. here is the bright side of my university life: firstly, equipment of my university is advanced and teacher team is powerful. there is an advanced library that owns all kinds of books. so we can acquire a lot of knowledge from my university. secondly, all sorts of lectures are given on campus. we can learn much knowledge that is interesting. thirdly, my campus activities are rich and colorful. such as sports meets, speech contests, different social gatherings and dancing par ties provide opportunities to make friends. what’s more, my dormitory life is very harmonious. dormitory life is an important part of my university life. on the one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. on the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. this is the dark side of my university life: firstly, there is only one dining room in my university. so we often need to wait in a long line, which waste much time. everyday is always fixed cuisine types, which make our appetites depressed. secondly, self-study room is not enough. now we will soon take final exam. so it is difficult to find a self-study room. what’s more, network of my university is very unstable. it is difficult to search
大学英语四六级应试技巧写作篇（英语写作常见错误分析） 检查主要针对四个重点部位：1）是否切题它又分三个层面： 一是整篇文章内容是否切合文章标题要求； 二是段落主题句的内容是否与各段落提示句内容相一致； 三是段落内部的内容是否与段落主题句的表达相一致。如果发现任何一个层面不切题，应尽可能弥补，删除那些多余的或不切题的地方；增添残缺的、语义表达不足的地方。由于时间所限，删的内容一定要精，要切中要害，切忌动“大手术”。 2）是否连贯检查上下文是否连贯，句子衔接是否自然流畅，检验的标准主要是句子是否通顺，该用连接词的地方用了没有，以及所用的连接词是否合适。 3）是否有语法错误主谓是否一致，动词的时态、语态、语气的使用是否正确，词组的搭配是否合乎习惯。为避免不必要的语法错误，对把握性不大的词组、句型绝不要用。而应使用那些自己熟悉的词组、句型来表达相同或相近的意思。 4）是否有大小写、拼写、标点错误在这些细枝末节上，谨慎细心地处理，无疑会进一步提高文章的整体质量。在检查、改错的过程中，切忌乱涂乱抹。保持卷面清洁，无疑会给阅卷者留下好印象。英语写作常见错误 一、不按提纲写/ 不切题 一、不切题英汉不同的语篇思维模式是造成不切题的直接原因。一些外国人认为东方人写作善用迂回法，也就是总绕着主题的外围转，而不从主题入手展开讨论。汉语语篇的思维模式是中国历史文化的产物，人们认为这种方式含蓄、委婉，容易使人接受，而英美人则喜欢开门见山的叙述主题；所以我国学生进行英语写作时，由于受汉语语篇思维模式的影响，阐述时不从主题入手，不能紧扣主题进行写作，致使文章主题不明确，观点不够鲜明。我们来看一篇以＂Trees＂为题目的作文：Trees are man's friends. 1. We can see trees everywhere. 2. We plant trees every year. 3. We can make tables with trees. 4. Trees also give us fruits to eat. 5. I like to eat fruits very much. 再来看改写后的段落：Trees are man’s friends.1.They provide man with timber, fruits and seeds. With timber, man can build houses and make furniture. 2. Fruits are the food, which is necessary to us every day. 3. As for seeds, they can be used to extract oil. 这样就克服了前面所犯错误，紧紧围绕了主题句来展开，算是一篇好的作文。 二、语言表达的错误 从题目或给出的关键词中照搬，不注意单词在句中所做的成分及大小写 忽视第三人称单数 忽视被动语态的用法 三、语言表达的错误重点分析。 1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余2．词性误用3．主谓不一致 4．根据中文逐字硬译5. 名词可数与不可数的误用 6.介词to和不定式符号的混淆7 .动宾搭配不当 8. 词组搭配错误 9．综合性语言错误: 有诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等方面的错误 1．句子结构混乱，出现句子不完整或句子成分多余。句子不完整（Sentence Fragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生． 例1．There are large number of people die from the disasters.
大学英语A/统考——写作（51套范文） 1 Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world, and people's health is threatened. How to solve this problem remains one of the most important issues for each country. Write an essay on the topic "The Problem of Pollution". You should base your essay on the following outline. 1. 全球污染现象变得日益严重。 2. 全世界人民都非常关注这一现象。各国政府也采取了一定的措施来解决这一问题。 3. 我们应该怎么做。 I read a piece of news recently. It says that in Japan many businessmen are selling fresh air to customers, and now it is becoming increasingly popular. Why? Fresh air is getting less and less in Japan, and so is it in the U. S. A., China, India, etc. In fact, environmental pollution is a very serious problem the whole world is facing. It is largely caused by the waste products released from artificial substances, industrial production and increased consumption of goods. Besides, the use of chemical substances in agriculture also causes environmental pollution. Look at the sky, you can see that dense smoke is being released from the high and big chimneys; those dirty and poisonous substances are flowing into the rivers that we use for drinking water and millions of tons of waste products are heaping around us. Indeed, the earth is our home and we have the duty to take care of it for ourselves and for our descendants. In my opinion, we should work out concrete solutions to the problem of pollution For example, poisonous gas given off by automobiles should be controlled by equipping them with a device which can dispose of waste gas so as to prevent it from polluting air. 2 Everyone in the world needs friendship. When he is happy, his friend can share his happiness; when he is in trouble, his friend can lend him a hand. Write an essay on the topic "My Ideal Friend". You should base your essay on the following outline. 1. 你心目中理想的朋友是什么样的。 2. 现实生活中你是否有这样的朋友以及你如何获得这样一个朋友。 3. 和好朋友相处应该注意哪些。 Friendship is the most valuable to every one in the world. As far as I am concerned, friends will make my life more colorful and meaningful. However, there are a great variety of friends, with whom we have to make
学案(二) 考场作文常见的 3类错误及防范措施 一、考场作文常见的3类错误 考场作文常见的错误主要分为三类：词汇类错误、语法类错误和汉语式英语。 (一)词汇类错误 考试时，考生很容易出现单词拼写错误和词形变化错误；而词性不清和词汇用法方面的错误主要还是受汉语思维的影响。其应对措施是在备考时要多注意容易拼错或容易出现词形变化错误的单词，真正用心去体会英语词汇的词性和运用，对一些固定习语更不能想当然地改动。 1．单词拼写错误 误：By the way, he’s a senior High School student named Lihua from Tian Jin, china. 正：By the way, he’s a senior high school student named Li Hua from Tianjin, China. 2．词形变化错误 误：People throwed cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 正：People threw cans, paper, bags and so on into the river water. 3．词性不清错误 误：Everyone in my family is like the dog. 正：Everyone in my family likes the dog. 4．词汇用法错误 误：He opened the light after he entered the room. 正：He turned on the light after he entered the room.
十句作文范文背诵 原因篇 作文要求考生对某社会现象或社会问题进行解释。 Sample 1: Why College Students Take a Part-Time Job 1.最近几年越来越多的大学生加入打工的队伍 2. 为什么大学生要打工 3. 大学生打工 的意义 (1) According to a recent survey, about 25 percent of Chinese college students now hold a part-time or temporary job, compared with nearly none 10 years ago, and this figure increases to 72 percent during summer vacation. (2) College students are seen waiting on tables, clerking in stores, advertising in streets, teaching in families and doing whatever work they can find. (3) Why do they want odd jobs – jobs usually requiring little skill and knowledge? (4) The primary reason, I think, is money. (5) Feeling the pressure of soaring inflation as books, movies and bus fares have all gone up in price, there is scarcely a young boy or girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover the increasingly higher college costs, and at best save enough to go travelling or buy things they have long desired. (6) In this way they hope to be economically independent and avoid the indignity of having to ask for money again and again. (7) Besides they want to gain some experience in the ways of society. (8) Students growing up from nursery school to college only know about books and have trouble dealing with realities. (9) Working on a part-time basis can provide them with a rare opportunity to know the outside world and prepare them for a future career. (10) The significance for college students of doing a part-time job means more than money and experience: It will broaden their outlook and exert a profound influence on their personality and life. 理由篇 叙述理由和分析原因是属于同一类型的英语议论文。所不同的是后者是解释某一社会现象或社会问题，而前者则解释写作者——我，为什么要干某事或不干某事。 Sample 1: The Most Unforgettable Person I Ever Knew 1. 我生活中最难以忘怀的人是…… 2. 为什么他（或她）一直在我心中 3. 结论 (1) In my life I have met many people who are really worth recalling. (2) But perhaps the most unforgettable person I ever knew is my Chinese language teacher. (3) What frequently brings back memories of my school teacher is his special qualities. (4) First of all, I was attracted by his lively wit. (5) I remember that we students always anticipated his class with great eagerness because his lecture were humorously delivered, never failing to provoke chuckles or loud laughs. (6) Second, he gave us the greatest gift a teacher can offer – an awakening of a passion for learning. (7) He not only led us to an appreciation of the beauty and perfection of Chinese and literature, but also aroused our great interest in exploring something deeper in this field. (8) Finally, I was deeply impressed by the respect he showed for us. (9) As he treated us like friends rather than students, we all liked to visit his home for social activities as well as for academic advice.
四级写作范文必背经典 大学英语四级范文背诵(01) COLLEGE STUDENTS SHOULD ATTEND PHYSICAL EXERCISE Physical exercise is a necessary part of college life. However, still some college students do not like to attend sports activities, they think those activities waste their time and influence their study. Indeed, it is very unwise for college students to keep distance from physical exercise because physical exercise is not harmful but good to them. College students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. First of all, attending physical sports can help students build a strong body, and keep abounding energy. Moreover, physical exercise is an effective way to relief pressure and keep a pleasant move. Besides, by attending physical activities, students can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their social skills. Nowadays, all colleges and universities have provided many sports facilities for students to do physical exercises, students can chose freely according to their interests and needs. As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained a lot, and enjoined great pleasure. To conclude, physical exercise is beneficial to every college students, and therefore do not hesitate to attend sports activities. 大学英语四级范文背诵(02) Online games As a product of modern computer and the Internet, online games have become very popular among college students. Many students have enjoyed great pleasure and satisfaction from these games. But as we see, some students lacking self discipline on too much indulge in these games. So that their health and academic performances are affected. This phenomenon has caused much worry from the teachers and parents. However, some others argue that online games are not always harmful. They can train their ability of youngsters to respond to things quickly. Moreover, they can stimulate their imagination and their interest in computer science. More importantly, it does bring college students much pleasure and release their pressure greatly. Form my point of view, online games are wonderful entertainment if you play them in a clever way. When they interfere too much with your study, it is better for you to give them up at once, but if you have enough self control over them, you can certainly obtain real pleasure and benefit a lot from them. 大学英语四级范文背诵(03) Certificates Craze on Campus In recent years, to get a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly, ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear? There are two mainly reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employments pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of