高考英语作文提分技巧：换词法详解
首先我们来看一看如何在形式上运用“换词大法”，我们将目前常用的过渡词根据具体用法的不同，分成九类。此时的“换词”意味着扔掉你那干瘪生硬的英语，在句子之间加上一些“过渡词”，让句子在形式上更完整。
1.解释过渡词
如果刚刚写完一句话，然后想解释一下，那么你要用到的是“解释过渡词”：now, in addition, for, in this case, furthermore, in fact ，这类过渡词能够有效增加语句的说服力，同时增加文章字数。事实上，英语本身就是一种“解释型语言”（汉语是一种“定义型语言”），解释过渡词用得好不好，直接体现了你的英语硬实力！
（1）The problem, in this case, is hard to solve.
（2）Furthermore, several people telephoned the same night.
2.时间过渡词
在记叙文里面，时间顺序是最重要的顺序；在图表文中，也常用表示时间的过渡词来加强数据之间的联系以说明变化规律！
如下，是关于家庭消费结构变化的作文。
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.
下面这句是大家常用的“现象解释型”议论文的开头模式：
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training. Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
3.强调过渡词
如果你说完一个道理，感觉表达的不完整，想要强调一下，那么你应该使用“强调过渡词”，如：certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important
（1）Indeed, a dessert is always enjoyable.
（2）Above all, do not build an open fire in a forest.
4.转折过渡词
【but, however, although, though, yet, except for 】
（1）Yet there was still a chance that he would win.
（2）Except for one girl, all the hikers returned.
5.举例过渡词
【for example, for instance, thus, such, next 】
（1）For instance, a telegram often costs more than a telephone call.
（2）Thus the trip finally began.
6.递进或补充过渡词
【in addition，furthermore，also，moreover，yet 】
（1）In addition, the tour stops in Vancouver.
（2）Furthermore, the time for registration has been extended.
7.顺序的过渡词
【first, second, third, afterward(s)（后来）, meanwhile（几乎同时）, thereafter （在那以后）, last, finally, eventually （终于）】
（1）First, you mail in an application. Second, you ask for an appointment. Third, you send them three personal references.
（2）Then you come to a traffic light and turn right.
8.比较过渡词
【like, in the same way, similarly, equally important, too 】（1）In the same way, we look for a good doctor.
（2）Similarly, the Thais enjoy spicy foods.
9.对比过渡词
【unlike, in contrast, whereas, on the other hand, instead 】（1）In contrast, the red fluid does not lose its color. （2）The husband wanted a boy, whereas the wife wanted a girl.
此外，从内容上进行“换词”也必不可少，毕竟很多同学都面临着词汇量匮乏的情况，那些用到“恶心”的词语如何才能华丽大转身呢？我们可以先看看此种“换词大法”的三点注意事项，打起精神来牢记吧！
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【注2】箭头左边是原词，右边是推荐的换词，有多个换词的一般按照难易程度排列，可以按照你目前的英文水平选择一两个使用，谁也别骂我给的词太难——剩下的后半辈子慢慢学...
【注3】如果一篇文章里面同一个词要用两次以上，优先使用换词，换词不够了可以用原词，原词尽量往后用但是不要用在结尾句。
换词大法
like → be fond of/be crazy about/delight in/rejoice in
/take pleasure in/appreciate/
all + 名词复数（如students）→ every single student 【注意名词单复数变化】
think about/consider → take into account
want to do sth → intend to do sth/tend to do sth
/be inclined to do sth./ be longing for doing sth./be thirst for doing sth
more and more+n. → n.+in /growing/increasing
/significant/numbers
more and more +adj (如important) → increasingly important
most+n.(如student) → an overwhelmingly majority of
a significant proportion of
a sizable percentage of
not → by no means的不完全倒装句型。
【例】By no means shall we give up trying.我们决绝能停止努力。
【注】by no means 可以用在“正装”句型中，如：This is by no means a good way to solve the problem. 这绝不是解决问题的最好方法。
should do → be supposed to do
good --> excellent
want sth→desire sth. 高级词汇使情感强度更加具体
but→nevertheless/nonetheless 高级词汇使情感强度更加具体（“尽管如此，但是...”）
How things have changed!(大转折，用于句首，替换But.)
always →consistently
/constantly/continually/eternally/perpetually
enough → abundant/adequate/sufficient
important →
essential/vital/crucial/fundamental/indispensable
now → nowadays/these days/ recently
really →undoubtedly/absolutely
very → extremely/surprisingly //unusually/excessively
/noticeably/exceedingly
many → a number of/ plenty of/ a multitude of
/ many+n.+,if not most,+...(经典插入语)
20、good friend→ true friend/close friend/constant friend /a friend indeed
big → distinct 清楚的、明显的（可以加到difference/change 等词的前面）
就像平常说话一样，我们的作文常常就在有限的那些词里打转，如果能用上不太常见的一些词就好了，肯定能给作文增色不少。
高考英语作文精选范文【五篇】 作文一： May l0th Monday Cloudy This afternoon my school held an English-speaking contest named"Challenging the Future" in the multi-function classroom. The students who are excellent at English took part in the contest. I just went there as an audience. I got a lot from their speech. In their speech, I found all of them had made full use of the present time and conditions to prepare for the future and used the known factors to challenge the unknown ones. From this I realized that we shouldn't waste our time of today and shouldn't put today's work off to tomorrow. Today is the base of tomorrow. I will no longer waste my present time. I am going to study hard and do good preparation for my future. 5月10日星期一多云 今天下午我们学校在多功能教室举办了题为“挑战未来”的英语演讲 比赛。那些擅长英语的学生参加了比赛。我作为观众去了多功能厅。 从他们的演讲中我学到了很多。在他们的演讲中，我发现他们都充分 利用了现在的时间和条件来为未来做准备，用已知的因素来挑战未知 的因素。由此我意识到我不应该浪费今天的时间，不应该把今天的事 推到明天。今天是明天的基础，我不再浪费现在的时间。我打算好好 学习为我的未来做好准备。 作文二： May l0th Monday Cloudy
2002年高考英语满分作文（十篇） 作文题目 最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。 注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。 2．词数：100左右。 3．参考词汇：门票---entrance fee Dear Editor． I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks． 满分作文（一） Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entra nce fee should be charged for parks. 60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fe e do not meet people’s expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where th e public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If a n entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a g ate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us school mates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. T he money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buy ing some other kinds of flowers and trees. With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protec t a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor? Yours truly, Li Hua 满分作文（二） Dear editor, I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entranc e fee should be charged for parks. Sixty students out of one hundred think that an entr ance fee should not be bought before one enters a park, for it is a place for the public t o go to when they are free. If a ticket must be bought, a gate and walls have to be buil t for a park, which will make a city look ugly. Forty students out of one hundred thin k that an entrance fee should be bought before one enters a park, but that the price o f the ticket should be reasonable. Money that is got from ticket selling can be used t
高考英语作文模板及技巧 英语书面表达在高考中日益显得重要，高考书面表达已不只局限于把话说清楚，把意思表达完整，而是要给我们的句子润色，让我们的句子靓起来。如何让我们的英语句子靓起来呢？很多人都强调用连词、介词等词汇手段迅速提高语言水平。但这种方法需要一定的积累，也需要一定的基础。而我觉得通过对低级句型的改造，可以迅速达到这一目的。 ◆强调句：可以轻松地将时间、地点、原因、方式等类型的状语从句转变为强调句。 It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter. It was then that I realized the importance of English. ◆倒装句：只要句中有介词短语或状语从句，便可将其提前，变成倒装句。 Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me. Only by this means can he escape from the big fire. ◆with引导的伴随结构：可以将状语从句或并列句中的其中一个分句变成with 结构。 With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits He always likes to sleep with the windows open. ◆巧妙地使用非谓语动词：可以将状语从句或并列的动词简化为非谓语动词。 Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低级形式：When he heard that, ……) ◆恰到好处的被动句：适合应用于较简短的句子，这样显得语言简洁生动，宾语一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代词。 Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。 ◆感叹句：通常用于开头结尾活跃文章气氛，凡是“I feel ……”之类表达感情的句子皆可如此改造。 How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.
写作指导(7) 说明文 1．说明文是以说明为主要表达方式，用简洁明了的语言来解说事物、阐明事理，从而给读者提供知识的一种文体。 2．在高考书面表达中，其主要命题形式为图表式作文，有时也以图画式和提纲式作文来呈现写作材料。 3．它要求语言要简明扼要，通俗易懂，说明过程讲究层次性和条理性。 4．这种文体通常用第三人称，时态以一般现在时为主。 根据以下图画，写一篇英语短文，描述今昔通讯方式的变化，以及这些变化给人们生活带来的影响。
注意：1.词数：100左右； 2．参考词汇：通讯communicate (with sb.)vi.，communication n．；互联网the Internet n．。 案例分析⊙ 从材料的呈现方式(两幅图对比)及材料所提出的要求“描述变化及影响”可知，本文应该用说明文体来写作。时态的把握是本文的一大难点，一般情况下，说明文应用一般现在时，但本文描述的是今昔通讯方式的变化，所以在描写过去通讯方式的时候要用一般过去时，例如：In the past，people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone及 It used__to__take several days to hear from each other.在描写过去发生的动作对现在造成的影响时，谓语动词要用现在完成时，例如本文的起始句可用“Great changes have__taken__place in the
way of communication in people’s life in recent years”及讲述影响的过渡句“With these changes，people’s pace of life has__been__quickened__and people’s work has__been__made more efficient ”。相对来说，本文用第三人称容易把握。 Great changes have taken place in the way of communication in people’s life in recent years. In the past，people kept in touch with each other mainly by writing letters or using the public telephone.But now almost everyone has his own mobile phone.People can communicate with each other almost at any place and at any time.What’s more，people have easy access to the Internet，which enables them to send and receive emails whenever they like.With these changes，people’s pace of life has been quickened and people’s work has been made more efficient.It used to take several days to hear from each other，but now it takes only
高考英语满分作文精选三(附翻译) 健康对于我们每个人来说是非常重要的，但你的父母天天忙于工作而忽略了这个问题，你很为他们担忧。请你以此为话题，并结合提示给他们写一封信。 提示：1.要走路去上班，而不是开车或坐车； 2.每周至少去体育馆锻炼一次，或打球、或游泳； 3.饮食要健康； 4.不要工作太晚，要早休息。 要求：1.短文结构完整，意思连贯，语言流畅，语法准确，符合逻辑； 2.80—100词左右； 3.开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。 【例文】 Dear Dad(Mum), You’re so busy every day that you don’t pay much attention to your health. I’m worried about your health all the time. I’d like to give you some suggestions. I hear walking is the best sport. Your company isn’t far from home, is it? Why not walk to the office? You’d bet ter take exercise at least once a week, such as playing tennis in the gym. Going to swim is also a nice choice, too. What’s more, it’s necessary to have healthy food. Try not to stay up too late. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Dad, please accept my advice. I really wish you healthy! Your loving son (daughter) Tom (Mary) 【翻译】 亲爱的爸爸（妈妈）， 你每天这么忙，你不重视你的健康。我对你的健康担心所有的时间。我想给你一些建议。我听到走路是最好的运动。您的公司没有远离家乡，是吗？为什么不步行到办公室吗？你最好锻炼，每周至少一次，如在健身房打网球。去游泳也是一个不错的选择了。更重要的是，它需要有健康的食物。尽量不要熬夜太晚。有足够的睡眠可以让你的大脑工作得更好。
高考英语作文高分技巧 2012-10-04 高考英语怎么拿高分的技巧 高考英语作文如何才能得高分，这个问题是不少高考学生普遍关心的问题。高考英语写作应该要紧扣教学大纲对考生书面表达的要求，以有指导的英语写作为主，要求考生在短时间内构思成文。由于它是对高考学生语言综合运用能力的考查，因此在高考英语作文写作中令很多考生感到十分苦恼，也是一个失分率很高的题型. 高考英语作文高分技巧一、紧扣主题突出重点 动笔之前，针对提示的文字或图片必须先认真审题，组织内容，构思提纲，理顺思路，切忌偏题，离题，东拉西扯，不得要领，一定要避免累赘繁琐，条理不清，重点不突出的.失误。 高考英语作文高分技巧二、表达正确文字流畅 强调使用课本上学到过的单词、词组、佳句确保文章简洁通顺，切忌使用随便从文曲星或词典上找来的冷僻单词，特别强调的是必须避免使用不规范的中文式表达，受欢迎的作文是用词用句实实在在，朴实无华，清晰流畅的文章。 高考英语作文高分技巧三、谋篇布局 (1)作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上、运用材料上、篇章结构上，充分酝酿。 (2)考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些词汇和句型等。 (3)边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性 高考英语作文高分技巧四、句式美? 高考英语作文中句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。精彩句式的合理使用会使本来结构单一、语句乏味的文章极具可读性。合并简单句使文章的语言由松散变得凝练。简单句虽然短小精悍，但在语言表达上，不能单一地只注重简单句的正确运用，还应多运用一些并列句或复合句，使句式灵活多变。考生在写作时，可以巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力;省略与替代交替使用，避免写作时不必要的重复与累赘，使句子更简练、精确;主动句与被动句交替使用，使句子更具多样性;分词及with复合结构结合使用，使得文章句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动，为文章增色。
中考英语作文的答题技巧有哪些 作文是英语考试中的重点，下面就是作文啦小编为您收集整理的中考英语作文答题技巧的相关文章，希望可以帮到您，如果你觉得不错的话可以分享给更多小伙伴哦！ 中考英语作文答题技巧 英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。 提高中考写作水平，需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧，两者缺一不可。 正确无误的造句能力 这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。 如：如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的”说”？我们就可以写出许多：say some thing gladly（merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently） 还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。 扩词有：play football------play foot ball in the play ground------play football in the play ground with my friends------play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano…
等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。 又如：a friend------my friend------my close friend------my close friend named Mary.以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.------The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.------The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.------The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket. 这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良习惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的习惯。 在平时的学习中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。 在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学习生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如： 1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了，他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…) 2.你与其他同学不同，你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from) 3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)
高考英语满分作文精选一(附翻译) 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 【翻译】 亲爱的大卫， 我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。希望能尽快看到你在北京。 此致， 王明
2007-2015江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年江苏高考英语满分作文 2007年4月29日上午10点到11点，全国亿万学生阳光体育活动在各地大中小学校同时举行。江苏省1100万学生积极参与了这项活动。 教育部倡导学生：每天锻炼一小时·健康工作五十年·幸福生活一辈子 请你根据以上提示，用英语准备一份发言稿，向同学们讲述一下阳光体育活动的有关情况，并就高三学生是否需要每天花一小时锻炼，谈谈你的看法及理由。 注意： 1.发言稿应包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥。 2.词数：120左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3.参考词汇：阳光体育活动—a national student sports program; 教育部—the Ministry of Education Good afternoon, everyone, Thank you! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29,2007,from 10:00 to 11:00,hundreds of millions of students fromprimary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sportsprogram. Eleven million students in Jiangsu took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope thatthey will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life. Personally,I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although wetake a n hour a day for exercise,it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our bodyand keep a cl ear mind. Therefore,we can work more efficiently. Thank you! 2008年江苏高考英语满分作文 实现有效的沟通，建立良好的人际关系，不仅要善于言表、更要学会倾听。请你根据下表中所提 供的信息，写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。 为何倾听表示尊重，增进理解，建立良好的人际关系 谁来倾听家长倾听孩子理解孩子，消除代沟，…… 老师倾听学生了解学生，满足需求，…… 同学相互倾听增进友谊，互帮互学，…… 怎样倾听（请考生联系自己拟定内容，列举两至三点。） 注意：1. 对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。 2. 词数150左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。 3. 演讲稿中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。 Good afternoon, everyone! The topic of my speech today is “Being a Good Listener”........... Thank you for your listening! 参考范文： Good afternoon, everyone!
高考英语作文技巧 1 高考英语作文模版 对比观点题型 （1）要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1．有一些人认为。。。 2．另一些人认为。。。 3．我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------（主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支 持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------（我的观点）. The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . （2）给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------（观点一）. For example, they think ②-----------------（举 例说明）．And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该 看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二)． Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨 论主题的看法)． 阐述主题题型 要求从一句话或一个主题出发，按照提纲的要求进行论述． １．阐述名言或主题所蕴涵的意义． ２．分析并举例使其更充实． The good old proverb ----------------（名言或谚语）reminds us that ----------------(释义). Indeed, we can learn many things form it. First of all,-----------------(理由一). For example, -------------------(举例说明). Secondly,----------------(理由二). Another case is that ---------------(举例说明). Furthermore , ------------------(理由三)． In my opinion, ----------------(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the ssarily benefit a lot say------A. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you”ll nece from it. 解决方法题型 要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径 １．问题现状 ２．怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
(一)高考英语作文评分标准因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。 5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。高考英语作文评分标准解析及答题技巧(二) 6达到了预期的写作目的。 第三档（适当）；（11-15分）（一）高考英语作文评分标准 1 基本完成了试题规定的任务。个档次给分。1本体总分为25分，按522评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4后给分。有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 5应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。80或多余120要求字数的，从总分中减去2 3词数少于6 整体而言，基本达到了语气的写作目的。分第二档（较差）4评分时，应注意的 主要内容为：；（6-10分）内容要点，应用词汇 1未恰当完成试题规定的任务。的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性及语言的和语法结构2得体性。漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 3拼写与标点符号5是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，词法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 4应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英，美拼写汉词汇有一些语法结构词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。用法均可接受。 5，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。如6书写较差较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6信息未能清楚地传达给读者。7内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥第一档(差)；（1-5分）不予扣分。 1未完成试题规定的任务。} {各档次的给分范围和要求 2 21-25；第五档（很好）（分）明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。完全完成1了试题规定的任务。 3内容要点。覆盖2所有语法结构单调，词汇项目有限。 4 的语法结构和词汇。较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的较多3应用了理解。，但为尽力使用较复杂结语法或词汇方面有4些许错误5缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。构或词汇所致。具备较强的语言运用能力。 6信息未能传达给读者。。结构紧凑有效地使用了语句间的成份，使全文5不得分（完全达 到了预期的写作目的。60分） 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判，写的第四档（好）16-20（；分）内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。1 完全完成了试题规定的任务。虽漏掉一两个次重点， 但覆盖所有主要内容。23运用的语法结构或词汇方面能满足任务的要求。语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是4． 1. I can't find any way to solve the problem. (换（二）高考英语作文评分标准详解作高级词汇：I can't find any solution to the 一般来说，写作题的高考评分标准包含评分原则、内problem.) 容要点、给分范围及要求、说明和参考范文五个部分。其2. The pet dog is so lovely that almost 中内容要点以及词数、标点、书写等方面的原则比较容易everybody likes her. (换作高级词汇：The pet dog is so 理解、操控和落实。但“评分时，应该注意的主要内容cute that almost everybody likes her.) 为……应用词汇和语法结构的数量……上下文的连贯性和3. The question is really difficult to
高考英语满分作文精选(2) 2018-02-09 【译文】 中国旅游 最近几年，在中国的趋势，旅游业增长较快。根据最近的一项调查显示一些专家认为，约47%城镇居民定期作出旅行，28%的农村居民，也使他们的全国巡演。该调查还显示，更多的人在旅游有兴趣，并会在将来加入军队。 面对这一趋势，我们不能不说是负责任的开发一些潜在因素。在第一个地方，随着改革开放政策，对中国人民的生活水平有了很大提高，因此，他们大多数都不能周游。更重要的是，它相信，人们现在更积极的态度，旅游业，把它作为一种生活方式。此外，旅游设施正在变得越来越好。例如，交通运输发展迅速，许多景点都已经上市。 高考英语满分作文精选四 【例文】 Olympics and I Dear friend, I have a great news to inform here. Through long efforts, Beijing has been granted the right to host 2008 Olympic games. As a resident in Beijing, I feel quite excited and like to share with you my happiness. This success means a lot more than a game to me. In the first place, this Games will definitely promote the development of our economy. According to a recent survey by some experts, this games will raise our GDP by about 3%, and offer about 10,000 jobs. What’s more, our culture will be widely recognized and accepted all over the world through the Games. People will come over from every corner of the world, and experience Chinese culture in every aspect. Besides, through the games, our living environment will be greatly improved. For example, the public transportation system will be up-dated. Moreover, it’s known that more trees will be planted, and grassland will be considerably expanded.
请根据以下提示,以Advertisement为标题,写一篇词左右的英语短文. 广告成了人们生活中不可或缺的点缀 有的广告走向极端 你对广告的看法 Possible version: Advertisement广告 Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life. 广告在现代社会中无处不在。当你走在街上，你可以看到大的董事会与漂亮的女孩在你微笑。你看报纸，看到有一半的网页上覆盖着广告。你打开电视，你看到商业广告。不管你喜欢不喜欢，广告填满你的生活。 In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him. 为了吸引更多的顾客，广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说，要做广告，广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上，吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。 Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for. 虽然广告让你快速做出决定，但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人，他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。 春天是旅游的好季节,某外国语学校校长要求各班同学就春游一事展开讨论.讨论的主题是:学校要不要组织学生春游.校长还要求班长就讨论的情况用英语写一封信给他. 假定你是某班班长李华,请你根据下列表格中的信息客观地介绍讨论情况. 注意:1,信的格式已为你写好;2,词数:100左右;3,生词:拓宽broaden 70%的学生赞成春游 30%的学生反对春游 1. 可以领略大自然的优美风景; 2. 拓宽视野,增长知识; 3. 呼吸新鲜空气,有益于身体健康. 1. 时间紧,耽误学习; 2. 增加父母经济负担; 3. 担心安全. Dear Headmaster, I’m writing to tell you the discussion we’ve had on whether the school should organize a spring outing for the students. 范文 Dear Headmaster,
2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（1） 假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。 【例文】 Dear David, I'm glad you'll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. It's difficult for you because it's quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. It's also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practise your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I'm sure you'll learn Chinese well. Hope to see you soon in Beijing. Yours, Wang Ming 【翻译】 亲爱的大卫， 我很高兴你会来北京学习中文。中国是非常有益的，许多外国人正在学习，现在。这很难为你，因为它是相当的英语不同。你要记住尽可能多的中国话。同样重要的是做一些阅读和写作。你可以看电视，听广播练习你的听力。你最好不要谈论与中国人民。你可以学习汉语，不仅从书本上，而且从你周围的人。如果您有任何问题，请问我。我敢肯定你会学好中文。 希望能尽快看到你在北京。 此致， 王明 2015高考英语满分作文范文及翻译（2） 请你根据下面的提纲，以“我的家乡”为题，写一篇100—120字的短文。 提纲： (1) 家乡的地理位置; (2) 解放前的情况; (3) 解放后的变化; (4) 对家乡的感情。 【例文】 My Home Town My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice. But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life. In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved. I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it