个人整理：英语写作三步骤
训练指导者方针的好坏是一个前提条件。合理地设置训练程序，使英语习作从初级到高级沿着一条循序渐进，由简到多的进程发展是成功训练者必须具备的指导思想。本篇认为，在习作训练的初期，应采纳一条从有材料可依的习作方式过渡到脱离本本进行自由写作方式的途径。从有材可依到元材可依的训练过程应包括三个阶段：
一、短文缩写（summary）阶段。
短文缩写可以是就所学课文进行缩写，也可以采用其它阅读材料，但要求被缩写的材料难易程度不超过所学课本。被用于进行缩写的课文或其它材料必须观点明确，层次分明，叙述有条理。缩写时应做到简明扼要，抓住重点，不要拖泥带水，没有主次。初学阶段的被缩写材料不宜太长，以不超一千词为佳，缩写文以不超过2m词为佳。以下就一篇短文进行缩写，限于篇幅，短文内容有所节略。
mostshopsinbritainopenat9.00a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30intheevening. smallshopsusuallycloseforanhouratlunchtime.ononeortwodaysaweek-usuall ythursdayand/orfriday-somelargefoodshopsstayuntilabout8.00p.m.forlate nightshopping.
manyshopsareclosedintheafternoonononedayaweek.thedaysisusuallywed nesdayorthursdayanditisadifferentdayindifferenttowns.nearlyallshopsar eclosedonsunday.news-papershopsareopeninthemorning,andsellsweetsandci garettesaswell.buttherearelegalrestrictionsonsellingmanythingsonsunda ys.manylargefoodshops(supermarkets)areself-service.whenyougointooneof theseshopsyoutakeabasketandyouputthethingsyouwishtobuyintoit.youqueue upatthecash-deskandpayforeverythingjustbeforeyouleave.ifanyonetriesto takethingsfromashopwithoutpayingtheyarealmostcertaintobecaught.mostsh opshavestoredetectiveswhohavethejobofcatchingshoplifters.shopliftingi sconsideredaseriouscrimebythepoliceandthecourts.whenyouarewaitingtobe servedinashop,itisimportanttowaityourturn.itisimportantnottotrytobese rvedbeforepeoplewhoarrivedbeforeyou.manypeoplefromoverseasareastonish edatthebritishhabitofqueuing.
将短文缩写如下：
thisarticletellsusaboutbritishshops.britishshopsusuallyopenat9.00 a.m.andcloseat5.00or5.30p.m.manyshopsareclosedintheafternoononedayawe ek.nearlyallshopsareclosedonsundays.inbritain,manylargefoodshopsarese
lf-service.andwhenyouwaittobeservedinashop,youhavetowaitpatientlyfory ourturn.
这是一篇不超过100词的缩写，句子基本上由原文各段落的主要内容构成。个别段落被完全删除以保证缩写重点突出，前后连贯。缩写是一种“依材剪贴”的习作方式，基本上采用原材料中的词语和句子，仅作了部分调整，是最初级的习作方式。
二、短文评论（briefcomment）阶段。
短评是就所学课文或阅读材料进行评论。通过分析原文中的内容和观点，提出一定的看法。短评可以是对原文观点表示赞同，也可以提出异议或不同看法。如对前文便可作以下评论：
fromthearticlewelearnedaboutbritishshops,abouttheiropeningandclos ingtimeandtheirservice.butwefindthattherearesomethinginconvenientwith britishshopservice.firstisthetime.shopsinbritainopenverylateandcloset ooearly.secondisthatthereisalmostnosundayservice.wherecanpeoplegoifth eysuddenlyneedtobuysomething?thelastisthehabitofqueuing.itwillbeawast eoftimeifthequeueistoolong.
初学阶段，短文评论的字数一般也应在150字左右，不宜写大多。短评是一种“一半依材一半发挥”的习作方式。在内容上，一部分取自原文，一部分靠自己的思考。在用词上，可以部分地依赖原文，也需使用一些其它词汇。此外，短评的行文布局和用句也是一半模仿，一半创造。短评的这种特点使它非常适合承接短文缩写阶段，而又为后期阶段打下一定的基础。
三、引导写作(guidedwriting)阶段。
引导写作可分为重新编排句子顺序。规定情景作文。看图作文。提纲作文。关键词作文等形式。这些形式均可以用于训练，但以提纲作文和关键词作文多用为佳.提纲作文是一种给出题目和段落提纲的习作方式，其段落写作提纲可以采用段落主旨句的形式，也可以是短语关键词作文是一种给出作文题目和一些关键词或词组的命题作文形式。由于有段落写作提纲或主旨句等，进行习作时，减少了审题环节，且写作思路受到引导。在训练初期，引导写作的命题应尽量与所学英语书本的内容挂钩，使学生能够参照一部分课文所学的词汇与结构，避免大多生词。如针对上篇短文便可出一道相关命题引导学生习作：
英语写作：七大热点话题必备词汇热点话题一：兴趣爱好 基本词汇 favorite（最喜欢的） taste（爱好，志趣） read novels（读小说） surf the Internet（上网） chat online（在线聊天） collect stamps（集邮） make e-friends（交网友） climb mountains（爬山） enjoy pop music（喜欢流行音乐） 亮点词汇 develop an interest in（在……方面培养兴趣） be fond of（喜欢） be keen on（对……着迷）
have a taste in（喜爱） hobby（业余爱好） be interested in（对……感兴趣） have a great love for（非常喜爱……） 热点话题二：友谊 基本词汇 make friends with sb.（和某人交朋友） a strong personality（个性强） personal matters（私事） friendly（友好的） a close friend（一个亲密的朋友） trust each other（互相信任） share ... with sb.（与某人分享） keep in touch with sb.（与某人保持联系） stay best friends with sb.（和某人保持很好的友谊）
a friend in need（患难之交） 亮点词汇 get to know sb.（认识某人）know sb. very well（熟知某人）precious（珍贵的） worthy（有价值的）understanding（善解人意的）be loyal to（对……忠诚） keep sb. company（陪伴，做伴） 热点话题三：求职招聘 基本词汇 employ（雇用） full-time（全职的） part-time（兼职的） well-paid（薪水高的）
1：根据要求完成小作文。（共5分） 学校准备在近期组织一次春游活动，请以学生会(the student union)的名义写一份英文通知。（30---40词） 具体要求： 内容：学校春游（a spring outing） 出发时间：下周五早8点 集合地点：学校操场(playground) 自备的物品：雨伞、食物、水 Everybody, attention please. Spring is coming, and it's a good season to have a spring outing Please note that we will go to Bei Hai Park where is 30 kilometers northwest from our school on 15th July. We shall set out at half past seven in the morning that day. Please gather on the school playground, we will go there by school bus. we should take food, water. and an umbrella by ourselves. Thanks the student union 试题分析：这是一篇应用文。要求写一份通知，内容要包括：时间，地点，注意事项。开头和结尾要符合通知的习惯用语。 【亮点说明】这份通知内容表达清晰，过渡自然。在叙述中语言简练，准确。 2：某学校将每年的3月5日定为爱心志愿者活动日，今年活动的主题是“人人为贫困孩子献爱心”。请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点包括： 许多孩子因贫困而上不起学；（too…to…）； 在冬天，很多孩子没有暖的衣服穿。他们没有足够的书籍，没有书包； 有些学校离家很远，每天很早就起床，要花费一个半小时的时间到达学校。（far away, it takes …to do ）； 我们能为他们做的是……（至少2点）。 文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。要求60词左右。 Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. ______ ___ Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union Dear students, In some parts of our country, there are many children out of school. They are too poor to go to school. At the same time, they don't have enough school things and clothes. In my opinion, each child should have the right to go to school, but there are few chances for the poor children. So we should help them as possible as we can, just like giving them school things, clothes and so on. We hope they will have the same chance of getting knowledge as we do in the school. Thanks for your joining! Students’ Union 试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可
一．修辞手法 1.Simile 明喻 Eg. O my love's like a red,red rose. That man can not be trusted.He is as slippery as an eel 黄鳝 She likes an apple in her eyes. 2.Metaphor暗喻 Eg. The picture of those poor people's lives was carved so sharply in his heart that he could never forget it. There was a medieval magnificence about the big dining hall. The street faded into a country road with straggling houses by it. There was a few lordly poplars before the house. All his former joy was drowned in the embarrassment and confusion he was feeling at the moment. Independent would not be a trial seperation,but would be a painful divorce. 3.Personification 拟人 Eg . Youth is hot and bold,age is weak and cold. The match will soon be over and defeat is staring us in the face. The storm was raging and an angry sea was continuously tossing抛their boat. 4.Metonymy 借喻转喻不直接说明而是以另外一个与之相关的事物来说明Sword and cross in hand,the European conquerors fell upon the Americas. When the war was over,he lay down the sword and took up the pen.弃武从文 His purse钱包would not allow him that luxury The kettle boils 水开了 The room sat slient. 全屋人安静的坐着。 Lend me your ears , please. 请听我说。 His unfriendly tough surprised her. 5.Synecdoche.提喻 A.部分代整体或者说特殊代一般 Eg . He is the Newton of this century. The had to earn his daily bread by doing odd jobs.打零工面包来代指生活收入The farms were short of hands during the harvest season. 手代指人 There are about 100 hands working in the factory. 同上 B.整体代部分或者一般代特殊 Eg. The fox(狐狸来代指狐狸的毛皮) goes very well with your cap.帽子 Germany beat Argentina 2 to 1 in this exciting football match.用德国和阿根廷来代指两个国家的球队 The poor creature could not endure her sufferings.用生物代指人 6.Euphemism 委婉，诲饰 Eg. He is out visiting the neccessary. 他出去方便了。 His relation with his wife has not been fortunate. 他和他妻子离婚了。 Deng xiaoping passed away in 1977. 注意看课本page19页的词的委婉用法。 7.Irony 反语 Eg. It would be a fine thing indeed not knowing what time it was in the morning.
一、用英文描写一位你的老师（五年级上册第一单元） My Chinese Teacher Miss Liang is our Chinese teacher. She is young and pretty. She is ta ll and thin. She has big eyes and short hiar. She is very strict, but s he is very kind. She likes us very much. We all like her. 二、用英文介绍你最喜爱的食物、水果、蔬菜和饮料（五年级上册第三单元） My Favorite Food and Drink My favorite food is chicken. It is tasty. My favorite fruits are apples and oranges. They are sweet. I don’t like strawberries because they are sour. I like eggplant and green beans.I like milk and tea. They a re healthy. 三、用英文介绍你最喜爱的一位老师。可以描写其外表，介绍其性格，喜欢的食物，业余活动等（五年级上册结合1~3单元） My Favorite Teacher Our Chinese teacher is Miss Chen. She is tall and thin. She has big e yes and short hair. She is very strict, but she is very kind. She likes reading books, she often reads books and watches TV on Saturdays and Sundays. Her favourite food is fish. She doesn’t like grapes because they’re sour. 四、说说你会干什么,不会干什么(五年级上册第四单元) I can sweep the floor. I can water the flowers. I can make the bed. But I can’t cook the meals. I can’t wash the clothes. 五、用英文说说你的卧室都有什么，用There be结构描述（五年级上册第五单元） My Bedroom My bedroom is small, but it is very nice and clean. There are blue cu rtains in my room. There is a desk under the window. There are so me books on the desk. There is a bed near the desk. There are two pictures on the wall. I like my room very much. 六、用英文描述你的教室有什么，用There be 结构
(整理)高三英语写作高级词汇句型 1.主语+cannot emphasize the importance of…too much.(再怎么强调……的重要性也不为过。) 例如：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性都不为过。 2.There is no need for sb to do sth.\for sth.(某人没有必要做……) 例如：There is no need for you to bring more food. 不需你拿来更多的食物了。 3.By+doing…，主语+can….(借着……，……能够……) 例如：By taking exercise,we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 4.…enable+sb.+to+do….(……使……能够……)
例如：Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 5.On no account can we+do….(我们绝对不能……) 例如：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。 6.What will happen to sb.?(某人将会怎样?) 例如：What will happen to the orphan? 那个孤儿将会怎样? 7.For the past+时间，主语+现在完成式/现在完成进行时….(过去……时间来，……一直……) 例如：For the past two years，I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。 8.It pays to+do….(……是值得的。)
英语作文范文1.(2015安徽) 某英文杂志正在举办以“Fancy yourself as an interviewer”为主题的征文活动,请你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”为题,写一篇英语短文。 内容包括: 1.采访的对象; 2.2.采访的原因; 3.想提的问题。 注意: 1.词数120左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息; 4.短文的标题已给出,不计入总词数。 A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview 答案： 查看解析 解析： [写作提示] 1.本文为提纲类作文,写作时主要采用第一人称,时态主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,同时还要恰当使用虚拟语气。 2.内容要点: (1)表明采访的对象;(2)阐明采访的原因;(3)说明想提的问题。 One possible version: A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview The person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei. I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one of the greatest astronauts in the have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I could interview him,I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was would also like to know how he felt in space and whether space travel is such great fun as I have ,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which must be very interesting. 2.(2015四川) 假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发帖,希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿; 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由; 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议; 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。 注意: 1.词数120左右,开头语已为你写好; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 Hi,Sharon, This is Li learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.。。。。。。 Li Xia
高考英语作文万能模板全汇总 图画作文 This illustration depicts_________ （图画中的人物）V-ing， with______________（补充说明）。Recently it has become common for people in many ways of life to_____________（进一步阐释）It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _______（图画主题）， which is ______________（进一步的说明）。 He seems to be saying that_____________（给出细节）。 In my opinion， ___________（个人阐述）。 This simple picture is a wake up call for ______（所涉群体，如the whole of the human race）。Therefore， it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to ___________（问题所在）。 One the one hand， we must _________________（建议一）。 It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us to _________（进一步说明）。 On the other hand， _______________（建议二）。 Only in this way can we___________（展望前景）。 图表作文、 The chart gives us an overall picture of the __________（图表主题）。 The first thing we notice is that_______________（图表最大特点）。 This means that __________，（进一步说明）。 We can see from the statistics given that ___________（图表细节一）。 After v-ing_________（细节一中的第一个变化）， the ____ （紧跟着的变化：幅度+时间）。 The figures also tells us that______________________（图表细节二）。（数据位置，如In the second column）， we can see that ____________accounts for _______（进一步描述）。 Judging from these figures， we can draw the conclusion that___________（结论）。 The reason for this， as far as I am concerned is that_____________（给出原因）。 / It is high time that we should _________ （发出倡议） 利弊型作文 Recently the issue of whether or not______（讨论话题） has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public. There are two major arguments that can be made for_______（讨论话题）。 For one thing， __________can bring ____ to_____________（优点一）。 For another， it is widely hold that people usually ____when _________________（优点二）。 But we must not lose sight of the fact that there are also drawbacks to___________（缺点）。 For instance， it can bring __________to _____________（举例说明）。 In addition， many people find it ________（形容词）to _______________（第二个缺点） When asked to __________， I tend to ________. This is because I _________（原因一）。Furthermore， ______________（原因二）。 Finally， ______________（原因三）。 展望未来型 With the rapid advances of _____________ in recent years， _____________（引出现象）。 However，_______ has______________， as____________（提出问题）。 As a result， _____has ____________________（指出影响）。 The effects ___________ has produced on____________ can be boiled down to two major ones.
国际上最有最有影响力的反腐败国际组织是“透明国际”，2016年的最新数据表明丹麦是世界第一清廉国。在丹麦没有腐朽的理念和文化。政府会大力对国民，公务员进行廉洁教育，丹麦那句“不要认为你有什么特殊，你和我们每个人都一样”的谚语就是平等的精神最好的诠释。我们都知道丹麦是福利性国家，丹麦国民通过交税可以获得免费的教育，医疗和养老金等社会福利。虽然高额税收几乎达到个人收入的50%，但社会福利体系最大限度得减少了“谋生型腐败”的可能性，也就是说，高福利大大压缩了腐败的边际收益。金钱的诱惑减少了，人们就更趋向于做他们感兴趣的工作。 中国是世界上最古老的文明之一。构成现代世界基础的许多元素都起源于中国。中国现在拥有世界上发展最快的经济，并正经历着一次新的工业革命。中国还启动了雄心勃勃的太空探索计划，其中包括到2020年建成一个太空站。目前，中国是世界最大的出口国之一，并正在吸引大量外国投资。同时，它也在海外投资数十亿美元。2011年，中国超越日本成为世界第二大经济体。 China is one of the most ancient civilizations across the world, from which many elements that construct the foundation of the modern world are derived. Now China has the world's fastest growing economy and is experiencing a new industrial revolution. It has also launched an ambitious space exploration plan, including the building of a space station by 2020. Currently, being one of the largest exporters in the world, China is attracting massive foreign investment Meanwhile, it has invested billions of dollars overseas as well. In 2011, China surpassed Japan, largest economic entity in the world. 为了促进教育公平，中国已投入360亿元，用于改造农村地区教育设施和加强中西部地区农村义务教育(compulsory education)。这些资金用于改善教学设施、购买书籍，使16万多所中小学受益。资金还用购置音乐和绘画器材。现在农村和山区的儿童可以与沿海城市的儿童一样上音乐和绘画课。一些为接受更好教育而转往城市上学的学生如今又回到了本地农村学校就读。 In order to promote education equity, China has invested 36 billion yuan to improve the education facilities in rural areas and strengthen rural compulsory education in the central and western regions. The funds is used to better the school's teaching facilities and purchase books, from which more than 160,000 middle and primary schools have gained benefits. The money is also spent on acquiring musical and painting instruments. Nowadays, children in rural and mountainous areas can have access to music and drawing lessons just like children in coastal cities. Some students who had once transferred to urban schools for better education now return to the local rural schools.
高考英语作文万能模板五篇整理 作文是英语考试的重中之重，想要写出好的作文，可以多背多记一些写作素材，灵活运用。下面就是给大家带来的高考英语作文万能模板，希望能帮助到大家！ 高考英语作文万能模板1 邀请信模板 Dear , I’m writing to invite you to .(发出邀请) There are some points you may want to know about . (活动主题)During ________, we will have lots of activities you are interested in .(活动的具体内容)First, .(活动介绍一)Second, .(活动介绍二) I believe that you will be very interested in . For one thing/First, ________. For another/Second, ________(受邀人参加的理由)
Since the ________ will begin ________, is it possible ________? I really hope you can come/I’m looking forward to ________.(提出希望) Yours ________ 高考英语作文万能模板2 给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③---------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我反对该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤---------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥-----(我对*所讨论主题的看法). 高考英语作文万能模板3 Dear Leslie,
高考英语作文中常用的替换词 1.individuals, characters, folks 替换（ people, persons） 2.positive, favorable, rosy （美好的） ,promising（有希望的） ,perfect, pleasurable , excellent, outstanding, superior 替换 good 3.dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill （有害的）替换 bad 如果 bad 做表语 ,可以有 be less impressive替换 eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games, enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms. When it approaches to graduation , as a result, they find their academic records are less impressive. 4.（ an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, a host of, many, if not most）替 换 many. 注：用 many, if not most 一定要小心， many 后一定要有词。 most， if not all ，Eg. Many individuals ，if not most ，harbor the idea that同理?用. 替换 most. 5.a slice of, quiet a few, several替换 some 6.harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that,it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that）替 think （因为是书面语，所以要加 that） 7.affair, business, matter替换 thing 8.shared 替换 common 9.reap huge fruits 替换 get many benefits 10.for my part, from my own perspective 替换 in my opinion 11.Increasing（ly ）, growing 替换 more and more（注意没有 growingly 这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用 increasing/growing。修饰形容词，副词用 increasingly. Eg.sth has gained growing popularity. Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth. 12.little if anything, 或 little or nothing 替换 hardly 13. ?? beneficial, rewarding替换 helpful 14.shopper,client, consumer, purchaser替换 customer 15.exceedingly, extremely, intensely替换 very 16.hardly necessary, hardly inevitable替换unnecessary,??avoidable
申请信 主要结构: 1) 说明写作目的表明想要获得什么工作或学位，介绍自己，为什么写信若是应聘工作则还需说明何时何地从哪里获得该职位的招聘信息（对公司评估广告效应非常重要)所有这些可以用一两句话概括 2) 介绍相关工作经历及本人个性，以表明你可以胜任这个职位包括教育背景、工作经历、个人能力及成就。还可根据情况简单介绍个人爱好和兴趣。注意：所有这些内容均应与应聘工作或学位有关系 3) 表示感谢和期待，恳请招聘单位对自己的申请给予优先考虑，留下联络方式及对对方表示感谢。 高考例题：假定你是李华，从互联网（the Internet）上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括：1.自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家)；3.希望获准。（2012全国课标卷） Dear Sir or Madam, I'm Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and I'd like to take part in it. I've been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, I'll be able to tell students from other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regards, Li Hua 一、邀请信的写法 1.活动名称及目的 写明邀请对方参加什么活动，以及邀请的原因和目的等。 2.活动细节及注意事项 写明活动安排的细节及需要告诉对方的注意事项。诸如时间、地点、参加人员、人数，需要做些什么样的准备以及需要穿着什么的服饰：formal / informal 二、典例:假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：⒈时间：周五晚8点至9点⒉地点：学生俱乐部⒊内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等⒋要求：备小礼物（2012全国大纲卷）
写作笔记 一、八个必备句子 1、正如一名古老的中国谚语所说。 Just as an old Chinese proverb goes. 2、生命不息，奋斗不止。 Aspire to inspire until I expire! 3、尽管图画很简单，寓意却非常深刻。 Simple as the picture is,the symbolic meaning behind it is deep as ocean. 4、情况是如此令人遗憾，是该马上采取措施控制情况发展。 With current state of offairs so sorry,it is high time that we took effective to put the situation on hold. 5、在中国，文化交流现象是最明显的。 In now country other than China, it has been said that is the phenomenonof cultural integration more obvious. 6、报纸上有一张图画引起了人们的广泛关注。 There has been a heated discussion about this picture in the newspaper. 7、教育在当下是最重要的。 Never in any era of our nation have the stakes involving education been higher than now. 二、关于内容有话可说避免跑题 1、成功品质 03、 04、 06、 07、 08、 1 2、 13 2、社会道德 98、 01、 05、 06、 11、 14 3、科技环境 99、 00、 09、 11、 15 4、文化交流 02、 10 三、关于形式三段式 220字最佳 第一段：2-3句（30-60字） 第二句：4-9句（100-120字） 第三段：2-3句（30-60字） 四、关于语言句式正确—复杂多变 用词—多样 五种方法：1、加adj. adv. 2、加同位语 3、加介词短语（作状语） 4、加定语从句 5、将两个句子写成一个句子
英语专业四级作文常用单词、短语下面列出的是一些应试作文的常用单词、短语。其中的动词、名词和形容词都是应试作文尤其是议论文写作时应该熟练运用的单词，而适当地运用下面这些短语对提高作文的措辞水平、提高作文得分大有好处。常用的形容词和副词： absurd 荒唐的addictive 上瘾的affectionate 有感情的aggressive 有上进心的 alert 敏锐的;警惕的arduous 费劲的artistic 艺术的authoritative 权威性的 awkward 尴尬的balanced 平衡的cogent 使人信服的cold-blooded 冷血的 cold-hearted 无情的compatible 兼容的complicated 复杂的compassionate 富有同情心的confident 自信的contemptible 可鄙的contributive 有贡献的corrupt 腐败的 delicious.美味可口的demanding 要求高的detrimental 有害的devious 偏离正道的dishonorable 不光彩的disturbed 受到干扰的ccentric 古怪的economical 经济的 evil 邪恶的exotic 异国的enlightened 开明的;文明的fallacious 荒谬的 fashionable 时髦的feasible 可行的fictitious 虚假的flexile 灵活多样的 fruitful 有成效的glamorous 富有魅力的gorgeous 辉煌的humane 人道的 incompatible 不调和的;不相容的mpressive 令人印象探刻的ignorant (of) 无视的;无知的 inborn 天生的inconceivable 不可思议的indecent 不妥的;不检点的indifferent 冷漠的 infectious 传染性的indispensable 不可或缺的inexhaustible 取之不尽的inferior 低人一等的 infirm (身体)弱的influential 有影响力的inhumane 不人道的inquisitive 多管闲事的 initially 首先insalubrious 有害无益instructive 有教育意义的intellectual 智力的 interim 中间的;过渡的interpersonal 人际关系的intimate 密切的inviolable 不可侵犯的 inward 内在的Irreparable 不可挽回的irresistible 不可抵抗的irritating 恼人的 isolated (from) 隔绝的laudable 可赞誉的lavishly 大方的legitimate 合法的 loyal 忠诚的luxurious 奢侈的magnanimous 宽宏大量的mature 成熟的 misleading 误导的money-oriented 向钱看的multilateral 多方面的misrepresented 不如实叙述的nourished 有营养的obscure 晦涩的palatable 美味的old-fashioned/out of date 过时的perilous 危险的permissive 宽容的;许可的pernicious 有害无益的pornographic 色情的 potential 潜在的practical 实际的;务实的preferential:优惠的pressing 紧迫的 professional 专业的prosperous 繁荣昌盛的prudent 明智的prevailing 占主导地位的;流行的psychological 心理上rational 理性的resentful 愤怒的reverse 相反的 rewarding 值得的ridiculous 荒谬的rigid 严格的rough 粗略的 shabby 破旧不堪的sheltered 受保护的sociable 好交际的self-contemptuous 自卑的 sole 惟一的stern/strict 严格的stressful 有压力的stringent 严厉的 stylish 时髦的superficial 表面现象的tempting 吸引人的time-honored 久享盛名的traditional 传统的typical 典型的unadvised 轻率的uncompromising 不妥协的unconcerned 冷漠的uneasy 不自在的unethical 不道德的unfeeling 冷漠的 unhealthy 不健康的unified 同一标准的unwholesome 不健康的unjust 不公平的 utterly 完全;绝对地unscrupulous 肆无忌惮的unsociable 不善于社交的untimely 不和适宜的 unique 独特的vexing 令人烦恼的voluntary 自愿的vulnerable 易受伤害的 vivid 形象的well-grounded 有充足理由的abolishment 废除wholesome 健康的常用的名词absurdity 荒唐;谬论abuse 滥用achievement 成绩acquaintance 熟人 admiration 崇拜adaptation 改写;适应adventures/explorer 探险者adverse impact 负面影响adversity 逆境affection 友情/感情alienation 疏远ambition 志向 amusement 娱乐anecdote 轶事apathy冷漠无情approach 鼓掌 architecture 建筑association 联想;联系assault 攻击assessment 评估 athlete 运动员art 艺术availability 可得到的东西barrier 妨碍