范文赏析(一)
1.My View on Fake Commodities 1. 假冒伪劣商品的危害。
2. 怎样杜绝假冒伪劣商品。
My View on Fake Commodities
Nowadays fake commodities have flooded almost every inch of the market. Wherever you are, whatever you do, it seems that you can hardly have fallen prey to them. In other words, it is highly probable that you have bought some of those fake goods or products of inferior quality。
Needless to say, fake commodities have already done great harm to our society. On the one hand, they will ruin the good reputation of genuine products and disturb the balance of the market. On the other hand, the prevalence of such products has hindered interpersonal relationship and resulted in the decline of public morality. As a consequence, they have wasted exhaustible resources, endangered people’s precious life and health, and in the long run eroded public trust。
Then, what should be done to do away with fake commodities? To start with, the government needs to tighten its inspection program and strengthen its enforcement policies. Secondly, honest businessmen should modify some long-accepted practices at the protection of their intellectual property right. Most important of all, we consumers will have to do a better job of learning how to distinguish between the genuine and the phoney and definitely say no to the fake ones. In one word, the coordinated effort of the whole society will put an end to fake commodities.
（一）University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
1.现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌;
2.你对这种现象的看法
●审题概述● 这是一篇论述对大学生追求和使用名牌看法的文章。第一段，详述大学生
热衷追求、使用名牌的情形以及人们的看法。第二段，重点谈你对此的看法。
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
―What perfumes are you wearing?‖ ―Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?‖ ―I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday.‖ ―I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?‖ Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information abo ut the brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. ―Keeping up with the Joneses‖ is their conviction—―If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?‖ About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty.
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. They are something beautiful, e ndurable, and reliable. ―The love of beauty is common to all,‖ goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management,
isn’t it?
（二）Knowledge and Diploma
1.目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香;
2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识; 你的观
点
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes.
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most learned men.
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion. （三）The Rise of Shanzhai Culture
1.最近兴起了一股“山寨热”;
2.你如何看待山寨现象
The vast array of knockoff name-brand products, such as cell phones, DVDs, MP3 players, have made “s hanzhai”the hottest word of the year. Now we wear shanzhai watches, talk through shanzhai cell phones, play shanzhai video games, use shanzhai computers, even watch shanzhai TV shows. Once a term used before some electronic products to suggest a copycat version of inferior quality, shanzhai now suggests to many Chinese creativity and trendiness. With the media all over the rise of shanzhai culture, public opinions are clearly divided.
Advocates invariably associate it with innovation, stylishness, the DIY spirit, open-mindedness and practicality, as shanzhai products often mix imitation with innovation—a similar skin but a different heart. The end products are usually more functional and much cheaper than the original. Besides, they respond to the market more swiftly and they are more considerate in design. Thanks to them, more people at the grassroots level can enjoy the benefit of modern technology.
However, other people, including myself, hold more reserved attitudes towards the shanzhai fever. For all the popularity it has won, a copycat is a copycat. The mockery of the prestige products not only steals their profits but also upsets market competition. Moreover, shanzhai products thrive on the current legal loopholes. Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans, they make illegal profits by violating intellectual property rights and evading taxes. And to top it off, the so-called innovation is only senseless talk as true innovation always faces huge costs and potential failures, while plagiarism simply builds success on other people’s risks. ◇第一段思路点评：综述山寨热现象。◇语言点提示：…public opinions are clearly divided此句起承上启下的作用
◇第二段思路点评：主要阐述山寨产品的优势。◇语言点提示：（1）mix imitation with innovation混淆模仿与创新（2）respond to the market对市场做出反应◇第三段思路点评：主要阐述对山寨产品侵权、扰乱市场等方面的看法。◇语言点提示：（1）The mockery of the prestige products拙劣地模仿名牌（2）thrive on茁壮成长、蓬勃发展、繁荣（3）legal loopholes法律漏洞（空子）（4）Under the disguise of anti-dominance slogans在反垄断口号的伪装下（5）violating intellectual property rights违反
知识产权（6）evading taxes逃税（7）plagiarism剽窃、抄袭
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
2.盗版软件比比皆是; 2.盗版软件猖獗的原因;
3.如何打击盗版软件
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere.
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by nature it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly.
◇第一段思路点评：概述中国盗版软件泛滥的现状。◇语言点提示：the rampant practice of software piracy猖獗的盗版软件
◇第二段思路点评：论述盗版软件猖獗的原因。◇语言点提示：（1）downloads online 在线下载（2）authentic copy正版
◇第三段思路点评：提出应当禁止盗版的观点，解释原因，并引出阐述打击盗版软件的具体做法，包括软件商和政府采取的应对措施。
◇语言点提示：tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties加强反盗版立法和盗版惩罚
金融危机 1.金融危机给各行各业都造成了一定影响; 2.金融危机对大学生造成何种影响;3.作为大学生，应怎样应对这种影响.
Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It’s hard to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life.
College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious business people, or even criminal gang.
In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct —there’s no free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves.
◇第一段思路点评：概述金融危机给各行各业造成的影响。◇语言点提示：（1）severe recession严重衰退（2）devastating effects毁灭性的后果（3）go bankrupt破产（4）high-return investment bubbles 高回报投资泡沫（5）retrieved追回、挽回◇第二段思路点评：主要论述金融危机给大学生带来的影响。◇语言点提示：（1）fall victim to 被降服、屈服于（2）slump 经济萧条、不景气、经济衰退（3）internships 实习（4）malicious恶毒的、恶意的◇第三段思路点评：阐述大学生如何应对金融危机的影响。◇语言点提示：
注意since, therefore, furthermore等关联词的使用，使句间关系更加紧密。
1：志愿者活动
1. 越来越多的人从事志愿者工作;
2. 志愿者工作的社会意义;
3. 作为大学生，应该怎么做
In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. According to a survey, in 2008, there were about 1,700,000 volunteers who offered service for Olympic Games. Actually, an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China。
Volunteering actions are of tremendous benefits to both those in need and the society. Olympic Games are a good example. As is known to all, volunteers played an active role in Beijing Olympic Games. Without them, it would be a tough task to hold this un-precedent Olympic Games. Therefore, we can say that it was those volunteers who ensured the success of these games。
As modern college students, we should get actively involved in volunteering activities. By participating, we can learn how to work well in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skills and organizational ability. Undoubtedly, all of these are critical for our person growth. So, we should take this chance to learn and to grow. (161words)
大城市就业还是小城镇
1. 很多的大学生毕业后留在大城市工作；
2. 也有人选择到小城镇开始自己的职业生涯；
3. 结合自己的实际情况谈谈自己的想法。
Want to be a small fish in a big pond or the other way round? Every graduate faces this question when starting his career. A large number of college graduates prefer to stay in big cities,which mean more experiences, more opportunities to see the big world and more space for career development. At the sam e time, higher salary is another temptation。
But some other graduates intend to start in small towns. Even though there may not be many big companies, they can have a quieter and less competitive life. Another reason is that they can be a big fish in a small pond. They can easily get the management’s attention and may win promotion earlier。
As far as I am concerned, I prefer to start in a metropolis like Shanghai. A good begin is half the battle, and in Shanghai I can find a job in a big company where I can meet people from different places and cultures. I will learn from them what I can not get from textbooks. (
议论型作文
1. Should College Students Live on Campus
a. 有些人喜欢住在学校的宿舍，因为……
b. 有些人喜欢住在校外，因为……
c. 我的看法
There are an increasing number of students who choose to live off campus. Parents and university administrations understandably reacted differently. They voiced concerns about security and the threat of off-campus lifestyles getting out of control. However, college students have their own reasons for their choices。
Some students prefer to live on campus for the following reasons. First, campus residents are closer to classes, the library, and other resources, so they are more likely to succeed in college and complete their bachelor’s degree in four years. Furthermore, Living in a dorm is a great opportunity to meet all kinds of new people and develop relationships with them, so students living on campus are more sociable. Last but not the least, living on campus is cheaper and more convenient. Often times, off-campus housing is more expensive than on-campus housing and while living on campus, you don’t have to worry about monthly rent payments and utility bills。
Some others choose to live off campus because they believe living off campus they are more independent, with more privacy and a lot more quiet time. Living off campus gives them freedom from those dorm rules and allow them to set their own. The extra space also means that one can probably find a quiet place to study in the convenience of his own home。
As for me, I’m a fait hful supporter of the former group because I, living on campus myself, have witnessed and enjoyed all the convenience and happiness of doing so. To me, living on campus undoubtedly adds an important element to the complete college experience。
2. Pursuit of A Master’s Degree
a. 根据下图描述某校毕业生毕业意向的变化
b. 分析选择读研的毕业生数目增加的原因
c. 说明选择读研对个人和社会产生的
It is illustrated in the pie charts that graduates’ choices after graduation have experienced much change. The number of students choosing to pursue a master’s degree and study abroad grows several times over the decade。
The reasons of the increasing number of students pursuing a master’s degree are as follows. First, with the number of college graduates growing each year, the situation in the job market is
getting tighter and tighter. The public awareness of the situation has created a surge of interest in seeking a master’s degree. Secondly, many cross-national companies set a much higher standard for new recruits than ever. It seems that the higher education you have, the higher salary you may receive。
Choosing to study for master’s degree will benefit the individuals and the whole society as well. The quality of Chinese intellectuals will be considerably enhanced, which in turn will boost the progress of the whole society。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Say ―Thank You‖ to Parents. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 很多的大学生从未跟父母道过谢
2. 请说明原因
3. 你的建议
According to a recent survey involving over 3000 undergraduates, 35% of university students have never said ―Thank you‖ to their parents. Their parents have done all they could to bring them up in the past score of years, but have never been rewarded with gratitude。
The subjects claim such reasons as follows. First and foremost, a quarter of the interviewed students regard it as parents’ duty to support them spiritually and financially. And it is not necessary to express appreciation to their parents. However, the majority of youngsters are aware of their parents’ tender love but are not accustomed to saying ―Thank you‖. Some even find a generation gap between themselves and their parents, thus feeling reluctant to express their affection for their parents。
In my opinion, extending thankfulness to our parents is a way of respecting them and their love. We should express our feelings directly and bravely, but what’s more important is, we should do all that we can to reward them。
Fire Prevention on Campus
1. 前段时间校园火灾频发，造成生命和财产损失
2. 分析火灾发生的原因
3. 作为学生，如何预防校园火灾发生
这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章，撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失，然后说明火灾原因，最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段，主要概述；第二段，说明原因；第三段，详细论述措施。
l Fire Prevention on Campus
People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported –houses were burned down, students lost their lives,
and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, ―What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?‖
A brief survey of them reveals that human factors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students’ use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In other cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc。
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生
2. 物品被盗的原因
3. 学生如何加强防盗意识
Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts
―If you don’t want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you’d better put them on in sleep,‖ goes a popular joke among s tudents. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-paid IC cards to sunglasses, bags, and even underwear. In short, anything that worth a dime is likely to be stolen。
What makes students the easy targets? The reasons are not hard to find. But I believe of all these reasons, the lack of anti-theft alertness is the most important. For lack of alertness, the students tend to leave the doors and windows wide open during sleep at noon or at night in summer. For the same reason, they’ll also leave their bikes unlocked before a store or by a road, or forget to take away their personal stuff before they go out of the classroom to make a phone call. These acts undoubtedly have increased their exposure to the light-fingered monsters。
In order to minimize possible losses, the students must stay on guard in the first place, as awareness of the thefts around often makes a big difference. To be more specific, the students should not hide any tempting amount of cash in the dorm. Put it in the bank instead. Besides, do not leave any valuable items unattended. Take them wherever you go. In addition, it’s advisable to develop a neighbourhood watch programme with other students in the dorm and neighbouring dorms。
How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活
2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行
3. 你对网络依赖症的看法
l How Will Our Life Go on without Internet?
If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life。
Today, many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Governments publish their latest policies and decisions online for worldwide recognition. Political campaigns are often done online to gain wider public support. Companies and enterprises resort to the Internet for more business opportunities and potential customers home and abroad. Universities and researchers turn to the Internet if they’d seek internation al cooperation or funding. Common folks like us also rely on the cyber world in various ways, for communication, entertainment, banking and shopping。
True, the power of the Internet is all pervasive and its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence. Internet frauds are an everyday occurrence. In view of all this, you are advised to use the Internet with wisdom. Keep it at a safe distance and never lose yourself。
As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, the Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions。
For its convenience, the Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without it. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much so that they forget many other important matters。
As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although the Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. The Internet a bsolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: ―Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, the Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you。‖
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
1. 现在很多大学生都追求穿名牌，用名牌
2. 你对这种现象的看
University Students’ Pursuit of Famous Brands
―What perfumes are you wearing?‖ ―Aren’t your shoes Nike’s latest release?‖ ―I like the Mickey bag you bought yesterday。‖ ―I hear the Jack & Jones store is on sale this week. Do you wanna come along?‖ Don’t feel surprised if you hear them coming out of the mouth of college students. It’s quite common to hear and see college students swapping information about t he brands they like and the products they use. In fact, discussions about brand names have become one of the college students’ favourite pastimes. They learn about the latest fashion from each other, exchange tips about when and where to get the item, and buy it at their earliest convenience. ―Keeping up with the Joneses‖ is their conviction –―If the Joneses have it, how could I have not?‖
About this current mindset of the college students, many people may hasten to show their disapproval. They’ll probably take it to be a reflection of the students’ vanity and superficiality. And they may lecture them on the virtue of being thrifty。
However, I beg to differ. For one thing, name-brand products are usually quality products. As such, they are something beaut iful, endurable, and reliable. ―The love of beauty is common to all,‖ goes the proverb; therefore, there’s nothing to blame about the pursuit of famous brands. For the other, college students are old enough to make their own decisions. Likewise, they must abide by the consequences if they make an ill-advised one. If they let their pursuit of brands eat into their budget for other more important issues, they should be able to correct their mistakes and keep everything in moderation. So this becomes no other than a good chance to learn management, isn’t it?
Knowledge and Diploma
1. 目前社会上存在这样一种说法：文凭越高越吃香
2.而有些人则认为文凭不等于知识
3.你的观
l Knowledge and Diploma
It is generally believed that a high diploma guarantees a promising future. Some people identify high diplomas with profound knowledge and exceptional competence. Companies also tend to emphasize the academic achievement of a job candidate. Like it or not, there does exist a social reality – the higher diplomas one gets, the more popular he becomes。
On the contrary, other people claim that a high diploma doesn’t automatically translate into knowledge. A diploma, in their eyes, is only the acknowledgment of one’s educational experience rather than a guarantee of one’s ability. Therefore, we can never measure the depth of one’s knowledge by the grade of one’s diploma. Besides, many knowledgeable people don’t have a high diploma. Take Bill Gates for example. His dropping out of college cannot deny the fact that he is one of the world’s most lear ned men。
So I must say no one should ever equate a diploma with knowledge, because a diploma is nothing but a proof of a short-term study while genuine knowledge needs one’s lifelong devotion。
It’s Time to Stop Software Piracy
China has often been criticized for the rampant practice of software piracy. Take a look around. We operate on pirated Windows systems, defend PC security with pirated Kaspersky anti-virus programmes, process files with pirated Microsoft Office, draft 3D designs with pirated AutoCAD, refine pictures with pirated Adobe Photoshop, and study English with pirated Kingsoft’s electronic dictionaries and translators. It’s no exaggeration that pirated software is everywhere。
The logic behind the phenomenon is simple and clear: if a pirated copy is available for just a tiny fraction of the normal price, not to speak of many of the free downloads online, who would pay for an authentic copy? Cheaper prices aside, easy access is another important factor. With such a large gathering of pirated upgrades around, who would bother to spend time and money searching the stores for an authorized yet outdated version?
Despite these apparent benefits, the practice of software piracy should be banned, because it represents unfair competition and by natur e it’s a no-win situation. But how? Two approaches are to be taken at the same time: Technically, software developers should enhance their antipiracy engineering, so that cracking the software should be virtually impossible. And legally, the government should also tighten its antipiracy laws and toughen up the penalties, so that violations should be costly。
Effects of Financial Crisis on College Students
Since the financial crisis swept the world, the global economy has sunk into a severe recession. It’s ha rd to get through a day without hearing or reading news about the devastating effects of the crisis: A world of companies go bankrupt, millions of employees are laid off, high-return investment bubbles burst, and huge sums of loans can never be retrieved. Its impact on our daily life can be felt in all walks of life。
College students inevitably fall victim to this pervasive slump as well. On top of that, internships and job vacancies are reduced to the minimum as companies keep shrinking. New graduates find themselves hard to get a job, not to speak of a satisfactory one. What comes next? Poor students will be hard-pressed if they find student loans unavailable any more. As a result, some even cannot afford to continue their studies. Lastly, more students are probably out there anxiously looking for part-time jobs now that they have to help cover their expenses in this gloomy economy. Their innocence and eagerness might be taken advantage of by some malicious businesspeople, or even criminal gang。
In response to these threats, we students must act promptly and wisely. Since we definitely will be facing a competitive job market, it’s crucial that we submit high quality resumes. Therefore, we must commit more to our professional studies. Even do better, master more relevant job skills as a double security. Furthermore, apply for scholarships and grants, as these are still available and we don’t have to pay them back. As for the safety issues, trust our instinct –there’s no free lunch in this world. Anything that promises quick returns without much work is a sure
trap. Stay alert and protect ourselves。
Should parents send their kids to art classes?
A child’s world is supposed to be fresh and new and beautiful, full of wonder and excitement. Unfortunately, this is not the case for some kids, especially for those born and bred in cities --- their joys are dimmed and even lost because a majority of them are forced to attend various art classes。
Some claim that it is beneficial for children’s development. T hey might have their reasons because most parents are convinced that their kids are gifted gifts from the god. They presume that the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. Even if their children fail to become another child prodigy like Lang Lang or Li Yundi, the interests in arts, say, in music, cultivated in childhood will be of great value in their whole life。
In spite of the possible benefits mentioned, I, like others, am strongly against it. The major harm is that it might deprive children of their pleasure to play after school. Faced with competition and contest for better universities, most children are buried in piles of homework. Forcing them to art classes will leave them less time to enjoy the beauty of the nature or to find their talent in things they are really interested in。
To sum up, childhood is a time for children to play as they wish. Rather than cramming knowledge, it is more important to pave the way for their desire to know than to put them on a diet of facts they are not ready to assimilate。
高中英语作文80词以上带翻译 下面为大家搜集整理有关高中的优秀英语作文，希望可以帮助到大家!高中英语作文：Can Exercise Affects StudyPeople always say to students that their main duty is to study and they should not spend time on other things except for study. However, most boys are born to love exercise, especially ball exercises. Thus, they are always blamed to spend time on playing balls, instead of spending all time on study. In my opinion, the idea is wrong. Proper exercise is good for study. Exercise can help students relax their mind and body. After a long time study, they need it very much. After relaxing, they can have a good state to study, which will improve their study efficiency. Besides, students always can sleep better after exercise. If they sleep well, they can have more energy on study. It promotes study. But spending too much time on exercise may have bad influence on study.人们总是对学生们说他们的主要任务是学习，除了学习不应该把时间用在别的地方。 然而，大部分男孩子都是天生爱运动，尤其是球类运动。 因此，他们经常会被责备把时间花在打球上而不是把所有时间都放在学习上。 在我看来，这个想法是错误的。 恰当的运动是有助于学习的。 运动可以帮助学生放松身心。
20篇优秀英语满分范文 1、How to be a good learner? 【题目】 为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。 【优秀满分范文】 How to be a good learner? As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning. We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is impor tant, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. I think all these above will be helpful to us. 2、My English Study 【题目】 亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。
There are some photos on the wall. They’re very beautiful. In the middle of the room, there is my bed. It’s not so big, but it’s very comfortable. Every night, I lay on the bed and have a good dream. On the right of the bed, there is my desk and chair. They’re in front of the window. My computer is on the desk. There is a lamp on the desk, too. I can do my homework here and play computer games. My bookshelf is on the left of the bed. There are a lot of storybooks and picture books in the shelf. I like them very much. Not everyone has a bedroom. I’m very lucky, because I have a very beautiful bedroom. I’ll try my best to keep it clean and tidy. 1. Our School Our school is in the west of the city. It is very big with a tall teaching building. There are thirty classrooms, a modern library, a dinning hall and a gym. There is a big playground where we often have sports. There are lots of trees and flowers beside the playground. There are more than five hundred students and teachers in our school and we all work hard. Our school is so beautiful that we all like it very much. 2. How did you spend your summer vacation I had a busy and interesting summer vacation. I did my homework every day so I finished doing my homework ten days before the new term. I also played table tennis and basketball with my friends every day. I sometimes went movies and went to the parks with my friends. I surfed the internet, read books and watched TV every evening. I visited my grandparents and helped them with the housework, too. I helped my parents clean the room and cook meals. The most important was that my parents and I went to Hannan Island and spent a week there. 4.. A happy Day It was sunny and very hot today. I got up early and helped my parents cook breakfast. Then I washed the dishes and cleaned the room. After a short rest I did my homework in the morning. In the afternoon I went swimming in the
2017-09-01 20:19:45文/张秀秀 英语作文是英语考试必考的题目，中考英语也不例外。很多同学对于觉得英语作文十分难写，不知道如何入手。以下是初三网整理的中考英语作文范文5篇带翻译，欢迎参阅。 Everyone has their own dreams, I am the same. But my dream is not a lawyer, not a doctor, not actors, not even an industry. Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous, but this has been my pursuit! My dream is to want to have a folk life! I want it to become a beautiful painting, it is not only sharp colors, but also the colors are bleak, I do not rule out the painting is part of the black, but I will treasure these bleak colors! Not yet, how about, a colorful painting, if not bleak, add color, how can it more prominent American? Life is like painting, painting the bright red color represents life beautiful happy moments. Painting a bleak color represents life difficult, unpleasant time. You may find a flat with a beautiful road is not very good yet, but I do not think it will. If a person lives flat then what is the point? Life is only a short few decades, I want it to go Finally, Each memory is a solid. 【翻译】 每个人都有自己的梦想，我也一样。但是我的梦想不是律师，不是医生，不是演员，甚至不是一种行业！ 我的梦想也许大人们会觉得可笑，但是，这是我一直追寻的！我的梦想是想要自己有一个七彩的人生！我要它成为一幅美丽的画，它不但要有鲜明的颜色，也要有暗淡的颜色，我不排除这幅画有一部分的黑色，我反而会很珍惜这些暗淡的颜色！不是吗，试问一下，一幅色彩鲜艳的画，如果不加一点暗淡的颜色，又怎能更突出它的美呢？ 人生就象画一样，画中鲜艳的颜色就代表着人生美丽快乐的时光。画中暗淡的颜色就代表着人生遭遇困难，不愉快的时候。也许你会觉得拥有一条平坦美丽的路不是很好吗，但我并不觉得。 一个人如果一生平坦那有什么意思呢？人生只有短短几十年，我要他走到最后时，每一个回忆都事充实的！ I eat breakfast everyday, because it’s important to my health. At first, I did not like eating breakfast, but my mother forced me to eat. Every morning, my mother prepared delicious breakfast for me, such as milk, egg, bread and others. Gradually, I liked having breakfast. I feel energetic after having breakfast. Having delicious and nutrient breakfast brings me a happy day. I hope everyone can build this healthy habit
[初二英语作文80词左右]初二英语作文80词【十篇】写作是英语学习的重要内容,也是英语学习的最终目标。下面为你的初二80词【十篇】,希望对你有帮助! 【篇一】初二80词英语作文：聘外教的利弊 Hiring a foreign teacher is good for students, they can have aess to the native aent, when students speak English to foreigners, they can get use to the foreign aent. Compared to the Chinese teacher, foreign teacher brings students confident. Hiring a foreign also can let the students have aess to the foreign culture, foreign teacher always show students their country’s culture to make the student understand the English better. Foreign teacher is good for student’s learning. 【篇二】初二80词英语作文：my dream In my mind, everyone shall have his own dream. I think that having a dream means that we have an idea, and then we
01 The Language of Music A painter hangs his or her finished pictures on a wall, and everyone can see it. A composer writes a work, but no one can hear it until it is performed. Professional singers and players have great responsibilities, for the composer is utterly dependent on them. A student of music needs as long and as arduous a training to become a performer as a medical student needs to become a doctor. Most training is concerned with technique, for musicians have to have the muscular proficiency of an athlete or a ballet dancer. Singers practice breathing every day, as their vocal chords would be inadequate without controlled muscular support. String players practice moving the fingers of the left hand up and down, while drawing the bow to and fro with the right arm-two entirely different movements. Singers and instruments have to be able to get every note perfectly in tune. Pianists are spared this particular anxiety, for the notes are already there, waiting for them, and it is the piano tuner’s responsibility to tune the instrument for them. But they have their own difficulties; the hammers that hit the string have to be coaxed not to sound like percussion, and each overlapping tone has to sound clear. This problem of getting clear texture is one that confronts student conductors: they have to learn to know every note of the music and how it should sound, and they have to aim at controlling these sounds with fanatical but selfless authority. Technique is of no use unless it is combined with musical knowledge and understanding. Great artists are those who are so thoroughly at home in the language of music that they can enjoy performing works written in any century. 02 Schooling and Education It is commonly believed in United States that school is where people go to get an education. Nevertheless, it has been said that today children interrupt their education to go to school. The distinction between schooling and education implied by this remark is important. Education is much more open-ended and all-inclusive than schooling. Education knows no bounds. It can take place anywhere, whether in the shower or in the job, whether in a kitchen or on a tractor. It includes both the formal learning that takes place in schools and the whole universe of informal learning. The agents of education can range from a revered grandparent to the people debating politics on the radio, from a child to a distinguished scientist. Whereas schooling has a certain predictability, education quite often produces surprises. A chance conversation with a stranger may lead a person to discover how little is known of other religions. People are engaged in education from infancy on. Education, then, is a very broad, inclusive term. It is a lifelong process, a process that starts long before the start of school, and one that
必修一20篇英语作文 作文1 假设你是吴东 , 你在网上认识了一个美国朋友 Jack, 他来信向你诉说交朋友的烦恼 , 他要求你就friendship 这个话题发表你的观点和看法并给他一些建议。于是你根据你所了解的情况 , 给他回了一封e-mail 。 [ 写作内容 ] 1. 友谊是每个人生活中最重要的事情之一 , 没有朋友 , 人会孤独的 ; 2. 多与朋友交流 , 让朋友知道你想与他交朋友以及你对朋友和友谊的理解 ; 3. 真正的朋友应该同甘共苦 ; 4. 邀请朋友参加一些活动如游泳、球赛等 , 赢得真正的友谊。 Dear Jack, I'm glad to have received your e-mail but I am sorry you are having some trouble in making friends. In my opinion,friendship is one of the most important things in everyone's life because without friends we will suffer loneliness. If you would like to take my advice, you'll win real friendship. First, why not communicate with your friend when possible and tell him/her what you think about friends and friendship and let him/her know that you want to make friends with him/her. Secondly, you should learn to share your happiness and sorrow with your friends. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you like to invite him/her to join in some activities such as swimming and ball games, which can make you learn to appreciate your friends and cherish your friendship. I hope you will find these opinions and ideas useful. Best wishes! Yours, Wu Dong 作文2 假设你是李华 , 你所在学校拟在下周开一个 " 如何高效地学习英语 " 的讲座。请你根据以下要点给史密斯教授写一封信 , 邀请他给学生做这次讲座。信的内容包括 : 讲座目的 : 让学生了解英语学习策略 ; 讲座内容 : 如何高效学习英语 , 如何提高学习英语的兴趣 , 如何自主学习 ; 讲座时间 : 1 小时 30 分钟左右。 参考词汇 : 策略 strategy Dear Professor Smith, Our school is planning to have a lecture on how to learn English effectively for middle school students next week and I'm writing to ask you to come and give a talk on English learning strategies. It will help us understand how to learn English in effective ways and also increase our interest in learning it, thus making us learn it actively. Do you think one and a half hours will be enough for such a lecture? Please let me know as soon as possible so that I can make arrangements. Looking forward to seeing you and enjoying the lecture. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua
带翻译高一英语作文范文 In everybody’s eyes, I am a good girl, because I make the good marks in the exams and help my parents to do things. Unlike other students, who will go against their parents, I follow my parents’words. I don’t think that to do something goes against the adults is the wise choice, but I do want to do something new. Recently, I want to cut my hair and make the short style. My mother doesnt agree with me, because she thinks a girl should have the long hair. This time, I insist on my idea. Finally, she supports me. Trying something new makes me feel happy and be myself. The short hair makes me look like a cool boy and I like this style. My friends admire me to have the courage to change my image.在大家眼中，我就是一个好女孩，因为我考试成绩好，还帮助父母做事。不像其他学生，会和父母作对，我很听父母的话。我认为做一些违背大人们的事情是不明智的选择，但我想做一些创新。最近，我想把我的头发剪了，留短发。我妈妈不同意我的做法，因为她认为一个女孩就应该留长头发。这一次，我坚持我的想法。最后，她支持了我。尝试新事物让我感到预约，做我自己。短发使我看起来像一个很酷的男孩，但是我喜欢这种风格。我的朋友都羡慕我有勇气去改变自己的形象。 高一英语作文范文（二）
这篇文章小编给大家整理了一些中考英语满分作文，希望同学们通过借鉴优秀的作文来提高自己的写作水平。 低碳生活 My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution. Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water. I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful. 我的梦想 Everyone has his or her own secret dream. I wonder why I am gonna tell you my secret dream. No way! Heheh... I am gonna make up one secret dream for you. Any way, you will not copy everything I have written down. I am sure that you will get good ideas about writing it up. When I was much younger, I had some secret dreams. One of mine was about becoming a super hero to save the world. Hehe. I hope it doesn't sound funny to you. Another secret dream of mine was about being the most handsome and intelligent man in the world. Yeh, I know that sounds unrealistic. After all, that was a bubble dream only. I had a lot more secret dreams when I was a little boy. Some of them came true! 我们需要爱 1
推荐背诵的高考英语范文30篇 写人： 1．Our English Teacher Our English teacher, Ms Huang, came to our school in 1970. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class, but She is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak and read more English. She often says, "Practice makes perfect." She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us to put on short English plays. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds. 2．My English Teacher Our English teacher, Mr. Wang, is a strongly built thirty-year-old man, who is often simply dressed. He has been teaching us English ever since he graduated from the English Department, Beijing Normal University in 1993. He devotes all his time and energy to teaching, often working late into the night preparing his lessons. He is capable of making his lessons lively and interesting, and all of us like his lessons. He is very strict with us but he shows us great concern. He offers us help whenever we need it. We all consider him not only as our good teacher but also as our close friend. We all respect and love him. B．写物： 3．Our school Our school is located at the centre of Beijing, It is one of the largest schools in the city with over 2,000 students and about 200 teachers. Our school subjects include politics, Chinese, English, maths, history, geography, physics, chemistry and biology and so on. Most of us pay great attention to the study of English, Chinese and maths because they are very important subjects in the university entrance exam. We take special interest in English. We have spent much time on it, but we still find it difficult to learn the language well. In the afternoon when class is over, we enjoy staying at school for about one hour for some physical exercises before leaving for home. 4．My Home Village My home village is a small one. It's in Yuxian county of Shanxi Province. Small as it is, it's very beautiful. There are many hills around my home village and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring, we can fly kites which are made by ourselves on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high. In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green, too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow with sugar. In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean, the water is sweet and the people are very friendly. I love my hometown!
1 我对英语的看法(My views on English) 2 3 I often hear some students say English is difficult, and it gives 4 them a headache. So they can’t learn it well. But English is very easy 5 for me. I’m good at it. I’m very glad to tell you something about how 6 I study English. 7 First, I think an interest in English is very important. 8 When I was in Grade One, we had a new subject — English. It was 9 fresh to me. I became interested in it, so I worked hard at it. Soon we 10 had an English exam and I got a very good mark. How happy I was! Since 11 then, I have been learning English harder and harder. Our English teacher 12 often taught us English songs, and the songs sounded nice. I often think 13 how interesting English is! 14 Second, English is another language different from our Chinese. 15 We should learn it in the following ways: Listen to the teacher carefully 16 in class, speak bravely, read aloud and have a larger and larger 17 vocabulary, and then practice again and again. And I have a good habit: 18 Whenever I have a question, I must make it clear by asking our English 19 teacher. How happy I am when I understand it! 20 Besides, I often read English stories, jokes and easy novels. From 21 these I know English is not only interesting, but also useful. They help 22 me understand a lot of things. So to do more reading is an important way 23 to learn English well.
写作技巧 一、了解高分作文的特点 要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点： 1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。 2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。 3、要点齐全，不缺要点。 4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。 5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。 6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。 7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。 8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。 9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。 10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。 二、勤积累，巧准备 要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面： 1、牢记课标词汇是基础 一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。 2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法 要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢？这就要求我们在平时的学习过程中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。 3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式 高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来？靠我们在平时学习过程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫乏？假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢？ 像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim. I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。 表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She is a girl aged 12.等等。 很显然，使用高级一点的更好。 4、加强练习，积累经验 学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。 5、充分利用作文文 很多资料书上都有作文文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。 我们怎么利用它们呢？首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到哪些词或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。 另外，背一些文也是很有必要的。 6、背诵一些谚语和警句 作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。 三、精心审题，沉着写初稿 很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。 其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢？