14分漂漂亮亮（本档作文句子结构、短语搭配、词语变换佳。内容清晰，上下文衔接自然，无严重错误。因用词导致表达模糊，而有看不懂的句子不能打14分）
This picture is actually a mirror of the growing impact the internet has on people’s process of learning. There;s no denying that the internet does make learning more convenient. However, we shouldn’t overlook the fact that this easy access to obtain information can make people think that education is no longer necessary and that one can be equally well-educated just using the internet.
Those holding this view tend to misunderstand the real sense of education, which lies in the following. Firstly, obtaining information doesn’t necessarily lead to obtaining truth. We find the internet convenient and useful because we are well-educated and capable of telling right from wrong. We should owe this capability to education. Secondly, through education one learns not only to obtain truth, but to think. Thinking makes us innovative and creative. Furthermore, it is thinking that helps us learn about morality. From my point of view, creativity and morality are what the society needs to grow healthier.
To conclude, education doesn’t simply mean obtaining information. Education cen never be replaced by internet learning.
11分清清爽爽（偶尔有中式表达）
Nowadays, we can hardly live a single day without internet, for we can search almost all the information on the internet. Just as the picture shows, some students even think that learning how to use internet is equal to receiving all the education he needs.
However, education will never simply mean learning to obtain information. There are several reasons for it. Firstly, education includes not only gaining more knowledge but also improving comprehensive skills. Secondly, information provided on the internet consists of positive and negative parts, and it’s difficult for you to make sure what you absorbed is useful. What’s more, education can be compared to a building while information makes the basis, necessary but
uncomplete. We should absorb more things from our daily life and practical experience.
So it’s natural for us to draw a conclusion that learning to obtain information is not only one part of education. We’d better use internet searching for information as a tool to gain better education rather than fully depend on it.
8分（马马虎虎，对的多，错的少，显性错误多，如语法，搭配，用词等，错误约占1/3）
From this picture, we can know more and more people begin to using internet to learning. Some people hold a mind that once i learn how to use internet, isn’t that all the education i really need? For this we can find that internet have a influence to our life, education and job. People have a few patience to learning because they can know everything from the internet.
But i firmly believe that we must learn in school even the internet is fast and good. I trust that people can get a amount of information in the internet, in other words, education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. Some reasons about it. Firstly, students can learn how to get along with strangers when they learning in school. It can help them grow health. The more important is students can communication with their friends and can learn how to cooperation and compitetion.
From these reasons, we can know education doesn’t mean learning to obtain information .
5分稀里糊涂，隔三差五有英式表达，错的比对的多,部分句子需要猜，看不懂说什么
With the development of the internet, it is growing more and more people dely on it. Just like this picture, some students, teachers, are educated to how to obtain information. There is no doubt for learning on the internet help us to share our success with each other. But if we use most of our time on the internet, not only can it cause us want not learning, but also it isn’t good for education, especially for students. Some students even use to obtain information or answer when take an examination.
To sum up, I cling to believe that education doesn’t simply mean learning to obtain information. You think, where is the information come from? If we only learn how to obtain, it is bad for development and the information can’t grow. Once you know how to use Google or Baidu, maybe you will think the teacher have just taught you are not available. So it I bad for education from teacher.
2分一塌糊涂，单词的堆砌，基本上没有正确的句子。
Now, the more science the more quickly, people start learning how to use internet. That is know they need. But there were traditional education, student think “isn’t that all the education I really need?” I want to talking in myself thinking.
Traditional education can know knowledge of student. But tradition education learn in hige, example math, Chinese, ede. I can’t chose like knowledge. Many student think that all education I not need.
Some people of them is not so like learning on internet. We study at can help us more feel reel to learn. But, we can relax know many knowledge in the internet. Now there are phone hige power, can quickly know news. We have perblem in the learn that use Google. This is my opinion.
Are you opinion?