Writing Handout: 9
Vocabulary
Patient hospital medicine doctor cure junkfood
fitter overweight exercise illness live
absence suffer exist healthcare luxury
expensive cosmetic surgery
Practice 2:Complete the texts with the words from the box.
Nowadays, many children are (1) ....................... .There are many reasons for this; somepeople blame the amount of (2).......................that is available, and others claim it isbecause children don't get enough (3) ........................ The reality is that childhood obesityis probably a combination of both poor diet and lack of exercise.
Doctors have been trying to find a (4).......................for the common cold for manyyears. A cold, which is a relatively harmless (5)....................... can occur at any time ofthe year and may mean that a person cannot work for up to a week. There are many(6) .......................for treating colds. However, they cannot cure them.
It is often claimed that exercise keeps people (7).......................and healthier, and a recentstudy has shown that this is true. People who do at least 40 minutes of exercise a week,for example jogging or swimming, are less likely to become (8) ....................... and aremore likely to (9)....................... to old age.
Practice 3: Complete the sentences with phrases a-d. Then underline all the result clauses.
1.If doctors find a cure for the common cold,
2.....................................................................if they eat too much junk food.
3.If people exercise every day ..........................
4...........................................................................if hospitals aren't free.
a Children might become overweight
b people will have fewer absences from work
c they may live longer
d Peopl
e may suffer
Practice 4: Use these notes to write full sentences with the second conditional. Keep the information inthe order given.
1.Doctors receive better training. Patient care improve.
2.Junk food not exist. People not be overweight.
3.People live longer. All diseases cured.
4.Hospitals free. More people live longer.
5.No doctors. A lot more illness.
Part 2: Skill development
Practice 2.1: Read the essay paragraph and underline the cause and effect sentences. Then label eachcause (C) and each effect (E).
A country which has free healthcare has a healthier population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Healthcare should be free in every country because it helps improve the health of thepopulation. Some things such as computers, cars or holidays are luxuries which peopleshould pay for themselves, but healthcare is a necessity not a luxury. (C) If people do nothave access to free healthcare. (E) minor health problems may become much worse.Also, the cost of healthcare should not stop people from going to the doctor. If poor peoplehave to pay for healthcare, they might not visit the doctor when they are ill. If healthcarebecomes more expensive, there may be some negative effects in the future. For example,if only rich people can afford healthcare, they may be much healthier and may live longerthan poor people. The result of this could be an unequal and divided society.
Practice 2.2: Complete another paragraph from the same essay using the phrases from the box.
However, free healthcare does not always result in a healthy population. For example, ifpeople choose to have an unhealthy lifestyle,
(1) .......................................................................Some people believe that
(2).........................................................................., they should notreceive free healthcare. In addition, healthcare comes in many forms and some of theseforms of healthcare may not be essential. Most doctors think that if people want cosmeticsurgery just to improve their appearance, (3)...........................................................................However, doctors think that the government should pay for some forms of cosmeticsurgery.
Practice 2.3:You can use other structures to describe causes and effects. Notice the order of the causesand effects and the blue words in the sentences below.
effect cause
Many people die from smoking due to lung damage and diseases such as cancer.
cause effect
Due to lung damage and diseases such as cancer, many people die from smoking.
effect cause
People can become fat because they eat too much bad food.
cause effect
Because people eat too much bad food, they can become fat.
Complete the sentences for the essay below using the phrases from the box, then mark each cause (C) and each effect (E).
Obesity is a common problem in many societies. What are the main causes of obesity and what are the effects?
1.People have become accustomed to junk food (C), so ..................................... .
2.Because young children spend too much time watching
television ......................................................
3.Many people have office jobs which do not involve any physical activity. As a
result,they......................................................
4.Because...................................................................children do not know how to cook for
themselves.
5.Due to the availability of cheap fast food, ...............
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4f990565.html,ernments earn a lot of money from fast-food
companiesbecause........................................................
their parents do not teach them they do not eat enough vegetables.
aren't active enough. people do not shop for fresh food,
they do not get enough exercise, they tax them heavily.
Practice 2.4: Underline three mistakes with linking words in this text.
Exercise is an important part of a healthy life. If people don't exercise, they will becomeunhealthy. Nowadays, many people don't get enough exercise due to because they havejobs where they sit down all day. Additionally, life is easier. In the old days, people had towash clothes by hand or make their own bread. Result, they were more active in their lives.Also, people didn't have cars in the old days, because they had to walk everywhere. Thismeant that people were active in their daily life. Now, due cars and machines which makelife easier, people don't do as much. As a result, they become more unfit.
Practice 2.5: Read the essay title, then match the causes to the effects in the table. Write the headings‘Causes’ and ‘Effects’ in the correct places.
Modern technology is a threat to the health of people all over the world. What are the maineffects of modern technology on our health?
1.Children spend too much time sittingplaying video games.
https://www.doczj.com/doc/4f990565.html,ing social media is a common hobbyfor many people nowadays.
3.Ready meals are easy to buy.
4.Office jobs involve too much timeworking with computers.
5.People in the street listen to musicthrough headphones.
a)People can develop wrist problems orback pain.
b)They cannot hear cars coming and mayget run over.
c)They do not move enough so theybecome overweight.
d)People don't cook fresh food any more.
e)Face-to-face activities such as sports areless popular.
Practice 2.6: Use some of the causes and effects from the table above to write a paragraph for the sameessay. Write approximately 60-80 words. Start your paragraph like this:
Many health problems today may be caused by modern technology. For example……………
Part 3: Exam practice
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
Governments should introduce healthcare which prevents illness rather than cures it. Howfar do you agree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledgeor experience.
Write at least 250 words.
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“Walked”告诉我们Marie做了什么。 Louis thought about the math problem. Louis 思考数学题。 Thought tells us what Louis was doing (mentally). “Thought”告诉我们Louis在想什么。 下面是几个包含行为动词的例句： 行为动词被标注了下划线。 1) Sam and Eric ride the bus to school each morning. Sam 和Eric每天早晨坐公交车去学校。 2) Jan wants a horse for her birthday. Jan过生日想要一匹马。 3) Ian reads a chapter in his book each night. Ian 每晚读完书的一个章节。 4) Do you think it will rain today? 你觉得今天会下雨吗? 5) I believe in fairies and unicorns. 我相信有精灵和独角兽。 6) Will you help me with my homework? 你可以帮我完成家庭作业吗? 7) Please call your mom.
雅思写作技巧-大作文开头段经典套句 A proverb says："..." 有句谚语说：“...” As the proverb says："..." 如谚语说：“...” Everybody knows that... 每个人都知道... Generally speaking... 一般说来... It can be easily proved that... 很容易证明... It goes without saying that... 不用说... It is quite clear that...because... 很明显...,因为... It is often said that... 人们常说... Many people often ask this question："...?" 很多人常问这个问题：“...?” It is ture that... ...是真实的 No one can deny that... 谁也不能否认... One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is... 与上述同样重要的一件事是... The chief reason why... 为什么...的主要原因是... We must recognize that... 我们必须承认... There is no doubt that... 无疑... I'm of the opinion that... 我认为... In my point of view... 在我看来...
This can be expressed as follows... 这能够从以下几点说明... The reasons are presented below... 原因例举如下... To take... for an example... 以...为例... Therefore we should realize that... 所以我们应该了解... We have reasons to believe that... 我们有理由相信... Now that we know that... 既然我们知道... What is more serious is that... 更严重的是... Anyway,I agree with the idea of... 不管怎样，我同意... I side with the latter opinion... 我同意后一个观点... In a word... 总来说之... In conclusion... 由此得出结论... On account of this we can find that... 由此我们能够知道... The result is depend on... 结果视...而定 Therefore,the findings reveal the following information... 所以，这些发现揭示了以下信息... Thus,this is the reason why we must... 所以，这就是我们为 什么必须... To sum up... 总来说之...
定语从句写作练习 1 许多人谈论的一个最严重的问题集中在缺乏足够的居住空间（center on） 2 任何忽视这一点的政府都将付出巨大的代价（be blind to） 3 对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说，找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的，正如那句老话：活到老学到老（just as an old saying goes） 4 同时仍然有许多人持有传统的观点认为全日制学校对孩子的学习发挥着极其重要的作用（live under the traditional ideas） 5 同时，拥有私家轿车的数量在这几年快速地增加 6 违反交通规则的人应该受到惩罚（violate traffic regulations） 7 夏天很闷热，这就是我不喜欢它的原因（sultry） 8 最后一点，森林是人类可以接近自然的地方，如果人类学会了爱护自然，就会想保存地球上所有的天然资源（get close to） 9 另一方面，那些坚持自己本国风俗习惯的人，觉得这样做让他们更加自在（follow their own customs feel more at home） 10 沉迷于网络的人经常觉得孤独，感到与外面的世界隔绝开来，变得越来越内向和自闭（indulge in isolated withdrawn ） 11 经常沉迷于电视的小孩不懂得区分现实和虚幻（reality fantasy）
12 沉迷于上网的孩子往往比较内向，不善交际，甚至对人冷漠（unsociable indifferent） 13 死刑是个野蛮的做法，应该从现代社会中清除（death penalty cruel and barbaric do away with） 14 那些反对强制退休制度的人持有以下理由（mandatory retirement） 15 取得巨大成功的人，毫无例外，都是善于利用零碎时间的人（with no exception utilize their own odd moments wisely） 16 我喜欢到气候宜人的地方生活（agreeable） 17 博物馆是游客体验当地文化和了解当地历史的好地方 18 有些家长把小孩送到私立学校去学习，那里孩子们能够享有更好的教学质量和更好的教学设施（teaching facilities teaching quality） 19 许多政府禁止克隆的原因是因为它不符合伦理道德（ban human cloning） 20 这就是许多人强烈反对城市禁养宠物的原因（the ban on pets）
雅思大作文开头段模板 第一大模板法：①引题+ ②一方观点+另一方观点+ ③我方观点 ①引题：九大引题方法 一：①在谈到……时，人们对于这个充满争议的话题所持的观点各不相同。 ①When talking about （/it comes to /it refers to) _____, people’s opinions are divergent on such a controversial 有争议的issue. 有分歧的 二：①最近经常辩论的一个问题是…… ①A much debated issue these days is whether …… ①There is a public (/general) debate (/discussion/ controversy) today (/nowadays) on (/about/ over/ as to) the problem (/issue) of …… 三：①最近……的问题已经引起了人们广泛的争议。 ①Recently the problem（/issue）of _____ + has drawn(/aroused) public (/worldwide) attention. + has caused(/aroused) wide (/general/ considerable/ international) concern. + has arisen(/loomed up/ cropped up) as controversial(/as noteworthy/ more distinctly for settlement). 四：①近来……的问题已经广为天下人所知。 ①Recently the issue(/problem) of ……has been in the limelight (/brought into focus/ brought to public attention/ posed among the general public). 在公众的注意之下 五：①在过去的……年里，很多城市面临了……的严重问题。 ①In recent(/ the past ……) years, many cities (/nations/ people) have been faced with (/plagued with/ troubled with/ experienced/ witnessed/ undergone) the(/a/an) serious problem of(/acute shortage of/ alarming increase in) …… 六：①如今我们国家面临的最为紧迫的任务之一是…… ①One of the burning(/pressing/interesting) problems facing (/confronting/ troubling) our nation (/society/ world/ community) today is that …… 七：①现在很多人谈论的最热门的话题之一是…… ①One of the biggest issues（/ hottest topics/ most popular things/ most serious problems）many people talk (/complain) about now is …… 八：①随着…… ①With the rapid(/marked/ amazing) development(/increase/improvement/expansion/growth/ decline) of __, ①With the general(/growing/ common) recognition (/realization/ acknowledgment) of _____, ①With the general (/growing/ common) commitment (/devotion/ dedication) to_____, ①With the general(/growing/ common) interest in(/concern over/ enthusiasm for)_____, ①With _____ playing an increasingly big role in _____, a growing number of _____. ①With _____ attaching much importance to _____, an increasing number of _____. 九：①如今有一种……趋势。 ①Nowadays(Currently/ Recently), there is a growing (/ unhealthy) tendency to (/in/ that) …… ②一方观点+ 另一方观点：两大表述方法 一：②一些人认为……，另一些人认为……。
雅思基础写作题12则 雅思基础写作题12则 1. You are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. One day you find something wrong with your accommodation. So you write a letter to the House Officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right. 2. It is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important thing to do. What‘s you opinion? Do you agree or disagree with it? 3. writing to an English speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why. 4. Participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development. 5. You have left college. But you didn‘t say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a
英文写作基础知识 I 英语的句子成分 1. 主语 1）父母应该为年轻人提供机会让他们锻炼自己的能力和天赋。 2) 对于它们，我们既不能过高估计也不能否认其存在。 3) 吸烟只是一种个人爱好和娱乐。 4) 很难有定论。 5) 很明显，穿校服会使得校园生活变得乏味单调 在过去的几年中，随着经济的迅速发展，越来越多的父母在把孩子送到国外学习。 大学毕业生的就业形势越来越不乐观。 毫无疑问，不同人甚至不同的大学都会对此有不同观点。 2. 谓语 1）他们坚持认为审查制度应当废止。 2）孩子应当靠自己的努力获取成功。 3）广告增加了商品的成本。 4）换句话说，电脑影响了人们的日常生活，对人们有害。 5）当前，越来越多的人同意吸烟是一种不健康的嗜好，等同于自杀。 大学中的教师教授拥有丰富的专业知识和丰富的教学经验，会教给学生新的知识并引导他们解决现实中的问题。 3. 表语 1）审查制度是对言论自由的一种违犯。 2）放养涂在这些动物的方法经常是野蛮残忍的。 3）谈恋爱耗费时间，经常会使学生偏离他们的主要任务---学习。 4）我们所需要做的是告诉孩子如何正确的解决这些问题。 5）他们所强调的是那些正式的考试对不利于培养学生的创造力。 大学毕业生自身也对这种局面负有责任。 由于不同的习惯和不同的价值观，人们在和陌生人同住时会觉得不自在。 4. 宾语
1）垃圾食品对人的健康有害。 2）你甚至开始把工作带回家做并且一直工作到凌晨 3）研究表明吸烟和肺癌、心脏病等严重疾病之间存在着必然联系。 4）它给我们带来了许多欢乐和乐趣。 5. 定语 1）很难有定论。 2）近年来，因特网以极快的的速度越来越受欢迎。 3）资金不足的人们通常正确确定优先考虑的事情：他们在买奢侈品之前首先买必需品。4）那些强烈反对这种做法的人说这违犯人工作的基本权利。 6. 状语 1）户外活动能极大促进我们的健康。 2）根据法律，广告必须是完全真实的健康的。 3）为了赶走孤独和消磨时光，他们可以培养其它的爱好，比如养花、集邮和学画画。 4）远离家庭生活，人要忍受孤独和思乡。 5）我还是喜欢和朋友一起旅行，因为我认为在旅行中最重要的是得到快乐和休息。 他们完全沉溺于这些事，完全忽略了他们的学习。 7. 同位语 1）购物，这个每天生活中必须的活动，在城市里更方便。 2）爱情能将学生从学习，学生的主要工作中分开。 3）但是，这种解决办法的缺点是许多农业和居住用地会难以避免的被越来越多的公路占据。 8. 补语 1）我们认为强制服兵役是对人权的违犯。 2）克隆技术会使得人类人口过剩，变得可替代甚至灭绝。 3）我发现就业形势令人沮丧（不乐观）。 II 英语句子的基本结构 1. S + V 1）对于这个正在讨论中的问题人们看法不一。 2）全球化时代已经来临。 在人类教育很长的发展过程中，在每个学习领域都发生了巨大变化。
雅思作文常见开头结尾形式 注：如下方式，雅思写作针对性强，且略带模板印迹，同学应在充分理解结构的基础上，用上面的方法去灵活写作 雅思大作文第一段一定要包括这样三个基本要素：“背景句”，“话题”和“观点”。这三个部分是完整统一的，一定不能忽略。 第一，背景句：背景句主要起到引题的作用，但要紧密联系题目中的话题。其方法是围绕题干中的关键词或核心词展开。 背景句的写作方法： 1 联系社会背景：任何一个话题肯定都于一定的社会发展息息相关，所以联系关键词的社会背景是一种最简单、最常用的方法。具体可以有以下5种句式： 1) The 21st century witnesses --- 2) With the development of science and technology,--- 3) In modern society, --- 4) It is quite common these days that --- 5) Recently,--- 例如：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? 参考背景句： The late 20th century witnessed the boom of science and technology, which gave rise to a series of technological innovations, including the mobile phone. 或with the development of science and technology, the mobile phone is more and more available to and popular with common people. 2 重述话题：有的时候题干里是有一个背景介绍的，这时候我们只需将题目所给话题重新复述一遍即可。但切忌原样照搬照抄，不过可以将原文中的词汇和句式进行同义转换。转换句型可以有以下三种． 1) it is generally believed that --- 2) it is said that--- 3) it is reported that--- 例如：Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it. 参考背景句： It is generally believed that individuals are confronted with psychological and physical stress coming from work. 3解释中心词: 即将中心词进行解释或展开说明。此种方法一般适合容易下定义的词比如图书馆。可以有以下三个句型： 1)It is known to all that --- 2)As is known to all, --- 3)--- is known as--- 例如：The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books and they should not waste their
雅思写作基础段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作基础段 课程周期：16小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共8次 教学目标： 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1整体介绍；task 1常用词汇及运用 第二次：雅思写作task 1常见图表介绍及相应的表达 第三次：雅思写作task 2整体介绍和常用词汇及运用 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类介绍与背景构建 第五次：雅思写作task 2常用表达运用及强化进阶 第六次：雅思写作task 1 和task 2 混合基础分场景共建 第七次：雅思写作task 1和task 2混合表达及词汇共建 第八次：雅思写作基础段总结及强化段铺垫与衔接 雅思写作强化段教学大纲 课程名称：雅思写作强化段 课程周期：12小时 课程安排：2小时 / 次；共6次 教学目标： 在进行了起步段和基础段之后，通过强化段的课程来帮助学生更深入地理解雅思写作考试。帮助学生解决备考中的关键性问题——思维发散。通过强化段的课程来提高学生在雅思写 作方面的应试能力。 教学安排： 第一次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第二次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第三次：雅思写作task 1图表分类强化 第四次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第五次：雅思写作task 2分类强化 第六次：雅思写作task 2分类强化篇二：定制雅思教学计划 雅思阅读【总学时】 24学时 教材选用 《剑桥雅思考试全真试题4-9》外语教研社 第一阶段：第一个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：基础词汇积累&定位信息，关键词的基本能力 授课内容： 1，扩充雅思基础阅读词汇。 2，学会寻找关键词，在原文中快速定位，教授雅思阅读中常见的3种题型：1heading sentence(找标题)summary(摘要填空) ture/false/not given(是非题) 再陈述与推理及true, false, not given 题的技巧。 培养学生雅思判断题需要的逻辑思维 4，教会学生读文章的步骤，利用文章中的图片图表信息做题。 模考安排：每4次课一次单科模考和分析反馈 第二阶段：第二个月（4次*2h） 教学重点：猜词与复杂句，基本题型的操练 授课内容：1，词根，词缀，词性，利用上下文猜词的能力；十大句子关系。 学会如何判断词性，句子成分，如何判断区分有用与无用的生词。 3，快速找到复杂句的重点，根据复杂句完成简单的问题；
雅思写作名词性从句翻译练习 一主语从句 1.It 开头的主语从句 我们保护野生动物是势在必行的。 人们普遍认为教育在一个国家的发展中发挥着重要的作用。 2.Whether 引导的主语从句 石油价格上升是否可以解决环境问题是一个有争议的话题。 手机给我们带来更多的危害还是好处引起了激烈的争论。 3.What 引导的主语从句 贫穷国家最需要的不是金钱，而是先进的技术和关键领域的人才。 他们所担心的是广告可能会产生的负面影响。 二宾语从句 很多人认为我们已经进入了一个丢弃式社会。（环境）
一些人认为改善公众健康的最好办法就是增加体育设施，其他一些人认为这个方法收效甚微 这篇文章将讨论为什么“幸福”很难定义以及哪些因素会影响幸福的获得。 教授在演讲中谈到了留学生可能会遇到哪些问题以及如何解决 三表语从句 常用句式 1one advantage of something is that…..…的好处主要在于? 2one disadva ntage of someth ing is that ......... 的弊端主要在于 3one cause of something is that ......... :的一个原因在于… 4列举原因的 1.2.3. One reas on of sth. is that … Another factor to be considered is that ….. The last eleme nt is that … 5解决措施的 1.2.3. One possible solutio n is that … Ano ther measure to be take n is that … The last acti on we should take is that … 在城市禁养宠物有很多原因。一个原因是它可能会危害人们的健康，另外一个原因就是会污染环境。
雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮 雅思写作除了词汇量要达到以外，还有很多提分点的哦。出guo 为雅思栏目大家带来雅思大作文开篇如何让人眼前一亮，希望对大家备考雅思有所帮助! 正所谓好的开始是成功的一半，雅思大作文的写作也一次次验证了这个道理。很多同学往往不重视雅思大作文开头段的写作，只是简单套用一些现成的模板，殊不知这样已经给考官留下“背诵模板”的印象，这样一来，不仅给后面的主体段带来了巨大压力，而且人的第一印象往往是很难改变的。大作文开头段往往要包含如下几个关键内容，即，介绍背景，引出有争议的话题，阐述对立观点和陈述作者自己的观点。无论使用还是不使用模板，这几个关键信息是一定要包含在开头段落当中的，不然云里雾里，只能是适得其反。 根据这些信息，备战过的考生们一定都熟悉下面这一套开头写作流程，首先It is quite mon these days...介绍背景，或者用The issue of ... is a plex and sensitive one.这样的句型来引出有争议话题，然后千篇一律地分别介绍对立双方观点，如Some individuals believe that..., while others hold the view that...最终用Personally, I agree with...至此，内容上完美无
瑕，但恐怕考官心中已经大大打下“模板”两个字的烙印，这无疑对于想取得6分及以上的同学最不利的事情。 例如，一道雅思写作高频题目，讨论到底大学应该教授实用性课程(如计算机和商科课程)还是传统课程(如历史和地理)。我们依然按照开头段应该包含的关键信息开始写作，但是却可以这样轻松突破：These day there is a growing tendency for college students to have difficulties in finding jobs when they graduate.(介绍背景)A large number of people hold the opinion that lack of practical knowledge, among other things, contributes to this situation. In light of this, they contend that college teachers should lay more stress on practical courses than on traditional ones. (引出有争议的话题，并阐述大多数人的观点)For my part, I am in favour of their viewpoint.(作者观点)这一段写得非常灵巧，第一句结合题目背景，介绍现如今有一种趋势，即大学毕业生很难找到工作，紧接着作者陈述有许多人认为这是由于学生缺少实用性的知识，并因此提出大学应该更多关注于教授实用性的知识，这一句将有争议话题的其中一方观点用因果链条清晰阐述。最后一句表达作者自己的立场，就是支持前面大多数人的想法。总的来看，这一段只提及了对立双方的其中一方观点，然后表达自己支持这一方观点。这就是一种对于开头段模板的超越，简单可行，只对其中一方观点清晰论
Writing Handout: 6 Vocabulary Golf television swimming gymnastics karate skating horse riding yoga tennis identify hockey cricket category activity browse especially Practice 2:It is important to use the correct verbs with hobbies and interests. Put the hobbies under the correct verbs in the table. (Some hobbies may be used with more than one verb. Practice 3: Complete the text using the present simple tense. I asked the people in my class about their hobbies and this is what I found out. Most people in the class like (1)........................tennis. Julia and Pamela (2)........................ tennis four times a week, and Peter (3).......................tennis three times a week. Over half my class (4).......................tennis every week. Brian doesn't like (5)........................ tennis. He never plays! The most popular hobby is playing computer games. Nearly everyone (6)....................... computer games. Four people (7)........................ computer games every day. Only Ellen (8)....................... not........................ computer games. She thinks they are boring. Half of my class like playing football. John and Paul (9)....................... football every day, and Arnold (10)....................... football four times a week. Two girls (11)........................ not.......................football.
雅思写作高分对词汇和语法的要求 雅思写作得高分，语法和词汇功不可没，如果你能合理的运用语法和词汇，并且文章对题，那么作文的分数不会低，下面文都国际教育小编为大家介绍一下雅思写作评分标准，看看高分作文对语法和词汇有什么要求。 雅思写作评分标准——词汇lexical resource 官方给出的7分评分标准： *uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision * uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation * may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and /or word formation 官方给出的6分评分标准： *uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task *attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy *makes some errors in spelling and /or word formation, but they do not impede communication 同六分词汇标准相比，7 分多了两个要求：flexibility (灵活性) and precision (准确性)。灵活性暗示我们在作文中要设置同意替换词[1] 。比如，第一段写了developing countries, 第二段就可以用these nations, 第三段可以用poor regions 准确性指在该题目下贴切的，核心的词汇[2] 。比如政府话题写出welffare 福利一词，环保话题写出environmental-friendly 一词。 7分和6分同时要求：要有less common lexical items, 不普通的，含义较深刻的词汇。比如undermine ( v. 逐渐破坏)代替damage; 用dilemma 代替problem。用的好不好，地道不地道，是否注意到了style( 文体) 和collocation (搭配)决定了是6还是7. 所以在写作中，词汇在准确使用的基础上，我们一定要注意设置同意替换词。在练习时我们就要不断积累同意替换词，在经常使用的单词上多想想，还可以替换什么样的词和表达方式。 雅思写作评分标准——语法grammar range and accuracy
开头常用模板 第一类：引出一个争议 1．The issue of … is of great interest to many people. 2．The topic of … is of great concern for many parents. 3．The subject of … is of great importance to many scientists. 4．The discussion about … is of great significance to both industrialized an d underdeveloped nations. 5．The question of … is a matter of much contention among the general public. 6．The problem … has been widely debated in the world of politics. 7．The inquiry into … has triggered an intense controversy in the realm of science. 第二类：驳斥对方观点 1.Although it is commonly believed that…, this is actually not the case. 2.Although it is widely accepted that…, this is simply untrue in our day-to-day experiences. 3.Although it is generally acknowledged that…, this can hardly be held true in many real-life situations. 4.Although conventional wisdom has it that…, the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that. 5.Although the received opinion is that…, the harsh realities usually turn out to be a completely different picture. 6.Although many pe ople subscribe to the belief that…, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. 7.Although most individuals are convinced that… this is actually a myth that must be exploded. 第三类：引出一种现象 1．In recent years, there has been a growing trend th at… 2．In recent years, there has been an interesting tendency that/ of… 3．In recent years, there has been a common practice of… 4．In recent years, there has been a widespread belief /phenomenon that… 5．In recent decades, there has been a popular belief that… 6．Recen t decades have seen an increased awareness of… 7．Recent decades have witnessed a major transformation in… 第四类：摆出两种观点 1．While some people think that…, others believe that… 2．While some people say that…, others feel that… 3．While some people claim that…, others argue that… 4．Whereas some people assert that…, others declare that… 5．Some people hold that…, whereas others insist that… 6．Whereas some people maintain that…, others may disagree and contend that…7．Some people hold the opinion that…, whereas others who are not so convinced
句法： 1）简单句：主流句型，主要结构会使用就可以了。 1．主谓（宾），例如： 人们在这个问题上的观点不一样。 People have different views on this question. People’s ideas vary/differ on this issue. 2．主系表，例如： 代沟是我们现在必须地面对的问题 Generation gap is a problem that we are confronted by us. Generation gap is now a problem we have to face. 环境问题是现代社会的一个严重的问题 The environmental problem is a serious problem in modern society. 该论点具有说服力 The argument is convincing. 2）并列句： and, but, or both…and…, not only…but also…, neither…nor…, either…or… 主语，谓语，宾语，状语 连接词放在动词或形容词的前面 主语+谓语+ by either doing A or doing B 主语+谓语not only in terms of A, but more importantly/seriously，in terms of B 例如： Most children are spoilt, not only in terms of care and attention, but more seriously, in terms of material ways. 很多小孩被溺爱，不但在关心和照顾方面，而且，更严重的是，在物质方面。 句子+ by either doing A or doing B 通过鼓励学生穿精心设计的校服或者引导他们参加一些能体现出团队精神的活动，学生的行为可以得到逐步的改善 Students’behaviors can be improved by either encouraging students to wear well-designed uniforms or guiding them to participate in activities which reveal the spirit of team work.