2014—2015学年高三英语二模汇编——写作
浦东新区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
父母的言传身教在孩子的成长过程中往往起到重要的作用。请结合自身的经历，描述一件印象深刻的事例，并谈谈感受
范文1： It’s widely shared that the words and behaviors of parents exert an overwhelmingly dispensable influence on children’s develoment, I can’t agree more, for my mum’s words have left a deep impression on me. In my childhood, I was addicted to the chinese chess. My grandpa’s chessing skill was very outstanding but he never helped me win. So whenever my “general” was in a dilemma, I always burst into tears. However, my mum not only didn’t relieve me, but told me patiently that success was was always left for those who were willing to take pains. The words are so powerful that it constantly reminds me of perseverance whenever and wherever I am. As a saying goes,” failure is the mother of success.” I exceedly realize the significant impact my parents’ words have on me.
范文2： It’s widely acknowledged that children naturally imitate what their parents do during the process of growth. Thanks to my mom’s kindness, I’ve learned to treat the world friendly. In the deep winter, my mom and I went out to buy things. At the corner of the street, we discovered an old beggar. Lying on the cold cement ground, he looked so helpless. Every people passing were so indifferent that they all turned blind
eyes to him. My mom removed her warm gloves and searched for a minutes. Finding several coins, she bended and carefully put them into the bowl in front of him. “On no account does anyone want to beg, throwing away his dignity, unless those who truly have no way to go”,She wore her golves again and said. Being kind to all, especially those trapped in miserable situations is what my mom taught me. Everyone may catch troubles and everyone needs inspiration and encouragement.
范文3： The parents’ actions and words can have great effects on their child. According to my experience, that is really true. When I was a 5-year-old child, one day, my father drove me to a park to see the beautiful scenery. When we arrived the parking zone, we found that it was full of different cars. We could hardly find a place to park our car. Then I found the sidewalk outside the parking zone was nearly empty and there was a Santana car without passengers in it on the sidewalk. So I asked my father to park the car on the sidewalk like the Santana car. My father refused to do so. He explained,” if we park the car on the sidewalk, I will the likely to pay for a traffic fine. Besides, parking the car on the sidewalk may bring convenience to us. But it makes the walkers unconvenient to walk. We must consider the effect to the other people, not only think for ourselves.” Then I know what was wrong with me. From this matter, I learnt to be considerate and know the importance of obey traffic laws. As you can see, the parents’ action and words may impact on their children a lot.
奉贤区
Ⅱ.Guided writing（25分）
教室是我们学生学习活动的最主要场所，简单描述你现在的教室，并发挥想象力，描述你理想中的教室。
My classroom, with 33 desks and chairs and two blackboards, is on the fifth floor. Although the noise or the bad smell can be disturbing , it’s still a good place to study in.
However, the present classroom is far from my ideal home. First of all, my ideal one should be large to hold more desks or shelves, where books and papers can be stored. And I want it to hold an entertainment corner in which to have a rest for a cup of tea or coffee. Second, there are just three oldfans and I feel very hot in summer, so I want it to be equipped with an air conditioner. Finally I wish I hope it can be a home, where joys and sorrows can be shared. This is my ideal classroom, a seemingly unrealistic but extraordinarily beautiful place.
My Ideal Classroom
I’m now studying in a bright classroom on the fifth floor, where I can have a bird’s eye view of the school. Although the loud noise after class or the bad smell in hot weather can sometimes be disturbing, it’s still a harmonious place to study in.
However, the present classroom is far from my ideal home. First of all, my ideal one should be large enough to hold more desks or shelves, where piles of books and papers can be stored. And I want there to be an entertainment corner in which to have a good rest for a cup of tea or coffee after class. Second, I want it to be equipped with anenvironment friendly air conditioner instead
of three old fans making much noise while working. And with the approach of hot summer weather, I cannot help sweating, which makes me feel embarrassed and anxious, causing my distraction from what the teachers are saying. So an energy-saving air conditioner is a must in my ideal classroom. Finally I wish I can feel at home and feel close to nature in it, surrounded by plants and flowers breathing out their sweet perfume.
This is my ideal classroom, a seemingly unrealistic but extraordinarily beautiful wonderland.
黄浦区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
近期，你就影响选择大学的考虑因素在高三学生中做了调研，结果如图所示，请
结合图表信息写一份调研报告，须包括以下内容：
1．图表产生的背景和基本内容；
2．就你个人而言，你会考虑哪些因素请列出其中你认为相对重要的两项因素，并说明原因。
下面图表是对我省某校高三学生选择高考志愿时所考虑因素的调查结果。请根据图表，用英语写一篇简要的报告，并说说你自己的观点。
注意：（1）文章的开头已经写好。（2）词数120左右。（3）可以适当发挥 Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________
答案
One possible version:
Some senior middle school graduates have different opinions on how to choose their majors and universities.
About 35% of the students insist that the choice should be based on their own interest. They say interest is the way leading to success. They think it a miserable thing to be obliged to study what they have no interest in.
About 45% of the students, however, consider it is the need of the society that matters a lot, for, they say, it will help them find the job they like best. In addition, interest can be developed and changed.
Interestingly, there are about 20% of the students who find it so difficult to make a choice that they prefer to follow the advice offered by their parents or teachers.
In my opinion, interest is the most important of all. Without interest you can’t study the subject very well and may have more difficult with your career.
虹口区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
学生会正在评选新一届学生会主席，假设你是该校的学生李青，有意参加竞
选。写一份自荐材料，材料必须包括以下内容：
1、简述个人信息及你所具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）。
2、如果当选，请你用具体事例阐述你将会为本校学生做些什么
注意：自荐材料中不得使用你所在学校和你的真实名字。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a student named Li Qing from Grade 3 Class 1, ①writing this letter to campaign for the president of the Student Union.
②From my point of view, I am the right one ③you want. I’ve been in the Student Union for two years, ④serving as a key member in the Publicity Department. Moreover, I am outgoing and capable of having effective talks with others. When in charge of the Publicity Department, I always helped the former president to organize large-scale activities. In addition, I am fond of making friends and taking new challenges, ⑤which will facilitate my future role as
a president.
⑥If given this position, I will do my utmost. ⑦On one hand, I will hold more interesting and meaningful activities, such as culture festivals, singing competitions, debates and so forth, so as to enrich campus life. ⑦On the other hand, ⑧what I will do is to call for students to protect our campus environment, ⑨for I firmly believe that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student and teacher.
I will appreciate your kindness ⑩if you choose me as the new president. And your prompt reply is warmly welcomed.
Best regards
Li Qing
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内容分析：
此作文题对考生来说并不陌生，因为2014年虹口区的二模作文“图书馆招聘一名图书管理员助理(the Assistant Librarian)，请以Simon Johnson为名写一封求职信”。也采用了该形式。除此之外，该作文与2014年普陀区二模作文“竞选学校的好班长称号(Mr./Mrs. Monitor)”与2015年静安区一模作文“写一封信给学校图书馆负责老师，自荐做课余学生图书馆员”也类似。
在审题中需思考以下问题：作为学生会主席候选人需要具备的竞选条件（能力、性格、爱好等）；以及如果当选，如何为本校学生做贡献。尤其是如何为本校学生做贡献是需要考生好好考虑的问题。
精彩亮点分析：
亮点一：首句使用非谓语做状语: writing this letter to campaign for the president of the Student Union.；
亮点二：短语:From my point of view；
亮点三：定语从句：I am the right one (that/who) you want；
亮点四：现在分词做伴随状语：serving as a key member in the Publicity Department.；
亮点五：非限制性定语从句：which will facilitate my future role as a president. 表明我爱好交朋友以及挑战自我，这有助于我未来当好学生会主席；
亮点六：过去分词做条件状语：If given this position。
亮点七：连接词：On one hand, on the other hand，使文章更有逻辑性；
亮点八：主语从句：what I will do is表明自己想法；
亮点九：原因状语从句+宾语从句：for I firmly believe that a pleasant environment is of vital importance to every student and teacher.；
亮点十：条件状语从句：if you choose me as the new president。
写作小贴士：
书信类作文是近年来高考以及一模二模常考的题型。考生需要注意格式，并积累一些好的词组与句型来抓阅卷老师的眼球，从而脱颖而出。
崇明县
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
高三学生在高考结束后将迎来很长的一个暑假，很多学生已在为这个假期制定计划。假设你是林敏，你的网友王华今年也将高中毕业，前几天他通过邮件跟你讲述了他的三个暑假计划，分别是：①参加一些学习班；②做一份兼职工作；③外出旅游。但由于时间安排的问题，只能做其中的两件事情，至于如何选择，王华犹豫不决。请你给王华回一封电子邮件，内容需包括：
比较分析王华的三个计划；
谈谈你的建议，并陈述理由。
（注：邮件中不得出现真实校名、姓名等信息。）
Dear Tom，
I am so glad to receive your email. I knew you had made three plans for the holiday, but you only have time to choose two from them. Now I am writing to give you some s uggestions.
You plan to take a course after the exam and you want to find a part-time job. More importantly, you would like to travel to some places of interest. I think it is a go od idea to take a course, because you can learn more knowledge through it. What’s m ore, I hope you can pay a visit to some scenic spots. The reason is that you can bro aden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam. As for finding a part-tim e job, it is not necessary, for you can have more chances to take a job.
Are you satisfied with it I wish you could agree with my suggestions.
【解析】
试题分析：本篇书面表达属于提纲式作文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。
4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I wish you could a gree with my suggestions.是虚拟语气。The reason is that you can broaden your horizon and relax yourself after the tough exam.这句话是表语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语plan to, would like to do ,be satisfied with, as for等。插入语what’s more，以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。
静安、青浦、宝山区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
87.下面两幅图反映的是部分城乡孩子所面临的窘境。请就此图谈谈你的想法，你的文章应包括：
●具体描述两幅图；
●简要分析造成这两种现象的原因；
●提出解决问题的建议。
（注：请勿出现真实姓名和学校）
闵行区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你校将为学生开设以下课程：野外拓展 (Outward bound training)；口才训练 (Eloquence training)；礼仪培训 (Etiquette training)；职业培训(Vocational training)。请根据你的自身特点和需求选择其中的一个课程，并简要谈谈你选择这个课程的理由。
I am so excited to learn that there will be four new training courses available for students this semester. Concerning Outward bound, Eloquence, Etiquette and Vocation, I won’t hesitate to choose Outward bound training. Not only is it because I am act ive and lively, but also that it can effectively improve physical ability, persevera nce, wisdom, communication and other aspects of the quality.
First and foremost, students’ psychological quality education is more and more high ly valued by the community, because this issue has become a prominent factor affecti ng health and stability of talent. Most projects of Outward Bound are designed to im prove the quality of people’s psychology, to improve self-control ability of studen ts to continually overcome the psychological fear, to challenge themselves, overcome themselves and shape the good will quality of calm, resolute, indomitable.
In addition, Outward Bound can cultivate students’ sense of team work. In modern so ciety, the era of relying on one person to conquer the world has passed. Success req uires cooperation, needs every member of the team in a positive understanding of eac h other. Outward Bound has a lot of teamwork needed to complete the project, such as “survival”, “canned shoes”. A person’s power is limited, but when integrated i nto the team, if everyone can play their strengths, them the whole team can complete the task that individual can't complete.
Obviously, Outward Bound can achieve educational goals of psychological and social a daptation, which , for the long run, pays off and benefits us for a life-long term.徐汇区、松江区、金山区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设今年暑假，你准备去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并准备带上你的朋友们一起去。请写一篇文章介绍你的旅行计划，主要包括以下内容：
准备去什么地方
故地重游的原因
本次计划如何开展
希望做些什么准备
I’m going to① take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends, ②for the reason that a large-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to be volunteers for 15 days, ③ which is a good chance to play as well as work.
④With so much preparatory work to do, we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sure everything is under control. First and foremost, ⑤ we need to decide if we go there and back by train or plane, then book the ticket in advance. Secondly, the confirmation of our accommodation is ⑥of great importance, since a far distance may make us exhausted during the work days. What’s more, the outdoor activities must be a considerable challenge for us, so sun protection is ⑦the first priority such as sunhat, sun scream and cooling oil. Each one ⑧should prevent ourselves from heat stroke.
At last, there’s still a lot of work to do before setting off. But ⑨what matters most is to take your good mood and camera to record your traveling ⑩bit by bit from heart.
普陀区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
假设你学校两种学习安排：一是学校为学生安排解答困惑或补习知识遗漏点，二是鼓励学生自己学习解决困难。你会选择哪一种学习方式请结合实际情况，举例并说明
你选择的理由。
One problem emerges as we delve into the function of lessons: which is a more important goal of lessons, helping students gain self-confidence or teaching them specific knowledge From my perspective, lessons or teachers do both, but the lessons which help students gain the ability of sustainable development is much more important.
It is undeniable that teachers' top priority is to impart knowledge to students. That is, as a matter of fact, how we define teachers: the person who imparts certain knowledge to others. Take history teacher as an example. Some history teachers are able to make their classes as lively as possible by illustrating their points through interesting historic events and stories. Through this way, they not only attain the purpose of knowledge impartment（传授） but also make students love their classes, in turn, love history. On the contrary, other history teachers are simply teaching knowledge for its own sake, without further elaboration of classes. Therefore, due to the nature of teachers, it is undeniably significant for teachers to impart knowledge to students.
On the other hand, With the increasing pace and complexity of modern society, the twentieth-first century is calling for multiple talents, talents who are not only physically and academically capable, but also psychologically capable. Outstanding students with weak psychological state or lack of confidence are surely not the employers wanted. Therefore, people have attained a common consensus as time passes by that students' mentality is of equal importance
with the academic knowledge they acquire. Therefore, it is this background that calls for students to gain self-confidence. Only when students are confident enough about themselves can they have the healthy mentality to perform tasks.
Therefore, It is highly possible that as time elapses(消逝), teachers will take on more roles of tutors. Only those students qualified for self-taught method can go a long way in the future.
闸北区
II. Guided Writing （25分）
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions.
你是李华，因作为交换学生将前往英国学习生活一年，现在学校校园网上征求一位同学暂时承担你学校板报设计的工作。文中必须包括：
1.你写此征求文的目的。
2.你对应征同学的要求。
3.承担此项工作的注意事项。
(文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息)
Hello student,my name is li hua because of I am an exchange student,I have to go England to study for 1 year,now I am needing a student to help me take care of blackboard newspaper candidate request: firstly,have to be creative,have to design a Novel blackboard newspaper,secondly: have to be responsible,have to complete the mission/blackboard newspaper in the schools limited : have to know enough skills,so it's easier to create blackboard newspaper. And lastly candidates had to pay attention to the distribution of their own learning ’t be too into the blackboard newspaper,and forgot your a lot of references to recommend students,create a blackboard newspaper that everyone loves 杨浦区
II. Guided Writing
Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
最近在成年人中展开了一项关于影响孩子成功因素的调查。请结合下面的调查结果，谈谈你自己的观点与想法。
长宁区、嘉定区 II. Guided Writing （25分） Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the
instructions. 你是李华，为解决你所在的学校公益社团(public welfare society)的资金短缺问题，请给全校学生写一封募捐信，募集5000元善款。信中必须包括：
1. 向全校的捐款号召。 Skills for success
Skills that adults say are most important for kids to succeed: Source Pew Research Center survey of 3,154 adults Communication 77%
Writing
Math 79%
Reading 86% Teamwork 90%
2. 你发起这一活动的理由。
3. 你准备怎样使用善款的计划。
（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等任何真实信息）