雅思写作十大常见错误透析（下）
●不间断句子（run-on sentences）
什么叫不间断句子，请看下面的例子：
1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析：
这个句子包含了2层完整的意思“There are many ways”以及“we get to know the outside world”，简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为：There are many ways for us to get to know the outside world.或者There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world.
●措辞毛病（troubles in diction）
措辞是指在特定的句子中如何恰当地选用词语的问题，由于很多因素的制约，比如上课时间有限，老师在这方面作的指导相对来说就比较少，因此导致了学生在平时写作中没有养成良好的推敲，斟酌的习惯。他们往往随心所欲，拿来就用。所以作文中措辞不当的地方比比皆是：
1. The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
(农业中不断增加的化学物质的使用也造成了污染)
分析：
显然，考生把“obstacles”“障碍物”当做“物质”来使用了，另外，“the increasing use”（不断增加的使用）应该改为“abusive use”(滥用)。
改为：The abusive use of chemical substance in agriculture also leads to pollution.
●累赘（redundancy）
建议考生们在写作中语言以简洁为贵，写句子没有一个多余的词；写段落没有一个无必要的句子。能用单词的不用词组；能用词组的不用从句或者句子，如：
1. In spite of the fact that he is lazy, I like him.
分析：
本句中的“In spite of the fact that he is lazy”是同位语从句，按照我们上面说的能用词组不用从句，
改为：In spite of his laziness, I like him.
2. For the people who are diligent and kind, money is just the thing to be used to buy the things they need.
分析：
整个句子太罗嗦，可以大大简化：
改为：Diligent, caring people use money only to buy things they need.
●不连贯（incoherence）
不连贯是指一个句子前言不搭后语，或者是结构上不畅通，这也是考生经常犯的错误之一。如：
1. The fresh water, it is the most important things in the world.
分析：
“the fresh water”与逗号后的it不连贯，it与things在数方面不一致。
改为：The fresh water is the most important thing in the world.
●综合性语言错误（comprehensive misusage）
所谓综合性语言错误是指在雅思写作中除了上述10种错误外的诸如时态，语态，标点符号，大小写等错误。如：
1. Today money to everyone is very importance, our’s cloths, live, eat, go etc.
分析：
“our”是人称代词的所有格形式，可以单独作形容词使用，没必要使用’s形式，而且后面应该跟名词。
改为：Today money to everyone is very important, for example, our eating, clothing, living, going ,etc.
了解了上述常见错误后，朗阁海外考试研究中心就带大家通过几篇考生的雅思范文，来深入了解这些错误发生的频率和改进这些错误后会给文章带来的质的改变：
例一：
Writing task 1 (Cambridge 1- page 51):
The diagram shows the process of collecting information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts in Australia Bureau of Meteorology. It can be clearly seen that information goes through three main stages until it can be broadcast. These stages are incoming information, analysis and forecasting, preparing the broadcast and finally, broadcast.
As it is shown in the diagram, first, information is gathered via satellite, radar, and drifting buoy. The information from satellite is transmitted to radar. Satellite, itself, takes photos. All the information provided by these three tools are integrated into satellite photos, radar screen, and synoptic charts. Then, they are analyzed and forecast. This information is sent to computers in order to prepare the broadcast. Finally, up-to-date information is broadcast via TV, radio, and recorded announcement.
In conclusion, the diagram shows that there are various stages in preparing and
broadcast of latest news on the weather and that radar has a fundamental role in gathering data. Also, the most comprehensive information is obtained from synoptic charts.
例二：
Writing task 2
Smoking tobacco should be made illegal like other dangerous drugs. Agree or disagree?
In the world today where stresses and tensions are at high degree, some people appeal to smoke cigarettes. They think that by means of cigar they can relax themselves, while it is obviously shown how harmful tobacco smoking is and it is clear why it should be banned in public. Smoking, at a glance, has many noxious effects on body. Some harmful aspects are proved and shown on body, on economy, and on the air.
Taking body into account, tobacco smoking has so many hazardous effects. W.H.O reports that 85 per cent of lung cancers are caused by cigarette smoking .On the other hand, recent research studies show that low birth weight is more common
among the children of smoker mothers. Another effect of tobacco on the body is its risk for heart diseases. Smoking is the major cause of heart attacks. These examples simply show the perils of tobacco smoking to the body.
Furthermore, cigarette trading these days has become a lucrative business around the world, especially within developed countries. This subject leads to extraction of millions of dollars from developing countries in order to import cigars. This currency that is spent on smoking perilous substances, can be specified for education, health, and infrastructures. In addition, smoking affects the economy of families. The money that can be used for promotion of life is used for decreasing life span.
From the air point of view, smoking cigarettes has dramatic effects on air. In rapidly increasing air pollution of metropolitan areas, smoking makes the situation even worse. Scientists report that one of the major pollutants in big cities is cigarette smoke. Furthermore, every day we see a lot of fags on the streets or in the nature that make their scenes indecent.
No wonder, tobacco smoking is risky from several points of view and making it illegal may help to decline its adverse effects. People should find better ways to relax themselves, like exercise or reading.
例三：
Task 2: Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
Shopping is going to be a habit or a bad attitude among our new generation for some reasons such as careless parents, bombardment by advertisements and bad behavior of consumption societies. Society should exercise more control over the
yo ung people’s interests and requirements.
Not surprisingly, we have been faced with the fact that our new generation is crazy about shopping. Firstly, they are easily influenced by advertising around them. Whenever we switch on our TV we will be bombarded with lots of TV commercials ; whenever we surface the Internet, we come across lots of advertisements. Also, on the other media we face lots of publicity; newspapers, magazines and radio or billboards are the best examples. All the time we unwished confront by these new ads. Young people will be easily affected, and would like to try the new material, feel the new taste and have new experience. They easily reply to advertising because it is part of their nature, and it is normal.
In addition, there are p arents who are careless about their children’s behavior. Some parents have to work from day to night; they just pay for children and give them pocket money as much as they need. Furthermore; we live in a society which forces
people to consume different new things and materials, because of its policy. In this case, young people are not sinners.
Therefore, the government should exercise more control over the advertising. Also, the government should teach people, especially young generation, to take more responsibility to produce as well as consume. The government should encourage the young generation to take advantages of education and production; moreover, the government should pave the way for better situation for future.
In conclusion, young people are easily affected by advertising; in this matter parents and the government are responsible. Both parents and the government should be aware of further problems.
例四：
Sample task
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
You should write at least 150 words.
Rates of smoking in Someland - men and women
The graph compares the attitude to smoking in men and women in Someland during 1960-2000. It also indicates the difference in smoking habits between two sexes (genders) has reduced over time.
At the beginning of the study in 1960 the number of men who smoked was
greater than that of women; it means that 600 per 1000 people who smoked were men and just fewer than 100 were women. Gradually, the number of female smokers rose to 300 per 1000 until 1975 and afterwards it reached a plateau with only a shallow descending slip down to 2000 when the number of female smokers was only 200 per 1000 smokers. On the other hand, during this period the number of male smokers slopes down in a steady manner from 600 per 1000 in 1960 to 210 to 2000 per 1000 for male smokers.
In short, it is obvious that at first there was less tendent to smoke among
women and there was an upward trend in their tendency. However, in 1975 the trend changed and two genders kept quitting smoking, and in 2000 the number of male and female smokers became equal with just a little more men smoking than women as before.
例五：
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I would like to inform you that there is something wrong with the camera I purchased from your shop through my journey to your town last month, and I am writing to you to make a complaint.
Last month the day after purchasing the camera, I put a roll of 24-exposure film into the camera. I took most photos during the journey. Yesterday after having the photos developed, I found some white spots covered on the surface of all photos. A specialist told me that it is because of a defect in camera. My wife and I regret for memorable pictures we could have.
There is a warranty card in the camera package, which has the reference number "900123" on it as the code. Please notify me whether I should send it to you or to the producer company for warranty service. Therefore, I believe I should somehow be compensated because I have lost so many valuable moments.
I wait for a refund of $300 that I paid for the camera, besides a roll of film.
Yours faithfully,
S. Sajadian
最新雅思写作常用万能句型整理大全 1.The most effective means to solve this problem is that ______________. In that case, ______________. 2. Everything has its own two sides, no exception with AAA. For one thing, ______________. for another, ______________. 3. My experience tells me that to ______________ needs a thorough and persevering process, and in this process you had better abide by the principles mentioned above. 4. On the whole, it is high time that we recognized the significance of ______________. 5. As a result, we should take some effective methods to ______________. 6. Judging by the figures, we can draw a conclusion that ______________. 7. In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of ______________. Only in this way can ______________ in the future. 8. In my opinion, we should place much emphasis on the importance of ______________. 9. But ______________ and ______________ have their own advantages. For example, ______________, while ______________. Comparing those two, however, I prefer to ______________.
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雅思写作十大常考话题 1．学生生活 例: University graduates receive higher salaries than those who have a lower education. Therefore, some people say such students should pay for all their tuition fees. To what extent do you agree or disagree 2．家庭生活 例：Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children do not get as much attention from their parents as children did in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree 3．现代科技 例: Computers do not help children to learn more effectively. On the contrary, their usage has a negative effect on both the physical and mental development of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree 4．媒体 例：Advertisements are getting their way into people’s lives. Discuss the effects of advertisements on people. Should all ads be banned 广告充斥人们的日常工作和生活。讨论广告对人们的影响。广告该不该禁止。 5．传统与发展 例：In the course of urban development, we often find ourselves confronted with the old building problem. Some people think we should pull down the old houses and buildings in the way; however, others argue that it is a very rash decision to tear them down without full consideration. What’s your opinion 6．动物 例：Should experiments be conducted on animals for the benefit of human beings 7．平等 例：In some countries, sports and entertainment personalities earn higher salaries than professionals like doctors, nurses and teachers. Why do you think this happens
作文写作十大类常见错误 一、句子不完整 ?1. 一个简单句有2个基本成分：主语和谓语动词，两者缺一不可。 ?错误： ?In china has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?正确： ?China has more than 100 million subscribers to cable television. ?错误： ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?正确： ?One of the many benefits of travelling overseas is learning how to cope with the unexpected. ?2. 如果一个句子有从句，也必须保证从句的完整。 ?错误： ?Those who overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?正确： ?Those who are overweight or indulge in unhealthy diets are candidates for heart attacks. ?3.介词后面一定要加名词、代词或从句做宾语。 ?错误： ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from. ?正确： ?A marked character of cooperative learning is that personal success only springs from group success. ?4. 大多数情况下，比较级后面一般要加than，并且清楚指明所比较的对象。 ?错误： ?Divorce is more common. ?正确： ?Divorce is more common than it was one generation ago. 二、句子成分多余 ?1. 一个简单句通常只有一个主语，如果主语超过一个，要使用连词构成并列主语。 ?错误： ?Smoking, drinking are banned in many places of work. ?正确： ?Smoking and drinking are banned in many places of work. ?2.如果一个句子中出现多个谓语动词，要使用连词连接结，构成并列动词，或在一些句子中使用关系代词构成复合句。 ?错误：
自雅思进入中国以来，雅思写作和口语两门主观类学科成为了最让大陆考生头疼的 问题。网上的各种学习资料也有各种方法、各种tips告诉大家怎么做怎么写才能提分。所以，今天要说的不是怎么提分，而是告诉大家在雅思写作当中最容易被扣分的地方，看看雅思写作考官是如何给大家打分的。 1.雅思写作可能扣分项：字数 众所周知，雅思写作部分Task 1 的字数要求是至少150字，Task 2是250字。 那么字数少于要求真的会扣分么? 从下表可以看出对于Task 1 来说，141-150字是不会因为字数原因丢分的。但是!如果你的字数低于140字就要开始扣分了。同理，在Task 2 中241-250字不会扣分。所以，对于那些差2-3个字到达要求的同学可以放心了。 那么字数多于题目要求会有加分么? 根据考官打分规则，雅思写作打分是扣分原则，也就是错的越多，分就越低。如 果你的写作单词以及语法很好，那么确实会提高一定分数。但是，如果你的语法和用 词没那么好，有错误，那么请记住一句话：多说多错!不要写太多，这样只会造成更多的“扣分”。 那么理想字数是多少字呢? 对于英语水平较高的同学来说，小作文170-200字，大作文280-350字是比较合 适的字数。 2.雅思写作可能扣分项：格式 根据雅思官方数据，25%的考生因为写作格式的原因而被扣分。即使words 以及grammar 都很好，但是格式是错误的，那么得分也就只有5分。 雅思官方认可两种写作格式分别是： 首行缩进(开头空5个字母的位置) 定格空行 在这里需要提醒的是 两种格式不能混用! 两种格式不能混用!
两种格式不能混用! 重要的事情说三遍! 3.雅思写作可能扣分项：字迹 一个雅思考官平均只会用4-5分钟去给1个考生的task 1以及task 2 打分。这个时间是非常短的。所以在这里要说的是字迹非常重要。不需要英文写的多好看，但是请保持卷面整洁以及字迹清晰。因为考官不会因为你写的不清楚而去仔细辨认你写的是什么! 写错了不要画疙瘩，一定要用橡皮擦干净，至少要让考官可一眼看出你写的是什么单词，千万不要让考官去半蒙半猜的去看你的试卷。 4.雅思写作可能扣分项：copy题目 不论是task 1 还是task 2，在introduction段落总是要描述题目作为文章的开头段。要注意的是，不是copy(抄)题目而是paraphrase(改写)题目。 因为判卷规则中有这么一个潜规则：如果考生在题目中使用了题目中的句子写在了文章中，那么考官在做字数统计的时候，是要把这个copy来的句子从在数统计里面去掉的。也就是说260字的作文完全有可能被算成230字。 另外，关键词要学会替换，很大的原因是因为如果关键字出现了3次以上，那么这个关键词的计数也是要被文章字数统计中刨除的。 举例来说： 如果关键字：nuclear power 在整篇文章里面出现了20次，原文250字的文章就会因为剔除关键字重复20次，而造成低于文章字数要求而扣分! 5.雅思写作可能扣分项：总结段 很多同学可能不太清楚，对于task 1 来说，conclusion是可有可无的，根据文章情况自行安排。但是在Task 2 中conclusion paragraph是必须有的!否则成绩大概也就是5-5.5左右。 总结段需要包含以下三点： 1. 用1-2句话简单总结在body段落中出现过的双方观点。 2.用不同的表达表述你的论点。 3.基于题目给出你的预测或评论。
一、写作十大原则——开阔思路，言之有物 面对200多个雅思话题，考生感到困惑：全部准备，时间紧不切实际；不全部准备，心里不踏实。换言之，充分准备了“转基因食品”这个话题，并不意味着能写好“英语是否应该作为全球语言”这个话题。那么，我们该如何才能做到“以不变应万变”呢？通过对200多个雅思作文话题的深入研究，笔者独创了“写作十大原则”，旨在帮助雅思考生摆脱“无米下炊”的困境。下面简单介绍十大原则的由来，并结合2005年的部分考题详细讲解如何利用十大原则备战雅思写作。“写作十大原则”其实是笔者通过研究众多雅思写作话题的“共性”，归纳出来的万用观点。换句话说，是英语作文必备观点，属于“万金油”、“救命稻草”和“保底”类的观点。对已出现的作文考题稍作分析，笔者发现，尽管雅思作文话题多达数百题，不少话题的论据其实是类似，相近或者是相通的。例如，“奥运会的利弊”=“旅游业的利弊”，“送小孩读幼儿园”=“送孩子服兵役”，“政府该不该资助艺术 家”=“政府该不该投资艺术项目如音乐厅、博物馆等”。 “写作十大原则”包括以下方面：（1）ECONOMY (2) TIME AND EFFICIENCY (3)HEALTH (4) EDUCATION (5) EMOTION (6) PSYCHOLOGY (7) RIGHT (8) ENVIRONMENT (9)CULTURE (10) MORAL IT Y。大部分雅思话题的正反论据都涉及到“十大原则”中的其中几个方面。只要掌握了十大原则及其核心词汇，不管考试中遇到什么话题，都能够说出个所以然，不会出现思维短路现象，或者有感而发不出来。 下面我们结合上面提到的近期考题验证十大原则的高效性。 （1）经济原则（涉及的话题有：智商高的学生是否应该和智商一般的学生同班学习；大学开设的课程是实用为主还是以理论为主；中学毕业生是否应该直接上大学还是先出社会工作几年；教育应该具备那些功能；旅游业与传统文化保护；英语是否应该作为全球性语言；城市建筑是否应该保持传统风格；转基因食品；网络生活的利弊） （2）时间与效率原则（涉及的话题有：智商高的学生是否应该和智商一般的学生同班学习；大学开设的课程是实用为主还是以理论为主；中学毕业生是否应该直接上大学还是先出社会工作几年；英语是否应该作为全球性语言；转基因食品；网络生活的利弊） （3）健康原则（涉及的话题有：中学毕业生是否应该直接上大学还是先出社会工作几年；转基因食品；网络生活的利弊） （4）教育原则（涉及的话题有：智商高的学生是否应该和智商一般的学生同班学习；大学开设的课程是实用为主还是以理论为主；中学毕业生是否应该直接上大学还是先出社会工作几年；青少年犯罪问题；网络生活的利弊） （5）情感原则（涉及的话题有：是否应该鼓励中学生给老师打分；中学毕业生是否应该直接上大学还是先出社会工作几年；智商高的学生是否应该和智商一般的学生同班学习；青少
Gao Phis Academic Personalized, professional tuloring. 雅思句型翻译练习(2) Day 6 1. 许多人相信科技的最大弊端就是它可能会带来一些难以想象的消极影响。 (disadva ntage) 2. 计算机会使人们丧失想象和创造力这一事实使我相信其是祸而非福。(rather tha n) 3. 毫无疑问互联网的快速发展使得许多人相信它是万能良药，然而情况并非总是如此。 (goes without say ing that …; soluti on) 4. 无可否认，博物馆可以扮演一个教育的作用，因为它给公众提供一个好的机会去研究他们国 家的历史和传统。(play a role in) 5. 许多人没能够意识到这样一个重要的事实：语言的多样性将会极大的推动文化的发展。也许 这就是为什么许多语言现在正处于濒临灭绝的境地。(diversity; enhance; on the verge of) 6. 毫无疑问，家庭成员之间的关系已经不像以前那么亲密。(not as... as...) 7. 广告之所以盛行主要在于它们的信息容量很大。(prevaili ng; in formative) 8. 互连网是如此盛行因此没有人可以避免不受到它的影响。(so…that…)
9. 可想而知，从事兼职工作可以培养学生的独立性和团队合作精神。 (develop) 10. 当前的教育效果远不能让人满意。(results; far from) 11. 造成该现象的最主要原因在于过度工业化似乎已经成了一种无法避免的趋势。(over- industrialization) 12. 文化多元化对人类文明而言就如空气之对于地球。(A is to B what C is to D ) Day 7 13. 造成该现象的原因有许多。 14. 一谈到计算机，人们持有不同的看法。(when it comes to …) 15. 考虑到该问题的严重性，我们必须得想出一些切合实际的措施来解决它。(severe; realistic) 16. 没有人能否认，我们已经进入了一个全球信息化的时代。(age of information) 17. 无疑，有关教育的话题总是能够引起我们的关注。 18. 在当代社会，环保总是能够引起我们的关注。 19. 众所周知，大学的主要作用是培养一个人的全面发展。 20. 可以毫不夸张地说学会如何合作在一个人的职业中是至关重要的因素。
雅思写作话题分类词汇 教育与学业 考试频率：★★★★★ Education and study 教育与学业 1、Teaching methods 教学方法 7、Generation gap 代沟 2、Educational facilities 教育设施8、Adolescents’/Teenagers’problems 青少年问题 3、Academic subjects 学校科目9、Studying abroad 留学话题 4、Computer and learning(teaching) 电脑与学习（教学）10、Taking a part-time job 兼职工作 5、Personal development 个人发展11、Parents’/Teachers’responsibilities 父母/教师责任 6、Physical and mental growth 身心成长12、Functions/tuition of university 大学功能/学费 真题重现 In schools and universities, some girls tend to choose arts subjects, while boys choose to study science subjects. What are the reasons? Do you think this trend should be changed? Some people think that the main purpose of school is to turn children as a good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 分类词汇加油站 1. scope of knowledge 知识面 2.lighten the burden of 减轻了…的负担 https://www.doczj.com/doc/e812746804.html,prehensive knowledge 广博的知识 4.long-distance education 远程教育 5.enrich the teaching method 丰富教育手段 6.teaching\pedagogical methodology 教学方法 7.schooling 学校教育parenting、upbringing 家庭教育8.impart\inculcate knowledge 传授知识 9.multi-media teaching 多媒体教学10.vocational education 职业教育11.down-to-earth, practical 切合实际的12.enlightening 予以人启迪的13.perplexing 令人困惑的 14.the cultural diversity 文化的多元性15.insightful 富有洞察力的,有深刻见解的16.undertake the due obligations 承担责任17.exam-oriented education 应试教育 18.develop our creative mind 培养我们创造性思维19.widen one’s knowledge 拓展知识面20.realize the value of life 实现生命价值
海口朗阁名师解析常见雅思写作语法错误 朗阁海外考试研究中心杨晔 一、语序 从句不使用疑问句语序，而使用陈述句语序，即主语在前，谓语在后的顺序排列。 错例1：Can you tell me how many students are there in this class? 正解：Can you tell me how many students there are in this class? 错例2：They were more worried about how far did they have to walk to get to the train station and could they catch the train before it left. 正解：They were more worried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left. 改错练习： 1. It’s hard to decide whe n and where will we hold the sports meeting. 2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveries from around the world, you will read about them in journals and research reports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrote them from China or Norway. 二、主谓一致和冠词的用法 错例1：A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school. 正解：A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.
常用万能句型： 1、Nothing has received more praise and abuse than something 译文：没有什么能像…这样毁誉参半。 2、There is no doubt that 译文：毫无疑问 3、The reason why + 句子~~~ is that + 句子 译文：之所以…主要在于 4 、So + 形容词+ be + 主词+ that + 句子（如此…以至于…） 译文：如此…因此 5、It is conceivable that + 句子 译文：可想而知 6 、Leave much to be desired 译文：…远不能令人满意 7、The most obvious reason for this phenomenon is that 译文：造成该现象的最主要原因在于 8 、A is to B what C is to D 译文：A 对于B 就恰如C对于D 9 、There are probably many reasons contributing to this phenomenon 译文：造成该现象的原因有许多。 10、When it comes to ……， 译文：一谈到… 11、No one can deny the fact that…
译文：没有人能否认 12、To be sure, the topic concerning ……can always attract our eyes 译文：无疑，有关…话题总是能够引起人们的关注 13、Never has …failed to fascinate us in modern society 译文：在当代社会…总是能够引起人们的关注 14、Simply put,… 译文：简而言之， 15、It is no overstatement to say that 译文：可以毫不夸张地说 16、…is a good case in point 译文：…就是一个绝佳的例子 17、People assume different attitudes towards this issue 译文：人们对该问题的观点不一而同。 18、As is widely-accepted,… 译文：众所周知， 19、To conclude,… 译文：总之， 20、Nothing is further from the truth than this opinion 译文：没有任罕菊净种说法比这种观点更加荒唐了。 21、There is an element of truth in both opinions 译文：这两种观点都有其可取之处。 22、Another consideration in this case is that…
雅思写作十大话题万能分类题库 一、教育 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容？ 母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfill both these functions? (050312) 提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开（个人与社会），准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面 来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。 子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能？大学的是应当把学生培养成吅格的公民还是让他们自己得益？准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验？大学要不要扩招？中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育？要不要延长义务教育年限？要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学？老师要教学生如何判断是非吗？ 2. 学校的科目谁来选择？ 母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916) 提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。 子题1：政府选课or 老师选课？学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择？ 子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗？要不要学国 际新闻？要不要学历史？要不要中学阶段就学习外语？要不要学数学哲学这类的科目？ 提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。 3. 什么样的教学方式最好？ 母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515) 提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点 是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有 体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。 子题：私立学校好不好？留学好不好？要不要分快慢班？小组学习还是单独学习好？ 4. 谁来为学费买单？
雅思写作中代词的使用及常见错误 来源：考试吧 作为英语中衔接的一种重要形式，代词的使用值得引起重视和加以深思。 先来看两个学生作文当中出现的句子： Medical care and education are cornerstones of the society, because it is needed by both youngsters and adults. Doctors are not able to control themselves'profitable activities. 请注意上面两句话中标记出来的代词，它们的使用均存在问题，具体是什么问题，我们将在下文中得以解答。 既然中国学生在英语的代词使用上是普遍存在错误的，在谈论错误分类之前，我们先来欣赏一下native speaker的文字中，代词使用的典范。 例文： It is rather hard work: there is now no smooth road into the future: but we go round, or scramble over the obstacles. We've got to live, no matter how many skies have fallen. This was more or less Constance Chatterley's position. The war had brought the roof down over her head. And she had realized that one must live and learn. ——D. H. Lawrence Lady Chatterley's Lover 翻译：这是一种颇为艰难的工作。现在没有一条通向未来的康庄大道，但是我们却迂回前进，或攀援障碍而过。不管天翻地覆，我们都得生活。 这大概就是康士丹斯·查太莱夫人的处境了。她曾亲尝世界大战的灾难，因此她了解了一个人必要生活，必要求知。 以上的一段文字来自于劳伦斯的《查特莱夫人的情人》，被标注的地方仅仅是这段文字当中几个代词使用的范例。当然，这是fiction，和我们雅思要求的议论文写作有很大的出入。那么在雅思的写作当中，我们也不难从考官范文当中，找到代词使用的模范。 Nowadays many adults have full-time jobs and the proportion of their lives spent doing such jobs is very high. So feeling about one's job must reflect how an individual feels about his or her life as a whole, and because of this, job satisfaction is indeed very important for the wellbeing of that person.
雅思小作文模板句必备50句型 A 1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了... 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that)... 该图向我们展示了... 5.the pie graph depicts (that).... 该圆形图揭示了... 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明... 8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解... 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字)... 13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显)看到... 16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了... 17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。 18.the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in... 该图以圆形图形式描述了...总的趋势。 19.this is a column chart showing... 这是个柱型图，描述了...
雅思写作常用句型分类总结 雅思写作是否有规律可循，答案是肯定的。至少从语言上来讲，雅思考试的写作可以通过一些句型的替换来实现个人观点的陈述，完成论述过程。熟练掌握运用这些表达方式可以大大节约在考场上的时间，也可以使自己的文章能够流畅自如，从而获得高分。下面就将这些句型做一个分类总结： 一．首段的句型 第一句：描述背景： 1. Along with the rapid development the society, remarkable changes have taken place in… 随着社会的快速发展，……已发生了显著的变化。 2. The ….is a subject matte r in recent years. …是近年来的一个课题。 3. In recent years, China has experienced an alarming increase in… / In recent years, much more attention than ever before has been paid to …. 最近几年来，中国……有了惊人的增长。 /近几年来，….吸引了众多关注。 4. One of the pressing problem facing our nation (China) today is…and… 我们国家(中国)如今面临的紧迫问题之一是…… 第二句：改写题目/介绍两个对立论点 1.There is much controversy over whether…/There is an ongoing debate about … 对于是否…很有争论 2.S ome people think that… Others argue that the opposite is true. There is probably some truth to both arguments, but I think… 有的人认为应该……另一些人持相反意见。也许双方的观点都有一定道理，但是…… 3.It is widely held/acknowledged that….(改写题目)。Such people think that…（介 绍对方观点） 第三句：提出个人观点/引出接下来要讨论的内容 1.表示只赞同一方观点： My personal view is that … is of benefits to sb./sth. As far as I know, its benefits are far more obvious than its downsides. Although…, I am of the view that they do more harm than good. My personal view is that its benefits cannot justify its harmful effects.我 个人观点是它的好处不能抵消它的负面影响。