题型训练写作（七）
第一节短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
I’m writing to tell you that we are happy to see our new library open. It is so beautiful and good equipped that we all like to spend our spare time here, and some problems have come up.
First of all, there aren’t a plenty of seats in the reading room, so we can’t take notes when read. Next, the library is close at weekends when they have more time to enjoy reading. Beside, we don’t know how to search for the books that we need.
My suggestion is that our library provides more seats and open at weekends. What’s more, computers should be supplied so that we can learn about the new books we borrow.
I would appreciate if you consider my advices and take steps to solve them.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节书面表达
假定你是李华，在英国一所中学作交换生，现在要参加一个关于“Food ＆Culture”的演讲活动。你准备介绍一种中国传统食物---元宵。请从元宵的历史、寓意及做法等方面写一篇演讲稿。
注意：
1.词数120左右，开头已为你写好；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：蒸(steam)、炸(fry)、煮(boil)
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here ...
_______________________________________________________________________________ ____
Thanks for listening.
参考答案
71. good改为well72. and改为but73. 去掉a74. read改为reading
75. close改为closed76. they改为we77. Beside改为Besides78. provides改为provide 79. if前加it80. advices改为advice
Dear friends,
I’m Li Hua. I feel greatly honored to be here to introduce to you a traditional Chinese food. As you know, Chinese food enjoys worldwide popularity. Now let me tell you something about “yuanxiao”, which is made of rice powder with sweet fillings, looking like a small white ball.
Yuanxiao or tangyuan can date back to about 2,000 years ago. We Chinese people eat yuanxiao at the Lantern Festival, which is the first day with a full moon of the new year. You see, the round and white ball is just like the full moon. That’s why we associate it with reunion and full luck. Making yuanxiao is really teamwork to create a harmonious family atmosphere. Ways of cooking it vary from place to place. Generally, they are steamed, boiled or fried. Some are served dry with sugar while others in soup.
I hope the information above is of some help for you to know about Chinese culture. If you want to know more details, please contact me at any time. Welcome to go to China for a visit to experience our food and culture for yourself.
Thanks for listening.
高考英语书面表达背诵 范文25篇 -CAL-FENGHAI-(2020YEAR-YICAI)_JINGBIAN
高考英语书面表达背诵范文25篇 ---多背范文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫李华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上内容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 范文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know th at the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@https://www.doczj.com/doc/4c14457614.html,. I’m looking forward to your reply. 2
高考英语书面表达题型分析 书面表达是历年高考英语的重点主观测试题之一，它有利于考查学生运用英语语言知识的综合能力，这种综合能力包括从单词拼写、词语搭配、词法结构到语法，从遣词造句、把握要领、谋篇布局到修辞风格等。该题在高考英语卷中占25分，约占全卷分值17%，是重要题型。而在听、说、读、写四项技能中，“写”是最令学生头疼，有些学生对书面表达题束手无策，无从下手。在日常的书面表达作业处理上，很多老师不注重及时给予批改或提供反馈信息；而在平常的考试测验中书面表达题很多时候被老师们看成是“调节剂”，即根据试卷的难易程度来判分，间接导致学生不能客观对待自己的写作能力。在对书面表达的订正往往老师仅局限与把范文读给学生听或张贴。久而久之学生对写作持敷衍态度，良好的写作习惯没有养成，导致书面表达题又成为高考失分的主要方面。 因此，在高中阶段尤其是在高三备考阶段的英语教学中，如何进行有针对性的强化训练和学法指导，培养学生的英语书面表达能力是极为重要的。 一、高考书面表达题型分析 高考书面表达旨在考查学生的书面运用语言的能力，看其是否能运用所学的知识和所掌握的技能进行思想交流。从历年的书面表达题来看，要求所写的题目形式多样，有记叙文(Narration)、说明文(Exposition)、描写文(Description)、日记(Diary)、书信(Letter) 、通知(Notice)和便条(Note)等等，所涉及的内容繁多。根据《高考英语科考试说明》，书面表达的题目要求考生根据所给情景（包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等）和提供的形式（图画、图表、提纲等）写一篇100字的短文，文章要切中题意，语言要准确得当，条理清楚。在体裁与题材上要多加注意。 本文就怎样做好书面表达题提出本人的几点看法。 【样题】假设你是李华，你上个星期去市图书馆看书发现以下问题，你写信向馆长Mr.Li 反映： 1、新书太少； 2、书架上的书比较混乱； 3、阅览室的一盏灯坏了； 4、管理员工作时彼此闲聊。 注意： 1、词数100左右； 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3、信的开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
普陀区 2017 学年第一学期高三英语质量调研英语试卷 I. Listening Comprehension Section A 10% Directions:In Section A, you will hear ten short conversations between two speakers. At the end of each conversation, a question will be asked about what was said. The conversations and the questions will be spoken only once. After you hear a conversation and the question about it, read the four possible answers on your paper, and decide which one is the best answer to the question you have heard. 1. A. Mother and child. B. Teacher and student. C. Husband and wife. D. Boss and secretary. 2. A. They like reading today’s paper. B. They are interested in today’s paper. C. They found nothing interesting in today’s paper. D. They have no idea what the paper is about. 3. A. In the concert. B. In the theatre. C. In the exhibition. D. In the studio. 4. A. Getting ready to board a plane. B. Queuing up for the check-in. C. Meeting friends at the arrivals. D. Waiting at the baggage claim area. 5. A. The man doesn’t care which colour is chosen. B. The woman prefers the colour. C. The man is concerned about the colour. D. The man intends to choose a different colour. 6. A. Doing a lot of homework. B. Staying focused in class. C. Sleeping for a short break. D. Devoting all her spare time to learning. 7. A. He was chairman of the club. B. He wanted to learn a new language. C. He wanted to know more about the club. D. He was interested in international advertisement. 8. A. The man should work hard. B. The man should turn down the job offer. C. The man may have another chance. D. The man can apply for the job again. 9. A. Its ending is not good enough. B. Its structure is not satisfying. C. It deserves an award. D. It is good except for the writing skills. 10. A. She likes watching instead of playing. B. She is a good team sports player. C. She doesn’t like any kind of sports. D. She likes taking part in team sports. Section B 15% Directions: In Section B, you will hear two short passages and one longer conversation, and you will be asked several questions on each of the passages and the conversation. The passages and the conversation will be read twice, but the questions will be spoken only once. When you hear a question, read the four possible answers on your paper and decide which one would be the best answer to the question you have heard. Questions 11 through 13 are based on the following passage. 11.A. It contains protein. B. It contains water. C. It helps the brain work properly. D. A full stomach leads to a good sleep. 12. A. Sleep helps the brain control the senses. B. Sleep promotes rest. C. Sleep helps the brain revise and store information.
高考英语书面表达背诵文25篇 ---多背文，表达加分！！ 书面表达(一) 假定你叫华，今年六月份将从北京新华中学高三毕业，打算到美国哥伦比亚大学上学。现在请你根据下面表格的个人信息，用英语写一封信，申请 注意： 1. 信件必须包括以上容，不能逐句翻译，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 2. 词数100左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：哥伦比亚大学the University of Columbia 文 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm writing in the hope that I can obtain a chance to further my study in computer science in your university. First, please allow me to take a brief introduction of myself. I’m Li Hua, a girl born in June, 1993. I’m graduating from Beijing Xinhua High School this coming June with each course excellent. I have a keen interest in computers and the Internet. Besides, I’m good at English. I know that the University of Columbia ranks among the most famous universities in the USA, and that’s the very reason why I’m now applying to further my university study in your Computer Science Department. I would appreciate it if you could take the trouble to provide me with some information and send me the necessary application materials. By the way, my email address is lihua93@sina.. I’m looking forward to your reply.
七选五专项练习 根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。 第一篇： _71_ One of the best things you can possibly do is to start you own club. It’s great fun especially if you are the sort of person who feels there’s never anything to do during the school holidays. The first thing you need to come up with is an idea for your club. _72_ Pets, clothes, pop music or dancing groups, sports, making things? The list is endless. Next you need some friends to be in your club with you. _73_ All you need is three or four other people who are interested in the same thing as you. _74 You should all sit down somewhere together with lots of pieces of paper and write down every name you can think up. That’ll keep you busy for ages. At your first meeting you should make up a rule book. And the first rule should be no grown-ups or little/big brothers or sisters! The best clubs are always secret! Now you have just about everything you need, except membership cards. These are very important and again you can speed a lot of time making them. 75 Why not leave some space for a photo of yourself? That will make the membership card really look like it. So there you are, get clubbing! Once you get started you’ll think of loads of more interesting things to do! A.That’s easy. B.Enjoy your own club! C.Invite a designer to join you. D.What are you interest in? E.Some vacation is just around the corner. F.Then you need to pick a name for your club. https://www.doczj.com/doc/4c14457614.html,e a bright thick pen to make a special design. 第二篇： Getting your children to study can be a little like getting them to eat their vegetables. __71__ Make a study time and have it at the same time every day.This will help your kids to learn to schedule their day and will give them a sense of control over how they spend their time. Allow them to study in blocks of time，such as for half an hour with a five-minute break in the middle.__72__ Ideal(理想的) study times are after dinner or right after school before dinner. Never allow your children to study in front of the television，as that will encourage passive activity.__73__ You'll also need to help your kids find the right place to study.After you've set up a good study time for little learners，set up a good place where they can get those creative juices flowing. __74__ Make sure there is a table or a desk and a comfortable chair. __75__ This includes helping them out with their homework sometimes and being there for them with the answers to any questions.The input you give your children during study periods will help form a bond and help make studying enjoyable. A．Pick a place where your children can study properly. B．Hold them to the schedule they create for themselves. C．Finally，spend time with your kids when they're studying. D．Keep the atmosphere light and offer lots of encouragement，too. E．Instead，use TV as a treat or a reward when the homework is completed. F．Try to stop this bad habit by offering some sort of reward.
一、2020年高考真题 1. 【2020·全国卷I】 假定你是李华, 上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道, 内容包括: 1. 参加人员: 2. 跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下: 3. 活动反响。 注意: 1. 写作词数应为80左右: 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Cross-Country Running Race ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________ 2. 【2020·全国卷II】 上周末，你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文，介绍这次活动，内容包括: 1. 农场情况； 2. 采摘过程； 3. 个人感受 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 题目:My Weekend ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________
2018年海淀一模作文参考范文 One Possible Version
Dear Jim, Thank you for your New Year greetings, and I’m very happy about your interest in Chinese zodiac. Actually, there are altogether twelve zodiac signs in Chinese culture. As you were born in 2000, the year of dragon, your zodiac sign is “dragon”. Dragon in Chinese culture mainly conveys two meanings. First, it is the symbol of power and nobleness. Second, Chinese dragon delivers the meaning of being outstanding and extraordinary. Parents often put Chinese char acter “Long”, which means dragon, in kids’ name to show their higher expectations. That’s all about my brief introduction. Hoping it’ll help you have a better understanding of China. If you have any further question, please let me know. Yours, L i Hua
一 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One time, the teachers at a school wanted to teach the students about airplanes. While all airplanes can fly, some are able to fly farther than others. This is because not all airplanes are built the same. For example, a fighter plane looks very different from a plane that people fly in when they want to go on a holiday. The teachers wondered how they could make students understand this. Then, the science teacher, Mr Moose, decided that the school should have a paper airplane contest. Every student would design a paper airplane. They would stand in a line in the playground behind the school. The students would take turns throwing their airplanes. The student whose airplane went the farthest would win. When Mr Moose announced the paper airplane contest to the students, they were very excited. A student named Paul, who was on the school sports team, said to everyone else that his
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。 Cleanliness is important to academic success at one Chinese university where compulsory labor is part of a program designed to award class credits while teaching students with proper moral values. During winter, the sky is still dark at 6：30 a．m. when the first－year students in Trade and Management College in Zhengzhou begin sweeping the 165－acre campus and it can take up to an hour. Mr. Sun, the university official, said labor is good for building character and promotes “the spirit of hard work.”Some students also claim that they are always proud of the clean campus. They never litter because they've been through the labor and understand that they should respect the fruits of labor of others. Some students, however, are against it because they feel the demands of the cleaning program are a distraction. Some often show up late and hungry to their morning classes after rushing to sweep the campus and clean their rooms. 【写作内容】 1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要。 2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：(1) 支持或反对这个学校的做法；(2) 用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的观点。 【写作要求】 1. 可以支持文中任一观点，但必须提供理由或论据。 2. 阐述观点或提供论据时，不能直接引用原文语句。 3. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。 4. 不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。 支持： One university in Zhengzhou designs a program where students must clean the campus every day and relates it to class credits. Some people support the program while others do not.(30) Generally, I am in favor of the practice. To begin with, through their effort, students provide a clean and comfortable environment, which, as a result, is an assurance of their successful academic life. Moreover, cleaning and labor can not only serve to build students' character but also contribute positively to students developing healthy routines and good sanitation habits. Last but not least, by enjoying the fruits of others' labor, students will develop the awareness of gratitude and regard labor as a matter of honor. In short, carrying out the cleaning program is crucial. The significance for students of participating in it means more than academic success. It is part of moral education and benefits students as well as the campus. (120) 反对： It is required by one university in Zhengzhou that students should clean the campus every morning to achieve class credits. Opinions on the practice vary widely from person to person.(30) I am strongly opposed to the practice for the following reasons. First of all, cleaning tends to take up too much time, which becomes a distraction for students and discourages them from focusing on their academic performances. Then, students can be encouraged to maintain clean living areas but it's unreasonable to relate the cleaning with the academic credits. As students, they should put more efforts into their studies to achieve class credits instead of sweeping the campus. Furthermore, though someone claims labor can contribute to developing the spirit of hard work, it should by no means be achieved through daily floor－sweeping. In conclusion, there is no sense in students sweeping the campus, for it benefits neither their character nor study.(120)
2021届高三高考英语复习7选5题型训练根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳答案，选项中有两项为多余选项。 It's such a common event that you probably never asked yourself why you sleep. 36 .In fact, for sleep researchers it's one of the biggest unanswered questions in the field. Stop and think about it for a second. Why should we sleep? 37 .But we sleep every night even when we have had plenty of rest. There are, no doubt, several different answers to this question but let's just consider one general purpose of sleep: 38 . Human beings are creatures that are normally active during daylight hours when our senses functions most effectively. 39 .We can't see objects well, our color vision is entirely lost, and we don't have the smelling or hearing sharpness of other animals. So it actually does make sense to have us stay where we are during the dangerous period when night-waking animals are walking here and there. And one sure way to make sure we don't fall down everywhere and get lost or eaten is to have us not move for seven or eight hours rising again only when the light is back and our survival chances are better. It's not the only reason we sleep. 40 . Perhaps even the most important one. A. At night, humans do rather poorly. B. But from a scientific point of view this is far from an ordinary matter. C. Should that put human beings in a terrible situation? D. Sleep as a survival approach. E. Furthermore, if you were designing an animal would you have it come into long periods of unconsciousness every twenty-four hours? F. But in terms of evolution it may have been one of the first reasons. G. Is it because we get tired?
书面表达专练(三) 句式升级专练 A [题目要求] (2016·漳州市模拟)假设你是李华，临近高考了，你给初中英语老师Miss Li写一封感谢信，内容要点如下： 1．感谢她给你的帮助； 2．你为高考做的准备； 3．你对大学的展望以及上大学后的打算。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Miss Li， Long time no see. Thank you for your kind help with my study. Time flies, I am Senior Three now.----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Yours， Li Hua [考生作文] Dear Miss Li， Long time no see. Thank you for your kind help with my study. Time flies, I am Senior Three now. Because I am devoted to my study every day, I have learned much knowledge. It will definitely promise me a good performance in my College Entrance Examination. I hope that I can be admitted into my dream university, one with good equipment and learned professors, who can offer me guidance when I am in difficulty. Of course, there will be exams in college to check my study. I won't bury myself in books the whole day. Instead, I'll be active and join many associations where I can develop my social skills and my potential. I firmly believe that I can make my college life more colorful only when I have a common ground. Yours， Li Hua
2019年上海高考英语一模写作汇编 1.上海市黄浦区2019年高三英语一模写作 假设你是明启中学高三学生卢平，你的网友王磊近日就学习时如何记好笔记发邮件向你求教，请给他回复一封电子邮件，邮件必须包括以下内容： ●描述两到三个不同的笔记类型及其特征 ●如何记好笔记的建议 2.上海市普陀区2019年高三英语一模写作 2018年11月5日-10日，首届中国国际进口博览会在上海成功举行。假设你是明启中学的高三学生卢平，学校英语报向全体高三学生进行征文，题目为“TheCIIEinMyEyes”。你有意投稿，撰写一篇文章。稿件内容必须包含： 1.对“新时代，共享未来（NewEra,SharedFuture）”的理解； 2.首届进博会向世界传递了什么信息？对中国发展有何深远的影响？ （中国国际进口博览会：ChinaInternationalImportExpo简称CIIE） 3.上海市徐汇区2019年高三英语一模写作 学校将组织一次“我心目中的英雄”主题班会活动，请你以HeroesinMyHeart为题，写一篇演讲稿。基本要求如下： 你心目中英雄的标准； 你心目中英雄的事迹简介（请举1-2例）； 从这些英雄事迹中，你学到了些什么？ 4.上海市杨浦区2019年高三英语一模写作 请简要描述图片，并结合生活实际谈谈你的看法。 5.上海市崇明区2019年高三英语一模写作 中华中学为了进一步规范学校的社团建设，提高社团活动的品质，向广大师生征求意见。假设你是该校学生王敏，写一封电子邮件给负责社团的林老师，就你所了解的1-2个学校社团发表意见。你的邮件需包括： 你所了解的学校社团的现状（亮点和不足）及其原因； 提出你对改进学校社团建设的建议。 6.上海市长宁嘉定区2019年高三英语一模写作 假设你是明启中学的高三学生王蕾。学校正在招募话剧团（dramaclub）和机器人社团（robotclub）新成员。你在日记中表达获知该消息时的感受，做出选择，并阐述理由。 7.上海市松江区2019年高三英语一模写作