专题书面表达
方法与技巧
题型介绍：
书面表达是考查考生用英语表达自己思想的能力，即运用所学的英语知识及合乎英语习惯的表达方式来传递信息，进行思想交流的能力。这将要求考生根据所给的情景和要求，在限定时间内(一般30分钟)写出100个词左右的书面材料。因此考生要做到：审题正确、要点全面，能够运用所学的语法结构、词汇知识，使上下文连贯，同时语言要准确、得当，条理清楚，书写规范。所以，具有良好的书面表达能力是非常必要的，它也进一步突出了对考生创新能力的考查。
命题形式：
一、试題突出了交际性、实用性
书面表达的内容主要取材于校园、家庭生活和一般外事活动，符合高中学生的年龄特点和生活背景，基本都是考生己经熟悉的或将来有可能经历的事情，情景真实可信。所提出的要求符合考生的实际英语水平，具有可写性，能够充分展示学生的书面表达能力。
二、全国新课标考查应用文的可能很大，命题形式一般是提纲作文。所以艺体生重点训练提纲式应用文。
解题技巧：
一、重视语篇衔接，提高思维蝶变
一篇好的Writing，不仅要要点完整，表达规范，还需要有把这些内容有机联系起来的语篇衔接手段，即我们常说的关联词、连接性副词、以及一些介词和短语。这些往往是好的Writing出彩的部分。因为这样的衔接才能使句子之间、段落之间有连贯性和整体性。
有不少的同学认为语篇连接手段是个很高层次的东西，实际上，这些连接手段对于同学们来说并不陌生，常见的语篇连接手段有：表时间/次序：First，in the first place，second……;
表并列/递进：too，also，as well as，in addition，furthermore；表举例：For example，for instance，表总结：as a result，in summary，in short，等。
每年高考书面表达的参考范文所使用的连接手段也较为简单，有些考生的书面表达事实上已经超过了参考范文的水平。只要我们平时注意养成良好的逻辑思维和表达习惯，再掌握一些常用连接词或短语，考场作文就能得心应手。
二、掌握写作技巧，高分书面表达
“书面表达”是考查考生综合运用英语能力的一种题型，根据其一般规律，它要求考生对所给情景和要求写
一篇书面材料，做到所写的内容符合所给的情景和要求，文理通顺。它既象作文，又不完全是作文，因为考生不能离开情景和要求自行立意、选材，随意发挥。它类似翻译，但又不同于翻译，因为考生必须根据需要进行适当的发挥，因而有较大的灵活性。所以在做这种题目时，要掌握一个总的原则是“不漏、不错、不多写、不乱写”。具体地则从以下四个方面去考虑、着手：
1、读题，明确要求，做好必要的准备工作。高考的书面表达，题材较多，有给文字背景材料的，有看图作文的，还有两者皆而有之的。对于文字背景材料，考生要仔细阅读，看懂题目要求，并对材料进行必要的删减。文字材料中有的是有用信息，有的是无用信息。不进行必要的删减，则会使做出来的书面表达轻者增加了错误的可能性，重者文不对题，逻辑不清。
2、组织，进行必要的语言准备。读题工作结束后，考生要就提供的信息或画面进行语言上的组织。这一环节非常重要，对“书面表达”的流畅和符合逻辑是举足轻重。读题的核心工作是作必要的删减，组织的主要工作是作适当的补充，给框架补“血”补“肉”，使所要写出来的文章意思连贯，语言畅通，逻辑严密。
3、转换，进入实质性的语言加工阶段。要做好这一阶段的工作，关键是掌握这么几条原则，多用简单句，少用复合句；多用短句，少用长句；讲究简明扼要，摒弃烦琐复杂，意思混浊不清。这一阶段是得分最终高低的关键所在。因此，除了掌握以上重要的原则外，还应在具体操作中注意选择正确的主语人称和动词的时态，多用贴切的固定短语，尽量使用自己“拿手”的句子，经常留意句子的语法是否符合要求。从更高要求来说，用英语思维并一气呵成地完成书面表达是最佳方法，这是上上策。但对于大多数英语水平尚未达到这一步的考生来说，转换过程中进行有效的控制是非常必要的。只有进行这样的控制，才能有效地控制错误的发生，才能少扣分，多得分。
4、检查，“书面表达”的最后一道工序。最后一道工序意味着一旦稍有疏忽，很难再有弥补，也就无法挽回。因此，仔细认真地检查对于最终的得分是十分重要的。在检查过程中应注意以下几个方面：（1）信息点是否完整，有没有遗漏。根据评分标准，漏信息点是要扣大分的（2－3分）。要细致小心，一一检查，确保无一遗漏。
（2）语法正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。
总之，要做好“书面表达”是一件并非容易的事情，它需要平时的积累，需要考生在平时的英语学习中加强训练，以求水到渠成之功。当然，考前的归纳和总结也十分重要，因为它往往起着事半功倍的效果。
体验高考
1.[2017·全国卷Ⅰ]
假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 内容：学习唐诗；
3. 课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)时间和地点；
(2)内容：学习唐诗；(3)课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史；2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第二人称为主；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Leslie，
I am very happy that you have made great progress in learning Chinese and you are interested in Chinese culture. Now I'll tell you the next learning programme. On July 20, we are going to learn poems of the Tang Dynasty which you are interested in in the Lecture Hall. As a foreign learner, it is difficult for you to understand the true meaning and the culture of them. Therefore, before class, you can read some books related to the history of the Tang Dynasty to better appreciate the poems.
Be sure to go to the Lecture Hall on time. You cannot miss the wonderful poems.
Best wishes.
Yours，
Li Hua 2. [2017·全国卷Ⅱ]
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．展览时间、地点；
2．展览内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【解析】题目要求写封邮件邀请外教参观中国剪纸艺术展。写作情境设置真实，任务要求符合学生能力水平，自然地融入了我国优秀传统文化(剪纸paper-cutting)的内容，能够引导学生在使用外语了解世界的
同时，注重传承发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲中国故事，增强文化自信。该写作贴近学生生活，学生有话可说。考生成文时应注意：1. 结构采用三段成文：第一段自我介绍并引出话题；第二段具体交代活动时间、地点；第三段较为详细地交代展览内容。2. 时态：以一般将来时和一般现在时为主。3. 人称：第一人称。4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。5. 适当使用一些高级词汇和句型以提高作文档次。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry，
I'm Li Hua, one of your students in your cultural class. I know you're interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms—paper-cutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It'll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9：00 am to 7：00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery, which is located at 118, Jian Guo Road, Hai Dian District. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon? I will meet you at 2：00 pm at the teaching building gate if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which paper-cutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of paper-cuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Regards,
Li Hua 3．[2017·全国卷Ⅲ]
假定你是李华。你所在的校乒乓球队正在招收新队员。请给你的留学生朋友Eric写封邮件邀请他加入，内容包括：
1．球队活动；
2．报名方式及截止日期。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【解析】由要点可知，邮件是邀请对方报名参加乒乓球队，所以主体时态为一般将来时和一般现在时。人称以第三人称为主(介绍乒乓球运动的好处)，一、二人称为辅。在写作时要注意邀请信的交际性，比如：开篇点明写信目的，最后期待回复。同时还要注意根据提示内容进行合理发挥。
【参考范文】
Dear Eric，
I was informed that our school Ping-pong Team is looking for new members among us students. I know you show great fancy in ball games, especially ping-pong.
As you know, playing ping-pong can not only build up your body but also shape your character. Additionally, it can help you make more friends, which is essentially beneficial to you.
Would you like to join? If so, please go to sign up at the Student Union office, which is on the second floor of the Teaching Building. You can go there any time this Saturday afternoon. If you want me to accompany you, please let me know. I will be available any time.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours, Li Hua
4.[2017·天津卷]
61. 假设你是李津，与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况，请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
1．简要介绍自己的学习和生活；
2．告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者，并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等)；
3．希望她有机会重访天津。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2．可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：第十三届全运会the 13th National Games
Dear Mrs Green，
I'm so glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________
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Yours，
Li Jin 【解析】首先，内容要点要全，三个要点都要包含：(1)介绍自己的学习和生活；(2)告诉她你作为第十三届全运会志愿者所做的准备；(3)希望她重访天津。
其次，要准确并恰当地使用词汇和各种复合句。注意使用定语从句，非谓语动词等表达。在行文过程中要注意时态的正确运用。
第三，要注意上下文的连贯和语言的得体。注意使用一些表示连接和转折的词。
最后，要注意一下卷面整洁，书写工整。
One possible v ersion:
Dear Mrs Green,__
I'm so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you asked me about my study and life. I'm very pleased to tell you that I have made great progress in my spoken English since you left. As for my life, I take exercise regularly and do more outdoor activities, which builds up my body and character as well.
I have good news to tell you that I have been chosen to be a volunteer in the coming 13th National Games to be held in Tianjin at the end of August. To be a qualified volunteer, I made some preparations. I interviewed many people from all walks of life, which improved and deepened my understanding of Tianjin.
I hope you can revisit Tianjin if you have a chance. Looking forward to seeing you again.
Yours，
Li Jin 5.[2017·浙江卷6月考]
第一节应用文写作(满分15分)
假定你是李华，计划组织一次郊游，请给你的英国朋友Chris写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：
1. 参加者；
2. 时间、地点；
3. 活动：登山、野餐等。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【解析】本应用文贴近学生实际生活，虽然是命题作文，但还是保持一定的开放程度，形式是邮件，
符合当今人们常见的信息交流方式。考生需要认真谋篇，紧扣提示，准确全面地表达所要求的内容，在合适的地方拓展细节，使行文连贯。作为邀请信，要求语言得体，邀请的语气诚恳，有礼貌。时态可以用一般现在时和一般将来时。人称以第一人称为主，第二人称为辅。
【参考范文】
Dear Chris,
How are you doing? I am writing to invite you to a tour to the Green Hill this Saturday. As planned, we will leave by bus at 7：00 am at the school gate. About two hours will be spent climbing the mountain. After that we will have a picnic by the lake at the foot of the mountain.
Up till now, 3 boys and 4 girls have joined the team. I do hope that you could join us because Green Hill is such a fun place to relax and surely we will have a great time. However, if you don't have spare time for this trip, it is fine. It's just up to you.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours，
Li Hua
模拟新题精选
1.【安徽省皖南八校2018届高三上学期第一次联考】假定你是李华，你校将到黄山风景区举行“我爱黄山（Mr. Huangshan）”主题活动。请你给交换生James发一封邮件告知活动相关情况。内容包括：
1.时间和地点；
2.活动安排；
3.注意事项。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear James,
I’m Li Hua. Our school will have an activity to call on people to love Mt. Huangshan. I’m writing to invite you to take part in it.
We are to meet at the school gate at 7 o’clock this Saturday morning and then go to Mt. Huangshan by bus. On arriving there, we’ll pick up the litter in Mt. Huangshan. A speech about the importance of protecting natural heritage will also be given.
Since the activity will last to 3 o’clock in the afternoon, you’d better wear comfortable shoes. Besides, everyone is expected to bring their lunch and share it.
Would you like to join us? Hope to see you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文为一篇应用文中的书信，主要是介绍主题活动的内容。写时要注意书信的格式。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，时态以一般将来时为主。上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
亮点分析，文章第一段点明邮件的原因。第二段首先具体介绍了活动牟时间和地点，接着是活动安排。在活动安排时，用一个非谓语on arriing there作状语。最后的注意事项是由since引导的状语从句完成的：Since the activity will last to 3 o’clock in the afternoon, you’d better wear comfortable shoes. 在文中交替使用主动语态和被动语态。句式时有变化，使用了一些复合句，单句和复各交互运用。使用一些较高级的词汇如call on people to do, invite sb to take part in , expect to do,would ike to join us 及hope to see 等。也使用一些连词如then. Besides,使文章通顺，有条理。
2.【辽宁省六校协作体2018届高三上学期期中】假如你是王华，18岁生日后，真的有种长大成人的感觉。于是你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈。信的开头如下：
Dear Mum and Dad,
How are you doing ? ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【答案】Dear Mum and Dad,
How are you doing ? I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.
Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up. Whenever I am thinking of this, I can’t help feeling grateful to you . It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies. Indeed, your inspiration seems to be a lamp, which offers me light of hope, courage and confidence. And more importantly, you are always teaching me to be good to others, and try to contribute to our society.
Dear Mum and Dad, I am now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations, So first of all, I ought to try my best to pass the exams. I am sure that through my great efforts I can and will be able to realize my beautiful dream of being a key university student. Then, I will strive to be an independent youth. The social situation I will be facing must be more competitive, so I will develop and prepare myself to be a youth with a strong sense of cooperation and competition. Believe in me, Mum and Dad, I will make a difference.
Best regards to you .
Yours sincerely,
Wang Hua
【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是“你想就父母对你的关怀和你今后的打算，以书信形式同爸爸妈妈谈谈＂。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。另外，在写作时要注意时态、语态的合理运用。
【亮点说明】
本文是一篇书信，格式正确，结构合理，内容符合要求，文中使用高级句子。I’m writing to you about my gratitude for your having brought me up and my future plan.句中运用动名词的完成式；Dear Mum and Dad, I am already 18 years old, which shows that I have grown up.ｗｈｉｃｈ引导非限制性定语从句；Whenever I am thinking of this,
I can’t help feeling grateful to you . Whenever引导时间状语从据；It is you who first give me encouragement when I meet with difficulties, especially when I am not getting along well with my studies.使用强调句式；Dear Mum and Dad, I am now a senior three student , who is facing the competitive national college entrance examinations,ｗｈｉ引导非限制性定语从句。
3.【北京市房山区2016-2017学年度高三年级第二学期第一次模拟】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim要来北京旅游，他写信寻求你对旅游地的建议，请你给他写封回信，内容包括：
（1）景点名称；
（2）参观内容；
（3）推荐理由。
注意：
（1）词数不少于50；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jim,
Glad to hear that you are coming. As for the scenery spot, I do think the Badaling Great Wall is a perfect choice, which is in Yanqing District in Beijing. As is known, the Great Wall is one of the seven wonders in the world. You can go there by bus or take a train. While climbing up the Great Wall, you can enjoy breath-taking sceneries and splendid towers. Surely, you are a true man!
Looking forward to your arrival!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是介绍长城的书信，根据要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态。内容要包括所给要点。在写作时可以使用一些好的句型来增加亮点，比如As is said in China, he who does not reach the Great Wall is not a true man.句中，as引导非限制性定语从句，指代主句，译为“正如”；定语从句who does not reach the Great Wall 修饰先行词he，he是主句的主语。最后一定要进行检查看是否有漏点或拼写错误。
4.【浙江省五校2018届高三上学期第一次联考】假定你是李华，最近你发现有学生将共享单车停到了校园内并且上了私锁。请你就此现象，写一份倡议书发表在校英文报上，倡议同学们文明使用共享单车。
内容提示：1. 共享单车带给人们的便利；
2. 如何正确使用共享单车。
注意: 1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：共享单车：shared bikes
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Li Hua
【答案】My dear fellow students, Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them. Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem. Hence, shared bikes should be left in public for next users. It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.
Li Hua
【解析】【名师点睛】英语倡议书的写法
倡议书属于应用文的一种，由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五部分组成。一般用将来时或一般现在时。题目常会给出标题、称呼、结尾、落款这四部分，考生只需完成正文即可。这类写作的正文包括倡议的原因和目的、内容以及呼吁。英语倡议书的写法：
1. 引出倡议原因和目的：提倡开展某项有意义的活动，推行某种行之有效的作法。
2. 列举倡议内容和要求：倡议其实就是提建议，倡议书中所倡导的活动具有其广泛性和推广性。
3.结束语。要表示倡议者的决心和希望
写倡议书时，尽量使用具有感召力的语言，如名人名句，警句，以及对偶，排比等，提高语言的表达效果。亮点分析;本文一开始用一个长句引出倡导的原因和目的：Recently I’ve noticed shared bikes, such as Mobike and Ofo, parked in our campus, and even own locks are put on them.以这样的开头，达到开篇点题的作用。
接着用一个由as 引导的原因状语句进一步说明共享单车的原因。Shared bikes bring people great convenience as they provide an effective solution to the “last mile” problem.
在列举倡议的内容和要求时用一个连词Hence引出一个单句：shared bikes should be left in public for next users.再用一个主语从句说明这种做法的错误性;It is morally wrong that we take possession of one for our own selfish interest. 其中it是形式主语，真正的主语是后面的that从句.
最后总结时表达了自己的决心和希望。I advocate raising our awareness of using shared bikes reasonably so that everyone can benefit from this service.本句中使用了一个由so that 引导的状语从句。
总之本倡议书内容完整，比较有感召力。单句和复句的交替使用，主动和被动的交替使用，更让文章丰富多彩。
5.【云南省昆明一中2018届高三第一次摸底】假如你是中学生李华，在上个月的英语演讲比赛准备过程中，认识了外教Mr. Smith, 并得到他的帮助。现在你给他写封信表达谢意。要点如下：
1.致谢；
2.获益；
3.其它。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Mr. Smith,
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Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Mr Smith,
I’m LiHua, a student from Y u Cai Middle School, whom you helped in my preparation for the English Speech C ontest last month. So I’m writing to express my gratitude.
Your classes are unforgettable, where not only could I learn more knowledge on speech but I had a lot of fun. You were always listening to my speech carefully no matter how many mistakes I made. Above all, you helped me to correct these mistakes with patie nce. But for your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize.
What a great influence you had on me. I’m determined to work hard at my study in order to be a useful person who can make a contribution to our country and society.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文为提纲式作文，要求写感谢信。感谢信的结构第一段表明写信目的，第二段感谢的原因，第三段自己的收获。
亮点：
高级词汇：express my gratitude，unforgettable，more。。。than。。。，patience，be determined to do ，make a contribution to
灵活运用从句：
I’m LiHua, a student from Yu Cai Middle School, whom you helped in my preparation for the English Speech Contest last month. （定语从句）
Your classes are unforgettable, where not only could I learn more knowledge on speech but I had a lot of fun.（定语从句）
You were always listening to my speech carefully no matter how many mistakes I made. （让步状语）
高级句式加强语气
But for your kind help, I couldn’t have got the first prize. （虚拟语气）
What a great influence you had on me.（感叹句）
6.【山西省（康杰中学，忻州一中，长治二中，晋城一中，临汾一中）2018届高三上学期第二次名校联合考试】假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack对中国的铁路很感兴趣，想乘坐火车旅行。请根据以下要点提示，写一封书信，介绍中国铁路系统。
1.火车类型：髙铁(HSR)(G)(300 km/h)；
动车(CRH)(D)(200 km/h)；
快车(Express)(T/Z/K)(100 km/h)；
2.火车优点：安全，可以观赏沿途风景，省钱。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Jack, I’m honoured that you show great interest in our trains. Now we have three kinds of trains. The traditional one is the express train, which is slow but cheap, with letter K/T/Z marked on the ticket. Another one is CRH, running at the speed of 200 kilometers per hour, and you can see letter D on the ticket. However, the fastest train is HSR traveling up to 300 kilometers per hour. Their tickets are marked with letter G.
Traveling by train is safe over a long distance. Besides, you can see the beautiful scenery along the railway. It won’t cost you too much.
Looking forward to your visit to China!
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】试题分析：试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节。认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡
词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】
7. 【山东省菏泽市七县一中（郓城一中、曹县一中等）2018届高三上学期期中】假定你是李华，你校国际学生中心（International Student Center）将在本周六举办一年一度的假日派对，请给你的留学生朋友Jack写一封邀请信。主要内容包括：
1.排队时间、地点；
2.派对活动内容；
3.期待他的参与。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’d like to tell you that the International Student Center in our school will hold an annual holid ay party in the school sports center this Saturday, whose theme is “fun”.
There are some activities for students to choose from in this party. Firstly, indoor swimming contests are
especially for swimming lovers just to have fun. Secondly, there will be a student concert where we can really entertain and relax ourselves. What’s more, an activity for making friends will be arranged to help us communicate across borders and cultures, happily and freely.
Please join us to enjoy the special fun. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是李华，你校国际学生中心（International Student Center）将在本周六举办一年一度的假日派对，请给你的留学生朋友Jack写一封邀请信。考虑用一般将来时来写。要点：1.排队时间、地点；2.派对活动内容；3.期待他的参与。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: have fun玩得开心，What’s more另外。还使用了定语从句I’d like to tell you that the International Student Center in our school will hold an annual holiday party in the school sports center this Saturday, whose theme is “fun”.和定语从句 Secondly, there will be a student concert where we can really entertain and relax ourselves.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。
8.【江西省百所名校2018届高三第一次联合考试】假定你是李华，外教David想在你市租房，碰巧你家附近小区有房子出租。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail，向他介绍租房价格、房屋位置、租期等相关事宜。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
I heard that you are seeking a house to live in.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear David,
I heard that you are seeking a house to live in. As it happens, there are some vacant houses in my neighborhood. Now, let me introduce something to you.
The neighborhood is located at No. 156, Lianhua Road. It is convenient to go to school because lots of buses pass there. As the renting poster says, you should pay 800 yuan each month for one bedroom. In addition, you will rent the house for one year at least, and the rental should be paid half a year. More importantly, the air here is very fresh and the surroundings are beyond description. I’m sure that you will be content with it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】书面表达的解题思路：
1.确定文章的体裁，本题所要求写的书面表达是电子邮件，那么首先就需要知晓邮件的写作特点。
2.确定文章时态的基调，确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。本文应该以一般现在时为主。
3. 给文章划分基本段落，仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示，领会要写的文章的主题，确定文章的段落，写出各段的主题句。本题中的内容要点有：①.写邮件的目的；②.介绍租房价格、房屋位置、租期等相关事宜。这样确定文章的基本段落分为两段。
4.尝试用高级词汇，使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构，也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。
5.连句成篇，在连句成篇的过程中需要注意过渡句和连接词的使用。
【范文亮点】
文中使用了一些连词使文章衔接紧密，如In addition，More importantly等。
As the renting poster says, you should pay 800 yuan each month for one bedroom.
句意：就像租房海报说的，你每个月要花800元买一间卧室。
这是一个复合句，句中As the renting poster says是非限制性定语从句，逗号之后是主句。
9. 【河南省八市2018届高三上学期第二次测评】假定你是学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自澳大利亚的高
中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动。内容包括：
1.参观校园；
2.观看介绍学校的短片；
3.体验中国的传统节日—重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Friends,
Welcome to our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear friends,
Welcome to our school. I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Council. Now I’d like to tell you something about the schedule for your visit.
First of all, I will show you around our campus so that you can get a general impression of our school. After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school. What’s more, you will participate in some activities to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival-one of the Chinese traditional festivals, which will provide a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture. I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
In a word, I hope you can have a good stay with us and enjoy yourselves.
Thanks.
Yours,
Li Hua 【解析】本文属于提纲类作文，要求假定你是学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自澳大利亚的高中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动。要注意发言稿的格式和特殊用词。考虑用一般
将来时来写。要点：1.参观校园；2.观看介绍学校的短片；
3.体验中国的传统节日—重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
10. 【吉林省百校联盟2018届高三TOP20十一月联考】
假设你是李华，请你给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，邀请他周末到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。内容包括：
1.目的和意义；
2.时间和地点；
3.义务和责任（打扫卫生，维持秩序等）。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Leslie,
I’m writing t his letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful.
The Cultural Center lies in Zhenxing road, opposite Xinhua post office. Since it’s newly opened, lots of people are needed to offer help. Meanwhile, it’s a good chance for you to get exposed to the Chinese culture. We’re expected to help do some cleaning and keep order. We can also hand out flyers, providing visitors with more detailed information to make their visits more enjoyable. Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life.
Ido hope you can join us.It will be of great benefit to you.Your early reply is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一封电子邮件，假设你是李华，请你给英国留学生Leslie写一封电子邮件，在邮件里要写明时间周末，具体的内容邀请他到振兴路，新华邮局对面刚开业的文化中心去做义工。同时还要点明活动的目的和意义。整篇邮件可以使用现在时态，第一人称。在写作时还要注意使用高级词汇和句型来提升文章档次。
亮点句子：
I’m writing this letter to invite you to the Cultural Center of our city to do voluntary work with us on Sunday, which can make our spare time colorful and meaningful.这个句子中使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。Not only can wen help those who need our help, but also we can enrich our life.这个句子中使用了连词not only… but also…来连接两个并列分句。
高考英语专题系列-高考英语作文高分万能句子高考英语作文高分万能句子 天津卷常用句型 提出主题 There is a widespread concern overthe issue that… The topic of(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. …has attracted extensive(广泛的)attention of the society. There is no consensus (一致) of opinion among people as to the view of… 展开 Firstly…secondly(besides)…thirdly(finally) For one thing…for another…what's more… On one hand…on the other hand…moreover… 转折 On the contrary… however, a coin has two sides… You can't take your cake and eatit. 自己的看法 In my opinion As far as I am concerned From my point of view, With reference to my standpoint , 喊口号 I think / I firmly support… Only through…can we… 说明事物现状(一句带过) Nowadays, there is a widespreadconcern over (the issue that)作文题目. In fact, there are both advantagesand disadvantages in 题目议题. 事物本身的优缺点 Its advantages can be seen as follows…
全国各地高考英语书面表达汇总9套 新课标I卷 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教MS Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。 示例1 Dear Ms Jenkins, I'm Li Hua from your English writing class last term. I'm writing to ask for your help. I'm applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resume. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format I've used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but I'd be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. Please find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindness! Yours, Li Hua 示例2 Dear Ms Jenkins, I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor. In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign
干货——高考英语书面表达高分套路(后附范文) 高考日益临近，大家准备好迎战了吗？最近大家看到关于写作的内容比较多呢，但是你会发现侧重的角度不同。今天小编也针对高考写作给大家准备了不可多得的好东西，掌握这些，让你对高考写作胜券在握，还不快来抢先收藏？别忘了，好东西大家一定要记得分享啊。 ◆开头段：四大内容(1、问候；2、自我介绍；3、写信缘由；4、写信目的。)； ?中间段：具体问题(主题句) +具体分析(拓展句)； ?结尾段：客套话。 ◆开头段： 1、问候。 How are you doing? / How is everything going? 2、自我介绍。 由于我们在考场上的身份几乎每年都是李华，李华的个人情况是可以由自己设定。如：I am Li Hua, a 17-year-old boy studying in … senior high school. / I am Li Hua, who ... 我们可以用上一些能给阅卷老师留下深刻印象的词汇，如：hardworking, diligent, optimistic, positive, helpful, take part in … competition, won the … prize in… competition, worked as a volunteer …等等。 3、写信缘由。 I heard that ... / My teacher told me ... / I am informed that ... / I learned that ... / I read in your newspaper / website that ... / You said in your last letter that ... 4、写信目的。 最常见书信/ 电邮的“写信目的”的最佳表述： 自荐信：Now, I am writing to apply for the job / position. 感谢信：Now, I am writing to show / express my deep gratitude to you. 邀请信：Now, I am writing to invite you to ... (as our guest / judge / instructor). 建议信：Now, I am writing to give you a hand / some suggestions that may help you. 求助信：Now, I am writing to ask you for help / to do me a favor. 道歉信：Now, I am writing to show / express my sincere apology to you.
常用文章开头的句型： 1．It is well-known that....众所周知，……。 2．There is no doubt that....毫无疑问，……。 3．Some people claim that....有人认为……。 4．It is generally believed that....普遍认为……。 5．It is widely accepted that....普遍认为……。 6. Currently there is a widespread concern over...现在，人们普遍关注的问题是……。7．With the rapid growing popularity of..., the quality of our lives has been considerably changed. 随着……的快速普及，我们的生活质量已经发生了极大变化。 8．With the development of..., an increasing number of people come to realize that.. 随着……的发展，越来越多的人意识到……。 9．Now people in growing numbers are coming to realize that...正在越来越多的人逐渐意识到……。 10．Some people think that.... To be frank, I can not agree with their opinion for the reasons below. 有人认为……，坦率地说，我不同意他们的观点，理由如下。 11．For years, ... has been seen as ..., but things are quite different now. 多年以来，……一直被看着是……，但现在情况大不一样了。 12．Last week, we made/conducted/carried out a survey about...上周，我们做了一项关于……的调查。 13．Recently we have had a discussion over...最近我们讨论了……这个问题。14．According to a recent survey, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. 依照最近的一项调查，每年有4 000 000人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。 15．The latest surveys show that quite a few children have unpleasant associations with homework. 最近的调查显示相当多的孩子对家庭作业没什么好感。 常用于文章正文的句型： 1．People’s views on...vary from person to person. 人们对……的观点因人而异。2．As a popular saying goes, “Every coin has two sides.”常言道，“事物都是一分为二的。” 3．As a proverb says, “No pains, no gains”．俗话说，“不劳则无获。” 4．Contrary to the popular thought, I prefer....与普遍的想法正相反，我更喜欢……。5．I cannot entirely agree with the idea that .... I believe….我不完全赞同这样的一个观点……，我认为……。 6．There is no denying the fact that...不可否认，……。 7．Before giving my opinion, I think it is essential to look at the argument of both sides. 在提出我自己的观点之前，我们有必要了解正反双方争论的焦点。 8．It is high time that we placed great emphasis on the improvement of…到了改进……的时候了。 9．It is high time that we put an end to... 到了结束……的时候了。 10．There is no easy solution to the problem of..., but...might be useful.
目录 突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达 (1) 第一讲提升英语写作的“三板斧” (3) 第二讲熟练写作的10类体裁 (18) 《突破2020-2022高考英语专题：书面表达》 【高考命题规律】 1.语用目的——讲好中国故事，增强文化自信 高考书面表达的情境设置真实，任务要求符合考生能力水平，又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容，能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时，注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果，运用中国元素讲好中国故事，增强文化自信。 2.文体形式——以应用文为主，主要考查书信/电子邮件 从近几年高考全国卷来看，书面表达主要考查应用文，其中以电子邮件为主，邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多，只有2018年全国卷Ⅱ考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体，近几年来，当仁不让地成为了命题专家的最爱，而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。 3.提示类型——以提纲作文为主，试题的开放性越来越强 近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主，但提示越来越简洁，试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示，又留有供其自由发挥的空间，既让低水平的考生有话可写，又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会，保证试卷的区分度。 【掌握备考策略】 ●普通作文VS高分作文——找出差距才能目标明确
●高考书面表达评分细则——各省可能根据情况稍有不同 1.本题满分为25分，按5个档次给分。如果是第四档(16-20分)，那么就给18分。好处是：阅卷教师们“没有风险”，怎么都说得过去。坏处是：低分下不去，高分上不来。 2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 4.评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。 5.评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6.如书写较差以致影响交际，可将其分数降低一个档次。 ●书面表达评价表——自我评价与同伴互评 写作训练时，教师评价和修改虽重要，但自我评价和同伴互评效果更佳，可以借鉴下表进行自我评价和同伴互评。
高考英语书面表达经典范文大全（14个类型） Part One: 提纲式作文： 1. 假设你是一名新闻记者，请根据以下表格信息给英语报社写一篇新闻报道。 【参考范文】 The H1N1 flu broke out in Mexico in April this year and it has spread to many countries in the world. To our disappointment, by the afternoon on August 30, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported in a school in Henan province, resulting in the fact that all the middle schools there had to delay the new term. Fortunately, it is estimated by the experts that the death rate of the H1N1 flu virus is lower than 1%, still lower when compared with that of SARS and bird flu. The best way they give the public to prevent it is to wash hands more often, drink more water and have enough sleep. With the help of our government, we believe that we are able to win the battle against the disease. 【好词好句】 1. To our disappointment, 80 confirmed cases of H1N1 flu had been reported... , resulting in the fact that .... 2. It is estimated by the experts that...when compared with... 2. 据报道中国每年都会发生几十万起交通事故, 许多人都因此而丧生.请针对这一社会问题按以下要点写一篇短文。 1. 描述此社会问题； 2. 造成此状况的主要原因(2至3个原因)； 3. 提出解决的办法（2个） 注意: 1.词数100左右 2.可适当发挥,以使行文连贯 【参考范文】 It is reported that many people lose their lives annually in China, owing to hundreds of thousands of traffic accidents. Several factors account for the serious problem. Firstly, the fast growing number of private cars contribute to heavy traffic jams, making it likely for car accidents to happen. Secondly, drunk driving may be a deadly killer. Thirdly, some drivers ignore the speed limit and drive too fast. Faced with this severe problem, the government should take firm action to decrease the accidents. In my view, it would be a good idea to develop public transportation. Meanwhile, we should appeal to people to follow traffic rules, and get tough with drunk drivers. Only in this way can we create a harmonious world and enjoy a happier life. 【好词好句】
词组 make beds意思是“整理床铺”, make use of意思是“利用”, make money挣钱, make a fortune: “发财”, make faces“做鬼脸”等等。 首先,尤其重要的,最重要的above all 偶然,无意中by accident 对(于)…很积极 be active in 合计为add up to 承让错误admit one’s mistake 接受某人的建议take / follow one’s advice 就…提出建议 give advice on 建议某人做某事 advice sb. to do sth. 后天 the day after tomorrow 毕竟;终究 after all 违心against one’s will
在…岁时 at the age of 实现目标achieve one’s aim 在空中;悬而未决 in the air 在户外,在露天里 in the open air 在机场 at the airport 火警the fire alarm 满腔怒火be filled with anger 因某人之言行而生气 be angry at sth. 生某人的气be angry with sb. 通知make an announcement 相继地,按顺序地 one after another 相互,彼此(三者或三者以上之间)one another 相互(指两者之间) each other 没有回答give no answer 为…而担心be anxious about 急于做某事be anxious to do sth. 分开住live apart
●2018年全国卷I 假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1. 到达时间； 2. 合适的礼物； 3. 餐桌礼仪。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writ ing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua ●2018年全国卷II 你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Together，内容包括： 1. 短片内容：学校的发展； 2. 放映时间、地点； 3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Notice In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it. To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, every one of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments. The Student Union June 8, 2018●2018年全国卷III 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括： 1. 学校的体育场馆； 2. 主要的运动项目； 3. 你喜欢的项目。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter,
高考英语书面表达佳句及高分范文 告知信结构 2019年全国II卷 假定你是校排球队队长李华。请写封邮件告知你的队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛 内容包括： 1. 比赛信息； 2. 赛前准备； 3. 表达期待。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
『佳句赏析』 ?描述写信背景、目的的佳句 ?A fierce volleyball match will take place in our school stadium on the first Sunday of next month. ?As the captain of our school volleyball team, I'm writing to invite you to participate in our game. ?I'm writing to let you know that we will have a volleyball competition next month. ?描述赛前准备的佳句 ?For good performance for the competition, we must make full preparations and practice hard. ?As a member of the team, proper preparations on your part will be appreciated. ?So starting tomorrow, we all need to train for 2 hours after school every day. In addition, we should avoid getting hurt during the training. ?描述诚邀参赛、表达期望的佳句 ?Knowing that you're excellent prayer, I really hope you can be the member of our team. ?With you on our team, we have every hope of defeating them. ?Only if you join our team will we be the strongest team that we can win this fierce match. ?With you participating, we will win the competition. 2019年全国 I 卷 假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括: 1. 写信目的； 2. 个人优势； 3. 能做的事情。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
高考英语书面表达建议信必备开头结尾 建议信必备开头结尾 开头： 【例句一】你在上封信中问我如何快速高效的提高英语，我给你一些有用的并且有帮助的建议。 You have asked me for my advice on how to improve English effectively and efficiently in your last letter, I will give some useful and helpful suggestions. 【例句二】你在上封信中说你不知道如何与你的同学相处，我推荐三个实用的建议。 I have received your letter saying that you had troubles on how to get along well with your classmates, I recommend three practical proposals. 【例句三】我写信来回答你上封信中关于如何流利准确的说英语的问题。 I am writing in reply to your last letter on how to speak English fluently and accurately. 结尾： 【例句一】我希望我的建议对你最后的决定有帮助。 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making. 【例句二】我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。 I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. 【例句三】请认真考虑我的建议。 Please take good consideration of my advice. 【例句四】非常希望这些建议对你有很大的帮助。如果有其他的我可以为你做的，请让我尽快知道。我确定你在不久之后能解决这些问题。 Hopefully these suggestions will be of great help to you. If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible. I'm sure you can solve your problem before long. Directions: In this section, you are required to write a letter in reply to a friend’s inquiry about applying for admission to your college or university. You should write about 100 words and base your composition on the outline given in Chinese below: 1. 建议报考的专业及理由；2．报考该专业的基本条件； 3．应当如何备考。 Dear Tom, When it comes to which major you should choose, I propose that you apply for the major of English. To begin with, English is the most popular language in the world, which is widely used in all fields such as teaching, translation, foreign trade and so on. What’s more, it goes
一、假定你是李华,你所在学校要举办英语戏剧节(The English Drama Festival)。你们想邀请外教Peter参加。请你写一封信给Peter,要点如下: 1.英语戏剧节的活动内容; 2.邀请Peter一起表演一个节目; 3.期望Peter对本次活动给出建议。 注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Dear Peter, The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week.Knowing that you are interested in English drama,I am writing to invite you to participate. A variety of activities will be included in the festival,such as singing,crosstalk and so on.You are expected to put on a performance with us.In my opinion,it will be a good combination of your culture and ours.Besides,since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival,we are at a loss about how to arrange it properly.Your advice will be of great value to us.Please inform us of your arrival in advance so that early arrangements can be made. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 二、假定你是武汉晨光中学的李华,你的澳大利亚笔友Mark最近给你发来邮件,说他准备参加武汉12月31日举办的冬季马拉松比赛(marathon race),希望你帮助他预订好旅馆,并带他游览市内著名景点(如黄鹤楼the Yellow Crane Tower,东湖East Lake)。请你给他写封回信,内容包括: 1.回复他的要求;
高三英语复习---书面表达高分技巧（20120307） By Zhang Shiqin Teaching aims: we are trying to teach sts how to write a good composition, or how to make a composition better so as to get a good mark in an examination especially in the National College Entrance Examination. Teaching Procedures: Step 1高考英语书面表达高分卷常识 一．高考英语书面表达题材特点、体裁特点及出题模式： 1. 题材特点：紧扣课标，教材和考试说明； 贴近现实生活和学生生活实际，易于表达； 突出考查学生实际运用语言的能力。 2.体裁特点：利用各种体裁，以应用文（致辞、发言稿、记叙文、议论文）为主。 3.出题模式：叙事+ 议论，写人+ 议论 二．近年高考英语写作高分卷的五大特点： 1.行文逻辑科学，条理性好； 2.巧用过渡词汇，逻辑性强； 3.巧用高级词汇和复杂句式，文章品味高； 4.妙用变通式表达，文章错落有致； 5.书写规范工整，整体效果好。 三．英语写作高分卷的七大原则、八项注意︰ 七大原则八项注意 主题句原则注意审题 一二三原则注意人称 分段原则注意时态 长短句结合原则注意巧用连接词 多实少虚原则禁用汉式英语 短语优先原则注意书写 词句多变原则注意用有把握的词句 注意检查 四．高分卷书面表达段落的核心要素︰ 1. General structure Topic sentence Supporting sentences Concluding sentence 2. Linking words 3. Advanced expressions Various structures Graceful words Step 2怎样写出高分作文 一．仔细审题Analyze the topic carefully
书面表达中的高级结构 一．高级词汇 1．occur 替换think of Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. → An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. It occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. 2．devote替换spend He spe nds all his spare time in reading. → He devotes all his spare time to reading. 3．seek替换want / look for They sought ( wanted ) to hide themselves behind the trees. 4．average 替换ordinary I’m an average ( ordinary ) student. 5．but替换very The film we saw last night was very interesting. → The film we saw last night was nothing but interesting. The film we saw last night was anything but boring. 6．seat 替换sit On his way to school, he found an old lady seated (sitting) by the road, looking worried. 7．suppose 替换should He is supposed to ( should ) have driven more slowly. 8．appreciate 替换thank Thank you very much for you help. → We appreciate your help very much. / Your help is much appreciated. 9．the case替换true I don’t think it is the cas e ( true ). 10．on替换as soon as As soon as he arrived, he began his research. → On his arrival, he began his research.. 11．due to替换because of He arrived late due to ( because of ) the storm. 12．cover替换walk/read After covering (walking) 10 miles, we all felt tired. 13．contribute to替换be helpful/useful Plenty of memory work is undoubtedly helpful to English study. → Plenty of memory work will undoubtedly contribute to English study. 14．round the corner 替换coming soon/ nearby ① The summer vacation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans? ② Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 15．come to light替换discover The family were so pleased when they discovered the lost jewels. → The family were so pleased when the lost jewels came to light. 16．have a ball替换have a good time/ enjoy oneself After visiting the workshop, we went back to school. Every one of us had a ball ( had a good time ). 17．come up with替换think of
高考英语书面表达必备6 1.【浙江省学军中学高三上学期第四次月考英语试题】 假如你是高三的学生，最近你就高三模拟考试该偏难还是该偏易这个问题进行了一次调查。请结合下表内容，用英语写一篇短文，介绍有关调查情况，并发表自己的看法。 注意：1．词数120左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter． 答案： Recently I have made an investigation on whether a model-test paper for Senior Three should be difficult or easy．Opinions are divided on this matter． Some students think that a difficult exam is just like a challenge．The harder, the better．It can help students find out where they are weak in studies and improve their learning approaches. Others，however，are against a difficult exam．In their opinion，if it is very difficult，they may become discouraged and feel terrible about the coming College Entrance Examination．Besides，with an easy exam，they can get high marks and gain confidence． I prefer it to be neither too difficult nor too easy, because if it is too easy, teachers will not know how we are actually getting on with our studies, and if it is too difficult, we will lose heart 2.【浙江省宁波效实中学高三上学期期中考试英语试题】 假如你是来自美国的Peter，在中国留学期间，经常在马路上看到一些人不遵守交通规则，于是向某报社写信反映此情况，内容如下： 1．部分行人过马路时慢慢悠悠或攀爬护栏； 2．某些骑自行车的人擅闯红灯；