基础写作
——句子结构准确，内容完成、连贯
（A studying plan）
新星高级中学熊德智
前言：2007年广东省高考英语试卷结构已经作出重大改革，其中作文题由原来的1篇变成2篇、分数由原来25分增加为40分，与阅读（含信息匹配）等值，因而有专家认为“得写作者得天下”。
I. Decide whether the following passage is a good writing.（Students are required to read aloud together or read silently individually）
I am in great need of your help. I am filling in my wills about universities soon, including my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one should be put first. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University. What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University.
Looking forward to your advice and thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Du Li
(07潮州市质量检测卷, 收集于东莞教研网) 学生判断所读内容优劣的依据是：2007年《考试大纲说明》对基础写作的要求：1.句子结构准确 2.内容完整、连贯3.________（笫3点不属于《考试大纲说明》中的内容，但学生应自主猜测（内容为“卷面整洁”）II. 如何做到句子结构准确？（学生主要从写作中常用的几种句型入手：简单句，复合句，并列句等）
1.如果是简单句，句子结构是否符合简单句的5种基本结构。哪5种？
1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______5),________
（Key 1）
请从简单句的基本结构分析并找出下列句子中的错误（注意谓语部分）。
a. I afraid that I can’t pass the exam.
b. Most students against buying gate tickets when entering the park.
c. My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.
2.如果是复合句，句子结构是否符合复合句的相关结构。
什么是复合句？_______________________________________(Key 2)
英语写作中常的复合句有：
A.名词性从句，包括1),_________2),_________3),________4),_______ (Key 3)
●常用的引导名词性从句的引导词：____________________________________________等。(Key 4)
●特别注意不要将that 和what混用，该如何区别？_____________________________(Key 5)
用that 和what填空。
1.It worried her a bit ____ her hair was turning grey.
2._____ I need is more time.
3.My brother isn’t ___ he used to be.
4.____ he has become a rich man is known to all in our town. (Key 6)
B. 定语从句（常用关系代词：which…, that…, who…, whom…..,whose…, when…, where…, why…等）
C. 状语从句（常用引导词：when, where, before, after, because, so that, if , though, although, as if , as though, unless,
as soon as, once…等）
●使用复合句时，注意引导词的运用。注意下列句中划线部分的错误。
a. Before went to bed, I used to watch TV for a while.
b. Though English is hard to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well.
c. When stayed in the country , I made a foreign frien
d.
1.如果是并列句，检查并列连词(常用：and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而)，or, otherwise, for, so, therefore, not only…but also…, either… or…, both…and…, etc)是否使用正确，并列结构的主语和谓语有没有混用。
1).并列句与复合句的区别：(在括号内填上并列名或复合句)
a. T hough English is difficult to learn, I’ve managed to learn it well.( )
b. English is difficult to learn, but I’ve managed to learn it well. ( )
(并列句是句与句之间的并列，对等，平行关系；复合句是包含与被包含的关系，即：主句包含从句、从句被主句包含)
2.在基础写作中，祈使句和感叹句用得比较少，但如使用，必须做到结构正确（祈使句常以动词原形开头，e.g. Finish your homework quickly. Don’t eat snacks in the class.）如果是感叹句，请正确使用how , what e.g. How hard our English monitor studies! What a hard-working girl our English monitor is!
●试分析以下5个句子是否结构准确，并找出句中的一处错误，在错误之处划线，并改正在后面横线上。
1.I’m Lu Shumin, and born in Dongguan in August 1988. __________________
此句结构为：_______________________________________
2.From 1994 to 2000，I studied in Dalang Primary school , going to Donghua Middle School of Dongguan the
following one year, then I came to study in New Star School 5 years ago.
__________________
此句结构为：_______________________________________
3.The main subjects included Chinese, maths, English, physics, politics, chemistry and computer that I studied
at school. __________________
此句结构为：_______________________________________
4.I like English and piano best or I am very good at them.
__________________
此句结构为：_______________________________________
5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, playing piano, but also I love driving a car.
__________________
此句结构为：_______________________________________
III. 如何保证内容完整？
1.尽量利用好原材料的要点信息（按序给出的句子、列举的要点或提供的图片），以便节省时间。
2.据要表达的内容自己重新组织安排要点，尤其是表格题。
Example 1.（From潮州市质量检测卷），将笫一，笫二句合成一个要点。“梅州市位于广东东北部。总人口491万（2003年）。”写成：“Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million.”
Example 2.
（From潮州市质量检测卷）
将笫四句拆分成二个句子。“客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。”写成“The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community.”
Example 3：笫四部分表格中，“车程所需时间”一栏，用一个句子（However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.），而“课程设置”一栏却拆分成二个句子（What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University）
附：07潮州市质量检测卷:
梅州市位于广东东北部。总人口491万人（2003年）。梅州市是著名的世界客都。客家人的祖先源自中原, 素来崇文重教。客家人行走天下，移民世界，且在海内外商界不乏成功者，因此有“东方犹太人”之称。Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population of 4.91 million. It is the biggest of the Hakkas community in the country known as the Capital of hakkas. The ancestors of Hakkas migrated southward from Central China. Education has always been regarded as an important matter in the hakka community. Because of the Hakkas’ successes in business worldwide, they are regarded as Oriental Jews.
Looking forward to seeing you,.
Li Hua
（2006-2007学年度第一学期潮州市高三期末教学质量检测,收集于东莞教研网）
拆分原则：有利于句子表达、保证内容完整。
IV. 如何保证内容连贯？
1.前后句应有一定的逻辑性（一般可以按给出的句子、列举的要点、提供的图片者或表格的栏目顺序）。
2.尽量用好句子与句子之间的过渡词（常用连接词：and, but, therefore, however, what’s more, besides, in addition,
as a result, Firstly, secondly, for example, etc.）。
3.用好并列句中的并列连词(常用：and, but, however, nevertheless, while(而)，or, otherwise, for, so, therefore，not
only…, but also…, either…, or…, both…, and…, etc)
请从引导词或过渡词的角度分析以下范文的的连贯性。并在横线上或括号中填适当的词。
Sentence 1.__________________________________.
Sentence 2.__________________________________.( )句1与句2之间的过渡词。
Sentence 3.__________________________________.( ) 句2与句3之间的过渡词。
Sentence 4.__________________________________.( ) 句3与句4之间的过渡词。
Sentence 5.__________________________________.( ) 句4与句5之间的过渡词。
[写作要求]
1.信的开头和结尾已给出。
2.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
[评分标准]
句子结构的准确性，信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
Dear Mr. Pan,
I am in great need of your help. I am filling in my wills about universities soon, including my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one should be put first. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University. What’s more, in Zhongshan Un iversity, all the courses are taught in Chinese as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in Jinan University.
Looking forward to your advice and thank you very much.
Yours truly,
Du Li V. 注意避免常犯的错误。如：一致（主谓、人称），时态，语态，非谓语动词，单词拼写，字母大小写（句首、
专有名词〈包括人名、地名〉），连词等。
在后面横线上改正下面篇章中的划线部分的错误。(要求指出错误类型)
语篇改错
Dear Mr. Pan,
I am in great need of your help. I was filling in my wills about universities soon, 1._______
included my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one 2.______
should be put first. The former one recruits more student than the latter one, 3._______
that seems to give him more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go 4.______
to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.
What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses taught in Chinese 5.______
as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in
Jinan University. Look forward to your advice or thank you very much. 6.______
Yours truly,
Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population 7._____
of 4.91 million. He is the biggest of the Hakkas community in the country known as the 8.______
Capital of hakkas. The ancestors of Hakkas migrating southward from Central China. 9.______
Education has always regarded as an important matter in the hakka community. 10.______
Because of the Hakkas’ successes in business worldwide, they are regarde d as Oriental Jews.
Looking forward to seeing you,.
Li Hua
（Key 10）
VI. 写作训练
第一节：基础写作（15分）
请根据下面的信息提示，使用5个规范的英语句子描述所给的全部信息内容。
[信息提示]
假设你是李华，想申请到一家外资企业工作。对方要求你用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况。短文包括下列全部内容。
[写作要求] 1.情况介绍必须采用短文形式；
2.只能使用5个句子表达全部的内容；
3.将5个句子组织成连贯的短文;
4.参考词汇：陶瓷 porcelain;
[评分标准]
句子结构的准确性；信息内容的完整性和连贯性。
(Key 11)
VII. 课后巩固：准确无误地熟记下列单词或词组并背诵句型。
单词或词组：
小学、 第二中学、 主要课程、省、市、语文、数学、英语、物理、化学、电脑、体育、政治、地理、历史、特长、业余爱好、集邮、流行音乐、被中山大学录取
句型：(要求结合自身情况灵活运用)
1．I ’m …, born in
… in /on…. 19__.
2. From 19__ to … ，I studied in … Primary school and I went to … Middle School( Senior High School) of …the following …years.
3．The main subjects I studied (study) at school included (include)…
4. I like … best and I am very good at them.
5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy …, but also I love ….
6. It takes …hour(s) to go to Zhongshan Unive rsity by bus/car/train/plane.
7. All the courses are taught in… as well as ….
8. … is the only language used in … University.
9. The former one recruits more students than the latter one, which seems to give me more hope to go there.
后记：亲的同学们，基础写作其实是任务写作的基石，只有基础写作中语言表达的优劣，影响的是40作文得
分的高低。扎实地练吧！成功一定属于你们！！！
Key 1.SV 2. SVO 3.SVP 4.SVOO 5.SVOC
(S—Subject V—Verb/Predicate O—Object P—Predicative C—Complement
Key 2: 含有从句的句子叫做复合句
Key 3：主语从句，宾语从句，表语从句，同位语从句
Key 4：that, if / whether, who(ever), whom(ever), whose, what(ever), which(ever), when, where, how, why, etc.
Key 5：1. What 引导的名词性从句时可有2种意义。
i.保持原有的疑问句意义。e.g. I don’t know what he wants.
ii.“……东西”、“……事情（事物）”相当于由“先行词+that 或which “ 引导的定语从句(即what可被称之为兼先行词的关系代词)。
e.g. That’s what he wants.
2.选用that还是what要根据关联词在从句中是否担任成分而定，what 要担当成份，而that不做成份（引导名
词性从句，本身没有词义），有时可以省略。
Key 6: 1. that 2. What 3. what 4. That
Key 7. a.复合句b.并列句
Key 8.
1.I’m Lu Shumin, and born in Dongguan in August 1988. _去掉and或在后加I went________________
此句结构为：_____简单句__________________________________
2.From 1994 to 2000，I studied in Dalang Primary school , going to Donghua Middle School of Dongguan the
following one year, then I came to study in New Star School 5 years ago.
_______and went/ and I went ___________
此句结构为：____________并列句___________________________
3.The main subjects included Chinese, maths, English, physics, politics, chemistry and computer that I studied at
将that I studied at school放在. school. Subjects 后
此句结构为：_________________复合句______________________
4.I like English and piano best or I am very good at them.
___and_______________
此句结构为：________________并列句________________________
5. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, playing piano, and I love driving a car.
_____but also_____________
此句结构为：______________并列句___________________________
Sentence 1.________but______which______________.
Sentence 2._____________which__________________.( )句1与句2之间的过渡词。
Sentence 3._____________while__________________.( However ) 句2与句3之间的过渡词。
Sentence 4.______________as well as_______________.( What’s more )句3与句4之间的过渡词。
Sentence 5.__________________________________.( Compared to this ) 句4与句5之间的过渡词。
（Key 10）
Dear Mr. Pan,
I am in great need of your help. I was filling in my wills about universities soon, 1._am______
included my faviourite Zhongshan University, but I am wondering which one 2._and_____
should be put first. The former one recruits more student than the latter one, 3.___students____
that seems to give him more hope to go there. However, it takes 1 hour to go 4.__which____
to Zhongshan University by bus while only 20 minutes to Jinan University.
What’s more, in Zhongshan University, all the courses taught in Chinese 5.___is taught___
as well as English. Compared to this, English is the only language used in
Jinan University. Look forward to your advice or thank you very much. 6.__Looking____
Yours truly,
Meizhou City is situated in the northeast of Guangdong Province with a population7._Guangdong____
of 4.91 million. He is the biggest of the Hakkas community in the country known as the 8.____It__
Capital of hakkas. The ancestors of Hakkas migrating southward from Central China. 9.__migrated____
Education has always regarded as an important matter in the hakka community. 10_has always been regarded_ Because of the Hakkas’ successes in business worldwide, they are regarde d as Oriental Jews.
Looking forward to seeing you,.
Li Hua
Key 11.
I’m Li Hua, born in Chaozhou in February 1987. From 1994 to 2000 ，I studied in Guangming Primary school and I went to No. 2 Middle School of Chaozhou the following six years. The main subjects I studied at school included Chinese, maths, English, physics, chemistry and computer. I like English and computer best and I am very good at them. In my spare time, not only do I enjoy listening to music, collecting stamps, but also I love making porcelain .（83字）
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Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 word s based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawi ng, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points) 参考范文 As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, a gentleman and a lady are sitting calmly on the reserved seats for babies and their mothers while a mother holding a baby in her arm is st anding beside the seats. The drawing exposes a common social phenomenon and is most thought-provoking. The implied meaning of the drawing is worth discussing. To begin with, manners should be improved in public places. Some people lack the necessary public awareness so that they pay no atten tion to the rules and regulations designed for public places. As a result, t hey disturb the normal order of public places. What’s more, the trad itional moral values should be enhances. It is well known that to respect the elderly and take care of the young is one of our traditional virtues in our country. At present, some people are so selfish that they even neglect our traditional virtues in public places, which does no good to the healthy development of our society. In one word, we should make a deep reflection on our own de eds.
高考英语应对策略与基础写作指导 2009-09-06 第一讲：如何写人 一、写作指导 高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题： 1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的`全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。 3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 4．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。 二、常用词语 外貌特征：beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking， pretty，short，strong, tall， thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc. 性格特点：absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talkative， warm-hearted，wise，etc. 出生年龄：a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , during his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc.
广东高考英语卷基础写作指导（系列1） 第一讲记叙文：如何写人 一、写作指导 高考英语基础写作中的写人侧重人物的介绍，可以用第一人称(如写求职信)，也可以用第三人称，时态常常用一般现在时和一般过去时，具体的人称和时态要依据写作的要求来确定。写作过程中要注意以下几个方面的问题： 1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，但英语基础写作需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。 2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，比如求职要重点突出学历、经历，新闻报道要重点突出事迹，介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点，等等。 3．正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。 4．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、兴趣等常用一般现在时，而描写人物的出生、教育背景、经历、事迹常用一般过去时。 二、常用词语 外貌特征： beautiful, big nose, black eyes，fat, good-looking，handsome, healthy, near-sighted，ordinary-looking，pretty，short，strong, tall，thin, with a big nose, with a big smile, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, etc. 性格特点： absent-minded, attractive，bad-tempered，be ready to help others, bright，charming，confident, diligent，friendly, generous, have a good temper, humorous，independent, kind, kind-hearted，lazy，narrow-minded, naughty，patient，think of others, smart，talk ative，warm-hearted，wise，etc. 出生年龄： a twenty-five-year-old young man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 20, be born on February 12th, 1987 , d uring his childhood, in one’s fifties, live a happy/ hard life, spend his childhood in the countryside, the son of a poor family, when he was a small boy, etc. 兴趣爱好： be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be good at singing, be interested in English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in one’s work, be worried about, do well in his research work, ,enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire to do, look forward to doing sth., long for (long to do), make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in doing; wish to do, work hard at his studies, etc. 教育背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test，a master’s degree, get on well with one’s lessons, give sb. a passing grade, ，go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from Physics Department of Qinghua University, his father was very strict with him, lay a good foundation in English, major in history, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, study hard at, take several courses at school, take an active part in classwhen at college, etc. 经历事迹： become a member of the team, concentrate oneself to doing sth., devote oneself to one’s business, do sth with great determination and perseverance, do research into this field, encourage sb to do sth, fight for our revolutionary course, give up one’s life for sth, have a go od way of doing sth, have a talent for language, make up one’s mind to do sth., overcome many difficulties, receive the Nobel Prize for physics, serve as nurse, set a new world record of 110 metre hurdling, try one’s best to do
【篇一】高考英语作文预测及范文 给朋友写电子邮件 Dear Tony, I am Li Hua, a boy of 16 from China. I'm a middle school student. I'm glad to read your information on the Internet and I know you want to make an e-pal with a Chinese. I want to be your friend and wish to know more about the culture of the USA. I'm good at English and I think we can help each other to know more about America and China by sending e-mails. We can also chat on the Internet in English or Chinese. I like table tennis, enjoy singing and prefer popular music. At the same time, I like collecting stamps and traveling around in my spare time. I hope you can come to visit China, and I'll show you around many places of interest. I'm looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【篇二】高考英语作文预测及范文 感谢帮过你的人 Last week I saw a young man giving up his seat to a woman with a baby in her arms on a bus. To my great surprise, the woman did not thank the young man; on the contrary, she glared at him coldly, which made him embarrassed. 上周，我在公共汽车上看到一个年轻人给一个怀抱婴儿的妇女让座。让我感到奇怪的是，这位妇女没有感谢这位年轻人，反而用冷淡的目光盯着他，使他感到困窘。 This incident set me thinking. If everyone acted like that woman, who would like to help others? And what would our society be like? 这事令我深思。如果每个人都像那个妇女那样，谁还愿意帮助别人?我们这个社会将会变成什么样子?
【篇一】高考英语作文预测及范文 我的未来职业规划 My career planning As a college student on how well the future is the way I have been considering.I always want to design their own professional staff and art computer design to enhance their professional learning.Just enter the school at the University,with a lot of hopes and illusions,it will also be full of confusion.I think I should do T-shaped professionals.Out of college,and strive to win the community the opportunity to practice.More respect,to find really suitable for their own.In the work of cultivating the ability to increase the handling capacity of things,human relationships,such as processing power.Engaged in design work,design their own brands,so a designer.This semester also choose to enjoy this art class,I am artistic,very yearning,is also pursuing,although there was no professional training.But I still hope that they can make their own personality to come. 【篇二】高考英语作文预测及范文 写给外国朋友的一封信 Dear Henry, I am glad to receive your letter.Thank goodness, I just know today is so beautiful.I have completed the college entrance examination eventually,which make me amaze and relax.You know,I was tired of studying when you sat in an annoying classroom everyday.But now I am so comfortable and I will have a good rest in future.For example,playing basketball and riding a bike are my favorate sports,which can make me enjoy myself everyday.During the time,I also reading some world-famous books from which I will gain a lot of knowledge.Surely,I will accompany my beloved parents to my hometown or other places.Joining the social activities are necessary, from which not only I can enrich my experience,but also contact with society better than before,At last, thank you for your help. Best wishes! Li Hua 【篇三】高考英语作文预测及范文 高考英语作文预测：计划与愿望
阅读下面漫画，先对漫画的内容进行描述，然后对这一现象发表自己的看法。（100词左右） 参考词汇： 西瓜皮：water-melon skin 长凳： bench The boy and the girl in the picture sat on a bench talking merrily while eati ng a water-melon. When the y went away they left the melon’s sk in on the bench, making it very dirty. They didn’t want to take any trouble throwing it in to the dustbin although it was very near where they were sitting. Instea d, they said that there wo uld be someone who should clean the rubbish. However, what they did violate public morality. If everyone behaves in this way, the world will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a wor ld of diseases. Bes ides, dustmen will have a very, very hard job to clean the world w e live i n. 用心爱心专心- 1 -
高三英语基础写作训练 导读：一、基础写作训练的方法 1.利用课文的词、句复习，训练学生的组句能力。从词和句入手，将每个单元课文的词和句与基础写作结合起来，是培养和提高学生的英语能力的有效途径。这不仅能帮助提高学生记忆和灵活应用词汇的能力，而且还有助于训练学生语句表达的正确性。 (1)归纳词汇和句型，帮助学生建立对词、句使用的感性认识。写作是一种语言的输出形式，只有大量的语言输入，语言输出才有可能;只有积累了一定的感受和大量的语言素材，写作才有可能进行。为了帮助学生记忆课文中的单词和短语，达到积累语言素材，掌握基本语法知识与语句结构的目的，教师可以从训练学生归纳每个单元课文中出现的重要词汇、短语和常用句型入手，使学生对句型结构的认识更加清楚，并对词、句的使用语境形成感性的认识。 (2)操练词汇和句型，训练学生的记忆和使用词、句的能力。为了使学生掌握和应用课文中所学词汇和句型，教师应为学生创设多层次的练习活动，拓宽写作的训练途径。教师可采用将学生从课文中归纳的词汇、句型进行词类转换、习惯用法、句型转换、完型填空、写短文等形式的训练，帮助提高学生的.记忆和使用词、句的能力。 二、借鉴课文词、句进行仿写。 通过提供情景让学生模仿造句，不仅可以降低写作难度，而且可以增加学生写作的兴趣、自信和成就感，使学生的遣词造句的能力在
实践中得到提升。 三、借鉴课文句型，训练写作多种表达与技巧，拓展学生思维。 教师在教学实践中会发现，学生在基础写作中往往出现句式雷同、语句呆板、行文单一等现象，缺乏用5个句子有效表达和传输信息的能力。因此，教师就有必要继续进一步加强句子多样化表达、句子转换替代、句子合并等训练，教会学生使用不同的短语、句型结构表达同一的意义;同时，还让学生明白写作的逻辑原则:一个句子表达的信息量越多，而且使用的句子越精练、清楚，那么句意表达和传输信息就越有效。 四、利用课文体裁，训练学生谋篇布局的能力。 教师会发现高三学生在写作中存在的另一个问题是层次不清、结构散乱以及逻辑性不强，这是因为学生缺乏谋篇布局的能力。针对这方面问题，教师可以在教学中利用课文的体裁进行文章结构方面的训练以及进行句子、段落间的连接训练。 【2015年高三英语基础写作训练】 1.高中作文写作基础训练 2.基础训练六作文写作教案 3.高中英语写作的基础训练 4.小升初英语作文写作基础 5.英语毕业论文的写作基础 6.初中英语写作的基础
2020最新高考英语作文预测：传统文化 近几年，高考英语写作多次出现对中国传统文化的考查，例如唐诗、剪纸等。国学更是这两年中国社会绝对教育热点，因此对这个话题一定要备考充分! 【题目要求】 假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Henry非常喜欢中国，来信询问你校中国国学经典(Chinese classics)的上课情况。请你依照下列要点写一封回信： 1. 表达问候; 2. 介绍国学上课情况; 3. 表达祝愿。 注意：1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 标题和落款已给出，词数不计算在内。 Dear Henry, _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________
____________________________________________ Sincerely yours, Li Hua 【优秀满分范文】 Dear Henry, How is everything going? I feel glad to introduce the study of Chinese classics in our school. First, we have special textbooks about Chinese classics and professional teachers. Second, we’re scheduled once a week to study Tang and Song poetry. Third, there are weekly after-class activities to learn Chinese calligraphy and watercolor painting, from which we’ve been benefited a lot. I hope that through learning, we can have a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture. Now that you’re interested in China’s classical culture, I will send a textbook and some related materials to you soon. Wish you success in your study and all the best! Sincerely yours, Li Hua
写作指导 (3) 看图作文 看图作文也叫做图画式作文，是一种常见的高考题型。它是指根据图画所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事，或通过几幅相关的图画说明某个问题或得出某个结论。一般性图画式作文都包含六个要点：时间、地点、人物、事件、过程、结果。这些要点往往是缺一不可的，否则整篇文章就不完整。 看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。 一、看图作文的考查特点 1．命制思路特点 看图作文的主要考查特点是生动、形象、直观、图文并茂。它要求行文时做到：主题明确，即文章能概括图画所反映的中心思想；图文一致，即文章能体现图画中所反映的主要内容。 2．能力表现特点 看图作文要求考生具有敏锐的观察力，丰富的想像力、严谨的逻辑思维能力、冷静的分析能力，以及最终将以上能力综合体现出来的良好的书面表达能力。 3．语言表达特点 表达准确，过渡自然。看图作文行文时要注意词汇与句型的精心选择，准确表达。表达过程中要注意图画信息的连接方式，尤其要注意句与句，段与段之间的
意思连贯。为此，考生应学会灵活使用连接词、指示代词等，适当地根据自己的需要和文章的进展调整信息出现的顺序。 二、看图作文的写作步骤 1．仔细审题，确定要点 2．紧扣要点，组句成篇 3．表达准确，过渡自然 4．规范书写，检查润色 美国中学生Jeff将要到你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。 注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好； 2．词数不少于60。
Dear Jeff， My name is Li Hua.I’m from Beijing Hongxing Middle School.I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing. ___________________________________________________________________ _____ Best wishes. Yours， Li Hua 案例分析⊙ 1．认真审题，确定人称和时态 通过阅读题目，我们可以确定：此文的体裁是说明文，须用第一人称，时态主要用一般现在时，同时，也可适当使用一般将来时。 2．挖掘材料，列出要点和提纲 要认真观察每幅图片，同时还要注意参考词汇、图中所给的文字提示，准确而全面地理解图片大意。通过观察图片，我们可以知道这是一篇介绍“红星中学学习生活以及Jeff寄宿房间的布局”的说明文。此题可以归纳出以下四个要点：(1)寄宿你家以及房间的布局；(2)从你家到红星中学的距离以及上学的方式；(3)学生食堂；(4)课后娱乐活动。 根据要点，拟出以下提纲：
基础写作专项训练及讲解 一、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。要求：1. 标题: Something about Lihua 2. 必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给内容. 3. 将五个句子组织成连贯的短文. 写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文: Lihua is a student from Yucai Middle School. He is 180cm tall. His fair is black. His family is at 138, Yucai Road, Guangzhou, China. His family has three people. Both his parents are teachers. Lihua has two hobbies: collecting stamps and coins. He knows English well and can speak perfect English. 二、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、标题：Top Meal of the Day 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡一会。 结果：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试成绩不理想。 建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能量的30%，青少年健康
应从早餐抓起。 写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文: Some students study late into the night. They choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed. As a result, they tend to be sleepy all day. They have bad memories. It is hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of exams. As a matter of fact/In fact, morning meal plays an important part in our daily life. It can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy. We students should start with a regular breakfast. 三、请根据以下资料说明，使用5个句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 1、标题: What Can We Do for the Olympics of ? 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内容。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 (1) 奥运会是21世纪重大体育比赛之一，包括中国在内的每个国家都在为此做准备。 (2) 奥运会的作用。 (3) 中国为举办奥运会，将要做些什么？ (4) 你个人该做些什么？ 写作指导：先写成简单句子，然后再做组合，连成通顺的5句短文:
2020年高考英语作文预测(附优秀范文) 垃圾分类 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Eli对中国正在推广的垃圾分类政策很感兴趣，他想了解一下相关情况，请你给他写封回信，内容包括： 1.上海率先实行； 2.垃圾须分四类(干、湿、可循环、有害) ； 3.公众反应。 参考词汇：垃圾分类trash sorting 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【优秀范文】 Dear Eli, Having learned that you are interested in the trash-sorting program promoted recently in China, I am here writing to give you a brief introduction. As far as I know, Shanghai has become the pioneer of our country's waste sorting policy. As of July 1st this year, the residents in Shanghai have not been able to dump their waste
bags in whichever bin was closest. On the contrary, domestic waste is required to be classified into four categories: dry refuse, wet trash, recyclable waste and hazardous(dangerous) waste. Faced with the new rule, many citizens in Shanghai are finding it a little too complicated, with every item of waste now under careful scrutiny(examination) and classification. Still, there are more people who warmly support the policy because it helps people to cultivate greener lifestyle habits and helps China to become a more beautiful country. Yours, Li Hua 疫情话题：感谢信 【题目要求】 假定你是李华，你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致敬奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。 1.表达谢意； 2.个人感受； 3.表达信心。 注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。 参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情epidemic situation 新型冠状病
---------------------------------------------------------------最新资料推荐------------------------------------------------------ 2012广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导高考题型解题策略点拨2012 广东高考英语书面表达基础写作指导Basic Writing 请根据以下的情景说明, 使用 5 个规范的英语句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 标题为 My English Learning 【情景说明】我学英语已经六年了，在英语学习上有了一定的进步，但总是觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯用法。 自己今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取早日掌握这门语言。 Basic Writing 从上述例子同学们可以明白什么样的句子叫“规范的英语句子”。 其实，“规范的英语句子”就是我们经常讲的三种句子： A) Simple sentence: 听到这个消息他很高兴。 B) Compound sentence A: 他给我一本书但我忘记带回家了。 C) Compound sentence B: 他所做的事与我无关。 Here are 3 ways to make sentences: I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1)借助名词短语做同位语如：李立，男，19 岁，1986 年生；籍贯：广东。 2)借助介词短语做定语如：李飞，男，10 岁，棕色短发，身穿白色茄克。 3)借助介词短语做状语如：有了 Tom 的帮助，我们很快就找到 1/ 10
了他们的村子。 4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语如：他们站在大树下，等待着总统的到来。 II. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句：如：他给我钱，我不要。 He gave me a lot money but I refused. 如：我刚到拐角处，就见到你啦。 I was just walking down the street corner when I saw you. III. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句： 1) 名词性从句1
假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Eli对中国正在推广的垃圾分类政策很感兴趣，他想了解一下相关情况，请你给他写封回信，内容包括： 1. 上海率先实行； 2. 垃圾须分四类(干、湿、可循环、有害) ； 3. 公众反应。 参考词汇：垃圾分类trash sorting 注意： 1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【优秀范文】 Dear Eli, Having learned that you are interested in the trash-sorting program promoted recently in China, I am here writing to give you a brief introduction. As far as I know, Shanghai has become the pioneer of our country's waste sorting policy. As of July 1st this year, the residents in Shanghai have not been able to dump their waste bags in whichever bin was closest. On the contrary, domestic waste is required to be classified into four categories: dry refuse, wet trash, recyclable waste and hazardous(dangerous) waste. Faced with the new rule, many citizens in Shanghai are finding it a little too complicated, with every item of waste now under careful scrutiny(examination) and classification. Still, there are more people who warmly support the policy because it helps people to cultivate greener lifestyle habits and helps China to become a more beautiful country. Yours, Li Hua
看图作文类 写作指导 在做看图作文时，首先要学会看图。这种图画一般在平面上通过线条、色彩、明暗等艺术手段，创造出人们可以直接感觉到的视觉形象和空间形象，来反映生活，来表达作者的某种思想倾向、某种爱憎和他们对现实的评价。 学生在做这类题时，必须根据画面，恰当地运用所学的词句表达一个完整的故事。要审清题意，看懂画面所表达的意思，紧扣主题。防止因对画面的错误理解而走题。有些画面上附有提示，注意仔细参阅，正确使用。 精选范文 你有过不顺利的一天吗？下面四幅图就是有关张红不顺利的一天。 A Bad Day I had a very bad day yesterday. Everything went wrong. In the morning, my alarm clock didn't ring. So I woke up one hour late.I was in such a hurry that I burned my hand when I was making breakfast. Then I ran out of the house to catch the 8:30 bus, but of course I missed it. I was very unhappy because my teacher gets angry if anyone is late for class. I ran three miles to the school only to discover that it was Sunday. 练习 ①初春的一天，你们班组织了一次保护环境、清理废弃物的活动。请用英语把图中的事写成日记。 (字数：100左右) 写作要点： a．骑车出发 b．到公园 c．捡垃圾 d．树标牌 e．向行人宣传 f．回家 g．感想 用词达意： 树标牌及内容的多种表达，向行人宣传。 参考词语 出发tostart out