16.教育或许决定了人的工作机会。（教育类话题）
正确的句子：Education may hold the key to one’s job prospects.
我的句子：Education may decide determine people’s working job opportunities.
Education 教育
May, can, might这些可能类词表或许
Decide 为口语中的表达，做决定decide to do something通常为考虑了各个可能性后做出的决定，主语通常为人,政府，社区，官方做出的决定。
本句话的决定表示有一种产生影响的意思，用determine vt 较好
Hold the key to/ determine 决定to为介词注意后面接n（名词），one’s不特指可以替换为people’s
Job/ career prospects 职业前景（词伙）prospect在这里是将来成功的机会所以这里的prospect是复数形式
Job opportunities / career advancement / career development 工作机会（词伙）
Decide 不准确可换为determine/hold the key to
工作机会可用词伙job prospects
改：Education may hold the key to people’s job prospects.
工作机会：Job prospects / job opportunities / career advancement / career development
不说work opportunities
改:Education may determine people’s career advancement.
状从拓展句子：Education may hold the key to one’s job prospect, especially when people intend to find jobs in the hi-tech industry.
17.使用化石资源对环境会造成破坏。
正确的句子：The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment.
我的句子：Using fossil fuels do dose harm to the environment.
environment：
表示生活环境、周围环境不能表达社会环境经济环境
表示大自然的环境时一定要加the 同理有the sun
名词用法：可数名词不能单独使用
不可数名词不特指时不需要加定冠词
集合名词复数一般是谓语动词用原型
Using fossil fuels=the use of fossil fuels 不应用不定时，因为不定式表将来。
fossil fuels：化石资源（煤等不可再生资源）
fuel resources：能源资源（包括可再生与不可再生能源）
cause damage（n-uncount）to：造成破坏to 为介词后接名词也可以用damage（vt）the environment/have a damaging（adj）impact / effect on the environment
damage：不可数名词，糟糕的影响
destroy：摧毁，不可修复。（此句中不适用）
Fossil resources 不常用，用词伙fossil fuels / fuel resources
Environment 未加定冠词the
改：Using fossil fuels can have a damaging impact on the environment.
To do 动词不定式形式表将来，不恰当
化石燃料表达不正确，应用fossil fuels或fuel resources
Environment 未加定冠词the
改：The use of fuel resources may damage the environment.
状从拓展句子：The use of fossil fuels can cause damage to the environment, possibly because it creates air pollution.
18.建造住宅楼有助于解决城市的拥挤问题。
正确的句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities.
我的句子：It is useful to address这样表述没有问题但是很啰嗦the congestion指交通堵塞problem within the city by constructing residential buildings.
动名词作主语，谓语动词单数
The build of / building / the construction of / constructing 建造
Apartment：公寓，几个房间。
Block：堵塞（vt）街区（cn）加复数s
Apartment blocks ：住宅楼（n，n）名词词组（eg. sport meeting 运动会shoe shop 鞋店）拥堵、污染、成绩不好等都已经是问题了，不用再加problem
Congestion（交通拥堵，在这不适用）
Hall of residence ：学生宿舍
Overcrowding ：拥挤（un）overcrowded（adj）
Buildings表示建筑物，不准确，应该用词伙apartment blocks或者residential buildings Congestion表示交通拥堵，应用overcrowding（un）
拥堵本身就是问题，不应用problem
City一般做地点状语，不应三个名词堆在一起。
改：Constructing apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities.
apartments不准确，应用apartment blocks
改：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cites.
拓展句子：Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities，because it can contain more people with limited space.
19.贫穷的人可以通过努力工作来提高社会地位
正确的句子：People from disadvantaged backgrounds （介词短语充当后置定语）can improve their social status by working hard.
我的句子：The poor can improve their social status through hard working介词后不加形容词：hard-working改为hard work.
Improve social status 提高社会地位（词伙）
提高：improve （raise为抬高或者增加：raise your hand 或者raise one’s awareness）
努力工作：work（vt）hard / hard work（n）/ hard-working（adj）
贫穷的人：poor people / the poor （the +adj =n）
Disadvantaged backgrounds: 没有社会地位，没有受过教育，家里比较穷, 很难成功。
People为集合名词，谓语动词为动词原形。
By 后接n 或v-ing
Poor 为adj 不能加s
Own 啰嗦，删去
改：The poor can work hard to improve their social status.
Background 可数名词不应裸奔
改：People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard.
Make 应为原形
Effort可数应加s
Enhance加强，用词不准确
改：Poor people improve their social status by hard work.
并列句拓展句子：People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard and this seems an arduous but rewarding process.
20.因为全球化，人们需要和来自不同背景的人工作。
正确的句子：Because of globalization, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds.（后置定语）
我的句子：People need to work with others who have different context没有这种表达because of globalization.
Because of 后接名词或名词短语
Globalization 不可数名词不特指不用加the
需要need to do something
Those 指代people 避免与前文重复
不同背景: diverse backgrounds / different backgrounds
21.我们需要采取措施去解决一些棘手的问题。
正确的句子：We need to take action to solve some intractable problems.
我的句子：We need to take action to solve some intractable problems
Need to do 需要其中need是使役动词
Take action采取行动
Action 和take 搭配时为不可数名词，action指做了什么事的时候才可数。
Adopt/take some measures 采取措施在这里measure是可数名词
measurement 测量
解决：tackle / solve / address（较为正式）/ figure out（口语）/ work out（口语）
Thorny / tough / intractable / difficult 棘手的
problem 可数名词要加s 不要裸奔
22.媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众。
正确的句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalizing victims’ suffering.
我的句子：The media attract audiences’指电视或者节目观众attention by exaggerating the pain of victims.
Medium 媒介单数
Media 为复数形式，谓语动词可单可复，建议用复数，一般前加the
观众：public（adj/n）在这里是形容词修饰attention
Attract/draw one’s attention 吸引某人注意力
By 后接doing
受害者：victim 可数名词不应裸奔
Eg. students' 或者是a student's（很多学生的或者一个学生的）
suffering一般指身体上physical或者心理上mental的伤害。（较好，范围广）
hurt是不开心的感觉，情感上的伤害
injury 伤口eg 骑车摔伤的伤口
pain是指身体上的，肉体上的
exaggerate （vt）夸大sensationalize 夸大二者可等同。
Audience 一般指节目的观众，在此不适用，不恰当
sorrow 悲伤，极度的难过sadness，不指难过eg.家人去世
victims未加’
改：The media attract public attention by exaggerating victims’ suffering.
Audience一般指节目的观众，在此不适用，不恰当
by 后面要接doing
改: The media attract public attention by sensationalizing
拓展句子：The media attract public attention by sensationalizing victims’ suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public.
23.基因工程让人们能培养新品种农作物
正确的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties.
我的句子：Genetic engineering enables people to cultivate new crops新作物不表示新品种.
Genetic engineering：基因工程
让某人做某事：allow / enable sb to do sth
不要用be able to do sth , 基因工程不能做某事，它只能让别人做某事，此处不适用培育：nurture/cultivate
新品种：varieties 同一农作物不同品种crop varieties.
Project：一般指项目，不指工程。
Boost：增长（不适用）
Foster ：培养技能，感觉eg. Foster a sense of community 培养交流的感觉（社交类词伙）Agricultural products 农作物不表示新品种
Species 物种，太大
Grow 为长大，一般是sth grows , 没有people grow sth
改：Genetic engineering allows people to cultivate crop varieties.
主谓不一致，enable应加s
New crops 没有这种表达改为crop varieties.
改：Genetic engineering enables people to nurture crop varieties.
拓展句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties that are resistant to drought，thereby improving land productivity.
24.经常运动使得人们保持健康的心态
正确的句子：Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind.
我的句子：Regular exercise encourages people to keep a healthy mood心情一般是good或者bad 不和healthy搭配.
使得（促进，好的方面）：help 让你能成功做某事
不建议用let / make 等词，这些词有强迫的意思（不适用）
Maintain/keep：保持，为系动词，后接adj/n
Metal ：精神上的mental problems脑子有问题
State：condition，指身体或精神上的状况，可数eg. A healthy state of mind
Mental state 精神状态/ physical state 身体状态/ emotional state心理状态
Somebody’s state of mind 词伙一个人的某种心态
A state of health 健康状况
Mood 心情与心态不一样
Let sb do 不准确有强制的意思，建议用help
改：Regular exercise can help people keep a healthy state of mind
Keep their mental health 表达不准确，keep后面接名词一般是保持住的意思
改：Regular exercise can help people keep a healthy state of mind.
Healthy Mind 运用不准确，一般表示大脑思考。可以说keep the mind healthy
改：Doing exercise regularly helps people keep a healthy state of mind
并列句拓展句子：Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress.
25.不健康的生活方式让人们处于生病的危险之中。
正确的句子：An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness.
我的句子：Unhealthy life styles lifestyles cause people to stick in戳的意思the danger of illness.
Lifestyle 为可数名词不能裸奔，不能拆开，一个单词
让人们，不能用make sb do 有强迫性
处在危险当中：be in danger of / put sb at risk of （不需要定冠词the，at risk为固定搭配）若想加the，可用Take the risk of 承担...风险
生病：disease（疾病）/ illness（生病）
Lifestyle 为可数名词不能裸奔
Put sb at 为固定搭配
改：Unhealthy lifestyles may put people at risk of illness.
Lifestyle为可数名词不能裸奔
Put sb in the dangerous of illness 前后都应是名词，应改为danger，但是语意不对，应用词伙put sb at risk of illness
改：Unhealthy lifestyles may put people at risk of illness.
Lifestyle为可数名词,不可拆分
put people in danger of illness 不准确，应用词伙put sb at risk of illness
put one’s life in danger 某人把生死置之度外。
改：people are in danger of illness because of Unhealthy lifestyles.
26.奖学金可以鼓励更多的学生去学习研究生课程。
正确的句子：Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduate courses.
我的句子:Students are encouraged to keep learning master courses一般是master’s course due to scholarships表达很啰嗦
Government grants 一般为政府拨款，处于特种目的的钱Government funds/funding
Scholarship做奖学金讲可数做学问成就讲不可数
Encourage sb to do sth 鼓励做某事。
上课: take/ attend a course.
Learn 学习某种技能
研究生课程：postgraduate courses / 本科生课程：undergraduate courses.
Scholarship 可数不能裸奔
study 指学习这件事，此处意思不正确。应用take/ attend a course.
改：Scholarships can encourage more students to attend postgraduate courses.
Due to scholarships 导致句子过于复杂
Master course 没有这种表达且未加复数，应该用postgraduate courses
Master degree 学士学位
改：Scholarships can encourage more students to take postgraduate courses.
Pursue a postgraduate degree 追求研究生学位没有pursue postgraduate studies这种表达。
改：Scholarships can encourage more students to pursues（追求，从事）their postgraduate degree.
27.社区改造为罪犯提供了获得职业技能的机会。
正确的句子：Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire
transferable skills.
我的句子:The modification指订正修正of communities offers offenders to acquire occupational skills.
社区改造（punishment）：community service（不可数n）
罪犯：offenders / criminals（较严重）
提供：offer sb sth / offer sth to sb. provide sb with sth / provide sth for sb
获得某项技能：acquire / learn / master / develop / hone （打磨）/ improve
获取知识：get / gain / acquire knowledge（不可数名词）
职业技能：V ocational skills / Occupational skills
Reform：改革（不准确）
职业训练career / job training词伙
并列句拓展：Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released.
28.法律应该将醉驾变成刑事犯罪。
正确的句子：Legislation should make drink-driving a criminal offence.
我的句子:Legislation should make drunk driving（drunk-driving） a criminal offence （offense）.
法律：Law （the law）/ legislation （法律的总称，不可数n）引入法律：bring in / introduce in legislation
若表示一条法律，则可数，eg. Bring in a law.
酒驾词伙drink-driving英式/ drunk-driving美式
形式犯罪：criminal offense美式/ offence英式
Offense 可数名词，不能裸奔。
Turn sth / sb into sth（书面语用的少，改变外在形状）= make sth sth 变成（用的较多）
Put into 把…放到… 运用不准确，应用make sth sth.
Offense 裸奔
改：The law should make drink-driving a criminal offence
Define 解释，下定义，不准确应用make
Offense 不能裸奔
Law 表示法律的总称时不应该加s 改为the law
Drunk driving 应加连字符
改：The law should make drunk-driving a criminal offense
29.乡村地区给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音。
正确的句子：Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
我的句子:Rural areas offer opportunities to keep away from living pressure and noise.
逃离：escape sth eg. Escape death / injury vt
逃离人或者地点Escape from (vi)
Get away from 不正式
Get far away 距离很远
Life：生活方式，用单数较多，加不定冠词：eg. Lead a hectic life 忙碌的生活表示某种社会形态下人们生活的方式很少用复数：modern/urban life
广义人生，不可数n：experience of life 人生经验
生活活动：Daily life / daily lives 均可
拓展句子：Rural areas are beneficial to people's health, providing people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.
30.人口老龄化促使国家去提高法定退休年龄（statutory retirement age）
正确的句子：The ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement 我的句子: the Aging of population encourages和促使的意义不一样countries to improve是改善的意思the statutory retirement age
完成时强调结果或影响
ageing population / aging population人口老龄化可数名词，一般加the 也可以加a/an 促使：prompt sb to do sth.
Encourage sb to do sth ==promote sth 提升，鼓励（此处不恰当）
提高：rise（不及物动词vi sth rises）/ raise（及物动词vt）
法定退休年龄statutory retirement age 单独用retirement age 不可数
但是前面有statutory限定时就是特指，要加the！
Statutory 法定的同义词：Mandatory
Rise 不及物动词后面不能接名词：sth rises 改为raise sth
改：The aging population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
Aging population 未加定冠词the
主谓不一致，而且应该使用完成时强调影响contribute to 是介词后面一般加名词或者动名词不加句子
改：The aging population has prompted governments to raise the statutory age.
Aging problem 没有这样的表达
Improve one’s age 表达较奇怪improve一般指提升技能用raise较好
改：Governments has raised the statutory retirement age because of the aging population.
拓展句子：The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age.
1.所以，正像我所理解的，尽管计算机在教育领域被广泛应用，但教师仍在课 堂上起着重要的作用。Therefore, as I see it, although computers are widely used in education, teachers still play important role in the classroom. 2.从上面所讨论的，我们会得出最后结论：公司应当鼓励55岁以上的人退休， 从而给年轻一代更多的机会。 From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that company should encourage people above 55 years old to retire in order to give opportunities to a new generation. 3.就像俗话所说，“有多少人，就有多少种观点”。来自不同背景的人对同样的 问题有不同的看法是可以理解的。 As the proverb goes, “So many people, so many minds.” It is quite understandable that people from different background have different interpretations of the same issue. 4.随着社会的发展，越来越多的问题引起我们的注意，其中一个问题是：人们 过多的使用电脑使人们的社会能力已经下降。 Along with the development of society, more and more problems are brought to our attention, one of which is that people use computers so often that their social skills have been diminished. 5.首先，科学家和艺术专家，如商人、语言学家、作家、历史学家和哲学家， 为社会做出了同等的贡献。 First and foremost, both scientists and art specialists, such as businessmen, linguists, writers, historians and philosophers, contribute equally to society. 6.第二，对现代技术的过度使用使娱乐活动变得筋疲力尽而不是轻松。 Secondly, the overuse of modern technology in recreational activities makes such activities exhausting rather than relaxing. 7.显而易见，我们可以的下出这样的结论，中学生应该在17岁以前学习普通课 程而不是特殊课程。 It is obvious for us to conclude that high school students should study general subjects instead of special subjects before they are 17 years old. 8.所以，如果我们认真的考虑一下，不难得出结论：大学应该在每个学科种招 收同等数量的男生和女生。 So, if we take careful consideration, it is not difficult to get the conclusion that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students for studying in every subject 9.基于上述讨论和分析，我们可以看到商科专业的人才可以为国家的发展做出 巨大贡献，因此也应得到政府的支持。 Based on the above discussion and analysis, we can see that the talented students who have majored in business can make great contributions to the development of the country, so they should get support from the government too. 10.此现象最坏的方面，在我看来，是巨大的工作压力对人们精神健康的逐渐影 响。 The worst aspect of this phenomenon, in my opinion, is that the huge pressure of work will gradually affect people’s mental health. 11.它是如此的重要，以至于我们不能出一点差错。然而，作出一个谨慎而又令
同意与否文体 There is no denying that the specific issue of sth./ 或接whether 从句has become controversial. However, in spite of those who are against/ for …, I approve wholeheartedly of/ 或I strongly object to the idea that … Those who hold negative/ positive attitude towards … believe that … may exert adverse/ significant effect on us. … is always top of the list of their argument. For example,…(请用举例子的方法解释). Besides, those critics/ advocates also claim that …（此处写第二个原因）for the reason that …. It is often the case that …(此处总结上段反方提出的几个观点)。But when it comes to …, …, and …,(此处先总结写你所支持的几个理由)，an increasing number of people including me are convinced that .. .For one thing, …。The evidence recently presented in research journals available to the public confirms that …此处写调查结果，通过数字来证明自己所列举的理由1。Similarly,… should also deserve our special attention. In other words, …(换种说法解释)。If…not, ..(反过来在说一遍)。Last but not least, … Obviously, it is hard for both sides to come to an agreement on this complicated issue, but I still commit to the notion that …(再重申你的立场)。
YY分类版83句~~ 动物： 77：非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡，生物多样性也会损失。 Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity. 78：动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用。 Animal experiments fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs. 城市VS农村： 7农村的失业问题在某种程度上可以通过城乡转移解决。Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift. 农村失业问题的主要原因是缺少基础建设和政府资助，这个问题在某种程度可以通过城乡转移解决。 The lack of infrastructure and government funding in rural areas is the main cause of unemployment, which can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift. （lack of一般不充当表语） 16 : 未来几十年我们很难保护植物多样性 We will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 除非当地政府减少城市扩张对植物的影响，否则在未来几十年里我们会发现保护物种多样性很困难。
主语从句翻译句子练习： 1.显然，到2000年这两个国家依赖于不同的主要燃料源。 2.据报道每年有成千上百万人死于和水有关的疾病。 3.谁应该对老年人负责这个问题在社区里被广泛讨论。 4.不论谁污染环境都应该受到惩罚。 5.It is probable that the nocturnal trades（夜间的谋生）go way back in the ancestry of all mammals（哺乳动物）.（剑7 Test 1 Reading1） 6.It should be no surprise then that among mathematicians and architects, left-handers tend to be more common and there are more left-handed males than females. 7.现在，人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在学生毕业的时候教给他们所需要的所有知识。 8.这档节目是否成功在接下来的几十年将会揭晓。 9.人们普遍认为计算机和其他机器已经成为社会必不可少的一部分。 10.无可争辩，寄宿学校正在发挥越来越重要的作用，尤其是最近几年。 11.采取有效的措施来结束日益恶化的空气污染势在必行。 12.无可争辩，现在有成千上万的人过着挨饿受冻的痛苦生活。 13.人们普遍认为太空探索能够促进科学事业的发展。
14.值得注意的是农村和城市的生态环境都在不断恶化。 15.众所周知，环境污染问题是中国乃至世界面临的最为严重的问题之一。 宾语从句翻译句子练习： 1.许多专家怀疑英语是否应该作为全球唯一的官方语言。 2.大部分学生相信业余工作使他们有更多的机会发展人际交往能力，而这对他 们未来找工作是非常有好处的。 3.有些人认为旅游业的发展会对传统文化产生一些负面的影响。 4.一项调查显示，许多农民工认为在城市打工不仅有较高的收入，而且能学到 一些新技术。 5.越来越多的专家认为农民工(farmer laborers/rural emigrants)对城市的建设起 到积极作用，然而，越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法，他们抱怨农民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题，比如犯罪。 6.说到教育，大部分人认为其是终生的学习。 7.越来越多的专家开始相信这种状况将对当地的经济发展产生不利影响。 8.一些人认为政府应对环境污染负主要责任。 9.许多专家指出这是现代社会发展必然的结果，无法避免。 表语从句翻译句子练习： 1.一个迫切的问题是许多稀有物种正处于灭绝的边缘。
雅思大作文模板 【篇一：雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板】 雅思范文：考官9分雅思大作文模板 编者按：这是一篇新鲜出炉的考官simon9分雅思大作文。以小编 几十篇simon作文的阅读量，大致总结了他最为习惯的行文结构，通过对这个考官所喜欢的9分“模板”的解读，希望大家能在自己的 雅思写作备考中，对写作模板的使用能有一个新的认识。 ielts writing task 2: positive or negative essay heres my full essay for the positive or negative development question that weve been looking at over the last few weeks. in some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. do you think this is a positive or negative development? 9分范文： in recent years it has become far more normal for people to live alone, particularly in large cities in the developed world. in my opinion, this trend is having both positive and negative consequences in equal measure. the rise in one-person households can be seen as positive for both personal and broader economic reasons. on an individual level, people who choose to live alone may become more independent and self-reliant than those who live with family members. a young adult who lives alone, for example, will need to learn to cook, clean, pay bills and manage his or her budget, all of which are valuable life skills. from an economic perspective, the trend towards living alone will result in greater demand for housing. this is likely to benefit the construction industry, estate agents and a whole host of other companies that rely on homeowners to buy their products or services. however, the personal and economic arguments given above can be considered from the opposite angle. firstly, rather than the positive feeling of increased independence, people who live alone may experience feelings of loneliness, isolation and worry. they miss out on the emotional support and daily conversation that family or flatmates can provide, and they must bear the weight of all household bills and responsibilities. secondly, from the financial point of view, a rise in demand for
写作常用句子翻译 1经常做运动会提高人的自信。 _____________________________________________________________________ 经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。_____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 2依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力（mental arithmetic）。 _____________________________________________________________________ 过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响，对孩子的智力发展有威胁。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 3很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里（male-dominated world）找工作。 _____________________________________________________________________ 很多女孩不愿意在男人为大多数的行业找工作，因为她们会面临在高职位升迁中的阻碍。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 4环境问题已经成为公众关心的焦点。 _____________________________________________________________________ 环境问题比如温室气体的发放已经成为公共关注的焦点，因此一些规则应该被实施来处理这些问题。 _____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________ 5家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间。 _____________________________________________________________________ 家长和老师应该努力去减少孩子看电视的时间，这样会保护孩子的视力，鼓励他们做户外运动。 _____________________________________________________________________
剑盟雅思预备学院官网：https://www.doczj.com/doc/cd2428684.html,/ 雅思大作文模板的漂亮结尾 雅思大作文模板的漂亮结尾!一个好的结尾自然也会为作文带来很高的分数，因此同学们在复习的过程中，不要仅仅侧重于一个漂亮的开头，也要适当的来关注我们作文的结尾，这样才能够让我们的大作文拿到高分! 1. “烂招”解救烤鸭于危难 在巨大的时间压力下，很可能你没有来得及写末段，请记住这个“烂招”：写下In conclusion, I personally believe that ……, 在省略号部分抄上原题的观点。比如最近有一道考题：Some people think that economic progress is the most important way to measure a country's success. Other people think other factors are also important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 在剩下最后一分钟时写下：In conclusion, personally, I believe that economic progress is not the most important way to measure a country’s success, and other facts must be taken into consideration. 这个末段给人一种强烈的“扣题”感，理由很明显，紧紧地扣住题目啦! 2. 高招体现缜密思维 “烂招”其实在某种程度上不赖。但是对于追求真正写作能力的同学，想要写出“圆满示“回响”。这个词是我们接下来讨论的关键。首先，我们必须区分“repeat”和“echo””的末段，那就要明白一个基本道理：有始才有终，善始才能善终!映射到雅思作文上，这句话的意思是：写好了首段和主体段，才能够写出“圆满”的末段。下面给各位烤鸭仔细分析一下末段与首段之间的关系，末段与主体段之间的关系。 首先需要给大家介绍一个词汇——回响，英文对应为echo，名词表示“回声”，动词表。Echo表示意义一致，但是使用不同的说法让读者能够想起前面陈述过的内容，而低级repeat指的是copy，高级repeat指的是paraphrase。 圆满的末段做到“首尾呼应” 末段回响首段立场 (The concluding paragraph echoes the thesis statement in the opening paragraph)
使用方法 ?自己先翻译一下，对照准确的句子 ?记住句子中出现的词伙，熟悉其用法和语境 ?熟悉基本的句型，确保自己在不同语境下可以迅速选择和写出准确的单句 ?观察错误的句子，因为这些句子一般都是常见错误，可以提高你对语法错误的敏感 ?最后，如果有兴趣，可以通过复杂句的中文口头翻译一下，不仅熟悉这句话，也可以提高口语表达的能力 NB：基础差的同学经常会死背，那样是不会提高的。最好通过翻译提高语法（譬如说分析句子的成分，熟悉单词的词性），也有同学只是看或者抄，那也没效果，一定要自己写。 翻译1：经常做运动会提高人的自信 错误的句子：Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence. 错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰错误2 rise 不及物动词 正确的句子：Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence. Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 注：不可以说“regular doing exercise”，因为形容词regular 不可以修饰doing 中文翻译：经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。 翻译2：教学的质量对学生成绩有很大的影响。 错误的句子：Teaching qualities are important to students improve academic performance 错误1 quality 表示质量的时候不可数错误 2 to 是介词，后面不用加句子 正确的句子：The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’academic performance. The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance. and therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children. 中文翻译：教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键，因此，家长喜欢为孩子选择名校。 翻译3：家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间。 错误的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 错误1 make an effort to 固定表达 错误2 curb 一般是抑制某种行为，而不是接time. 错误3 “watching TV on children”也不通。 正确句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time. 句子结构：主语（parents and teachers）+及物动词(make)+宾语(effort) 拓展的句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encourage them to do more out-door activities.
英文写作基础知识 I 英语的句子成分 1. 主语 1）父母应该为年轻人提供机会让他们锻炼自己的能力和天赋。 2) 对于它们，我们既不能过高估计也不能否认其存在。 3) 吸烟只是一种个人爱好和娱乐。 4) 很难有定论。 5) 很明显，穿校服会使得校园生活变得乏味单调 在过去的几年中，随着经济的迅速发展，越来越多的父母在把孩子送到国外学习。 大学毕业生的就业形势越来越不乐观。 毫无疑问，不同人甚至不同的大学都会对此有不同观点。 2. 谓语 1）他们坚持认为审查制度应当废止。 2）孩子应当靠自己的努力获取成功。 3）广告增加了商品的成本。 4）换句话说，电脑影响了人们的日常生活，对人们有害。 5）当前，越来越多的人同意吸烟是一种不健康的嗜好，等同于自杀。 大学中的教师教授拥有丰富的专业知识和丰富的教学经验，会教给学生新的知识并引导他们解决现实中的问题。 3. 表语 1）审查制度是对言论自由的一种违犯。 2）放养涂在这些动物的方法经常是野蛮残忍的。 3）谈恋爱耗费时间，经常会使学生偏离他们的主要任务---学习。 4）我们所需要做的是告诉孩子如何正确的解决这些问题。 5）他们所强调的是那些正式的考试对不利于培养学生的创造力。 大学毕业生自身也对这种局面负有责任。 由于不同的习惯和不同的价值观，人们在和陌生人同住时会觉得不自在。 4. 宾语
1）垃圾食品对人的健康有害。 2）你甚至开始把工作带回家做并且一直工作到凌晨 3）研究表明吸烟和肺癌、心脏病等严重疾病之间存在着必然联系。 4）它给我们带来了许多欢乐和乐趣。 5. 定语 1）很难有定论。 2）近年来，因特网以极快的的速度越来越受欢迎。 3）资金不足的人们通常正确确定优先考虑的事情：他们在买奢侈品之前首先买必需品。4）那些强烈反对这种做法的人说这违犯人工作的基本权利。 6. 状语 1）户外活动能极大促进我们的健康。 2）根据法律，广告必须是完全真实的健康的。 3）为了赶走孤独和消磨时光，他们可以培养其它的爱好，比如养花、集邮和学画画。 4）远离家庭生活，人要忍受孤独和思乡。 5）我还是喜欢和朋友一起旅行，因为我认为在旅行中最重要的是得到快乐和休息。 他们完全沉溺于这些事，完全忽略了他们的学习。 7. 同位语 1）购物，这个每天生活中必须的活动，在城市里更方便。 2）爱情能将学生从学习，学生的主要工作中分开。 3）但是，这种解决办法的缺点是许多农业和居住用地会难以避免的被越来越多的公路占据。 8. 补语 1）我们认为强制服兵役是对人权的违犯。 2）克隆技术会使得人类人口过剩，变得可替代甚至灭绝。 3）我发现就业形势令人沮丧（不乐观）。 II 英语句子的基本结构 1. S + V 1）对于这个正在讨论中的问题人们看法不一。 2）全球化时代已经来临。 在人类教育很长的发展过程中，在每个学习领域都发生了巨大变化。
雅思大作文必备高分模板--report型写作 本文为大家整理了一篇关于Report类型的雅思写作高分必备模板。Report类型的写作是雅思写作中最常见的一种，所以准备一个这个类型的写作模板还是非常有必要的。下面的模板供大家参考。 首段: (引子) 第一句：描述背景(引子) it is indisputable fact that … 替换句型：it is an undeniable fact that … it is an irrefutable fact that 第二句：(可有可无) the serious consequences of are often felt in our life . 第三句：承上启下：In this essay , I intend to explore the sources of this problemalong with some possible solution to it . 替换句型： In the following essay , I aim to identify the sources of thisproblem as well as some viable solution to it . 第二段：分析原因 第一句：Chief among the causes of this problem is …. 替换句型： 第二句：In the past , … 第三句：Consequently , … 第四句：Another major contributing factor is that …
第三段：提供解决方案 第一句： In order to address its root causes. Perhaps the most effective methodof doing this would be for people to do sth. 第二句：Since …, 第三句：one further measure would be to … 替换句型：one further method of …would be for people to do 第四段：总结 第一句： In conclusion , I believe that this is clearly a problem of suchcomplexity that no solution is likely in the short term . 替换句型： In reality , this problem is unlikely to be resolved in the shortterm. 第二句： However , I believe that the measures outlined above would constitutea good first step . However , it is by no means insurmountable , and I am convinced that … 替换句型： however , I believe that the hard way is sometimes that the best way. 以上就是Report类型的雅思写作高分必备模板的全部内容，十分的细节化，几乎每一句怎样写，都有所提及。但是大家在参考的时候一定要注意，要在其中加入属于自己的特色的东西，这样才能在考试中正常应用。最后，新东方网雅思频道预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!
小作文三大句型翻译练习 1. 主（The number of...）+ 谓（increased/decreased）+ from...to... 男性吸烟者的数量在1960年到2000年之间从21%下降到17%。 The number of male smokers decreased from 21% in 1960 to 17% in 2000. 数据增长剧烈，并且在1990年的时候达到峰值400。 The number increased dramatically and then peaked at 400 in 1990. 数据剧烈下降，在1998年达到谷值100。 The number plummeted, reaching the bottom at 100 in 1998. 员工的平均收入与去年相比增长了50%。 The average income of the staff increased by 50 percent compared with last year. 婚姻的数量在接下来10年内稳定在这个水平。 The number of marriages remained stable at this level over the next decade. 在这25年期间，牛羊肉的消耗下降明显，分别到了100克和50克。 During this 25-year period the consumption of beef and lamb fell dramatically to approximately 100 grams and 55 grams respectively. 同样地，保险花费有一个上升的趋势，从只有2%上涨到8%在2001年的时候。 Similarily, the cost of insurance saw a rising trend, growing from only 2% to 8% by 2001. 相比之下，家具的花费呈现了一个相反的趋势。 In contrast, the cost of furniture showed an opposite trend. 2. There be 句型 男性吸烟者的数量在1960年到2000年之间从21%下降到17%。 There was a downward trend of male smokers, from 21% in 1960 to 17% in 2000. 在所有组别中，电脑使用有一个明显的上升。 There was a sharp increase in computer use in all categories. 在美国家庭中，个人电脑的使用有一个稳步增长的趋势。 There was a steadily rising tendency of personal computers in households in the US. 在印度1930年到1950年期间，大米的消耗有一个微弱的波动。 There was a minor fluctuation in the consumption of rice between 1930 and 1950 in India.
雅思小作文模板句必备50句型 A 1.the table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to... 该表格描述了在...年之...年间...数量的变化。 2.the bar chart illustrates that... 该柱状图展示了... 3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding... 该图为我们提供了有关...有趣数据。 4.the diagram shows (that... 该图向我们展示了... 5.the pie graph depicts (that.... 该圆形图揭示了... 6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of... 这个曲线图描述了...的趋势。 7.the figures/statistics show (that... 数据(字表明... 8.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何... 9.the data/statistics show (that... 该数据(字可以这样理解... 10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论... 11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示... 12.according to the chart/figures... 根据这些表(数字... 13.as is shown in the table... 如表格所示... 14.as can be seen from the diagram, great changes have taken place in... 从图中可以看出，...发生了巨大变化。 15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure, we can see clearly that...or it is clear/apparent from the chart that... 从图表我们可以很清楚(明显看到... 16.this is a graph which illustrates... 这个图表向我们展示了... 17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from...to... 该表格描述了...年到...年间a与b的比例关系。
顾家北翻译练习100句(17年最新完整版)
顾家北翻译联系100句 翻译 1：经常做运动会提高人的自信 错误的句子：Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence. 错误 1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰错误 2 rise 不及物动词 正确的句子：Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence) 可以用定语从句扩充： Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 注：不可以说“regular doing exercise”，因为形容词 regular 不可以修饰 doing 中文：经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。 翻译 2：教学的质量对学生成绩有很大的影响。 错误的句子：Teaching qualities are important to students improve academic performance 错误 1 quality 表示质量的时候不可数 错误 2 to 是介词，后面不用加句子 正确的句子：The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance.
翻译1：经常做运动会提高人的自信 错误的句子：Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence. 错误1 Exercise 如果这里是动词，应该用动名词，如果是名词，不能用副词修饰 错误2 rise 不及物动词 正确的句子：Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence. 句子结构：主语+及物动词+宾语(confidence) 可以用定语从句扩充： Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 注：不可以说“regular doing exercise”，因为形容词regular 不可以修饰doing 中文：经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心，这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要。 翻译2：教学的质量对学生成绩有很大的影响。 错误的句子：Teaching qualities are important to students improve academic performance 错误1 quality 表示质量的时候不可数 错误2 to 是介词，后面不用加句子 正确的句子：The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to
students’academic performance. 句子结构：主谓宾 也可以用并列句拓展 The quality of teaching can make a huge difference to students’ academic performance. and therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children. 中文：教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键，因此，家长喜欢为孩子选择名校。 翻译3：家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间。 错误的句子：parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 错误1 make an effort to 固定表达 错误2 curb 一般是抑制某种行为，而不是接time. 错误3 “watching TV on children”也不通。 正确的句子：parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children’s screen time. 句子结构：主语（parents and teachers）+及物动词(make)+宾语(effort) 拓展的句子：Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and