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One day, my sister, who has been pregnant for six months, caught a bad cold. She wanted to take medicine for her cold but she wondered whether the medicine will do harm to the baby. She turned on the computer, went online and googled or searched for information on the safety of the cold medicine. After that, she made a right decision.
The impact that computer has on our daily life is undeniable. There is a growing awareness of both the positive and negative influences that computers have brought to us. Some people might be right to think that computers have made life complex and stressful. From my point of view, those shortcomings can be neglected when the advantages of computers are mentioned.
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According to a recent statistic on the internet, the number of single-child family occupies 75 percent of Chinese families, and undoubtedly has the tendency of increasing. It follows that parents or other adult relatives may likely pay more attention to their children, for the reason that the energy of parents has been saved a lot compared to those who own several children. Some people insist on making decisions for their children, considering that they are too young to judge. However, others believe that there is hardly any necessity to help so that children will cultivate the
capability of analyzing important problems. From my perspective, I completely agree with the latter idea.
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With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies are founded, but there are not
enough people to take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students. In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers should have jobs while they are still students. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.
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It is not rare to see many students dozing off or doing other things while the professor is trying his best explaining a theory. Most people claim that this phenomenon results from the severe school attendance rule and suggest that students should be given more right to decide which class to attend according to their own interest and their judgment of the value of the class. This idea is strongly opposed by numerous people who hold the opinion that it is the fault of the students that leads to the current problem.
They stand on the ground that students do not really know what they are particularly suitable to make research on and what kind of class is remarkably valuable. Consequently they think highly of the rule that students should attend all the classes. As far as I am concerned, strict school attendance really benefits the students in not only acquiring knowledge but also their social skills.
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Technology refers to skills, knowledge, and techniques that human beings use in their daily life and work. As everybody may find, technology develops day by day. How does the development of technology affect our life? Many people hold the opinion that it is due to the development of technology that human beings have access to the comfortable modern life. On the other hand, a number of people are always aware of all kinds of destructive influence of the technological development on us. As far as I am
concerned, the development of technology does far more good than harm to people’s happiness.
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I’m a great believer in luck, and I find the harder I work, the more I have of it. ——Thomas Jefferson
There is little doubt that if people want to be successful, hardworking is an essential element. While it is also clear that luck plays an undeniable role in one’s realizing dreams.
I completely agree with Thomas Jefferson
and believe that hard work, in most cases, helps people find and catch their luck and finally reach their life goals.
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Just imagine if a student can not find a teacher to help him, what will happen? Some people believe that he can learn better by himself; however, each coin has two sides, others think that it is always better to have a teacher. I agree with the latter one. Teachers can help us to acquire amounts of knowledge easier than others who study alone, lead us to choose the right way of our life, and let us know how to be a good person. 开头8：
With the development of science and technology, more and more companies (including international companies and small companies are founded, but there are not enough people to take these positions. So a large number of working opportunities are provided to people who are still teenager students. In some countries, some people think if teenagers do a job while they are still studying in school, it may have a bad impact on their grade. Others consider that teenagers should have jobs while they are still students. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter. Because teenagers can learn amount of useful experience through working and they think through the job they will acquire some knowledge of how to get a good relationship with others.
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There are many qualities that make up a good neighbor, but the most essential of these are friendliness, helpfulness, and being considerate. A good neighbor must be friendly so that you can establish good relations with him or her, while being helpful makes the neighbor much more of an aid in everyday life. Finally, being considerate makes a neighbor much more pleasant to live next to, as an over-friendly and over-helpful neighbor who doesn''t consider your circumstances is rather unhelpful. 中间段
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A friendly neighbor who is horribly inept is still not very much help. While friendliness is essential, simple good-will is not enough to make a good neighbor. If you suffered from some natural disaster, or some accident, a helpful neighbor would be able to do more things than a neighbor who was concerned, but unable to help. For example, if your car wouldn''t start, imagine your neighbor didn''t know how to use the jumper cables. Despite good intentions, your neighbor might end up harming you or your vehicle. A capable and friendly neighbor who could help you with many things that you might have trouble doing alone would be of far greater help.
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Of course, while friendliness and capabilities are important, without a
mutual understanding and consideration, any neighbor can be horribly frustrating. In the modern world, where your neighbor could be of a completely different culture, understanding and consideration are very important. Imagine a neighbor who happens to be a five star chef invites you over for dinner. Though he certainly has the appropriate talents for cooking, and the good will to invite you over, if he failed to consider your culture or personal preferences, you might not example the meal at all. For example, if
you were Jewish and followed your religious limitations on foods, you wouldn''t be able to eat many different kinds of foods. Thus, without consideration for your culture and situation, all of the good-will your neighbor might bring would be useless. 中间段 4：：Any good neighbor will be a good friend, someone you feel comfortable inviting to your house, eating dinner with, and taking care of your house if you are gone. None of these things would be possible if your neighbor only minded his or her own business and didn''t bother to go to neighborhood activities. Though this neighbor might not be trouble, he or she certainly wouldn''t be very much fun to live next to, as you might as well not have a neighbor at all. A friendly neighbor can make the neighborhood far more inviting and fun; imagine a neighborhood where none of your neighbors invited you to neighborhood activities and left you completely alone. This neighborhood would certainly seem less
interesting compared with a neighborhood where your neighbor greeted you when you arrived and invited you to some neighborhood activities. 中间段 5：： I strongly support the idea of outer space exploration for it may benefit humans not only in the present but also in the future. By exploring the outer space, governments should join their hands to take advantage of the latest technology and skills in various fields to guarantee the success of the program, ensuring the returning of the priceless equipment and especially precious lives of the astronauts, thus intensifying the cooperation of different countries in the world. ——因果论证 And at the same time, the achievement of the outer space exploration program may surely contribute to the wellbeing of our offspring in many ways. Our children and grandchildren may have more living space and will no longer suffer the amazing population density of the earth and they may live in another satellite one day. In addition, the advanced technology in communications and remote control developed in the outer space exploration program are sure to become popularly used in the future life. ——举例论证 As can be seen from the above analysis, the advantages of carrying out the outer space exploration are obvious and allow us no excuse to vote against it. 中间段 6：：
People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big cities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in a small town. People in a small town don’t have to get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drives so fast in a small town as to cause car accidents which are commonly seen in almost every street in big cities. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with. 结尾段结尾 1：： Students are the future masters of the world. Only when they have accumulated abundant knowledge and tactful social skills can they be confident to say they are fully prepared to manage the world. Strictly required school attendance is one of the best approaches to helping students accomplish the two. While at the same time schools should also take measures to draw the attention from all students and improve the quality of teaches'' lectures to be appealing to all students.
结尾 2：： In conclusion, people are living longer now owing to the development of medical, cooking and matching food in right ways and so on. I feel that if people wish to live longer, perhaps they should take more exercises and ask for the experts of nutrition how to cook meals and match food in right ways. 结尾 3：： In conclusion, I think although advances in technology may do some harm to people''s life to some degree, most impacts exerted by the forward pace of technology are desirable and beneficial. We should take measures to guide the direction of the development of technology and prevent all kinds of improper use of technology so that we can enjoy more conveniences in both work and in daily life brought by the ever improving technology. 结尾 4：： In a word, I believe that universities should require students to take classes in many subjects, rather than require students to specialize in one subject. Only by developing the comprehensive knowledge and skills of each student, can a student use what he/she has
learned in a more effective way and really enjoy the fruits of their hard work. And what is more, the greater comprehensive expertise the students have, the stronger a nation will be
托福综合写作模板的开头段是怎么样的呢?怎么样的开头段可以提高你的托福作文质量。这里小编为大家整理了托福写作开头段的句式和模板分享，希望对大家托福考试有帮助。 托福综合写作模板：开头段写作句式 开头 An increasing number of people begin to realize/ complain/ question that... OR: The majority of people tend to have a favorable/ an unfavorable attitude towards something OR: XXX has now caused wide public concern OR: When it comes to... people often consider... The thing is, which XXX, A or B, (is a more efficient mean of learning/ what do we mean by)? People may give various answers to this question. OR：Ask people… and they may give a diverse of answers based on their individual value systems Some believe that… while others/ some claim… On balance, my favor goes to A.... 托福综合写作模板：开头段写作模板(一) In this argument, the arguer concludes that ______. To support the conclusion, the arguer points out that______. In addition, the arguer reasons that_____.This argument suffers from several critical fallacies. In this argument, the arguer recommends that_____.To justify this claim, the arguer provides the evidence that ____. In addition, he cites the result of a recent study that _____. A careful examination of this argument would reveal how groundless the conclusion is. In this analysis, the arguer claims that ____. To substantiate the conclusion, the arguer cites the example that____. In addition, the arguer assumes that ____. This argument is unconvincing for several critical flaws.
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托福写作结尾段有三种写法 托福写作中考生不能完全照搬模板，要有自己的写作特色，但是在开头和结尾部分，考生还是可以参考一定的规律。用好这些规律可以帮助考生节省托福写作构思时间。一起看看托福写作结尾的写法，希望对大家有所帮助。 托福写作结尾段的两个部分： 1. 再次陈述主题。用paraphrase 方式再次呈现主题陈述中出现的三要素: a.问题中存在争议的地方; b.观点;c.理由。 2. 结束句。放在陈述完主题之后。 托福写作结尾段的三种构思方法： 一. 托福写作的最后总结教训或提出建议 In conclusion, whether to imitate or vary from others to achieve success, it hinges mostly on the occupations we engage in. For jobs like doctors that require routine practices, it is unnecessary for them to make alterations to become successful. Whereas artists like painters whose works are characteristic of creativity and imagination, it is of crucial importance to distinguish from others to succeed. 二. 提出令人忧虑的结果或可能出现的负面结果 假设读者没有想作者说的那样去做，在结论中提出将会出现的负面结果，帮助读者预见到令人忧虑的后果，进而令读者自然第接受作者的意见。 e.g., To summarize, on one hand, for artists who are fortunate to profit immensely from their occupation, it is unnecessary for the government to offer additional financial incentives for them. On the other hand, government should provide financial support and appropriate policies to impoverished artists who engage in conventional craftsmanship because these are viewed as national treasure and cultural heritage of the
外教一对一https://www.doczj.com/doc/4c18579614.html, 托福英语——结尾段写作步骤 结尾段写作步骤 结尾段写作步骤可分为两步，第一步是复述己方观点，第二步是总结支撑己方观点的原因。 1. 示例1 例题：Providing the Internet access is as important as other services, like building roads, so the government should provide it at no cost. (2015年4月13日大陆考题) 己方观点：The government should not offer the service at the expense of the taxpayers. 理由1：First, Government subsidized free Internet is a breach of political principle. 理由2：The assumption that the Internet is as important as other infrastructure services is incorrect 结尾段：In conclusion, I think government should not assumethe responsibility to offer free Internet service. (复述观点) The proposal not only is a breach of democratic and fair principle (总结理由1)， but mistakenly claims the Internet is as critical as other infrastructure. (总结理由2) 2.示例2 例题：People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level,such as teachers or supervisors. (Official TOEFL Practice 4) 己方观点：We should be learning from our teachers or supervisors who are apparently more knowledgeable and experienced. 理由1：Studying from your teachers is the best way to gain new knowledge. 理由2：People at your own level do not know much more than you. 结尾段：In conclusion, learning from your supervisor and teachers is the best way to improve yourself. (复述观点) Not only can they pass on knowled ge to you effectively (总结理由1), but you can also benefit from their experiences. (总结理由2) 3.示例3 例题：Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children. (TPO 6) 己方观点：Today's life is indeed much easier and more comfortable than at any time in history. 理由1：We have much better education and health services are readily available.
一、怎样分析记叙文开头段的作用 （分析一句或一段在文章中的作用，需要从内容和结构上两方面入手） 1内容上： ①开篇写景，为故事设置背景。 ②开篇写景，由眼前景物引起下文的回忆 ③开篇点题，总领全篇。 ④奠定全文的感情基调。 ⑤交代故事起因，为下文作铺垫，是全文故事的大前。 ⑥交代记叙文要素。 ⑦交代故事发生的背景。 ⑧概括介绍人物的性格品质（或事物特点），总领全篇。 ⑨概括介绍人物特点（或开篇写景），与下文的某一内容形成对比。 2结构上： ①总结全文（统摄全篇）②引起下文③巧设悬念④伏笔、铺垫 二、怎样分析记叙文结尾段的作用 （分析一句或一段在文章中的作用，需要从内容和结构上两方面入手） 1、内容上： ①点明中心（揭示中心，揭示主旨，点明主旨，画龙点睛）。 ②含蓄地揭示主旨，引发读者对文中问题的注意和思考。 ③深化中心（深化主题，升华文章的思想感情）。 ④点题，揭示题旨。 ⑤总结全文，评议文中人物。 ⑥巧妙地揭示事实真相。 ⑦有时，文章结尾处，有一段补叙，作用是：补充与文章有关的内容，使故事情节更加完整，突出文中事件的意义重大（或人物影响深远）。 2结构上： ①照应开头（照应题目，照应前文），使文章结构严谨 ②收束全文，使文章结构完整。 三、分析一句话（或一段话）在结构上的作用（先看这段话在文中位置） 1、如果这段话在文章开头，则分析： ①总领全文②统摄全篇③开起下文④伏笔铺垫⑤巧设悬念 2、如果这段话在文章中间，则分析： ①承上启下的过渡（绝大多数情况是这种作用，其他作用极少见）； ②总结上文③领起下文 （注意：分析文章中间段的作用，往往是只分析结构上的作用，如果考题问这句话在内容上的作用，可能是：a点题。b抒情议论，揭示中心。c抒情议论，由物及人，由物及理，由事及理。考中间段在内容上的作用的题极少见。） 3、如果这段话在文章结尾，则分析 ①照应开头（照应题目，照应前文），使文章结构严谨。 ②收束全文，使文章结构完整。 四、什么叫照应？ 如果考题上让分析前后两句话在结构上的作用，那么，这两句话一定是同写了一件事（一个景）（一种情），它的作用是：前后照应，使文章结构严谨。
Topic: Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live? 同意----开头段 1、排比反问句： Have you ever been worry about three meals whole day? Have you ever washed the vegetables and meat? Have you ever had to prepare the meal even so tired? If you have never suc h experiences, you would never know the improvement of people’ s way live on account of easier-prepared food. 2、个例深入式 On a hot summer noon, I went off my study, and had no choice but to go to the food market. With sweat on face, I went into the kitchen and wash vegetables and meat which have just been purchased. I was peeling the flat piece of potatoes, cutting cabbage into pieces, putting them together, and then cooking. It took me nearly one and a half hour to make 4 dishes, because some of my friends would come and have a lunch. If you do not have such experience, you would never know how convenient the easier-prepared foods are! 3、背景知识式 With fast development of techniques, more and more ‘fast’ ‘earlier’ sets have been formed, such as earlier-p food. Earlier-p food has been launched on the market for several years. There is a public debate about whether the earlier-p food improve the way people live. With every aspect taken into consideration, I believe that earlier-p food do improve people’s way live. 4、纵览全文
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托福满分作文惯用的4种结尾 摘要：一篇让托福写作考官满意的作文，不光要有一个漂亮的开头，一个精彩的结尾对于这篇文章而言同样重要。有不少的考生认为，只要有好的开头就好，考官不会认真看结尾部分。其实你错了，写作也一样需要善始善终。有一个精彩的结尾也能让你的托福写作增色不少。如果你想要明天考试托福写作满分，不妨尝试一下以下4种结尾招式。 满分作文惯用的4种结尾： 写作招式一：回答问题 E.g.1 When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out.It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good,I think it is by no means ‘ pointless’,in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology.We should not ignore technology,because it can be our friend and support our way of life. 这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。 写作招式二：不要添加新的信息
托福独立写作高分开头写作方法 好的开端等于成功的一半，所以托福写作如果能写好开头，你的作文也能奠定下高分的基础。今天和大家分享托福独立写作高分开头写作方法,希望能帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。 托福独立写作高分开头写作方法 一.先根据话题铺设背景 在独立写作的背景铺垫中，首先我们需要明晰独立写作常考的15个topic，其中包括education，technology，sports等。在审题、理解题意之后，可以适当定位关键词进行文题分析和头脑风暴，进行社会背景定位。 示范：Increasingly，under the backdrop of the fierce social competition and the need for searching for individual growth，people especially employees show great concern to their career development. 二.确定观点 此步骤一定不要直接抄写原题。结合第一句的背景铺垫，可适当改写题目，引出有争议性的argument。 三.表明自己针对话题的立场
立场是开头段最为重要且核心的句子，其作用是表明了考生对这一论题的态度，且后面内容的陈述也是建立在这一立场基础上进行论证、分析;立场表明时，尽量用自己的语言进行表述最佳。 四.结尾句启下 过渡句的作用是承上启下，承接开头段内容的同时，以一种自然流畅的方式简要引出下文，从而加强*的逻辑关系;也可以适当提及中间段会涉及的论点，进行实际内容的铺垫。建议大家多进行练习和范文积累，一定可以总结出不同的过渡句写作方式。 示范：… with several reasons t o exemplify. 托福独立写作是托福写作的重点，而开头段对于独立作文整体评分影响颇大，所以小站君建议大家认真学习上文中关于开头段的写作方法，并运用起来，写出漂亮的开头。 托福写作解析：take more exercise 托福写作解析： If there’s a way to improve yourself, which one among the three choices you would take? 1. take more exercise 2. eat more healthy food
文题、开头、结尾的作用 一、文题的妙处 1、说明文题目的妙处 ①交代说明对象或说明内容。 ②如果运用了修辞就还有修辞的作用，化用诗句、谚语、歌词等，都有吸引读者、激发兴趣、引发思考的作用。 2、议论文题目的妙处 ①提出文章论点或论题。 ②如果运用了修辞就还有修辞的作用，吸引读者、激发兴趣。 3、记叙类文章题目的妙处 ①概括文章的中心事件、主要内容。 如《散步》《智取生辰纲》 如《再塑生命》《心声》《敬畏生命》 ③表明写作对象。 如《藤野先生》《济南的冬天》 ④点明行文线索或感情线索。 如《羚羊木雕》《背影》《白杨礼赞》 ⑤语带双关（比喻义或象征义）。 如《爸爸的花儿落了》《海燕》《弱种子也要发芽》 ⑥交代故事发生的环境、背景。 如《在烈日和暴雨下》《故乡》《多收了三五斗》 ⑦生动形象，新颖含蓄，意味深长，耐人寻味。 如《喂—出来》《大自然的语言》《别踩疼了雪》 ⑧设置悬念，引起读者阅读兴趣。 如《谁是最可爱的人》《逃跑的爱》《都是月亮惹得祸》 二、开头的作用 1、说明文开头的作用 ①引出说明对象或说明的事理。 ②引传说、故事、诗歌等，激发阅读兴趣。 ③总分总结构中的，总领全文。 2、议论文开头的作用 ①引出论点或论题。 ②引传说、故事、诗歌等，激发阅读兴趣。 ③如果是举例、引用开头，还作为论据来证明论点的正确性。 3、叙事类文章开头的作用 ①开篇点题，渲染气氛。 ②设置悬念，吸引读者。 ③埋下伏笔，为下文做铺垫。 ④总领下文，统摄全篇。 ⑤开门见山，直接点题。 ⑥上下文形成对照。 ⑦奠定基调。 ⑧揭示主题。 4、环境描写开头，其作用有：
①交代故事发生的时间与背景。 ②渲染气氛，烘托情感。 ③预示人物命运。 ④推动故事情节的发展。 三、结尾的作用 1、说明文结尾的作用 ①总结全文，突出说明对象的特点。 ②补充说明该事物其它方面的特点或注意点，使说明内容更全面。 3、议论文结尾的作用 ①总结上文论证内容，得出结论。 ②对本文观点进行补充论证，使论证更严密。 4、叙事类文章结尾的作用 ①总结全文，归纳主旨。 ②呼应开头，首尾圆润，使文章浑然一体。 ③卒章显志，点明题旨。 ④深化主旨，升华情感。 ⑤言有尽而意无穷，引发读者思考。 ⑥委婉含蓄，意在言外，发人深思。 ⑦解开悬念。篇二：文章开头、结尾、标题的作用 有好几种作用，关键还是要具体分析，一般作用有： 第一，作为全文的线索 第二，点明主旨 第三，概括全文主要内容 第四，借物喻人，或象征手法（这一般标题是物） 第五，含蓄委婉，或引起读者注意 。。。还有的标题是有多层含义，字面的和深层的。。。一语双关 一、标题就是中心论点； 二、标题提示论述范围； 三、标题揭示论题； 四、标题表示论述对象。 不论哪一种都多多少少有点明中心论点的作用，使人见其题而概知其旨，传达出文章内容之大概，便于阅卷者准确而快速地把握整篇文章的基本内容。同时也有引起读者阅读兴趣，并引发读者的思考的作用。 归纳一篇议论文标题的作用要从以下四个方面逐点归纳： 1、是否点明论题 例如：说勤奋、友邦惊诧论、从“狼来了”说起、读《畏惧错误就是毁灭进步》有感，这些议论文标题，点明了自己的议论是针对什么来的，其功能——就是点明议论文的论题。 2、是否点明本文的论点 很多作者原意旗帜鲜明的表达自己的观点，所以常常用论点做文章的标题。如《谦虚使人进步》、《集中精力听讲才是最好的学习方法》、《做人要诚实》等等——标题明确阐发作者的观点，这种标题的作用就是——点明文章的中心论点。 3、标题运用哪种修辞方法，有何作用 有的文章在点明论题或明确论点的同时，还运用一定的修辞方法，使标题增加了由修辞方法的运用带来的艺术效果，答题时也应该指出来。例如：《意志力坚强是学业腾飞隐形的翅
托福独立写作如何写好独立写作结 尾段 托福独立写作是托福写作考试中的最后一项，大家需要根据给出题目选择自己的观点并加以论述。独立写作不仅要写好开头和内容，写好结尾也很重要。下面就和大家分享托福独立写作如何写好独立写作结尾段，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。 托福独立写作如何写好独立写作结尾段? 一.托福独立写作之建议性结尾 如果说“如此结论”是结尾最没用的废话，那么“如此建议”应该是最有价值的废话了，因为这里虽然也是废话，但是却用了一个很经典的虚拟语气的句型。 Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve theproblem.Toefl 这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢? 更多句型： Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken.
Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 二.托福独立写作之结论性结尾 说完了，毕竟要归纳一番，相信各位都有这样的经历，领导长篇大论，到最后终于冒出个“总而言之”之类的话，我们马上停止开小差，等待领导说结束语。也就是说，开头很好，也必然要有一个精彩的结尾，让读者眼前一亮，你就可以拿高分了，比如下面的例子： Obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise frompoliteness and respect for others. 更多过渡短语： to sum up, in conclusion, in brief, on account of this, thus 更多句型： Thus, it can be concluded that…, Therefore, we canfind that… 托福写作模板:结尾段模板 In summary, the conclusion reached in this argument is in valid and misleading. To make the argument more convincing, the arguer would have to prove that_____. Moreover, I would suspend my judgment about the credibility of the recommendation until the
孝感托福作文开头段 我们常说“well began ishalf done”，好的开始就是成功的一半。托福写作的开头是一篇文章的门面，也是给读者留下的第一印象。学会更好地优化托福写作开头段的内容，能够帮助考生提高文章水平。学会使用不同的开头方式非常重要，出guo和大家分享孝感托福作文开头段。 Luckily， he didn’t know my phone number; otherwise， he would bother me. Incredibly， Helena got straight A in her school report this semester. Interestingly， cats and dogs can hardly get along well in a house. obviously undoubtedly apparently fortunately clearly unfortunately
incredibly luckily unluckily surprisingly frighteningly 这些副词大多数表示说话人对全句的看法，在意思上相等与“It is ... 形容词that ...”。 e.g： Obviously，he is nervous about the test. =It is obvious that he is nervous about the test. Unfortunately，he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud. Hurriedly，the man drew me a scratch map to show me the direction. Dangerously，the drunkard sped down the street. Slowly and gently，snowflakes were drifting down from the sky.
托福写作经典结尾段模板 经典结尾段模板一： “It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life. 经典结尾段模板二： In conclusion, given the growing demands of career on today’s professionals, a fulfilling personal life remains possible by working smarter, by setting priorities, and by making suitable career choices. 经典结尾段模板三： “Since science and technology are bec oming more and more essential to modern society, schools should devote more time to teaching science and technology and less to teaching the arts and humanities.” 经典结尾段模板四： In conclusion, schools should not devote less time to the arts and humanities. These areas of study augment and enhance learning in mathematics and science, as well as helping to preserve the richness of our entire human legacy while inspiring us to further it. Moreover, disciplines within the humanities provide methods and contexts for evaluating the morality of our technology and for determining its proper direction.
现代文阅读答题技巧之结尾段的作用 结尾段的作用：一般是或照应题目、开头，或拓宽内容，或总结全文，点明主旨，深化主题，或兼而有之。 典例一： 《遥远的炊烟》鲁先圣 只要在乡村生活过，有谁不怀念村庄上空那袅袅升起的炊烟?袅袅的炊烟，在房屋的脊梁上盘旋，在树梢的鸟巢旁飘荡，在胡同的拐角里踱步，最后都凝聚成片片朦胧的烟霞。那温暖的烟霞里，有母亲的呼唤，有奶奶的目光，也有父亲洪钟般的声音。 记不清我从什么时候起不见炊烟了，炊烟只是一种心中的记忆了。这记忆仿佛一种情结，越是遥远，越让人刻骨铭心。 提问：16结合全文，简要分析最后一个自然的作用 典例二： 《落叶是疲倦的蝴蝶》 天冷了，树的叶子落下来，树离我很近。我似乎听见了它们在缓缓凝固。 天冷了，它们一排一排站着，心中坚守着的秘密一阵阵地疼痛起来，但叶子落下来，掩盖了一切。 母亲去了，心灵没有了依靠，一下子就有了那种到处漏风的感觉，可是大风一直在刮，把故乡周围的尘土刮了个干净。我小小的故乡正在被秋天所包裹。 母亲的坟上有一棵树，那是我写给母亲的诗。每到秋天，叶子们就纷纷落下，把母亲的坟头遮盖得严严实实，那些在风中微微呻吟着的落叶，远远望去，像一群疲倦了的蝴蝶，静静地收拢着它们一生的美丽瞬间：一朵红晕，一个誓言，或者是简单的一声叹息。 提问：最后一段蕴含了作者什么样的感情，在表达上起什么作用？ 典例三： 剪得秋光入卷来 海德格尔说人应该诗意地栖居在大地上，对我们来说，也许太空泛了。我们先要做的事是去注意身边的一片落叶，且不要去拒绝落叶给我们心灵带来的清、静和悲凉。金钱能买到很多东西，但买不到生命深处的诗情。如果典当了固有的诗意体验，生命还剩下多少本真？ 诗情也似并刀快，剪得秋光入卷来。让陆游的《秋思》给生活都市中的你剪来几朵渐开的黄菊，几声零落的雁鸣；剪一点诗情，给枯竭的心灵。 提问：文章以陆游的《秋思》诗句结尾，这样写有什么好处？ 典例一16题参考答案：①照应文题，前一句点“炊烟”，后一句点“遥远”；（2分） ②呼应开头部分，与“怀念”“遐想”遥遥相应；（2分） ③深化主旨，抒写长久不见炊烟的遗憾，表达对炊烟所代表的乡村生活的怀念。（2分） 典例二参考答案：作者把树比作诗，把落叶比作蝴蝶，生动形象地表达了对自己去世的母亲的怀念。作者的怀念如纷纷而落的叶子，像一群疲倦的蝴蝶，充满了诗情画意，给读者以强烈的震撼。（内容上大量使用了比喻的修辞手法，语言不同于一般文章的结尾。） 作用：使文章在表达上显得蕴藉含蓄，有戛然而止，意在言外的余韵；暗示主题，强化了作者的感情；照应前文，使文章结构更加严谨。
首先由明线入手的思路可以不太讲究结构，这点的评论请看后文;然而由暗线着手的议论却必须注意结构，因为暗线采用的是和题目本身关系不大的视角，写得好是一气呵成发人深省，写得不慎重就会失之毫厘，谬之千里，走题走到天边去。 360教育集团介绍接上文，仍以题目做示范。笔者第二次拟提纲，以理暗渡，就不能像第一次一样只写论点，而得把首段，论点，甚至每段在整篇文章中的作用也一并写出，才能避免下笔时走题。 首段：民以食为天，食物在人类生活中的重要性不可言喻，就连食物的准备方式也可能极大影响人类文化，进而影响个人生活质量(引入社会心理学，设置暗线，为全文奠定基调)以现代生活实况分析，食品速食化导致人类生活质量下降的趋向比较明显。 第一论证段：(身体健康层面)饮食文化改变，传统有益健康而消耗时间的料理方式被摈弃，垃圾食品大行其市，天人合一，顺应生理规律的文化被断绝。(注：这里因为不是从营养，而是从生物规律论述对身体的影响，所以前文所论的paradox此处可不考虑) 第二论证段：从速食流行原因论证人类行为文化改变，高节奏的高压生活必然促使身体早衰(身体与心理健康两个层面综合) 第三论证段：(心理健康层面)行为高速化也会导致对情感的无法顾及甚至冷漠，人类情感文化变化，并且朝不利方向。 结尾(这在提纲里其实可有可无，提纲毕竟只是具体化的思路，并不是成文。依照文章具体的论证手法，内容，结尾可以个有千秋，只要把握住一条，符合全文主旨，就可以了，提纲里就算写了，很多时候也是无用功) 用题目分析到这里，文章连雏形都已经出来了，可是究竟什么是结构呢? 回到“文章是被记录下来的表达”这个原则。结构既然是写作的必须注意事项，就必然帮助表达。对于一篇议论，作者必须大量旁征博引才能令人信服得表述自己的观点，这其中牵扯着概念的重要性顺序 -----用来证明全文立场的概念是论点，是最重要的概念;用来证明论点的概念是佐证，是次等重要的概念。所谓结构，最基本的用途是将文章所有用入的概念分段，一个论点与它的所有佐证为一段，不能佐证证明的是第二论点，却在第一论点的段落。-------这就是所谓的unity. 结构的第二用途仍然是帮助表达，从逻辑思路方面。好的议论能抓住人心，令人信服，首先必须让人能看懂作者的思路，让你说明在学习场所安装电视有无弊端，你却一会说电视节目的差异，一会说学生的素质如何，读者不知所云，自然不会被你说服。每个段落和论题的联系。作者本人知道并没有用，必须表现出来。说完节目差异加一句“不同节目对学生的利弊不同，不可一概而论”，讲过学生素质补充“素质差的学生群体使学习场所吵杂，安不安电视影响都不大”，将论点间，论点和论题间紧密结合起来，保证文章思路流畅，明白易懂，就是结构中过渡句的功效，使得行文达到ETS要求的progression和coherence。 具体把结构落实在IBT独立作文上，就是两点。
托福独立写作开篇段写法 开头1：现象+题目改写+作者观点 现象：提出一种普遍现象或值得关注的现象(紧扣论题)作为背景 例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should reward their children with money for the high grades. A: To some extent, scoring high at school might indicate a promising future. Thus, grades are commonly accept as a reliable criterion to evaluate the potential in a student. In the unprecedentedly competitive society today, most parents are having high ambitions for their children. In order to realize these glamorous expectations, they would spare no cost. A number of parents choose to reward their children with money if they manage to achieve high marks. As far as I am concerned, there are more defects than merits lying in such a measure. 例如：Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. A: In today’s increasingly vigorous job market, two-way selection has become a most typical mode of employment. Both job hunters and employing units are facing equal chances of mutual-assessment. Such a hiring mode marks the noticeable progress of modern economy. Blessed with a large source of job offers, candidates have the freedom to decide which employer suits them best. Some prefer to work for small companies, while others are in favor of larger ones. If I were a job hunter, I would definitely choose a large enterprise. 开头2：事例+背景+题目改写+作者论点 事例：1. 媒体(电视，电台，报纸，杂志和网络)的报道 2. 自己，朋友，邻居，同事的事例 例如：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, people were friendlier than they are today. A: In my childhood, my grandma used to tell me many stories about their “good old days”. They have all been etched deep in my mind. I could never forget them, even down to the smallest details. Those stories illustrated that the relationships between people at that time seemed to be purer and closer. As time goes by, society has undergone dramatic changes and so have people’s feelings towards each other. Realizing this, I have gradually accepted the reality of these changes. Indeed, people in the past were friendlier than people are now. 新通教育
开头结尾作用 一、方法指导： 1、开头：（1）开篇点题、总领全文、引出下文、为下文作铺垫、为下文埋伏笔、照应结尾、设置悬念。 结尾：总结上文、总结全文、照应开头、篇末点题、发人深思，意味深长，点明中心，深化主题，升华主题。 2、答题模式：内容+作用 二、练习： （一）遇见世上最好的爱 ①请你一定相信，遇见了孩子，就是遇见了世上最好的爱。 ②大学时的好友假期出游，顺路来看我，就在我家中住了几天。正遇上丈夫出差，孩子感冒，我忙得不可开交。几天下来，她感慨道：“看见你这样忙忙碌碌、身不由己，我是绝不敢要孩子了。” ③我一愣：“你都看见什么了？”她同情地说：“看见你一日三餐洗煮烧煎，比保姆还辛苦；看见你栉风沐雨，又接送孩子上学，又忙于工作，几乎变成机器人；看见你凌晨两点还不能安歇，要给孩子喂药喂水，像个苦役犯；还看见你的皱纹与眼袋，看见你无穷无尽的付出。” ④她叹息：“女人最好的年华就这样交付掉了，人生还有什么乐趣？你看我，工作时无忧无虑，出游时无牵无挂，多好！”我笑了，对她说：“你什么都看见了，可唯独没有看见我的快乐和幸福。” ⑤她瞪大眼睛，惊讶地看着我，半开玩笑地说：“你不是在自欺欺人吧？” ⑥我告诉她，儿子刚上幼儿园，第一次吃鸡翅时，才两岁半的他，将鸡翅藏在白衬衣的袖子里，晚上带回来要与我分吃。我至今记得，他津津有味地吸吮那半截鸡骨头的馋相。每每想起他衣袖上留下的那片鹅黄色油渍，我心里就会有一片淡淡的温暖。朋友若有所思，脸上不再是戏谑的表情。 ⑦我告诉她，走在路上，儿子像个小小男子汉，懂得让我走在他的右边。他说：“妈妈是近视眼，我是千里眼，我来保护你！”过马路的时候，他会冲着车流大喊：“你们通通快让开，我妈妈要过马路了！”仿佛我是至尊至贵的女王，所有人都得谦恭礼让。母亲，就是孩子心灵国度里最值得敬爱的女王。朋友爽朗地笑起来，她说：“好羡慕你，女王陛下。” ⑧我告诉她，去年五月的一个中午，儿子很迟还没回来。在外环路上，我找到了他。这一路，槐花开得纯白如雪，幽香扑鼻，儿子正专心致志地往树干上写字，一棵一棵地。他对我说：“今天是母亲节，我没能买到康乃馨，就来到了这里。”花开得那么好，却有人采摘，儿子就用水彩笔写下了这些稚拙的留言：“这是我送给妈妈的花，请让它好好地开，不要摘。”望着这一路盛开的槐花，我知道，这是最好的母亲节礼物。牵着孩子的手，我感觉自己是世界上最幸福的人。听到这里，朋友的眼神变得柔和起来。 ⑨我告诉她，就在前天，我和儿子一起去医院验血。当医生宣布儿子和我是相同血型的时候，他一下子欢呼起来：“太好了，如果以后妈妈生病需要输血，就可以抽我的了！”旁边验血的人，还有医生，都感动地说：“有个这样的孩子，真好！”我平静地陈述完这些片段，朋友的眼睛却在刹那间湿润了。 ⑩我对朋友说：“你没有看到，我在辛苦的同时享受到多少甜蜜，你也无法感受，我生命中最深的温暖。但请你一定相信，遇见了孩子，就是遇见了世上最好的爱。”朋友郑重地点了点头，露出了赞同的微笑。